love hurts – susheel

A LOVE STORY Ye kahani h ek student ki, Uski nadani ki, uski bewkoofi ki, uski jindadili ki, uske pyar ki or ye kahani h uski uski kurwani ki. Jo bhut hi jindadil tha, logo ka pyara tha, hamesa haste rahna, bhut sare naye naye dost banana ki art to jaise use bhagwaan ne gift me di thi. Apne sabi teachers ka pyara tha, padne me tez, games me aange. Uski zindgi badli Kisi k pyar ne Kisi ki mohabat ne, kisi k ikrar ne or kisi k inkar ne. Baat h us time ki jab wo apne 9th standard me tha, hamesa ki tarah apni class attend kar raha tha, tabi school ka peon aaya, or aawaz lagai, prem principal madam ne bulaya h. Apni teacher se permission lekar wo principal office me gya, ek ladki thi waha uska interview ho raha tha, sayad admission k liye. Prem ne dekha us ladki ko, ajeeb sa laga use, man hi man socha yar ye kon h, itni sundar ladki sayad kbi na dekhi thi usne. Prem k papa aaye the uski fee deposit karne. Isliye use b bula liya tha milne k liye. Perm waha se aakar class me aaya but usi ladki k bare me hi sochta raha kon h wo, kya admission k liye aai h, kis class me legi. But next day use shock sa laga, usne us ladki ko apne school ki dress me aate dekha, or phir apni hi class me. Bhut ajeeb sa laga use samjh hi nhi aaya kya h ye sab. Ek hi class me the, us ladki ka naam tha pari sharma, dono me baat hone lagi, prem padne me b accha tha, dan uski help b karne laga. Dosti ho gai thi unme haste haste din nikalne lage, phir b jane q prem ko usse baat karne me dar lagta tha, hamesa se hi pari hi aati thi usse baat karne. Magar sath hi sath wo ab har waqt usi ka bare me sochta tha, padne likhne se uska dhayan hatne laga. Dekhte dekhte ek saal ho gya, ab dono 10th me aa chuke the,ek din kisi ne pari ki cycle ki hawa nikal diwo bhut paresaan ho gai, prem ne dekha to gya uske pass prem- kya hua? Pari- kuch nhi yar kisi ne cycle ki hawa nikal di. Prem koi baat nhi yhi pass me hawa dal jayegi, waha tak cycle me le chalta hu pari- are nhi yar……….. Prem ne cycle li or chal diya dono haste haste baatain karte hue ja rahe the, unhi ki class ka ek ladka akash piche se bola, laila majnu acche lag rahe h, ghar k bartan ho bta dena wo b dhul jayege, Prem ne ignore kiya or chalta raha. Akash ne kafi batmizi ki but wo dono ne sunkar b nhi suna. Akash ne piche se ek point or mara- use cycle di h , humhe kuch or de do. jane kya hua prem ko , bilkul sahant or jagde se dur rahne wale ladke ne jakar akash ko thapad mar diya wo 3 the prem ne pass me padi ek lakdi uhai or suru ho gya teeno ko marne. Uske baad pari ki cycle me hawa dalwa kar use ghar bhej diya prem k sabse acche dost the, prabhat, akash or sanjeet. agle din akash apne kuch dosto ko sath lekar aaya prem k sath jagda karne, magar prem k b to dost the, prabhat or sanjeet k sath usne phir se unko markar bhaga diya. Uske baad to pta nhi prem ko kya ho gya tha koi pari ko kuch b bol de prem uske sath hi marpeet karne laga. Chup chap rahne wala prem aaj school ka gunda ban chuka tha. Pari b usse dur hone lagi thi, na hi ab jayada baat karti thi na hi usse milti thi. Prem ne b kai bar apne gusse ko rokne ki nakam kosis ki, par kar nhi paya. Exams ho gye, school band ho gya, ab wo kabi nhi mil pate the, prem bhut hi paresaan rahne laga tha, uska gussa or b badne laga tha, kabi khud k hath diwar me marna, kabi light k pole me, kabi kisi ladke ko marna yhi sab uska life style ban gya tha. Use na zamane ka dar tha na kisi k parwah. school khule