Love at first sight

मेरी प्यारी सोना – Raushan

मेरी प्यारी सोना.
तुझसे बिछड़ कर टूट सा गया हूं.
अब इस जिंदगी से रूठ सा गया हूं.
यकीन ना हो तो आकर देख मुझे.
इस दुनिया की भीड़ में छूट सा गया हूं.!!

सब ने तो मुझे तोड़ा था.
एक तू ही तो थी जिसने मुझे जोड़ा था.
तेरे बिना खुद से अब रूठ सा गया हूं.
वक्त के हाथों में भी तो पत्थर है.
और मैं सीसे जैसा फुट सा गया हूं.!!

सोना मुझे तेरी जरूरत है हर पल.
हर वक्त तेरा ही ख्याल है.
बस मौत ही बाकी रह गई है मुझको.
क्योंकि तेरे बिना बहुत बुरा हाल है.!!

तुझे देखकर ख्यालों में खुश रहता था मैं.
सारे दर्दो ग़म हंसकर सहता था मैं.
थी दिल में लाख रंजिशें पर.
पूछे जाने पर मजे में हूं कहता था मैं.!!

कैसे कह दूं कि मैं तुझसे इश्क नहीं करता.
हर पल तेरी ही आरजू होती है.
तू नहीं है तो इस जहां में भी सूनापन सा है.
अब दिल को सिर्फ तेरी जुस्तजू होती है.!!

चल माना हो गई गलती मुझसे.
तू जिद तो करती मेरे पास आने की.
तू वजह तो बनती मेरे मुस्कुराने की.
अब भी लौट आ मेरे यार सोना.
तेरी यादों में टूट सा गया हूं.
हो सके तो पुरा कर देना मुझे.
क्योंकि कोरे कागज की तरह छूट सा गया हूं.!!

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66 thoughts on “मेरी प्यारी सोना – Raushan”

    1. Are anel ji thanx bahut saara..but ye sb baatein samajhta kaun hai..aur maine to bss ibadat ki hai isme kisi ki…lekin mujhe lagta hai aap bhi ache likhte ho..thanx for compliments

          1. mai b yahi chahti thi pr maine ek poem dali aur admin n post ni ki qki unhe achhi ni lgi hogi ..
            mujhe khusi hogi agr main apse kuch seekhungi to

  1. Walekum Assalam…!

    Aisha maa’m…! Sorry maine apkO

    Nahin pehchana….! ????

    Lahore matlab Pakistani hO aap….!

    Nice…..!

  2. Hiiiiii
    Bro
    Apne kiya lins likhi h
    Inke liye mere pas word hi nhi h is poem ke liye kuch bhi kahu kam hi kam h yaar
    Apki ye lins seedi dil pr ja kr lgi h
    So verry verry verry verry nice lins

  3. Nahi rohan aap shayad mujhe jante ho
    Ek se do baar apse baat huvi thi yaad karo.
    Jab aap Washington me the tab aap
    Main
    Risyanshi sis
    Sakshi sis
    Pathan sis
    Amit
    Zara sis
    Taiseen sis
    Sakku sis
    Navu sis
    ye sabhi log the.
    Us wqt maine apke liye awaz uthai thi
    Tab ek unjan insan kisi unjan
    Ladki se bat kr raha tha
    Tab lover boy naam ka ek kutta
    Tha. Usne un anjan boy ko kaha
    K wo tum ho or pihu sis ko line
    Mar rahe ho. Etc bohat kaha tha.
    Phir maine kaha k aisa nahi hosakta
    Rohan nahi hai wo koi aur hai.
    Or anjan jo tha usne bi kaha k wo alg hai
    Or wo anjan boy turnth chalaga.
    Bs maine apke liye awaz zarasi kya uthai
    Lover boy ne meri family ko galiya dena shuru kardiya. Naam badal kar bohat galiya di usne.
    Tabhi mujhe itna badami ehssaas hua k pucho mat.. Bohat roy thi main.. Sakku sis ne mera sath dia. Wahi Anjum ne lover boy ka hi sath diya or kaha k lover boy bohat ache hai unhone kabhi kisiko galiya dete huve nahi dekha. Ek ladki hokar mri tarf na sochkar Anjum sis ne b lover ke galiyonko badhava diya tha.
    Totally mujhe anjum lover boy or kuch fake names ne mujhe badnam bohat kiya
    Main kya karti bolo.
    Ab batao mujhe rohan pihu kya apki gf thi
    Log kehte hai k wo apki gf hai
    Main to lover boy anjum sis ko maaf nahi karungi… Allah taala undonoko jahannum bhi naseeb na kare.. Insan nahi janwar hain
    Nafrat k kabil bhi nahi.
    Chi

