smart ldki or bevkuf ldka

smart ldki or bevkuf ldka – Shiv Pandit

smart ldki or bevkuf ldka

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Ye kahani abhi jinda do logo ki h jo koi unko dekhe or unko sune vo
roye bina waps na aa aye…
m itna roya ki baltiyaan….
nai nai ye balti vali bat to mzak h yaro…
Khushi se yar..
tum b milo muhbbt ke do marizo se….. Chlo milvata hu..???
ap sb jante h m pdhta to hu ni..dukan chlata hu..??
bs ek din loutry lg gyi…
hua yu ki kpda khridne ke chkkr me m ek bahut badi factry me jane kam pda..
400 admi kam krte h usme..
or meri dukan ka mjdur m..
mere liye bdi hi h na..
uska seth b fir bada hi h..
to mera or ftry mnzr ki bhs ho rhi thi bhav ko lekr,usi wqt seth andr
aya.,usne kaha ki dekho meri bat suno tum le jao kpda or hr mhina le
jana pdega..
Mgr bhav ye hi h,nai to chay pio or  jao..
m bola sir chay ke bdle apse do bat krlu agr wqt h to…
wo thode choke jrur meri betuki bat pr mgr mera sawal htke tha to vo
bole thik h,chay mere sath pi le chl..
Hm beth gye or mene apni bdai fankni shuru kr di,sir m tru lv likhta
hu,kahaniya bhi dikhai,vo thode impress hue..mujhe to moke ki tlash
thi..
moka mila or mene apna rta rtaya swal dag diya..
sir kuch esa bataiye jo batane lyak ho..
sir bole yar 60 ki umr h ,,ab ye bcho ka kam h beta pyar vyar.
mene javani ki ke bare pucha to bole tu cigret pita h,,mene mundi hila
di ki ha..
to sir ne panch cigret magai..m smjh gya ki kuch khzana h yaha..
for bolne lge ki mera nam surendr chopda h or hm himachl se surt aye
h..kafi sal ho gye.
mere sath collage me ek ldki pdhti thi..
malvika..
m use bahut chahta tha..
mgr vo mujhe nai chahti thi..
kyuki m uske layk nai tha..vo smart ldki thi,,bindas rhne vali..duniya
ko jute ki nok pe rkhkr chlti thi.
or m bevkuf sa tha..abhi bhi hu yar..
vo fashionebl ,or m pdhaku ..m bda hi thingu sa hota tha..mtlb bs tu
smjh ja yar ki layk nai tha..
m use bahut pyar krta tha..
itna ki apna dil nikal ke use hste huye dedu.
mere ghr pe mene uska jikr kiya to ma ne kaha ki m bat krungi unke ghr valo se..
ma ne bat ki to phle to malvika ne hi mna kr diya or fir uske ghr walo
ne,ki othr cast nai krenge..
ma waps aa gai..
m phle se janta tha ki yehi hoga..
Or bs use phla pyar smjhke bhul jana chahta tha..taki jindgi age badhe..
mgr jb upr vala milata h na to kese hi mila de..
Upr vala bdi mithi nzr se dekhta h pyar krne walo ko…
Malvika kho kho ki plyar thi..
ek din khelte wqt per creck ho gya..
asptal le gye use..
or opration ke wqt jo clorofourm ka injection dete h,uski dose glti se
jyada ho gyi..
natiza ye nikla ki uske per ki ek ns bnd ho gyi..
asptal se chutti mil gyi mgr ek per kam nai krta tha.
kisi ke shahare ke bina chl nai pati..
fir kuch vqt bad malvika ke papa mere ghr aye or khne lge ki ap jo
rista lekr aye the,vo hme mnzur h..
mge mere ma bap ne mna kr diya ab…
tb mene apne ma bap ko mnaya ki mujhe uska sath dene do,vo akeli h
..or m uske bina akela hu..
fir m malvika se bat krne gya ek din..
vo ro pdi mujhe dekh kr..mene kaha ki pyar mrta nai malvika..m ab bhi
tumse pyar krta hu .
plz mujhe akela mt chodo,ha kr do..m bahut khush rkhunga tumhe..
malvika kuch boli nai bs apne per ki trf dekhne lgi..
mene bhi himmt ki or use bina puche apni god me utha kr ghr ke bahar
lakr kursi pr bitha diya..jaha aksr subah ki bhoop sekne malvika
bethti thi…
or chla aya..
kuch din bad khbr mili ki malvika man gyi..
Mere sar pe shehra bndh gya..hmari shadi ho gyi..
ab bcche bade bade ho gye..dekho kitna bda kam krte h?.sb malvika ki
kismt se h..
Itne me sr ke pas malvika mem ka fon aya..ki ghr aao..
vo ghr jane lge to mujhe bole ki kpda le jana ..
mgr m apni ankhe ponch rha tha..
to bole are kya hua tumhe..chl..
m bola sr ek bat or..kya m apke ghr chl skta hu..???
vo fir muskuraye,.bole chl..
jb pahunche to dekha aj surendr sir ka bdy h..
or malvika mem cack liye bethi thi..
Mene bato bato me do bat malvika mem se bhi puchli..
mem apko sr kese lgte h..to mem boli meri sanse or mere per inhi se
chlte h beta..
Ye meri puri duniya h…
bahut pyar krti hu m inse..inke jesa koi nai dunia me..i love him so much..
Surendr sir malvika mem ko ceck khila rhe the..
or m bhi ceck khate khate un dono ko dekhkr sochne lga ki is kahani ka
nam kya rkhu..
sir se pucha ap mem ko kya khkr bulate ho to bole smart ldki..
Or mem ap sr ko pyar se kya khti h.
mem boli bevkuf ldka..
mene apni dairy nikali or ek pnne pr likh liya…..
Ek smart ldki or ek bevkuf ldka…

