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अधुरो सपना – Stranger Tezz

आफ्नो सपनालाइ पुरा गर्ने आसमा
तिम्रो खुसिको हत्या गर्नु छैन
जलेको यो ह्रिदय शान्त पार्न
तिम्रो हासोको अचानो बनाउन छैन
तेतिकै नै अल्झेको छ मेरो जिवन
तिमीलाइ नै यो भूमरिमा अल्झाउन छैन
तेतिकै नै दुखको सिलौटामा पिस्दैछ मन
तिम्रो मुस्कानलाइ भिरबाट खसाल्नु छैन
थाह छ मलाइ एकदिन अरुसङ्ग खुसि हुनेछौ तिमी
तिमी सङ्गको यो छोटो पल मेटाउनु छैन
कसम तिम्रै नाममा साचिदिए यो मन र जिवन
तर कुनै करले तिमीलाइ पाउनु छैन
जानु छ तिमीलाइ भने गइदेउ
बरू पराया नै भइदेउ
अरू कोइ यो मनमा राख्नू छैन
बरू तिमी बैगुनि नै भइदेउ।

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113 thoughts on “अधुरो सपना – Stranger Tezz”

  1. Unki Yaado ki is kadar hame jarurat thi ki vo
    Hme rulate rhe Lakin ham Roy nhi
    Par jab unhe hamari jarurat huwi to vo
    Hme bulate rhe Lakin ham gay hi nhi
    …….p

  2. Hi parveen sis aapko bhi happy dashera

    Tabbu
    Sakshi
    Sana
    Rohan
    Salman
    Amit
    Raghu
    Jiya
    Gauri
    Rashmika
    Ayesha
    Zoya old
    Hina
    Ramya
    Dilshan
    Irfan
    Dev
    Kritika
    Maahi
    Pallavi
    Harsh
    Fatima
    Raj
    Md
    Samar
    Sameer
    Kiyara
    .

    ????????

    1. Aplog ki bhi happy dashera
      Yr ye dashera Kya hota hai bs suna hai,,

      Dilshan koun hai jabse aayi hu site per Kabhi Dekha nhi hai unko

      Baki sub kaise ho ap sub

      Rohan ji vaishu kaisi hai vo to aati nhi site per ap hi bataiye uska treatment hogaya na ache se ab koi problem to nhi usko

  3. Aplog ki bhi happy dashera
    Yr ye dashera Kya hota hai bs suna hai,,

    Dilshan koun hai jabse aayi hu site per Kabhi Dekha nhi hai unko

    Baki sub kaise ho ap sub

    Rohan ji vaishu kaisi hai vo to aati nhi site per ap hi bataiye uska treatment hogaya na ache se ab koi problem to nhi usko

  4. Dashera matlab devi durga ko 9 din gharme usko saja sawarkar rakhte hain uski puja karte hain.navratri usko hi kehte hain. Baaki nav din k baad das din aata hain… Matlab k dashera das din… Yani sab mannat puja jo ki devi ko gharme rakha tha usko uthadete hain aur paani me thanda kardete hain jaise ganesh ko. Yahi hota hai dashera.

  5. Ok navratri to garba khelte hai I think

    Chalo ab kuch din baad bhi hamare yaha bhi Eid hogi

    Milad-un_nabi.. insha’Allah

    Har Jaga raonaq hogi apke yaha kaise hota hai Parveen sis milad

  6. Hi kir kir kaisi ho hello Noor kaise ho ap dono
    Kya chalraha hai dinner huva aplog Ka

    Baki sub kaha hai miss you all

    Ishu kaha ho yr ek bar to aajao pls

    1. Gud morng dii
      Mai achi hu ap kaisi ho
      Nd apne pucha na dusshera ku manaya jata hai isdin burai pr achai ko jeet huyi thi isdin ravan ka anat hua tha Isiliye dusshere k din ravan ka putla bnaya jta hai aur jaalaya jata hai

