read..feel…like…
@@pataake or fyuuzz@@
Hm apne aas pas jitne bhi log dekhte h,un sb me ek muhbbt chupi hoti h..
kyuki hr ldke ki jindgi me ek ldki esi hoti h,jise wo kbhi pa nai skta????
or hr ldki ki jindgi me ek ldka esa hota h,jise wo kbhi bhula nai skti..
bs logo se is trh pucho ki wo apko bata de..
jb bata de to unke chehre ki hansi dekhna??..
apka dil apko kahega aj mene kisi ki bhuli use muhbbt yad dila di…
Mere ghr se teen ghr age ranjnaa anty rhti h..
umr anty wali nai h mgr kisi ko bhabhi ji nai khne deti..
ye unki apni soch h..
hnsmukh lhza h or mithi juban..
Do bacche h anty unkl ke..
diwali ke din m unke ghr chla gya.kam kuch nai tha bs khush to chla gya.
anty akeli thi.mene pucha ki bhaisahab kaha h to boli baccho ko patake
dilane gye h..
fir bato bato me mene anty ko kaha ki kya ap mujhe diwali ka kuch
tohfa dena chahengi??
chota bhai smjhkr..
to anty boli ha tu mang na….
To aj ap wo bat bataye jo apne ajtk kisi se nai kahi…
anty ko phle mera ye sawal betuka lga?????fir
anty kuch der soch ke boli…
meri sagaai vikas se hui thi..
wo mere scool ka dost tha.
hmare ghr wale bhi razi the..
bs mere papa bole ki rnjna ko to de denge mgr uske bhai ko bhi ldki
deni hogi apko..
mera bhai bol nai pata h shiv…??
To us wqt vikas ke papa ne ha krdi..
m or vikas sagaai ke bad sath ghumte,kai bar chori chupe milete the..
bahut khubsurt din the wo uske sath..
fir vikas ke papa ko mere bhai ke liye ldki nai mil rhi thi..
kon de ek gunge ko apni ldki???
Hmare ek ristedar ke ghr me ek vidhva ldki thi..
papa us ldki ki bat mere bhai se kr aaye..
or bdle me us vidhva ke bhai se mera rista tay kr diya..
vikas se meri sagaai tod di..
m roi,mgr asr kahi na hua..
Jb bhi papa se ldti to papa ka ek swal juban bnd ke deta…
ki kya tu bhai ka ghr bsta nai dekhna chahti???
or m chup ho jati..
akhir dil ko smjhana pada…
or shadi karke suresh ke ghr aa gai..
ab dekho do bacche bhi h ..
khush bhi hu..
mgr ab kan ki baliyan gum nai hoti h shiv…
Or agr ho bhi jaye to 39 dukano me dhundhne ke bad hu b hu vesi
baliyan nai la ke deta koi..
ab icecrem me vo mithas nai h jo uski juthi icecrim me tha..
ab gaane acche nai lgte….
or aaine me khud ko dekhti hu to khud pr kabu rkhti hu,ki ro na padu…
vikas ke sath guzara wqt meri jindgi ka sbse pyara wqt tha shiv…??
bs khush hu mgr ankh jb bnd krti hu to vikas samne aa hi jata h…..
To shiv apni muhbbt pa na sko to bhulao bhi mt..
kyuki jb khuda hmse kisi ko door kr deta h to smjh jao ki wo hmari
kismt me nai tha…??or fir bhi khuda ne hme uske sath wqt bitane ka
moka diya….
m use bahut miss karti…….??????
itne me dor bell bazi or annty ne drwaza khola..to bhai sahab khde the
baccho ke sath..
bole are shiv???aao patake jalate h???..
m dhire se fusfusaya??..
mere to jal gaye..patake bhi..or fyuzz bhi…
Sayad anty ko sun gya???
wo hns pdi…or m ye soch ke kamp gya ki…??kya kavita din bhi ese hi
honge?????
Kya use bhi icecreem ………..????
ya khuda rhm krna us pr..??
hosle tu hi dena use….,,.
paigaam mera hr hal use pahucha dena..
Mujhse door hokr,tum dil bahla lena..
Teri ankho me ansu dekhe nai jate.
yad rahe..??meri yad me bhi na baha dena…
juda hokr din me bhi soya rhta hu..
kr dena subah…..akr kbhi jagaa dena..
tumhare sath hi to khoi thi mnzile meri…
Ik roz milker,,mnzilon ka pata dena…
Jo kbhi zmana mujhe tnha khne lge.?
tera ashiq hu m,,,,,,,,,,
tu ye zmane ko bata dena……….
