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Hamdard Part 2…. – Madhuri

Usdin us ladke ki bato se fareeda muskura to di thi prbkuc pal k lie hi, fir meenu ne dhime awaz me kaha kaha yusuf bhai ap jao nhi to teacher ji gussa hojaegi..yusuf chala gya silayi ki clas shuru hui, fareeda kuc shant si hogyi thi, sham ko ghar aayi or apne roz k kamo me lag gyi, ese hi 1 mahina bit gya, ab to sab bachho k sat sat meenu ko b lgne lga ki fareeda itni udas kyu rehti h, jab meenu pehle din ayi thi tbhi sab bachho ne fareeda ko haste hue dekha tha.usdin sham ko meenu ghar aayi usne apni ammi se kaha ammi pta nhi kyu teacher ji bht udas udas rehti h lekin hmne use pehli or akhiri bar haste hue dekha tha jab yusuf bhai aae the tab, yusuf b whi betha hua tha tbhi meenu ne swal kia ammy teachee ji udas kyu rehti h btao na tbhi uski ammi ne sab btaya ye sunke meenu or yusuf ko bura mehsus hua tbhi meenu ne kaha bhai ap aya kro na kbhi hmare tution me teacher ji ko ese udas dekhke acha nhi lgta tbhi ammy ne b kaha haa yusuf chala jaya kar meenu ko chorne wese b rikshe k paise bachenge or bike se jaldi b phoch jaegi,

yusuf ne kuc na kaha wo sirf fareeda k sat hue us hadse k bare me soch raha tha k jo insan apna sab kuch chor itna dur aata h use kya yhi saza milti h jise wo itna chahta h jise wo itna pyar krta h uske bina wo b udasi me sari zindagi kaise guzar skta h fir ese hi din bit gye subh yusuf or minu 2no tution k lie nikle jab wo tution phoche to dekhe fareeda roz k trh shant me bethke soch rhi thi tbhi yusuf ne kaha fareeda ji bura mt mnna or me aaj apki shikayat lekar aya hu minu ne kaha h k ap hmesa udas rehti ho, are ap hi itna udas rhogi to baki bachho pr kya asar pdega..ap hasne me itna kanjoosi kyu krti ho..fareeda yusuf ki trf bs use dekhkr uski bate sun rhi thi.yusuf ne kaha agr hmare hat me jo nhi h to uske lie ye udasi kyu or ap kam se kam apne lie nhi pr in bchho k lie 1 smile kia kro..chlo abhi smile kro..are 1 smil kro..ye sunke meenu ne b kaha teacher plz smile kro ye sunke fareeda ne thoda smile kia ye dekhte hi yusuf ne kaha apko pta h fareeda ji ye smile kitni anmol h ise ese hi chupa k rakhne k jrurat nhi h.ap roz subh 1 smile doge.kaho dogi na fareeda jese yusuf ki bat me bas dub hi gyi thi usne sirf ha me ha milaya..ese hi 2 3 hafte bit gye yusuf roz ata or fareeda se bat krta ab to yusuf ko adat si pad gyi thi fareeda ki.

ab to wo roz ata or jyada se jyada wqt nikalne ki koshish krta.use ehsas ho gya tha ki wo fareeda ko chahne lga h par is had tk use kisi se pyar hoga usne ye na socha tha.wo duniya ki har khusi har wo pyar fareeda ko dena chahta tha jo fareeda ko nhi mili thi.yusuf apni dil ki har bat kehna chata tha fareeda se par wo bht darra hua tha use lgra tha ki kahin wo fareeda ko kho na de..fir b usne himmat ki or wo tution me gya usne farreda se kaha bhot din se bolna chahta hu par aaj bolne aaya hu tumhe khona nhi chahta hu.or tmko zindgi ki tmam khusiya or pyar dena chahta hu kya tm meri bnogi….ye sunkar farreda k hosh udd gye fareeda k dimag me na jane kya kya aaraha tha usne yusuf se kaha muje nhi chaie koi khushi or pyar hamdard bnne ki koshis mt kro or muje nhi chaie tumhari koi bhik..me apne khalid ki yado me jeena chahti hu apko mujhpr taras khane ki koi jrurat nhi.kal se yha aane ki koi jrurat nhi h nhi to muje apki behan meenu ko tution se nikalna hoga.ye sab sunkar yusuf ekdm se udas hogya usne fareeda ko bht ykeen dilane ki koshis ki or fareeda ko kuc nafrat si hogyi thi. yusuf se.usdin yusuf wha se to chala gya par wo 1 pal k lie b fareeda ko bhul nhi pa rha tha..use bar bar fareeda ki khi sari baate bechain kar rhu thi..yusuf ki lag rha tha k kaise me fareeda ko ykeen dilaoo..ab to use darr b lgne lga ki kahi wo fareeda ko kho na de..usne socha ki use ye sab bat uski ammi ko bta deni chaie..

