(sad love story in english) – Immature feelings

Well, this is my first story, actually its not a story, its a memory which i felt when i was in 11th std…
I just thought y dont i share my story n lets see, hope u guys like it

I was in 11th stndrd n the year was 2007 or else… At that time ORKUT was popular… I was on my daily routine n doing my stuffs… One day my cousin came told me about a girl named Geet, he told me that ”today at YMCA club i just saw a girl n she was looking fab, she was playing tennis n was looking hot” i dint bothred n ignored it… But aftr two days i saw geet’s scraps on my cousins orkut’s wall… I scrpd my cousin ” woww man, work in progress huhh” she read that commnt n start questioning like ” who is that guy, y he is saying like that, i dont like it” den my cousin told her that im his brother n he was just pulling my leg like everybody do, so nothing to react… Aftr that i send a friend request n luckily she accepted it den we start chatting, once a day , twice a day.. Like basic talks, she find me funny n sometimes sirious so she start liking me n so do i,

I went to my nani’s home n at that time there was no smartphones n at my nani’s home there was no internet so i had to goto cybercafe for chatting,

N tab koi humara time fix nhi tha ki is time online aati h to tabhi jau, coincidently aisa hota tha ki hum saath m hi online aate the, ar baate karte the, cellphone numbers exchange ni huye the to mushkil ar jayda thi, n mujhe badha cheap lagta tha number mangna to mene kabhi manga nhi, fir aise do din hogye, usne apna status ”jive kavi gabru milne aa aape pta lagu nu hunda pyaar ni” wo sardarni h, ar mai bhi ”mona sardar hu” to us time to aisa laga ki shayad ladki ne mere liye likha h’ ar pet m butterflies udne lagi,…to mene usse pucha kiske liye h? She replied.. ”Tumhre liye…” i was shocked, wait mere mind mai jese hazaro sawaal aane lage n cunfusions ar feelings ka deep mixture ban gya… Mene bola ki ” y ain’t u proposed me then” she replied ” mai kyu bolu ladke bolte hai first of all” i said” if a girl proposed boy then it means its a true love” she was amazed n mujhe laga shayad mene jaldbaazi kardi pr aftr a long wait uska reply aaya ” iloveu” mene dekha to mere demaag m kya ” kyaa siriously, no way, she just proposed me, i calm my self n took a long breath” then i replied ” ok well same2u” mai sharma rha tha bolne m sab itni jaldi hua ki samjh hi nhi aaya, she said ” say it properly” den i replied ” i love u too ” uske baad humari kaafi baate huyi n fir next day she messgd me on orkut ki ” i want to see , come fast, i’ll be waiting for u at 6’oclock YMCA club..” i said ok, mai apni nani k yha tha n wait karne laga ki subah kab ho ar mai jakr milu, acha tab tak kuch nhi hua, i was normal bass thodi bhot nervousness thi, fir jb m ghar aaya noida n wait karne laga shaam ka besabri se, shaam mai mera cousin aaya ar usse mene bataya n he start teasing me… I was blushing, my all siblings came to know about that girl n they start pulling my leg… Shaam m fir jab m gya club to mai wait karta rha kaafi der hogyi wo aayi hi nhi ,mere paas no bhi nhi tha to call bhi ni karpaya, fir m wait karke ghar aagya, aate hi usko scrap kiya bola ki” where are u, i was waiting for u there, u dint come, what happend? ” uska koi reply nhi ar next profile gayab, mera to jese mann hi utar gya fir mene apni cousin se pta lagwaya aise hi ki yaar kha pr h, usne bhi bataya ki ab wo club bhi ni aati khelne” fir ekdin meri cousin ne aise hi normally uske chote bhai se pucha ki kha h geet.. Usne bola ki ”wo australia gyi apni nani k pass” mai samjh gya ki ni jhoot bol rha h wo, abhi wo finals m h apne school m aise kese ja sakti h, kher m jayda attact to hua nhi tha to jayda socha bhi nhi pr filmy sad song sunke devdas waali feeling jarur aati thi, after 2 months she replied ki ” sorry mere saath panga hogya, i cant talk to u bye” Mene reply kiya” are u crazy? Itne time baad msg ar ye kya baat huyee ki cant talk to u, give a reason, its bothring me” uska koi reply nhi aaya, n i start believing ki it was just a phase, she gone now…. After 1 year mai 12th m aagya ar uska achank msg aaya ” Hi…” mujhe laga ab kya hogya isse, fir mene usse idhar udhar ki baate ki ar pucha baad m ki ” mam ek saal pehle kuch baate huyee thi humari wo abhi tak clear nhi huyee h” she said” konsi baat” fir mene usse yaad dilaya A to Z, fir bolti h ” o haa, im sorry wo actually club m mere saath ek ladka tha jis din tum aaye the ussi din tumse pehle he proposed me, ar mai mana nhi karpaayi” i said ” ok but u should have told me, because i was waiting n how can u do it to me, u already proposed me mai tumhre liye itni door se bhaga aaya ar tum ab bol rhi ho sorry, aisa ni hota, dont talk to me ever, i dont hate u but i dont like u anymore” she realizd it n she then uska koi msg ni aaya fir uske baad, fir achank ek din yahoo messngr pr wo online aayi ar mujhe Hi send kiya, mene bhi hello likh diya, ar jayda react ni kiya , fir usne pucha ki do u still love me, mene ek pause k saath likha nhi bt i like u n i dont want to talk to u, kyuki agr mai tumse jayda baat karunga to meri expectations badhne lagengi ar tum samjh ni paogi fir, ultimately m hurt hounga, but its your life i cant force u or make u love me its ok, usne sorry bola ar kha ki mai aaj bhi tumhre baare m sochti hu, i said good socho socho sehat k liye acha h, im good for health….

