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aaoge jab tum part 2 -kalpita

Ab 2 saal ho gaye akash ke jaane ke baad se.us dinse wo nehi aaye wapas.koi contact bhi nehi thi bas kavi kavi Riya unki baate karti thi.sun sun ke achha lagta tha sath hi sath dukh v hota tha.bahat kuch badal gaya tha in 2 saalo me.par garmio ki sham me,baarisho ki bundo me or baharo ki phulo me akash ko me ab v mehsus karti thi.mere dil me to aaj v wohi he.in guzre waqt ke sath mujhe ye v ehsaas ho chukka tha ki me akash se kitna pyar karti hu.par unhone to mujhe kabhi nehi kaha he wo mujhe pyar karte he ya nehi.fir v dil me ek aas to thi.aaj kal garmio ka mausam chal raha he.ese hi ek garmi ki sham ko wo mere paas the kitne ache the wo lamhe.ab pata nehi wo kabhi aaenge ya nehi.unke jaane ke baadse to me jese badaal si gayi hu.ghanto akeli bethi rehti hu.par aaj tak kisiko mene janne nehi diya ki me kitna pyar karti hu akash se.par riya samajh chuki he mere dil ki baat.kavi kavi dar v lagta he ki kahin unhe kisi or se pyar na ho jaae.ek umeed ko liye jinda hu ki wo laut aa
enge jarur.mere intezar ki ghadi khatm hogi.or me unhe bol dungi me use kitna pyar karti hu.ek din riya ne mujhe apne ghar bulaya tha hum dono chhat pe bethe the baat kar rahe the.riya ne kaha purbi ek good news he.mene kaha kya?wo bolne jaa hi rahi thi tabhi aunty ne use bulaya to wo niche chali gayi me wahin chhat pe tehel rahi thi.fir khadi hoke chand ko dekhne lagi.thande hawa ka jhoka mere aas paas se guzar raha tha.me gun gunaa ne lagi
“Tanhayi jine na de becheni tad paae,tumko me na dekhu to dil mera ghabraae
Ab mujhe chhod kar dur jaana nehi
Nazar ke saamne zigar ke paas koi rehta he wo ho tum “
Utne me hi kisine pichhe se kaha ab nehi jaaunga chhod ke.me chup ho gayi……ye to……….ye to akash ki aawaz he…..mene pichhe mud ke dekha  koi nehi tha laga jese mera behem he par jab fir pichhe mudi to mere saamne akash khade the.mujhe to yakin hi nehi aaya.me heran hoke unki taraph dekh rahi thi.wo bole kya hua princess pehchan paayi ya nehi?me fir v chup thi.itne dino baad aae he par bilkul nehi badle wese hi he.bahat ache dikh rahe the.unke gore chehre pe chaand ki kirne jese wo koi sapno ke rajkumar lag rahe the.mere liye to wo hi mere sapno ke rajkumar he.meri khamosh nigahe unhe bahat kuch bolna chahti thi pata nehi wo samajh paae ya nehi.aaj tak to bina bole sab kuch samajh jaate he.me khud ko sambhal ke thodi dur chali gayi.wo fir mere paas aa gaye or bole kya ab tak gussa ho mujhse?mene fir v kuch nehi kaha bas niche dekh rahi thi.unhone apne haato se mera chehra uthaya or bole ek baat bolu mene bas sar hila ke haa kaha unhone kaha sach much bahat khubsurat
ho gayi ho.unse ye sunke me pata nehi kis dunia me kho gayi jo thoda khud ko sambhala tha nehi sambha paayi mere ankho me aasu aagaye.unhone kaha are are ye aasu kyu me to aa gaya hu na.me chup thi tabhi riya haat me kuch khane k liye le kar aayi or boli purbi tumhe pata chala na kis khus khabri ke bare me bol rahi thi me.me bina kuch bole ghar aa gayi.mere ruh me ek alag si khusi thi mere intejar ki ghadi khatm hui thi.raat bhar me bas akash ke bare me soch rahi thi.subah uth ke jab bahar gayi to unse najre mili wo meri taraph dekh ke smile kar rahe the tabhi papa aae or unse baat karne lage me to garden me chali gayi phul lene.unke aane ke baad se mere chehre pe ek nikhar aa gayi thi.me khus rehne lagi thi.mera dil to gaane lagaa tha”tum aaye to aaya mujhe yaad gali me aaj chand nikla”. is khusi me ek or khusi jud gayi jab riyane farm house jaane ki baat ki.puaraani yaado me mera dil bhar utha.is bar v us bar jesa hi hua wo aake mere paas beth gaye.par is bar mere and
