Akelapan – Amita

Actually ea stoty nahi ek Kavita hai

Ek wakt tha jb darte the hum akelepan se
Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.

Rajdar bannana chahte the hum Kisi ko us akelepan ka pr Mila ka koi jise hum bana sake Sathi us akelepan me.
Darati thi jb andhera mujhe us akelepan me tb Mila na koi mujhe Jo kahe dar mt mai hu sath tere in Andhero me.

Ladna shikha liya Maine apne akelepan se jina shikha liya Maine in Andhero me.
Ek wakt tha jab darte the hum akelepan se

Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.
Ab nahi lgta dar apne akelepan se ab nai darati andhera apne andhero se.

Rajdar ban gayi hai andhera hamare akelepan ki sb kuch janti hai fr v kuch nai kahati in andhero se.
Pr ab v dil ka ek chota se kona darta hai is akelepan k andhero se ki kahi fr laut na aaye wo andhera akelepan ka fr se.

Ek wakt tha jb darte the hum akelepan se
Andhere v darati thi mujhe us akelepan me.

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100 Comments

  1. Naina

    Nice line
    But ek question h apse
    Apko kyu dar lgta h akelepan se

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    Mujhe to mere akelepan se bhut pyar h
    Qki kbhi na kbhi koi na koi apko chhor ke chala hi jata h
    Par ye akelapan kbhi v apka sath nhi chhorega
    Waise v aaye v akele h
    Jana v akele h
    To fir darna kyu is akele pan se…

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  2. patel

    nice poem amita ji

    ap andhere or akelepan q darti hai

    sabki apni kuch na kuch kamjori hoti hai
    bt hume apni se ladna chahiye na ki darna chahiye
    ek bat or hame self depend hona chahiye na ki kisi or pr

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  3. Pihu

    Nice poem
    Amita ji

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  4. Pihu

    Nice poem!
    Amita ji

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  5. Pihu

    Khayal unhi ke aate hai…..
    Jinse dil ka rishta ho ❤

    Har saks apna ho jaye …..
    sawal hi paida nahi hota 💖

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  6. Pihu

    Apna wahi hai jo hamari khamoshi padh sake…..

    Varna andaaje to begane bhi laga lete hai…..

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  7. Vinod ald

    Koi h kya
    Aur ye gate kyu khila h

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    1. ramya

      hello bhai kaise ho….

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  8. RK

    Jaruri to nahi ki
    Nazadiyo me hi pyaar ho,
    Faaslo me bhi Ishq ki
    Bulandiya dekha h hmne…

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  9. RK

    Zindgi me ek dusre ke jaisa hona jaruri nahi,
    balki ek dusre ke lie
    Hona jaruri hota h…

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  10. RK

    Tujhse laakh shikayate ho…
    mujhe pr tu zara sa haal puchh le to
    Hum sb bhul jaate h..❤️

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  11. ramya

    kya bat h rk ji …ap shyayari bhi kr lete h…nice.lines…

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    1. RK

      Tq…

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  12. RK

    Haa achha lgta h shyri n lines likhna yha…

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  13. ROCKY

    Andaaze se na napiye
    Hasti kisi insaan ki
    Thahare hua dariya aksar
    Gahre hua krte h….

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  14. RK

    Hum kya h
    Wo sirf hum jaante h..
    Log sirf Hamare baare me andaza hi laga skte h…

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    1. ramya

      ye to bhut sahi bat likhi h aapne…rk ji.

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  15. Vinod ald

    Koi h kanha ho sb

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  16. Vinod ald

    Aur Ramya Ghar Ka kam karte karte hi pura din nikal Jata hoga

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    1. ramya

      hmmm …bhai pr iske alawa or kr bhi kya kr skti hu,…

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  17. ramya

    bhai hum h yha …

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  18. Vinod ald

    Karti rho
    Jb tak shadi na ho Jaye
    😃😃😃😃😃

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  19. ramya

    ha bhai uda lo mjak mera..jaise shadi ke bad to maharani ban jaungi na tb mujhe koi kaam hi nhi krna padega h na….kah to ese rhe ho..tb bhi to yhi sb krna padega …