  4. Hiiii
    Sudra ji
    Hame lg rha tha ki shayad sb frnd bhul gaye h pr nhi bhule…
    Infect
    Hum acche h apki dua se
    Ap kesi ho
    Aur life kesi chal rhi h aaj kl

  5. It’s okay aisha maa’m….!

    JanedO yeh site pe jalnewale…!

    BOhat hain…..! Ol weise jitna jalan hOti.

    LOg utna hi famous hOte hain….!

    Yeh siTe ne mujhe bOhat se ache dOst diye hain…!

    Jinse main contact main hun……!

    JOh wOh log kabhi site pe aaue hi nahi…!

    Bas mere ” CMTS” dekhar mere saath hain..!

    Khair…! Ufff yl…! Tum zada Tensions nalo..!

    Aisha maa’m…..! Aksar hum nayi galionme..!

    Chalte hain….! Toh kutte be bhayanak..!

    BhOnk te hain…! Hum koh….! Dekhar durse chalejana hi acha hOta h…..!

    Weise wOh lOg kuch b kahenge tOh…!

    Meli izat kamm hOjayegi yah Phir…!

    Main weisa hi hojaUnga jaisa wOh log sochte.
    Hainnn….! Hehe……!

    Thq mere na hOne par…! Tum ne side li…!

    Im sO happy maa’m…! Meri taraf se apko..!

    Dher saari izat naseeb karta hun…!

    Ol.. ChunOoo dear….! Dushman kO b…!

    Kabhi bad dua nahi deni chahiye…!

    Qk insaan hain yl.! Ek din unkO…!

    Zarur ehsaas hOga jinhone aisa kam kiya h…!

    Hum sahi hain…! Toh bs zaada gala…!

    Phaad phaad ke.. Chillakar bolna ye sab..!

    Ki zarurat nahi hain..! Bs upar wale pe chhod…!

    DoOoo…! Gawan khud apne aap…!

    Aajayenge..! Khoyi hvi izat dugni milegi .!

    Khush rahOooo….! Allah Hafiz….!

  6. Are aisha gud morning sis apne to hume b bhuladiya
    Hahah. Hum ne b apki mdt ki thi
    Ladki honeke na te. Par apne to dekha hi nahi haha????????
    Ha ye bat sahi hai rohan k apko badnam karneme lover boy naina
    Pihu anjum ye sab the hahaha. Hum jante the k ap site pe nahi ho. Lekin apne sach kaha haah
    Ke log kitna bdnam karnge utna famous honge hahahahaha. Superb dialogue
    Aise hi hum ne lover ko us din hi kaha tha.
    Ke aap ko koi aisa insan nhi hai jo janta nahi site. Celebrity hahaha????????????
    Aisha sis sakku hi nahi hum ne thodi boht mdt ki thi aapki. Jao katti hum nhi karte baat apse.
    Wese really rohan kutte jab bhonkte hai to
    Unke darmiyan nahi jana chahiye. Haha
    Ek baat bolo kya aap kuch nahi bologe jinhone
    Apko badnm kiya. Hahaha????????????
    I think anjum sis aapke telugu state ki haina
    Phir unse Kuch nahi kahoge hahah.
    Dar gaye ya dum nahi hai….????????????????????
    Hum ne to boht bola unko hahahha

    1. Sorry suhana sis
      Maine dekha nahi tha.
      Tq meri st honeke
      Liye. Rohan really mera dil bohat
      Toota tha. Main kya kahu meri life
      Me mujhe kisine itni gliya nhi di jitni maine
      Suni hai. Tum kuch b samjho m kbi
      Maaf nhi krungi jinhone mujhe itna
      Bola tha. Anjum lover boy ko to.
      Kabi maaf nahi krungi. Nd maaf karna
      Main apki jitni mahan to nahi hu jo
      Bad dua ki jaga ulta izt du ya chup rhu.
      Khuda pe chodo kaha apne.
      Chalo itne din hive. Kaunsa gawa apne aap
      Aaya jisne khud ki mani. ????
      Kehna asan h rohan pr mehsus krna utna hi
      Mushqil.

