Is story ka Ist part 27 march ko publish huaa tha. to shuruaat yaha se karta hu, me aur nancy dono hi alag alag shahar me chale gye the apni apni graduation complete karne ke liye……. ab usko pratyaksh to dekh nahi sakta tha par mobile se batcheet jari thi……. is mobile ne bhi kafi bhala kiya hai premiyo ka …… anyway mujhe is shahar aay 8 months ho gye the …. aur me nancy se 8 mahino se nahi mila tha , ek din papa ne kaha ki me unke documents le aayu naredra uncle ke pas se , upar vale ki mahti kripa se vo uncle usi shahar me rhte the jaha par nancy ka admission huaa tha…… mene bhi socha ki abi tak to bhagdodh hi bani rahi ab thoda prem bhi pradarshit kiya jaye , mene turant nancy ko fone kiya …. “kal sham 4 bje shaheed park aa jana” ….. “kyu?” .. “me aa rha hu yadi aapki iksha ho to me milna chahta hu” mene shararati lahje me kaha.., “phle btana tha na” is bar nancy ke swar me jhujhlahat thi, “dekhiye nancy ji aapko milna padega … aap chahe ya na chahe …” me apni bato se use tang kar rha tha. “to mene kab mana kiya hai … kal aa jaungi” is bar usne sakaratmak uttar diya tha, vese ye uttar vo phli bar me hi de sakti thi par aap log jante hi ho in ladkiyon ko …khud me hi jane kitni confused hoti hain.. 🙂 us din me subah subah me uncle ke ghar phucha .. par documents collect karte karte late ho gya….. khair kisi tarah sham 6 bje park me dakhil huaa… mene nazar dodai to ek kone me nancy khadi thi….. me uske pas phucha…” kya huaa ? tmne to 4 bje bulaya tha .. traffic me fas gye the kya??” usne muskurate huye danadan sawalon ki bochhar kar di ., “ha kuch aisa hi tha” mene ha me sar hilate huye kaha.., “aa chal kahi bethte hai , bahut thak gya hu” me itna kahta huaa ek bench ki taraf chal pada … vo bhi mere sath hi bench par beth gyi … “phle to tum pani piyo aur fir kuch aur bhi hai tmare liye” usne apne bag se pani ki bottle aur lunch box nikalte huye kaha …… “isme kya hai ?” mene box ki taraf ishara kiya.. “khud hi dekh lo” dosto usme “chane ka saag” tha, ye chane ke ped ki patti se banaya jata hai aur ye meri manpasand dish hai … aur adhiktar villages me banai jati hai … “tum kaha se le aayi ye?” mene pucha.., “bas le aayi tmare liye..” abki bar kuch romantic lahza ho gya tha uska.. “achcha…mere liye..” is bar mujhe hasi aa gyi thi.., “ha vo me buaa ke yaha rah rahi hu , fufa apne gaanv se laye the aur ha banaya mene hai” usne ‘banaya mene hai’ par kuch jyada hi jor diya tha…, “vese me bhi tmare liye kuch laya hu” me ab tak kha chuka tha., “kya??” usne chahkte huye pucha…. “kuch khas nahi bas flower with flower-pot hai” mene flower uske samne kar diya tha.., “ye kiska phool hai?” usne pucha. ” Gobhi ka..” mene shaleenta se uttar diya , halanki me nancy ke chehre par aa rhe jhunjhlahat ke bhavo se purntaya wakif tha.., “isko dene ki kya jarurat thi..??” vo usko leti hui boli., “mene soch ki gulab ka phool to sabi dete hain , kuch diffrent diya jaye…” mene apna paksh rakha, is bar vo pyar se meri nak pakad ke daye baye hilati hui boli ,” gulab ka phool is liye diya jata hai kyuki har ladki ko gulab ka phool pasand hota hai..” mene bhi kaha jesa tum chaho aur gobhi ka phool upar se hata liya jiske niche surkh lal gulaab ka phool tha ….ye flower-pot mere ek dost ne khas mere liye design kiya tha jisme pot