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gazal likh raha hu….

Dard lafzo me bhar ke gazal likh raha hu,

Din ko raat aur subha  ko shaam likh raha hu…..

 

kabhi Samjhega halaat mere  bhi wo,

Tujhe apni manzil aur dard ko safar likh raha hu….

 

Duba ke Qalam khoon ki siyahi me,

Ashqo ko nehar aur dard ko leher likh raha hu….

 

Badal jayenge halat mere agar tu samjh le mujhe,

Tujhko ishq apna aur ishq ko be- hisaab likh raha hu…..

 

Tham jayegi yeh khwahish bhi ek din,

Tujhe rooh apni aur khudko jism likh raha hu….

 

Kab milega sukoon meri rooh ko

“ Mohsin”

Khudko mareez aur tujhe dawa

likh raha hu….

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701 thoughts on “gazal likh raha hu….”

  1. Mohsin Bhai Wakai Me Bahut Acha Likhte Ho, “meri Pahli Or Aakhri Mohbbt” Wo B Bahut Achi Lagi Thi Mujhe…. So Nice, Jarurt Bs Samajhne Wale Ko H,. So Nice Keepitup Brother….

  2. mohsin bahut achi poem likhi hai aapne… I really love your poems…
    dil ka dard likhte ho aap lafzo me…

  3. ASSALAMOALEKUM Mohsin apne bht acchi gazal likhi h or aap bht acha likhte h…
    tjhe rooh apni, or khud ko jism likh rha hu… y line bht umda h..

  4. Bahan G Yaha Par Sacha Pyar Karne Wale Log Bhi Bahut “Umda” Hai…. Flirt Or Tym Pas Wale Bahut Sare H…

  5. Ekdum jakkashhh!!! Poem h mohsin bhai………

    dard ko tum aache se samajhete…….

    tumhari jo b gf hogi wo koi kuskismat hi hogi…….

    i m biggest fan of uuu mohsin
    plz yr apne no. Dena mujhe

  6. very nice mohsin…
    bahot acchi gazal h aapki…
    dard hi dard jhalak raha h bahut khubsurati se aapne apne dard ko yaha pe bayan kiya h….
    mai dua karungi k aapke dard ko samjhne wali aur dard ko mita kar aapki zindagi me khushiya bharne wali koi hamdard aa jaye aapki life me…..

  7. aaj me fir royi khud ko tanha pakar,
    Teri yaad ko seene se laga kar,
    Per tum na aaye,
    tum ko na jaane kyo na meri dosti yaad aaye…

  8. thank u mohsin…. aapko pasand aaya mene ye khud likha tha bus apni frnd ki yaad aa rahi thi to uske liye likh diya…

  9. Tumhari trf se ek song..
    .
    me kya kru rm mujhe buddha mil gya h…hy mujhe buddha mil gya…
    .
    isse aacha to km height wala hi mil jata
    hahahahaha

  10. Chura liya h tumne jo dil ko..
    .
    mere 6 pack ni churana sanam..
    hahaha
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    sbko sone do aj hm mein hm h to kya gm h
    hahahaha

  11. Ohh mere pyar ka ras jara chkana….oyy soniyo..
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    ek br to pyar krke dekho..kb se km taste to pta chalega..
    hahahaha

  12. Sonu apki b holidays chlre h kya
    Irfn ko call krke bulao aj subha. Me WO b baht hsrhe th
    Hahahaha
    Koi mil gya irfn ko
    Ha mil hi gya.
    Hahahaha

  13. Dil kisi ka dil churana chahta h
    .
    kisi ko ye apna bnana chahta h
    .
    jane kya hua h isko ajkl soniyo…
    .
    ye tumhra dil churana chahta hahahahahahaha

  14. Pyar krna mere bs ki bat nhi mai binds ldki h
    Mai pyr kr baithugi to msti kon lrega
    Mere hostel me to sannata cha jayga
    Hahahaha

  15. Tujhe dekha to ye jana snam..
    .
    pyar hota h deewana sanam..
    .
    hum is loverpoint se kha jaye hum…
    .
    teri bahoo me mar jaye hm
    hahahaha
    .