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sayed isliya kaha gaya hai ke
pyar kab kiska pura hota hai
jiska phala akser he aduar hota hai
aisa q hota h yaar?????
Comment…right g…
very nice heart touching is story ko padhkr lg rha h wo meri kismat me nhi h pr use bhool bhi nhi paungi jo waqt sath bitaya use hi yadd krke bitani hogi aage ki zindgi
bhai shiv bura mat mana….. sach bolu
Hm apne aas pas jitne bhi log dekhte h,un sb me ek muhbbt chupi hoti h..kyuki hr ldke ki jindgi me ek ldki esi hotih,jise wo kbhi pa nai skta????or hr ldki ki jindgi me ek ldka esa h
itni story bhadiya thi bakki bakwas……thi
Shukriya rahul…
kosis krunga ki age wo likhu ,jo apko accha lge…
i will try…..
dekho bhai shiv aapne nupur ko ye galat bataya ab wo ek hi ladke ke liye west karegi kyu karo ek ke liye life west jab wo nhi hai pass humare……
Aunty ne bhi story me galat kiya story me
wife kisi aur ki yaad kisi aur ko karti hai
apne husband ka jhuta kahao wo bhi
to tum se pyaar karta hai mitha to lage ga
Rahul bhai…
mene nupur se kuch nai kaha..
na glt…na sahi…
bs mene wo likha jo mene suna h…
ye kisi ko manne na manne ki bat nai h..
ap yakiin na karo sayad..
Mujhe maf krna kyuki gltiya sbse hoti h..
mujhse bhi….
Or sb dosto se khna h mujhe ki ap apni sahi ray de..
chahe kisi ko kahani chu jaye…
ya kisi ko bkwas lge…
bs sahi bole…
shiv ji mujhe to aapki stories bhut achhi lgti h unme feelings or sachhai dono hoti h or rahul Ji sabko pta h humare aaspas ke logo ke sath ye sab hota h lekin koi use kis trh se present krta h wo bat dil ko chu jati h or kisi ke sath bitaye achhe movements ko yad krne apne baki sabhi rishto ko dil se nibhana hi zindgi h or agar humare sochne se Hume kisi ki yad na aati to log aaj pyar krte or dusre din bhool jate hote….
I agree with u nupur ji
shiv g mjhe to apki story bht achi lagh.
Nice story shiv ji.
to nupur aap ye khe rahi hai BF ya GF banao jab wo dil tod de to …..new jo GF ya BF hoga uske shaat jab aap ho to …
purani Relationship ko yaad karo…..
nhi yr enjoy karo…….wo to humeshe true love karte hai to hum kyu nhi hum kyu purane walo ko yaad kare….
vese bhi jo phele wale hote hai wo hume bhula chuke hote hai…..
batao yr …..thik nhi kaha kya mene……..
phli bat wo mera bf nhi tha best friend tha best friend or bf me bhut fark hota h boy friend banane ke bare me na maine phle socha tha na ab sochti hu Maine apne life partner choose krne ka faisla apni family pr choda tha or ab bhi unhi par h but boy friend chod kr jaye ya best friend dard utna hi hota h or ab meri family mere liye jo bhi choose kregi wo hi mera bf life partner sab hoga.or wo bhut achha h isliye dua karti hu as a friend wo meri life me vapas aa jaye or agar wo na bhi aaya to bhi wo hi mera best friend rhega…
Nupur ji sahi bola apne best friend or bf me bht frka hota best friend ko hum kbi bhul nhi sakhte h meri bi ek best friend h mere liye wo SB kuch h same usne bi apne life partner ki choose apni family per Chora Rakhi h yr wo bht achieve h
Nupur ji sahi bola apne best friend or bf me bht frka hota best friend ko hum kbi bhul nhi sakhte h meri bi ek best friend h mere liye wo SB kuch h same usne bi apne life partner ki choose apni family per Chora Rakhi h yr wo bht achi h
ha keshav ji wo mujhe friend mane ya na mane wo humesha mera best friend rhega mujhe kabhi bhi pta chala wo kisi problem me h to mai uske pas jarur jaungi help ke liye or abhi mai usse kabhi nhi milungi uski khushi ke liye itna to jarur krungi…or na hi use call msgs krke disturb krungi or apni yad dilaungi wo khush rhe bus or kya chahiye
Ye mere ek pagali frnd ki soch h apse multi julti.. ?
