HUMDARD….. – Madhuri

Zindgi ki bheed me freeda kahin kho si gyi thi.aaj b wo apne chanchlta se sabke lie bacchi hi thi.najuk se dil ki freeda abhi 2 mahine pehle hi 17 sal ki hui thi pr bachpna abhi b usme abhi b khut khut k bhari thi.roj ammi abbu (mom dad) k nok tok ne use or b chanchl bna dia tha, ammi use roz kehti freeda tu ab badi hogyi h bchhi nhi rhi ye bchho ki trah khelna uchlna bnd krde pr freeda ammi ki 1 na sunti.wo roz subh 11 bje se apne dosto k sat angan se bahar khelne chali jati wese to wo dost freeda se 6-7 sal chote the pr freeda unke sat hi khelna psnd krti thi.roz 11 bje sb dost aajate or kehte freeda apa (sis) chalo khelne.ammi kai bar bolti freeda kuch kam jyada kia kar ye sab khelna kam nhi dega pr freeda kehti ammi choro na konsa muje kam sikhke teer marna h.pr wese freeda ne ammi se bht kuc kam sikh lia tha.usdin subh 9 baj rahe the ammi bht khush dikhayi derahi thi unhone fareeda se kaha aaj tu kuc accha nastha or khana bna qki Hyderabad se teri khala(massi) ka ldka ara h yad h na tuje khalid, aakhuri bar use yhi kashmir me dekha tha jb wo bht chota tha tbhi mene teri khala se keh dia tha jab ye bda hojae to aana tmsab kashmir fir usdin k bad se wolog Hyderabad shift hogye the or aaj 21 sal bad wo ara h or kuc kam ki wjh se teri khala nhi aa paegi pr unka ldka khalid aara h.tabhi achank door bell baji fareeda k mandali use khelne bulane aae the, ammi ne kaha aaj fareeda late aaegi mehmam aane wale h na,

fareeda ne muh bnate hue kaha kya ammi aap bnalo na ammi ne kaha muh mat bna chal me madad krungi teri.fareeda or ammi ne milke sat me khana or nashta bnaya.fir freeda apne mandali k sat khelne chali gyi.fareeda usdin khelne me itna ghum hogyi thi k use time ka pta b nhi chala.wo jab ghar aayi to dekhti h ammi abbu or 1 lambe kad ka ldka soffe pr bethke kuc bat kar rhe the, uske aate hi ammi ne kaha ye dekho aagyi natkhat bandariya ye sunte hi fareeda ne gusse se kaha kya ammi kam se kam mehmano k samne to meri izzat kro, ammi ne kaha ye mehman thodi h ye to khalid h ja andar or khana lekar aa bhuk lgi hogi khalid ko.fareeda ne 1 nazar uthake khalid k traf dekha fir fatt se andar chali gyi khane lene.sabne milke sat me khana khaya.ammi ne fareeda se kaha ja khalid ko unka kamra dikha de, fareeda ne kaha sab kam me hi karu na or fir khalid se kaha chaliye aap ki b khatirdari kardu, khalid sirf 1 muskan die fareeda ko dekh rha tha, fareeda khalid ko uske kamre me le gyi or boli aram farmaiye or kisi chiz ki jrurat pdi to hume mat bulana ammi ko bula lena qki hm bussy h.khalid ne muskuraya or kaha hum to ap ko hi bulaenge qki zindgi apke sat jo bitana h ammi k sat thodi, ye sunte hi fareeda kuc ruk si gyi or achank se kamre se nikal gyi

or tabhi wo ammi k pas gyi or usne khalid ki bat sunayi.isbat pe ammi b muskurate hue kahi sahi to bola khalid ne, isbat pr fareeda ekdam se shant hokr apne kamre me chali gyi or khalid k bare me hi sochne lgi use dil hi dil me khalid pehli jhalak me psnd aagya tha tbhi ammi uske kamre me aayi or unhone phone dia fareeda ko or kaha ye lo ye khalid ki ammi tumse kuc bat krna chahti h wo hi tumhe sab btaegi,jb fareeda ne khalid ki ammi se bat kia to uski ammi ne kaha wese to hm kbhi kbhi bat kar lete the pr aaj me apni bahu se bar karri hu or me teri ray janna chahti hu k tuje khalid psnd h ya nhi or tum kya mere ghr ki bahu bnogi, jab tm or khalid chote the tbhi tumhari ammi ne or mene ye soch lia tha k tm mere ghar ki bahu bnogi,ab tm apni ray btao, fareeda ye sunte hi kuc sharma si gyi or kaha mere ammi abbu jo chahe wo thik hoga or esa kehkar wo bhar chali gyi.use is tarh se shrmake bahr niklte hue khalid ne dekh lia or khalid ne usse kaha k fareeda kya tm muje apna bnana chahti ho or kya muje wo haq dogi k me tumhe zindgi bhr khush rkhu ye sunkar fareeda ne apne kadam piche k or lene wale the k khalid ne fareeda ka hat pakad lia or kaha ab kuc nhi tumhe ye jwab dena hoga.fareeda to jaise shrma si gyi thi uske man me bht si bat thi pr hotho pe aanahi rahi thi,

