read it….feel it….like it…
Tere bina m ji nai skta / skti……
Ye bat hm jb kisi se khte h to hmari ankhe nm or gla bhr ata h..
m sahi kh rha hu na..???
Or yehi bat agr apko kahi likhi mile to,or vo bhi kisi saman ke bill pr?????
Aao sunau ek mhkti kahani muhbbt ki..
parso sham ko zraa bhook lg gyi.
shocha kuch kha lu…
kuch der bad dukan ki gali me se ek bhel banane vala nikla.
roz hi ata h vo..
mene usse ek bhel bnvai..
usne bnakr di..or ek kagz pe dal di..
pese lekr vo chla gya..
mgr jis kagz pr bhel di thi,vo kisi kirane ki dukan ka bill tha..
or mze ki bat ye thi ki vo bill sirf do tofy ka tha..
mtlb ek rupye ki do tofy..or uska bhi bill.upr se bill pr likha tha..
tere bina ji nai skta…
clrd pen se..
bat atpti lgi to pahunch gya us bill ke adress vali dukan pr..
dukan naresh ankl chlate h..
m mila,unse bat ki or vo bill dikhaya..
to hnskr bole ki ye mene hi likha h..
Mene kaha kyu???
to bole wqt h tere pas????
M bola cigret pilate rhoge to jitna mrzi betha lo…
cigret jlkr meri ungliyo me aa gyi or naresh ankl bolne lge….
m rajasthan me ek chote se ganv se hu..
scool ke bad collage ke liye shr jana pda..
collage me mere hi sath bhavna pdhti thi..
m use bahut pyar krta tha..or vo bhi mujhe chahti thi.
mgr chahat sb kuch nai hoti na…
hm sath ghumte sath pdhte.
m shadi ki bat bhavna se krta to vo kanni kat jati..
khti ki abhi sochenge..
vo pyar krti thi mgr uske apne spne bhi the kuch..?
jo mere sath pure nai kr pati..
kyuki mujhse shadi krti to ganv me rhna pdhta ,kishani krni pdti..
vo ye sb nai kr skti thi..
Bhavna shr ki ldki thi..
shr ki ldkiya smjhdar hoti h..pyar ke sath sath bahut kuch dekhti h ki
ldke ka job kya h,shan sql ka thik h na,mere sath khda bura to nai
lgega na..wgera wgera..
m naresh ankl ki is bat se shahmt nai hua mgr bich me bola nai.kyuki
vo apne pyar ko yad kr rhe the to m unhe distrb nai krna chahta tha..
ankl bole ki mere sath bhi vahi hua..
bhavna ki sagai ek doctr se ho gyi..
ab pyar apni jgh tha or jindgi apni jgh..
koi ldki doctr ki jgh kishan ke ghr nai ana chahegi..
bhavna bhi nai aayi..
vo chli gayi..
m bhi apni jindgi me mst ho gya..
meri bhi shadi ho gyi..
Ek baccha ho gya.
fir bhi m kam kaz kuch nai krta tha..
mgr jb jimmedari bdhi to shoch ki kuch kam kare..
socha dukan kr le mgr kaha..ganv me???
yaha to phle vale hi bhook mrte h..
to kahi bahar hi karni chahiye..
sochte shochte bhavna ki yad aa gyi..
pata kiya ki bhavna kaha h..to dosto vosto se pta chla ki surat me h..
m pahunch gya or uska ghr,uski gali sb kuch pta krke uske ghr ke samne
hi kirane ki dukan kr li..
ek din bhavna aai..
or mujhe dekha,to uske chehre pr herani ke sath ek ajeeb si khushbu thi..
vo khush to ho gyi mujhe dekhkr,mgr jo meri bhavna thi,vo mujhe usme nai dikhi..
pr mujhe ykiin tha ki m apni bhavna ko vapas le aaunga..
jo wqt or halat me kahi kho gay thi..
mene uske ghr pr jakar doctr sr se bola ki apke ghr pr rashn ka saman
meri dukan se aayega.
Unhone ha kr di..
fir jb bhi bhavna kuch lene ati h to m use choti se choti chiiz ka
bill bna kr deta hu..
or
uspr likh deta hu…tere bina ji nai skta…..
mene pucha ankl ap abhi tk bhavna ji ko pyar krte h????
to bole malum nai ….??
bs m apne parivaar me khush hu..
meri bhi shadi ho chuki h..bacche bhi h..
mgr kya ye sb ho jane pr m bhavna ko bhul jau..??nai na..
bs mujhe usse kuch nai chahiye ..
pta nai isme esa kya h jo mujhe iske pas khinch kr le aya..
na mene ise kabhi chua,na kabhi ladai ki..
bs ek sukun milta h isko hnste hue dekhkr…
m use dekh kr jita hu..
or vo bhi khti nai mujhe kuch..??
kyuki ab yar ek doctr ki bivi dal chini bechne vale ke sath thodi
ristaa rkhegi..
mgr jis din m dukan na aau,us din vo saman to le jati h mgr bill nai
le ke jati..
kh jati ki bill naresh ji khud bna denge..
asl me use bill pr ye tsslli chahiye ki m uske bina ji nai skta..
mene chouthi cigret jalai hi thi ki ankl bole are are bujha isko…vo
aa rhi h..dekh vo h bhavna…dekh dekh..??
m bhi chor tha..cigret bujhai nai..bs tebal ne niche hath me chupa
li..fir kon jalayega ye soch kr…???
mene bhavna ji ko dekha to yu lga ki jese koi mhkta sa jhonka hmari or
aa rha h..
vo aai or boli..
Naresh ji ek biskut ka pecket dijiye..
ankl ne de diya..or mujhse bat krne lg gye..
vo khdi rhi..fir jhunjhla kr boli ki bill to dijiye..
ankl ne sunhra pen nikala or bill pr likhkr de diya..
vo hnskr chli gyi..ankl ji khush ho gye..
m pta nai kaha apne khyalo me kise dhundh rha tha..hosh to tb aya jb
cigret se ungliya jal bethi….
mene kaha ankl ji kya ek bill m bhi bna skta hu?????
to bole ha ha kyu nai….
mene ek bill fadkr uspr likh diya..ki tere bina ji nai skta…..kavita…
or havaa me uda diya..kya pata sayad kabhi ye bill us tk pahunch jaye…….
