kitni awaaze lagaa raha hoon main
aapko kab se bulaa raha hoon main
hone ko hai qayamat ab to aaiye
chiraag dekhiye bhujaa raha hoon main
Rah mai na mod hai na koi manzil
aise raaste pe jaa raha hoon main
woh karta hai duae mere marne ki
zindagi us par lutaa raha hoon main
Dard se ab rista sa ho gaya hai
khushiyon se tang aa raha hoon main
itne zakham pal rahe hain seene mein
khoon aankhon se bahaa raha hoon main
Mohabbat ki aag kaise lagi meri zindagi mai
Apni cigarette bhujaa raha hu mai
ye apne dil ke tukde to utthaa loon zara…!!
ghoor ke na dekho jaa raha hoon main
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arey wah… ek ek line tareef k kabil h Mohsin g… wakei.. bahut khoob likha h aapne
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ek baat or.. mujhe lagta h ab zra trend sa ban gya h.. sab story likhne k baad poems likhne me jyada interest dikha rahe h…
kyu..sahi kah rahi hu na m.. ha.. ?
ik tarah se craze sa peda ho gya h sabme… poems likhne ka… vese apna hunr dikhane ka achha mauka h ye… gud luck Mohsin n all frnds…
waaao yrr mohsin….
Awesome yrr….
wakayi tarif k kabil h..bahut a6i poem h…ghoor ke na dekho jaa raha hoon main….
Monish
really love ur poem……
its to good… very nice poetry….
ghoor k mat dekho wrna pyar ho jaega….
ha ha ha ha…
sach me tareef k kabil h….
Aese hi thodi na kisi ki fan hu mai….
Nice poem mohsin bhai
Too gud yrr bht achcha likha
mohsin aapki likhi poem bahut achi hai….
bahut acha likhte Hai aap…
Sab ki apni apni imagination hoti magar apki poem ki baat hi kuch aur hai…..great poem…..
wow superb….
really mohsin ur poem is toooo good….
u r ri8 shiwani tum awaii uski fan nhi ho…
mohsin k likhne ka andaz hi nirala h
koi bhi deewana ho jayega..
ab kaise kahu k mai bhi aapki fan ho gyi hu…
agr har koi aapki tarif karega to baaki writers ka kya hoga…
hahahahahaha sry just kidding…
aapke poem ki last 2 lines bahut acchi h…
Thanks apni poem hamare sath share karne k liye…
Mohsin ji bapne bahut hi achchhi poem likhi h yr
Lgta h ap bi koi jkham ke mare se lgte ho
Koi dhoka de gyi kya yr city wali to ni h yr
Nice poem dost aise hi likhte rho life m
God gd bless yuo
Thanx 2 all guyz….
Mujhe samjhne ke liye….
Aur aap sab ke liye arz kiya hai….
Ab itni bhi tareef mat karo
Pak gaya hu mai…
Thanks guyz…
Thanx once again
Bindu ji mostly har ek ki love story to ek hi hoti hai….use wo bar bar iss site pe likhe ga to padh ke har koi bor ho jayega….aur rahi baat poetry ki to poetry mai apne feeling ko express karne ka maza hi kuch aur hota hai…
arey esa b hota h kabhi… yr tareef se pakk gye. mene to suna tha log fool jate h…
😉
or aap… apni hi tareef se pakk gye
g mohsin m jaanti hu.. kam shabdon me explain jyada karna.. isi ko to poetry kahte h…
Thanx 2 bindu, pk, sahar, irfan, crazzy ayesha, heena, jigar,subhash and shiwani….
Thank you very much
Good …keep it up…….
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Nai nai paka nai hu….
