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The Lovers Point – Shiv Pandit

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Hello dosto apko pta h ki hmare is ghr me,jiska nam the lovers point
h,yaha chori chori do dil bhi mil rhe h..
Ye dil kiske h,ye to batane vali bat nai h..
mgr dono dil me se ek dil ka fon mujhe aya h.,,bs us fon ko ap suno…
line chalu h..
mere andaz me…
Mera nam usne babu rkha h..or mene uske kai nam nam rkhe h..
chotu,don,chori,bahut se nam..
Mgr psndida nam h chotu..
Chotu mujhse teen mahine phle isi site ke cmment me mili thi..
Uski meri bate hui..
fir mene use fb pe aane ka nyota diya..
chotu aa gyi..
meri chotu se roz bat hoti..
fir fon pr bat hone lg gai..
meri chotu bdi hi pyari h..ye bat mene bato me hi janli..
kyuki kisi ko janne ke liye chahra janna jaruri nai h..bs samne vale
ke khyal janno..hme insan smjh me aa jata h..
Meri chotu na bahut chulbuli h..
vo na htke h sb se..
ek bar usne ek pen churaya tha,jb vo 8 sal ki thi..
mgr vo pen uske bhai ne guma diya..
or usko mar bhi pdi thi pen ke liye..
mujhe chotu ki sari bate acchi lgti h.
vo mera bahut khyal rkhti h..
mera hal to paglo ki trh ho gya h.
hr wqt uske bare me hi sochta rhta hu..
chotu ko jb m khta hu ki ye kya ho rha h mujhe,to khti h esi hi halat
meri h babu..kyu karu??
Ek din rat ko m or chotu bat kr rhe the fon pr,to chotu boli ki babu
kya abhi tk nai hua..??
m smjh gya..
mene kaha ab to ho gya chotu..kya kru ..
chotu boli mujhe bhi ho gya babu..
Ye rat ke do baze sitaro ki gavahi me hm dono ka izhar tha ki muhbbt ho gyi h..
Ab uski gd mrng ki bina meri subah hoti hi nai..
M or chotu jb bat krte h to yaha ke sare dosto ki bat hoti h..
chotu khti h ki dekho na babu sb kitne acche h..
M ha ha ha khta rhta hu..
chotu ldko jese bal rkhti h..
Bolne me bhi ldko vala lhza rkhti h..
mgr dil…hay..mujhe to lgta h ki uska dil mere dil ke hi kisi hisse
ka tukda h..
ya mera dil uske hisse ka tukda..
kuch to jarur h..
Chotu na jock bahut sunati h..
sidhi si bat h ki hnsna hnsana chotu ki fitrt h.vo uske jocks se pta chlta h..
Esi h meri chotu…
dekhlo..??
age kya hoga khuda jane..
hm ye sochkr pyar krte h ek dusre se ki jitna wqt mila h,ek dusre ko
khus kr le,hnsa le or jra si muhbbt kr le..na jane kl kis ki nzr lg
jaye..
to ji bhr ke pyar krte h ek dusre se..
bs khuda vo din na dikhaye ki kisi din yahi isi site pr meri or chotu
ki brekp story btani pde..
kabhi na dikhaye esa din..
kyuki m ji nai paunga uske bina..
i love you chotu…so mch..inna chala..
iinnnnnnnnaaaaaaaa chaaaaalllaaaaaa
bahut challllaaaaaaa…
Accha ab fon rkhta hu shiv..bahut balance aa gya yar..
shiv..???shiv..??shiv..???
Sayad so gya…
Ya kisi kone me bethkr ro rha hoga..
Suna h muhbbt ki bate use rula deti h..
sory shiv..??
and by dosto…..

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570 thoughts on “The Lovers Point – Shiv Pandit”

  1. nikki jssl

    …………………………..
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    Aur Pyaar Ho Gya… Pyaar ki kisse sunte sunte…………..