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very heart touching story……
Nice
shiv bhai galt mat samajna mujhe sorry…yr….
yr mujhe to true nhi lagti ye story…
aapne kaha ki wo 2 toffee ka bill tha…
aur uspe….bhel aa gayi..
aur bhai….aur tune kaha …ek paper nikala….aur….bill likh diya…to…address… kab likha….kya bhai wo is baat ke shaat tere bina ji nhi sakta..ye address bhi likhta.. hai…aur bhai agar ye…bolega….bill paper ..tha… to uspe ….bhel puri kese aa gayi….aur cigarette…
bina smoking ke bhuj jaati hai…
me smok nhi karta lekin ye…ek college test me dekha hai…
nice yr..
mai tere bina g ni skti
😉
Kamal ki likh the ho app
Or mere liye dua kar na ki uska dil kise aur se na lag jaye
very very nice story shiv dil ko chukr dil me hi h ye story kese likhte ho shiv itna achha padhkr hi bhut sukoon milta h…………good night friends sweet dreams……
very nice bhai, sach me apki story dil pr asar krti h,
Bahut achhi story hai bhai..
vese shiv bhai aapki manjil kya hai ? jis raste par aap chalte ho us raste par bas aapko mohobbat ke musafir hi milte hain…..kamaal hai ji.. ..
Shiv ji kamal ki story likhte ho ap …..bht acchi story h bro ….
GOOD NIGHT
Swt drmssss
Gd nyt hv swt drms
shiv bro yar aap likhte bhut gazab ho…and thanxxx hm jese diwano ki taraf se jinhe sukun milta h aapki ib stories se ..aapse rqst h kya aap mere liye meri love story likh skte ho..plzzz..bhai. if u don’t mind..
gud nyt frdzzz..
Hello rudra..
mujhe btana to pdega na..
bta dena…m kosis krunga ki acchi se acchi likh pau..
ok rudra ..
nice one bro i m one of your fans…wse mera tajurba btata h ki pyar…yes i m ashik i knw..meri gf ka name pyar h or sach m mne use dil se pyar karta hu..or usne v pagal ho wali mohbatt krti h..so pls guys jb kbi kahi kuch maango toh apne sath sath ek wish or mang lena ki kahi dur ek joda kbi na juda ho ishk(me) nd pyar(my lover)..u know badua m asar hota h toh dua m double hota h..
Very nice story .
Shiv g ,
Story bahut achhi he. Aap har kisi ki baat ko bari bariki se or bahut hi achhe tarike se aam aadmi ki bolchal me likhte he.
Vese me kabi kabi aata hu is site par lekin jab bhi aata hu or aapki koi new story dekhta hu to parta jarur hu.
Mujhe samaj nahi aa raha he ki aapko me gn bolu ya gm kyoki yaha gn he or aapke vaha gm
Gud nite & gud morng
Gud nite & gud morng , shiv g
Subah hi chahiye jindgi me ab..to gm thik rhega.ok gm dosto n gm sk.
Gud morning nice story shiv ji…..
Hello all frnds..
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n Shiv uper kisi ne aapse kuchh sawal kiye hain Rachit naam se.. to aapne unka ans. kyu nahi diya… haan?
.
Hello….
Good morning all.
Good morning frndz
Hi nikki mam kitthe the ji kal tussi
gudmrng 2 all frnds,
bhai aj apne kch sunaya ni h, apke tkhayul pdne me acha lgta h.
or nikki mam kal kittho the tussi?
Hi Krishna ji …….ki hal tuhada
hello… My dear students.. 🙂
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yr kall main kuch bzy c… kam bohat c na.. iss karke..
Gud morng All…frds
sach kaha hai apne shiv ji kisi ka past love agar usse dur chala jaye to thodi na koi apne past ko bhul jayega.
der saber hawa ka jhoka uski yaado ke zariye yaad dila hi deta hai.
zindgi to aage bad jati hai but uski yaade to chah kar nahi mit sakti naa.
chahe hate ke zariye yaad aaye chahe love ke zariye yaad aaye.
Nice story
Bas vadiya h aliya ji.
kithe gayab hoge g sare de sare… hain..?
itthe hi h g,kitthe jawange tenu chadh k
Ha rachit…ab site pr aya hu..
apke sare jvab deta hu..
bill ka mtlb hota h bill book se..
kisi dukan ka bill dekhoge to uspr pata likha hota h..
dusri bat bill book me hmesa do copy hoti h jo karbn lgakr likhi jati h..
jo upr likhoge vo niche ki copy pe apne ap aa jata h.. Thik h..
or hm bill bnake ek copy cstmr ko de dete h..jis pr likha tha tere bina ji nai skta..ok
mgr ek bill book me 100 bill hote h
Niche vala milake 200 pnne..
100 bill fad ke hm cstmr ko de dete h mgr duplicate copy hmare pas hi rh jati h..jb 10 20 bill book ikktthi ho jati h,jo hmare kam ki nai h ya purane sal ki h ,to hm use kabadi ko bech dete h..
or jahir si bat h ye bhel bnane vale kabadi se hi kagaz khridte h..dekha ni purani kitabe,mgziin vwgera…
to ese vo bill mere pas aya..
uspr fon no. Bhi likha tha mgr mujhe unse milna tha isliye mene fon nai kiya..
or rahi bat cigret ki to rachit bhai mere liye 6 rpye khrch krna ap..
ek cigret lena or sirf jlakr rkh dena..
cigret tb tk ni bujhegi jb tk vo khtm na ho..
agr bujh jaye to apki juti or mera sr…
or ek bat mene apni life ka ek mksd bnaya h ki m sbse unki love life ke bare me puchta hu..
koi btata h koi pagal kh kr khta h ki jao time ni h..
mgr fir bhi m puchta hu logo se..kyuki puchne me pese thode lgte h..
koi bta de to blle blle nao muh chota sa krke nikl leta h..
mgr mujhe accha lgta h..
ap bhi bataye mujhe apni lv life…
Sry Shiv..agar aapko mera poochna bura laga ho to…
.
n thanx.. uljhane suljhane k liye
.
actually kya hai na.. aap kaam khud-b-khud aapke paas daura chala aata hai..
