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11 – Karan

Hi frndsss,i am karan. Ye baat tab ki hai jb main class 10 mein padhta tha. Ek din mere building mein ek nai family shift hui. Wo log bahut achche the. Kuch din baad Unke family mein ek ladki rahne ke liye aai. Uska naam kreeti tha. Wo 11th mein thi. Humari family aapas mein kafi ghul mil gai thi isliye wo mere ghar mein aati jati rahti thi. Ek din wo mere ghar aai per us din main akela tha so usne mujhse meri mom ke baare mein pucha ki wo kaha gai hai. ( I swear yr,maine first time uska chehra dekha ). Ek din Use kuch books ki jaroorat thi so wo mere paas mangne aai. Aur kuch isi tarah hamari baat cheet hone lgi. Dhire dhire mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya. Main apni padhai chor ker hamesa uske baare mein sochta rehta tha. Hamesa uske sapne dekhta rehta tha. Per main use apni dil ki baat kabhi nai kah paya kyoki mujhe darr tha ki wo kis tarah react karegi aur agar usne meri family member ko bta diya to meri watt lag jayegi. Is liye main hamesa apne immotions ko control mein rekhta tha.

Mere board exam najdik aa rahe the is liye maine akhir decide ker liya ki kuch ho jaye per ab main uske baare mein nai sochunga aur apni padhai per focus karunga. Uske baad maine usse milna bnd ker diya. Wo mujhse baat kerne ki bahut kosis ki bt maine use ignore ker diya. Kuch din baad mere exams khatm ho gaye. Kyo ki main class 11 mein ja chuka tha isliye main usse uski previous year ki book mangne gaya. Usne mujhe baat nai ki per usne mujhse khud buk le lene ko kaha so maine le li. Raat ke 11 baj rahe the Jb maine buk ko open kiya to main shock ho gaya (( Meri ek adat thi ki main roz apne skul ke garden se ek rose tor ker laata tha aur ghar aane ke baad cycle park karte samay garage mein ya fir sidhiyo per fek deta tha.)) us buk ke jayadatr panno ke bich meri rose flowers rakhi thi jo ki puri tarah se sukh chuki thi. Agle din maine use shaam ko akele chchat per bulaya. Aur maine use un sukhe roses ko ek saath de kar iloveu kaha. Wo mujhe dekh ker hasne lagi aur mujhse lipat gai. Us din hamne apne jindagi ke sbse khubsurat pal ek saath bitaye. Hum ek dusre ke saath hr ek baat share karte the. Kabhi gussa nai hote the. Per kuch din baad mera admission banglore mein ho gaya.

So that mujhe jaana para. Uske paas mobile nai tha so Jaate samay maine use apna mobile de diya. Us din hum dono bahut roye the. Jb main banglore pahucha to hu mobile per baatein karne lge. Ek din maine use call kiya per uska mobile switch off aa raha tha. Maine kai baar try kiya per nahi laga .main bhut pareshan ho gaya. At last maine apni mom ko call kiya aur baton baton main maine unse kreeti ke bare mein pucha to unhone mujhe bataya ki unki family ghar chor bihar shift ho gai. Meri mom ne mujhe bataya ki kreeti ke ghar mein se kisi ka bhi contact no. unke paas nai hai. Mujhe samajh nai aa raha tha main kya karu. Kreeti ek dost meri fb friend thi so maine use contact kiya to mujhe usse pata chala ki uski mom ko hmare baare mein pata chal gaya isi liye unhone kreeti ko bahut maara aur uska mobile tor ker fekh diya. Aur to aur unhone usko uski padhai bhi churwa di. Maine uski friend se contact adress aur no. ke bare me pucha to usne bhi yahi bataya ki wo bhut dino se usse contact nai ker pai hai. Main is site per story share ker raha hoo kyo ki usne mujhe bataya tha ki jb wo bor ho jati hai to wo is site per stories padhne lgti thi. I m waiting for u my kreeti. My love…my life…my everything… Please come back….please,..,.i swear,i never quarrel with you…please come….please.,..