usne ammi ko sab btaya or kha pta nhi ammi kab or kaise fareeda se pyar hogya me use bhul nhi skta..yusuf k anko me pehli bar itni dard dekha tha..ammi yusuf k bato ko smjh gyi thi unhe b fareeda ko apnane me koi harz nhi tha qki yusuf jab chota tha to uske abba ko kho di thi islie wo fareeda ki har dard ko smjh skti thi or wo yusuf ki har bat manti thi yusuf ki khushi me hi unki khushi thi par ab yusuf ki ye halat unse dekhi nhi jarhi thi..unhone bht smjhaya yusuf ko par yusuf bs fareeda yad me hi khota ja rha tha…ese hi 3 din hogye ab yusuf ki ammi ne socha ki fareeda k ghar jakr hi bat krni chaie..wo 2sre din fareeda k ghar gyi wha fareeda ki sas or sasur ko yusuf ki ammi ne kha k wo yusuf ka rishta fareeda k lie lae h or unhone btaya ki yusuf ka acha garments buisness or hm fareeda ko bht khush rkhengw esa kehkr unhone sari bat keh dia..is bat pr fareeda k sas sasur ko bht khushi hui unhone kha ki hame to manjur h ye rishta pr ham fareeda ko smbhal lenge..ye sunte hi yusuf ki ammi khushi se ghr gyi or yusuf ko sab btaya..par yusuf ne kaha agr fareeda ne haa kaha to shadi hogi usse koi jor jabrdasti nhi honi chaie..fir jab us sham jab fareeda ghar ayi to uske sas sasur nw usse sari bat btayi ye sunte hi fareeda bht gusse me agyi or boli me nhi krungi 2sri shadi bs ab bat mt kro isbare or apne room me chali gyi 1 ghnte k bad uski sas ayi

or fareeda ko smjhne lgi ki ab ham tere ma bap h jo b sochre h tere lie acha hi sochre h ..tu naseeb wali h k tere lie h khud rishta aya h wo b itna acha or unki bat se lgra tha ki tu bht khush rhegi..itni badi zindgi tu akeli kaise kategi.aj k zamane me koi kisi ko nhi puchta par wo ldka to pgl h tere piche ..kyu tu man nhi jati..abhi tuje jitna sochna h aram se sochke jwab dena lekin itna yad ham tere bhale k lie kar rhe h..fareeda ne is sab bat ka koi jwab nhi dia..2 din bit gye fareeda na tution gyi or na ghe se nikli..us subh fareeda ki ammi ka kashnir se phone aya unhe b sab pta chla tha oe unhone b bht smjhaya or kaha manja shadi k lie basa le apna ghr jo hota h ache k lie hota h..fareeda sabki bat sunkar bht royi use bilkul b smjh nhi ara rha tha ki wo kya kare..fareeda khalid ki jagah kisi or ko nhi ddeskti thi par ghr walo uski bhale k lie sochre h ye sochke usne shadi k lie haa krdia..jab ye bat yusuf ko pta chali to wo bht khush hua yha tk ki shadi k khrch adhe se jyada yusuf khud uthana chahta tha.2no ghro me achi trh se taiyari hui..yusuf ne fareeda k lie aadhe se jyada taiyariya karke rakhi thi uske intzar me..Kashmir se fareeda k ammi abbu b aaye..kuc din baf shadi dhumdham se hui..fareeda ka dil bechain horha tha use ghr chorte wqt esa lgra tha jese wo apne khalid ko hmesa k lie chorke jarhi h.