Shiv yr mujhe tera story bahut achha lgta h….padhne me
aur bhi Story wo itna khass niii hota
jitna aap ka hota h….sach me yr bahut achha likhta h yr…..
Nai nikki bura ni lga..
sch me..chlo koi h to sahi ki jo sach janna chahta h yar..
or jis rste pe dil se chloge or niyt saf hogi to nai nai bate or naye naye log milte rhenge..
jese ek reportr hota h na..use khbr mil hi jati h..
vese hi mujhe logo se kahaniya mil hi jati h..
Or adity apko acchi is liye lgti h ki inme sacchai hoti h..
ye koi klpna nai h jo bethe bethe soch ke likh di..sach h to accha h..
klpna likhni hoti to hathi ko chuhe ke upr bethake ghumane ki kahani likh du..kya ap use nice kahoge..kya apke dil tk jayegi???nai na..
sach h isliye dil tk jati h or kuch nai yar…bs ye mera kam h..pese ni milte mgr sukun lakho ka milta h logo ke dil tatol kr…
hmmmm… u say right Shiv… gud luck yr…
thodi derr…me bata…hu yr…phele ye bata..account banate hue ye problem aa rahi hai yaar…
ERROR: Banned by WangGuardIs it an error?Perhaps you tried to register many times.
Bhai rachit ye na pucho mujhe ap..kyuki m itna pdha likha ni hu..
mera ac. Bhi admin ne bna kr diya tha..mgr aj tk m opn ni kr paya..
m to story unhe hi mail krta hu..
ap kisi or se pucho yar..sory
koi ni bhai……..
Rachit kya aapne pahle b same e-mail I’d se yahan A/c create karne ki koshish ki hai kya… tabhi baar baar registration ka msg mil raha hai
aap aisa karo ..new E-mail A/c bana kr yahan par registration karo… fir zarur create ho jayega aapka A/c yahan par
thanks….yaar.karta….hu……abhi…..
ok gud luck…!
nikki mam ajj sare student kitthe gye apke?
hey guys
jiddan tusi gayab o Sheenam.. oddan hi baki v gum ne… kall main gum c… ajj mere students
Prince… gara main galat nahi hu to aap 5-6 months pahle b yahan par the.. tab aapka ek frnd group b tha… aapka dost tha ek mujhe abhi name yaad nahi hai.. shayad uski ek story ka naam tha..”maine apna jaan se pyara dost aur dil se sacha pyaar khoya hai” kuch aisa hi tha title…
hai na.. aap wohi ho na..?
Hello
waise aapne kahin par cmmt kiya tha..maine read kiya tha.. mujhe abhi yaad aaya
yep i cmnted dere
Hey shiv too Interested
nikki tum is site pe kab se ho
ok maine jo uper wale cmmt mein kaha hai kya wo sach hai..?
Hey guys I think ki
Lovers point
I Mena this site ka app develop hona chaiye
Then we all users easily connected both
How many users satisfied me …..
Prince waise to main pahli bar yahan Nov’12 ko aayi thi lakin kabhi continuely yahan par nahi aai… kabhi kabaar aati thi.. abhi pichle lagbhag ek month se yahan par lagataar aa rahi hu
Really it is too beautiful site
And I am new user
Any one here. Now I
ok Prince nd all frnds abhi baad mein baat karte hain… main bahar ja rahi hu..kaam hai kuch
yaha or mai v yahan 2012 se hu but not continuely 2012 k end m yahan continue hua then dheere dheere distance bna is site se bcz of some fake ppls..n jo tumne kaha h vo sach h ya nhi muze yad nhi h bcz meri memory kafi kamjor h muze yad h mne cmnt jarur kkia tha kuch month pahle but story ka name yad nhi..
All aboutabout
hai koi yahan…. ?
nd prince story nahi pata to na sahi..lakin wo stroy aap hi k dost ki thi..jise yahan par hi love hua tha..isi site par..
hanji mai to yhi hu
mainu laggeya sabh new story te v haini shayad ithe v na hon hun…
.
khair jaanke khushi hoi k tusi ho ithe…
mainu keerat ji di gallan smjh ni ayi.
mainu tan khud ni samajh aayi… kadi kuch kehndi a kade kuchh,…
.
jo is baar story likhi a,… starting ch likh k khud hi keh rahi a k shayad mera pyaar sacha nahi tha…. or cmmt vich kah rahi a k mera pyaar sacha hai.
.
sawaal puchh rahi a k pyaar wala path pdhon wale parents.. pyar to duri kyu sikhonde ne… aur gall kr rahi a apne or apne bf de breakup wali… usnu tan shayad khud ni pata k ki gall karni a.. 🙂
hmm apne shiv bhai ne cmmt pde si keert wali story wich
kuch kuch pade c yr… n mainu ni lagda es keerat kol inna ku dimag hai k o apne siwaye kise hor d gall nu samjah sake….
.
Shiv ne usnu Punjabi hon wali gall aakhi tan a kah ditta k o tan brahmin hai.. usnu tan a v nahi pata k Punjabi koi caste ni… Punjab ch rehan wale nu Punjabi kehnde ne… kuch jyada hi over smart jihi lag rahi a mainu… bki rabb jane
sahi kere ne tussi, mainu shiv bhai k roti wala cmmt bda hi changa lga.
Siv to hamesha hi vadhia n chngi salaah dinde ne.. par kuchh gallan samjhan lyi oho jiha dimaag v tan chahida a na..
hanji tussi sahi kende ne.
khir..ajj Aliya kithe hai… o ni aayi ajj… mere students d ginti badi ghatt a ajj yr
mainu v ni pta aliya ka? or btao ki kr rhene tussi
main bas ainwe hi… vihli an… tuhade jihe frnds nal msti kari ja rahi an… hor ki karna a
changa h ji, apki koi story h etthe?
na g.. meri koi story nahi hai..
ok
Achha to aap sab yaha masti kar rhe ho.
Karo ji karo ji bhar ke karo.
Abhi hamare masti karne ke hi to din h.
Any one here
sheenam aapki hai koi story…
nhi h yar, mainu to bs lovstory pdna acha lgta h.