  16. Irfan hamari lvstory ka villain
    ni h..
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    tumhara injection h jo bahoo me jane hi ni deta h..
    hahahahahaha
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    by god ki ksm is injection ko kbi pyar ni hua h…
    .

  17. Hahaha injctn
    Abi tk Maine kisiko injctn nhi diya
    Mje pata nhi dctr bnne k bad kyse injctn dugi mje khud injctn se dr lgta h
    Hahahahahahahaha

  18. hahahahaha by god.. phla injection tum hi lgte..
    .
    drna mt, dr lge to meri bahoo me aa jana h.. Dr bhag jayega
    hahahaha

  19. Mje bhuk lagi h mje ice crm bht psnd h diwani h ice crm ki batao ice crm kon h mai khaleti h ice crm ko
    Hahaha

  20. Hahaha sonu mai ice crm kyse khaugi fir
    Ice crm sbko psnd h yha agr mai kisiko psnd ane lg gai to mera kya hoga
    Hahahaha

  21. Hahaha sonu mzk krhe h Na
    Subha ashiq wali nzro se dekha or abi prk me
    Hahahaha
    Bht fst h samne wali to
    Looolllllllllll

  22. Are irfn ruko ap chle jayge to hm kya krege yha
    Hahahaha
    Bat to krhw h Na sbse
    Aj khane me kya bn rha h irfn
    Mere yha aj kch special h
    Hahahaha

  23. Hii v bhai mt jao hmlog bat krhe h Na apse

    Irfn mai yhi cmnt jldi submit nhi hui bht prshn krti h hahahahahh

  24. Hahahah ishma ap b kch b bolte h hmlog bat krhe h to ap dstrb nhi krna Chahte the
    Ye site surf hmdono k liy nhi h hmsbke liy h
    Hahahahaha
    Raz nm phli br sauna isliy cnfus h irfn
    Hahahah

  25. mujhse koi bat nhi krta bye me ja RHA hu 🙁 ab..
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    dnrr kr k aayenge.

  26. Uncle mje somi g na bulao apke samne to mai bcchi h
    Irfn mje schme nhi pata like ki definatn
    Ggl pr srch krle dekhlo
    Hahaha

  27. Like kisi or ko q krhe h irfn jise like krhe h use hi love kro
    Or uncle plz g na lgaiy
    I don’t like
    Sorrrryyyyyy

  28. Irfn kise like krne lge h ap ha batao batao
    Or love kisse krte h WO b batao apto kch apne bare me bat ate hi nhi hmne to sbkch bata diya h
    Ishma g ap fn ko lcr me bnd krke chp chap so jao nhi to hdc hogs
    Or zyada tbyt khrab hjaygi fir

  29. Pata h to q puchrhe h irfn
    Agr pasta hoto mje b batado plz
    Sonu samne wali ko ghrme chod diya kya
    Ghyl to nhi hui Na
    Hahahaha

  30. Hahaha sonu kis pr line marne ki zrurt nhi h samne wli ko acchese ghyl krdo hahaha
    Or ha koi set nhi h
    Sb frndz h nthng othr

  31. irfan g ap jise like krte h uske har aadat apko achi lgte h..nd ap already ek relitonsp me h to kise aur ko like krna dats not possible …
    kese ek liye sirf attraction ho skta h…
    mujhe esa lgta h..