 

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185 thoughts on “11 – Karan”

  1. Mere mohhle me
    Rishte me bade papa or ma lagege
    unhone ne apni beti ki khushi ke liye other cast shadi ke liye ready ho gaye h
    Sach me ise parents sab ko mile
    Jo apne bachho ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kare…
    Mai to bahut happy hu

  2. Or sneha jawab do tumne apna name kyu change kiya???
    kbhi kajal???
    Kbhi sneha???
    kabhi kunal???
    Tum jo bhi ho
    Par fake log ki is group me koi jagah nhi h
    Sorry agar bura laga to

  3. Hellk sneha ruko plz batao ap unsabhko janti ho kya bolo. Mera matlab woh sablog kaha h kya wahi sneha isliye pucha plz batao

  4. Aise kaise chhodh du lisha babu
    Ek fake person ke wajah se kitna kuch sunna pada mujhe meri family ko lekar
    Mai nhi chahti dubara aisa ho

  5. Haan aditya…maine dekha comments ok….wo toh maine issliye bola bcz aapnebola tha ki konse luv ke baare me btaun,,.thts why
    Welcome uday…in our grp

  6. Or ja ek baat apse puchni thi ap kaise yeh disite karsakte ho k ye fak h or apke ghartak bhi jasakta h sochnewali baat h ab sneha ko bhagadiya kisi pata woh real prsn b hosakti h qki main sneha ko janta hu hamara Group tha 3sal pehlese hamlog dost h jisme
    Main
    Jot
    Anuj
    Salman
    Rohan
    Aksha
    Dipika
    Aashi
    Mahes khan
    Jiya
    Nisha
    Poonam
    Shadab
    Sonu
    Rachit
    Bohat sara pyaar tha jam sab logome
    Aao chahe to dekh sakti ho .
    Storys ke naam hain
    Dil ki basti
    Anu+jot=anujot
    Delhi metro
    Aise bohatse site h jisme ham sab hi rehte the yeh site ko hum hi chalate the naina

  7. Wlcm uday kuch batao apne bare me???

    Lisha babu kya batau
    Ap to jante hi ho mujhe unse pyari pyari fight karna achha lgta h

  8. Sry naina aise kisiko nhi bolna chahiye aapki marzi gud nit
    Nd sneha agar tum ho to kisiki baat dhyan mat do plz agar wahi hamri wali sneha ho to apko koi kuch nhi kehsakta ham hain yahpe
    Jo bolta hai usey bolte rehnedena jabtak ham sab yahpe ana jaye
    Sry naina bura mat manna agar wo sneha oriznal hai samjho to hamse bura koi nhi hoga qki ham jante hain hamari choti si gudiya sneha ko. Sachai nhi chupti ek baar ana zaroor sneha or plz mera msg zroor dekhna. Hosakta h ap nhi ho bolnhi sakte

  9. Visal maine bola ki fake person ki is group me koi jagah nhi h
    Or maine sawal pucha usse or unse jawab nhi diya tum ja ke reet wale story me dekho kunal or sneha ka pattern same h or isse pehle usi pattern me kajal name tha agar wo fake person nhi h to q unse jawab nhi diya

    Or kisi ek fake person ne mere bare me or meri family ke bare me bahut kuch bola h isliye or mai uska name le ke apna muh ganda nhi karna chahti

    Or mai yaha silent reader bhi thi maine aadhe se jayda sbke comment read kiya h

    Or mujhe ye bhi pta h anuj or jot ki sadi ho gai h sahi kaha na maine

  10. Haha unki shadi nhi huyi drasal wo log mazak karre the wo anuj hi tha pagal ki thra khud hi khudko jot anuj banta haha
    Uski shadi nhi huyi h or jot anuj ek hi hain woh hsm sab logone milkar drama kiyatha whtspp or rral samajh baite log

  11. Sry apne jo kaha h to hosakta h sneha galth ho. Par ap jisko bolrhi h woh kaun h jo apke ghrtak ghusgaya banda matlab apse chahat kya thi or apko itna hurt karneki zarurat hi kya thi . Kya apne ussey love kiya yah baat karn band kardiya ya phir apko pasand krta tha mera matlab h k koi bhi i san ghrtak janeki vaja kya h

  12. Na to maine usse pyar kiya h na hi like kiye h
    Or bus usse apna dost samjha tha
    20 December 2016 ko story
    Or 2017 January ki story प्यार हर किसी को नही मिलता -afzal
    Comment read kar lo
    sab samjh aa jayega

