💘 Discover a Heartfelt Story: 26th poem...Kaali (Akash)

ek dusre ka sath hi bhot he – She is my life A silent love story

Hai frndss… my self sahil dagar from rewari. Ye Meri true love story hai. jab m 12th standard me tha tab mujhe mera pyar mila……. uska name raveena h.mne usse pheli bar dekhte hi apni life ka hissa maan liya tha. sayad life se badkar. muje RAVEENA ki voice (avaaj) sabse jyada achhi lagti hai. m usse har hal me impress krna chata tha.jab bi vo muje dekhti thi to muje kuch hone lagta tha. m hamesa uski side vali bench par bathh ta tha. suru -2 me vo bi muje dekhti thi. ek bar ussne muje smile pas ki thi. but phir bi m use propose nhi kar ska. muje daar tha ki kahi m usse kho na du. dire -2 time nikal ta gya. but mne usse apne pyar ka izzhar nhi kr ska. ek baar notebook rakhte time mere hand ✋ uske hand ✋ se touch ho gaya tha uss raat muje nind nhi ayi.1 January 2015 (happy new year) ke din mne soch liya ki m aj usse baat kar kar rahunga. but uss din bi m baat nhi kar ska. bez.isse phele mne kisi ladki se baat nhi ki thi. so muje daar sa lagta tha. ROSE DAYS par m uske liye rose bi lekar aaya tha but mere daar ne muje pakad liya. Ki kahi usse kho na du. phir hamare final exam start ho gaye the. last exam ke din mne socha ki aj ke baad muje RAVEENA nhi milegi aj usse apne Maan ki baat bta de. but iss din bi m nhi kah ska. iss din mujhe apne upar bahut gussa aa rha tha. m iss din bahut roya……

mne uss din ke baad usse fb,hike,Skype, sbi social network par dundaa. but vo muje nhi mili.mne abki baar soch liya tha ki m abki baar usse bol kar hi rahunga. but vo muje social network par nhi mili. m uss ki yaado ko ek diary me likhta tha. lekin ek din mne uss diary ko paad diya.socha jab pyar hi nhi mila to yaado ko rakhkar kya milega. uss din mne pheli baar drink ki thi. phir ek din (2july 2015) muje fb par mere frd ki frndlist me se muje RAVEENA ki id ka pta chala.uss din mne usske pas frd request send kar di thi. or usne accept bi kar li thi. sayad vo din mere liye sabse jyada khushi ka din tha. phir dire -2 ham whatsapp par aa gaye. ab ham rozana baatein karte h. but m ab bi usse bta nhi sakta ki m usse pyaar krta hu…………. ab mere pas uski photos bi h. m every morning me uski photo dekhkar apne pyar ka izzhar kar leta hu. m roj sochta hoon ki aj usse bol kar hi rahunga. but mera daar abi bi nhi gya h……. chalo ab hum frds to h…….M abki baar uske birthday par usse apna proposal dunga jo hoga dekha jayega.. mere propose krne par chahe Raveena muje accept na kre but dill se ye boj to kam hoga ki mne usse apne pyar ka izzhar to kar diya…….bas ab jaldi se 5 December aa jaye taki m usse apne dil ki baat bta sakuu….????????????????????????

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338 thoughts on “ek dusre ka sath hi bhot he – She is my life A silent love story”

  1. Sahil plz ab aur wait mt kro jitni jaldi ho ske use ek accha sa mouka dekh kr bta do…….
    Pyar keliy raasta dhundne ki zarurat nhi hoti h, pyar apni manjil khud dhund leta h…….
    Dont worried about this jao aur ja ke keh do apne dil ki baat….. isse pehle ki bht deer ho jae….

    N ha dar ke aage jeet h bhai…….

    1. U ri8 kahi na phr der ho jaye….agr usne accpet nhi kiya too…phr kya hoga……jete ji mr jana behtar hogana …isse acha hai mt batao ki pyar krta hu km se km dil tutega to nhi……..