  32. hahahaha ni meko tere uper line marni h…samne wali ko pta diya h we r jst friend…me teko like ni krta hu…
    .
    zoya maine use mna kr diya u dont wry maine use hurt b ni kiya use apna friend bna liya h

  33. Irfan pyar ho rha h….ya aalu ki sabzi bna rha…
    hahaha
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    somi mujhe b aalu psnd h tum aalu ki tarah ho ya bhindi ki trh

  34. Somi ab to..mamta g b chahti h tum unki bhabhi bn jao..
    hahahaha..
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    @mamta g bhabhi to ni bni h….dnt wry jaldi bn jayegi
    .
    ishma pr line mari bt unhonhe mujhe saga bhai hi bna diya
    hahahahaha

  35. gud yar sonu tumna accha kiya jo frnd banaliya magar uspar bi isi tarah line mat marna yar wo tumhe sachme like karti hai kahi propose na karde tumhe hahaha

  36. Mai dctr bnrhi h mmta g 🙂
    Irfn kya bna rhe h kdi kids chiz ki
    Sonu WO mje bhabi nhi banana chahti samne wali ko banana chahti h maine shi Khan Na mmmta g
    Hahahahahlahha

  37. Mai mzk krhi thi ishma g hahaha
    Ha mje pata h jb tbiyt khrab hoti h to sbse zyada yad ghrwalo ki ati h specially Ammi ki
    🙁

  38. kya kru aaye kuch kuch hota h
    ab to mera dil jage na sota h

    hahahaha

    Somiii aisa mera sth b hua 1st time…tumhe pyar ho gya jokr se hahahahaha
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  39. Ishma ap kaha gye h
    .
    dulhan ko sjana h
    .
    use sajan ke ghar b to jana h
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    jaldi aao ni to irfan 9 2 11 ho jayega hari mirchi ko leke
    hahahahaha

  40. Mamta g offer h…hari mirchi ke sath injection free h
    hahahaha.
    .
    irfan ek br sewa ka labh jarur udana h..
    hahahaha

  41. Hari morchi srf hri nhi tikhi b h
    Hahahaha
    Irfn kha kho gay pdosn ki yado me
    Hmse bat krlo phle pdsn to aphi k yha h hm yha kch din k mhman h fir chle jayge apne hostel

  42. Nhi augi hostel me jane k bad Abbu net pack nhi dalwate
    Stdy krti h srf watsapp vagaira sb bnd srf calling
    Is liy acchese stdy kr pati h hostel me ghrpr full enjoy

  43. sonu n somi irfan ab nahi aayega….
    q ki uska net slow ho gaya hoga…..
    …..
    somi jii irfan apko like kerta hai mujhe aesa lagta hai…..so deri kis bat ki exchange karo number….

  44. Hahaha irfn mje nhi pdsn ko like krte h
    Sonu he miss krne ki zrurt nhi h
    Miss krne walo ki kmi nhi h
    Hahahaha

  45. Mai kisi pr line nhi mar rhi h Sony
    Sb frndz h mere yha SB
    Irfn ap q nhi batoge ap kisko like krte h is ka mtlb ap home frndz nhi mante him thodina us ldki ko khalege ap batadoge to

  46. Me teko konsa miss krta hu
    tumhare miss krne walo se jyada to meri fb par block list me h
    hahahaha
    lol xd girl

  47. mohsin ka num h na tmhare pass use call kr k bol site per shiwani uska wait kar rahii hai…
    itna to ker hi sakte ho…

  48. Yoga ata h mujhe b shikhana DP mujhe to ek hi yoga ata h jo mere fb page par h
    hahaha
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    irfan pk tumhe ata h

  49. Ha krti zrur krti lekin mera bf hindu hoga hi nhi
    Hiiii dpka Di apko pata h Maine apko kitna Sara miss kia
    Kha thi aj ap subha se

  50. Vinod bhai ye bindu g aur aayesha kaha h ??? dono ki yad aa rhi h… aayesha ki nudols yad aa RHA h. 🙁

  51. Pyar to zindagi ka afsana hai.Iska apna hi ek tarana hai.Pata hai sabko milenge sirf aansu.Phir bhi na jane kyo har koi iska deewana hai.

