shukrana love peom by Shiv

Shukrana (or wo aa gai….) – Shiv Pandit

shukrana love peom by Shiv

Dophr ke teen baz rahe the.
dhup apni puri javani pr thi.
ekdm kdk…
Hawa grm hokr loo bn hui thi.
isi dophri le beech drwaze pr dstk hui…
thak…..thak…..??
ghr me drwaza kholne wale,pani pilane wale,or bat krne wale ek hi sakhsh the.
pandit shiv nath babu…
umr 80 ke par ho chuki thi.
Kitab padhte to ankho ke ekdm nzdik lakar padhte.
hr wqt kalam se ldte rhte….
mgr kalam chlne ka nam na leti or pandit ji ghasitne me koi ksr na chodte….
aahat sunkr apni chdi ka shahara lekr drwaze tk pahunche,or drwaza khola….
dhliz ke us par ek ort khdi thi.
safed bal,ankho pe chsma,chehre pr jhurriya.
pandit ji phchan pate usse pahle hi ort pandit ji ke per chune lagi.
pndit ji ki ankhe bhig aai.
wqt piche ki or bahne laga.
Ek pal me wqt salo piche chla gaya.
wo kavita thi.
pandit ji ki muhbbt.
wo sare mnzr,wo muhbbt ki bate,wo uska jana sb yad aa gaya.
or ankho me tairne laga.
yu jese uska jana kal ki hi bat ho….
Wo akhiri mulakat abhi bhi zhn me taza thi.
sham sat baze ka wqt tha.
mszid me namazio ke liye azan shuru hui thi.
usi mszid ke kareeb hi to milne aai thi kavita pandit ji se.
mgr kafi der bethe rhne pr bhi kuch bol na pai.
bs do ankhe bol rahi thi.
Sath bahti , sath bolti..
Un nazuk se gulabi hoto pr thrrthraht thi.
or kaleza muh ko aa raha tha.
wo bar bar kosis kr rahi thi ki ro na pade..
pandit ji ke chehre pr 12 bzte huye saf dikh rahe the.
dono hatho ki mutthiya jane kyu ks ke daba rakhi thi..
sayad pandit ji ko pata tha ki drd hone wala h.
khud ko tayyar kr rahe the..
Bahut der tk khamoshi ka aalam raha..
bs kavita pandit ji taakati rahi or pandit ji zameen ko taakate rahe..
pani ka sailab dono ankho me tha.
dhdkane dono ki bekarar thi.
or dono aane wali tanhai ki aahat bakhubi sun rahe the…
achank kavita khdi hui or pandit ji ke per chune lagi..
pandit ji ne jht se un hatho ko pakd liya jo chutne wale the.
dono gale mil kr khub roye.
ek dusre ki balaye lene lage..
or jindgi jine ke tarike sikhane lage..
andhera hone ko aaya..
ab kavita ko jana tha.
Kavita bol na pai,bs ishare se jane ki izazt mang rahi thi.
pandit ji ishare se bole jaao….
kavita akhiri nzr dekh kr chl padi..
Khud se hi kh rahi thi ki jindgi to piche chut gai h.
ab jina kya,or mrna kya…
pandit ji butt bane khde the.
Namazi namaz ada krke apne ghr ko ja rahe the.
pandit ji ke kano me namazio ki awaz aa rahi thi..
jo ek dusre se kh rahe the..
khuda hafiz…khuda hafiz….
pandit ji bhi dabe hoto na jane kisse kh rahe the khuda hafiz…
koi to nai tha unke kreeb..
Fir kisko kh rahe the..
pandit ji chl pade apne ghr ki trf..
apni akhiri namaz ata kr chuke the.
or aj do riste todke ghr ghr ja rahe the.
ek kavita se or ek khuda se..
ek pe bhrosa tha ek pe ummeed..
aj dono tut gaye….
achank kavita ne pandit ji ko jhkjhora…
boli kaha kho gaye..
yu drwaze pr khdi rkhoge ya andr ane ko kahoge??…
mbr dusri trf se koi hrkt na hui.
pandit ji vese hi khde rahe..
muh khula,ankhe bhigi or gala bhara hua…
hath se chdi chut gai..
or gir pade..
gir pate usse phle hi kavita ke hatho ne tham liya..
mgr ab waha kuch nai tha..
pandit ji ke sans ab pure ho chuke the.
muh me makkhiya ane jane lagi..
kavita apne hatho ko ptk ptk kr apni rngin chudiya todne lgi.
Loo badi tez hui ja rahi thi..
kamre ki khdki me se ghusi or table pr rkhe panne bikher kr khule huye
drwaze se nikal gai..
mgr panne sare bikher gai..
ek panne pandit ji ki chati pe aa pada..
kavita ne rote rote pnna uthaya..
us pr do misre likhe the…
Ese jindgi ke tamaam din guzre..
jo nayab the, vohi tere bin guzre…

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19 thoughts on “Shukrana (or wo aa gai….) – Shiv Pandit”

  1. Kuch kahaniya dil ko chu jati h..bht dino ke baad sunne ko mili esi kahani..jo sunni chati thi meh..duwa karti ki aap aage v esi kahaniya likhkhoge.. khudahafiz

  2. very heart touching story pandit ji … mai hamesh aap ki story padeti hu or her bar aap ke story heart ko touch kerte hu very awsome

  3. Badi acchi bat puchi apne..
    h kavita..
    jinda h,sans leti h,or mujhe yad krti h,bs m use yad nai krta,m usse pyar krta hu..
    Or apko esa kyu lga ki apne ye pucha?????

  4. Muhbbt to dost sb krte h..
    mgr usme barbad hone ka hosla diwane hi kr pate h..
    shukr guzar uska ki usne diwana bna diya…
    wo khte h na ki…
    snm ki chaht me,khuda se mil gaye…
    Ab or kya chahiye…

  5. maine aap ke sabhi post padei hai isliya yj sawal pooha tha .. yh sunker aacha laga logo ab bh mohabbat kerte hai verna aap dekho iss site ke bahoot sare story face yh baccheo vali hoti hai bahoot kum true or bahoot acche story hote hai aap ke story bh one of the best story hai jo muja dil se acche lagei

  6. Malum h meri kahaniya sbko acchi lgti h..
    Iski wzh ye h ki m hr janne wale uski tru muhbbt puchta hu..
    na bataye to ziddi hu m..
    or fir unki kahani me khud ko or kavita ko ghusa deta hu..
    fir balle balle..??
    ye muhbbt ek ehsas h dost or m ise ji bhar ke mhsus krta hu…
    shukriya..
    agli kahani pe milna…

  7. Ha yar maine apki sari story padhi h yr muje bhut achi lgi.yar pyar krn gunah hota h kya m bhi bhut hi presan hu life me

  8. Shiv apki story bhot beutifull hai, aapne true love kiya bt mila nahi.
    Aapko me salute krta hu.
    Hum dua karte he apko jald se jald aapki kavita mil jaye.
    Kya ab bhi aap apni kavita se milte hai??

  9. Nai anuj..last bar kb mila tha yad ni mgr 10 feb 2013 ko akhiri bar bat hui thi..fir aj tk ni,,na dekha na bat…..
    fir bhi intzar h…
    na jane kis ummeed pr…

  10. ………………………….
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    … ….Padte bakt aisa lag raha hai jese mere sath hi ye ho raha hai………aankhe abhi v nam hain…..Dil se feel kiya aaj

  11. कमाल करते है आप भी…. आपकी कविता मे तो हमे हम नजऱ आने लगे है।

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