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    1. kunal

      me kunal me sab girls se kehta hu aap Q kisiaache logoki pyar me zindagi barbad kar detiho “”Q kisi aache insan ko rulate ho “”Q kisi ke saat majak kar leti ho zindagi ki “”na jine dete ho na marne dete ho ladko ko par Qplz plz kisi ki life ya zindagi barbad m.t karnaplz sabko 4u meju whatapp par milo aur mujese chatting karo my nob 9527864881 muje bahtav Q yesa karti ho kisi ke saat only ladkiyo ke liye he ye mera sms jise bura lageo muje whatapp par jarur mile aapka kunal 4u 9527864881

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  33. nikki jssl

    aje to abhi
    tan ko to
    a ko hai ( nd Punjabi mein b likhne mein ‘hai’ hi hota hai.. bolne mein a b bol dete hain) theek hai Aliya

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  50. Kishan Sharma

    Kya kare nikki kabhi kabhi off ho jata h. Njane kyo hota h.
    Aaj nikki kuchh achha nhi lag rha h.
    Pta ni kyo kuchh der se khoya khoya lagta h.
    Aisa lagta h aaj fir aankhe nm hogi.

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  51. nikki jssl

    kyu g… mood kharaab hai kya aapka jo aise bol rahe ho aap
    .
    kahin aap apni story ka final part to ni likh rahe Krishna..?

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  60. aliya

    Adi mje bchpn se pnjabi language psnd h mai chahti thi mje koi pnjabi sikhye or mai pnjabi bolu…….mje na pnjabi me bat krne me maza arhi h 🙂

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  62. vinod ald

    beta aap ne mere se ye kyo kaha ki bhai mujhe bahut study karni hai aap mujhe yanha par bulana na but aap dusri site par ati thi beta aap ne mere sath aisa kyo kiya mere se jhut kyo bola kya yahi dosti yahi pyar hota hai

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  65. aliya

    Bhai us time mje laga k mai stdy ki vajeh se ni apaugi isliy boldiya tha pr agai …or ai to us site pr mera cmnt sbmit ni horha tha to is site pr gai …..or maine nupur di ko apko mssg dene k liye bola tha apko unhone bataya ni kya

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  83. nikki jssl

    acha agar nahi mila ho to bata deti hu
    .
    a mtlb hai (waise likhne mein Punjabi mein b ‘hai’ hi hota hai.. wo to hum log bolte a hain..ok)
    aje mtlb abhi
    tan mtlb to
    .
    abhi sabh clear ho gya na..

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  88. nikki jssl

    dinde means.. de rahe… ya fir diye
    .
    an main short mein haan ko likhti hu
    .
    d main short mein di ko likhti hu jiska mtlb hai ‘ki’.. e.g. us ki… is ki
    .
    abhi ok na

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  95. hitesh

    Meri lv life is site se suru hui n at last apni break up stry bhi yahi post ki thi
    Hope so k aap logo k saath aisa na ho
    When ur lv is true, tb always hurt hone k possibilities hoti h.. bt understatement ho to prblms k solutions nikal jaati h
    So try to be creat a mature relationship. .

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  96. smriti

    very beautiful nd wonderful story
    bahut achcha likhte ho shiv
    sabko love story sunate sunate ap phir se love ke chakkar me pad gaye

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  101. aliya

    Kis ldke ki bhn ne sikhaya apko……mje Punjabi kisike liy ni sikhni h …ye mera shauk hi h ..plz ap meri help karoge ..ap bhi meri tchr bn jao …….nikki mam to h hi ap bhi bn jao …nikki mam se to kitni Punjabi sikh gai hu mai

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    1. Sakshijain

      I am sorry main aapko uss ladke k bare main batana bhul gayi main ek ladke se bahut pyar karti hu maine kisi ko bhi yeh baat nahi batayi uss ladke ko bhi nahi

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  120. aliya

    Oh thnx adi ap agae ……ye rachit sbko bewakoof banarha h isi ne apki insult ki thi na or ab aisi bate krha h jese kch janta hi ni ho

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  123. Rachit

    yr…aap sab se me us pagal rachit
    ke badle…maafi maag…
    ta hu hath..jod..ke.plz…dosto..mujhe.yani
    rachit ko maaf kardo…im sorry…plz…
    aur dost banalo apna…..

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  128. Aditya

    Rachit maafi mangane kuchh nii hoga jo yaha apne sbko jo bola h khas kr aaliya ko wo bura laga mere ko..
    Rachit itna jaldi kaise Maafi mang rha h

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  129. Rachit

    yr…adi wo me nhi hui….wo rachit hai..
    me rachit hu …
    wo alag hai me alag hu…naam ek hai bas…
    uski soch gande wali..hai meri nhi hai….