Any one here now
bilkul mere wang… mainu v bas luv story read karan ch hi interest hai
yar best love stories ki site btaoooo na..i
Hii all frndz….oh sorry nikki mam mai let hogai ji aj….nd thnx ji mainu yad krne k liy…..tuhada ki hal chlrha h ji
Hiii frds
Kya chal rha h ….
beta jannat aai thi aap ko bahut miss kar rhi thi mera yanha jaldi post nhi hota hai
Hi adi ….ki hal h tuhada
Sare frndz kitthe h tussi…..nikki mam specially tussi ji ….mai apko bada miss krhi huji
hi aliya, ajj kitthe the tussi?
mai thik hu aur aap kaise h….
mujhe jyda punjaabi nii aata h dosto
aap sb ko achhe se aata h achha h
Kaha chale jaate ho achanak
no nikki mere kisi frnd ne apni story nhi likhi…i think here is som misunderstanding i m nt tht1..u r telling abt..
Sheenm ji aj mai thoda bz thi iliy ni apai ……or adi ap kha bz the aj
nii tha Busy mai to tha
Chale gae kya sare frndz …sheenm ji rply dene me let hogya sorry ji…mmy ne bulaya tha isliy
aliya aap kaha itna. busy thi….
Oh accha ……. mainu laga tussi v bz the kya..
mai apka intezaar kr rha tha …
aliya aap to bahut achha punjabi bol leti h kya baat h..
aur bataeye kuchhh
Aj mere cousins aye h isliy…….
ok
Sachme ap mere intezar krhe the …thnxxxxxxxx bada wala 🙂
Adi apko tea psnd h kya……mje to bht psnd h
haa Tea mujhe bahut pasnd h aur Coffee bhi
aur kya kya pasnd h aliya tumhe…
Nikki mam tussi kitthe hoji …
Adi thodi der bad bat krti hu plz…..OK by
k bye
Hii adi …mai agai hu plz come
hiii aaliya
Hlw shiv very beutifull & sad story.
Aap Kya abhi milte ho apki kavita se
haa aaliya aur batao kuchh….
Adi mje Na khne me ice – crm ,choclt or pani puri psnd h or dressng me jns or frock or bhi bht sari chize h jo mje psnd h
Adi ap raipur me rhte hona ….
Or fmily me kon kon h apke …
Sheenm ji pradeep ji tussi kitthe hoji
Adi ap chale gae kya …….koi rply bhi ni derhe ho ap
Mje lagta h ap bz ho…….accha to fir kal milte h by
family me Mami bro and sis h
Thoda Server problem aa gya tha reply ni de pa rha tha aliya
sorry yr
haa Raipur se hu aliya……
mai yahi tha but reply nii de pa rha tha
haa Raipur se hu aliya……kaha ho aap
mai yahi tha but reply nii de pa rha tha
OK adi mje laga ap bz hogay…….adi papa ni h
Pradeep ji bhi raypur se hi h kya
Adi rply dene me kitna time lagate ho ap…….
🙁
Adi abhi bhi problm horhi h kya
Adi mai jau kya …bht bor horhi hu …mere koi bhi frnd online ni h …mai kya karu
niii h
Adiiiiiiiiii…..baki sb kha ho ap….plz koi to ajao
OK
Ap itna let rply q derhe ho adi
haa batao aliya
🙂
Kya batau
mai yahi hu aaliya btao
Sheenm ji nikki ji plz aona aplog …….
haa aliya tum fb me ho kya
hiiii dosto
Are adi kya batau
Hiiii prdeep ji ki hal heji tuhada…adi fb pr ni hu mmy ne mana Kiya h
mast hain ji.. yaha aake to or bhi mast ho jate hain. ..aap kese ho
hi….guys….apke…shiv..bhai kaha hai..
mujhe kuch puch na hai unse
achha ji nii ho….hmmm
mami bolti h k ammi
muslim me to ammi abba chalta h kya
hi aditya..kese ho
lagta h achhi girl fb me nii hoti….
meri ak muslim frnd h wo b nii h fb me
Mai mmy hi bolti hu …Muslims me zyada ammi hi bolte h or papa ko abbu bolte h..mai apne badi mmy log ko ammi bolti hu or bade papa ko abbu or apne papa ko papa
mai thik hu pradeep aur tum…..
Mai v vadiya hu pradeep ji…..adi apki Muslim frnd ka nm kya h
mere Muslim me bahut se frds the school life me
badiya he ji
Rida
Accha adi …….adi ap apni story kb post karoge
Nice nm h adi …….
nii krunga post story
Adi prdeep ji ap dono ho ya mai akeli hi bdbda rhi hu…….
Q ni karoge
Apki gf ka nm kya h
Mai apne story ko story bante yaha nii dekh sakta. yr….jb tk wo mil nii jati…
jb tk h jaan..
aaliya aapki koi story h kya
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Ni adi meri koi story ni h ….jb tk wo mil ni jati mtlb apne abhi tk prps ni kiya kya
aliya apka boy frnd h kya
Hello kaise ho dosto
Pradeep ji tussi kitthe chale gae
mere Mohabbat ko kahne k koi shabd niii chahiye bs meri aankhe kafi h mere mohabbat ko byaan dene ke liye….
Nii h mera bf ….hi krishna ji …adi maine apse kch pucha h apne rply ni diya mera…….
Nikki mam plz ajao apke studnt agae h
Good night dosto…jana padega..mobile discharge ho gaya….
Adi pheliya mt bujao …sidhese batao na kya nm h apki gf ka…
Or aliya ji tusi daso ki hal h tauda.
Accha adi ni batana h to mt batao as u wish
Vadiya huji mai tuhada ki hal h
Gd night prdeep ji
aliya abhi gf nii bani h wo
abhi
Sheenm ji nd nikki mam ap dono gd night bhi ni bologe kya
OK
aliya Naraz ho gyi kya..
abhi gf nii bani h wo
jb baneful to bataunga
aliya Naraz ho gyi kya..
abhi gf nii bani h wo
jb banegi to bataunga…
samjh use ab Begam banana h
sorry aliya bzy thi, hun tuwada msg dekhya
Krishna ji tussi kitthe gae ji…….aj sade mam bz h shyd
Adi uska nm to bata skte hona ….nm batane
Me koi prblm h kya ..hi sheenm ji
hi aliya, ki hal h tuwada?
ab itna kah rhi h to bta rha hu Rida name h
Sheenm ji kese ho…….dinner kiya apne
hi aditya hmmm tbi rida ka mtlb pucha tha….