  7. Yaade bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hai na
    Koi pass hota hai tab uski qadar nhi karte hai ,,

    Jab vo door chalajate hai tab uski Kami itni mehsoos Hoti hai,,

    Chahakar bhi usse baat na ho pati hai bs yaade hi rehjati hai…

    Miss you soo much my best best frnd…

  8. Parveen baaji maine isliye un teeno ka naam nahi likha qki main
    Insanoka naam likhti hun. Kuttonka nahi jo matlabi hote hain. Aur wese bhi ye kuttone hamare kabil dost ka jeena haram kar rakha hai.
    Aur acha bura sab dekar bhi ghatiya log ka sath dete hain. Insaniyat to gayi bhaad me inki nazar me. Ye to kutte k lyak bhi nahi.
    Inke liye koi ehsaan kare ya na kare inko fark nahi padta. Isliye inki aukat meri nazar me kuttonki koi izzat nahi. Insan jo hai umka naam list me hain wo sab insan hain. In kuttonko main umar bhar muaf na karu agar mera bas chale to zahar khilakar mardu. Qki inki wajase koi shareef to jiyega.

  9. Choro behan jiske dil
    me paap hai
    Usko allah taala
    khud saza dega aapke
    kabil dost ki izat kabhi
    kam na huvi hai na hogi
    Khush raho zoya ok.
    Sab se bada allaha hai
    Un par chordo ek
    Din khud log lo pata chalega
    Wo khud kadmome akaar girenge
    Namaz pado dil se dua mango
    Shaitan bhi kadmome girjata hai
    ♥love you tum bohat achi ho
    Zoya kaash aapki tara sab ka dil
    Hota.

  10. विजयदशमी यानी दशहरा नवरात्रि खत्म (durga puja vijaya dashami) होने के अगले दिन मनाया जाता है। क्योंकि इस पर्व का सीधा संबंध मां दुर्गा (Maa Durga) से माना जाता है। धार्मिक मान्यताओं के अनुसार भगवान राम (Lord Rama) ने रावण (Rawana) का इस दिन वध किया था। साथ ही ये भी कहा जाता है कि रावण का वध करने से पहले उन्होंने समुद्र तट पर 9 दिनों तक मां दुर्गा की अराधना की थी फिर दसवें दिन उन्हें विजय प्राप्त हुई। एक मान्यता ये भी है कि मां दुर्गा ने नौ रात्रि और दस दिन के युद्ध के बाद राक्षस महिषासुर का वध किया था।

    Yahi hota hai dashera

  11. Kutton ki trah khud bhonkti h or dushro ko bol rhi h jis sareef ki bat kar rahi h wo kitna sareef h puri site ko pta h
    Har ladki ka num Mangta rahta h uska tum sath de rahi ho wo sahi lg raha tumhe or jo sahi h wo galat ho gya waah madam ji salute h tumhe insaan ki pehchan ab tak nhi huyi

    1. Haan wo sahi hai aur rahega shayad aapki maa ka number bhi manga hoga usne aur wo puri site ko pata hai thanks kam se kam itna pata chala k wo famous hai. Wese number upar kuch kuttone bhi diya hai aur khud us kutte ne ek larki ko kaha hai k wo naina ko try karega aur sirf us kutti k liye hi aata hai jis kutti ko usne number diya tha. Aur wo kutti ek time hamare kabil dost ki ehsaan faramush thi.

