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Akelapan – Amita

Actually ea stoty nahi ek Kavita hai

Ek wakt tha jb darte the hum akelepan se
Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.

Rajdar bannana chahte the hum Kisi ko us akelepan ka pr Mila ka koi jise hum bana sake Sathi us akelepan me.
Darati thi jb andhera mujhe us akelepan me tb Mila na koi mujhe Jo kahe dar mt mai hu sath tere in Andhero me.

Ladna shikha liya Maine apne akelepan se jina shikha liya Maine in Andhero me.
Ek wakt tha jab darte the hum akelepan se

Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.
Ab nahi lgta dar apne akelepan se ab nai darati andhera apne andhero se.

Rajdar ban gayi hai andhera hamare akelepan ki sb kuch janti hai fr v kuch nai kahati in andhero se.
Pr ab v dil ka ek chota se kona darta hai is akelepan k andhero se ki kahi fr laut na aaye wo andhera akelepan ka fr se.

Ek wakt tha jb darte the hum akelepan se
Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.

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100 thoughts on “Akelapan – Amita”

  1. Nice line
    But ek question h apse
    Apko kyu dar lgta h akelepan se

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    Mujhe to mere akelepan se bhut pyar h
    Qki kbhi na kbhi koi na koi apko chhor ke chala hi jata h
    Par ye akelapan kbhi v apka sath nhi chhorega
    Waise v aaye v akele h
    Jana v akele h
    To fir darna kyu is akele pan se…

  2. nice poem amita ji

    ap andhere or akelepan q darti hai

    sabki apni kuch na kuch kamjori hoti hai
    bt hume apni se ladna chahiye na ki darna chahiye
    ek bat or hame self depend hona chahiye na ki kisi or pr

  3. Khayal unhi ke aate hai…..
    Jinse dil ka rishta ho ❤

    Har saks apna ho jaye …..
    sawal hi paida nahi hota ????

  4. ha bhai uda lo mjak mera..jaise shadi ke bad to maharani ban jaungi na tb mujhe koi kaam hi nhi krna padega h na….kah to ese rhe ho..tb bhi to yhi sb krna padega …

  5. Janha tumhri shadi hogi wanha par tumko kewal khana banna padega
    Aur kadpe dhulne padege bs
    Aur sb kam ke liye kamwali lgi hogi

  6. Aur sath me tumhri sasu maa nand to rahegi tumhri help Karne ke liye
    Ab isme hansi udne wali Kya bat hui
    Bolo Mai Galt bola

  7. nhi galat nhi bola..bs aashirwad do sb kuch sahi rhe …or m maharani nhi bnna chahti bs ek achchi bahu bankar rhna chahti hu…

  8. kya bat h bhai busy ho kya …pta h bhai aj papa hospital gye the or xray krwaya leg ka to pta chala ki ab tk haddi thodi si bhi nhi judi h calcium nhi ban rha h papa ki body m ….

  9. Acha milk pite h ki NHI
    Ya milk se bni chije kha sakte h
    I’m sb me calcium bahut milte h
    Ya doctor ne jo Kaha h wo khaye

  10. Zindgi me agar kuchh khona padhe to
    Ye baat yaad rakhna,

    Jo khoya h uska gam nhi,
    Lekin jo paya h wo kisi se km nhi

    Jo nhi h wo ek khwaab h
    Aur jo h wo Lajawaab h..

  11. Achha bhootniii h
    To bhootni ka name v hoga kuch
    Wahi bta do Hume,

    .
    ..
    Dinner sabka OK h
    Breakfast na ho jaye abhi kisi ka v
    Ha hahahaha

    Apko nhi lagta to kya hua swthrt
    Humko to pta h na ki ap bhut cute n sweet or achhe ho..????

  12. Qki miss Patel
    Hume nind hi nhi aati
    Adat h meri late night jagna
    But dhire dhire ye adat chali gyi thi
    But lockdown ke wjh se ye adat aa gyi wapas
    Hahahaha

    To koi h yha ?

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