Adi she is Muslim….
Apne usko prps ni kiya kya …….
Rida name h ok
vadiya hu, hanji kr liya or apne?
WO apko like krti h kya adi ……..apki cllsmt h
Nii kia lekin wo janti h aur wo b krti h mere se….
Nii kiya ji abhi thodi der bad krlugii ji
Kya jodi h adi rida 🙂
Adi prps krdo usko wrna bht der hojaegi…….inshaallah wo man jay gi WO bhi to apko like krti h na
meri story bahut lambi h puri Raat nikal jaegi btane me
shyd ye aisi story hogi jisme prapose krne k jarurat ni padhi bs dono samjh gate….
AGR mai wha hoti na to apdono ko kbka mila deti …….usko prps krdo plz
uski aankho ne mujhe sb kuchhh kah gayi
ab aage dekhte h kya hota h
Adi apko mje apni story batani padegi kal …agr ap mje apni frnd mante ho to batana ni mante hoto mt batana……accha gd night adi
Good night to my all swt frndz
maine Dua me sirf use managa h bs dua kabul ho jaye….meri Dua
age upper wale k marzi
aliya mai story yaha par share nii kr sakta hu plz samjho
aliya apko meri dosti chahiye k ya mai is website se hamesha ke liye chale jau koi ak choose krna tum…okkkk
Ok adi na batao .. ..mje apki frndshp chahiy
🙂
I wll pry for u …wo apko mil hi jaegi inshaallah …….
Bt adi usko 1 bar prps kr dena
thank you…Aliya
Hi shiv ji app bhi kya khub likhte ho.apki story muje bhut achi lagti hai m apki story k liye hi yha aati hu sirf aapse ek request h ki agr aap mereo dost bno to muje bhut khushi milegi m bhagwan se khuch mangu to.sirf yhi ki aap.ek.bhut ache writer ban jao
Hi shiv ji app bhi kya khub likhte ho.apki story muje bhut achi lagti hai m apki story k liye hi yha aati hu sirf aapse ek request h ki agr aap mereo dost bno to muje bhut khushi milegi m bhagwan se khuch mangu to.sirf yhi ki aap.ek.bhut ache writer ban jao m nhi ja
shiv bhai kaha ho…aap….
yr aap to batao…me kya karu…
aur bhai godnight
Hmmmm arz h…
m uski ankho se chlki shraab pita hu….
greeb hoke bhi,mhngi shraab pita hu…..
mujhe nashe me bhkne kbi ni deta..
vo janta h m kitni shraab pitaa hu…
use bhi dekhu to phchanne me der lge??.
kbi kbi to m itni shraab pita hu……..
Gd mrng dosto……
wah wah shiv kya bat h subh subh sayri sunkr maza aa gya
gm shiv ab mainu jana hoga….ok byeeeeee
gudmrng… wah bhai, subha or pura din khushnuma bn jata h, apki gzl pdke.
Good morng swt frndzzzzz
Shiv ji tussi grt ho ji …….
Good morning friends….
Good morning all friends.
Oyyyy kithe gye sab.
Gud morng Frds
Good morning all frnds hw r u all
And u r great ek dam mst story h
hello my dears frnds nd my dears students.. ki hal hai sbh da g..
.
n So sry Aliya.. main night time online nai hundi g..
.
bas 9 to 5 de vich hi online aa paundi han g..
ok frnds Monday ko milungi ab main… bye bye.. TC all
Hiiii nikki mam….hundi means kya ji
Nikki mama mndy ko q …2 din tk ap yha ni aoge kya
Sat sri akal nikki di….kitte chali aap
hi aliya ki hal h g?
hii sheenam ji and aaliya ji…kese hain aap
hey gm guys i wrote a story today so when wil be it published??
Hi sheenm ji mai to chngi huji tuusi dsso ki hal h tuhada
Hi prdeep ji ek dm vadiya heji ….tussi kese h
4 din to lag jayenge publish hone me…
me v achha hu ji…hor ki chal rha aapka
Sbh vadiya chal rha heji …….lunch hogya. Tuhada
Hanji ho gya..or aapka
story auto published hoti h ya admin khud aake post krta h??
nice
aliya do u hv fb a/c???
agar aapka khud ka ac ho to aapke nam se hogi…otherwise admin khud krenge
hi pardeep, mai v vadiya hu ji..
chalo achha h ji…suna h aap shayriya badiya krti ho??
badiya ka to pta ni bt ha shok h, likhne ka bi, or dusro k pdne ka bhi
Hmmm kuch m bhi khdu…..
Koyal ne kove se puchhaa….
sadhi kyu nai krte…??????
kove ne kaha ki….
bina shadi ke hi jindgi me itni kanv kanv h,to shadi ke……..
smjh gye honge sb…
gd aftr noon dosto
Ni h yar prince…..nd prdeep ji mera v lunch kbda hogyaji
Hi sheenm ji …..gal da mtlb kya honda h ji
Students ab mem gyi ab sab khelo chlo.
I thnk sare k sare chale gae …mainu let hogya ji ane vch
Kya khele krishna ji tussi hi dasso ji
gal da mtlb bat hota h,
gd aftr noon bhai
Hor sunao ki hal h ji
Accha by all brothers and sistrs …mainu avi stdy krni h ji …….badme andi hu ji ok
yr esa nhi ho skta ki fb a/c na ho tum logo k agr esi hi chatting krni h to fb m ya other social media sites pe v kr skte ho..
Accha shinm ji nd krishna ji sbh chnga h ji tuhada ki hal h ………..ok by
shiv
aap bahot khubsurat
storeis likhte ho.
yeh storeis padh ke ankh me ansu agaye
Achha mira ji aap pahli bar hamari sath yaha aaye h na.
hi krishna kese h aap?
Hiii frds…..
Hiii frds…..
Me achha hu sheenam ji aap sunao aap kaise ho.
ha yr…..prince ye pagal hai share ke share….pata ni kyu…..bachho….wali harkate kare hai….ye share……
mai bi thik hu ji.