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  137. Rachit

    yr…..wo
    me nhi hu…
    agar hota….wo to tum sab se bhoot nafrat karta hai…
    to kyu karta wo baat…
    me to kar raha huna…baat…aapse…

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    1. Sakshijain

      Pehli baat toh yeh confirm karo k kahi yeh koi aur to nahi kisi inosent ko agar humne punish kar diya toh yeh galat hoga kyonki jaroori nahi yeh wohi ho hum usse baat karke dekhte h

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  145. nikki jssl

    hello all frnds… n what happening there…?
    .
    what confusing arising within all of u…
    .
    would anybody likes to tell me.. what going on there…. haan?

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  170. nikki jssl

    nahi Aliya… mujhe nahi pata k use Punjabi aati hai ya nahi… lakin aap sab mujhe ye to batao k ye Rachit ka kya chakkar hai… j ek hi ladka do hone ki baat kare ja raha tha… n aap logon ne maan b liya.. mujhe kuch samajh ni aya

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  171. Shiv pandit

    Ha m bhi thik hi hu..
    accha ako ye khna h ki aj mene apse kuch bat kahi h..
    jo post hogi..
    ok
    Abki bar koi kahani nai h..
    bat h..
    to bat karoge mujhe..??

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  174. Shiv pandit

    Nikki ji ,sheenm ji,aaliya ji,aadi ji..ye ji…vo ji…
    kese h yar ap sb..
    chlo ek karoge..??
    apne apne jnmdin batao..
    bs date or month..??
    agr sal bhi btana chao to apki mrzi..??

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  178. aliya

    Atlst try to krskte hona adi …..mje bhi phle kha ati thi mai bhi to ulti sidhi bolkr thodi bht sikhi hu…ap bhi sikh jaoge

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  186. Shiv pandit

    To m sbse budha hu..
    31/10/1984
    chlo bhai lao meri chrii lado..
    jaye..accha baccho ap bate karo..
    m yu gya or yu aya..
    ok

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  191. Shiv pandit

    Aah ramji…
    jra sa chlkr aya hu..
    ghutne to javab dene lg gye h shenm.
    aj koi class nai..
    chlo ek ek jock likho sare..

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  195. nikki jssl

    main sunati hu…

    Santa Ki Beti Ko SMS Aaya “I LoVe U”
    Santa Gusse Me Beti Se;- Jisne sms Kiya Hai Usse To Mai Dekh Lunga …..Filhal Tum Uska Sms Use Wapis Bhejo

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  220. Rudra

    mera bday 17- 09-05
    and shiv bhaia aap ye btao ki mein aapko apni story kese btau …???
    mene apni angel se promise kiya h plzzz

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  222. Yashi ray

    shiv pehli bat ye ki maine apki 2 poems padhi h jo dono hi mujhe bht achi lgi bht mohbt h apke andr aur use bi jada shyd dard h jo maine apke poems ko presnt krne k andaz se samjha hr kisi ke emotions ko feel kr k likhna hr kisi ke bs ki nh

    aur 2sri bat ye ki plz apke andr jo talent h use is site pe brbaad na kre apne ye kavita likhi mushkil se kitno ne comnt kie quki ye log nh samjhte story likhne wala sif story nh likhta wo in logo se apne emotns ko share krta h feelng share krta h aur ye log chit chat start kr dete h are yr kya ab bs yahi reh gya h mei nh manti jo log social sites use krte h wo fb use nh krte agr tum logo ko bate hi krni h waha jake kro log yaha suggestion mangte h unki help kro apni bakwas mt start kro aur agr yaha kisi ko ye galtfehmi h ki is site k logo pe aasani se trust kia ja sakta h toh wo ye galtfehmi dur kr le plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  224. Rudra

    yashi ji…shiv bhaia ko dard h jabhi do wo dusro k dard ko baant kar unhe khusiya dete h or dusro ko khusiya dena har kisi k bas ki bat nhi ese insaan is sansar m bhut kam hote h…

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    1. Mr.Rotlu

      sahi baat kahi bhai
      Dusro ko khushi deker apna gum chupana aasan nahi hai
      Khushi deker khud khush dikhane wale ander bahut hi dard rakhte hai

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  226. Shiv pandit

    Sory yashi ji….
    ab nai bolunga…
    or rudra bhai ap mujhe sms kr dena mujhe…
    mere no.khidki vali sheet story pe h ..vaha se lekr kr dena..
    ok rudra bhai..
    ok yashi ji..

