💘 Discover a Heartfelt Story: I found that one who came to my life like an angel

Love In a Night

LoVe In A NiGhT

Raat ka waqt…Train me upr ki seat pr baithkr music enjoy kr rha tha … Tbhi kisi k chhilane ki aawaz sunai di-“meri bhi fmly h…bacche h…WO kahan baithenge ?? Plzz Kahin or chli jao !!”
Pakhi-ohkkk !!! But atleast chhilao to mt uncle.

Pakhi seat se uth jaati h or khadi ho jaati h … Train me bheed hone k kaaran log use dhakka de rhe the or kuch manchale ldke isi baat ka fayda uthane k chakkr me the !!! Thn..

Me-excuse me !! Agr aap bura nahh maane to yahan aakr baith skti ho.
Pakhi-Ummm !! No thnxx !!!
Me-ohkk as u like…but soch lo 1 baar 🙂
Pakhi-ohk agr aapko prblm nhi h to theek h 🙂

WO meri seat me aakr baith jaati h…me abhi bhi apne music me busy hu…but mujhe uske Thnxx ki awazz clearly sunai deti h..!!

Me-my pleasure mam 🙂 aapko yah an invite krne ki 1 wajah ye bhi h ki shyd aap wahan bht uncomfortable feel kr rhe the that’s y socha ki aapki help kr dun 🙂
Pakhi-Accha JI 😉 BTW u r right !! Heah I’m Pakhi n I’m a student of BA 2nd year n I’m from Bhopal 🙂
Me-So fast yrr 😉 but mene to poocha hi nhi 😉
Pakhi-I knw 🙂 but I also knew ki aapka next question yhi hota that’s y phle hi bta diya mene 🙂
Me-Ohh too smart 😉 btw I’m Happy
B.com 2nd year n I also from Bhopal 🙂
Pakhi-Ohkk 🙂

Gnrly baaton k baad maahol me thodi khamoshi aa jaati h…!! Tbhi coffee wala aata h–Garma grm coffee….coffee 🙂

Me-bhaiya 2 coffee dena !!
Pakhi-2 kiske liye ?
Me-1 for me n 1 for u 🙂
Pakhi-noo…me nhi peeti bahar ka kuch….sb unheignic hota h ye !!!
Me-Arehh mam…kbhi kbhi chlta h yrr n insb me hi lyf ka real maza h….itni bhi limits me mt baandho apni lyf ko thoda enjoy bhi kiya kro miss 😉
Pakhi-yrrrrr !!! Okk 🙂