par usne bht smjhaya apne dil ko or wo yusuf k ghr aagyi..jab usne ghr me enter kia to sabne bht achi trh se uska welcome kia or meenu to bhabhi bhabhi kehte rehti..sari rasam puri hui or freeda apne kamre me gyi usne yusuf ko dekha or apna sar niche krke aai or beth gyi tbhi yusuf ne kaha fareeda jo b tumhare sat hua h me puri koshis krunga k tm jaldi hi wo sab bhul jao or muje acha lga k tumne koi acha decision lia h ye sunkar fareeda gusse me uthi or kehne lgi me kuc bhulna nhi chahti or muje tmhari koi khushi nhi chaie mene ye decision sirf aone ghr walo k wjh se lia h qki me unhe khush dekhna chahti hu ap muje bht dur rhenge to jyada behtar hoga..ye sab sunkar yusuf kuc preshan sa hogya use ye sab sunkar bht bura lga tha par usne fareeda ki bat ka bura nhi mana or usne kaha thik h jaise tumhari marji ab me tumhe preshan nhi krunga kbhi pr muje itna haq do k me tumhara khyal rakh saku fareeda ne kuc jwab na dia ..yusuf rum k bahar agya..wo rat bhar bs fareeda k bare me sochta rha abto use fareeda se or b humdardi hogyi thi qki usne jo b kia apne ghr walo k lie kia yani koi or apni zindgi kisi or k marzi pr kaise jee skta h ye sab sochte sochte uske dil me fareeda k lie or b pyar aggya tha.or usne puri rat hall me hi bethke sochte reh gya..

subh hui fareeda jab apne rum se bhr ayi to uane dekha yusuf kahi nhi tha bad me ammi se pta chla ki wo shop k lie nikal chuka h..ammi ne or fareeda ne milke kam krte fir 2no serials dekhte. ammi jab meenu ko school chorne jati tb fareeda bas kuc na kuc sochti..ghr me sab thik chlra tha bs jo thik nhi chlra tha wo yusuf or fareeda k bich me thik nhi tha.fareeda to yusuf ka chehra b nhu dekhna chahti thi.1 bar ammi ko yusuf or fareeda k bich me jo b tha wo sab ammi ko pta chla to yusuf ko sab btana pda…ye sab sunke ammi kuc preshan si hogyi unhone yusuf ko hi smjhaya ki sab thik hojaega..1 bar rat k 12 baj gye yusuf ghr nhi aya ammi b preshan thi usne fareeda se kaha yusuf ko phone lgane fareeda ko ammi ki bat sunni padi usne phn lgaya pr phn band btaya ye bat jab ammi ne suni to wo darr gyi ab fareeda b sochne lgi k kaha hoge abhi tk aaye kyu nhi..fareeda bar bar phn try krti achank me phone lga or yusuf ne phn uthaya fareeda bht gusse me boli kaha ho ap ham kitne preshan ho rhe h fir usne kaha ammi preshan horahi h..yusuf acha lga tha jo fareeda ne pehle kaha tha..yusuf ne kaha bas abhi phoch rha hu..jab wo ghr aya to fareeda so chuki thi..ammi ne khana dia yusuf ko or kaha tum apne kamre me hi aaj sona or unhone jabrdasti yusuf ko uske kamre me bhej dia jab yusuf gya to fareeda uth gyi or puchne lgi kya hua ab to usne kaha ammi ne kaha iskie ammi ko bura na lge

islie unki bat sunni pdegi..fareeda ne kaha sirf ammi k lie nhi to me tumse nafrar karti hu or nafrat kbhi pyr me nhi badal skta tab yusuf ne kaha nafrat kab pyr me badk jata h ye pta nhi chlta…fareeda ne gusse me kaha ap apna muh bnd kroge k me khud yha se chali jaoo..yusuf ne kuc jwab na dia or sogya..2sre din subh jab fareeda uthi to usne dekha yusuf soya hi h roz to uthke wo chala jata tha shop…fir usne yusuf ko ignore kia or apne kam me lag gyi..subh k 11 baj gye ab fareeda ne socha k jake puchti hu k jana h kya nhi shop me..jab usne yusuf ko uthaya to yusuf ne fareeda koi jwab nhi dia or uthke shop me jane k lie taiyr hone lga ye dekhke fareeda kuc shock hogyi par fir usne b yusuf ko ignore kia..usne yusuf ko chay nasta dia yusuf ne nhi kia nashta or chala gya..fareeda ne socha syd kal jyada hi bol dia mene islie bura lag gya hoga..rat hogyi yusuf fir nhi aaya jaldi isbar ammi ne b fareeda ko phn krne nhi bola..use chaie tha ki ammi use bole par ammi so chuki thi..12 se 1 baj gye yusuf nahi aya or fareeda ko nind b nhi arhi thi uska dil ghbra tha k khalid k trh ye yusuf ko b kuc hogya to par fir usne socha agr hogya to muje kya krna..muje kyu nhi krna h wo mera husband h..jab wo mera khyal rakh skta h to muje b unko phn krke puchna chaie..ye sochke fareeda phn lgne lgi tbhi door bell baji fareeda ne door khola to yusuf khada tha usne fareeda ki or na dekhte hue andar aya or kmre me chala gya..fareeda ne kaha aaj b late kyu hua..