      1. Plz mujhe ladai pasand nahi
        Or wo jo aap kehrahi ho zoya
        Sis k wo ladki se kaha tha ajay ne toh wo main hun
        Ajay ne mujhse kaha tha kasam
        Khakar kehti hun usne khud
        Mujhe kaha tha ki naina
        Ka breakup hogaya hai or has has kar chillaraha tha kehraha tha ki naina ko wo try karega
        Yahatak sab sahi hai baaki tum sab jaano

          1. Isiliye in kuttonke naam maine nahi likhe list me qki ye insan nahi kutte hain. Aur mujhe koi fark nahi padta k inko kutte kehnepar aukat hi jiski kuttonki jaisi ho unko kutte kehna kuch nahi hota

      2. Maa pr mat ja samjhi or bigada kya h tera Naina ne ya kisi ne uski mann jise num Dena wo degi tuje or tere Rohan ko kyu jalan ho rahi h wo ya koi bhi kisi se bhi bat kre ye unki marji use rohan nhi lgta hoga is layak
        Or kutta to tera dost h jo jab dekho muh Marta rahta h or uska sath de rahi h tu muje ladayi nhi krni bs kisi ko kuch bhi mt bol jab janti nhi to samjhi

        1. Mera.dost tum jaise log ki tara nahi hai jo seedha muh pe kehta hai ki main toh try karunga aur sirf uske liye hi aata hu jiski usko hawas hai. Aur number deraha hai. Us mera dost naina se bat kar raha tha tab ajay ko khujli huvi thi q ajay usne kya bigada. Tu jo bhi hai teri aukat kuttonki thi hai aur rahegi kutte

    1. Hello yakub ji
      Ap yaha old ho na
      Kaha se ho ap Kya karte ho kaise ho
      Acha Lagta hai old site member aate hai comments karte hai to…

  12. Yr tumlog Ka fir shuru hogaya bs karo yr choro jiski life hai vo uski marzi se Jio jisko jisse baat Karni hai kare na Karni hai na kare..pls ab site ko fir se vahi maat banao pls

    1. Koi ladayi nhi chahata yha bs zoya ko samjhna hoga ki kisi ko galiyan Dene se wo sahi nhi ho jati ye site uski property nhi h yha sab aate h or jise man ho usse bat kre jaroori nhi h ki koi bich me aaye sab Khushi se raho bass kisi ko bina mtlb blame na kro

      1. Aur ye baat main kahun to manlo hamare dost kisibhi larki ko number dega to ajay chup rehta hai us wqt naina ko ajay ne aisa hi kaha tha. Rohan bhi araam se naina se baat karraha tha ajay ne usko galiya q di. Uske baap ki site h ye

  13. Hello yakub ji
    Ap yaha old ho na
    Kaha se ho ap Kya karte ho kaise ho
    Acha Lagta hai old site member aate hai comments karte hai to…

  14. Hlo meko koi Janta h kya ????????
    Vese yrr plzz site pe jhgda na kiya kijiye
    Sbse bt kro
    Pyr mohbbt se rho
    Sbse bt krne se behave se
    Accha lgta h
    Hm kon sa ek jgh se h
    Sb alg alg se h
    Sath bt kro
    Msti kro enjoy kro
    Bhtt accha lgega

  15. Main nain se puchna chahti hu
    Ki jab rohan ji ne
    Apko just kaha ki aap whatsapp
    Kardena aapko kuch batana hai.
    Ajay ne usko galionse bhardaala

    Phir jab ajay ne aapko number
    Diya tab tum chup q ho
    Usko kehna thana ki us wqt
    Rohan ko q galiya di thi
    Ab tum kya karhebho q number derahe ho aur whatsapp karo kehrahe ho
    .

    Naina jab apki nzr me ajay apni
    Jaga sahi lagraha hai to rohan
    Ne kaunsi galti ki thi.
    Har wqt rohan ko kehte hain k
    Wo aapke peeche padraha hai ya larki baaz hai.
    Asalme to ajay ne hinkhud uske muh
    Se kaha hai ki wo sirf tumhare liye
    Aata hai aur rohan ko besti karta hai…

    Ab q nahi bolti aap.
    70 mm parde ki tara ajay
    Galth dikhraha hai agar ye sab rohan
    Karta to kya karti aap.
    Usko sab log khaajate tumlog

    Ajay k tara usne aapko kaha ki wo
    Sirf aapke liye aata hai
    Aur ajay ki besti karta hai
    Number deta hai. Vaishnavi ko
    Kehta hai breakup hogaya ab m try
    Karunga aisa gar rohan karta to
    Tum sab ki nazar me wo ek janwar
    Banjatana jabki wo khuda ka farishta hai.
    Aur hakeekat me ajay ek kutta hai

    Ab q nahi bolti q rohan ke liye alg ghtiya adalat aur ajay kutte k liye alg.