ar ek ajeeb si feeling thi.kyu ki me ab wo chhoti purbi nehi thi na ab to me badi ho gayi thi.ab jab wo mere karib aate he bahat jyada saram aati he ya fir yun bolo me kuch soch hi nehi paati.farm house pahanchte hi chupke se unhone mera haat khich liya or us pond ke paas le gaye.mene thoda gussa hone ki acting karte hue bola ye kya kar rahe ho me ab bacchi nehi rahi unhone mere gaal khichte hue bola to meri princesses ab badi ho gayi he.mujhe to pata nehi tha ye bol ke wo hasne lage. Bahat badmas ho gaye he wo in 2 saalo me par unki har ek baat mere dilko bhaati he.kya karu kuch bol v nehi sakti dil jo laga liya he unse.mujhe chup dekh ke unhone kaha sorry tum gussa ho kya.mene kaha haa hu to.unhone kaha to jo sajaa chahe  de do me to haajir hu.mene thoda socha or bola us ped se mere liye aam tod ke laado yahi sajaa he wo ped ke paas gaye thodi der baad jab mene dekha to wo niche soye hue the me ghabra gayi daudte hue gayi me bahat tens ho gayi thi.thodi der baad unhone chu
pke se mujhe apni baaho me bhar liya me to heran ho gayi.kuch to hua mere dilko.fir mujhe chod ke uth gaye or bole kesa laga majak.me gusse se unki taraph badhi to wo bhagne lage me v bhagi unke pichhe.fir wo ruk gaye or meri taraph tode hue aam badhaya fir mera gussa gayab.sach bolu to gussa me jyada der nehi kar paati unpe.fir hum wapas aa gaye.riya us din mujhe dekh ke smile kar rahi thi.mene kaha kyu smile kar rahi ho.to usne kaha wo to tumhe pata he na ye bol ke wo fir hasne lagi.mene kuch nehi kaha.ek din raatko mujhe nind nehi aa rahi thi to me bahar aake bethi thi.tabhi pata nehi kese akash v wohi aa gaye.is bar mene puchh hi liya tum kese pahanch jaate ho me jahan pe v hoti hu unhone kaha tumhari dhadkano se pata chal jaata he.tum bologi to chalaa jaaunga.mene kaha na na esa nehi he.wo bole to fir kesa he?mene kaha nothing.thodi der hum chup bethe.fir achanak baaris aagayi kahinse me andar aa rahi thi to unhone mera haat pakad liya mene kaha chalo andar baris ho rah
i he.wo khamosh hoke meri taraph dekh rahe the.mere haato ko pakad ke unhone kaha mujhe yaad karti thi kya itne dino me.mene kaha hmm.wo mere or karib aaye or bole tumhe yaad he ek bar me tumse kuch bolna chahta tha par bol nehi paaya tha.mene kaha bolo.wo or karib aae or bole I love you purbi…………………….………………………
Mera waqt to wohi theher gaya dhadkane jese ruk si gayi.khamosiyo me jese khusi ki jhankar gunjne lagi.ankhome aasu bhar aaye khusio ke.esa laga jese mujhe apni zindagi dobara mil gayi.mene kaha I love you too akash.ye sunke akashne mujhe baahome le liya.mujhe to jese jannat mil gayi us waqt.hum dono hi baris me bhig rahe the sath hi sath hamare pyar ki baaris me v.usi dinse mere pyar ke safar me mujhe akash ka sath mila.ab hum pehle se v jyada baate karne lage ghumne lage farm house se aane ke baad v.ek din aakash mujhe ek jagah ghumaane le gaye.wahan ek chhota sa jheel tha hum wahin pe beth ke baate karne lage baato hi baato me mene puchha akash agar hame kabhi juda hona pade to kya karoge.wo thoda gussa hoke bole chup fir kavi ese mat bolna tum meri zindagi ho tumse dur hoke me kese reh paaunga.mene kaha agar me kisi or se shaadi karlu to?wo thoda sad ho gaye or bole esa hoga to agar usme tumhari khusi hoga to me tumhare khusi ke bich nehi aaunga.mene kaha chup bahat bol r