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  228. nikki jssl

    hi Aditi… aapne jis story par cmt padhne ko kaha tha maine us jagah par aapka cmmt to read kiya hai lakin mujhe kuchh samajh ni aya k aap kya kahna chahti ho.. nd aapne help mangi thi to bataiye hum aapki kyaa help kr sakte hain..?

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  244. nisha

    Na jane ye nazare q udaas rhti h………..
    Na jane inhe kis ki tlaas rhti h….
    Ye jankr bi vo kismt me nhi h…..
    Fir bi unhe pane ki ek aas rhti h….
    …… Miss u …… !Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho —
    Kuch na khe ..
    Par phir b baate sabhi ho
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Tum dur bhi kyu na ho..
    Tanha hum na rahe
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Tum khwha na ho..
    Tab bhi hum mnanane aaye
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Barsaat ka masuam na b ho ..
    Tab bhi bheeg jaaye hum
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Hum jab aaye ..
    Tuje aayine ki jrurt na ho..
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Ek Din Esa Bhi Ho
    Hum likhte rhe
    Bs yu hi..raat bhar
    Ek Din Esa Bhi to Ho nisha

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  248. nisha

    ज़िन्दग़ी में तो सभी प्यार किया करते हैं
    मैं तो मर कर भी मेरी जान तुझे चाहूँगा।

    तू मिला है तो ये अहसास हुआ है मुझको
    ये मेरी उम्र मोहब्बत के लिए थोड़ी है।
    इक ज़रा-सा ग़म-ए-दौराँ का भी हक़ है जिसपर
    मैंने वो साँस भी तेरे लिए रख छोड़ी है।
    तुझ पे हो जाऊँगा क़ुर्बान तुझे चाहूँगा
    मैं तो मर कर भी मेरी जान तुझे चाहूँगा।

    अपना जज़्बात में नग़मात रचाने के लिए
    मैंने धड़कन की तरह दिल में बसाया है तुझे।
    मैं तसव्वुर भी जुदाई का भला कैसे करूँ
    मैंने क़िस्मत की लकीरों से चुराया है तुझे।
    प्यार का बन के निगाह-बान तुझे चाहूँगा
    मैं तो मर कर भी मेरी जान तुझे चाहूँगा।

    तेरी हर चाप से जलते हैं ख़यालों में चिराग
    जब भी तू आए जगाता हुआ जादू आए।
    तुझको छू लूँ तो फिर ऐ जान-ए-तमन्ना मुझको
    देर तक अपने बदन से तेरी खुशबू आए।
    तू बहारों का है उनवान तुझे चाहूँगा।
    मैं तो मर कर भी मेरी जान तुझे चाहूँगा।

    –

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  249. nisha

    मुझे तुम नज़र से गिरा तो रहे हो
    मुझे तुम कभी भी भुला न सकोगे।
    न जाने मुझे क्यों यक़ीं हो चला है
    मेरे प्यार को तुम मिटा न सकोगे।

    मेरी याद होगी जिधर जाओगे तुम
    कभी नग़मा बन के, कभी बन के आँसू।
    तड़पता मुझे हर तरफ पाओगे तुम।
    शमा जो जलाई है मेरी वफ़ा ने
    बुझाना भी चाहो बुझा न सकोगे।

    कभी नाम बातों में आया जो मेरा
    तो बेचैन हो-हो के दिल थाम लोगे।
    निग़ाहों में छाएगा ग़म का अँधेरा।
    किसी ने जो पूछा सबब आँसुओं का
    बताना भी चाहो बता न सकोगे।

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  272. Shiv pandit

    Are wah shenu…
    wah…kya bat h..
    Agr kisi se kuch kaha to dekhna pachtaoge..
    nam katil ka liya to dekhna pachtaoge..