ke upar gulaab to rhta hi tha par gulab ko gobhi ke phool me is tarah se set kiya jata tha jisase gulaab nazar na aaye. nancy gulaab dekhkar bhut khush ho gyi thi …. mene dhire se fir kaha …” i love u vary much” ….. ab sharm, joki bhagwan ka ladkiyo ko ek behtreen gift hai, uske chehre par chha rhi thi …. aur gulaabi galon ko aur gulabi bna rhi thi ….. me to kurban ho gya tha uski aisi sthiti par … “tum bhi kuch bolo” mene kaha , “tum sab to jante ho fir kyu puchte ho ” nancy sharmati huyi boli , “me tmare muh se ek bar sunana chahta hu” mene kaha , ” ok baba , i luv u 2 , ab thik hai ” nancy ne vo kah diya tha jo me sunana chahta tha., kafi der ho chuki thi park me ya yu kaho ki rat hi ho gyi thi , ab nancy bhi boli me chal rahi hu, me bhi usko uske buaa ke ghar chhodkar ravana ho gya apne shahar ke liye.., ye meri dusari mulakat thi kisi park me … kuch ahsas hi alag hota hai pyar ka,……ek ajeeb si sirhan dodh jati hai badan me jab uski koi bat dil ko chu jati hai…., hamari mulakate hoti rahi aur me graduation last year me phuch gya …… is beech kai bar jhagde bhi ham dono ….. mera manana hai ki pyar tab tak aage nahi badh sakta jab tak jhagda na ho …. ha vo jhagada kisi shak ki vajah se nahi hona chahiye.., me graduation complete karke apne ghar aa pya aur papa ka business sambhal liya tha…… ab nancy ke papa badi ladki ki shadi karne ke bad nancy ke liye var ki talaash me the , mene nancy se kaha ki vo bta de par vo btane me sankoch kar rahi thi to mene soch mujhe khud hi sab kuch karna padega…, me ek din nancy ke ghar phucha ….. uske papa nahi the ….maa jaroor thi … vo to mujhe dekhte hi bhadak gyi …. purani dushmani jo thi.., khair mujhe ulte pair ghar lautna pada…., “us sham ko nancy ka fone aaya ki tum mere ghar ab mat aana , maa din bhar mujhe taane deti hai blaaah blaaah blaaah…., mene bhi socha ki ab uncle se unke office me bat karna sahi rhega .., me agle din uske papa ke office gya , uske papa nihayat hi sakht the … aur ek tarah se meri aur nancy ki shaadi ke khilaf the , unhone phle mujhe mana karna chaha par me thahra jiddi , me unse lagatar milta rha aur unhe raazi karne ka prayas karta rha ….. kuch din bad mujhe jese hi laga ki vo man jayege tabhi mujhe nancy ne btaya ki vo shadi tay kar chuke hain …… ab me apne jiddipan ke purane roop me aa gya tha, is bar me unhe samajhane nahi bas ye btane gya tha ki me aur nancy agle mahine ki 15 tareekh ko shaadi kar rhe hain agar vo aana chahe to aa sakte hain…..is par unhone mujhe police ki dhamki di jo ki sabse aasan dhamkiyon me se mana jata hai ….. mene bhi unko unhi ke lahze me jawab diya agar 15 ko aapne nancy ko ghar se nahi nikalne diya to is bar case aap par chalega kidnapping ka aur gawah hogi nancy…… , mere is petare ka sakaratmak prabhav huaa aur unhone apne ghar se shaadi karne ka nishchay kiya…., is vakye ke 2 mahine bad me lawn me betha newspaper pad rha tha …. meri table par subah ki chai aa gyi thi …. mene dhire se chai ka ghoot liya aur me bura sa muh bna kar uth khada huaa.. thodi dur par ‘nancy’ sorry ‘meri wife nancy’ khadi has rhi thi , karan chai ki jagah thanda pani tha aur meri ye galat aadat thi ki me chai peete vakt newspaper se dhyan nahi htata tha jisko badlne ke liye nancy ko ye kadam uthana pada tha…..!!! THE END.