then she replied ” u r very funny, can we friends again” i said no, usne smiiley send ki sad face ki then i said ” we are already friends” n mai sab purani baate bhool gya ar thodi bhot baat ki fir offline hogya, fir humari baate bhot rarely hone lagi’ almost khatam hi hogyi, mai life mai busy wo apni life busy, mere boards aagye ar m preparation m lag gya, raat bhar padta tha ar dophr tak sona aadat ban chuki thi, fir mera final IT ka xam aaya ar mene puri prepation karli , padte padte subah hogyi pta hi ni chala, bhook lagi to m ar mera cousin bahar kuch khane chale gye, wha mai paratha kha hi rha tha ki dekha door se ” jaloos’ nikalta aarha h sardaaro ka, ar mujhse cousin ne kha beta dekh liyo geet hogi pakka isme, meri nazar jese usse dhundne lagi, bhot bheed thi, itne saare chehre, samjh m nhi aaya, 1 saal hogya tha mene aajtk dekha nii usse, pta ni kesi lagti hogi..fir cousin ne kha wo nhi h, mene kha ”na wo hogi pakka ar piche ki row m hogi” pta ni kese mere nazar ussi pr padhi, bhot tameez se sar ko dhak kar, salwaar suit m ‘ she was looking extreamly desi punjabi girl… Mene cousin ko ishara kiya dekh wo rhi,… He saw her, n humne thodi der wait kiya ar chal diye,… Ghar aakr mene apni cousin ko bataya uske baare m, usne kha bhoot utra nhi aapka, mene kha mere paas uska ghar ka no h usse baat karle please n uska no lele…. fir m xam dene chala gya ar jab aaya, to sham m puch ki kuch hua usne bataya ki, ” meri baat huyee usse n usne thodi idhr udhr ki baat ki fir finally aapke baare m khud hi pucha n aapka no bhi leliyaa ar wo raat m shayad call kare ya msg…” mai to ekdum filmy style marta hua nikla room se , jese koi xam ni , bhaad m jaaye sab ar wait karne laga, market m ya friend k yha gya to betha to whi tha pr aaknhe phn pr thi ki kab aayega msg… Fir raat uska msg aaya ” hi how r u?.. Mene reply kiya ” who is it? Den she replied” oo hello im geet ok,” mene aise behave kiya jese mujhe pta ni ” oo hi geet, how r u, its been a long time, wher r u n how u doin,?” fir meri puri raat baate huyee usne mujhe bataya ki wo mere baare m bhot sochti thi n koshish bhi kari milne ki baat karne ki pr kabhi ho ni paya,… Usne pucha kal xam haina, ? Ha hai, then she said” to jaao padho” mene bola ni sab padha padhaya h,. Mene usse khoob saari baate kari jese wo meri gf ho,. She was also happy… Mai xam deke wapas aaya…