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  274. Aditya

    Kabhi tum muje kareeb se aa k deknaAise nahi jara aur paas aa k dekhna,Main tum se kitna pyar karta hoon,Mujhe kabhi seene se laga kar dekna,Main tuje ashko ki kataar me najar aaungaMeri yaad main kabhi aansu baha k dekna,Meri ghazal pad kar bhi tum par asar na hoToh logo ko meri ghazal suna ke dekhna….

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  275. Aditya

    “Zindagi ka pehla pyaar kon bhulata hain,Ye phli bar hota h jb koi kisi ko khud se badhkar chahta h…Uski pasand, uski khwahish me khud ko bhul jata h,Akele mein uska naam likh likh kar mitata h…Baat karne se phle sochta h, kya kehna h.,Baat hone ke baad fir kuch kehna reh jata h..Hota h itna khoobsurat pehla pyar,Toh jane kyun aksar adhoora reh jaata h…

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  283. Aditya

    मोहब्बत करने वाले ना जीते है ना ही मरते है,फूलों की चाह मैं वो काँटों पर से गुजरते है!

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  284. Aditya

    Ek pal ki judai gawara na kar sakeAisa ishq hum dobara na kar sakeZindagi bhar palat ke naa dekha kabhiHum fir v shikwa tumhara naa kar sakeTune toh har kisi se dil laga ke dekhaMagr hum apne dil ko awara na kar sakeJaan tak luta di un ke pyar mein magar…Ek dil hi woh apna humara naa kar sake..

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  285. Aditya

    Taqdeer ne jese chaha vese dhal gye humBahut sambhal k chale fir bhi fisal gye humKisi ne viswas toda toh kabhi kisi ne dil,Aur logon ko lagta hain ki badal gaye hu

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  290. Aditya

    Ab na bato ki jarurat hai, nigaho se ab sari baat kijiyeBada ujala hai aapke noor se, julfe khol k ab raat kijiyeBadi muddat se intjar me hu, aapke sirhane nind ke liyeApni baho ka sahara deke mjhe ye haseen khawab dijiye

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  291. Aditya

    Raho meri zulfon ki parchhayi meinAur toot kar mujhko pyaar karo….Aaj mai mai na rahu, aj mai “tum” ho jauApne pyaar se aisa mera shringaar karo

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  292. Aditya

    Tujhse roo-ba-roo hokar baate karu,Nigahe milakar wafa ke waade karu,Thaam kar tera hath bethu tere samne,Teri haseen surat ke main najare karu,Sharma kar najro se tera kuch chupke keh jana,Teri nigahon ke wo ishare samjhoo,Teri har ek ada par kar doo kayi shayari,Har lafz mein waafa ke daawe karu,Sambhale nahi sambhalti ‘jaana’ ye dil ki tadap,Tu hi bata main kab tak yu aahein bharu

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  293. Aditya

    Tum haseen ho, gulab jaisi ho,Bahut nazuk ho khawab jaisi ho,Hothon se lagakar pee jaun tumheSir se paanv tak sharab jaisi ho…!!

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  297. Aditya

    Koi hain jiska ess dil ko intjaar hain..Khyalo mein bas usi ka khayal hain..Khushyaan main saari us par luta duChahat me uski mai khud ko mita duKab ayega vo jiska es dil ko intjaar h

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  341. sheenam

    “uski baaten to phool ho jese, bake baaten babool ho jese….
    uska hans kr nazar jhuka lena,
    sari shrten kabul ho jese….
    kitni dilkash h uski khamoshi,
    sari baaten fizul ho jese….
    uski baaten to phool ho jese,
    baki baten babool ho jese…”

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  350. aliya

    Zindagi me mushkile tamam h ,
    Fir bhi in hoto pr muskan h ,
    Q ki jina jb hr hal me h ,
    To fir muskurakr hi jine me kya nuksaan h ……

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  351. Shiv pandit

    Yar ek to aap jldi bdaa jate ho..
    or m rat ko let bdaa sota hu..
    Yuhi yar pta to h rat ko m usko khyalo me bulata hu..??
    Kal mene uske nam ek khat likha tha…
    to likhte likhte let ho gyi…??
    kal ke liye mafi dedo or aaj ke liye gd mrng lelo..
    hisab barabr…hahahahahah
    gd mrng dosto…

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  357. sheenam

    bhai maine apse real me to kbi bat ni ki bh apka lehja bht meetha h, rat jb apne sheenu baccha kaha to bht acha lga yu lga k jese apne mere sr pe hath rakh k kaha ho sch me bht acha lga mjhe.