  7. Milta Hu Roj tmse ek hi umeed leke
    Dekhunga tuje ji bhar Ke
    Yhi mera pyar Yhi mera khuda
    Ki saari Umar nikal du me sif tujko
    hi dekh kar Ke
    ……….p

  8. Tera mujko u Milna
    Dher saari baate krna
    Raat din subah sham ka Kuch pta Na hona
    Bas Teri Yaado me khoy rehna
    Ab to Bas ek Sapna sa reh gya h
    Or
    Mill kar b alag hona pda Hme uski vajah se
    Jiski
    Kahani vo upar vala adhura chod gya h
    ……………….p

  9. Ohhh my gOd……!

    Just ” shut up ” uhh miss suhana…!

    Battamizi ki b kOi had hOti hai…..!

    Chup rahO….! Ladki hI hOna yah boy…?

    .
    .
    Ol aisha plz janedO yl…!

    Main kisi lOver boy, hate bOy, anjum, inko

    Nahin jaanta…! Ufff yl itna gusaa..!

    DekHO main yaha’n…..! Chit chat….! Karne nahi aata….!

    Bass stOry me aata hun…! Achi lagi tOh..!

    Mere belandi ” cmts” deta hun…..! ????

    Mujhe kOi ” fark” nahi padta yl…!

    K kOun kaisa hai…! Mere pass upar walne..!

    DOstonki kami nahi di hai…! ” Hehe”

    BOht hai..! In faltu logonke liye..! Apna khooon nahi jalataaaaaa….!

    Or naa hi mujhe time…! Yeh sab karneki…!

    Ek baat kehta hu apse…! Ye site pe..!
    Jo hadse zada rehta hai…! Yah chatting karta…!

    Gussa, nafrat, jalan, krodh, jiskO hai…!

    WOh uski ” zindagi ” se haar chuka hai…!

    Bass yhi par pade rehta hai…! Ol..!

    BIGBOSE…! game ki thara ek ke upar ek.!

    Cmts karta hi rehta hai….! Tum itna q sochti ho…! Ke tumhe gliyannn dedi….!

    Ol… Tumhari izat kam hOgi…! Kisike kehnese..!

    KOi badal nahin jata dear….! Bolne wale bOlte hi rehte hai….!

    Nazar andaz krO…! Tumhara kama kya hai…!

    Bss story pasand aayi ho Toh cmt kardO..!

    Unko kuch salah dO jinki aapkO zarurat hai..!

    Na ke yeh faltu lOg k muh lagkar….! Apna

    Time , khoon, feeling, ye sab nasht karOoo…!

    Asmaan me kya taare kamm hain…! JOh ek kam hOagya toH asmaaa kOh fark padjayega..!

    Tum khud ek asmaan hO..! Dostonki..! Kya

    Kami hai ye zamaneme…! Apna khoon mat jalOaOO….!

    Khsh rhO..! Ol joh apse bat kalta hai…!

    Unse hi krO…! Baaki sab se q karti hO…!

    Ladke b jhagd ke bhi milne wala kuch nahi hai…!!!!!

    SoOO happy rahOO..! Zada bOlgya toH im sorry….!

    JOh apko acha lgta hai unse hI bt krO…!

    “allah hafiz…! Allah aapko hidayat de..!

    Gussa kamm hOneki ” ameen” summa ameen..!

  10. Hello rohan…
    Yela unnaru..
    I think Meru nannu Marchipoyaru ..kadha?
    Anyways meru naku gurthunaru…
    Chala time tarvatha vacharu tlp ki ….yela unnaru em chesthunaru ekada unaru…
    Tlp kI vachina ventane e fights chusthunaru…
    Rohan nenu me gurunchi oka wrong word kuda chepa ledu…
    Meru namithe namandi otherwise me istam but nenu me gurinchi oka wrong word kuda chepaledu….
    Lover boy me gurinchi edho chepadu aisha kuda tanani baga titindi…
    Na mistake enti ante nenu aisha ki chepanu…lover boy ye ammai tho ila matlada ledu …may be tanaku missunderstanding ayindi annanu..
    Then emaindho alochisthaene bhayam vestundi…intha kopam intha paga ya allah na life lo vinani matalu villu naku cheparu…
    Rohan I think apudu meru untae meru intha react aye varu kadhu chala lite ga e matter tisesavaru…
    Mere chepandi nenu chepina missunderstanding anae oka mataku intha react avthara…
    It’s really hurts me alot rohan …I knw meru nannu ardham cheskuntaru ani edanta chepthuna…rohan nijam ga nenu me gurinchi oka tappu word kuda chepaledu…
    Meku kuda nene wrong anipisthe am really sorry….
    Bye rohan…