Sak kaha gum ho gye
Hiii
Kitthe hoji sbh
new Story me aa aliya bday wala story
Good morning all
Gud morng all frds
gudmrng
Adi ye rancht or prince khud ldkiyo k sth flrt krte hoge isliy in log ki thinking esi h
Good Morning all frnds
oh…..madam…..kon si class me ho aap…
aur ye rancht kya hai…..rachit hai mera..naam
aur…..ye gande kaam khud kar rahi ho mujhe bol rahi ho….me karta hu….
me kyu karu…..is aacha…to….Gf ko phone hi karlu….me…
tum kyu yaha bekar ki baat karti ho….
tum kyu nhi karti phone….BoyF ko apne…
Rachit apni zaban sambhal k bat karo …or kya gnda kam kiya h maine adi mera accha frnd h samje mr
listing…aliya
kya dekha hai tumne ushe….
kya…aawaj suni uski kabhi…
aur is century …me kon hai jo Facebook use na karta ho….
accha friend bolti ho aap….ushe
to tum ushe Facebook kyu nhi le jati….
aur kheti ho FB pe nhi hu me….
Frnd banane k liy dekhna ya awaz sunna zaruri ni h ….yaha k admin ko koi problm ni h to fir apko q problm h
hello brother ! mr. rachit…agar bo dono aaliya or aditya bat kar rahe hain to karne do na…agar do log yaha akar friends ban jate hain to banne do na….or yaha konsa ganda kam dikh raha hai tujhe…
kya…naam tere pardeep 1888 ka….
gande ni dikhra ab….ganda tu dikh ra….
friend FB pe bano na……
aliya….problem
ye hai….koi aur comment…. karega new story pe….
wo kese dekhega …..
comment kiya ya ni kiya kisi ne…
jis ki story hai…
kyuki tum puri…comment list full kar dete ho….
aur tum Fbook pe kyu ni jati…kya aapko
problem hai koi aliya…hai to….whatsapp pe jao…aap….ya phir number exchange karlo apne dost adi…ke shaat
yr tum logo ko chatng krne ka itna hi shauk h toh plz kahi aur jake kro is site ki stories barbad mt kro likhne wala apne emotions tum logo se share krta h aur tum log stupid si chit chat me lg jate ho aur bate krni hi h toh yaha a/c banalo usme prsnal chat ka bi option aata h. usme jake bate kro dusro ki stories q bnd bja dete ho.
nd aliya mmy FB nh use krne deti pr mmy social site use krne deti h kya tume.
Hahahaha …..beta karta kya h tu..phle ye bata…konsi class me h ?
Rachit tu kuchh jyda Soch rha h yaha hm frnd h sb
usse tujhe kya problem h yr
tu b frnd. bana aur baat kr
yaha agr admin ko koi problem nii h to tujhe kyo h….
sbhi se achhe se baat kia yr
kuchh b mat bola kr…..
pradeep isko chhod yr ….
Are ise reply karne de aaditya….me bhi dekhu kon h ye
Admin ko koi broblm ni h ye rachit ko hi problm h ….jese yhi yha ka admin ho
tum sab pagal ho….
rahul ko to jaante hi ho tum sab
phele ushe yaha se bhaga diya….
aur shiv ne promise kiya tha rahul ko…ki kabhi ni comment karne ka….lekin kar diya…..to tumne phir bulaya shiv aa gaye..
aur phir rahul ne ….bakwash ….shayari…aur comment band kar lwa di..
shive ne second time promise kiya….na comment na bekar ki comment aur shayari ka….to….kuch din baad shiv phir aa gaya…..aur wahi chize karne laga..
lekin rahul ne ek baar kiya promise
aur phir ni aaya…wo yaha….
me ye nhi bolta….
ki shiv chale jaye…
is site…
unke bina ye site kuch nhi hai….
rahul ka phone aaya tha abhi usne roka mujhe ye sab karne se lekin dosto apne rahul ko kuch bola to nhi..
phar shayad itne people ko rokna bhagwan ko aacha nhi laga….
rahul ki Girlfriend bhi chood gayi jise wo pyaar karta tha wo bhi…aur jo uski best friend bani ishi site se wo bhi…
to dosto me ye nhi ….chahta…ki wo mere shaat ho….kyuki me shivani ko bhoot pyaar karta hu….me nhi chahta wo dur jaye mujse…..
me phir ji……..nhi pau ga…
to
sorry dosto….
im sorry……
Aap log shiv k bare mw kyo bolte ho ghum.phirkr kya problm h apko.jis kisi.ko bhi.shiv ji se problm h chle jao phle to rahul bolta tha ab ye rachit apko problm kya h unse aap logo ko khud to preshani h hi pee dusro.k liye bhi create krte ho kyo aur shiv to aaenge chaw jo.marji bol lo vo yhi rhebnge jisko b problm h yha vo mat aap yha moj kro aram se
Nice story
Ab sorry bolke kya fayda jo krna tha apko wo to krliya na ……apko hmlog ko hrt krke kya mila………
ye Rahul kon h
hurt kis baat ne kiya yr….
batao…..mujhe…
aur nisha kyu jau me….
mujhe kaha problem hai shiv …pandit..
se
rahul kon hai bhai
yr ek story…pe dekh le…shiv pandit ki
hurt kis baat ne kiya yr….
aliya
batao…..mujhe…
aur nisha kyu jau me….
mujhe kaha problem hai shiv …pandit..
se
rahul kon hai bhai
yr ek story…pe dekh le…shiv pandit ki
Bat ye nhi aap.log shiv ko.samjhte ni ho.phle rahul tha bol rha tha shiv k baee me ab aap bolre ho ki shiv do bar kh chuka na aane k liyephir aa jata.h vo nhi aana chate but.unko bulaya jata ha ok
Aur maine yha kisi ka nam e particular ni liya maine kha jisko problm ho vo jae to ye bat apko kyo buri lagi kyoki apke dil me khi na khi h shiv k parti problm
Hm kyo jane rahul ke bare me hme nhi janna tum jano usko
hi shiv aapkha se ho aap kha rhte ho kya kerte ho
Nisha ji m surat se hu or dukan chlata hu..
ap kaha se h..