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  359. Shiv pandit

    Koi nai aaliya ji..
    sory jitni bar to nai h..
    kher..wlcm on sndy mhfil…
    jo bhi jb aaye kuch sunake jaye..
    Agr kuch na bhi aaye to do char mujhe bauri bate hi suna jaye..
    to chlo ye rha mera….
    duniya me koi bhi ek jna dusre ke pyar ka andaja nai lga skta..
    ki samne vala hmse kitna pyar krta h..
    Isliye yakiin kare…or itna kare…ki koi jb tk sath ho ..va kisi ko ye na kahe …ki mujh pr koi yakiin nai krta…
    hr riste pr yakiin kare..or un risto pr jyada kare jo nazuk hote h…
    kyu sheenu..sahi kaha na..??
    btao to in sb ko?.??

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  362. Shiv pandit

    Are to sahi hi kaha tha..
    rat me itni let ap yu kisi kahaniyo ke niche jag rhi thi..
    mujhe fikr hui ki kya bat h..
    Or kya hq nai bnta mera khne ka..??

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  367. Shiv pandit

    Accha ….??
    aaliya…..
    dekho ek bat btau..ap sbko..
    hm sb alg alg jgh se h..
    sayad hi koi milta hoga ek dusre se…
    Sb apne apne shr ke soft heart bande….
    kuch ldkiya kuch ldke…
    sb dost…ek dusre ke..or dost jyada hmdrd…
    dil se salam h yar sbko..
    ek sher sune…
    mujhe itni furst kaha ki apni hnshi dekhu…
    dosto ke khush chehre dekhkr smjh jata hu..khush hu m…

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  368. sheenam

    bhai hq bnta h apka, sch me mjhe bht acha, ankhe bhr ayi meri or maine ankhe bnd krli. or uper jo bi kaha apne sahi kaha, rishto pr yakeen hona chaiye jese mjhe h ap pe bhai.

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  369. Shiv pandit

    Are aaj nisha ji nai aayi..??
    pta h nisha ji jb ati h to sher ki balti bhr ke lati h..
    or hm pr udel jati h..
    bhigo jati h hme ehsaso me..
    aaj aayi nai..??
    o nishha ji sndy chutti h mgr hm fir bhi nahate h..
    Shero se nahalaa jao…??
    sory nisha ji jock spat..

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  371. Shiv pandit

    Bahut aacha h sher sheenu..
    sher hmesha acche hi hote h..
    kyuki…
    so bar zhn ki bhtti me taptaa h..
    tb kahi jakr ek sher pkta h……

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  372. Shiv pandit

    Or krishna..ji..
    khat admin ko bheja to h..
    kya pta post kre na kre..
    kyuki site kahanio ki h na..
    ram jane..
    aaye to pdh lena..
    nai to ghr dairy to h hi..
    usme pdh lena…

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  378. nisha

    Khush h wo hme yaad na krke…
    Has rhe h wo hmse bat na krke….
    Ye hansi unke hotho se kbi na jaye….
    Khuda kre wo hmari mout par bi muskuraye….
    …… Sorrry …….. ;(;(! — feeling sad.

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  384. nisha

    Unki galiyon ki hawa har dard ki dawa ban gayi……
    Doori unki meri chaahat ki saza ban gayi……
    Kaise bhooloon unhein ek pal ke liye…….
    Unki yaad toh jeene ki vajah ban gayi……..
    …….. I _ _ _ _ you baby……! —

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  387. nisha

    Aap jise chaho apna andaz de dena………….
    Muje sirf chand alfaj de dena……….
    Nazrein dunia ki jab aapko tanha chhod de……….
    Us modPER NISHA ko ek aawaz de dena……
    …………. I miss u baby………..! —

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  396. aliya

    Hiiii pradeep ji ki hal a…..
    Inne dino se kit the the tusi ………pradeep ji aditya ye site chodke chala gya h plz aditya ko bulao na …………