    1. Ok
      Sidra ji
      My no 9557623160
      Aad krlo watsp imo pr show ho jayega ok…
      Yaar mene apko itna misss kiya..
      Aur batao sb kese h…

    2. Mujhe malum hai anjum di tumne rohan ko apni language me kuch na kuch bolkar apne tarf kheenchne ka dekha hoga. Warna tum hindi ya urdu bolti. Kyun kiya aisa tumne mere saath. Lover boy apko acha lagta ho. Magar ek ldki honeke naate tumne mera socha nhi k usne meri me behan tak galiya di. Im rohan g mujhe zada sochna nahi chahiye aise log k kehnese main thodina hojaungi. Kutte ki tharas bhonk ne walonke kya muh lagna.

  11. Yes ur wrt aisa sis lover boy ne chahe isse pehle galiya nahi di hongi.. But unki ghatya adar or aukad k bareme realize to hona chahiye na anjum sis
    Kaltak acha tha bdme jab unhone gliya dekar apni aukad dikhya isse pata chlta h k wo kitan ghtya insan hai hahahah ????????
    Ye jnkar b tum unse bt karogi unki side logi jo kbi apka friend hua krta tha… Hahhahahah
    Ek ladki hokr tum ne acha nhi kiya. Aisha sis k saat… Qk lover jaisa ghtya apko acha lgta h to apki kitni giri huvi ho iska pata b chlata hai. Dobome koi frk nhi bs wo male h tum female.

  12. Hi anjum nenu…..! Chala bagunnanu…!
    Kani im sOrry naku Ipudu gurkochindi…!
    NetO konni kaburlu cheshanu…! Anukunta..!
    GurtOchindi. ! ????
    Really naku Emitelidu…! Asalu emaindO yento..!
    Kani

    ” aisha” antOndi lover boy…!
    YedO yedO chesharanta…!
    Kaani Okka mata nenu kuda antanu…!
    Nenu lenapudu aisha nakOsam…!
    Noru vippindanta….! Nizanga chepalante…!
    AmetO nenu chttam chupula matladinanu..!
    Kani nannu intaga ardham chesukuna…!
    Emenu nenu emi chepali…!

    Na gair hazir unapudu…!
    Tanu nakOsam chala bagane…! Lover bOy..!
    Ane yevadO unadanta…!

    Peru ku lover boy chese pani.. Shirinram. Chi.

    Aina tOnu gOdava padindanata…!
    Okkamata chepu nuve..! Nenu amenu ye manali…!
    E mata kOsam ameku runa padi untanU..!

    Ipudu inkO mata kochesi ninnu antunna…!

    Nuve amenu ardham chesuko ledanta…!
    Cmts kochi…! Chustunte.. Nuvu lover boy ni..!
    Side tisukunavanta..!

    Plus atanu..! Aisha family varku velladanta…!

    Nuv antunav…! Ame kuda atanni baaga titindanta…! Kani nizanga chepalante..!

    Aisha tanuku tane kavalne titadu lover boy ni..!
    Uff yl…!

    Antaga atanu tidtunapudu…! Oka amaini..!

    Nuvvu chustu unnava…!
    Noru adupu lo..!
    Petu ani chepaleva..! Coz ” ee site lo..! Atanu anatga tidtunte nuvu chustu yla unda galigav..??

    Chalo sare nuv chepina mta kOcheste..! Lover boy intaku mundu yennadu.! Tittaledu..!

    Kani tolisariga tidtunadu..! Manaku koncham..! Aishcharyanga untadi…!

    Kani ide mata kOchi inko ti kuda manaku..!
    Telusdundemitante…! Atani lo unna ammaila..!
    Gurinchi respect yal undo manam ardham chesukochu…!