yusuf ne kaha kam tha kuc..fareeda ne kaha esa kya kam h l ap 2 din se late aarhe ho..yusuf ne koi jwab nhi dia..fareeda ne yusuf ko khana dia pr yusuf sone chala gya..fareeda ko kuc smjh me nhi arha tha k uske sat kya horha h…usne ab jyada sochna bnd krdia ese hi 3 4 din bit gye..subh 6 baje door bell baji fareeda ne door khola usne jo dekha wo khush hogyi uske ammi abbu aaye the kashmir se..usdin bht khush thi fareeda usne ammi abbu se pucha ap yha achank kaise to unhone kaha yusuf ne ticket nikalaya or kaha ap log aajao fareeda ko bht man h ap log se milne ka ye sunte hi fareeda ne kaha pr unhone to btaya nhi tbhi ammi abbu ne kaha are wo 2 din rat rat tk ticket book kraya or kaha ap log jldi se aajaie.tab fareeda ko pta chala ki wo late kyu aate the par ammi abbu ki yad aayi ye unhe kaise pta chala or ye bat usne rat ko yusuf se puch lia to yusuf ne kaha jab koi kisi ko dil se chahta h to wo uske dil ki har bat smjh leta h tm bhale hi muje apma mat mano par me tumhara khyal isi trh zindgi bhr rkhunga..fareeda ko aaj yusuf ki ankho me sacchai dikhu thi use lga tha ka ki khalid ki jgh koi le skta h to wo yusuf h.fareeda ne bs 1 bat kahi thanks…2sre din fareeda ne uske ammi abbu ko vida kia..ab wo kam or serial k bad bche tym me yusuf k bare me hi sochti ab use b yusuf ki prwah hone lgi thi..

jab thoda late hota to khud nhi pr meenu se jrur phn krvati thi..ese hi 1 sal bit gye the..man hi mam me fareeda k dil me b yusuf k lie lgav hogya tha use yusuf ki khyal rkhna uski har 1 bat ko puri krna ye sab bht achi lgi thi…wo chahti thi k wo b sab bhul k yusuf ko apna le pr usse ye sab kuc nhi hua..kuc din k bad fareeda ko pta chala k yusuf shadi k tym pe fareeda ki manjuri chahta tha usse koi jabardasti nhi chahta ye sunke fareeda k dil me or b pyr jag gya tha..wo shop se yusuf k ane ka intzar karne lgi aj wo bht kuc kehna chahti thi wo sari bate jo usne kuc dino se apne dil me chupa rakhi thi wo use btana chati thi k haa tm wo ho jo khalid. ki jgh le skte ho or wo use aaj wo haq dena chahti thi use khushi rakhne or pyar pane wali..aaj use lgne lga tha k hamdard mila tha jo aaj uska wo sohar h..lekin intzar ki ghadi bdhti hi jaa rhi thi..fareeda se na rha gya usne yusuf ko phn kia phn switch off bta rha tha..ese hi rat hogyi ab freeda ko kuc thik na lga pr usne socha aajaenge..intzar krte krte subh hogyi..ab fareeda darr gyi thi or rone lagi tbhi door bell baji use mehsus hua k yusuf hi hai usne door khola or gale se lg gyi..yusuf ne kaha fareeda kya hua kyu ro rahi ho..faeeda rote hue kahi ap kaha the me kitna ghbra gyi thi…me bht sari bate apse kehna chahti hu ap sunenge na..