frist day tha, sayad hi kabi koi itna paresan hua hoga school jane k liye jitna prem tha, sabse pahale pahuch gya tha wo, ab to bas pari k aane ka intzaar tha. par wo nhi aai, na aaj, na kal , na parso. Bas itna pta chala usne dusre sahar me admission le liya h, jo uske sahar se karib 50 km dur tha. Prem ke dimag ne kaam karna band kar diya, or gussa itna, apne hi ek techer se jagda kar betha, or thapad mar diya unhe, school se nikal diye gya. Ab ghar ja nhi sakta , pari k sahar ki bus ki or chal diya, waha use dekha, use kaisa feel hua, sayad koi samjh sake. Baat karna chata tha par kar nhi paya. ab to use ye tareeka sabse accha lagne laga har bar kisi k satha jagda, nhi to school bank kiya apne dosto k sath, bikes li or nikal pade pari ko dekhne, uske jane k baad prem ko ehsash hua, use pyar ho gya tha pari tha. Par usse dur hokar wo khud ko samhaal nhi pa raha tha, har bar kisi se jagda, ya khud par hi gussa. Apne sahar ka gunda ban gya tha wo, or ban gai thi prem gang prabhat, sanjeet or akash k sath. Politics me b pahuch ho gai thi. Do saal yhi sab chala. Ab baat h uske 12th k exams ki. Pari ka exam center b whi tha jaha prem ko exams dene the. Dono me waha phir se baat hone lagi. Prem bhut khush tha ab. Exams tym me hi sahi usne notes arrange kiye or padne laga. Par kahte h na jinhe khuda hi nhi milana chata use kon mil mila sakta h, math ka exam tha, unke prencipal k ladke ko waha k teachers nakal de rahe the, usse koi tyeacher kuch na bolta tha, pari ka pen niche gir gya wo uthane k liye jhuki to waha duty kar rahe teacher ne use dant diya, pari ne bola wo to sirf pen utha rahi thi to usne uski copy le li, pari k aanshu nikal aaye, teacher ne copy to bapas kar di par prem pari k aanshu na dekh saka, use gussa aa raha tha, or usne whi teacher ko table utha kar mar di. Exam k baad teacher aaya to prem ne phir ne maar laga di uski. Pari sirf itna boli tum kabi nhi sudhar sakte, uski aankho me aanshu the, prem ko ab bhut gussa tha khud par uski wajah se pari ki aankho me aanshu. Hamesa acche marks lane wala prem math fail ho gya tha, ghar par bhut dant lagi, thoda sa samjh aaya, nhi ye sab galat h, apna future bana luga to or b kai pari mailegi. Re- exam se wo pass ho gya or bahar chala gya padne. Par wo kabi pari ko bhul nhi pa raha tha. ek dost ne usse kah yar tu koi gf bana le bhul jayega use, prem ko b sahi b laga, par raat bhar wo so na paya, har bar yhi socha kisi or ko gf bana b liye to kya ye usse or meri pari se galat na hoga. Or phir wo apne tareeke se jeene laga jinda dil prem ek bar phir se khush rahne laga, bhut sare naye dost banaye naye sahar me, waha meghana naam ki ek ladki use dil hi dil chahne lagi, ek din meghana ne prem ko bol hi diya wo use pyar karti h, prem ko b kuch galat nhi laga or pari ko bhulane k liye usne use apni gf bana liya. Par kuch hi dino me use lagne laga wo meghana k sath galat kar raha h usne wo city wo college sab chod diya, uska luck kaho ya uski mahnat use usse acch clg mil gya. Or wo naye sahar me shift ho gya. Waha wo pari ki yaad me likhne laga, stories likhta poetry likhta, senti sayaries likhta. Wo accha likhta tha wo famous b hone laga tha, use kai award b mile, or kahte h na nashe k bina artist mahan nhi hota prem b nasha karne laga tha pari ko bhulane k liye, par kabi kabi,……… par tabi …………………………………………. kahte h na waqt k sath sab kuch badalta h, use facebook par ek din pari mili na chate hue b prem khud ko rok na paya or pari ko fb par