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my poem

Fitrat Teri bdal rhi h  pr m ab bhi wahi hu..tere didar ko bhethe hum khidki me, rah Teri tak rahi hu.

Tu aaya  tha jb meri zindgi me subah ki trah..ab m sham ki trah dhl rhi hu.

Wkt bewkt tumse milkr jee uthna nyi subah ki trah..ab unhi  plo me Mr rahi hu.
Chahna tera mujko junun ki trah…ab bhuli yado si bisar rhi hu.
Tune di thi zindgi me dastk jb…usi pal ko kos rhi hu.

Jb the tum to phoolo si bhri  thi khushiya…ab kanto pr chlkr inhe kuchl rhi hu.

Tune hi di thi akele Me muskurane ki wjah…ab usi trah se ro rhi hu.

Tune kiya tha jb sre rah izhar-a-muhbbt…ab sre rah tujse ruthkr  Teri muhbbt kho rhi hu.

Tu aaj bhi chlta h muskurakr bazaro me…or m akele me ghut rahi hu.

Tune cchoda tha jis jagah muje….ab bhi wahi intjaar kr rhi  hu.
Tu bdal gya h mgar ab wkt ki trah …pr m pthar dil Bn thahr  gyi hu..
Fitrat Teri bdal rhi h pr m ab bhi wahi hu……..

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205 thoughts on “my poem”

  1. sorry guys… Is poem ka tital h” pr mai ab bhi vahi hu.((ena))..” meri mistek ki wjah se admin tital nhi dal paye.. sorry.
    and thank u so much all of u… 🙂

  2. Dp g admin(sunil Gupta ) g ne status me kya ajib likha h na

    Admin g syt thik krey nhi to rcnt cmnt hi kr dy n kya aap lovr point bana k bhul gye humlogo ki cmnt pade r hamari help krey plz plz plzzz

  3. Poem Bahut Achi Lagi Bt Ye Ena G Ne Likhi H Ya Aaisha Ne? Ya Ena G Aap Hi Aaisha Ho…. ???? Aaisha Agar Sn Rahi Ho To Pls 1 Baar Baat To Kar Lo Km Se Km. Mene Wada Nibhaya Me Door V Chala Gaya, Ab Baat Karke Fr Nahi Waps Chala Jaunga Agar Yaha Ho To Pls…

  4. Pgla gya h kya shubham
    Ye poem ena g ne likhi h

    Mein unhe janta hu meri favorite h

    Ye poem unhi ki hhhhhh

  5. Sonu Bhai Tumne Hi Kaha Tha Na 1 Cmnt Me, Or Kyo Tum Mese Hamesha Jhagdte Ho Jbki Me Aapko Kavi Kuch Nai Bola So Pls,

  6. Yr Tumne V To Dard Saha Tha To Ye Meri Bari Thi, Me Ijjat Se Hi Bolta Hu Aap Se To Aap Mera Majak Na Banao To Sahi Rahega Na Pls Aage Aap Ki Soch Bhai….

  7. dipika parmar

    ha sonu ji ye bat to he ki aap shubham ji se jhagdte kyu rehte he????,,,,,….sry bura lage to BT man Jo bat thi vo bol di….

  8. Yaha K Savi Dost Kaha Chale Gaye Sunil G Sir Ko Iska Old Format Wapas Karna Chahiye… Khair Bye Dosto 🙂

  9. Dipi G Aap V Na Name Me Kuch Jod Ya Ghata Dete Ho, 🙂 Mera “h” Hata K Zara Bahan K Laga Diya? 🙂 🙂

  10. Subh bhai bsc me aad lengy ladk padne me kamzor hoty h isliye late me clg jatey by d way ap ki age kya h

  11. Dipi Bahan Or Zara Bahan Me 1 Simple Sa Ladka Hu Mere Scimaths Sub H Is Baar Clg 1 Year Me Jaunga Btech Me

  12. Are Its Ok Yr Sonu Bhai Bs Ye Kahunga Kisi K Pyar Pr Ungli Nai Uthani Chahiye Sbki Apni2 Feelings Hoti H Apne Pyar K Liye M I Ri8 Dipi G Zari G!?