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  402. aliya

    Gunah krke saza se drte h ,
    Zhr pike dwa se drte h ,
    Dushmno k sitm ka khauf nhi hme ,
    Hm to dosto k khfa hone se drte h ……

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  403. aliya

    Gunah krke saza se drte h ,
    Zhr pike dwa se drte h ,
    Dushmno k sitm ka khauf nhi hme ,
    Hm to dosto k khfa hone se drte h ……,,,,,,………
    :;:;:;;;

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  444. aliya

    Tum bhi kitni ajib mhbbt krte ho ,
    Baat karo to esa lgta h k sirf mere ho or na karo to esa lgta h jese jante hi nhi ho …….

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  448. aliya

    Bulndi ki udan pr ho to zra sbr karo ,
    Prinde batate h k asman me thikane nhi hote ……
    .
    .
    ..
    Koi mere sher surha h ya mai akele bdbda rhi hu

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  452. sheenam

    nhi uttrakhand.
    meri khud ki likhi hui 2 line sune.
    “Wo hakikt bhi h, spna bhi,
    Wo ajnabi bi h apna bhi,
    use pane ki tamanna nhi h mjhe,
    wo nhi h kahi or hai mujh me bhi”
    kesa lga

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  453. aliya

    Maa se bdh kr koi naam kya hoga ,
    Is naam ka hmse ehtaram kya hoga ,
    Jiske pairo k niche jnnt h uske sr ka makam kya hoga …. 🙂

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  457. aliya

    Khuda salamt rkhe unhe Jo mjse nfrt krte h ,
    Pyar na shi , kch to h Jo sirf mjse krte h …….
    Mai jau kya koi meri shayri pr kch ni bolrha h
    🙁

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  463. aliya

    Shyd fir WO taqdeer mil jay ,
    Jeevn k WO hseen pal mil jay ,
    Chal firse bait he WO clss ki last bnch pe ,
    Shyd waps wo purane dost mil jay…..

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  488. aliya

    Adi ji sirf thk lgta h apko WO song ……..
    Mje to song se zyada usme tigr shrf accha lgta h jb …jb WO song me phli br bolts h na mere naal turn whistle bja tb bht swt lgta h …….accha 3rd time by

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  490. aliya

    Adi abhi Maine dnnr ni ki hu …
    Bht bhook lagi isliy jarhi hu Khan ab kal bat krte h …..
    Aj sblog spne me bhi sher o shayri karoge …..

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  523. Shiv pandit

    kabhii yuu.N bhii aa merii aa.Nkh me.n ke merii nazar ko Khabar na ho
    mujhe ek raat navaaz de magar uske baad sahar na ho
    [navaaz – to grant]
    vo ba.Daa rahiim-o-kariim hai mujhe ye sifat bhii ataa kare
    tujhe bhuulane kii duaa karuu.N to duaa me.n merii asar na ho
    [rahiim-o-kariim – kind & generous; sifat – talent]
    mere baazuo.n me.n thakii thakii , abhii mahav-e-Khvaab hai chaa.Ndanii
    na uThe sitaaro.n kii paalakii, abhii aahaTo.n kaa guzar na ho
    ye Gazal ki jaise hiran kii aa.Nkho.n me.n pichhalii raat kii chaa.Ndanii
    na bujhe Kharaabe kii roshanii, kabhii becharaaG ye ghar na ho
    vo firaaq ho yaa visaal ho, terii yaad mahakegii ek din
    vo gulaab ban ke khilegaa kyaa, jo chiraaG ban ke jalaa na ho
    kabhii dhuup de, kabhii badaliyaa.N, dil-o-jaa.N se dono.n qubuul hai.n
    magar us nagar me.n na qaid kar jahaa.N zindagii kii havaa na ho
    kabhii din kii dhuup me.n jhuum ke kabhii shab ke phuul ko chuum ke
    yuu.N hii saath saath chale.n sadaa kabhii Khatm apanaa safar na ho
    [shab – night]
    mere paas mere habiib aa zaraa aur dil ke qariib aa
    tujhe dha.Dakano.n me.n basaa luu.N mai.n ke bichha.Dane kaa kabhii Dar na ho
    [habiib – beloved]

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  524. Shiv pandit

    Hi nishu…kesi ho…?? Babu…
    Pta h tholi chi yad chi aai tumali mekoooo…..
    to j kahani pdh li ..
    sacchi nishudi bahut mich klta hu tumhe..
    jinghli pingli..mene kl che chiglet ni pi..ol tu chath lhegi to ni piunga janudo manudi….
    ka kl li h aaja to…
    jlli che ana..ol ek bat kahu..
    cho mch lv u klta hu tumche babudi….
    innaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa chala..

