(First Part) hello dosto, ye meri life ka dusra part hai, jo b ye padh rahe hai wo please pahla part padhle. To maine apna bag pack kiya aur hyderabad k liye nikalne hi wala tha k muskaan k papa aagaye, unhone mujhse pucha beta sahil kaha jaare ho, maine kaha uncle hyderabad jaaraha hu job k liye. Unhone kaha ye kya baat huwi, abhi to muskaan ki shadi ko do din hai aur tum jaare ho. Dosto mai aapko batadu k mere papa aur muskaan k papa ache dost b hai aur unka hamari family se attachment acha hai. Unhone kaha ki mera koi beta nai hai aur shadi k kaam me mera haat kaun batayega. Unhone mere papa se kaha mujhe rokne k liye. Hai re meri kismat dosto, ab mujhe apni hi mehbooba ki shadi me kaam karna padega. Mere papa ne kaha k hydrebd shadi k bad chale jaana. Phir to mujhe rukna padha. Phir wo din aahigaya jis din muskaan ki shadi thi, mai bahot koshish karra tha k dur rahu shadi se. Lekin meri kismat mujhe kisi bahane se utna hi nazdeek karrahi thi, Mai andar hi andar tadap raha tha , mere aansu betaab the bahar aane k liye lekin sub k saamne ro b nai sakta tha. Meri halat aisi thi dosto k gala kaata gaya aur khoon b na nikle. Uski shadi hogayi aur idhar meri barbaadi. Phir to wo huwa jo mujhe marne tak yaad rahega. Shadi k hojane bad aur jab sub khakar chale jaate hai, yaani end me ek rasm hoti hai jisme dulha dulhan ko ek hi stage par bithakar kapde rakhte hai sub. To zyadatar aisa hota haik jahan dulhan baithi ho waha Par dulhe ki chair rakhdi jati hai. Mere papa ne idhar udhar dekha aur mujhse kaha k sahil udhar se dulhe ki chair to lao zara. Kaise batao dosto mai kya kya karra tha, maine chair uthayi aur laya to papa ne kaha stage par rakhdo. Waha jahan par muskaan baithi huwi hai, mere pairo tale zameen khisak gayi, mai muskaan ko dekhna nai chahta tha lekin majbooran mai chair ko leke stage par gaya, mere haat pair kaap rahe the aur chahra laal hogaya tha, maine dhire se chair rakhi aur dekha k muskaan nazre jhuka kar baithi huwi hai, thik usi tarah jaise wo baithi thi jab maine propose kiya, mere saamne wo manzar yaad agaya, Maine dekha k muskaan ki aankho me aansu hai, mujhse bardasht nai huwa mai palat kar chala aaya. Abhi mere aansu rukne k liye tayyar nai the, maine bahot koshish ki rokne ki. Maine apni bike start ki aur ghar chala aaya, mujhe roona tha bus, par meri kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha. Mere ghar saare mehmaano Se bhara tha, mai pareshaan hogaya, subah k 4 baj chuke the. Tabhi kisi ne mujhe awaz di, wo muskaan k chacha the. Unhone mujhe phir kisi kaam se bahar lekar gaye. Dosto aisa kisi k saat na ho. Dusre din sub reception ko jaane k liye ready hogaye aur tab tak b mujhe akele me rahne ka mauka na mila. Reception dusre town me tha to do volvo bus ko hire kiya tha. Mere mummy papa pahli bus me bait gaye, maine kaha k dusri bus me aunga. Maine sochliya tha k nai jaunga. Aur mai dusri bus me b nai gaya. Phir dono bus chali gayi, maine