Kyu beta rachit…abhi to masti ke mood me tha na tu…ab kya hua….chal muje chahe jitni bad duaye dede muje koi fark nahi padta…lekin tere jeso ko sudharna muje achhe se aata hai. ..or shiv bhai ke bare me kuch na bol…chupchap story pad liya kar …jyada hawa me mat ud samjha…
Bda hi kanzr khana bna rkha h sbne is ghr ko…
mgr koi bat ni..chlo aao sare milke saf kre ghr ko..
aa jao sare..
sbse phle m safai krta hu..
Rahul ki mujhse thodi khtpt hui thi isi site pr..
koi bat ni ho jati h..
usne ulta sulta bhi bola..mgr koi bat ni..
ap me se kisi ne use vaps ni bulaya..
koi bat ni..
sbka kam mene kiya..
sbki trf se mene use vaps bulaya..
kahani ke zriye..
Ab mera triika to esa hi h,to kya kru..??
mene rahul ke nam kahani likhi thi..
close to my heart….
sayad apne pdhi hogi..
phli hi line likha tha ki ye kahani rahul ke nam…
to jb uske nam thi,,uska kayda bnta h ki pdhne aye or acchi buri khkr jaye..,mgr vo ni aya..
Vo ata to m usse mere bure brtav ki mafi mangta..
kher der aaye…durust aaye….
ab kh deta hu..
sory rahul..and plz come back to our sweet home…
plz…
ap ap sb bhi sbse ek sory khkr sbko bula le..
kyuki sb h to ghr h vrna virana…
Or virano me sirf kabuutr rhte h..
aao ghr banaye vapas…
svacch bharat sundr bharat..
hahahaha aa jao yar….
kha gae shiv ji so gae kya nini aa gai kya
Are mene jvab diya na..sbse niche ka cmment dekho ap??
Are shiv bhai …in logo ko achhe se janta hu me…jab tak gf se bat hoti h ye khush hote h or yaha masti karte hain or jab bo chhodkar chali jati h…tab bhi muh latkar kar yahi aate hain….
wese ab tum neha jada bol rahi ho..
jab se…bas rahul ki care kar raha
tha me….
ab bas…kuch na bolo plz…….
mujhe jo bolna hai bolo rahul ko nhi uski wajhe se meri girlfriend shivani mere paas…
aur aap jeso ki wajhe …se rahul ka sab ….gaya….pyaar….friend…..
hello shiv aap khi hai a se ho kya kerte ho yr apki story muje bhut achi lagti h pta nhi unme reality nazar aatile lekin apko ye log feel bar bar hurt kerte h muje bhut insult feel hoti h pta ni kyo
Shiv ne Sahi kaha h
yar aap kha se ho
pradeep
…bhai
meri girl bhoot pyaar karti hai…
mujhe….agar me 5min bhi phone nhi karta to wo pareshan ho jati hai aur chood…ne ki baat….wo mere bina…ek din bhi nhi ji….nhi sakti….aur uske liye…bhoot si ladkiyo se contract tode…mene…..kyuki first time pyaar huwa mujhe…..aur aur bhai abhi bhi baat kar rahi hai wo…
dusra phone hai ye mere hath me…
aur….kya.. time paas…TV hai computer hai
game hai….Net hai……
hanji pradeep you are right shi kh re ho a ap inko story padni hoti nhi bus ek dusre ko bolte rhte hai ye koi e nhi h ki yha complained office nai hai ki yha
phli to bat h muje aap nisha bolo abhi itni badi nhi hui ki ji lagai shiv ji ok dusra mai delhi se hu aur sirf apki story padhne ke liye hi yha per aati hu khidki wali sheet maine first time padhi thi bhut achi story thi
vaise ek bat btao shiv ji dukan apki kha tk phuch gai ye to maine first time suna h ki dukan bhi chlti hai yha insao se to chla jata nhi dukan vbhi chlti h kya
badi nhi hui tab to akal nhi hai aapke paas…..tabhi to bina soche samjhe bol rahi ho..tum…..
aapko soch ke bolna chahiye…..
aur mujhe bhi 20year old na samajna….
me 17 year old hu….
aur tum 9year ki ho kya…..
jo aap eshi baate karti hai….
hurt karti hai aap dusro…ko…
so …change your behavior..
Kan kinch rahe ho mera..??
bade hi khush mizaz lgte ho ap
Ha dilii ke jo thahre..
suna h dil valo ka shr h..
or dukan chlti h to hi pet chlta h nisha ji..
nai to than than gopal
pta nhi kyo muje to kya hua jb se apki story padhna start kiya hai tb se nind hi nhi aati muje to
To m kya batau apko..??
ap khud soche is bare me ki story jruri h ya nind..
nhi apne hi to bola dukal chlata hu pet bhi chlta h kya
Ha ji ..
kher ye bataye pdhti h ya ni..
or meri ek mitr h dilli ki muskan..
kabhi milna bahut hi acchi ldki h..
chlo kam ki bat per aao ye btao shivji ki aap ki gf kha hai kya vo aaegi vapis dekho
Are ap to dil pdhne lge mera..
yu nam ni lete uska..
mujhe yad aa jayegi..
or m fir door chla jaunga apse..
fir na kahani na bat..
uska jikr na kare to behtr hoga..
kyuki uski bat apne ap se krna hi accha lgta h..
smjhe
ha mai padhti hu abhi story padhti hu tb se to bus kya btaubut jb se apki
hi bhai kese h aap?
kya bahas ho rha h yaha
Nisha ji story pdhli cmment kiya bs..
jitni acchi lge kh do,jo accha ho story me nikal lo…bs..
mgr apni pdhai pe jyada dhyan dena chahiye..
kahaniya bs ankho me rhe tb tk thik h..jindgi me mene utari h..
bda drd hota h..
kisi or ka dukh shn krna pdta h…
rona pdta h..kagz kale krne pdte h..tb kahi jake sukun milta h..
smjhe..
Hello sheenm kesi ho..
Or ghr me??
Or aadi ap kese ho..??
gd ev. Dono ko…
Hii sheenm ji adi nd shiv ji ….hw r u all
Sb acche h aaliya ji..
ap bataye kesi h ap
Mai bhi acchi hu …….
Adi sheen ji kha ho……..
hi aliya mai bi thik hu bhai.
mai thik hu n aap
gud evening frds
hiii aliya
mai ati hu to sb kaha chala jata h, hi aditya
Rachit behavior chng krne ki apko zarurt h…….apki bato se tobesa nhi lgta k ap 17 yr k ho …..itne chote hokr bhi bado k sath istrha se bat krte ho…….mai bhi 17 yr ki hi hu bt mjme itni tamiz h k bado k sath kis tarha se bat ki jati h……..