hello shiv ji muze aap ki story bahut acche lagti hai aap ki story me ek feeling hoti hai jo dil ko cho ti hai
Hello kishan ji..
wlcm yar…
dekho ldna bnd kro or ek bat suno..
rista jodte wqt chahe mt socho???
mgr todte wqt jara soch lo ki kis se tod rhe h…
bs itna sochne se jo rista apna h,wo nai tutega..
kyuki zara sochte hi riste ki ahmiyt samne aa jati h..
or kuch nai…
baki azad des h..
sbke apne khyal h..
suno sbki,,karo sirf apne dil ki………
BF aur best friend me bhoot fharak hota hai nupur aapko isliye nhi pata kyuki aapka BF nhi hai
kya BestF kiss kar sakta hai….
kya BestF jo problem hoti hai ushe bina bole samaj leta hai…..
jab GF ko dard hota hai to BF ko bhi hota hai Bestfriend ko nhi….
BF GF ke liye mar bhi sakta hai agar true love hoto…..Bestf nhi kabhi nhi mar sakta
Aur im sorry agar meri baat ne aapko hurt kiya hoto……
Hello rahul ye Galt bol rhe ho ap best friend ko itna dard hota h wo bta bi nhi sakhta
U r really damm crazy & u have lots of idiotic thoughts in ur mind.
Sory rahul bt kya ap apni gf pe hath utha skte ho???
Haalaat kese bhi ho chahe.???
kya utha skte ho….
soch ke bola….
jvab bahut mayne rkhta h..
Sory my mistek…
wo rahul mene tumhare mr ko maar pdh liya..
sory sory yar..
bt ab koi tu tu m m nai ok…
chlo aj ek kam krte h…
hm sb uska nam likhenge ,jise hm miss krte h..
is bahane yad kre..
ok..
sb likhe..pata to chle kon kise miss krta h..
ok..
ye raha mera??.
Always kavita
shiv ji abi maine uska ek khat mere nam y story padi, sch me dil ko chu gyi.. aap bht acha likhte h.
bhai shiv hath wali baat….
sach bolu mar jauga kabhi hath nhi uthau ga…..chahay wo mujhe dhoka bhi dede lekin hath nhi uthauga aur kuch bhi karuga us ke liye jo wo bolegi true bhai
aur bhai i miss Shivani Forever And Ever ……………………….
“Uski yado me khud ko jalate h, mom ki trha katra ktra pighal jate h, koi dewana kehta h koi hme pagal jb hm be baat muskurate hain”
ye line maine likhi h kesi lagi btana…
Very nice line
Bahut acchi h sheenm…
keep it up???
lo kumar sahab ki char line suno..
koi diwana khta h,koi pagl smjhta h
mgr dhrti ki becheni to bs badl smjhta h..
tu mujhse door kesi h,m tujhse door kesa hu???
ye tera dil smjhta h ya mera dil smjhta h…..
or sheenm tum kya kisi ko miss nai krti??
nam nai likha tumne…
agr nai krti to yaha is mhfil me na hoti…
ya jhut bol do ki nai krti…
i miss my self…
Humein Aansu Se Zakhmo Ko Dhona Nahi Aata, Milti Hai Khushi To Use Khona Nahi Aata, Seh Lete Hai Har Ghum Hans Ke, Log Kehte Hai Humein Rona Nahi Aata.
Hum zindagi se aas kare bhi to kya kare, Jab tum nahi ho paas kare bhi to kya kare, Aansu piye, sharaab piye, zeher bhi to pi liya, Bujhti nahi hai pyaas, kare bhi to kya kare.
Pkki kalakar ho sheenm…
javab psnd aya…
hiiii Sherman
tum kya krti ho….????
shukriya shiv ji ye line pade meri
“tu haqikat bhi h or sapna bhi, tu ajnabi bhi h or apna bhi, tjhe pane ki tamanna nhi h mjhe, tu nhi h kahi or hai mujhme bhi…”
hiiii Sheenam
kaha se
aur kya krti ho…..tum
hi aadi mai uttrakhand se hu or B.Ed krti hu. Aap kaha se ho?
nice one shiv and sheenam
always miss my parents
mai Chhattisgarh se hu
heart touching story. kaha se likhte ho yr story. shiv
Apka Story achha laga yr mujhe
agr mujhe aap whatsapp me ho to story send krna
aur kisi ke paass ho to send me
story
my Whatsapp no 8817626170
Gd mrng e1……..