req kar di, usne ba accept kar li, pari se uski phir se dosti ho gai thi, sayad time ne purani baatin bhula di thi, bhut baatain hone lagi unme. Jitna uske pyar me tadpa tha wo sab usne bataya or bola me tumse bhut pyar karta hu, unki din me baat hoti thi, night me b bhut baat hoti thi. Prem pari se baat karne k liye pagal rahta tha. Pari ne usko apna cell no b de diya tha, cell par b baat hone lagi thi. Ek din wo ek party se night me bapas aa raha tha, pari k fb msg aaya, wo bike par tha, bhut traffic tha but phir b prem pari se baat karne k liye ek haath se bike control karne laga or ek haath se use rply karnr laga, achanak se samne ek kutta aa gya, use bachane k liye prem ne ryt turn liya or uski bike slip kar gai, or wo gir gya, bhut chot lagi thi prem ko, pari ko uski ek comman frnd se pta chala prem ka accident ho gya h, usne prem ko call kiya prem ne kuch nhi bataya use, but usne apni comman frnd se hospital ka naam pta kiye, wo pari k sahar me hi tha, pari prem se milne waha gai. Or rote hue prem se I love u bola, ise co incidance kahe ya kuch or us din 14 feb tha. Pari kai bar prem se milne uski family k samne aai. Prm ne apne bhaiya ko bta rakha tha pari k bare me. Sab sahi cahlta raha dono sath me bhut khush the par kahte h na pyar ka dushaman hota h ye jamana, pari ka bhai ek ladki se bhut pyar karta tha par uske papa se nista thukra diya sirf is wajah se wo ladki uski caste ki nhi thi, Or uske bhai ne jahar kha liya, par wo bach gya, use apni family k bare me socha or apne papa ki pasand ki ladki se shadi kar li. Ye baat deepika k dil me jagah bana gai, use laga jab uske papa ne uske bhai ki shadi nhi hone di to uski kaise hone dege, or prem or pari ki cast b alag thi ……………… Usne prem se alag hone ka faisla kiya q ki use pta chal gya tha prem drink n smoke b kar raha h, usne prem se sirf itna kaha , ye sab chod do or khud ko is kabil banao k jab tum or tumhari family mera haath mangne mere ghar aayain mere paa mana na kar sakain wo usse alag ho gai , apna no change kiya fb par prem ko block kiya. Sab khatm kar liya ………… ………….. prem ye sab sah nhi payavwo us nashe ko chod nhi paya ulta pari ko bhulane k liye or b jayada peene laga.. Duniya se pyar karne wale prem ko usi duniya se nafrat ho gai thi, yaha jo jaati k naam par gandgi thi us sab se. Ek din uske ek frnd ne bataya use- yar me jise bhut pyar karta hu, par wo meri caste ki nhi h na, uske ghar wale meri sahdi nhi hone de rahe. prem khud ko waha dekhe laga. Aaj us ladki ki shadi hui, or wo mandir aai thi apni family or husband k sath. Prem b waha aaya or us ladki wo waha se utha laya, or un dono ki shadi karwa di.. Ye baat uske dost prabhat ko pta chali, usne prem ko bhut danta, or samhaya agar us ladki se pyar karta h to uski baat maan, khud ko uske or uski family k layak bana.. prem ki ye baat samjh aai or usne professnal course join kiya wo waha accha b kar raha tha, par pari ko bhula nhi pa raha tha, wo phir se sharab ki taraf muda or peene laga, subh nahakar class jata tha, kabi kabi lunch tyme me b drink kar k class me aa jata tha, or raat hote hote chal padta tha peene k liye. Uske roz ka yhi sab ban gya tha. Par usne khud ko us kabil banane k liye koi kasar nhi chodi thi. 2 saal baad,……………. aaj prem khud me kabil tha, uski bhut acchi job lag chuki thi, wo pari k ghar jana chata tha apne papa k sath, usne apne ghar par sabi ko bataya. Ghar walo ne b bola koi baat nhi hum chalte h waha.us din wo pari ka sahar gya, waha