  2. simmi dukhi mt ho jld hi sonu se miloge ap me ap k liye jrur pray krungi wese v ap k admission k bd to ap dono ek hi sehr me rhoge na

  3. Accha to aap dono mujhe akela chod kr yaha aa gae sneha bhi chali gai….

    Mamta n sourav Aao dono se mai catti hu……

  4. simmi kya hua tujhe sonuwa ni mulega toh mein hu na simmi kbhi uski kami yd ni aane dunga godi mein udakr laad pyar krunga… 😀 😀

  5. simmi katti mt ho sourav k ashu se khin sight me bad na ajaye isliye me dar k mare agyi or ake msg to ki na apko so sourav se katti ho jao bo kyun roya

  6. Sourav lgta h aap kuch jayada hi romantic films dekhte h…

    Kbhi action movie bhi dekh liy kro:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 …:-) .:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  7. Hi jiya…… u r ri8
    .:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    N mamta video camra le kr aana sbko pta to chale ki sourav pitte hue kaise lgte h:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 ……

  8. Thnx mamta….

    N jiya n mamta pta h maine to us video ka nm bhi soch liya h…..

    Thali ka baigun.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  9. To boliy sourav( mr. Paresaan aatma ) kaisa lg rha h aapko apna video imagen kr ke….:-) 🙂 .:-) ..:-) ….:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  10. or hm log video k strting me likhenge ldkiya gor se dekho ye mar khata hua ldke ko or sabdhan rho khin ap ko v na dil de de

  11. Ha sourav ye poonam bhabhi kon h???????or thnx chutki ki tum mjhse katti ni ho or mamta ap bi mt hona mjhse katti…….

  12. Nice stry…bt bhai jaldi prpose kr de..kahi pta chale tere feeling janne se pehle wo kisi or ki feelings feel krne lge…so jaldi bta de yr…

  13. mai bhi soch rhi hu 1ak story likh hi dalu
    story ki mai villain hi sahi
    kisi ne reqst ki thi ki mai uski story yha likhu

  14. Ha ji.. bilkul likhiye.. superhit rahegi… wese bola kisne tha…
    Mai kya km hu apse.. bht sweet hu mai bhi… 😀
    Hiii simmi..

  15. Wah ji… bht achhe..
    Phr to wo bhi yaha apke cmmnts wagaira dekhte hi hnge… 🙂 good… phr to likh hi dijiye…

  16. Aadi kl to aap n salmaan hm girls ki raksha kr rhe the…
    Kh rhe the ki juto ki maala phnne se koi aas paas nhi bhatkega to phir aaj bhi aap hi dhamkao admin ko:-) 🙂 .:-) ..:-) ..:-) 🙂

  17. Sneha mai btati hu….

    Pehle is site m jo menu option h uspe click kro phir submit option aaega….
    Uspe click krne k baad jo box open hoga waha stry ka title name n stry likhkr submit kr dena okkkkk

  18. Are usme se hi ek juta nikal kr shuru ho jana admin pr .. kl hi ya aaj raat me hi post kr dega… 😀 😀 #simmi.
    N kya yr sneha… itni sari stories yha padhi or malum hi nhi chla kaise likhte h… waise bhi sara kch to unhone bta hi diya h .. phr prblm kya h..
    Mamta aap na bs sbki stories pdho apna kch na btao… bht khub…

  19. Oo ye prblm h sneha apko… phr to phle aap kahi or likh lena story apne phn me… phr copy paste kr dena us box me jo simmi ne btaya…
    N hello mamta ji.. mai kch nhi la rha… jo tea coffe pilata h wahi snacks bhi khilata h…

  20. Mujhe bad me bht mza h 🙂 … aap dalo to story bs… baki agr jada hua to hm sb dost mil kr rokenge bad ko… #mamta

  21. OK simmi pr beech ma kya likhna h ye nhi bataya mai khud hi kuch sochungi
    aadi jisne story likhne ko kaha h wo yaha nhi aata
    mai chahti hu wo is site pr aaye tabhi use pays chalega mujhe pyar nhi dost ki jarurat thi Jo mujhe yaha mile