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  20. Vinod ald

    Acha kyu nhi rani banogi
    Tumhri mammy papa
    Jo itne bade Ghar par shadi Kar rhe
    To hui ki nhi maharani

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  21. Vinod ald

    Janha tumhri shadi hogi wanha par tumko kewal khana banna padega
    Aur kadpe dhulne padege bs
    Aur sb kam ke liye kamwali lgi hogi

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  22. Vinod ald

    Aur sath me tumhri sasu maa nand to rahegi tumhri help Karne ke liye
    Ab isme hansi udne wali Kya bat hui
    Bolo Mai Galt bola

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  23. ramya

    nhi galat nhi bola..bs aashirwad do sb kuch sahi rhe …or m maharani nhi bnna chahti bs ek achchi bahu bankar rhna chahti hu…

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  24. Vinod ald

    Ha wo to h hi
    Hamara ashirwad

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  25. ramya

    or btayiye kya ho rha h ….sb kaise h ghr m ..

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  26. Vinod ald

    Ham to lete h sb ache h Ghar par
    Bache bhi ache h

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  27. ramya

    kya bat h bhai busy ho kya …pta h bhai aj papa hospital gye the or xray krwaya leg ka to pta chala ki ab tk haddi thodi si bhi nhi judi h calcium nhi ban rha h papa ki body m ….

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  28. Vinod ald

    To calcium ki dwa likhi hogi doctor ji ne

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  29. ramya

    haa lekin sugar ki wajah se sb fail h …

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  30. Vinod ald

    Acha milk pite h ki NHI
    Ya milk se bni chije kha sakte h
    I’m sb me calcium bahut milte h
    Ya doctor ne jo Kaha h wo khaye

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    1. ramya

      ha dudh subh sham pite h paneer or dahi khate h do egg roj khate h …diet hi follow krte m hi krati hu …

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  31. ramya

    chaliye bhai ab m chalti hu ..fir bat krungi..bhai apka no. kho gya ek bar denge ..fir se..

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  32. ramya

    bhai mil gya no. rhne do okk byee khyaal rkhna apna or sbka…call krungi sham ko

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  33. Vinod ald

    Call na Karna Ramya

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  34. RK

    Hamare jeene ka tarika
    Thoda alag h
    Hum ummid par
    Nhi apni Zidd pr jeete h

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  35. RK

    Zindgi me agar kuchh khona padhe to
    Ye baat yaad rakhna,

    Jo khoya h uska gam nhi,
    Lekin jo paya h wo kisi se km nhi

    Jo nhi h wo ek khwaab h
    Aur jo h wo Lajawaab h..

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  36. RK

    Good evening..all

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  37. patel

    good evening rk nd all friends

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  38. Vinod ald

    Kaun Kaun appe NHI khayega

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  39. Vinod ald

    Kaun kaun so gya
    Aao sb kitne baje sote h

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  40. RK

    Hiii

    Mahi
    Naina
    Isha
    Raj
    Nitya
    Pihu
    Ramya
    Alone ms
    T khan
    Vinod n all
    Silent readers

    Kaise ho sb….

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    1. Naina

      Thik hu
      Tum sunao apna

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  41. raj

    maine to dekha tha bas ek najar ke khatir kya khabr thi ki meri rag rag me samaa jaoge tum

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    1. Naina

      Wah nice line
      By the way
      Kaun sama gaya h raj
      Dekho kahi WO bhoot to niii
      Hahaha

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      1. raj

        thanx naina ji…bhootni haha

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  42. Maahi

    Hello everyone..
    Kaise ho aap sb?

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  43. Naina

    Everyone ka to pta nhi
    But meko mera pta h Ki

    Ki

    Ki

    Ki

    .
    Ki

    Ki

    .

    Ki

    Ap achhe ho….

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    1. Maahi

      Achha main achhi hu? Kisne bola? Meko toh ni lgta😂😂

      Haan aap achhi ho wo baat alag h🥰

      Reply
  44. Vinod ald

    Aaj Ramya kanha h
    So gai hogi

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  45. Vinod ald

    Aaj Ramya kanha h
    So gai hogi
    Àur SB koi

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  46. raj

    hello friends…dinner hogya sbka??

