Romantic nepali poem

Aakhri khayal – Juan

Nazrein nami k peechhe chhipna chah rahi thi..
Guzarta hua lamha dil ko kos raha tha..
Tanhaai bhi ungliyon ka saath chhod rahi thi..
Andhera bhi dil se muh mod raha tha..

Iraadon ki raah aaj phir yaadon ki aur thi..
Kuch purane khaton se aankhon ka saamna baaki tha..
Ungliyan nazron ko bachana chah rahi thi..
Lekin shayad beeghe palkon ka udhaar chukana baaki tha..

Yaadein chhune ko Ungliyan betaab thi..
Kaagaz ki syahi se dil anjaan tha..
Jaane kyun phir bhi kuch to baat thi..
Jo in kaagaz par har aasu kurbaan tha..

Dil ki dhadkan ab kaagaz ki baahon me thi..
Aaj phir purane lamhon ne tera chehra banaya tha..
Palke jhuk kar tujhe pehchaan rahi thi..
Aaj phir teri addaon ka khumaar inpar chhaya tha..

Teri saanson ki aawazein dil ko jhula rahi thi..
Chehre par teri khubsoorati ka noor mehmaan tha..
Teri muskurahat hothon ko nazdeek bula rahi thi..
Teri baahon ka mujh par aaj ek aur ehsaan tha..

Teri zulfon ki garmi gam ke aasu sukha rahi thi..
Saalon baad muskurahat hothon ka saath nibha rahi thi..
Zindagi ko pehli dafa tujhe paane ka sukoon tha..
Kuch iss tarah maut mujhe gale laga rahi thi..

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253 thoughts on “Aakhri khayal – Juan”

  1. Really Nice Poem.

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  2. I like it……

    yaade bhut khash hoti h
    kyuki WO achiii ho ya buri har pal humare sath rahti h
    purane lamhe yaad karke
    face pe alag si ek raunak hoti h

    1. Hello naina how are you
      Nasreen tussi kithe ho
      Msin jadvi tuhadde naal
      Galls karne chaunda hu tussi ta dikhtena na ho ainvi kitthe ho ji
      ????

  3. Spelling mistakes se kya hota h dilpar churi chalgay toh kya khoon ka Color kaunsa te Thodi na dekhte hai Hehe. Ab mera dil pregnant hogaya lgta h pyar aane wala hai ????

    1. Nahi behn nahi kar payi idhar meri tabhiyt diwali ae bhut khrb h aur ha rohan ji ki fb id bta dijiye nai unhi ke jariye toh sakku tak pahuchugi

  4. Rohan ki fb id hai

    Sikander807@ gmail.com

    Or mobile num 9849966150

    Maine kaha tha rohan se k
    Dil jeet or vaishanavi ko number dedu kya aapka
    Toh kaha unhone ke haan dedo

  5. Dill Jeet Bhai Diwali to mast thi Meri hmesa ki tarah khoob ptakhe bum jalay
    Aap apna Btao
    &&
    Nasreen ji Sab Apne Apne me busy h n
    Pta NI Kha h

  6. Hloo guysss
    My cute cute Mr.busy nasreen tabuu isha my baby sakku ramya my pyare swapnil bhaiya nd my pyare sameer jii sabko Gud mrng koi rehgya toh sory aur uko bhi gud mrng

  7. Yr Kaha ho to Bhai to hame ignore karre hai Ali Bhai to dikhre hi nhi aajao yr kyu nhi aare Hu hum aplog ke liye Yaha aare hai aplog hi gayab????????

    1. Mujhe samjh nhi Aaya tk Bhai ap marriage bol rahe ho to meri marriage august me hogi Allah chahe to dua kare ap bahen ke liye

  8. Haan DI marriage hi bola main
    Wo spelling glt Ho gya

    Vese aap hmesa happy rho

    Alla chahe to?
    Kya huaa clearly btaeeye na
    Gr btana chaho to

    1. Huva kuch nhi huva hai Bhai
      hai

      hamari engagement ko 3saal hogai hai bs

      shadi ki date aage hi badte jari hi isliye bole ab august bole hai pata nhi fir kya Hoga

  9. Huva kuch nhi huva hai Bhai
    hai

    hamari engagement ko 3saal hogai hai bs

    shadi ki date aage hi badte jari hi isliye bole ab august bole hai pata nhi fir kya Hoga