  22. ok ok me apni story kvi dal dungi pr phir bad ajaye to mujhe mt kehna or sneha sch me dosto k jesa koi nhi ho skta

  23. Hey simmi kaan idhar lana jra kch kehna h… (“yr do bottle mngwa lena cold drink… ek bahar aate tym mujhe de dena.. “)

  24. Chlo mere psnd ka chai nhi pila payi to kya hua… naam k lite to chai tha.. kl k trh dhokha to nhi di… 🙂 😀
    N dnt wry mamta ji… aane dijiye bad…. i m waiting fr ur stry..
    Simmi yr sb mujhe dedo… mai mamta k ghar lekr chlta hu.. wahi khaynge sb…

  25. Ye simmi help line h jise jo cahiye milega………

    N aadi mai le kr chati hu aap q kst kr rhe ho..:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  26. Are nhi nhi simmi.. mujhe hi dena… yr ldkiyo k hath se koi bhi chhin kr bhag jyga.. mere pas rahega to safe rahega… 🙂

  27. mamta aap party me nhi aayi thi na party ki CD ban gyi h sare frnds ek sath dekhenge raat ko
    aadi aaj rat to tumhe aana hi padega

  28. Shi kha aadi delhi m dher saare bander h na….

    N aap bhi to ho isliy aap hi sambhal kr le jao…

    Qki bander hi bandar se ld skta h…

  29. Are sneha madam dobara chai na bnaiye mere liye… kyu taklif kr rhi … apki chai bht hi achhi thi… aise chai mai roj piu to sugar hi ho jaye .. 🙂 chliye mamta k ghar chl rhe…

  30. ok by adi, simmi, sneha, vinod g me ap sb ko night me join krti hu by by mujhe bhulna mt or mere bina cd dekhna mt

  31. Cnfrm nhi bta skta rat ka.
    .apna kyu nhi bta rhi tm dono… juto ki har pehn kr muh me kala jungle lga kr dance kr rhi thi.. hmare or salman bhai k bare me afwahe faila rhi…

  32. Hellllllllooooooo….:-) kha ho sb log…

    Aadi aksha sneha mamta ananya jiya salmaan sourav( mr. Paresaan aatma )
    Kha reh gae sb k sb….

    Mai aarti ki thaal le kr kb se wait kr rhi hu aap sb ka…

    Is thaal me ek naariyal bhi h jo sbse let aaega uske sr pe phodungi:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 .:-) 🙂 .:-) 🙂

  33. खुद की “Selfy” निकालना सेक़ेन्डों का काम है,” लेक़िन”खुद की “Image” बनानें में जिन्दगी गुजर जाती है………

  34. Yha upasthit Sbhi atithiyo ka swagat h… jisne bhi bhojan na kiya ho wo simmi ji se samprk kre… unhone aap sbhi k liye 5 star hotel me bhojan ka praband kiya h… 😀

  35. I m fine aadi….

    Mamta swagt to hm log milkr uska krenge jo aaj sbse let aaega…

    Maine naariyl rkhi h bacha k:-) …

  36. “उसने होंठों पर मेरे, रख दी जब उंगलियाँ! मैं लफ़्ज़ सारे भूल गया, बस खामोशी अच्छी लगी!!”

  37. meri sweetu nhi aarhi h Usk bina CD kaise dekhenge.
    aadi nd salman chalo sweetu ka net peck rechrge karawo or use utha le aao usk bina mere dil nhi lagta.

  38. Hehehhe:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Ky line likhi h aapne anuj mn kush ho gaya…….

    N aap agar roj jaldi aa jate ho to baat q nhi karte….

  39. Ky baccho jaisi baat krte ho aap bhi aadi mere haatho ka khana ky 5 star se km h:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 .:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Hello sneha kaisi ho….

    Mujhe pta h maine aksha k chat padha tha aaj wo nhi aa rhi h….