Or fir hum dono dheere-2 coffee k sip lene lgte h n fir baatein start hoti h 🙂

Pakhi-to kahan ja rhe ho aap ?
Me-Agra n uh ??
Pakhi-for wht ?? Taj mahal ?
Me-Yupp !! Wow so intelligent 🙂
She-wow wt a coincidence…me bhi wahin ja rhi hun fmly k saath….fmly Agra me hi rhti h meri 🙂
Me-wow chlo aacha h dono ko cmpny mil jyegi 🙂 btw howzz ur relationship ??
She- relationship…wht ??
Me-haan…kyun nhi h koi ??
She- I mean itna straighly ques kiya…btw yupp hai koi 🙂
Me-hehehe…I knw ki aap k jaisi beautiful girl single ho hi nhi skti 🙂
She- Accha JI … Flirting 😉
Me-nahhh yrr…really beautiful ho aap 🙂
She- ohkk ohkk thnxx 🙂 Aap to aise bol rhe ho jaise aap khud single ho 🙂
Me-Yupppp I’m single yrr 🙂
She- jhoot !! I can’t blv this !!
Me-really yrr…blv kro 🙂
She-ohkk 🙂 prblm kya h ?? Kahin taste change to nhi h nahh 😉
Me-heah 🙂 nhi yrr bs ghanti nhi baji aajtk kisi ko dekhkr 🙂
She-Ohh !! To starting se single hi ho yahh fir koi brkup stry ??
Me-starting se hi single hu but heart break kyi baar ho chuka h 🙂
She-ohhh kyun ??
Me-bs kuch logon se expectations bahut zada thi n jb WO log gye to din ka sukoon,raaton ki neend sb kuch le gye but now all fine I dont care 🙂
She-ohhh wts d stry ?
Me-yrr ab 1 ho to btaun….leave yrr fir se yaad nhi krna mujhe WO sb 🙂 me ye quality tym un faltu ki baaton me waste nhi krna chahta 🙂
She-ohkk !! But seriously yrr ajeeb hota h pyar….me khud aajtk nhi smjh pyi ki me glt bnde k saath hu yahh shi bnde k 🙁
Me- Ooo kyun ??
She- yrr girls koi toy nhi hoti…ki jb jee chaha tod diya,jb jee chaha chhod diya,jb jee chaha jod diya !! log ye kyun nhi smjhte ki aaurat sirf jism nhi h ki jb jee chaha khel liya…1 rooh bhi h unme 🙁 🙁
Me-right !! But u mean ki u both r in physical relationship ??
She-hmmm !! Cz pyar krti thi usse to mna bhi nhi kr pyi but ab lgta h ki me bs uske liye 1 jism hi bnkr reh gyi hun !!! 🙁
Me-to ho hi kyun relationship me ?? Move on yrr !!
She- koshish ki thi but hr baar WO mujhe rok leta h kasme dekr,apna jhoota pyar dikhakr n me uske pyar me pgl sb kuch Mann leti hun 🙁 Aasan nhi h mere liye move on krna…3 years diye h mene is relationship ko…but I knw mujhe move krna hoga 🙁
Me- ohh god !!! Pyar really andha hota h…yr tumhe sb Pta h fir bhi ye bchpna kyun ?? Really glt bnde k saath ho aap yr !!
She- I knw 🙁 yrr me na life me stillness chahti hu !!! Me nhi chahti ki bachi huyi teenage bhi kisi ki talaash me guzaar dun 🙁 but i knw he also love me….shyd 🙁
Me-ufff…I think aap usse better deserve krte ho 🙂 WO kamina aap k layk nhi h !!
She-heah…mind ur language…jaisa bhi ho he is my bf !!
Me- sorry but WO really respect k lyk nhi h…use nhi pta ki angels ko kaise treat kiya jaata h !! Yhi prblm h yr ishq ki…”saala jo ishq ko smjhta h use koi pyar hi nhi krta”
“”Aye mohabbat tujhe paane ki koi raah nhi….Tu usi ko milegi jisko Teri parwah nhi””

Ye lines sunkr pakhi na chahte huye bhi Ro deti h or mere shoulders pr apna sar rkh deti h….Me uska chehra apne haaton me lekr uske aansu saaf krta hu !!!

Me-Heah plzz angel…don’t cry yrr !!! Aap na rote huye bilkul acche nhi lgte…aapki WO social service wali smile….yrr is world ko really zaroorat h us smile ki 🙂
She- social service smile??
Me-yuppp 🙂 yrr aap jb smile krte ho nahh to yun lgta h jaise is duniya k dard km ho rhe hain….hr trf khushiyan hi khushiyan hai 🙂 Sirf aapki smile ki wajah se 🙂

Ye sunte hi suddenly pakhi k chehre pr smile aa jaati h….or WO apne aansu saaf krti h !!

