Hi frnds …I hope u all r fine …..frnds yeah poem hmne khud write ki hai..kisi k dard ko mehsos krke yeh poem write ki hmne ……
Waqt mera thma gya WO ,
Dil ko mere rula gya WO …
Mere dard ko smjne wala ,
Mere dard ko tukra gya WO ,
Seene se jise chahte
The lagana
Maut k gle LGA gya WO ,
Itna pyar tha usse
Pyar ka namo Nishan.
Mita gya WO ,
Khud hsker
Mujhe rula gya WO ..
Dil be kha tha usse
K ruk jao
Bahut hai tere
Jaise khkar
Mere sachhe pyar.
Ko bhula gya WO
Na Jane kya kmi
Thi mere pyar me
Dekar mujhe itna
Dard
Na Jane kyu.
Muskura gya WO ?
, kyu muskura gya
WO ??
I hope frnds k aaoko meri choti c poem achi lgi hogi ….
Bye frnds and take care ….. .
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Nice poem………
Toh ye seen h miss apki life ka….
Aap writer v h 🙂
Bahut acha likha h mujhe apka ye andaz bahut psnd aaya….
Mujhe apki love story toh nahi pta par
Dard dikh rha h 🙁
Mne apse apke baare mai itni baar pucha lekin aap toh btana hi nahi chahte :-/
Chalo koi baat nhi god bless u roop….
nyc….poem
bilkul mera v same hal hai…????
poem achhi h dost par jo itna dard mila uska dukh b h….
Nice poem………sch me bht drd h is poem me pr kher jo hua so hua bhul jao or khush rha kro god bless u roop.
Really splendid and genuine
Hat’s off you …..
Hi frnds……..
How r u ?,
& thnxx merit choti see poem ko like krne k liye….
And prince ji aap gyem .dekha his cheez ka nasha ek baar lg jaye wo wapas jldi nhi jata & prince ji yeh hmari love story nhi…bs kisi k drd ko mehsos kiya hmne or poem write kii
☺☺☺
Agr ye dard kisi or ka h toh ap bahut ache writer ho…..
Lekin mujhe ehsaas ho rha h ye apka h…..
Mai is year exam mai fail ho gya bcz of this love site… 🙁
Or roop tum gayab kaha rehte ho???
Nycccc n hrt touchng poem
Nice & heart touching poem hai.god bless you
O! So sad but aap repair acche se kRNA ..☺
But aapko aisa kyublgta h k yeh drd mera hi hai??
Prince hm busy ho jate h beech me hi but jb b time milta reply kr dete h ….is liye sorry AGR reply late se mila aapko toh
Ab kse btau????
Ki esa kyu lag rha h…..
V nice poem. ????
Very painful lines lakshay
Nice lines lakshay
Prince ji aap batao na plz ??
Bhut achi poem likhi h creazy roop aapne
Vy nice
Thnxx mehves
Nice poem roop. With lots of feeling. Kaise likh lete ho etne feelings ke sath mujhse without feelings wali poem bhi nahi likhi jati hai?????
thank you sneha or crazy roop ager aapko pasand ayi toh aap mera page bhi dekh skte ho google plus pr Tanha dil a dil a lonley heart by aakansha bhardwaj
Okk lakshay
Hi frnds
Kaise hi sab ?,
& lakshay hm jror dekhna chahege..
ailo roop
h r u
Hi jot
I’m fine …
What about u ??
Thannk you crazzy roop and link bj ri hu dekh lena or bta kaisa lga
https://plus.google.com/u/0/113319503233033872903/posts
Kyun hum tere yado mein khoye nazar ate hai
kyun tere nisan hum mein mojad nazar aate hai
sath to hum kabhi chale hi nahi the
toh phir kyun tere kadmo k nisan sath nazar aate hai
guzzar chuka hai tu waqt k sath phir bhi na jane kyun
us mein kud ko thare hu nazar ate hai
kyun tere yado k karwa liya hum jete hui kud nazar pate hai
gujar rha hai waqt bdal rha hai mossam phir b na jane kyun
hum usi mossam m nazar kud ko pate hai
badla gya hai tu badal gyi hun main na jane kyun phir
bhi logo ko muje mein tere mohbhat k rang nazar ate hai
phen liya hai ek jhuti muskan ka mukuhta humne, phir bhi na jane kyun
logo ko mere ankho mere tere aashkh nazar ate hai
aaj jb dekha piche mod kr kud ko toh tere yado mein khoye hua paya hai ,mohbhat jo ki tum se us mohbhat ki sja pate nazar aya hai,
hai kuch nahi ab mere pass khene ko tum se phir bhi na jane kyun
tuj se kuch sun ne ko tere intzar mein baithe nazar ate hai
aaj bhi hum tere yado mein khoye nazar ate hai
Nice lakshay…..
Lakshay hmne aapka wo page read kiya..u know aap kujh baaton se bilkul hmare jaise ho…but aap plz hme btao un k piche reason kya hai. Hme b jjana hai dear. Plz tell me ….
Ek confusion h hme …u r girl na ??
Reply kr dena aap ..I’m waiting…
yes i am girl reason kuch ni hai and thanks creazy roop mere page dekhne k liye acha ek or poem hai btana kaisi lgi
nay log naya fasna naya zamana mila tha
humko zindagi jeeni ka ek bhana mila tha
dekha tha jb phele bar use tb ajnbai mein apna pan lga tha
baato mein uski khone ka man hua tha
jb atha tha wo pass mere toh badti dharkane ka asas hua tha
unhi badti dharkano mein naam sunai uska pda tha
anjan tha wo mere mohbhat se
anjan thi main b uski mohbhat se
per phir bhi ankho se bato ka silsila suru ho chla tha
na jaane kis morh pr aker hath usne thama tha
le jane mohbhat ki duniya mein wo pass mere aya tha
suru hua tha jo ankho se mohbhat ka safar ab humsafar ban chuka tha
sath chal rahe the dono jase sadiyo ka natha juda tha
ek raat asi ayi jha dur wo ja chuka tha chor hath mera kisi or k hath hath wo apna thma chuka tha
the mere ankho mein anshu ki mele wo un se apna dil bhala rha tha
rokna chah jab use bhut dur wo ja chuka tha
Wow! Beautiful poem lakshay………
thanks ishma
Nice poem
aap ek achhe writer ho jo apne imotion ko writing me badl diye very nice…
thanks raj
Wowwww….
Nice poem dear…….
sach mein achi lgi mere poem ya ase bol re ho creazy roop.but phir b thanks
rajver ki khani ki poem read kro aap
very Nice poem lakshya
wese o wala comm. Creazy K liye tha
ops sory raj tum naam lekar hi bat kr lia kro
Sorry lakshya nxt time dhyan dunga
Thnxx a lot raj
& lakshay hm kisi ki kbi b jhothi tareef nhi krte dear.. .
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thanks creazy roop
Kya bthau lakshay is poem ka, shbd h nhi nklrh h, dil touch krdya, bhth bhth bhth bhth bhth achchchaa lga, meine poem adhe pdthe hi dairi me likh dya, yr ap ek achi wrtr h. Waaoo sprb, bhth blna h pm k lkr pr shbd h nhi h. Gd blss both roop&lakshya.