  40. actually simmi ji…………….full day bizness me busy rahta hu time ni milta h fb me 600frnd. whtsap me 450frnds ngt me net on karte hi itne msg hote h kis kis ko reply kare smjh ni ata h but jb muje yaha p bat karni hoti h sbko gud nyt bol k ata hu mai but daily time ni de pata ap sb frnds ko….sorry yr

  41. मेरी आरज़ू है बस यही, तेरा गीत बनके रहूँ सदा, तेरे दिल से निकलूँ अगर कभी, तो तेरे लबों पे सजा करू

  42. Ha ha q nhi sneha… jarur pr dhayn rhe nariyal itni jor se phodna ki salmaan ko yaad rhe hr din kitni bje aana h yaha….

  43. Wo baat ye h anuj ki kl sneha ne hme cake ki.parti di thi n salmaan or aadi n usme jm ke dance kiya h item songs pe… n un dono ne juto ki mala bhi pehni h is cd mai ..:-) 🙂 🙂 .:-) 🙂

    Usi ki baat ho rhi h..:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂

  44. Lagi hai chot dil pe dikha nhi sakteBhulana bhi chahen to bhula nhi sakteMuhabaton ka anjaam yehi hota hai.Jis k liye taraste hain use paa nhisake.

  45. दिखावे की dosti से बेहतर है नफ़रत ही करो हमसे ,हम सच्चे जज़्बों की बड़ी क़द्र किया करते हैं !!

  46. Sneha memory lout bhi aaegi n dobara jane ke baare m sochegi bhi nhi.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 .:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 .:-)

  47. ooohhhooo gud sneha ji……………….
    but hm to apne birthday me b party ni dete yr………..actually birthday hamara h to frnds Dr n hame.
    what is bf……?? 🙁

  48. hmm…….simmi ji spsl hi h……. evng se mera frnd muje paheliya bhujha ke paresan kar raha hu kuch clire ni bol raha h so mai sad feel karne laga ab happy hone k liye kuch to Banta h n yr

  49. Aadi aap kha chale gae aapki bhi memory loss ho gai h ky aapke liy bhi naariyal mangwau ky:-) 🙂 .:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  50. sorry sneha really sorry muje Ni Pata tha but ap un Yado se bahar kar apne future pr depend karo….. Nd shayri krne k liye tips ni di ja skti h yr plz

  51. Ohhhh anuj kr di na aapne baccho waali baat…..

    Jiske itne saare acche acche frnds ho wo upset kaise rh skta h:-) …:-) .:-) 🙂

  52. ‪#‎Duniya ‬m 3‪#‎log ‬bahot hi pyare or‪#‎acche‬ hain‪#‎Ek_MAIN‬‪#‎Dusra‬ mere‪#‎parents‬ ki‪#‎aulaad‬ yaani‪#‎MAIN ‬Or‪#‎Teesra‬ AAP ka‪#‎dost ‬yaani phir#MAIN Jalo mat‪#‎hausla_rakho‬ AAP bhi toh itne‪#‎pyare‬ or #acche‪#‎insan‬k #dost ho Yaani‪#‎phir ‬MAi
    spsl for simmi

  53. Bs anuj bs ab mai or nhi sun skti…

    Simmi k rehte simmi ke frnds yu emotional ho jae ye simmi ki manjoor nhi……..:-) .

    Ye hmara hukm h jldi se jor se hso warna saare daat crow ko khila dungi….

  54. nhi anuj g mujhe un yaado se bahar nhi aana
    wo meri bf thi hai or hamesha rhegi usi ne to mujhe khush rhna or masti krna sikhaya

  55. Sneha plz dont be sad yaar qki dosti n pyar ye dono duniya ki do sbse khubsurat chiz h jo kbhi khatm nhi hoti h….

    So plz upst mt rho na….

    Aur aapne suna nhi ki abhi maina anuj se ky kha h so smile kro warna.:-) 🙂 🙂
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  56. Dil ki hasrat zuban pe aane lagiTune dekha aur zindagi muskurane lagiYe ishq ki inteha thi ya deewangi meriHar soorat me soorat teri nazar aane lagi.