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  527. Shiv pandit

    Babu chab ji …ek bat btana to….
    Ku ho itne pale pale ap..
    Konchi mithai khate ho jo itnnnneeeeeeee chweet ho..?????
    btana to jla cha….

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  528. nisha

    Hi babu tholi chi Tution me busy hu to tension mt Lena babu choli ol m bhi but Mich kl lhi hu apko but pal klti hu thankyou bolti hu is site ko ki jisne hme milaya

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  529. nisha

    Pale to him the nhi but apne hme bna diya babu JI …..
    Aap bta to do ye innna pal krna kha che chikha hai apne..
    Aul meli tlf Che dil che thankyou cho much again and again aul Mich u and love you forever mele laza beta

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  530. Shiv pandit

    Thank u kich liye re…
    ku bolti h echa..
    ale mele tingu pingu che bete chab ji agl m un chb bato ke liye thank u bolu jo tumne mele chath ki h..mujhe kitni chali khusi di apne nicha jiiiiii…
    to itne thank u bnte h ki ap lete lete thak jaoge babu chab..

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  532. Shiv pandit

    Accha ji babu chab ji…ap jla che bzy lgte ho??.koi ni ji…bad me bat kl lena….m to yahi milunga..inhi kahaniyo me,inhi ghzlo me…
    jate jate…..
    Sunlo

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  533. Shiv pandit

    shabanam ke aa.Nsuu phuul par ye to vahii qissaa huaa
    aa.Nkhe.n merii bhiigii hu_ii.n cheharaa teraa utaraa huaa
    [shabanam=dew; qissaa=incident/happening]
    ab in dino.n merii Gazal Khushbuu kii ik tasviir hai
    har lafz gu.nche kii tarah khil kar teraa cheharaa huaa
    [lafz=word]
    ma.ndir gaye masjid gaye piiro.n fakiiro.n se mile
    ik us ko paane ke liye kya kyaa kiyaa kyaa kyaa huaa
    shaayad ise bhii le gaye achchhe dino.n ke qaafile
    is baaG me.n ik phuul thaa terii tarah ha.Nsataa huaa
    [qaafilaa=caravan]
    gd ev. Nishu….

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  538. irfan ali

    Niceeee yr

    Jab Jab Aata Hai Ye Barsaat Ka Mausam,
    Teri Yaad Hoti Hai Sath Humdum,
    Is Mausam Mein Nahi Karienge Yaad Tujhe Ye Socha Hai Humne…
    Par Phir Socha Ki Baarish Ko Kaise Rok Paayeinge Hum….

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  545. nisha

    Hello shiv janti hu babu ki aap do din me sfr
    Me thak gae ho isliye mai apko presan nhi
    Krungi bilkul vaise bhi apne muje akela kbhi mhsus nhi hone diya jbse app meri life me aae ho
    Pta nhi kyo lekin an jindgi jina acha lagta h muje aap muje but pyar krte ho ye bhi janti hua par pta nhi kai bar muje ek Sapna sa lagta hai ye SB kyoki maine kbhi nhi socha tha ki muje meri hi life me koi itna pyar krne wala itni care krne wala milega isliye m shan’t baith gai thi
    Ye bat nhi ki life meri phle nhi chl rhi this but Jo din 6 November k bad aae hai ye pta nhi kya hai kyoki aap itna pyar muje Jo dete ho apne muje kbhi akela nhi feel hone diya but m apse ek batb khungi ki babu jindgi me SB jruri hai to aap mummy papa ka khyal rakhna air sath me apna bhi baki muje aapse milker but Khushi hui hai air a age bhi hogi thanks shiv gud nite

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