  10. Dil jigar kaha ho aap
    Hello vaishanavi sis sakku se baat huvi kya aapki
    Dil ji aapki rohan se baat huvi kya
    Noor aapki mujhse baat nahi hoti ajkal haha

    Raghu gyb
    Naina dikhti nhi
    Rohan ghushuda
    Zoya hai b ya nhi
    Pritu ja pata nahi
    Vediya dikhti hi nhi
    Sakku lapata hai
    Surander silentreader bangay
    Isha aati hi nhi.
    Aisha bhulgay
    Sakshi ko dil nhi krta.
    Maahi ko kya hua ?
    ????????????????

    Hahahahah

  11. Achha Dil jeet
    to apko msg kaise dikh rhe
    jab apke naina Maine chhin liye
    hmmmmm bolo?????

    Good Evening guysssss

    ntk apka pura name kya h???

    Nasreen
    Naina ko dekhna chahoge tabhi na apko dikhegi

    simple h yllll mirror ke samne Jake dekho 2 Nain dikh jayegi…

  12. मुझे मालूम था की लौट के अकेले ही आना है,

    फिर भी तेरे साथ चार कदम चलना अच्छा लगा

  13. सांसों के सिलसिले को ना दो
    ज़िन्दगी का नाम,
    जीने के बावजूद भी मर जाते हैं कुछ लोग।

  14. Acha tk ji ap tabu ko ignore kr rhe h schme

    ????????????????
    Kriye kriye kya Pta tabu kon unknown person akr apki side le le hahahhaa

    Hello Naina kesi h ap bahot Dino bd aa rhi h????????????????????????????????.????

    1. Aare ishu hamari side kyu koi lega hamare zaroorat nhi hamare Jo frnds bane hai Yaha aise nhi hai

      Tk Bhai

      Ali Bhai

      Vaishu

      Swapnil Bhai

      Sameer Bhai

      Isha

      Koi mujhe ignore nhi kare agar karoge to hum Yaha nhi aayenge

      1. Nice ab apko koi ignore kar raha hai to dukh lagraha hai haina apko ntk..
        Jab Nasreen ko tum ne ignore kiya tha usko dukh nhi lagega jabke wo tujhe miss me list ne naam drti thi. Badleme tumne kya bola hamari marzi hai jo jisko chahe usse bat karenge. Agar tk apko aisa hi bole to apko kaisa lagege

        1. Aaye hello tum ho koun Jo gum Nam phirte ho

          Rahi BAAT mere Tk Bhai ko bolna hum bolinge
          Humne unko mazak me Bola hai frnd hai vo hamare hum Jo chahe unko bolsakte our unho hame bolsakte

          Yaha tumko bole nhi aakar Kisi ki side lo samjhe apni itni pyaari baate na Apne pass rakho

          Haha aakar ache log ke Dil me zaher maat dalo samjhe na rahi BAAT nasreen ki jab to humne unko ignore nhi Kiya tha
          Ab zaroor karenge

          Kya khel tamasha Bana rakha hai tumlog ne Yaha aana hai to ek dusre ki feelings ki samjho aakar tamasha maat banao

          Apne baate Apne pass rakho hamare frnd hai humlog Jo chahe karenge tum tang maat aadao samjhlo ache se

    1. Good morning Tk Bhai sorry Bhai humne apko mazak me Kaha ke ap hame ignore karre ho apko Bura laga to hum maafi chahate hai apse ek dost itna to mazak karsakte hai

      Sorry

      1. Sister aap sorry mat boleeeye
        Kinhi kinhi logo ki wajah se

        Iska to aadat hi ho gaeee hai
        Dusron ke beech mein bolna

        Aadat nahi gandi Aadat

        1. Aare yr aisa bhi kya hai inlog Ka jab khud ache se nhi rehsakte to dusro ki sukoon se jeene De

          Inlog ki aadat hogai hai lekin hamari had tak aayege to khamush nhi rahege hum

          Our Bhai kaise ho ap kya chalra hai

  15. Acha ek dusre ki feeling ki baat tum kar rahi ho tumbatao phir Nasreen ko feel kiya apne kya batao ab kya usko ignore karogi aap akkal hai apme allah ki kasam khakar chali gay hai wo .ab kaunsa us par zehar tum uglogi jabke wo hai hi nahi or ham kaha bhad karehai. . Bas jo hai sach batarehe hai. Tumne usko ignore nhi kiya. .or ab kehti jo ignore karungi matlab toh saaf haina usne rohan k liye tumse awz uthai. Bas.. Apko laga ke ab usko ignore karungi jab ke wo hogi to karogina .
    Sakku ko jaaye ek mahina hogaya hai ab nasreen b chali hai diljeet bhi gaye…ab batao kisko karogi ignore.