    1. Bas karo zoya
      Allah janta hai
      Ki sach kya hai
      Sab allah par chordo
      Jisne apke dost ka
      Dil dukhaya hai
      Wo ek din unke
      Kadmome girega
      Chahe koi bhi ho.
      RELAX

    2. Sorry Zoya sis bich Mai bolarhi hu
      Yr chodo sis ye sub baate guzar gai hai,,

      Rohan Bhai ko Naina sis se baat Karni thi usne nhi ki ye inlog Ka matter hai sis

      Hum ladkiya hai yr ek ladki ko hum Kuch bolenge to yaha aise bht log hai Jo zalil karenge

      Bs koun sucha hai koun jhoota hai Allah per chodo uski saza Allah jiski galati hai usko dega

      Yaha mere liye sub ek Jaise hi hai bs yaha vo log ko Mai nhi manti Jo yaha gandagi gailate hai

      Maine Kuch galat kaha to sorry sis

      1. Aap ne sahi kaha sis but apko nhi pata sis jis insan mere gharme khud ki family lakar mere janam din me char chand lagadiye. Aisa dost k main kya kahun shabd hi nhi aise dist ko site par zalil kiya jata hai to hum chup rahenge beshaq allah par chor sakte hai but allah tak ye insan kam zalil karenge. Main bolti hu usne kab kisike liye galth shabd bole hai site par bolte hai ki wo ladki baaz hai. Agar aisa hota hai to batao apke kuch kaha ya baaki larki ko kuch kaha? Is duniya me jalan bohat sis

  16. T.khan g me gujarat se hu ha me pehle aata tha yaha bahot dost mile bahot achhe log the pata nahi ab kaha he kuch dosto ko bahot miss karta hu …..Allah usko humseha khush rakhe Aameen.
    T khan aap kaha se ho? Aap new user ho? Please tell me

    1. Ji hum Pehle silent reader the yakub ji comments fir Maine comments Karne shuru ki I think 1year Hoga

      Hum Hyderabad se hai
      Ji Sahi kaha apne pehle site bht Achi thi Khair apke dosto ko Allah har Khushi de ameen

      Our bataiye apne bare Mai ap

        1. Life Kya hai MATLAB life to vo hai Jo Allah ne Di hai hame ab isko kaise jeena hai vo hame pata Hona chahiye,,,!!!!!
          Allah rasool ke baad hamare maa baap se hamari life Hoti hai namaz quraan Pak yahi hamari life hai..Baki apko bhi pata Hoga..
          Mera Pura name

          Tabassum khan hai
          Yakub ji vaise apko Bhai kehsakte hai Kya hum..

          Yaha to bht Sare Bhai banchuke hai hamare Jo ab aate nhi

          1. Bahot achhe se aapne life ke bareme bataya ? Tysm
            Tabassum bahot pyaara name he ..aap kuch bhi bula sakte ho ji no problem

          2. Sis aisa to na bolo name achha nahi ..bahot achha name he…aur ha hamari family me 2 bahen aur hum 2 bhai me ghar me sabse chhota 2no bahen ki shadi ho gae bhai ki bhi ho gae Mama jani duniya me nahi he muje chhod ke chale gaye..main abbu jani ke sath rehta hu..

  17. Sali naina ek number bazaru hai
    ????isliye usko chhutiye log
    Ache lgte hain hahahha????????????
    Saara din choosti hogi 8″inch ????????