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131 thoughts on “smart ldki or bevkuf ldka – Shiv Pandit”

  1. M apne pyar se door ho gya nikki.
    mgr logo se puchta rhta hu,fir unke pyar ko likhta hu,or hr ldke me khud ko smjhta hu or hr ldki me kavita ko..
    bs or kuch nai……
    or ha dubara surendr sir milne jaunga to unse puch ke,agr unhone kaha to,unke no.isi kahani ke niche dalunga,taki ap sb bat kr sko unse..
    bs milne ki der h..
    kyuki vo bade seth or m…??????

  2. Puri duniya fit h to m fitm fit..???
    hahahaha…
    kya yar bs muhbbt or uski bate…
    yehi kam pkd rkha h uske jane ke bad hmne…
    dukh to tb hota h jb koi mehntana nai milta…
    fir b lge h..??

    1. right Zemal…
      iss baat ki hairani to mujhe b hai
      waise j Shiv hain to Kamaal k bande… apna kaam bakhoobi karna jaante hain…hmmmm

  3. kuchh nahi sheenam….
    achha agar pne yahan par account bana rakha hai to bataiyega Sheena hum frnd to ban hi sakte hain…

  4. Aj m apne ek dost ke sath uske liye ldki dekhne ja rha hu..
    Ldki ka pati teen mhine phle expair ho chuka h..uski dusri shadi hogi mere dost ke sath..
    agr bat bn gai to..
    us ldki ke ek baby bhi h ek sal ki..
    mere dost ki phli hi shadi h.uski ek bat dil ko choo gayi..ki kisi ko jindgi deke dekhte h.
    mujhe naaz h mere ese dosto pr..
    i lv u sunil..my frnd..
    ye sahi kr raha h na dosto..???

  5. wah….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    sahi nahi… bohat sahi kr raha hai
    maine aisa apni zindgi mein pehle aisa nahi hota dekha
    haan j alag baat hai k yahan dekha wahan koi na koi kami zarur hoti hai aisa karne wale mein

    achha shiv aap ek baat bato kya aapke dost ki luv marriage hai j

  6. Nai..bs dost ke bde bhai ne kisi aasami ldki se shadi krli…to fir iska rista atk gya..
    rista ho nai rha tha..
    kl market me hmare janne wale ne use ye bataya ki esa rista h agr kre to..
    bs ye bat meri dukan pr hui thi..
    to dost ne kaha ki mujhe kuch nai khna bs use mujhme jindgi dikhe to meri ha h..
    to aj dono milne wale h..dost ko mene tayyar kiya h..use le ja rha hu..
    bs itni si bat h pyare..?