    Feeling ki baat karti gina toh nasreen ne toh apko miss kiya tha bar br toh phir uski feelings q nahu samjhi apne.

    1. Tujhe kya hai feelings vo Dekh samjhi tamaiz SE BAAT Kar nhi to mujhe bhi aata hai Jaise ki taisa dene samjhi na Bina wajake chup bak bak kiye jarahi hai khud ko hai qadar Kisi ki feelings ki to dusro ki bolo jab khud me nhi to Yaha muh uthakar aao maat bolne

  16. Ache rehneki baat tu kar rahi hai usne to tujhe acha hi samjhana tujhe acha samajhkar hi tujhe miss kiya thana phir tu kahase achi hai bata…. Tune acha wala kaam kaha kiya tha tune to ye bolkar kar sabit krdiya ke tu buri hai. Wahi hmari marzi me aayw jisko hum baat karenge. To bata kahase achi hai tu

    1. Chal Jo samjhna hai samjh tujh jaise ghatiya log yahi smajhege khud kounsa Acha Kam karri vo Dekh aakar Yaha zaher gholri Aaye badi mahanta dikhane chal ja tujh jaise bht dekhe hai miss Kiya ha Kiya humne Dekha reply Kiya uske baad Jaise hamari Marzi Baar karenge ya nhi Tu Hoti koun bolne wale pehel apna name to bata

  17. Nasreen gai hai unki mazri se rohan Bhai Zoya ke matter se

    Isme hame maat ghasito samjhi na ap
    To ap ab nasreen ki BAAT kyu Kar rahi ho
    Unhone miss jab Kiya tab humne unko reply Kiya
    Hamari Galti thi nhi unho ne hame Galt Bola

    Bs hogai BAAT jab katam
    Ab kyu Nikal rahi ho ye San

    Khud me kounsi akkal hai dekhle pehle BAAT nikalre koun tum nikale hum nhi

    Zaher tum aakar ugalrahi Hu Mai nhi

    Rahi BAAT sakku ki jab vo thi hum Yaha nhi the

    Aare yr tumlog ko hai kya problem
    Kisi ko Acha nhi dekhsakte ho kya

    Pehle nasreen ki BAAT jab katam hogai thi
    Ab kyu nikalriu ho BAAT

    Ho koun tum Jo name chupai pher the ho

    Kehrahe hai hum per agar ab kuch galat Kaha na to hum chup nhi rahege

    Feelings tum Jaise kya samjho ge Jo pyaar ko nhi samjhte ungliya utha the pher the

    Pehle Jake khud samjho Apne apko fir aana Yaha hame bolne

    Jab Dekho aajate hai ek dusre ke Dil me zaher gholne zagere log

      1. Khud kutti ho Kar mujhe bol rahi hai dekhle Tu khud Tu kya hai fir mujhe bol samji
        Ye Gali galoj mere sath nhi samjhi mujhe bhi aata dena lekin tujh jaiso me liye Mai apni zuban kharab nhi karungi
        Tujhse lakh darje Achi humai

        Sahi yr ache mastermind ho Kaha SE seekha hai ek jata nhi ek aajate
        Line laga Rakhi hai kya

        Ab ziyada BAAT ko badai maat
        Jo BAAT tumhari thi nai bichme aayi kyu tang aadane

        1. Apni zuban per lagam de Bola Kisi tune Sahi to Kaha Tk Bhai ne shrm nhi tujh me isliye aise BAAT karrahi hai aise tarika hota hai bolne Ka boli kyu tum Bhai ko Gali Di kyu aare yr hai kya Teri problem ye batade

      2. Gum name …
        Muje lgta h tu boy h ya grl
        Tera ye bhi nhi mlm..

        Teri famlly m bhai bahan muje lgta h esa hi krte h
        Bhai ke pas teri bahan soti hogi tb hi tuje ye baat yaad aaa rhi h….