mummy ko phone kiya aur kaha k meri tabiyat thik nai hai aur mai nai aaraha hu. Mummy shock hogayi. Maine kaha k headache hai aur nind b bahot aarahi hai. Aur kaha k papa ko batadena, mai apna phone band karke sojata hu. Jaise hi phone rakha to mere aansu jo betaab the bahar aane lage. Mere ghar par koi nai tha, mai bahot roya, kabi sofa dekhkar rota aur kabi kitchen wala din yaad karke. Wo saare lamhe yaad aare the jo maine muskaan k saat beete the. Raat bhar mai rota raha, bus phir maine dusre hi din hyderabad aagaya. Aaj do saal ho chuke muskaan ki shadi maine kabi dubara nai dekha aur apni shakal b nai dikhayi. Wo jab b maike aati hai hamare ghar zarur aati hai, lekin kisi na kisi tarah malum karleta hu k muskaan kaha hai. Aur wo jab maike aati hai to mai aPne ghar nai jaata. Meri mummy batati hai k muskaan aayi thi, aur mere baare me puchrahi thi. Ab mai jab ghar jaata hu to kabi muskaan ki mummy nazar aati hai, mai bat nai karta unse, wo b kuch nai kahti. Dosto do saal me aisa koi din nai tha jab muskaan ki yaad na aayi ho. Din to guzar jaata hai job aur dosto k saat lekin raat roye bagair nai guzarti. Agar aap kuch comments dena chahte ho tosahil.05528@gmail.com par mail karsakte hai. ZINDAGI THAM SI GAYI USKE JAANE K BAAD.
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Maine aapke story k dono part pade, aapki story bahoot acchi lagi, jo aapke sath hua bhagwan na kare kisi ke sath ho…
Story kafi sad thi pyar me bichadne ka dukh kya hota h smjh skti hu mei apko…apke story ka titl mujhe bht pasnd gya. Ab jo ho gya use badala toh nh ja skta jo ap ne saha wo kisi aur k sath na ho…..god bls u
ab inhai nayi zindgi ki suruaat karni chahiye ……… kise k jane se zindgi tham ni jatai., ha pr itna hai ki us ka gum puri zindgi bhar ni bulaya jata aur ….puri zindgi bhar pyar ni kiya ja sakta…… tak cer
Very nice story
great real love story …… pyar hum karte he q h ,kabhi – kabhi ye sochne pe mazbur kar deta h. jab kise ka drd kise k pyar ki aahhh !!!!!! sune ko , padhne ko milti h to dil kitna jada dukhta h ………
tumhari story ne to sach mai rula diya yr……. sayed har kise k nasib mai pyar ni hota….. bs 2 din ki khushi aur zindgi bhar gam …………. so tak cer dost …….. tak cear…. its true love. nc story.
raj ji, yaashi ray, deepika ji, praveen, thanx for ur comments. Mai abhi zyadatar yahi karta hu k dosto k saat rahu taake mujhe muskaan ki yaad na aaye. Aur apne aap koi na koi kaam lagata hu. Lekin raat me to yaad aahi jati hai dosto. Koshish to hai bhulne ki lekin dil hai k bhulna nai chahta
I thnk maine i’st part to read nhi kiya bt story………. Theek h ek part me cmbine ki ja skti thi so wish u all the best 🙂
rehan bhai, mai ek hi likhna chahra tha. Lekin mai jab likhra tha to phone hang hora tha, kyunki maine phone se upload kiya hai. Isliye majburan parts karne pade. Sorry for the trouble frends.
Veer……zaara
Hey sahil bhai don’t mind yar haan
mujhe kuch samaj nai aaya, veer zaara kyu?