Subah subah suno…..
Usne luta h,hm leute h,tumse kya chrcha kare???
hm to rusva ho chuke h,unko kyu rusva kre….
nojavani me sbhi se hote h ye hadse..
hm kaha ke kaish(mjnu) thahre,jo isq ka dava kare…
jo naseeb e gair ki dolat ho uski kya khushi…
kyu kisi ke husn ko hsrt se ab dekha kare…
E dil e nadan tujhe gm to kisi ne de diya..
chl kisi tdbiir se ab zbt e gm paida kare….
gudmrnig
bht umda likha h, apki soch se nikla hr lafz to khazana hota h.
“khushi ki bat h ya dukh ka manzar dekh sakta hu, mai aankhe bnd kr k tjhko aksar dekh skta hu.”
Wah sheenm…
apke sher ne ankhe bhigo di…
wah wah…
hello everyone….!
nice story hai shiv….. achha likhte ho…. blki main to ye kahungi k kya khoob likhte ho aap..
batein bahut achhi karte ho aap… aapki kalam mein kashish to hai…. ye baat to manni hi padegi
Hello nikki…
bs uski bate apne ap se krta hu..
or kuch nai yar…
lo ek khyal suno sb..
kesa lga ye btana jurur???
kbi jo rozgar ke silsile me
jana hota h tumhare shr
aksr guzrta hu us gli se
jiski nukkd pe h tumhara ghr.?..
yad h tumhe bijli ka wo khmba..
jiski rosni tale hm phro bethe rhe…
wqt khush khush katne la mshvra dete rhe…
ek fituur hi h jo m chupke se..
puch leta hu us khmbe se…
“kya wo …..abke aai thi”………
kbhi jo rozgar ke silsile se..
jana hota h tumhare shr,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,??????????,,..
achha hai..
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or ab j b bata dijiye k aapko rozgar mila b ya bas yunhi chakkr kat te ho… Kavitaa k shehar ki galion ka… 😉
M kya krta hu..
ye sb mene khidki wali sheet kahani ke niche cmment me likha h…
Bs uska shr chut ta hi nai…
jb bhi yaha se jane ki sochta hu to lgta h ki adha to yahi rh jaunga..??
to nai jata
hi friends mai uska shar chodne wali hu jhan wo mujhe mila itne sare movement diye h is shar ne pura clg yhi se kiya I will miss everything but apne ghar lautkr aisa lg rha h jese nai zindgi shuru krne ja rhi hu…..feeling very happy
kuch apno ko chodkr yha aaye the ab kuch apno ko yha chodkr ja rhe h
Nupur g… jab hum kuch chodte hain to kuch saath b jarur le jatein hain…. or jo sath le jatein hain wo haoti hain khatti mithi yadein…. jo humein kabhi akela nahi padne deti
ha nikky Ji yha se bhut si yadein sath le ja rhi hu college ki yadein couching ki yadein or bhi bhut kuch…..
तू मोहब्बत है मेरी इसीलिए दूर है मुझसे…अगर जिद होती तो शाम तक बाहों में होती
“Log roz hi kuch na kuch naya magte h khuda se, or ek hum hai jao kbhi tere sawal se aage hi nhi gye”
humari dua to roj ek hi rhti h bhut khub likha h sheenam ji
arey wah…!
yahan to ek se badhkar ek hai….
Badi mhfil jmi h shayar lodo ki..
sb khush h..
kon khta h ke muhbbt tklif deti h..
ye to ajnbi ko bhi apna bna deti h..
nupur…nai jindgi mubark..
Khush raho yar..
ok
lo do line pesh h…
sunte h ki mil jati h hr chiz dua se…
ik roz tumhe mang kr dekhenge khuda se..
wah wah world ke pure sayar yhi aa gye h mehfil jami h maza aa rha h sabhi ki sayries me
mera to shayari mein interest laghbhag mar hi chuka tha lakin yahan pahunchne k baad… dubara se ye shauk panapne lag hai….