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Dil kyu ye mera shor kare idhar nahi udhar nhi teri orrr chaleee…
Shiva bhai kya khe apki story hmne to aaj tk nhi read ki iss site pe awesome aur hme na saag wali bat pe bht hsi aayi thi jo aap hm sbhi ko aise bta rhe the ki hmne to dekha hi nhi h aur phli story me bhi hmne bola tha ki aisi story is site pe na ayi h aur na ayegi aur ha hmari trf se nancy bhabhi g ko hiii bolna okay jrur bolna aur aap dono hmesha khush rhna n all d best 🙂
yar rehan kya karu , yaha kanpur me kuch logo ko pta hi nahi hai ki chane ka saag bhi hota hai …isliye explain karna pada , true story jo thi …… aur nancy ko aapka hii jarur bolunga ….. aapke samarthan ke liye ek bar fir se thanx……. sach kahu to aap logo ke pyare pyare comments ki vajah se hi me IInd part likh paya….. 🙂
Shiva bhai apne bhai ko na kbbbhi thanx nhi bolte h..Aur hm apko pyar nhi denge to kaun dega aap hmare liye itna krte ho to ye to apka haq h na aap dono khush rhna zindagi br aur ek dusre ka sath mt chodna bs ye hi mannat h…
ok REHAN dear, me aapki bhabhi ka sath kabi nahi chhodunga , infact me aisa soch bhi nahi sakta…. aapki bhi koi luv story hogi….. post ki hai aapne??
Bhai kya aap bhi plz tang mt khichiye aur sb ye hi puchte h tmhari story h is site pe…aur hm khte h ki nhi h…
to kya huaa yar … likh do na…… bas apne jajbat – e- dil ko ungliyon ki help se keybord ke sahare ham tak pahucha do….. vese is umra tak aapko pyar to ho hi gya hoga… kyu?? 😉
Nc story shiva u r very lucky to hav a hapy ending nc love story tum jo tumhare love ko pane k liye it was really awsome i liked dat mere taraf se aapko aur apke love ko bahot sari khusiyan god bless u both of dem with a lots of love
sach m apki stories jisi to koi story nahi iss site pe shiva aur apke likhne k aandaz bhi bhut acha hai sab se diffrnt hai aur haa real life m bhi aisa hota hai kya shiva maine toh srf film m he dekha hai aap dono to bhut lucky hoo shiva god bless u both of u
Bhai chhodiye na in bato ko…nd frnds plz support this story plz plz plz…
@rishi, thanx..
@angle , thanx
angle , real life me bhi hota hai par shart ye hoti hai ki pyar bina shart ke hona chahiye, aakirkar film bhi to real life se hi nikalti hain…… me nancy ke support ki vajah se usko paa saka … varna ye sab na mumkin tha,
aur ha aap dono ne first part pada ?? jo ki 3rd page par hai…… me aasha karta hu vo bhi pasand aayega
jesi aapki iksha … @rehan , me to apni ray de rha tha…. vese try kro dil khud likhta jayega … ungaliyon ka to nam hoga. 🙂
Hehehehehe 🙂 majak to aap bht accha kr lete ho…hmmm
v good lav story.
@harsh thanx yar.
@Rehan,
mazak nahi me sach kahta hu,
jab hota hai ishq kisi se,
hath to bas kagaj par chalte hain,
varna masoom muhabbat ke jadui fasane to dil se nikla karte hain….!!
Kaisa ye ishq hai haa ajab sa rishq hai…
shiva bhai realy bohot achhi story hai. maine sirf yahi story open ki thi sach i realy like your story. maine to logo se sirf pyaar karna sikha tha but aapki story padhkar mai pyaar ko jeena sikh gaya. one more time big clapping for your awesome story.
thanx harshit story padne ke liye aur itna bada review comment dene ke liye…. ,
haan shiva maine apki pheli wali story bhi padhi hai woh bhi bhutbhut achi hai sab se best story apki hai shiva kyun ki sab ki story m sad end hai but apki love story pori complet hain god bless ar haa aage apki life aur kya hua zarur batana hume
Yaar mughe to ye is site ki sabse jhakaas stories me se ek lagi.aur haan coungratulations mr. n mss. shiva nancy tripathi
@thanx angle , 1st part ke liye ,
aapne to target de diya mujhe , me aage ki lyf bhi share karunga vakt milte hi.