  13. आखिर आज उसने कह ही दिया,
    “मैं नही करता तुझसे प्यार”,
    तो मैंने भी अकड़ में जवाब दे दिया,
    “भाड़ में गया तेरा प्यार”

    “अब की बार मोदी सरकार”

    Hehehe

  14. Are aisi baat nhi bas kya naam hai pucharahatha shayd kpi hamera dost ho ya phir main kuch madat kardu apki udko yahse bahar krko . Acha yr batao woh hai yah nhi site pe

  15. Oh hod angel apne b wahi kehdiya
    Sbhilg aise hi q khte h.hamne kahana vishal ham nahi batayenge hamra pura nam
    Apki marzi h nhi bat krni h to mat kariyega sry angel ji nhi batasakte ham izat se baat nhi karhe hain kya bollo bs haina or kya

  16. Mai bhi thik hu angel
    Or itni jldi bhul gaye ki mai kaha se hu
    Or batao Punjab ka kya hal chal h dekho mujhe yad h tum Punjab se ho,,
    Or maine apni story post nhi kiya h angel….
    Vishal wo site me rahe ya na rahe mujhe usse koi mtlb nhi h

  17. agr vo preshan krta to kb ka use uthake life se bahr krti m naina but vo preshan ni krta. ap ek baat btaao yr kya koi ldka agr aoke sath time pass kre ya just aapko TNG krna chahta ho to vo bina aapka response jaane kya 1 hour tk akela phn pe baat kr skta h or aap use ek lfz b na bolo?

  18. Apse pyar krta h wo had se jayda isliye
    Apke response jane bina hi ap se bate karte h
    Par jab tum uske sath nhi rah sakte ho to
    Tumko usse dur rahna chahiye

  19. naina dur jaane ko m usse door jaaungi kbhi baat b ni krungi but vo mere har pal ki khbr rkhega.mene bde se bda pyr krne vala dekha or reject kiya h but is bnde ne mera mind block kr diya h agr uska sath deti hun to khud ka dil ni manta ni deti to vo beksur maara jayega
    mere sare frndz khte h use chod bat mt kr dfaa krde life se but pta ni kyo m ye ni kr pa rhi hun jb vo 1 hour ,even ki pura din ldne ke baad phn cut krte huye I love u forever bolta h to jese yhi sch lgta h baki sb jhooth .

    1. Aapki story ye love story sunne ke baad ham aapse kuch kehna chahenge angel ji. Ek baat suno pyaar to aapne karliya hai par kohi pana woh har insaan ke nasseb me nhi rehta dekho sis. Agr aapka ishq uske upar janleva hai toh main aapse kehta plzz bura mat manna
      Woh ishq hi nhi hai bass ap uske bareme zada sochna kamm karo sis. Jaise t.v serial beauty work ya saheliyonke saath
      Yah phir mom ke saath. Aisa karnese aapko khudbko oata chalega ke aapne pyaar jeetliya hai uski jaan ko bachakar. Are itna soche kabhi hamne pyar kiya hai bs yeh soch hi hame hamesha zinda karta hai. Dekho aapki marzi mohabbat ham bhi jante hain kaisi hoti hai. Par itna bhi na karo joh khudbke liye oronke liye haanikarak ho.
      Ek baar baahar aakr dekho dunia me bohat se aise missal hain joh apko apki soch badaldega kahin’n aisa ho ke na aap uske liye bano na woh aapke liye sis. Meri baat mano ya mano par aise karnese bhi apka pyaar kabhi kamm nhi hoga sis.
      Plz ek baar bina soch ki subha ko apnao phir apko khud malum hoga ke duniyan me bohat jaga muskurahat hai abhi abhi. Plz take care. Acha laga toh reply karna nhi toh b karna haa????