She-Awww…so sweet of uhh 🙂 u knw tum nahh 1st person ho jisne mujhe rote huye hansaya h 🙂 mere frnds nahh door hi rhte h jb me roti hun cz me rote waqt apne aap me hi nhi hoti 🙂 kaash !!! Always aisa hi ho pata 🙂
Me- ohh really 🙂 chlo km se km aapke chehre pr smile to aayi n mam tnsn mtlo I’m always wid uhh aapko smile krane k liye 🙂 🙂
She-Thnxx yr 🙂 U really a nyc guy 🙂
Me-Thnxx 🙂 but its my duty cz bchpn me parents ne “Happy” name rkhkr bht phle hi sbko smile krane ki responsibility de di hai….bs me duty poori krta hun 🙂
She-hehehe…yrr ab plzz or sweet baatein mt kro nhi to mujhe pyar ho jyega aapse 😉
Me-Ohh really…Accha hai nahh mere hi favour me h ye 🙂
She-uhh naughty 🙂

Baatein krte krte kb WO mere shoulders pr apna sar rkh kr so gyi pta hi nhi chla….me bhi use disturb nhi krna chahta tha thts y kuch nhi bola…haan shyd pyar ho gya tha usse 🙂 uske chehre ko dekhte-2 kb mujhe neend aa gyi pta hi nhi chla 🙂
Morning me jb meri aankhen khuli to train Agra station pr khadi thi…me ghabrakr utha n pakhi ko uthaya…!!

Me-Heah pakhi utho Agra aa gya ..pta nhi train kbse yahan khadi h…jldi utro yahan se !!!
She-Yrr or ye aap ab bta rhe ho 🙁
Me-Yr meri neend khuli to saamne Agra station likha hua tha to me bhi ghabrakr utha n aapko uthaya !!
She-ohkkk but ab jldi chlo yahan se !!

Bheed to cross krke hum train k gate se neeche utre n pta nhi WO us bheed me kahan kho gyi…!!! Nazre use hr trf dhoondh rhi thi but koi fayda nhi hua !!
1 baat mujhe khayi ja rhi thi ki use last tym good bye bhi nhi bol paya or usse bhi zada ye ki uska mob no. bhi nhi le paaya 🙁 Udaas hokr apne Hotel ki trf badhta hu….uske hi khayalon me ghum akela…Tanha 🙁
1 trf jahan agra aane ki khushi thi to doosri trf uske nahh hone ka gum…mausam me jaise 1 udaasi chaa gyi thi…hawaon me uski Khushboo si thi…hr jagah usi ka chehra…bheed me hote huye bhi uske khayalon me Tanha tha !!
Hotel room me aakr apne bags rakha n bed pr aakr baith gya !!! Kuch krne ka Mann nhi tha..Ajeeb sa ehsas tha ye 🙁
Bs saara din khidki pr sar rkh kr use hi sochta rha…n saari raat bs karbatein badalte hi nikl gyi 🙁
Use fb pr search bhi nhi kr skta tha cz uska last name bhi nhi pta tha mujhe…!!!
Nxt day himmat krke room se nikla n apne kaam kiye…but uske khayalon ne mera peecha nhi chhoda….Meri nazar hr trf sirf use hi dhoondti rhi…kaam krk shaam ko room me return aaya to fir se uske khayalon ne mujhe gher liya n fir whi tanhaai or akelapan….aaj bhi mera kl jaisa hi haal tha !!
3rd n last day…aaj din tha “Taj Mahal” dekhne ka…ready hokr apne room se nikl pda me….mann me yhi khayql ki-Kaash….aaj WO mujhe mil jye 🙁 Aaj mausam bhi meri tarah bechain tha….haan shyd WO bhi meri tarah jee bhr kr rona chahta tha…hawaaon me uski khushboo sama chukui thi !!!
Jaise hi meri “Taj” me entry huyi baadal bhi baras pde….jaise WO mere yahan aane ka hi intzaar kr rhe hon !!! Me bheegta hua aage bdh rha tha tbhi suddenly koi mujhse aa takraya…white suit,khule huye geele hairs bilkul “Angel” lg rhi thi wo !!!

She- ohhh sorry !!! WO kya h me baarish se bachne k liye bhaag rhi thi to dekha nhii !!

Ye kehte huye WO meri owr mudti h…..n use dekhkr me bilkul shocked ho jaata hu…goosebumps on my all over body !!! Mere chehre ki udaasi suddenly khushi me convert ho jaati h 🙂 Haan ye pakhi hi thi 🙂 N me dekhta hun ki WO bhi mujhe dekhkr shocked h !!