Mai bhi thk hu adi ….sheenm mai hu yhi PR….ap bhi ajao
haa aaliya Rachit ko chhod
Sbko pagl bolta h or khud hi mha Pagl h idiot khi ka ……
Hi aliya aapne sakshi ko kuch bola kya?
Adi rida kyse h or apke ghrpr sb kese h ?
Sheenm ji tussi kit the gae hoji
thik h sb ghar me…..
Adi Maine rida k bare me bhi pucha …….ap yha uski koi bat q ni krte ho…….
thik h Aur tum batao
sorry aliya namaz pd rhi thi, tussi ki kr rhe ho?
Adi m v thk hu or sheenm ji Mai to baithi huji or aplog se bat krhi hu ……..sheenm ji tussi subhe se kitthe the jiii
mujhe. yaha pasnd nii uske baare me baat krna….
Maine to kbka namaz pdhli hu or ab mgrib ka time arha h ji
Sorry adi next time ni puchugi …….
Age se dhyan rakhugi ….sheenm ji 1 cmnt krke chale gae kya tussi…
Accha by adi namaz pdhni h
aj thora bzy thi mai,
okkk aaliya
Hiiii frds……
Hi aditya
Rida k meaning CADAR (sheet) hota h
okkk…..Zemal
kon hai bada yaha….aliya
sab pagal…site ko family bana dete hai
ye……
yr koi site ghar thoda hi hoti hai….
aur family bolti ho agar kisi member ki
comment band ho gayi to kese search karogi…aap….
aur tum bhi hone wali ho…
to aap abhi…soche kese bachna…hai
in pagalo…se……
Dosto..ek khush khbri h..
hmari site pr kisi ko kisi se pyar ho gya h..
taliya bajao yar…
M to apko pile chavl dene aaya hu ki ap sbko ana h unki kahani ko pdhne..
ayenge na..??
Bolo haa…??
title- the lovers point….
do dil mil rhe h mgr chupke chupke..
sbko ho rhi h…khbr chupke chupke..
accha gana h na…
chliye by
kis ki kismat kharab ho gayi konse ko ho gaya pyaar……wo bhi is site ki ladkiyo …se
tu mere bhai shiv rahul ki story….likh…neha se puch….le…….
uski story neha to teri friend hai na….kyu bhai hai na…..
Mere to sare h bhai..
sb frnd h..
jo bhi btaye uski likh dunga..
rahul ki kahani ka intzar h mujhe..
khna yar usse ki bataye mujhe..
plz yar..
Rachit apki umr kitni h??
bataoge..
Oye rachit …teri samaj me nahi aa raha kya…or ye paagal kisko bol raha h be tu ….
yr….pradeep..kyu sar me dard kar raha hai mere……
aur bhai…shiv neha se puch le ya mere pass uske sms hai me send karta hu tumhe…
apna number de mujhe …..whatsapp se send karta hu….
shiv bhai kise kisse love ho gaya yaha ?
shiv bhai ek aur baat in ko ye bol ki apne dost prince ho happy birthday bole ye…
Very nice story shiv aap bhut achi story likhte ho
Hpy bdy prince…
ap sb bhi bol do yar..
kb tk jhgda kroge yar..??
khtm karo or prince ko wish kro…
Rachit mene apki bat manli na..
ab ap bhi meri bat mane ho ske to…
meri umr 30 sal h..
to ap mujhse tu tdake se na bat kre..
M ap ko ap khta hu na..isliye..
or rachit mujhe kya krna h kisi ke inbox me jhankr..
m bs itna janta hu mere inbox me acche logo sms h.
Or kuch nai ap ese jhgda mt kiya karo..
jane do yar..jo jesa h vesa thik h..
kisi ko apne muh se kyu kaho yar..
Hello shiv ji main aapki sari story ko padhti hu aap bhut achi story likhte ho
Agar aap mera msg padhe ho to jarur reply karna
hiii aliya…
Wlcm parul ji…
Shukriya..
Kesi h ap..??
nai h to sbse dosti kre .
yaha sare acche h parul ji..
or khush rhe..
Hello shiv ji main to aapki fan ban gayi hu
Parul ji apko meeo traf se shukriya ki apne shiv k liye ek dua ki writee bnnee ki kyoki m shiv ji ko ek writee k roop me dekhna chati hu
Hello nisha mujhe shiv ji ki story bhut pasand hai
Hii nisha aap meri frnd banogi
Shiv aap pahle se kuchhh likh rhe k aap yaha aaye to likhe
mere kahne mean ye h k aap writer bnana Chahte h kya
shiv bhai aapka ek baat ka style super laga mujhe… to….How do I thank you now…..Even silent….. you said it all….me………, shiv bro……thanks…..
Rachit yar itni angrji nai ati yar..
kya kru..???
sach pucho to apki ye bat m smjh hi ni paya ki ap kya kh rhe h..
bs m itna kh skta hu ki hr insan accha hota h..kai bar bs vo bhul jata h,ki vo accha h..
bs hme usko yad dilana hota h..
or adi m phle se likhta hu..
is site pr to sirf lv story likhta hu..
baki rajastan patrika me kabhi kahani bhej deta hu.. Aai to thik vrna jay sri ram..
Abki bar jb bhi aayegi ap sb ko bataunga..ok
bhai aap pehle mehkta anchal me likhte the na?
gn frds
mind ur language.. atleast i m nt d flirter like you…wht the hell r u saying.. krishna ji adi ji..tumne muze kiske sath flirt krte hue dekh liya ..yes i m flirter but meri hr flirting shibbu k sath h naki other1..so nvr agn say smthng wrong widout conclusion i warn u.. first n last aliya.. n thnx shiv bro mri yahan kisi se koi prsnl dushmani nhi h so pls dnt mind i said to aliya n aditya ki personl cht karo instead of spoiling any story
Good mrng prince
kya shiv samaj ni aaya
Nice yaar ye my peheli love story padraha ho yaar pahelihi itniachi stiry thanks am armaan any girl friendsp with me pls no timepass if u time pass ignor this ok good nigt reader frds see u