  20. Dekho angel tum kisi ki bat mat mano
    Bus apni dil ki sunno
    Jo apka dil kahta h wahi karo

    Par har bar dil ki mat sunna kbhi kbhi dil bhi galat hota h

    Tum man or dil dono ki sunno

  21. Dekho angel tum kisi ki bat mat mano
    Bus apni dil ki sunno
    Jo apka dil kahta h wahi karo

    Par har bar dil ki mat sunna kbhi kbhi dil bhi galat hota h

    Tum man or dil dono ki sunno

  22. Tum itna thos thos kar q puchrahe vishal bro usko. Ye meri imandari meri khuddari or jazbatonki kaathil hai. Isko abhitak sahq hai ke woh fak hai isne abhitak ye tak nhi pucha k sach kya batao tohan jan insan dosti karta hai to dosto ko puchega ya public ki sunkar use zaleel karega.
    Itna kya zarurat padi hai aapko kya karoge aap.
    .
    Sach oata chlna haina to main batata hu ye jo jiska naam nhi lena chahrhi haina woh main hu.
    Gussa aaya isliye sab batarha hu socha kbhi ehsas hojayeg ye puchegk lekin.
    Wo main hu vishal ok
    Oar mai. Koi fake nhi hu teen saalse hun main yahpe kabhi maine kisi ghrtak gali galos nhi ki.
    Or rahi baat anjum ki ha ye sach h ke usne sabko gali di or wo nilak bhi gyi .or woh ladki hi haki. Agar chaho to ap unka num lesakte ho mere paas bhi or hamre dost irfan alex k paas bhi hai. Aap chahe to puchlena. Or naina yaad rahegi aapkk dosti kabi maaf nhi karung life me kabi aisa mod na aaye aapko ke kabhi meri tharah apnkobhi pehchanna bhool jaye. Hurt toh usne sabhkl kkya par jitna mujje hua h wo kisiko nhi. Okay bhai vishal .ab puchna off karo okay.
    Jiski jitni soch h wo utna hi sochta h. Abhitak chahta thi ke shayd lout aayegi ye or kahegi k plz haqqiikat kya batao rohan par jab shitan saya satneme ho to aankh kab khulengi chans hi nhi hai.

    1. Maine itna abhitak socha k ik minaanse mujhe kyunke dunia v baatein alag h dost alg hai par har doat ko ek baar sachi ka raaz janneka haq rehta hai chahe wo koi bi kna rahe apna ghrwala bhi qna kksike kehnepar israde badalwale life me kabhi aage nhi badte or dil ko tod ne wale bhi. Plz vishal bs kro

  23. pyar to kbhi usse hoga ni or dosti ke liye vo ni manta khta h dost bnke ni rh skta ab yhi hoga ki baat ni krungi but feel jrur hota rhega ki mene ek real lover ko bhot hurt kiya, chlo Jo hoga ache ke liye hoga aj hmari last time baat hogi shayd

  24. Bhai woh aap hi ho sry pr akhr me jo bola apne woh sahi h
    Hq to banta h dostonka k
    Puchna chahiye
    Warna aisehi
    Kisipar yakin
    Kaise karle nvrrrrr bhai
    .ok jo bi ho
    Main to yyhi khunga
    Jo i sn nhi h
    Uski q
    Chinta
    Ab hoto apne dost hina
    Apsme galtha fami
    Dur krlo
    I hpe dono smjhe
    Sry mai chlta hu
    Bhai sry naina
    Doat ko
    Apnao
    Or ap bhi rohan
    Byee

  25. Bhai tu kaunsi sneha ke bareme baat karrha hai abb yaad aay vishal tu wahi sneha ke bareme bolraha haine joh uski story ke part do hain par pehle uski part 2wali story submit huvithi wohina. Agar wohi hai toh janta hun sry. Maine isliye kaha ke woh ab yaha’npe nahi’n aati.
    Par tu ek baar aa vishal woh kaunsi sneha ke bareme bolraha h tu mujhe thoda cl dey okay bhai.
    Or plz maine tujhe kaha haina ke sana story me aana theek hai mera msg agar tujhe mila toh yaha’n pe nahi’n kahi’n dusri jagape bulana take ikminaan se baat karsakein jara jaldi aana

  26. Or ek baat bhi kehta hun vishal mere bareme ab zada behes mat karna kisise theek hai plzzzzzzzzzz
    Or haan kisiko kuch b kehnese sach nahi badal jata sach sach hi rehta hai tujhe maine shayad hurt kiya toh gussa hona par mujhse hi okay chalta hun pakka 9 pe milunga story mehi batata hu. “Zameer” wali pe aana main msg drop karunga by ????