yusuf ne kaha haa jrur sununga pr dekho mene kya laya h fareeda ne dekha yusuf k hat me 1 bada sa poster h jisme fareeda or khalid ki painting h..yusuf ne kaha fareeda tumne thik hi kaha tha tumhe or khalid ko koi alg nhi kar skta islie mene ye poster khas tumhare lie bnbvayi h..tum sirf khalid ki ho or wo jgh koi nhi lega..fareeda ne pyar se kaha nhi yusuf me bs apki hu or ap sab ho ab mere apne sahi kaha tha nafart pyar me hi bdlta h or me apse kehna chahti hu k apne khalid ki jgh le li h..ab ap hi h mere sab kuc or me b apki hu..kya ab ap muje maf krke apnana chahte ho…yusuf ye sab sunke bht khush hogya or fareeda ko gale se lga lia..2no k dard or dukh dur hogye the..aj ye ghr pura lg rha tha..fareeda ne wo poster hata k 2sra poster lane ko kaha jsme fareeda or yusuf ki painting ho…zindgi jo dard se bhari thi aaj wo sawar gyi..fareeda jisne har sukh k bad jo dukh dekha tha aj wo bht khush thi or usne is bat ko accept kia ki jo hota h acche k lie hi hota h or usne 1 smile dia jisse use yusuf ki 1 pyari bat yad agyi k ye smile bht anmol h ise chupaya mt kro..tabse fareeda hmesa khus rehne lgi or unki khushi ko 4 chand tb lge jab unhe 1 choti se pari hui or ab wo or b khushi se rehne lge..

 

 

 

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184 thoughts on “Hamdard Part 2…. – Madhuri”

  1. bahut achhi story hai god ji yusuf ji ke jariye freeda ji zindgi mei dubara se khushiyan likh di aur ek cute si pyari si pari bhi hui bahut achha laga god ji sab ko khush rakhe aur sache pyar karne walon ko mila de

  2. Madhuri ji
    aapke story ne mere dil ko chhu liya he bahut hi achha thinking he aapka..
    Par me apko ek bat kahunga jise apka thoda help jarur hoga apka story or vi jyada acha ho skti he.
    Ap story ko or thoda bada kijiye mtlb story k jo line he unme har chote chote line aisi aisi emotional word or line milaye jo ki jobi pade bas wo kho sa jaye.
    Apka story bahut acha he par kahi kuch madhuri wala wo rocking line ki kami lag rahi he agr wo dal do to samjho apko award mil jayega story likhne ka.

  3. Sara suno na wo kya hena me kuch jyada hi busy huna please
    tum naraj mat hona aisa to me bilkul nehi kahunga
    qki mujhe pata he mere sbse best friend mujhse kavi vi dilse naraj ho hi nehi sakti hena sara my sweet kedwari..
    Ha ha ha ha ha.
    Fikar not exam end hoke aa jaunga..
    GooD NiGht Sara.
    Madhuri ji mere se vi dosti ka hath bada dona plez?
    Wo kya hena bole to apun ko vi dosti karna mast lagta he? GOOD NI8 MADHURI JI.

  4. Ok madhu me apko ab M.D hi bulaungi…..or rohan me aapse naraj nahi hu ok dost achche se exam dena or chori to bilkul nahi

  5. Ha rohan me dosti to ki hu apse yad nhi kya apki part 1 me ap hi bat nhi krte…n sara or rohan ap apne bare me btao kuc kahan se ho ap 2no

  6. Thanks Madhuri ji…Now We R FriEnd Ok.?
    Sara me tumhara friend hu or sara ka friend kabhi chori nehi karta.
    Sara or Madhuri ji kya me aap dono ko Tang/pareshan kar sakta hu?
    Qki me to abhi vi chota sa bacha huna.
    Ha ha ha ha ha.
    GoOd NigHt M.D. Ji and SARAAAAAA..

  7. Story to bht achhi lagi Itni achhi story post karne ke liye thanks but mai aapse ek bat puchhana chagunga (aap bura mat manna)-ye real story hai kya?

  8. Thanx parwej…dis is nt a real story actually me witer bnna chahti hu.. ye me khud likhti hu qki mera passion h nd ye 1 chota n simpl talent h

  9. Mere story k cht me agr tune esa kuc bola na to dekh bs ….police station me ye site dedungi or admin ka pta chl jaega to wha se tera email id nikal k tuje jail bhejwa dungi fir whi krna ye kaminapan…

  10. Ha rohan aap humare frnd ho to aap hame jaroor paresan kar sakte ho….achche se exam dena ok dost…bye good night rohan,m.d

  11. Or faiz plz is story pe aake aage se aise bat mat karna plz or mere dosto k sath to bilkul aise baat mat karna

  12. Aap writer banna chahti ho madhuri. Agar is tarah ki story likhogi to aap I hope u r success in ur ame. Best of luck.