@virat , thanx..
Wow yr awesme thi story…..m speechless…
Apko apka pyar mila quki apne koshish ki…
Mujhe bht pasnd aai…
Aur chane ka saag…hmne bi khaya h sir bht acha hota h…
Shiva bhai hme aage ki ye story nhi sunni h hme to ab wo story sunni h jb hmara bhai hoga ya hmari nanhi pari ayegi aur ha pari aYe to jyada accha hoga wo story sunni h okay smjh gye na aap hmmm…
Yaashi apne hi nhi khaya h saag bs sbhi ne khaya h aisi kya bat h hmmm 😉
@yaashi thanx…. jo aapko story pasand aayi.
Rehan dear , shaadi ke bad sabki kahani munna aur munni se hi to shuru hoti hai ,…. 😉
Shiva hmara answr bhi to dijiye plz aur us din hme bulana mt bhulna okay…
Shiva bhai sorry sorry sory sory sory sory wo mistake se bhai likhna bhul hi gye wo dhyan aur khi tha so sorry plz plz sorry galati ho gyi sorry bhai sorry aap hme smjh gye hoge na plz wo galati se likh gya tha so sorry…
kya yar rehan sorry sorry laga rakha hai , abi tum hi sikha rhe the … dosti me no sorry no thanx … koi bat nahi….,
Arey bde bhai ho phle phr dost to galati to ki h na hmne to bol diya to kya hua aur hme invite kroge na aap us din…hmmm
bilkul invite karunga , par karunga kese???
Kuch to krna pdega… Apki e-mail id dedijiyega..
whitehero6@gmail.com
aap bhi de dijiyega,
Bhai hm apko mail kr denge okay…yha apni id dena nhi chahte
jesi aapki shriddha
Fb id aur dedijiye plz plz plz
Ha bhai shi kha kuch bhi do shridha se do…
vo me aapki e- mail id par bta dunga.
Okay
Oho kya bat kya bat..hero nikle ap toh mve suprhit i men blokbstr..bhabi ji ko hi khna bhai al d best..aise shararten krte rho
thanx nisha….. me chahunga aap iska Ist part bhi pade jo ki 3rd page par hai….,
Siva…ap apni story…neelesh misra ko q nh post krte…wo is story ko radio pe sunaenge…
Nd schi that is amazng..luv story..
Sry sir splng mistake ho gai..that is shiva not siva…
@yaashi, kese post karu , me to kuch nahi janta unke bare me…..
Aap kahan s ho?? Aur radio sunte ho 92.7 big fm…
me kanpur se hu , par sunane ka time nahi milta, khair mujhe neelesh ji ki link mil gayi hai jaldi hi ye story big fm aur youtube par hogi thodi alag style me , aur yaashi aapko bhut bhut dhanywad salah dene ke liye….
Yup….mei sunugi..pka…
Nice yaar bahot acchi story hai well aapne koshish ki thatswhy u got it. Shayad aapke itni himmat mujhme rehti. Hatts of 2 u bro.
Nice yaar bahot acchi story hai well aapne koshish ki thatswhy u got it. Shayad aapke itni himmat mujhme rehti. Hatts of 2 u bro. Meine b apni story se yahi btaya h k koshish kabi mat chodo
thanx@yashi..
thanx@nafis,
bro aapki story ka name kya hai??
http://www.tumsehi.com/jab-banaa-uskaa-hi-banaa-nafis
Shiva bhai hmare mail ka rply krna plz okay
bikul boss abi dekhta hu.
Bhai kiya ke nhi…
kar diya bhai,
Shiva bhai ye bhai kya h plz rehan bola kijiye hme guilty feal hoti h
Is story ko pdkr mera dil garden garden ho gya
aap sabka shukriya…!!
Shukriya kr liya na bhai ek kam kijiye plz hmari id pe mail krke dekhna ho rha ki nhi apne jb to kiya tha na plz kijiye na aur yhi pe btana ki hua ke nhi
yar ho rha haii mail.kaho kya prob. hai?
Kuch nhi bhaiya thanku so much
Wao such a beautiful story shiva i realy like it… the happy ending…god bless u both shiva & nancy..;)
thanx akanksha