Me- Heah pakhi….its really uhh nahh ??? Me koi sapna to nhi dekh rha nahh ??
She-I can’t blv yrr….ye really Tum ho ? Plzz mujhe pinch kro !!!

Me uske right cheek pr pinch krta hu…!!!

She-Yrr I’m not dreaming….its really uhhh 🙂 I’m so happy yrr !!
Me-Mujhe abhi bhi blv nhi ho rha h ki ye really tum…..!!

Mera sentence complete bhi nhi hota or WO mere seene se lg jaati h….I’m feeling like Jannat meri baahon me ho !! Suddenly kisi ldki k pakhi-2 chillane ki awaz sunayi deti h or WO awaz sunkr pakhi mujhse alg ho jaati h !!!

“Heah tujhe wahan sb dhoondh rhe h….or tu yahan ghoom rhi h”–WO ldki bolti h !!
Pakhi-heah neha…in se mil yhi hai WO bnda jisne meri train me help ki thi 🙂 N happy ye hai meri cousin n bst frnd Neha !!!
Me-Ohh Hii neha…nice to meet you 🙂
Neha-Ohh to WO aap hain 😉
Me-Wht ?
Neha-I’m mean Pakhi jb se ghar aayi hai nahh tb se sirf aapki baatein kr rhi h 🙂 Din bhr bs apne bed me soyi rhti hai nahh ghar walon se baat krti hai nahh muskurati hai !! In 2 dino me aaj sirf aap k saath itna khush dekh rhi hu ise 🙂
Pakhi-Heah Neha…bs kr ab 🙂 !!
Me-oho chlo madam k chehre pr smile to aayi…n yrr honestly bolun to meri bhi yhi condition thi !! 🙂
Neha-n pta hai yahan aate hi isne apne bf se brkup kr liya….kehti h ki “WO kameena mujhe deserve hi nhi krta” 🙂
Pakhi-Bs kr nahh yrr neha 🙂
Me-ohhh wow….wt a news yrr 🙂 seriously I’m so happy.Finally ise baat smjh to aayi 🙂 kami aap me nhi usme thi or aap khud ko blame krte rhe BTW now all fine bhool jao apne past ko n present me jiyo 🙂
Pakhi-Hmmm right yr…n ye himmat bhi mujhe nahh tum se hi mili tbhi possible ho pya h ye 🙂 Thnxx yrr 🙂
Me-Heah ab thnxx bol k praya krogi kya 😉
Neha-chl yrr pakhi wahan sb bula rhe hain !! N aap bhi hme join kro nahh happy ji 😉
Me- Noo its okkk yrr aap enjoy kro fmly k saath 🙂
Neha,Pakhi-Ohkk !!

N dono jaane lgte h…but mere dil ko ye manzoor nhi tha !! 1 baar kho chuka tha use ab firse nhi khona chahta tha !! Dil keh rha tha ki bol de but mind iski izazat nhi de rha tha !!! Pyar me always dil se hi sochna chahiye that’s y mene decide kiya ki me dil ki baat zaroor bolunga 🙂 !!

Me-heah pakhi suno !!
Pakhi- haan bolo 🙂
Me-I wanna tell you something ?
Pakhi-yuppp say !!
Me-Us din train se utarne k baad pta nhi tum suddenly kahan chli gyi,meri nazarein hr jagah tumhe hi dhoondhti rhi !!! Platform pr 2 hours wait bhi kiya ki shyd tum return aao but koi fayda nhi hua !! Room me aya to yun lga rha tha jaise ki apna kuch mene train me hi chhod diya ho…bags bhi check kiye but Jo chiz missing thi WO tha mera sukoon Jo tum apne saath le gyi thi 🙂 poora din bs tumhare hi khayalon me n raatein karbatein badalte-2 hi kt gyi 🙁 Aaj jb room se nikla to god se bs yhi pray kr rha tha ki plzzz 1 baar tumse milwade n god ne meri sun li 🙂 I’m 100% sure ki ye pyar h attraction nhi….”I love u Pakhi” n I really mean it !!! Tumhara ans. Jo bhi ho I don’t care…Me is afsos k saath jeena chahta ki mene try bhi nhi kiya,ans Jo bhi but atlesat mene try to kiya !!! Me apne saath itna bojh return nhi le ja skta tha thats y sb bol diya 🙂 I seriously luv uh !!!