  57. Sneha lgta h salmaan cd ke dr se nhi aa rhe hhh.. n isliy aadi bhi bhag gae….

    Koi nhi chalo aane do kl dono.ko ek saath khabr lenge dono ki:-) ..

    Aap ye naariyal sambhal kr rkhna m kl ek or le aaungi aadi kliy..:-) .

    Cd hm kl ply krenge n kl to aksha bhi aaengi aur mja aaega:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 ….

  58. mere dad army officer h wo mujhe jhansi me mili jab mai 6th me thi mai kafi shant nature ki thi fir wo meri f bni hum bhot masti krte the class me sabse shaitan bachcho me humari ginti hone lagi hum 3 year sath rhe fir transfr ho gya Nagaland

  59. Koi baat nhi anuj….

    Aap to apne pairo pr khade ho… ja kr unhe dekho jo high quallifications k baad bhi abhi tk job dhund rhe h…..

  60. बोलो .!किस तरह सेमनाऊँ तुम्हें…होंठ़ होंठों पे रख दूँ ?या पाँव पर..
    😀 😀

  61. nhi yr sad nhi hu net slow h nd thnx anuj g purani yaade taaza ho gyi har saal mai uska mnati hu mai ye bhi janti hu WO bhi mujhe itna hi miss krti hogi
    hum kabhi nhi mil sakte

  62. nhi yr sad nhi hu net slow h nd thnx anuj g purani yaade taaza ho gyi har saal mai uska db mnati hu mai ye bhi janti hu WO bhi mujhe itna hi miss krti hogi
    hum kabhi nhi mil sakte

  63. Snaha plz yaar aisa mt bolo dekhna aap ek din zarur milogi apni bf se….

    Ab to hs do.na wrna faltu m mujhe aapke daato ko aapke muh se htana pdega.:-) 🙂 🙂 ..:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂

  64. Aj hm log yHa p bat kar rahe h but 6mnoth bad shayad ap log n mile us site pe but mai hamesha milunga mai yaha apne frnd ko dhundhne ata hu daily

  65. Attention plzzzzzz…..

    Ek pagal ne dusre pagal se kha,
    Mai duniya ko mita dunga mita dunga mita dunga….

    To dusre pagal ne kha.,

    Hehehehehehehehe mai tumhe rabad(erasor) hi nhi dunga.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 .:-) 🙂

  66. Ek Admi bohat zyada sochta tha,..Dusre Aadmi ne usse kaha : Tum itna sochte ho,sochne k liye koi banda q nahi rakh lete?…1st Admi : Aisa banda kahan milega?..2nd Admi : Main hun na.Salary kitni doge ?..1st Admi : Rs. 8,000..2nd Admi : Apki apni salary 5000 hai,Mujhe 8000 kahan se doge ?..1st Admi : Ab ye sochna tumhara kaam hai

  67. Humesha muskura ke aansuon ko chhupaya,
    Gham ko chupane ka yehi rasta nazar aaya.

    Kis kis ko batate behte ashkon ka sabab,
    Ke Derd-E-Dil, dil main kis ne jagaya.

    Mehfilon main kahin bhi maza na raha,
    Rakha dil pe patther to khud ko sajaya.

    Baat be baat apni aahain daba kar,
    Yaron ke darmiyan kis qadar muskuraya.

    Na thi chah kabhi mujhe mankashi ki,
    Jaam-e-wafa kisi bewafa ne pilaya.

    Kya muqaddar se shikwa kerte rahain,
    Jo kismat main tha wohi to paaya.

    Yeh kis mod pe aa gayi hain ummeedain,
    Ke saaya-e-manzil nazar main na aaya.

    Apno ne palat ke dekha tak nahin,
    Ghairon ne aakar gale se lagaaya.

    Achha hua ke raaz khul hi gaya,
    Dil-e-nadaan pe khanjar kis ne chalaya.

  68. Mom: School ja…kid : nahi jaunga ….Mom: kyun ??.kid: Job kar lunga…!!..Mom:” Nalayak beshram.. Class 2 mein padh kkya job karega..??.kid: “Class 1 ki ladkiyo ko tution padhaunga…!!”..Confidence to dekhie aaj kal ke bacche ka… !!