ahe ho.me nehi karne wali kisi or se shadi kyu ki tum to already mere husband ho gaye ho.akashne puchha kese?mene kaha yaad he na mene bachpan me kaha tha jo mujhe sapno ki dunia me le jaaega use me shadi karungi or tum to already le aae mujhe to obviously tumse hi shadi karni padegi.akashne kaha to ye baat he ok to waada karo kisi or se shadi nehi karogi.mene kaha promise fir hum donone smile kiya.kuch din bit gaye.us din ke baad se thikse baat nehi hui thi akash se thoda busy reh gayi thi me sayad wo v.fir v ek do bar unhone mujhe baat karne ko bulaya tha par me nehi jaa paayi thi.fir ek din riya bhagte hue mere paas aayi or boli purbi chal jaldi akash ki tabiyat bahat kharab he.me ghabra gayi or uske sath chali gayi unke ghar.ghar jaake dekha akash soye hue the.me unke paas jaake bethi aunty nehi thi sayad.riyane kaha tum  yahi ruko me soup leke aati hu.riya chali gayi.me bethi thi tabhi akashne mera haat pakad liya or bole to finally aa hi gayi.kabse wait kar raha tha.me
ne kaha rest karo tabiyat kharab he na unhone kaha  kiski tabiyat kharab he?mene kaha tumhari.to wo haske bole nehi wo to majak tha tumse baat jo karna tha.mene kaha tum v na sachme bahat badmas ho gaye ho me jaa rahi hu.wo bole suno to mene kaha bolo to.thodi der ruk jaao na mere liye please mene thoda socha or bola hmm ok ok fir hamne bahat saari baate ki.kuch der baad me ghar aa gayi.kuch din baad akash ka ek dost rahul uske sath ghar aaya tha usne mujhe use introduce karwaya.meri ek relative ki beti jo meri sister he(sreya) hamare ghar aayi thi us waqt.rahul use dekh raha tha bahat. mene jyada baat nehi ki usse.zindagime kab kese or kya ho jaae kaun keh sakta he.usi tarah meri khusio ki umar sayad kam ho rahi thi.akash ka wohi dost aksar hamare ghar aane laga akash ka mood kuch thik nehi tha use laga ki rahul mujhe like karta he.akash saari baat mujhse share karta tha to ye v puchh  liya mene use samjhaya esa kuch nehi he to wo thik ho gaya.par use dekh ke me samajh chuk
i thi ki wo  upset he.ab wo rahulse baat v nehi karta tha.me use khus rakhne ki kosis karti thi.me akash se milne gayi thi ek bar.wo khadaa hua tha me pichhe se aake usko pakad liya or bola ek good news he wo pichhe mudaa or bola kya?mene kaha sunoge to tumhare hos hi ud jaaengewo tens hoke bola kya baat he bolo na please.mene kaha tumhara wo dost he na rahul uske parents hamare ghar aaye the rista leke wo heran ho gaya sath hi sath bahat sad v.mene use samjhaya are tens mat ho kuch nehi hoga.wo chup raha us din se.akash ab jyada nehi bolta tha.ek din akash ghar aa raha tha tabhi uska dost hamare gharse nikla usne mere papa ke paao chhue or  chala gaya jaate waqt wo akash ko dekh ke smile kar raha tha.ye sab dekh ke akash bahat jyada upset ho gaya tha.mene use samjhane ke liye ek jagah bulaya.wo aaya par uske chehre par khusi bilkul nehi thi bahat sad tha wo.mene kaha us baat ko leke tens kyu ho ye to chhoti si baat he.akhir hamari  familyse uska rista judne jaa raha he to t
hoda baat karne se koi problem nehi he na(me ek bar rahulse baat kar rahi thi jo akash ne dekha).akashne meri taraph dekhaa.pata nehi kyu wo heran tha.unki ankhome dard tha.unhone mujhe kaha me jaa raha hu purbi.mene kaha kahan?unhone jawab nehi diya.or wahan se jaane lage mene bahat aawaz lagayi par wo nehi ruke.esa pehli bar huaa tha.dusre din  mene riya se unke bare me puchha to jo suna uske baad me tut gayi.saare sapne jese bikhar se gaye.akash chala gaya yahan se par kyu kis liye wo itna naraj he.mera rahulse baat karne se wo itna gussa kyu he…………………….me ro padi akash tum kyu chhod gaye mujhe………..ek baar to sun lete meri baat.. kamse kam koi gaat femi to naa hoti………..fir ek bar mera pyar mujhse dur ho gaya……………………..…………..me tut gayi kyu ki is bar akash ke lautne ki umeed nehi thi wo mujhse naraj hoke gaya tha pata nehi ab wo kavi mere paas aaega ya nehi………….

