13-august-2016
Party bs strt hone hi wali thi,hmne jldi phuch gye gathering krli or jeevika di(host or mere bhai ki sbse acchi dost)sbka introduction krna strt kr dia.
Black shirt,blue jeans,brown shows…perfect.dekhne m bht handsome tha wo,mai janti thi,,dur dur tk uski barabari nhi kr skti mai fr b mn bar bar kh rha th-“kash ye single ho”
Introduction aage bdha-Zahen naam tha uska.Naam k sath m or phchan btai gyi-NRI doctor h or crorepati b,haal m hi India m settle hua h.Hnskr mn m hi apne ap ko reject kr dia,kha wo kha mai.dheere dheere raat bdhi,or baat b.Ji haa,usne khud aakr baat ki mujhse,mere bare m pyar se pucha b.hairan to thi mai,dekhne m jitna accha utna hi mn se b accha h.raat khtm hote hote,dono k chehre pe muskan thi or meri ankho m ajib si shrm.
16-august-2016-
Jeevika di tbiyat bht bigad gyi thi.is mausam m chikungunia common hi ho gya h.unki dekhbhal k lie mujhe unke ghr bulaya gya.subh se sham ho gyi unke grm mathe pr pattiyan rkhte hue.tbiyat phle se thik hui.or fr doctor b aae,koi or nhi blki hmare Zahen sahab hi aae the.hnsi mzak chla,baate ki sbne or baato baato m no b exchange ho gye.Di ki tbiyat thik hui or mai ghr wps aa gyi.
25-august-2016-
“Bhai kha ja rhe ho?”-mene pucha
“Arre hmare doctor sahab h na,wo hometown ja rhe h,2 mhine k lie islie unhone sbke lie gathering rkhi h”-unhone jwab dia
“2 mhine”-mai presan si ho gyi sunkr,or sochkr k mai mil b nhi skti ab unko…
10-September-2016
“Doctor ap to hmse mile bina hi chle gye”-mene msg kia
“Oho,ap ab b zinda ho,apka to koi cll nhi msg nhi kuch b nhi.itne din kha the???”usne pucha
“Mera fon khrab ho gya tha,pr apne konsa cll krdi mujhe?”I replied
“Shikayat mt kro,naraz mt ho,akr sbse phle tumhe hi milungi mai.milkr jana chahta tha pr sorry mil nhi paya.tumhare bhai se kese khta k tumhe b lekr aae sath milne k lie.ab to bs mai wps aa jau”usne pyar se smjhaya
Mai khush thi,muskura rhi thi,ek nya panna khulne ja rha tha meri zindagi ka.Baate bdhti rhi,din beete te gye,hm aage bdhte gye.mujhe pta b nhi lga hm kb itna krib aa gye k jisse kl tk mai baat krne m nervous ho jati thi use order dekr jldi bula rhi hu.Or wo aa rha h,mujhse milne k lie.
14-October-2016-
Usne mujhe sanwaaraa,apne kaabil bnaya.loose shirts,shoes,bikhre baalo se lekr befikr rhne tk,sb bdl dia.jb usme mujhe itne dino baad dekha to mai bilkul nyi si thi.white dress,heels,lipstick,kajal se lekr khule straight baalo tk,sb uski choice thi.Hm bht khush the ek dusre ko dekhkr.
Mn m swal nhi bs sukun tha,ye shkhs sch m meri zindagi bdlne aya h,or ye jo din tha aj ka,sch m sb kuch bdl gya,jo mene to nhi shyd usne socha tha.
Hm akele hue,kbi ek dusre ko dekhkr muskurate to kbi wo dheere se apne hontho ko mere gaalo pe rkh deta.Or na jane kb hm itna krib hue k agle hi pal hmne kissing strt krdi.Kisi ne nhi socha tha ye din hmara turning point sabit hoga.wo kiss na jane kha jakr chnge hone wali thi.Mai ghr aa gyi thi….