Aise hi likh diya bs man kiya unka nam likhne ka, mere liye to Veer…..Zaara ka jo pyar tha aisa pyar to kisi ka ho hi nhi skta sbhi ke liye inspresn hn, meri to zindgi bdal di koi itna intzar kr skta h puri zindagi pyar me fanaa ho skta h so Veer…..Zaara
it’s vry painfull story.tumhare sath jo hua hai bhawan na kare kabhi bhi kisi ke sath ho mai tumhe ache se samj sakti hu pta nahi bhawan aise logo se milate hi kyu hai jo humari kismt me chah kr bhi nahi hote.
thanx hansika ji for ur comments. But its all about faith. No one can do anything about it. But the pain remains there for the rest of our life.
tumhe toa kuch kam hi hua mujhe uska kamine kutte ka bed sajna pada aur jis pe mera hak tha wo aaj kise aur ki hai 6 mahine hua ha
kiyu nahi apna lete ho usko….kiyu
Hi,Sahil
Aapne pyar ko aapni takat banao kamjoro
nahi.
Yr aap ke stry k 2no part read kya h hum ne or dakha ke sala jo true love hota h us ka end bhaut dardnak hota h. God na kara ke jo aap k 7 hua bo kisi or k 7 ho
sorry sk
H! Sahil Maine aapke dono part padhe hain. Jab maine aapka 1st part padah to main samja aapko apni Muskaan mil jaigi. I socks jab maine apka 2nd part padha to really mere Aankh se aasu tapak ne lagey. I tink ki aapko ek nayi zindagi ki suruaat karni chaiye. Maine apki yeh story apni family ko padh kar sunai hain. Mere ghar bale apko ek aachi zindagi jeene ki dua de rahe hain. Allah Afiz…..My name is Sajid Ali
thank u
m pyar me is se b jyada drd se gujra hu ……9412309007
maine apki story k 2time padhe hai padkar rona aagaye khuda kbhi kisi k sath aisa na kare jo apke sath hua hoo bus mai apko yeh bolongi sahil aap usse bhul ki try karye pata hai ya easy to nahi hai par apko karna padge jitna hoske khud k busy rakhye god bless u god apko life m bhut khushi de jo apko nahi mili take care
bhul jao agar tum to bhul jayenge hum bhi
thanx sajid bhai, mai ab yahi karta hu, apne aapko kaam me busy karleta hu. Lekin thoda waqt to lagega zakhm bharne k liye. Bus raat mushkil se guzarti hai.
pari ji aap kya bolre ho mujhe samaj nai aaraha hai.
ricky bhai so sad to here that. I knw how it feels.
Sry bro.. Tu haar gya.’ nd pyr n lyf r respectively.. I dnt knw bt i dnt like c#u##ya yes u hv undrstd wateva i wnt 2 say.. Daru pi bhul jayega use or v tips h du kya??
main bhi daru piyu kya apko bhulne ke liye
Hi monika ji, i am back but, only for your love.
Yes, offcourse. Jarur pijiye. Why not? Monika ji, aapse ye kisne kaha hai ki mai abhi jinda hu. Mai to usi din mar gya tha jis din aapne mujhe thukra diya tha.
Anyways, i am also missing you but jhagda krne ke liye……….
Ek baat aur monika ji, for your kind information, aap is se phle ye samjhe ki mai aap pe line mar rha hu. Mai ye baat clear kar deta hu ki mai aap pe line mar nhi rha hu balik aap ke charro or khich rha hu taaki aap apne aukat me rhe.
Understood mr./mrs. 50-50.
not understood…..???
aap mujse picha chudana chahte hi kya…..aur meri aukat………….???samji nahi aap muje pasand nahi karete
Very nice story ..tumahre sath bahut bura huwa yar…apne dil par pathar rak kar jina siklo
Monika g aap v daaru mt piyo thoda zehr kha lo.. Acha rahega hmre ly.. lau kya zehr tere liy bol??
prince ji main jahar khane ke liye taiyar hu…………………….
vaise bhi ab jine ki ichcha nahi hain monika ko
Marne k or v tarike h.. Jinda reh k mar maza aYEGA
kiyu badua de rahe ho…..prince
bhagwan s aapne mamga hoga jaiae main tadpta hu monika ke liye vaise monika b mere liye tadpe
Monika ji, aap chahe kitni v koshish kar le lekin mere dil me aapke liye pyar na kabhi tha, na kabhi hai aur na hi kabhi hoga. So, aap apna kimti waqt barbad mat kijiye aur kisi aur ko dhudhne me lag jayiye.