  13. Hamko ye nahi samajh me aarha h ki aaplog is par chating kyo karti ho.
    Facebook,wattsapp for chating this is only for comm ths story.aap log chating karoge to is tarah ke log to milenge hi faij & ahana jaise

  14. wah wah kya story hai…. ek dum heart touching… madhuriji aapka kahani mujhe bohat pasand aaya..aise aur bhi kahani likhte raho….

  15. SaRa Jyada Tar INsaN to MeRE sath BUra baTe KarTE HAIN
    PAR AAPNE MUJHE ITNA PYAR SE Samjhaya
    KYA KARU AB TO AAPKA BAT maNNa hi Padega SORi
    aisa bat nEhi Karunga

  16. Thank you faiz baat manne k liye vese aisi bate karke kya milega aapko achche se baat karo yaha sab aapke dost hi he or faiz aap plz madhuri se maafi magiye wo meri dost he or aapne jis tarah se baat ki unse wo achcha nahi he

  17. Me Pyar Se darTa Hu BuRa BaTo sE neHi Ok sArA
    madhUrI MuJHe
    MAAf kaRdO
    EK bAr PLeaSeee
    wO SAra Ji MEne OR KucH StoRY Me aiSa liKh DiYA He PAR YE laST Hain
    I M SooRi sAra
    MADHURI

  18. Par SAraa ji MENe to Mafi manG li hE AgeR KOI Or nE YAHa Aakar MerE NAM Se Mtlb FaiZ nam sE AisA GANDA HarkaT KI TO AP USE VI MEra Kam Mat SaMAJH lenA
    ME Ek bar SoRi Keh Du tO Fir me dubaRA WO GaltI KAVI NehI KartA
    sARA mADHURY ne muJHE MAF NEhi KiyA

  19. Faiz aap ne jo bola he use bhulna itna aasan nahi he aap wait kijiye aaj nahi to kal madhuri aap ko maf kar degi

  20. Actually mana jaye to faiz ka bat me sachai thi
    jo word usne use kiya its life true.
    Par ha usne wo bat sahi waqt or sahi place pe nehi kaha.Ye wrong tha.baki to sati sabitri vi is bat ko amal karte he.
    Bura laga to sorry sara ji

  21. Madhuri jee aap ki story kitna achha h.. Or aap agai v yesehi story likhte rehna… God tum ko aage lejaye bs ye m pray krtahun… Or madhuri jee aap v kisise pyar to jrur krtehonge, apni real pyar ki story v post kriyena… Mene kuch galat kiya hoga to pehlesehi SORRY… Lekin plzz..Mere bat 1 bar sochiyega…
    Or MD jee m ihan story prne aayatha ab m nhi aaunga. Bye…md ji..

  22. Bikas ji aap mujse naraj ho dost aapne mujse hi bhi nahi kaha aisa kyou kar rahe ho aap bikas plz aap aa jao yaha sab bahut miss karte he aapko mene apki story pe jake bhi yehi kaha lekin apko kya hua he bikas bolo….achcha aap mujse baat nahi karna chahte ho to thik he me chali jao yaha se lekin aap apne dosto ko kyou chor k ja rahe ho..apto yaha mujse pehle aaye the na dost..sorry bikas mujse koi galti huyi ho to maf kar dena bye

  23. M.D dost aap plz bikas ji ko kahiye ki wo apne dosto k pass vapis aa jaye meto abhi new hu yaha me chali jaogi to yaha kuch nahi hoga lekin wo to yaha bahut time se he na to plz madhuri dost aap usko bulao me promice karti hu me nahi aaogi promice…

  24. Are sara ap 10sn mt lo wo aaenge story pdhne….ap ko b jrurt nhi h jane ki…jo pehle se h yha wo kbhi nhi ja skte h…or bkas ji app mt jaana kahin bs yhi ate rhiega nhi to sara dost chli jaegi to hume acha nhi lgega

  25. M nhi chatahun ki mere wajese koi yahanse chalejaye… Or han koi v dost yahase janeki baat kregato mera hal to pehlesehi bigdahua h, or aage kya karunga wo me v nhi jantahun… Me kisise v naraj nhi hun, koi mujse mafi na mange plz., m kisika krajdar nhi hona chahtahun….bs sab khus raho… Aapki life me kabhi v dukh na aaye….bs yehi pray krrahahun godse………..