  13. Okk aap k liye koi hogi n hum dua krengy wo aapko jldi mil jaye n ab ye rona dhona ko side kry r hppy rhy byy

  14. Wo Baat To Sahi H Zari Bahan Bt Agar Sach Me Pyar Ho Jae To Bholana Muskil Se V Jada Mushkil Ho Jata H,yado Se Jitna Door Bhagte H Utna Hi Jada Yaad Aati H…. Khair Me Use Dosh Nai Deta. Bs Me Hohi Kuch Esa

  15. dipika parmar

    bhai muje cookies cream acchi lagti he BT normally alag alag flavor ki ice creams try karti hu…

  16. dipika parmar

    ha bhai mike to sonu ji ke pas tha mene unko diya tha last tym ..lvrs point ka mike leke ana sonu ji somi ko bulana he…

  17. Dp mike le liya na mai andar nhi jauga kanhi koi ladki line na mare
    Tum to janti mai bhi ekdam swami typ ka hu

  18. dipika parmar

    bhai lagta he sonu ji samne vali ko line Marne chale gae…uske liye hi vo sng tha varsha……

  19. dipika parmar

    ha bachungi jarur…BT koi nub de to me vo nub sonu ji ko dungi apko nai …me bhabhi ji ki acchi vali nanan hu …

  20. dipika parmar

    ha varsha aap mujse bade ho meri age 19 he…vese aap apko bade bhaiya chahie to vinod bhai bahot hi acche bhai he….

  21. Arey wah … Sonu… Kya baat …. Hai apka bhi dil chori ho gaya… Jao unke pass aur report likhwao

  22. Vinod Bhai khwab tha aur khwab hi reh gaye… Mjhe kabhi vianshu lekar hi nii gaye…. Nii toh zarur jati … Haa unhe shopping karte dekha h z square mei

  23. dipika parmar

    aap sab punjabidharti PR gaye the muje bataya hi nai is liye me naraj hu…akele akele chale gaye sab…

  24. DP…..mein tumhare alawa kisi or ke bree mein soch vvv niii skta

    Ab tum hi ho
    Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hooo
    Mera dard v
    Mera chain v

  25. Band kb hua tha
    hahahaha

    Kaho na pyar h
    Kaho na pyar h
    Hahaha

    Vinod bhai heena ne ye cmt pde pakka meri watt lagegi

    I miss u yrrrr

  26. dipika parmar

    to koi bat nai bhai me bhabhi se hi bate karungi vese v unki acchi vali nanan Jo hu…hahaha

    bhai sonu ji ko maleriya ho gaya he. .hahaha

  27. dipika parmar

    ha sonu ji agar bhai ko chappal pade aur apko v pade to darna mat me hu Na kam se kam chappal khilvaungi…kyuki bhabhi ko belan de dungi ..use aapko kam lagega…hahaha

  28. Hum tooo sachiiiein khud ko kho baide hhh……par pta niii abtk ummed niii chhodiii h….mein uska wait to kr rha huuu kash kisi mod pr vooooo dikhe

  29. Helo Dosto 🙂 🙂 Agla Gana Sonu Aap K Liye Leela Movei Se Arijit Singh Ki Aawaj Me ….. . Na Janu Me Kesi Ye Bekarari Hai, Shayad Dil K Jane Ki Ab Taiyari Hai, Tu Dil Ka Thikana Hu Tera Dewana, ……… Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaae Ye Marji Teri Tu Aae Na Aae…. Khair Zari G Dipi Bhn S Bhai N Vinu Bhaye Bye Bye Bye Bye … 🙂

  30. Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
    Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
    Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
    Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai
    Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
    Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
    Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
    Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage
    Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
    Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
    Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
    Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage
    Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
    Door reh reh kar fir se pass aane lage hai
    Fir se voh kyon yaad aah rhehe hai ..
    Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…

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