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25 thoughts on “aaoge jab tum part 2 -kalpita”

  1. Arpita mere khayal se akash jrur vaps ageya.but ek glti apki bhi ap jante the ki rahul apke bf ka dost h h vo apke ghr ate jata tha aap usse yeh bhi toh bol skti thi ki aap rahul plz hmare ghr kam aya kro nd use ignor krte.akash ki jgh koi or bnda hota toh vo bhi esa hi karta .kher jo bhi h akash jrur vaps ayega asa mera manna h

  2. Hi lata ji agar kalpita akash k dost rahul ko ignore krti to chalta lekin agar kalpita akash se kahti ki apne dost rahul ko mere ghar kam ane bolo to akash ko uspe sakk hota aur kuch din bad akash kalpita se breakup kr leta…

  3. Agr nhi krta toh esme glti kis ki h yeh smjh n aa rha .agr akash kalpita se sacha love krta hoga toh i am sure vo vapis ayega .

  4. Galti h akash ki agar vo sacha love krta to kalpita ko chod k ni jata ek baar ye to jarur puchta ki ‘kalpita tum mjhe dhoka q de rai ho?’ ya jate samay kalpita ki baat jrur sunta..so galti akash ki h jb usne pyar kiya to kalpita pe v vishwas rkhna chaiye..

  5. Ok nishant (mujhe toh yeh smjh n ata log pyr krte hi kyu jb sbhi pta h ki dono me se ek jrurt dhokha dega )

  6. Ha ye to sbko pta hota h ki koi na koi jrur dhoka dega but iska mtlb ye ni ki log marne se pehle hi bhoot ban jaye..by the way kbhi kbhi kisi ko apna pyar mil v jata h..

  7. Kitni ajeeb bat h na love vo feeling h jisme sb kuch acha lgta h but jb khtm ho jaye .dhoke mil jaye toh jeene ka mn n krta . Mene ky dosto ki love story suni h bhut dukh hota h unke liye .me khusnsib hu ki mujhe av tk kise real love n hua thank god .bas ek wish h mujhe kv bf n ek acha lover life patner dena jo mujhe kbhi chod k na jaye. ( And meri yeh bhi dua h ki jinhe jinka love mil chuka h unhe hmesha khus rkhe unke bich koi misunderstaing na ho.god bless you all friends

  8. Hi… Mujhe lagta h ki akash ko sucha pyar tha to use bharosa bhi rakna chaheye tha

    lata G aap ne such he ka ab na sacha dost or na sucha pyar muskil se milta h
    n god apki wish jarur sunege

  9. hi mujhe lgta hai ki akash ne glat kiya ek bar to use bat karni chahi thi saf saf akhir kya bat yese bina kuch khe or gussa hokar nhi jana tha
    aap ki love stori mujhe bhohut achhi lgi me bhagwan se ricbest karuga ki aal log fir mile jaye or ab labhi juda n ho

  10. hi kalpita
    kisi v relationship me trust bahut important hota h love k saath agar trust nhi to relationship ka koi root nhi hota h
    akash ko ek baar baat kr k clear karna chahiye tha agar dout tha to aise bich me nhi jana chahiye tha

  11. Dosto thanx ki aapne ye story padhi bt ye real nehi Or na hi ye meri life story he ye bas ek sochi hui story he but aap sabke comment k liye thank u

  12. Story ko Bahat hi romantic style mein likha hei apne Jesse ki sirf padhta hi jaun story ka the end hi na ho story ko padh k mujhe lagta he ap dono ek dum perfect jodi the lekin jodi jitne v perfect kyun na ho Agar us jodi mein miss understanding ho tab toh jodi ka tutna hi hota hai jese Akash se hui galat femi.z

  13. KALPITA MENE APKI 1ST PART VI PARA HE BOHOT ACHI LAGI OR 2ND PART OR JYADA ACHHHI HE.KALPITA APKI TO KOI GALATI NHI HE AB RAHUL APKO PASAND KRTA HE SO USNE APKI GHAR RISTA MAGNE AAYA YETO NORMAL SI BAT HE KOI VI AAYEGA HI LADKI KI GHR RISTA LEKE AND RAHA AKASH KI BAT USE IS TARAH SE NARAJ HONA OR IS TARAH DAUT KRNA SAHI NHI HE WO IS BARE ME APSE KHUL KE BAT TO KR SKTA THA OR JB AP DONO ME ITNA PYAR OR TRUST HE TO AKASH Q FIKAR KR RAHA THA USINE KAHA THANA KI AGR APKI KHUSI HO TO WO JOVI KREGA OR KALPITA TO AKASH KI SB KUCH HE SO AKASH Q TENS LETE HE. GALATI AKASH KI HE KALPITA.KALPITA DOST AAPNE MUJHE PEHCHANA ME WO PURANA APKA HAR STORY READ KRNE WALA DOST ME YAHA AATA HI HU KALPITA KI STORY KE LIYE AAP SACHME BOHOT JYADA ACHI HO AAPNE OR APKI STORY NE DIL CHHU LI DOST…

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