    1. Bhai yakub jo insan ki izzat jaisi hai wohi bataraha hun.

      Ye sli naina ek number ki bazaru hai ache log isko ache nahi lagte balki jo log kehte hain ki main tere liye hi aata hu to wo uske sath soneko bhi ready hojti h.
      Isko sab pta h sli ko k kaun acha h bura wese zoya ne shi kha kuttonki auladonko kya pta chlta h izzat wle log kaise hote h.

      Isliye m uski hi basha me bolrha hu
      Tum dekhna mere sth b sone ko ready hojyegi

  18. Zoya m tre sth hu isko or ajay ko noor ko chdde te h. Ajay aja sle tri jaat ko chdu harmi boht shok hna tujhe numbr deneka sle r.ndi ki aulad ab aa tri gnd kse mrta hu dekh

    1. Unknown ?? Hurting someone who realy cares for you is as easy as throwing stone in the lake
      but you don’t know how deep that stone goes.
      so think twice while hurting your closed ones………..’

      1. Ok ji thanks but mujhe to apna name Pasand hi nhi hai

        Vaise ap bataiye yakub Bhai apne bare Mai family Mai koun koun hai apke

  19. Allah apki Ammi Jan ko jannat AATA farmai,,koi maa apne bacho ko chod Kar nhi jati hai bs vo Dil Mai to rehte hai,,,

    Ap apne abbu ke Sath rehte hai Kya karte hai ap job ya study
    Apke Bhai apke Sath nhi rehte hai..

  20. Ha mera v ho gya
    Study thik hi chl rhi h
    Abhi to holiday chl rha h
    14 se exams hain

    Jiju kaise hain
    Aur apki life kaise chl rhi hai

  21. Bs Allah Ka shukar hai apke jiju thik hai,,

    Bs shadi ki tayari chalrahi hai 1month 8days hai sirf…

    Pata nhi Uske baad site per aana Hoga ke nhi..miss you yr

    Mayur Bhai ko kaho ke site per Aaye vo

  22. Hi friends
    Happy Birthday advance
    Mr shehazaada tum
    Jio hazaro saal ye meri
    Hai aarzu???? Happy Birthday!
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  23. Happy Birthday advance meri jaan
    My hero my life my everything
    I love you my jaanu
    I love you
    I kiss you
    I miss you
    Mmmmuaaaaaaaa

  24. Bina Naam Wala Kutta…

    Idhar Sunn Bohot Tu Choos Choos Karta Hai Na

    Jaa Pehle Kisi Dogi Ka Choos

    Agar Usse Bhi Mann Nahi Bharta Hai Toh

    Toh

    Apna Baap Logo Ka Choos

    Bohot Costomer Hain Na Tera Behen Ka….

    GP Road Mein Tera Behen Dhanda Jo Karti Hain

    Isliye Toh Tera Jaban Bhi Dhande Wali Ka Bhai Jaisa Hain

    AUR MUH CHHUPANE KE LIYE BINA NAAM SE COMMENT KARTA HAIN

    BHNCHD

  25. Mdcd Tu Kiya Koi Nasha Karta Hai
    bhoshdike

    Tu Bar Bar Naina Ko Aslil Gaaliyan Kyun De Rahan

    Tu Bewajah Koi Ladki Ko Gaali Kyun Dega
    Yaan Phir Naina Ka Bhai Yaan Baap Ne Teri Maa Behen Kar Di
    Bol

    1. Aapko main fake lagrahi hu to isme meri kya galti hai lagnedo i don’t care mujhe aapki tara behas karna nahi aata bolte raho

  26. Ajay ap pls chup rahiye vo Gali deraha hai to ap uska jawab maat Dio

    Naina apki frnd hai to ap Uske liye pls chup raho uski tarha maat bano fir yaha vahi mahol hojaiga Gali galoj..