  26. Bikas ji aap humse baat kyou nahi kar rahe ho agar naraj nahi ho to..aap sach batado plz me promice karti hu kabhi nahi aaogi yaha

  27. so sweet lv story….madhuri tumhari story bht lving h..plz continue writing such a beautiful stories…

  28. raghini sharma

    nice story as alwys.. madhuri maine aapki pehle bhi stories padhi hain aap bahot achha likhti hain..good luck..& hi sara hi radhika

  29. awwwww….this story iz really very very hearttouching….m.d u r crazy n very passionate….such a gud writer…..i hope hm acche dost bnenge…..hii sara…rohan g…radhika….n jo bh log yha h sbko hello

  30. Ye konse movie ki stry cut kr k past kr di bc khi ki..sarting kha h isme..kya strting me kuch masaledar tha kya jo cut kr diya

  31. Ae andhe 1st part piche page me jake dekh..or tuje koi intrest nhi h to tune pdha kyu…chl nikl kam dhndha nhi h kya jab dekho roz pike aata h..faltu betha rehta h sala bhikhari ldkio ki izzat nhi krta h teri behn h na to uski izzat nikal

  32. Abe sade huye maa k gand k baal unknown chutiye tera dad bhi unknown tha kya randwe jo teri maa ko unknown maa bana k chala gya hahaha
    or tere unknown baap ka naukar hu kya bhdwe jo last page pr tere maa baap ki sex stry padhne jau kutte ki unknown aulad hijde

  33. sahi kaha vijay aapki baat 100% sach hai. sonu jo aap kar rhe ho woh cyber crime hai. agar yeh ladki complain karegi toh aapko track kar sakte hai aur aapko jail bhi ho sakti hai.

    1. Han ne unknown baap ki aulad sure mera case usme hoga bt sath hi tere maa ka bhi..case title hoga din dhade ek sonu name k boy ne unknown k maa k sath rape kiya..:p
      i hope ki tujhe episode dekhne me maza aayega :p

  34. MAdhuRi AApne
    muJHe To PoliCE Ki DhAmki Di Thi
    paR Ab ApKA STORY Me KitNe GandE COmentS Kar RahE He
    KyA APkO THoda vi BurA NHi LaG RAha He
    oK WO CHHODO
    PAR muJhe To MaaF KAR Do
    oR KITna Mafi Mangu
    SaRa pLEz Kaho Na InKO

  35. Faiz me thak gyi hui insab se islie ab kya bolu..par jo action lena hoga me tb lungi jab sar k uppr se pani jaega..or its ok aap ko smjha yhi bht h

  36. Faiz Me kon hoti hu apko maaf krne wali ..uupr wale se bolo apko maf krne or ap bhul jao muje koi shikayat nhi h apse..nd rahul thnkyou

  37. Madhuri plzxxxxzz bebs police cmpnt mt kr yrr mujhe bht dar lgta h police walo se teri kasam :p
    plzzzzz koi action mt le mere against :p

  38. Madhuri plzxxxxzz bebs police cmplnt mt kr yrr mujhe bht dar lgta h police walo se teri kasam :p
    plzzzzz koi action mt le mere against :p

  39. @sumeet ja be mujhe to tu banto se hi illiterate dikhta h..cyber crimes ka C bhi pta h kya tujhe jo itna gyan bant rha.isi liye aaj apna desh piche h..or teri itni ability bhi nhi h ki tu mujhe kuch sikhaye…ek kam kr tu waps apni education KG se start kr le kaam aayegi..lolwa

  40. Sonu app apne life se irritate ho kya jo sabko gali se bat karte h.ap itne b bure nahi lagte fir b aap kyu bura banne ki koshish kyu karte ho..plz bad word use mat krna

  41. Ok shivani or bkas kyu nhi aare h….bt sara mene apko bola na story pdhne aaenge bkas ap 10sn mt lo..qki story pdhna jinka passion h wo kbhi bnd nhi hoga

