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Hame to usme doobna hai – Sam

Ye halki halki si dhundhali  hava .., chaaha tha, bas ek baar chhooe mujhe….
jaane kitane minnate kiye ki ek baar hi sahi use mere taraph bhi bahne do,
ek baar hi sahi  najadeek se mahasoos karne do ..
bas ek baar kaho usse ki mere taraph bhi nigahen kare ..
kuchh door hi sahi, kuchh door saath baha le chale,
ab doosaro ke taraph bahne dekhna aadat na banane do!
uska bahna kya laaharaana tha, …
yoon to vo havaon ko samet ke rakhati thi…
par jab bhi jhulf kholti ..,
mai kya, koi kya, poori kaaynat bikhar jaati…. uski kadamo tale!
yoon to kahin bhi, kabhi bhi … maine dikhlya nahi,
ki mai bechain nhi… use saanson mei bharne ko,
ki auro ki tarah mujhe chaahat nhi … use khud me sametane ko,
ki mujhe intjar nahi…. tera mujhme milne ka,
ki mujhe hairat nahi… unki is karishme par,
ki mujhe hairat nahi …. uski dil churaane ki hunarbaajiyo par!
minnate kiye ki bas vo chaahiye … Krta bhi kaise nahi, uski aankho me mujhe saara jahaan dikha.., manjil vhi dikhi … to avaraagee thahar gayi!
uski aankho ka kaajal … vo raat, .. mere kuchh bheege ihasaas,
mukhara …. chaand,
to hoth …. nadi,
bole to lage … bahati ganga,
badan …. chandan!!
main bhi to unka hi ansh hu, kar di meenat poori!
bahane lagi vo mere taraph, ..
ya yoon kahu, ki bahaane lagi mujhe apani taraph,
shukun tha, ki bahne do … doobaana to usi me hai ..
main usme bahta raha aur vo sagar me,
par vo bhool gayi….. Sagar manjil kisi ek ka nahi,
shaayad vo, .. ulta bahna bhi chaahe .. par nadiyon ka ye kar paana bhi sambhav nahi hai,
idhar .. ham bhi toot gaye .. bahut dhaaraen bani aur kuchh mujheme mil gayi ..
par hame to usme doobana hai !!

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53 thoughts on “Hame to usme doobna hai – Sam”

  1. Hm masum to bnenge dii… Hme bhi janana h ki maine kha se copy ki h ap bta skti ho to batao n…. Apna ar mera time n brbad kro

    1. Thnkuu Angel for supporting me…. But ye poem copy nhii h ar agr suhana didi ko lgta h ki copy kiya gya h to wo bata de ki kha se copy kiya gya h…. Mujhe janana h

      1. koi bt ni paresan q ho rhe maine to phle ni padi mere liye to copy hui b hogi to ni h aur b kai log honge jinhone ni padi hogi

  2. Khud me agar kala h toh batao kisiki poem par thoda bohat edit karke kya natak kiya h apne sir ji… Hum izat sehi baat kar rahe h warna hum aapki shaan me aagayenge toh apko acha nhi lagega. Thoda adab se baat karo bhaiya. Ok ????????????????????

    1. Suhana didi hmne bola to ki ap hme iski original poem hi dikha do jisme se thoda bhut edit kiya hu…. Batao suhana didi kha se copy kiya gya h ar edit kiya gya h.. Mujhe janana h

  3. Sam maine infact hm se kayi logon ye poem pehli baar read ki h.. Awesome poem h.. Ans kisi ke kuch bi kehne se farq ni padna chahiye sam.. Spclly Suhana disi jaise faltu logon se bilkul farq ni pdna chahiyw.. So dnt wry jst enjoy!

  4. Mind your zabaan maahi sis…
    Aapse hum ne kuch bola kya ????????????
    Aap toh aise jalrahe ho jaise hum ne aapki shaan me gustaqi ki h… Sis Faltu hi ham ok
    Aap toh bohat achi or akkal mand hona isliye abhitak khud ki taraf se kabhi poem nhi ki churakar khudka naam dekar poem submit karti ho….. ????????
    Are hum toh faltu hai isliye abhitak hum aapje jaisa fake kisiki poem ko lekr khudka naam nhi lagate….. ????????????

    Ab bolo faltu kaun h.
    Pehle faltu bolnese pehle khudka zameer jhanklo sis…. Batonme wazan hina chahiye pehle khud kuch karke dikhao.

    ????????????

    1. hey i don’t know who r u??
      tumhe sarm ni kya thodi se b..
      mera nam angel h smjhi ap mai to sam ko ni janti poem padi maine uski bht hua apka smjhi ap..
      bs bakwas mt kro ap ap kisi ko b kuch b bol degi smjhti kya h ap apne ap ko.
      i hope apko smjh aya ho ki mai angel hu not sam ..

  5. Hello… Sam ki aatma….!
    Thoda adabse baat karo kahathana
    ???????? humare bareme yeh site pe logonko puchlena ok.
    Aur sam g… Ladki banna itna hi acha lgta h toh
    Dic k pass chale jao female banjaoge ????????????????

    1. had ho gyi tm jaise faltu log hi h jihne farq amjh ni ata ladke ya ladki me smjhi
      tameej se boli hu mai ab tk tmse thoda sa dimag hota n to ab tk tm pahchan gyi hoti typing se ya fir bolne k tarike se mujhe proof ni krna kuch nam aisa h to mtlb ye ni ki fake hu mai khud ko dekho janna b ni mujhe ki tm ho kaun

    1. actually tmhe jrurt h krne ki. mujhe to graduation complete krna tmhare kam b aa jayega aur ha thoda seekh lena km se km pta to chal jayega tmhe ladka ya ladki me fark kya pta tm ladka ho tabhi to dusre ko kuch b bol rhe hah

  6. Tumhara naM angel hai…. ????????
    India me kisi ladki naam angel hota h ????????????
    Humein bewakuff mat banaye bhaiya…

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