    Mai us Bina name wale ko to Kuch nhi kehsakte kyuke vo koun hai pata nhi

    Per apko to janti hi site per Kuch waqt se to isliye apko kehrahi hu Bhai pls chup rahiye,,,,

    Jo baate guzar gai hai usko choro

    Life 4din ki hai sub ache se raho pls Kisi ki maa bahen ko maat bolo aplog Jo bhi yaha maa bahen ko zalil karrahe hai vo bs janahnumi hai..

    Jab Rohan ji our Naina sis ko koi problem nhi hai to

    Aplog in dono ke liye yaha in dono Ka name maat kharab karo

    Ladai Karna Ka man hai to ek dusre ki kehlo na in dono ko kaho na Kisi ki maa bahen ko kaho ok

    Pls Meri baate Kisi ko buri lagi to maafi chahugi

  27. Hello Doston
    Dost k bina jeevn suna hojata h
    Yaaron

    Our my lucky raown bhai
    Mujhe v pta lggya apko bht bht
    Mubarak ho bhaiya ????????????

    1. Yeh site ko istara karneka zimmedar tu hai tu sle rohan ko galiya nahi deta to kuch na hota wo naina se kuch guftagu karraha tha uski naina ki marzi thi teri q jali thi teri behan lagti hai kya maa lagti hai ya teri maa behan karta h rohan kyun uske nam se tujhe itni jaln hoti h sle tu khud dekh kaisa h

  28. Sare fake yahpr bs tuhi ek original h to q naina k peecha krta h wo tujhe fake nhi lgti madrcd.
    Tu kon hota bolne wala k sb fak h tu kya bhagwan h

  29. Sare fake yahpr bs tuhi ek original h to q naina k peecha krta h wo tujhe fake nhi lgti madrcd.
    Tu kon hota bolne wala k sb fak h tu kya bhagwan h .

  30. Sle ajay khud glti ko tu maanega hi nhi chahe site suni ho ya kuch b
    Aur boht bolta rehta h ki site m pehle tuhi tha iska naam tumsehi tha.abey jb itna pta h tu purana h kaun h tri dost kitni ldki ne tujhe lov u bola. Apne apko chocolate boy samajhta hna to bta kya hasil kiya isme tune… Ek lrki isha thi usko tu dost k naam pr wo teri gf b ye bat pehladi. Jab usko pta chla to joote lge tujhe.

  31. Aur jo tu rohan k name se jlta h. Wo to tere jitna yaha chatting nhi krta na kisi lrki ko wo preshan krta.. Phir b itne kam samay me usko boht ladkione lv kiya h.
    Ashi, pihu, zoya,vaishnavi,kanika,
    Aur pta nhi silent reading wali b hongi. To bta sle tu isliye jlta hna usse. Shayad wo badsurat hoga pr phir mrti h uspar phir tu to boht smt haina kya kiya tera haal isha ne joote maare ulta ????

  32. Sun be sle ajay ek baat dhyan se kisike gharki light ujadkar apne gharme ujala laanese bura hota h. Jo insan jalta hai jiski burai karta h usko duniya burai karne per majbur kardeti h. Jitna insan dusronki izat karega usko badleme izzat se zada maan samman b milta h.pr tu andar kuch h bahar kuch natiza isha k msg se hi pata chlgya the k teri niyyat kaisi h. Tu hr br rohan ko kosta raha usko bura bolta raha uski burai karnepar koi kasarna chori uski hi nahi usse juda koi b insan jo b usse bat krta tha uski b tune burai ki sab ko fa bolta gaya had par kardi tune.dusronko izzat na denese khud ki maa behan tak ginnwachuka h tu. Itna girchuka h ki tujhe khud ko nai pta k kitna paani h tu. Sudharja sab ko izat de jal mat aaj jisse tu jal raha h kal tujhe b utni hi izat milegi umr h jabtak samajhle warna… Wo gana yaad h.. Bada pachtavoge.aisa hi hoga

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