    SO e mata kochi nuvu tapu chesinav..! Nuvu..!
    Koncham peda manusu to alochichi..!

    Okka mata a vedhava ni…! Chepinatlaite..!
    Edi jarigedi kaadu.. Aina ipudu kuda..!
    Nuvu sry chepaledu… Okksari sry chpite..!

    Khel khatm aayedi..!
    InkOti ame Pakistani ammai…!
    Mana shatrutva desham…! Aina manalni…!

    Antaga ishta padi mana kOsam anataga..
    Ishtapdi manatO undante..! Ame ku yanta..!

    Manam ante ishtamO chustunava..! Nuvu kuda. Todu sodari ani…! Ame kOsam
    Kancham a stupid ni chepite.. Idanta…!

    Jarigedi kaadu…! Nuvu kuda chala chala..!
    Manchi ammave dear…! Im happy..!
    Milanti vallu e site lO unnaru..! Kani dukham
    Emi tante…! Manam ynta bagunadi kadu..!

    Mana valla yanta mandi magunnaru annadi..!
    Manavatvam..!

    Im sorry ni anataga naku…! Matalu..! Raavu..
    Yekuvaga matladinante…!

    Kshaminichandi..!
    Kani okasri nuve kuda ame kannitini feel..!
    Chustu sry chepey..!

    Nuvu sry chepite..!
    Ni gauravam..! Respect yapatiki tagaggu..!

    Kani koni chotla sry ane padam chala. !
    Mukhyamanadi.! Adi manam vadite..! Aisha hi

    kya unke jaise duniye me kitne b qna raho..!
    Sabka dil jeet sakte hai..!

    Zada hua tOh maf kardena….

  13. Crazy_ROhan????

    aisi baat nahi hai…..! Aisha

    Maine apke pakshme or anjum ke paksh me…!

    DOnO k liye hi bOla hai…!

    Ye zaruri nahi hai…! K hum dusri language..!

    Me baat kar rahe hain… TOh isme..! Aapki

    KOi izat kam ya apke liye kuch nahi kaha..!

    Jisko maine samjhaya hai..! Khud samajhgayi hai…!
    Samajdar hOgi…! Toh toh samajh jayegi…!

    Ol…! Dear woH kaun love bOy hai..! Chodo

    Yal usey…! Jab apne gharke samne nalise ..! Gnda pani..!

    Jaata hai tOh woh na ache bure sabhi pani…!

    Ko gnda karta hi hai..! Uske liye kya itna humkO…!

    Khoon jalana…! Aise gnde pani ate rehte hain..!

    Ignore karO.. Haan ye bt sahi hai…! K

    K anjum achi insan hai…! Agr usne kuch kaha…! Toh thoda dil pe lesakte hain…!

    Qk woh sahi insan hai aisa q lover ka saath side li..! Chalo jO b hO… Anjum b achi insan hai…!

    Main kehta hun k…! Maaf kardo unko..!

    Tum istarah se unkO site bdnam krogi..! Toh kaisa lagega unkO..!

    Kitna dard hOga unkO..! Jab tum br br..!
    Sabke samne aisa kahOgi ke ye kardiya woh kardiya…!

    Im sorry wo badi hai apse..!. Shayd unka kaha kuch alg se tha jisse tum samajh nahi paayi hOgi…!
    But unka ek kah apne hade zada unpar..!

    Sholo ki barsawkarwadi….! Battamizi suhana kO…!

    Lekar……! Im sorry maine dono KO samjhaya..!

    BaaKi apdono.. Ki marzi….
    Bye.

  14. Rohan lover boy ne jo galiyan di thi bhale hi main ignore kardu…. Lekin sablog ne jo dekha
    Woh sab woh log kaise bhilsakte hain…

  15. DekhO aisha galiya denewala…!

    Deta hai.! Galiyan dena kOi badi baat nahin..!

    Maon desakta hun..! Lekin ek baat sunO..!

    Gxndi sOch gxndi niyyat tOh dimaag me hOti hai..!

    Warna jism ki banawat tOh behan ki bhi wahi
    HOti hai..!

    Ye baat woh lOg kO nahi pata. ! Galiya dete hain…!

    Sabh bhol jaO dear please….!

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