        Tu name to bata nhi sakta kamine kutte aaa jate h yaha sale suvar ki aulad jane kha kha se aaa jate h….

        Bhai bahan ke riste ko tere jese ganda krte h…
        Kamine…

        1. Aare Bhai isko rishta Ka matlab nhi pata to aake hi ghatiya baate bolengi iska jawab humne nhi Diya lekin isko is Pak rishta ko Gali Di hai Allah isko iske Gali Ka jawab zaroor dega iski qabar me saamp bichu hide azab karenge isko Muslim hai to Gali dene Ka azaab pata Hoga ise

  18. Didu aap yahan se a_v chale jahahiye
    Replay Mat Dena isko

    Hum Kisi Ko Gali Dena Nahi chahte

    Humko Aisa Sanskar nahi mila
    Isi ko Mila hoga

    1. Bhai injaoso ko sharam Kaha
      Ek dusre Mai ladai lagane aajate hai

      Unki wajase humlog kyu jaiye Bhai
      Hum kya hai kaise hai inlog bolne SE nhi hota dar Kar Mai chalijao to ye Kahi he Mai muh chuparahi hu

  19. Chal kutti chudel Terese kya bat karna tu to apne bhai k sath hi sone wali log mese hai

    Terese bat karke mujhe apna muh gnda nahi krna
    Suvr ki aulad

    1. Sahi Kaha aayi na Teri auqat per tujh jaise yahi to hai Jo boli hai na uska jawab bht ache se desaktiu Mai lekin Jo Tu kahegi vo tujhe lagri hai Gali mujhe nhi Jo Jo Tu mujhe kahegi sub tujh per Aaye GA
      Samjhi hai kya Tu samjh kya rakha Tune

      Agar Mai bolna shuru karungi na Acha nhi Hoga chup chap Nikal ke Yaha se galiz ladki
      Chee ghin aati hai Jaise pe koi rishta Ka matlab nhi mlm tumhe

      Cheee
      Isliye har rishte ki mazak Bana rakha hai

      Ab ek our lafz bolegi na Dekh Tu ab

  20. Ghar basale yahar…
    Kutti aona chehra dekh
    Subarki tara hi i hoga kutti ki tra naak hogi
    Tujhe izat nhi aise hi bolna chiye
    Kamini gud bye

    1. Tu basali kya kutte ke sath Ghar Ka basa le Tu to BAAT Karne ke qabil ki bhi nhi hai

      Nikal Yaha se hamare Yaha aise logo ki awara kehte hai inlog me se ek hai Tu

      Zaherili gida

      1. Warna kya karegi tu teri aukat batai Maine..mera nam toh nahi hai lekin tere bareme sab ko pata chalgaya hai k tu kitni girsakti hai ab dekhna kitne dost bante hai tere… Tujhse sirf hi kahenge wo b ye feel karenge ki yeh b ghtya hai

        1. Chal chal pehle khud Ka name dhoond me baad me mujhe bol rahi dost banne ki BAAT jisko mujhse BAAT Karni hogi karenge agar volog mujhe samjhe to nhi to unlog ki Marzi Yaha koun kisko kya bol Raha hai sub dekhre hai kisne shuru kya kya Bola

          Chal apni fikar Kar meri nhi
          Yahi to chahate hai tumlog ke Yaha koi ache dost na bane ladte rahe

          Agar ache hote tumlog to ye nhi karte Jo tamasha Bana rakha hai 4din se ek baad ek ek baad ek

    2. Tu h kon….
      Battamaz bolne wala…
      Teri aukat m dikhaunda
      Ldki ke name se baat kr rha h…
      Tu teri aukat tu khud dikha rha h…
      Mujse baat kr

  21. Tabu don’t reply inhe reply mt de ap kitne Rong wording use ki h unse ap reply mt kre aise logo Koo Jane de apni gussa aise logo pr jaahir n kre

  22. Kl raat syd kuch or mangte toh kya Pta mil jata humne toh majak hee kiya tha ye toh schme ho gaya tabu
    ????????????????????????????????????????????????
    Suna toh tha din me se ek wqt qubooliyt ka hota h syd kl raat bhi wahi thaa khas kuch acha kehte