  27. hlo maahi . kese ho aap ? m to thik hun

    thanks Rohan bro suggest krne ke liye .
    but aap puri story ni jante ho wese aapne ho baat khi h vo bilkul shi h but uska pyar ek trfa h m usse pyar ni krti ,m usse as a frnd baat krti hun hmmm agr mene usse baat ni ki to vo pkaaa kuch hi dino me kuch kr jrur lega . m use hr type se smja chuki hun but vo maanne ko tyar hi ni h

  28. Hello angel…mai v thik hu
    Angel mai aapki story toh ni janti bt itta kahungi ki ek baar zarur apne dil ki sunniyega, chot lagegi besak lgegi pr dil ko tasalli rahega…nd mai achhe se smjh skti hu ki one sided love kya hota h….anyways best of luck for ur future angel…

  29. Okay sis main apko ek baat kehta hu pehle yeh batao k apki story kaunsi hai usme hi comment karunga. Or shayad ap mEri baat manoge zaroor plz

  30. Noo sis mohabbat kya h main janya main wada karta hun apse kE apko sahi’n sala dunga rab kAre tehnnu bohat changi lage and Tussi edo fikr naah karo behnaa assi jante Hain tuhaddi feeling nu …..????

  31. thank u bro , wese ab m kisi ko apni love life ke bare me btana ni chahti kyoki ab sb dil me rkhke only fmly ke liye jina h muje , m sb kuj gvaaKe khush han apni life ch veere

  32. Sis tehannu jabardasti naah karunga
    Assi phir v tohaddi story nu read krna chau dene plz tuhaddie veerji ssaMjho sannu ikvary sannu batadedoge to v di tohaddi love di izat kadovi kaaam nhi hogi baaki tohaddk marzi behnaa sasriyakal bye

  33. Oji phir theek hai jado aap jidi story send karna chahndena roh mainuu ik vari dasna ji .or je tehannu ae feel hove ke tohaddi story wich sabh log mzk karaange the saddi whatspp wich te fb wch kaardena sis. Okay ji assi gusse me kadovi nahj assi saamjh de hain tohaddi feelings nu gud luck sis. Waheguru mehar karaah

  34. Na main punjabi hi hun par kambaqk sannu urdu zada andi hai coz.assi Hyderabad wich rehde hainji
    Isliye sannu jinni punjabi andi hai jinni ye sadde family nu v nai andi
    Oh aes velle assi kadovi punjab nai vekhasi .par assi family pure punjabi hi hain ji.
    Sadd fb hainji rohan singj naam se hain ji.
    Assi bohat baar ithe sadda fb link submit kiyasi magar ithe link post Nai tussi na ik kaam karo punjabi dharyi site wich aajao.assi uthe dedenge tehannu bas tohadda ek kaam rahega behnaa bs click kardo or sadda fb pe vekhllo

  35. HELLO NAINA SIS ND ALL FRNDZ…
    MAIN THIK HU NAINA SIS ND AAP??
    NAINA SIS ND ANGEL MERI KOI ONE SIDED LOVE STORY NI H..
    NAINA SIS AAPNE AISE KAISE SOCHA KI MERI KOI ONE SIDE LUV STORY H????

  36. Hello naina how are you .
    Bhai rohan
    main zameer wali
    story pe gayatha
    tu wahapar nhi hai
    Q bulaya re bro jab
    Wahpar nhi hai to

  37. Arey haan nuzy sis…kaisi hain aap??
    Nuzy sis aapne mjhe contact kiya tha hike pe…actually meri di ne btaya mjhe…sorry nuzy sis…bt mai hike ya whtsapp ni use kr rhi abi filhaal me nd hike pr toh hu mai…bt use ni krti di hi check kr leti h kbi kbi mera hike….,
    And frndz abi mai studies me busy hu exams aane wale h na…issliye…nd mere di ko pta chal gya h that mai iss site pr chatting krti hu nd ye site use krti hu issliye toh ab ni aa pati zyade yhan…bcz mere di ko ye sb ni pasand…so hope u all understand…OK.!!
    NUZY SIS ND ALL FRNDZ PLZZ DNT THINK ME WRONG…MAINE JO BI BOLA TRUELY BOLA…AAP SBSE..

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