Kya hai hum boyz ko zyada tareef pasand nai hoti…tareef to ladkiyo ko pasand hoti hai jitni bhi tareef karo kam hi lagta hai ladkiyo ko
achha g…
haan bhyi.. aapko esa hi lagega..
tareef sabko pasand hoti h
chahe wo ladka ho ya fir ladki.. haan ladkiyaan jatla deti h..or ladke ese hi bade bade dil hone ka dikhawa kr andar hi andar maza lete h.. 😉
chaliye khair.. jo b ho
aaphi ne kaha pak rahe ho.. aphi ne kah diya paka nahi
chaliye humne b sab maan liya
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or ye b ki tareef sun kr itne khush ho ki aapko pata hi ni chal raha ki kya kahu
ha ha ha ha.. 😉
Ji bilkul bhi nai….
Hame tareef pasand hai lakin jo dil se ki jaye….
Lakin ladkiya ko to thodi si bhi tareef kar do to hawa mai udne lag jati hai…aur jis din tareef na karo us din to bande ki khair nai….
arey Mphsin g.. aap to mukable pe utar aaye
khair choodiye is baat ko…
kyunki baat se batangad ban raha h… m just kidding wid u.. nothing else… or kisi ki soch badlne ka mera koi irada nahi h.. agar aap esi soch rakhte h to.. koi baat ni.. rakh sakte h… or kavitayen likhte raho… best of luck
sry name typing me mistake ho gyi.. Mohsin g
mohsin jyada mt pkna nhi to log kha jayenge sorry…. gud mrng frnds
Nai nai nai….
Mai to bas apke sath mazaak kar raha tha…aap to serious ho gayi….k im sorry…
N by d way aap mujhe kuch bhi bola sakti hai…mphsin bhi
Kon khayega bhai???
Raat bhar jalta raha yeh dil usi ki yaad mein..
Samajh nhi aata dard pyar krne se hota hya yad krne se
LADKA aur LADKI ek car me khamosh se ..
ja rhe the..!!
LADKA 1 letter LADKI ko deta hai…..!!
LADKI letter padhane
se
pehle hi LADKE ko kheti hai
ki mujhe
aab tum se pyar nhi hai
mai tumhe chhod
rhi hu
achanak ek tez raftar
wali car
unki
car se takar gyi LADKA usi
waqt
mar gaya
LADKI bach gahi phir LADKI ne wo letter
khola..!!
to uski ANKHON se ansu gir pade us…!!
letter me likha
tha “jis din tum mujhe chhod dogi ..!!
usi waqt hi Mai
# MAR Jauonga……!!
“सबके कर्ज़े चुका दूं मरने से पहले, ऐसी मेरी नियतं हैं,
मौंत से पहले तूं भी बता दे ज़िन्दगी, तेरी क्या किंमत हैं.”
Dhansu poem yr………..
ye line bhut hi aachi h
“dard se ab rista sa ho gya….
kushiyo se tang aa raha hu mein”
kaha se late ho yr………
superhit, mind blowing,awesom,….
Hi…….sonu
Yaha aane se mein khud ko rok ni paya…….
tum jaise kamine dosto ko chhodne ka mn ni krta……….
by c u
Kha h…SB aaj
Thanx bro
assalam alekum mohsin… or apne bht acha likha h… very nice poem
Walaikum Assalam….
Thank you sheenam
GM…mohsin
nicesssss poem….
Heyy mohsin where r u..
Hi shiwani….
Kaha hai aap????
Kaha hai aap shiwani….
Kabse wait kar raha hu mai
Shiwaniiiiiii
Kaha ho yar…???
yaaar itni tez bulaya tmne mere ghr tk awaaz aayi….
isliye aana pada….kese ho
K sorrrry….
Aana pada matlab….
Aap nahi chahti thi kya????
Lagta hai busy hai aap??
Lagta hai buhat hi zyada busy hai….
Rply karne ka bhi time nahi hai…
K….
Kal agar free ho aap to baat kijye ga…
Abhi ke liye
Good night
Take care. …bye
Good morning mohsin..
sry tmhe wait krna pada….
Its k…..
Kaisi hai aap? ???
Kaha ho yrr tm..plz reply karo
Hiii Vani how are you?
Heyyy mohsin kaha ho….
mai achchi hu….