Ho skta hai, aapko koi mujhse v acchha ladka mil jaye.
Mai god se wish krunga Ki aapko mujhse v acchha ladka mile aur aap hamesha khush raho. Lekin, aap ab name change krna chhor dijiye warna aapko future me bhut hi zyada bure din dekhne pad skte hai.
Best of luck for your golden future.
Good bye.
thanx everyone.
prince n monika ji aap log kyu ladre ho, i dnt knw. But pls dont do that dost.
Bhai ise daru pini h uuks (kya naam tha is bandi ka) isko zeher pine ki advise de rha hu lad kon rha h?
kya bolu bhai,muje Bhot Rona aa raha h………
prince aap bhi apna name chenge karna chod dijiye..ab haum aapko pareshan nahi karenge?aap sirf khush khush rahna muje lagega ki aap mere sath hee ho ….ham to sirf aapka pyar dekh rahe ki kitna pyar kar sakta hain koi hamse…..thank you….hamari kismat hee kharab hain
Miss meena m nt ur prince.. Kuch misundrstnding ho gyi hmre bich mre ko tuze ese ni bolna chahiye tha us k liy sory.. Sory 4 my rudely behav..
i am not meena ……prince ji…….i am right or wrong…..
Ri8 n wrng?? Wht u mean?? Nd dnt try to gv me rspct.. Bcz i dnt knw evn sm msundrstndng r flying in btwn both u n me
ranjan ji aap mat roiye please. Keep smiling. . .pls
Sahil aapke sath to bhut jyada hi bura hua hai so difficult na.haayyyee aapne kaise bardash kiya hoga wo sab aisa kise k sath na ho………filhal to aapko apni life k bare me sochna chahiye kyuki aise aap akele kb tk royenge muskaan ko yaad krke …rone ka mazaa to tb h na jb khoya hua rone se waapis aa jaaye aap samjhne ki koshish kijiye ok nd apna khayal rakhiye sahil…..may god bless u always happy nd keep smiling sunshine……..take care….
thanx kirti ji. I am trying my level best to be happy, but it takes some time to get cured. Thanx for ur advice. God bless n keep smiling
purva ji ap apne hubby se bt kijiye or use kahiye ki agar wo apke sath nhi rahna chahta hai to ap dono alag ho jao or alag hone ke liye wo hi apke mom nd dad ko smjhaye or ap alag ho kr apna carrier bana kar apni life ek br wapas shuru kr sakti ho or agar apko future me aisa koi milta h jiske sath ap humesha khush rahogi to ap shadi kr lena
dost tumhari story mujhe bht sad lagi esa kisi k sath nhi hona chahiye…
pr dost is dunya m pyar sabhi ka success nhi hota…
so ab apko apni life kushi m jina chahiye kyoki afsos krne se koi faeda nhi mere dost..
sahil bhai… …. No comments …!!kitna pain av v aapko hota hoga… I understood….!!!!!!!!!!
सदा तो धूप के हाथों में ही परचम नहीं होता,
खुशी के घर में भी बोलो कभी क्या ग़म नहीं होता ?
sirf एक ladki के वास्ते जग छोड़ने वालो,
sirf उस ladki से ये ज़माना कम नहीं होता….!”
hii…… Sahil
mujhe lagta hai aap ko muskan ko bhul ke
apni nayi dunia banani chahiye
aap ke sath bahut bura hai but dunia sirf ek
se khatam nhi hoti god bless u nd take care
thanx all for ur comments. Keep smiling dosto aur life me aage badhte raho chahe kuch b hojaye. Mai b yahi karra hu aap sub b karen.
bhai hamare sath b kuchh aisa hi hua hai
so sad story..