Xam over hogye finally hum daily baat karne lage, over msgs.. N fir hum personall baate karne lage ekdusre se, uska bf tha tab bhi… Wo uske baare m batati thi, mostly burai karti thi,… Mai bolta tha ki agr wo tumhe itna pareshaan karta h to chod kyu ni deti, relation m jor jabrdasti thik ni h n he dont respect u, your feelings… Still u ignore everything… Im not saying chod do abhi ar mere saath aajao, im not selfish.. Pr talk to him n make him realizr u r important too…” usse sunke tassali huyi , m usse hasata rehta tha mostli to wo bolti thi ki kash tum pehle mil gye hote , m bolta tha ” pehle mil bhi jata to kya hota, tab bhi hasata ab bhi hasa rha hu..” she like my simplicity n honesty, wo mere se hr chiz puch k karne lagi, ki school jaa rhi h to baal khole ya baandhe, wo ek saal choti thi mere se, n DPS m thi , to mujhe shaq bhi hota tha ki khi maje to nhi lerhi mere se pr m itna shaq ni karta tha, ar sochta tha…, uska bday aane wala tha n obvious mujhe kuch special dena tha, mene ek DVD mai apne fav song n movies collection burn kiye n DVD case ka cover album khud uska portrait scetch kiya ar lagaya…. N usko msg kiya ki aaj xyz market m aana i hav gift u… She was thinking ki m koi gift lakr dunga Iloveu, heart rose type pr ni,… N again wo late hoti jaari rhi thi, n kaafi late hogyi, i msgd her ki isbaar mujhe wait mat karana kyuki aaj ni aayi to mujhe bhool jana fir., uska koi reply hi nhi, mai pareshaan ar gusse m laal hota ja rha tha, fir dekha to saamne se aarhi thi, mene socha koi ni aato gyi… I saw her for the very first time personally, we shake hands n greet each other, wo apni cousin k saath aayi thi, geet ko samjh hi ni aarha tha n nazre chura rhi thi ar door ja rhi thi, den i hold her hand n giv the DVD in her hand… Usne smile di n thanks bola,… Mujhse laga itna feeka reaction huh.,, den usne realize kiya ki cover album pr khud h, she was shocked n amazed, uske chehre pr saaf dikh rha tha,. She smiled, haath milaya ar chal di…. Ghar jaake usne finally bola,” i felt blessed n special at that time, i cud hug u tightly,..” mai badtameez to hu to mene bola ki ”

acha ar mai chodta nhi ar bhot badtameeziya karta fir” fir dheere we start dirty talks, n she was open but i was shy so she always pulling my leg n laugh out loudly when i said something wierd…,, humari baate bhot hone lagi pr uska to bf tha…. Den dheere dheere fir se baate kam hogyi pta ni kyu, wo bhot busy hogyi, mai bhi fir apne admissions ko leke busy hogya…. college mai aane k baad i met with a n now she is my girl, my first actual love, we share our feelings eachothr n we are still together n going to marry..
geet sometimes msg me ‘hi” m apni bandi ko dikha kr hasta hu, ar wo mere uper ki ” wo budhu bana gyi tumhra ache se stupid ar tum bewafkufo ki bante rhe” hahahah

Well that was my story, not a love story actually…

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