“Jb bhi socha usda hi khayal aave, hr vili chehra usda hi nazar aave, dil vichcho sirf eiho hi dua aave, usde jihi rab oh na banave..”
dhayavad shiv Ji aapki bato ka reply krne ke liye to shabd bhi kam pad jate h samjh hi nhi aata kya khe.
of LifeZindagi ka pehla pyaar kon bhulata hain,Ye phli bar hota h jb koi kisi ko khud se badhkar chahta h…Uski pasand, uski khwahish me khud ko bhul jata h,Akele mein uska naam likh likh kar mitata h…Baat karne se phle sochta h, kya kehna h.,Baat hone ke baad fir kuch kehna reh jata h..Hota h itna khoobsurat pehla pyar,Toh jane kyun aksar adhoora reh jaata h…
ye site hai love story ke liye
aap sabne yaha sher….likh diye
shayri ke liye itna dimag na lagao……
pagalo….apne aapko jagao…….
itna bhi nhi kar sakte to is site se sab bhaag jao………ab to samaj paao…..
itna hi shok hai to shayari wali site pe jao……
Kabhi tum muje kareeb se aa k deknaAise nahi jara aur paas aa k dekhna,Main tum se kitna pyar karta hoon,Mujhe kabhi seene se laga kar dekna,Main tuje ashko ki kataar me najar aaungaMeri yaad main kabhi aansu baha k dekna,Meri ghazal pad kar bhi tum par asar na hoToh logo ko meri ghazal suna ke dekhna….
Kuch khona,kuch pana chlta rhta h
sanso ka afsana,chlta rhta h…
ab bhi chidiya chug jati h kheto ko..
do ek din pachtana chlta rhta h..
kuch bach jate h to kuch mit jate h..
wqt ka ana jana chlta rhta h….
hindu muslim ate jate rhte h…
nukkd ka mykhana chlta rhta h….
aapka Sbse fav Love story movie kon sa h ….comment me likho frds
Rahul mere bhai…
site koi bhi ho..sb hme jodne ka kam krti h..
kahi jane ki jarurt nai h yar..
kyu kya hm apki site pr dil ki bat shayari ke jariye nai kr skte..
agr nai to koi ghr dekhenge…
Vese bhi kon nai tuta yaha..
sb tute h..
yaha jodne ka kam chlta h..
wo bhi khubsurti se..
aao tum bhi hmare sath..
wlcm
bhai aditiya
(1) Titanic
(2)love you you
(3) Remember me…
bhai shiv shayari karna aacha nhi lagta
is site ko na karo bekar ye site hai
unke liye jo karte hai sacha pyaar
ab to samjho mere yaar………
is site she kahin aur jao….
suna hi hai love story sunao…..
verna gande sher na sunao…..bas
comments likho aur ghar jao…..
haa yr Rahul tu thik kr rha h
ye love story wala site h
Chlo rahul apki bat man leta hu…
aaj ke bad m koi cmment nai likhunga..
ye wada h..
kisi bhi kahani ke niche nai.
ok
ye akhiri h..
by
Arey Rahul aapne naraaz kr diya Shiv ko…… galat baat hai ye
or Shiv g… nrazgi achhi baat nahi hai….
wapis aa jaiye apke bahut sare frnds hain yahan par jo aapki kahanion k sath sath aapke cmmts or baton ko b pasand karte hain..
or Rahul aap khud mana kr rahe ho wo b shayrana andaaz mein….
khud shayari likhne ka luft utha rahe ho or baki sabh ko mana kr rahe ho…. bahut galat hai
jise apni baat jaise kehne min khushi milti hai vaise hi kehne do
jise achhi na lage wo na read kare… isme kisi ko tokne ya rokne ki ky zarurat hi bhala
khaham khaa naraz kr diya aapne Shiv ko
ha shiv Ji nikky Ji shi kh rhi h plz vapas aa jaiye kisi ek ke khne se aap is site par comment krna chod dege kya hum sabhi ko aapki har bat achhi lgti h chahe wo comment me ho ya aise hi kisi ke liye likhi ho plz aa jaiye
Shiv aap kisi ek k kehne se ja sakte ho to hum sabh wapis aane k liye kah rahe hain to humari kyu ansuni kr rahe ho aap…. ab humari b maniye or wapis aaiye… suna na aapne
khan ho sare Friends shiv Ji chale gye h plz sab request kro wo vapas aa jaye to wo jarur vapas aayege hum sbke liye plz shiv ji aa jaiye hum sbke liye
ha shiv ji aap vapas aa jaye..
galti meri h jb se mai is site pe ayi hu sb se zyada sher maine hi post kiye h to sorry plz shiv ji ap wapas aa jaye plz
Mujhe itna bhi mhnga mt banao sb..
m kahani me mlunga ap sb se bs cmment me nai..
plz koi zid na kare..