  69. वक्त का तकाजा हर फर्ज को मजबूर करता हैवरना कोन पिता अपनी चाद सी बेटी को नजरो से दूर करता ह

  70. hmm……sneha so jaiye tense mat.kijiye fone me koi or ladka ni mai hi paresan kar raha tha
    gud nyt sd tc Bye 😀 😀

  71. Ha ji chliye ab aap sb patesan na hoiye mere wjh se… so jaiye… nhi to kl bhi mujhe hi apka class krna padega…
    Wese mai kya keh rha tha ki wo cd aap bta deti ki kaha rakhi h to bdi meharbani hoti…

  72. Byeeeee
    Gud nyte to all my frnds…
    Swt drm n tc ….
    #simmi kl nariyl lane ki jarurt nhi h… dekho mai phr aagya hu pr tm hi nhi ho…

  73. itni bhi kya jaldi h dekhne ki kl aram se sab f milkr sath me dekhenge.
    bhabhi ko bhi sath lete aate to maza hi aajata wo bhi apne hero ko dance krte hue dekhti with juto ka haar

  74. Oye madam chup rahiye… chliye jakr chup se so jaiye… mai to bs apke dance k scene ko htana chah rha tha jo munni bdnam pr apne ki thi… kham kha dosto me apka majak ud jyga.. isliye bola sirf… apka sachha dost huto itni care to rahegi hi… 😀 😀

  75. Hey baby chutki sweatu jiya bhai mamta sbne mujhe bht miss kiya na..
    I know frnds tm sb ek tym ka khana bhul skte ho bt mujhe nhi..:-)
    sry yr bt na m soya b nhi thabt pta nhi mere phn m ntwrk hi nhi aa rha tha..so

  76. Dosti Karo To Hamesha Muskra KKisi Ko Dhoka na Do Apna Bana KKar lo yaad Jab Tak Hum Zinda HeFir na Kehna Chale Gaye Dil Me Yade basa K..

  77. sahil ji apka pyr to bada pyara h mgr ap is trh to apne pyr ko paaoge nhi balki kho doge jitni jaldi ho ske bta do use are wo khud hi ek special day hoga jis din tum use propose kroge islie kisi ache din ka wait mt kro wrna is ckkr me kitni kahaniya adhuri reh jati h pls jao or bta do use shyd uske dil me b kuch ho wrna fir dec me wop shadi ka card lkr aygi fir chle jana uski shadi attend krne
    mere mr. khan wali glti mt kro ye to hmara naseeb acha tha ki muje unke dil ki bat pta chl gyi wrna wo to puri zindgi izhar hi nhi krte na muje kbi pta chlta
    so sahil jaldi jao or bol do jo hoga dekha jayga ham sab h tumhare sath

  78. Mai to bs aap logo ki jasusi krne chipka rhta hu.. ki mere na rhne me meri kitni burai hoti h…. #$neha.
    N ha abhi wo 11 me h…

  79. Teri meri prem kahani…yhi title h #aksha
    Yr pr mai to line isliye mar rha tha ki koi mujhe cls ki notes de de… #sneha…

  80. hahaha padh to lena mt line marke hi notes loge ok agr time mila to aj tumhari story bhi jrur padhungi ok frnds ab me chlti hu

  81. mera bhi pyar h Jo mere se khafa h uska reason h uski family Jo nhi chahti hum ek ho kya app meri help kr skte h kuki WO nhi chahti mere se BT kre kuki WO mujhe pareshan nhi dekh skti plzzz help me ……mera fb id h 8802062604 add me ar bte hum fb PR share kr skte h

  82. rewri wale b stry likhne lg gye..apni city ki stry fst tym.pdh ri hu.. achi lgi…oe kha rhte ho tum rewri m…tumse nhi btya jaa ra to mko btao m jaa k kh deti hu us ldki ko…pgl inna b koi drta h bhla..

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