  52. Are sonu konsa jawab nhi diya maine SB javab to derhi h
    Dpka d mai apke liy to ruki h ya
    Apse hi to bat krhi h

  53. Pyar hua tbi happy hote h kya sonu dusri b vjh hoskti h
    Or aj ap mje hsa q nhi rhe h hsne ka bht mn h mera koi hsa nhi rha h
    Dpka Di bina batay mt jana

  54. Jawa me laga laga re..namak ishq ka hy re…tere ishq ka hy re..
    balam se maanga, re balam se maanga re namak ishq hy re
    hahahahahaha
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    is gane ke uper meri dhunai b hue…

  55. Aj ke bd focus DP par
    .
    iske 2 phayde h

    meri maa ko khana v ni bnana padega
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    mujhe dance b shikhna ni padega
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    sth me yoga cls b free
    hahahaha
    DP tum meri dulhan bn jao meri maa to ready h
    hahaha

  56. Ha shh kha…DP..ab me tum dono ko hi propose kya apna ek bal b ni hilauga
    hahahaha
    meto heena ki property hu
    hahahaha

  57. Tum dono meri shaadi me jlul jlul aana h
    dance to tumharb sth hi krna h
    hahahahahaha
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    is gane par
    is dard dil ki sifaris ab kr de koi yaha ki mil jaye si wo barish jo bhiga de puri trh
    hahaha

  58. To chp q hogay the dpka d ap Maine abi tk dnr nhi kiya
    Bde bhaiyya aysa mt krna hme chodkr Na Jana him apke bina nhi rh skte
    Hahaha

  59. Sorry sonu agr koi glti ui h to maaf krdena
    Mai b ab yha kch din hi augi fir mai b chli jaugi yha se 🙁
    Apsbko bht miss krugi
    Dpka d kch bolo ap

  60. By chlta hu mn to ni kr rha h
    .
    par kbi kbi beech me aa jauga ok
    miss u gUz…DP somi tc gn

    alvinda………………

  61. dipika parmar

    sonu ji aap aur macchar ek saman

    are vah koi to Gujarati malyu nai to Hindi boline kantaro avi gayo yar..

  62. mne bdhi bo bhasa aavdet kem ke mne bhasa sikh waano sokh hto bachpan thi so cors .. bas english naa aavdi baba

  63. dipika kale me 1 site pr maro number coment post kayro koi ne aap waa to baba 6 chokri o e mne msg kayra bolo hu su kru hwe

  64. dipika parmar

    ohhhh haary ji sonu ahiyana casenova che …hehehe eng km Ni avri k pachi majak karo cho??
    sonu ji aap ho hi romio type…hehehe

  65. dipika parmar

    pahela to tme nub j km post katiyo n have mes avyo to jhelo ene….hehehe tmari bhul tmne nari….

  66. na sachi maat nthi aawd ti mne thori thori ochi eng aap ri to sonu ardha dimaag no 6e upar no maal j nthi e no

  67. waat sachi dipikaa pan hamraaj msg stop thyaa ket ke india maa waagya 6e hamra kale waat kri su mne thu suker je jaan chuyti hamra to
    sonu kuch nhi bhai aap hi ki tarif karrhe the kab se

  68. dipika parmar

    are BT maja ave emni sath joke karva ma n uparna mar khali varaj fast hoi..harry ji em to khasu badhu knowledge temni pase bs majak ma java dei che..

  69. dipika parmar

    tame nai sonu ji tane hota he….

    are re bachine rahejo harry ji n aa site PR guj boline maja ave che realyyy

  70. knowledge waat sachi tmari enaa pase 6e pan how to ys khber nhi ine
    lo tmone prpos.. kayro piyor gujrati maa jwaab to do tmaara aasiq nee mzzak maa

  71. Hindi me tarif kro…
    .
    bheje ka satyanash ho gya
    .
    ab hindi ya eng me bolo
    .
    matarani ka pap lagega mujhe kya h

  72. dipika parmar

    sonu ji mere site pe hone se aap ka kyu janeka man nai hota….kyu koi reason he kya..bolo bolo.hahaha

  73. DP reason kuch ni tum funny type ki ho isliye tumhare sth bt krna aacha lgta h….past b bhul jata hu jb tumse bt krta hu

  74. dipika parmar

    are harry ji eto badhana j aashiq bani jai n javab ma Su apu Yarr….

    are sonu ji matarani ka pap Apko lagega aap hi heena ji ko chor kar sab par lain mar rahe ho…hahaha

  75. dipika parmar

    funny kaha muje ye koi tarif hui agar kehte dp tum badi smart ho to happy v ho jati par ye kya funny …..