Neha n pakhi dono meri baatein sun rhi thi…ye sunne k baad pakhi k chehre pr smile aa gyi 🙂

Pakhi-Yrr meri bhi yhi condition thi din bhr bs apne bed pr leti rhti,room se bahar bhi nhi niklti…hr jagah kuch missing lgta tha n specially meri ye social service wali smile !!! Or rhi baat believe ki…””Meri poori raat kisi ki baahon me guzri or us ladke ne mujje touch tk nhi kiya”” bs itna kaafi hai believe krne k liye 🙂 Haan me bhi yhi kehna chahti thi but kya kru fattu jo hun nhi bol payi 🙂 but seriously I Love uhh too n I also really mean it 🙂

Itna kehte hi WO tightly mere gale se lg gyi…Hum dono ki aankhon me aansu the…khushi k aansu,I kissed on her forehead 🙂 Aaj phir “Taj mahal” 1 love story kA gawah bna !!! Yun lg rha tha jaise baarish k through god humpr apni blessings barsa rha ho..!!!

The End
-Divyank

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36 thoughts on “Love In a Night”

  1. really ye real story h kya…itni jyada filmy…omg very romantic n NYC story…

    mai to confuse hu reality mai bhi aisa hota h….kya

  2. sooooooooooo nyc story……
    really it’s 2 gud….
    bahot bahot zyada acchi love story h…
    lg hi nhi raha k reality h….
    aap dono hamesha sath rahe…
    god bless u

  3. very very very nice story…its too good…bhut achi hai aapki story….lga hi nhi ki reality hai..aapk pyaar ki tarah khuda sabko sbka pyaar dilaye…..

  4. Kabhi tum muje kareeb se aa k dekna
    Aise nahi jara aur paas aa k dekhna,
    Main tum se kitna pyar karta hoon,
    Mujhe kabhi seene se laga kar dekna,
    Main tuje ashko ki kataar me najar aaunga
    Meri yaad main kabhi aansu baha k dekna,
    Meri ghazal pad kar bhi tum par asar na ho
    Toh logo ko meri ghazal suna ke dekhna….

    ;-( #somethingnew…

  5. So superb story brother main jab apki story read kar raha tha to mujhe aisa lag raha tha main real me ek romantic movie dekh raha hu so very -2 nice story brother apka love hmesha apke sath rahe…God bless U

  6. bhut hi badhiya story h yrr….seriously ab tk mne jitni stories padhi h unme se sbse best h ek dm superbb!!

  7. Very nicely story yrrr I can’t explain really mai sirf itna bolna chahta hu ki apka pyaar hmesha bna rhe and ap hmesha khush rhe mere jaisa bad luck kisi ka bhi ni ho

  8. Aradhya thakur

    Wow yrrrr really this stryy is to gudddd kyaaaaa stryyy h yrrr Owssm
    nddd I thinkkk apneee isss stryyy ko bsttt trike s likhaaa h
    isseeeeee khteee h real nddd true love stryyy
    m to god s yhiii pray krugiii ki godd hmesaaa appp donooo ko hppyyy rkheee nddd appp donooo hmesaa hppyyy rhoo

  9. Yeah it’s okay.but that place(Taj Mahal)is magical.i also felt like I should fall in love for once too.but reality is it breaks me apart.i m here to sell my care,my dignity,my integrity,my faith,my loyalty.but of course not love cuz it’s not for sale,matter of fact I think I don’t have it.suit yourself girls….i m a emotional fool.this is my resume.

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