use ye pehli bar mehsus hua tha, aaj fareeda ki sari bachpna or chanchlta kahin gum si gyi thi or fir fareeda ne sirf apna sar hilaya or bhagti hui angan me chal gyi.khalid bht khush hua usne ye bat ghar me sabko btayi or shadi ki tarikh b fix krne k lie kaha….1 mahina bit chuka tha khalid or uske ammi abbu kashmir me fareeda k yha ruke hue the.dusre din hi fareeda or khalid ki shadi thi, ghar wale bht khush the, salo ka kia hua bat aaj pura honewala tha.dono ki shadi kashmir me dhum dham se hui or fir fareeda apne sasural Hyderabad aagyi khalid or uske ammi or abbu k sat.khalid 1 photographer tha usne apne poore room me fareeda ki photos lgayi thi ye dekhkr fareeda bht khush hui..ese hi 1 month bit gye the, sab bht khush the or acchi khasi zindgi chal rhi thi.1 din khalid ne fareeda ko phone kia or kaha k tm taiyar rehna hm bahar jaenge,fareeda bht khush hui wo jaldi se taiyar hogyi or khalid ka fir phone aya or kaha k bas abhi 15 min me phoch jaunga.15 min se 20 min hogya na khalid aaya or na khalid ka phone aaya.thode der bad khalid ka phn aya fareeda ne gusse se kaha hello kidhr ho is janam me aaoge na na, tbhi samne se 1 awaz aayi usne kaha is admi ka accident hogya h or hm ise city hospital lekar jaare h ap wha aajao, ye sunte hi fareeda apne ap ko rok na payi or zor zor se rone lagi

usne khalid k ammi abbu ko btaya or hospital k lie nikli, raste me ammi abbu ne bht samjhaya beta mt ro. Sab thik hojaega pr fareeda k aansu ruk nhi parahe the.jab wolog hospital phoche to pta chala k khalid ne raste me hi dam tod dia tha. Ye sunte hi ghar me sab bht rone lage kuc hi der me ghr me 1 matam sa chaa gya tha..ese 15 din bit gye the fareeda khalid k yado me hi khoyi rehti thi.khalid k ammi abbu ne kaha k tm kuc age padhai karlo tumhara man lga rahega par fareeda ne bat nhi suni.fareeda k ammi abbu ne use hmesa k lie Kashmir me aake rehne k lie kaha pr usne kaha nahi me yhi rahungi.kuc din k bad khalid k ammi abbu k kehne pr fareeda ne 1 silayi tuition khol lia, wo wha pe kuc logo ko silayi sikhati thi.ghar se kuch 20 min ki duri pr silayi tution tha.silayi tuition me kam se kam 12-15 log aate the.ese hi 1 sal bit gye the ab bhi fareeda khalid ko nhi bhula payi thi…1 bar silayi tuition me 1 ldka apni behan ka admission krane aaya..or usne fareeda se kaha ki ye meri choti behn h minu or isko silayi sikhna h wese to ye bht masti krti h pr ap sambhal lena or ise ache se sikhado ye bat kehkar wo ldka bht pak pak krne laga or sari bat sunane laga apni behn ki masti ka.fareeda 5 min k lie apna sara dukh bhul gyu thi use apni bachpn or chanchlta yad agyi thi..

usne mehsus kia k ye ldka to bilkul mere trah h fir use yad aaya k me to kahi kho gyi hu or wo apne andar ki pehle wali fareeda dhundhne lagi fir achank fareeda k chehre par 1 halki si muskan aagyi us ladke ki sari bat sunke..aaj bht mahino k bad us ladke k wjh se fareeda k chehre pr 1 muskan aagyi thi..wo us ldke ko nhi janti thi wo bilkul ajnabi tha pr muskan to uske bato se hi aayi thi….TO BE CONTINUED…

 

 

 

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42 thoughts on “HUMDARD….. – Madhuri”

  1. nice story….I’m waiting for next part.kya aap vahi madhuri ji hai jisne geeta wali story likhi thi???…..

  2. ham to usi story se aapke fan ho gaye the.aap bahut achcha likhti hai.aapse ek request hai k please hame bhi esi stories likhna sikha dijiye……

  3. Madhuriji aap writer ho?? Aap bahut acchi story likhti ho aap ki har story dil ko chu jati hai yr plzzzz write the next part i m waiting for the next part jldi likhana haaaa….

  4. Madhuri hum to tere hi dost he hum tere story pe coment vi krenge or help vi so dost ko thanks bolke tune apun ko itna dur kar diya..
    Ok chal tere liye ek gana kar deta hu..tu hasna ok..
    Ye fugly fugly kya he..ye fugly fugly kya he..

  5. Bkas thanku yaar..tu hasa..
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    Chal tere liye vi ek gana..ye le..
    Lungi dance lungi dance..tera to lungi best hena
    mera vi he..
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  6. Bkas acha laga na bol na acha laga na ha ha ha ha.
    Ye song thoda galat tha..
    Sahi ye he.
    Chal be lungi utha lungi utha..
    Fokat me paisa bardad ki..
    Paisa basul mangta apun ko.
    Chal ab apun gudni8 kehta he.

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