=Bht khush thi.Hme fikr thi ek dusre ki,feelings b thi.wo apne bcche ki trh smbhalata tha mujhe.Kbi smjhata to kbi daant ta b tha.Pr uski ye daant bht mithi thi.Pyar ho gya tha tb tk mujhe
16-October-2016
Usne mujhe apne ghr bulaya.mai khushi khushi gyi.hmne baate ki bht sari.Or unhi baato m ek baat khi usne mujhe-“hmare relationship m kbi koi commitment nhi hogi.hm kbi kisi ko is relationship k bare m nhi btaenge.jb tk rhenge khush rhenge ek dusre k sath,koi promise nhi,koi commitment nhi.mai nhi chahta aj tumse vada kru or jb future m kuch nhi hoga to tumhe rulau.islie accha hoga k hm apni side se clear rhein”
Mujhe bura lga sunkr pr der ho chuki thi tb tk,,,pyar jo gya tha.Mai uske NO COMMITMENT RELATIONSHIP k lie kuch nhi kh pai.
=Wo mujhe khush rkhta tha,meri care krta tha.Kbi ro jati thi to hug krke chup b krata tha.Hmare bich sb tha,care,anger,physical.Adhura tha mere uske lie pyar or uspe haq.use mujhse pyar nhi tha or mujhe uspe haq nhi tha
to be continued…..
Hello everyone.Mai ek writer hu,meri stories mostly real story pe based hoti h,jinme kbi kbi 10% fiction(kalpana) hoti h.meri phli stories-Pehla pyar…sch m wo tha kya??? Or-“Jaane na kahaan wo dunia hai,part 1 and part 2.” Shyd apne pdhi hogi.apne unhe saraahaa,uske lie thnk you sooo much.
Jese k apne is story m dekha hoga,naam thoda ajib h,wo islie qki ye story bht had tk holly wood movie-“FIFTY SHADES OF GREY ” se milti h.pr ab tk ye fiction nhi h.Iska story ka 2nd part jld hi lekr aaungi.tb tk k lie bye bye,stay happy ????
Agr khi koi mistake ho to maaf krna dosto.
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Nice story but 2nd part ka intjar hai
Nice story……waiting for 2nd part.
Oh My God!!!???????????? yeh story parhkar mai itna “open minded” feel kar rahi hu ki mera dimag zamin mein girkar dard se tadap raha hai. ????????????
Can u plz tell me wht does your term mean????
Rupali???
Kuchh nhi hayaat ji mai bas mazak kar rhi thi actually maine clg time pe aisi kai stories parhi h jo feminism k under aati h hmare course m yahi sab bhara hua tha aur saari storiez depressing aur frustrating thi us samay bhi mera dimag gamm k dard m dub jaata tha isliye course ki books parhne se darr lane laga tha ????????????. Usme hamesha villain male lead hota h jo female lead k pyar, vishwas,bholepan to kabhi majburi ka faeda uthakar uske saath galat krta h… Apki story bhi kuchh aisi h….
Actually apki story ko parhkar mere dimaag bahut saari baate aa rhi thi and that was unbearable… mujhe frustration hui isliye mazaak k through usey nikalna chah rahi thi…???????????? Waise mai feminism ko support nhi krti… Mere hisab se galti dono taraf hoti h. Mujhe is story m bhi yahi feel hua mujhe dono leads par gussa aa rha tha. Waise ek ache writer ka yahi gun h ki woh readers k empathy aur emotions ko jagae aur unhe sochne m majbur kare. Jo gun apki writing m h. ☺????
Ok rupali ji.mene srf whi likha h jo sch h,jo mujhe bataya gya likhne k lie qki ye b kisi ki real story hi h????
Hanji hayaat ji apne story k end m bhi likha h maine parha tha. Reality h Isliye sochne par majbur kr rhi h.
Koi hai yha bat krne ke lie
I am feeling very alone
nice story…waiting for part 2
HAPPY VALENTINESDAY day. friend
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Happy VELENTINE day frndzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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I m bak again
Mene socha jiske vajah Se me NI aarha hu vo to yha injoy kr rha h
Than tbi meko aana pda
Yaaar kisi Dusre ke chalte ham apni khushiyo ka
Gala ku got de
Hmmmmmm
So Dusre pr Mat jaaao bas happy rho n
Yha hamesa aao……..,..
So happy VELENTINE day
Payal❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Mahi????????????????????????????????????????
Ishana????????????????????????????????
Ankita????????????????????????????
Naina ji ????????????????
Nuzy ji????????????
Khushi ????????????
Suraj blo ????????
Adi blo ????
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All frndssss
Happy VELENTINE dayy
Happy Valentine’s day raghu ji…
Nice writer ji ????????
Nd next part jaldi post kijyega ????
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I’m waiting ????????
Nice story????????
Next part jldi post kijye…..