  76. dipika parmar

    ohhh funny to me hu kyu ki me bato ko seriously nai leti varna mene isi site pe kai ladkiyo ka gussa dekha he…

  77. hahahaha kao nay dipika thori waar mate mzaak masti maa leylo ne ine khali kho ke tmaari bo yaad aavet tmaara vise hu socha krut pchi ko mzaak to chale yaar dosti me

  78. dipika parmar

    chale etle j to karu chu nai to kyar Ni bhadki jate BT mane koi pn nani vat ma gusso karvu nai game…..n tmara vise kaho kai…

  79. bhadki naa jzo kai nayko pelo bawo rakh thyjase hu saf saf jout baa mherbaani tmari jo jo kai bhadk waali waat kayri ne mne emaj soch maa pdi gyo

  80. hahahha bhai itnaa sannata kiu hai fir yhi awaaj aaye gi duaa hai wo kabhi naa sudhre is site pe to
    ha sonu me yhi samjaa rhaa tha dipika ko ki aap ko i l u kehde

  81. dipika parmar

    tme Su karo kya raho.guj km km bolo n aa site PR kevi rite avya???? saval ocha pade to boljo bija pn puchij leva.hahah

  82. hahahaha dipika vkil kainay je puch vu ho te pucho mara paase eu bnej naa ke swaal no jwaab naa hoy thiyaa suthe jaytak me naa haaru jaan buchi ne ok to sambhro

  83. hu africa ma rot ne me winners shop maa mengr 6u ne bas 1 chokri mari friend hti te ine mne kidhu ke sacho love jovo hay to hindi love story pr jaao nee vaancho khaaniyo pchi 1 thi2 ne 2 thi 3iji aa site pr aauyo ahiyaa mne vinod bhai e bolau yo simpl
    ///////////////////////////////bizu kai////////////////////////////

  84. hu africa ma rot ne me winners shop maa mengr 6u ne bas 1 chokri mari friend hti te ine mne kidhu ke sacho love jovo hay to hindi love story pr jaao nee vaancho khaaniyo pchi 1 thi2 ne 2 thi 3iji aa site pr aauyo ahiyaa mne vinod bhai e bolau yo simpl
    ///////////////////////////////bizu kai////////////////////////////

  85. dipika parmar

    koi gf che koi var dil tutyu che..aa site PR koni sathe vadhare vat karvu game n Mara mate 1 word ma bolvu hoi to Su bolo….hahaha kahyu puchavanu to Mara vise pn puchi j lidhu.hahaha

  86. hahahaha dill to roj tutet maru pan hamra 1 chokri 6e jinaa sathe sacho pyaar thyo evo mehsus thyt aaje e aaywi nthi nayko hu ahiyaa nay bizi koi site par hoy tmaaro koi b.f to jarur hse 100% kon 6e eto ko

  87. dipika parmar

    are 100 % nai kaho mari story vacho bf nathi bs game che koi BT e ideot che maha n bija ans to apya j nai…

  88. bizo ans ? oh mara gher wara btha pehla india ma gujrat maa hta so mne gujrati bhu gmti ti so me gujra ti pan siykhi cas.. kay ro to

  89. dipika parmar

    Milne se pahele bichar gaye…..pahela story lakhata nai avrtu so jevu avryu ane bane tetlu short ma lakhyu che….read karine kejo kevi che OK n mari pH Ni betry na ram rami gaya so kale vat karsu harry ji OK gn SD tc avjo……guj frd…

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