  42. Or sara muje esa lgta h yha bat krna thik nhi hoga bs comments krna chaie..qki aap ne dekha na kya hota h..ab to muje 2sri story post krne me b 100 bar sochna pdega..actually me bht irritate hogyi hu ye sab dekhke or muje bura lgega agr koi meri story k bare me kuc bura bole to

  43. Bt sonu ji koi kaisa b ho aap inke jaisa hi kroge kya…or waise madhuri ji ki story pe apne use gali dia..or sumit or vijay ne to apka side lia tha fir b..aaap ache ho to plz aap sabse ache se hi rho …..plz aage se esa nahi bologe na ..promise kro

  44. Sonu dost ek baat batao me apko muje dost banana bahut pasnad he or unke sath bate karna, sab kuch share karna bahut pasnad he aap bhi yaha apne dost banao unse baate karo me sach kehti hu bahut achcha lagega aapko ek baar dosto karke dekho aap or in sab bato se agar bura laga ho to sorry dost

  45. Dosto good night or sara aap to mujse baat hi nahi karti apne in purane dosto ko bhul gayi kya ok koi baat nahi good night sara

  46. BT aap ka adha dream sayad pura ho gya h

    aap es site pr to writer ho he n bst of luck aap ka ye jaldi se puri tarah pura ho jaye….

  47. nhi wse m bhut tym se hu yaha bt bs thoda chup he rahta tha

    n meri story bhut sad

    n m chahta ki madhuri ji aap kbhi meri story ko likhe

  48. Rahul aapne pehle kyou nahi bataya kaha he aapki story batao jaldi me abhi read karugi, sorry mene hi pucha nahi achcha batao ab kaha he apki story

  49. Rohan mene apki story pari mene apke sare sawalo k javab apki story pe de diye he or ek baat puchna chahti hu kya aap angel se abhi bhi contact me ho

  50. Madhuri dost mene uske story ka last part para to aisa laga ki wo bahut pyaar karta he abhi bhi angel se hum rahul ki kuch help kar sakte he kya dost

  51. Rahul maine apka pura 1 to last part tk story pdhi….bht intresting b tha or sad b tha…or maine commnt b kia h last wala part me…syd usse apko help mil jae

  52. Madhuri ji aap ne Jb vo comment kiya to m bhut demotivate ho Gya tha

    But now I am alright
    Muskil to hota he h pyar pana so m peeche nhi hatuga kisi bhi kimmat PR

    N m ye puchna chahta tha

    Ki kya aap Meri story re- write krogi???

  53. M.d Bs es tarah write kr ki hr kisi ko himmat mil ske

    N aap ko kuch bhi puchna ho story likhte waqt to aap puch Lena

    N plz story ka Bs end happy kr dena

  54. Are story ka end happy kaise kru ..ap kI story to abhi incmplt hai dear …islie pray karti hu k jldi cmplt ho to tab story hppy ending legega na…or is site pe 2 bar 1 hi story kaisa rhega…pr apki story achi lgi muje cmplt hone pr ya kabhi jrurt pade to apki story hi choose krungi..abhi ap btao kya kru..me khud 1 story likh rhi hu

  55. Thk kah rhi ho aap n next 2 month m Meri kahni ka end bhi fix ho jayega

    But mujhe lagta h end sad hone k chance jyada h

    Gud nyt m.d

  56. madhuriji aapka story mujhe itna pasand aaya ki aaj se me aapka fan ban gaya huun………….plz aap mujse dosti karona…..plz plz mana mat karo.. plz

  57. ajay bhai madhuri meri dost hai me use janta hu wo ghamandi nhi hai….or ham contact me hai par wo bolti hi esa hai ki koi kuc galat smjhe..par nhi hai esi bas jyada friendly h islie kisi kisi ko galat fehmi ho jati hai… aap 1 hi din me use aisa nhi bol sakte kyunki me use 4-5 months se jaanta huu…… aur upar mene jo comments kiye woh sirf mazaak tha.. me sach me jaanta huu madhuri k baare me

  58. Madhuri aap ki story read ki bahut achchi lagi me apki fen ho gayi hu me ab yaha se ja rahi hu wo kuch problems he uski vajah se sayad na bhi aa pao lekin apki story jaroor parugi bye madhuri apki naxt story ka intazar rahega

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