  7. hmmmmm
    lakin jo b hai… sun kar achha laga… k koi to hai is dunia mein jisme insaniat baki hai
    wish both of u gud luck …

  8. Shiv yr Hearttouching story….
    achha laga yr story
    kyo na aap apni love story likho shiv ji
    I m waiting ur story
    aur Dosto kaise ho
    aap b apni store share kro na

  9. Kisvl akhya mjnu te,teri lela disdi kali..
    mjnu ne jvab ditta,teri akkh na vekhn vali…
    ved v chitta te kuran v chitti,vich syahi rkh ditti kali..
    gulam fareed jtthe ankhiya ladiya,utte kya gori kya kali…….
    satsariya kal badshaoo…..

  10. Unkey intezar key maareyhain hum,Bus unhi ki yaado ke sahare hai hum,Duniya jeet ke hume krna kya hai abJise duniya se jitna tha usise hare h hm

  11. Hello dost logo…
    kese h sb…
    or sbki muhbbt kesi h…
    Card to chpvaye nai mene..khte h ki muh ka bulava bda hota h…
    ap sb ko agli kahani pdhne ka nyotaa dene aya hu..
    ana jarur…..
    Or naha ke aana..hahahahahah

  12. wao……..loverpoint ko class bana diya punjabi shik ke America jao gi kya…….
    in bekar ki chizo me kyu time west kar rahi ho…..jao book uthao…….aur study karo…..tab chance hai America jane ka………

  13. O really Aditya…!!!!
    waise Punjabi language hai hi attractive to song to achhe honge hi… hai na
    nd j jo Rahul hai iski roblem kya hai… j kisiki baton mein tang adaye bina rah nahi sakta kya….?
    ise bimari kya hai… kuchh jyada hi bolta hai… badtamiz

  14. bimari love……hai meri
    tum ladkiya kam dimag hoti ho….
    chalo…ek song batao….
    Punjabi me jo accha ho…..
    aur me bata…hu hindi song…….

  15. pyar insaan ko badtamiz nahi banata… agar ladkion mein itni hi khamiyan nazar aati hai aapko Mr. to pyaar kya kisi marad se karte ho… hu?

  16. He rahul…bacchiyo se bat ese nai krte yar..ye nazuk hoti h..smjhakr..
    ok yar inko khush rkha kr..
    or bcchiyo ye rahul thoda sa noty h..iska dil accha h..dekh sko to dil dekho???
    or nok jok hoti h to riste taza rhte h..
    accha ek bat or aaj kahani ane wali h..

    1. Shiv Rahul kaisa hai mujhe to ab iss baat se lena dena hai nahi… abhi main to yahi koshish karungi k isse baat na hi ki jaye to behtar hai
      Baki aapki story ka intezar rahega… waise kab release ho rahi hai..haan..?

  17. Nikki apko pta hoga ki hr ghr me ek noty hota h..
    hmari site ka rahul h..
    baki sb mithe h or rahul zra nmkin h..
    khali mitha khate h to muh aa jata h..
    zra zra nmkin bhi sath hona chahiye..
    or kuch nai h,,,bs..
    or story ho skta h aaj aye..
    kyuki mera ac.to yaha h nai..
    or bnana mujhe ata ni..
    kyuki angrezi se m khta hu ki tu kb ayegi mujhe..
    to khti kuch ni..bs ishara krti h..
    Babaji ka tthullu???

  18. hahahahhhahahha
    nice Shiv
    aap kisi se banwalo yr.. jise angrezi ati ho
    waise koi khaas angrezi nahi hai yahan jisse aapko dikkt ho account banane mein

  19. bhai shiv ko bol aur sister is ko…..
    mujhe mat bol…
    aur koi teacher ko sister nhi bolta
    apni teacher ko bol shiv ko shikha de punjabi……

  20. shiv mere khayal se aapne iss Rahul k bare mein galat statement de d hai… j namkin nahi kadwa hai… aur kadwahat kisi ko nahi bhati..

  21. shiv yr ap itni achhi achhi story late kaha se ho or itni achhi tarah present karte ho ki dil khush ho jata he really ye bht achhi story he………………….

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