  23. Tabu jane de wo toh humesha hee aisa krta j apne dekha h n jitna mu rahoge uthna bolte h
    Uski koi limit nhi h rishton ko tk Gali de rha h toh ap btaye aise logo ke sth kya krna h bkne do or chup kitna toh girega

    1. Ishu dekhti Hu ye Kitna girti hai ye Muslim hi agar to ab dubara Gali nhi degi agar ye samne Hoti thi na to Allah kasam iska vo hal karte Kabhi Zindagi me rishta ko badnam nhi karsake

  24. Alone bhai or tabu ap dono rehne de iska koi self respect nhi h isliye itne Rong wording use krte h
    Ap dono isse mu n lgaye ye or jada bol Dega aise logo ka kuch ata Pta nhi hota
    Or agr ye real me ldki h toh dub mRNA chahiye ise toh apni jban or alfazoo pr kabu nhi h jise

    Or agr boy h toh jrur ye bhai nhi Hoga kisi ka

  25. Ha tabu humara khud ka kiya huaa comment bhi nhi dikh rha ptanhi kya ho rha h aj ????????????????????????????????????

    Toh ab toh ayegi na Naina ap roz

  26. Jabtak tum jaise ghatiya log rahnge koi nhi ayega.
    Tum dono hi duniya ka mazak banati ho isse pehle rohan kiya baad me nasreen ka ab mera bhi mari padi raho dono.

    1. Mazak tumlog banate ho aakar hum nhi agar tumlog ko Acha se rehna hota to Yaha itna tamasha nhi karte

      Rahi BAAT nasreen ki unho ne khud Kiya Jo Kiya

      Our Rohan Bhai ko humlog ne kuch Kaha nhi

      Aise hai to Rohan Bhai khud aakar puche Jo hai

      Tum kyu chup aakar Bolte ho ye aise hai vo vaise hai

      Hum kya hai kya nhi bs Allah janta hai hame Yaha Kisi ko saafai deneki zaroorat nhi

      Jo humse Achi BAAT karenge hum unse Achi BAAT karenge

      Jo humse galat BAAT karenge to hum bhi khamush nhi rahenge

      Sukoon se rehnedo do yr sub ko site ko our kharab maat karo

    1. Acha Naina thik h jb time mile tb aeeye hum toh roz ate h jb bhi ap ayngi hum jrur mileage????????????????????????????????

  27. Oh hello mere paach
    Maggi h
    Tarbooz h
    Faina h
    BkM h
    Ajji h
    Bhalu h
    Cartoon h
    Bhonduvaaaa h
    Md h
    Ol Bhi h Sab
    Aapke paas kya h
    Huuuh bolo bolo
    Bandariyaaaaaaaaaaa
    ????????????????????????????

  28. Hi Noor ji hi raghu jii
    Asslamualaikum sbko
    Kha ho sb tabu alone bhai Ali ji toh ate hee nhi h or bhi bahot h sb aa jaooo

  29. Hum thik h ap sb btaye kese h
    Ha Ramya hum bhi thik h ap btaye

    Or Noor ji hum new wali h syd ap bhi hume purani wali isha jh rhi h

  30. ni mai jnti hu ap new ho
    vo to maine aise hi bola
    mai purani vli isha ko ni jnti ????
    ap batao apka lunch hua
    nd ap kaha se ho

  31. Hello frnds Raghu ji Noor Ramya kaise ho ap sub

    Ishu Mai yahi Hu yr pata nhi sub Kaha hai Ali Bhai aate nhi Tk Bhai late aate hai vaishu Ka bhi pata nhi
    Sameer Bhai CLG

    Miss you frnds

    Our bataiye ap sub Ramya Noor Raghu ji aplog to bht Pura be ho site per Acha laga aplog ko dekhar

  32. Mashallah mashaallh sub Aaye hai Kitna Acha lagraha hai aise hi aajaye sub jab bhi time mile

    Aare yr Bhai ap bhi free hokr aajao miss you

  33. Kaha ja rhe h sb itne Dino bs toh lover point lag rha h wrna
    Yha toh humesha kusti chlti rehti h sb yhi rho humare ate hee baag rhe ho

  34. Tk bhai ap bhi gyb hee rehte h or vaishnvi ka toh aj kl ata Pta hee nhi h

    Tabu ab toh alone bhai bhi ate ho honge clg se

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