Sayad ap koi mane nai mgr mujhe meri kahaniya acchi lgti h..
ek to ye sacchi hoti h..
ab ap sb ko hi le lo..
mere no. Likhne ke bad mujhe kai fon aaye or aa bhi rahe h..
Wo sb batate h mujhe ki kon kitni tklif me h..
ap to kahani bad me pdhte h mgr m,apko bhejne se phle ds bar pdhta hu,or biis bar rota hu..
Mgr koi muhbbt kare to jane na ki dil kitna nazuk hota h..
Or ankhe kese bhig jati h..
fir bhi m khush hu,kyuki ap sb is site pr mujhse phle aaye the,or mere bad bhi rhenge..
mene ek dost nanga tha jo mera doctr bn kr ilaz kre..mgr sb mareez h yaha pr..
to mene socha ki jitna m jina janga hu,utna sb ko jina sikhau,sbko hsau or sb ki bat sunu..
mgr m glt tha..
fir bhi kahaniya to m likhunga,kyuki kisi ki muhbbt likhne ke liye mujhe kisi ko izazt nai leni pdti..
bs apni bkwas shayari apne pas hi rlhunga..
Ap sb smjhdar h.
kisi ko sikhane ki jrurt nai h..
to m kyu khad bikheru..
Baki sb thik h..
nhi shivji aapki sayries me bhi feelings hoti h hume wo bhi bhut pasand h aap sayries bhi likha kijiye or comment bhi plz shiv ji
What happens shiv yr apki shayri to bht achi h jisko achi nhi lgti wo jaye ap kyu forget shiv ap cmnt bi kro or shayri bi
“Aap se door ho kar hum jayenge kaha,
Aap jaisa dost hum payenge kaha,
Dil ko kaise bhi sambhal lenge,
Par aankho ke aansu hum chupayege kaha. ..”
Shiv yr rahul ki BT ko forget kro or cmnt mastan shayri or kisi ko haq nhi shiv ji ko rokhne ka
Mujhe rahul ki bat buri nai lgi keshv ji.
bs m to ye sochkr heran hu ki log jarurt ke hisab se bdl jate h..
jb dil tut jata h to subh shayari,sham shayri.
or jb koi mil jaye to,ya khush ho to shayri bkwas…
ye to glt bat h na..
or jo shayri se prem krte h.unhe bura lgega na.
wo sheenm bechari thodi der phle hi boli thi thi ki waps shayri padhna accha lgta h..
or wo chli gai.
ye khkr ki sbse jyada shayri mene likhi h is site pr..
use kesa lga hoga.
mujhe chodo use bulao..
plz sheenm wapas aa jao..
plz……
Sheenam Ji shiv Ji vapas aa gye h aap bhi aa jao plz ab koi khin Jane ki bat nhi krega plz sheenam Ji vapas aa jaiye
keshav sharma
Aap se door ho kar hum jayenge kaha
facbooko pe jao waha friend banao…
jo marzi wo gao…….bas ye bekar sher na sunao…….
Rahul aap kitna negative sound krte ho bolne se phle ye bhi nhi sochte ki kisi ko hurt hota hoga.
arey koi b mat jao.. j buri baat hai.. maine b yahi kaha hai jise shayari prob. hi wo na padhe shayai ko…. lakin likhne wale likhte rahein or apni baat ko jaise chahe dusre k saamne rakhte rahein
Shiv aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye… aap bindas likho or cmmt b karo
logon ka kya hai kuch b bol dete hain
or Sheenm ko b kahin jane ki zarurat nahi hai.. yahan sabh ek dusre k achhe dos ban rahe hain to dosti k nte hum sabh ko ek dusre ka maan rakhna chahiye na
to shiv aap kahin mat jana
nd Sheenm aap b aa jao… ok
Order n Order…!!!!