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  47. Naina

    Achha bhootniii h
    To bhootni ka name v hoga kuch
    Wahi bta do Hume,

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    ..
    Dinner sabka OK h
    Breakfast na ho jaye abhi kisi ka v
    Ha hahahaha

    Apko nhi lagta to kya hua swthrt
    Humko to pta h na ki ap bhut cute n sweet or achhe ho..💕

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    1. Maahi

      Aisa ni h swthrt🤪
      Infact aisi aap ho🥰😘

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      1. Naina

        Ha or ap v

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        1. Maahi

          🥰🥰

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  48. Naina

    So gye kya sabke sB

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  49. Maahi

    Main jgi hi hu🙂

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    1. Naina

      So jao Fir

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      1. Maahi

        Jab kisi ko yaad krte h toh neend bi jldi ni aati..waise main so hi gyi thi😂😂

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  50. patel

    good morning dosto

    naina di ap itna der tak q jagti hai

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  51. R.k

    Good morning all

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  52. ROCKY

    Gm…

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  53. Maahi

    Good afternoon guysss

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  54. Vinod ald

    Koi h
    kya batao

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  55. patel

    hm hai badam bhaiya

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  56. patel

    kon kon so raha hai hath uthao

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  57. Vinod ald

    Hi kaju kaise ho aaj khet nhi GAI Kya
    Kaju tumhre yanha kitni cow h

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  58. patel

    subah gaye the abhi rest kr rahe hai
    4 hai

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  59. patel

    badam bhaiya apke yaha khet hai

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    1. Vinod ald

      Mere yanha khet nhi h
      Mai city me rahta hu

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  60. Rocky

    Good afternoon frdz…

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  61. ROCKY

    Pehla pyaar
    adhura ho ya pura
    sath rhe ya na rahe par
    ek baat to h yaad to
    Puri Zindgi bhar
    rhta h…❤️

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  62. Rocky

    Pyaar to wo h
    Jo had me Rah kr
    Behad ho jaaye.

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  63. patel

    hlow rk kaise ho

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    1. ROCKY

      Mai badhiya hu mast hu ap kaisi h..patel ji

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  64. patel

    badam bhaiya ap kha gaye

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    1. Vinod ald

      Apni meva ke pass

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  65. patel

    ek din ap bole the genua k khet me gya tha to mero ko laga ki hai

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  66. Vinod ald

    Wo to aise hi Bola tha kaju

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  67. Vinod ald

    Ramya kanha busy ho

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  68. patel

    aj v unke sare iljam hm apne pr le lete hai,
    a kahkar ki o bewfa nahi hm hi badnasib the.

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  69. patel

    or apke yaha kya hal chal hai

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    1. Vinod ald

      Sb acha h tum apni batao
      Tum batai nhi tunhre yanha kitne cow h

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  70. Vinod ald

    Kaun h wo kaju
    Mujhe BHI batao

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    1. patel

      hai koi apna

      bataye to the 4 hai

      a to ni pata ki allahabd me kaha hai

      waha pe study karte hai LLB Ki

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      1. Vinod ald

        Kal syad ayodhya ke liye bus mile syad

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  71. patel

    badam bhaiya apke yaha mere mousa ji v atke huye hai

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  72. Vinod ald

    Kanha par
    Aur kaise wo yanha aa gye

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  73. patel

    bahut masoom hote hai a ansu v,
    girte unhi k liye hai jinhe inki parvah nahi hoti hai.

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  74. ankit

    acha rahega

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  75. Vinod ald

    Kaju Kanha ho

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  76. kaju

    yahi hai badam bhaiya

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  77. Vinod ald

    Kaju ye Rashmi kyu NHI ATi h

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  78. kaju

    badam bhaiya khush to hm hamesha rahte hai
    aj free hai 4 baje tak

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  79. Naina

    Qki miss Patel
    Hume nind hi nhi aati
    Adat h meri late night jagna
    But dhire dhire ye adat chali gyi thi
    But lockdown ke wjh se ye adat aa gyi wapas
    Hahahaha

    To koi h yha ?

    Reply
  80. R.k

    Dunia me agr kuchh
    Chhodhna chahte ho,
    To dusro se ummid krna
    Chhod do…

    Reply

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