Rahul ab aap kuch mat bolo….
aapko nahi pasand to mat read karo magar kisi ko rok tok kr hurt to mat karo… kam se kam abhi chup ho jao..
shiv ji aapka to ladkiya karti hai phera…
aapko jane ko kon khera…..
yr jab hai Friend aapki to unka…
whatsapp number kyu ni lera…..
bhai ……teri GF to chood ke chalye gai
ab bhi ladko se trust nhi khatam hua…
ye ladkiya alone karti pyaar nhi….dhoka
deti …….shaat nhi……..
dil tod ti hai……alone karti hai …..
cheat ……karti hurt karti ….aur kuch
nhi…..bhai roye ga………ga jab chood degi
aur bhai …..story likhna na chood……
tu likh….verna is site story nhi hogi….
bhadiya wali……
aur tu likhega na jarur batana
aur sorry kuch galat laga hoto…..
Mr rahul tumhe koi haq nhi Hume rokhne ka shayri pasand aaye to cmnt nhi to gayab ho jao
Shiv ji rahul ko apse jealous ho rhi h apke itne fun or friends or uske nhi or rahul rhi Whatsup no ki bt wo bhi h but Jo maza yah h use pe nhi h
Sb comment apne man se jo achha lage wo likhe
jo pasnd h
rahul I don’t think mujhe is site par aapki koi bhi bat achhi lgj hogi.anyways aap to hamare friend bhi nhi ho ki aapko samjha ske
Nupur ji rahul ko samjhne ka koi fayad bhi nhi bcoz wo na samjha h
Ooooooo…bhai
Keshav Sharma
roj ek new ladki offer karti hai mujhe
aur ye shaadi hone wali ladkiya
inka number luga me…….
ookad me rhe kar baat kar…….
Facebook khol aur dekh kitnio….
I love you likha mujhe…..
jesi soch vesha khud…..
tu khud jealous feel kar raha hoga…..
aur ye jinke naam bhi thik nhi….
pehle to lagta tha abh poori tarah se yakeen ho gya k ye Rahul umar k sath sath akal mein b chhota hai
ise ladkiyan luv u bolti hain to ye apne aap ko dhanwaan samjh baitha hai
chalo frnds ek kaam karte hain hum sab….
is Rahul ko koi b response mat do.. iski kis b baat ka koi answer mat do… fir dekhte hai k kitni der tak tik pata hai ye yahan par
Oh Mr mai apni ookad me hi hu or mujhe dekha rha h kitni ladkiya tujhe offer krti h bolne ki to akal h nhi tujhe or rhi ookad ki BT apni ookad dekhyi na to tu gayab ho jayega
oh…. nikki wao….kya kaha….
me gayab huga ….is site se……
2010 se hu yaha ………..
or tu gayab karega…….karde.
yr mera dream hai ki me gayab ho jau..
bhai karde yr plz…bhai..keshav karde..
kuch bhi karuga tere liye karna jarur.
gayab karna ok…bhai ….aur kardena…
plzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz yr……
Frnds bye ye pgl ho gya h
me rahul ko support nhi karta……
but bhai jo tune shayari likhi hasha diya
yr….maja aa gaya aur likh de….
bhoot hashi aa rahi teri shayari read karke
ha ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha
ha ha
aditya aur Rachit
to yaha samajdar aaye …..
shayero ke jane ke baad phir se is site pe
pyaar aaye…..chalo….phado….
new love story….aur bewajhe muskuraye…….aur comment …
me ushe apni feeling bataye…
na ki bakwash shayari sunaye…
aur shayar ban jaye……
nice bhai….sach tune bhoot hasha ya
Rahul….
gajab…hai teri shayari aur funny bhi….
wao….nice….great bro great…………..
is Site me aa kr bahut achha laga
bye dosto milenge kbhi is website me aur….okkk gn frds
sab aashiq ko ke patake khatam ho gaye kya…. vijay ki mahi read karlo dewano….
Sabhi dosto se gujarish h ki plz yaro jhgda mat kiya karo.
Dosto ye jindgi sirf 2 din ki h.
Sabke sath prem se rho yaar.
Shiv ne kaha h ki me aaj ke bad comment nhi karunga.
Dosto shiv naraj h.
Friends me aapse wada karta hu ki shiv ko me wapish lekar aaunga.ok.
Ab ye narajgi khatam karo or sab lot kar aao.
Thanks all friends.
Rat gai,bat gai….
chlo aa jao sb…
mene apna wada tod diya h..
yar khud se kiye wade to tod skta hu???
kyu sahi bola na….
chlo sb agli story pe aa jao…
vijay ki mahiiii pe..??
aa jao vrna bhoot kha jayega …
chlo m vaha sbka wait kr raha hu…..
shiv ap bht achhi stories likhte ho…….ap bht achhe writer ho………………