use pta chala pari k hi collage ka koi ladka use bhut pyar karta tha, wo b kabi bol nhi paya tha pari wo wo use pyar karta h. Sham ko market me use pari mili, jaise prem ko is tarah dekhkar pari ki sabi duayain kabul ho gai ho. Itni khusi uske chare par kabi na dekhi thi prem ne. Prem ne waha use promise kiya wo tumhare ghar aayega pari ne b usse ek promise liya kabi derink or smoke nhi karega. Prem ne peena ya smoke karna bilkul band kar diya tha, or is baat ka to har koi gawah tha, prem kuch b kar sakta h, mar sakta h par apna promise nhi tod sakta. Par jisse wo bhagwan hi naraz ho wo khush kaise rah sakta h. kal usne pari se promise kiya tha uske ghar aakar uska haath mangega, uske papa se. wo sham ko movie dekh raha tha, tabi use ulti hui, ye kya ulti me khun tha, ek k baad ek kai ultiya hui khoon ki use. Wo docter k pass gya, docter ne kuch dawa di, cheak up or kuch test kiye or kal aane ko bola. Prem ko kai bar phir se ulti hui, phir usne socha sham ko pari k ghar jate waqt wo docter k pass hokar jayega. Jo taiyar hokar apni gadi me betha hi tha use phir se ulti hui, khoon k sath ajeeb sa kuch tha. Wo docter k pass gya prem- sir kal se kai baar ultiyaan ho chuki h, har bar khoon aata h , aaj kuch ajib sa b tha jelly jaisa. Docter- prem beta sab theek ho jayega, paresaan mat hotumne itna drink karne k baad achanak se choda h na ye sab. Isliye ho raha h ye. Prem- sir kuch serious to nhi h? Docter- …….. ….. Prem- sir kya hua mujhe? Docter phir kuch nhi bola Pren (gusse me chilakar)- are aap kuch bolte q nhi kya hua mujhe,(uske muh me se bhut sa khoon jhatke se nikla or wo chakkar khakar whi gir gya) Hosh aaya raat k time raat ka 9 p.m hua tha, use yaad aaya usne pari ko promise kiya tha wo aayega. Pari b waha uska wait kar kar thak gai thi, bhut udas thi wo, aankho me aanshu liye chup chap akeli bethi hui thi. Prem utha, kapde pahne or chal diya pari k ghar. Docter- are prem kaha ja rahe ho? Prem- apni pari k ghar? Docter- pagal ho gaye ho tum kahi nhi ja sakte. Prem- docter, mene use promise kiya h, jauga to me tha hi waha, chahe mar hi q na jau. Docter (gusse me)- nhi ja sakte tum. Prem- meme kaha na mar b jau to b waha to me jauga. Docter (gusse se)- to mar jao, mar jao. Bapas mat aana yaha, dam it ye ladka sunta q nhi kisi ki prem k pass jakar- dekho prem meri baat suno, plz tumhe yahi rokna ahoga. Prem kuch nhi bola bas chalta raha docter- god dam it, prem tumhara liver kharab ho chuka h. prem- kya? Sir sir me bach to jauga na docter kuch nhi bola me bachuga to, kitna chance h,, (gusse se)docter aap kuch bolte q nhi, me zinda rahua ya nhi, kitna chance h docter- bhut kam. Prem ki aankho me aanshu the, par sir mera jana bhut jaruri h, plzz maaf kar dijiye mujhe. Or waha se chala jata h pari k ghar, apna promise nibhane. Waha pari k pass jakar bolta h jab mujhe tumhari sabse jayada jarurat thi tumne mera sath choda tha, mene tabi khud se promise kiya tha jitna dukh mujhe diya h tumne utna hi tumhe b duga pari rote hue boli- nhi juth h ye sab prem haste hue- yhi sach h, aaj sayad tumhe pta chalega dukh kya hota h. Or waha se bapas aa jata h. Raste me use ulti hoti h or uski car ka chota sa accident ho jata h, ek ladka waha se ja raha tha, use lekar hospital jata h, sari raat uske sath rahkar uski dekhbahal karta h, subh jab prem ko hosh aata h, tab wo us ladke se puchta h tum hi mujhe yaha lekar aaye the na ladka – ha Prem- naam kya h tera. Ladka- akash, yar me janta hu tumhe tum prem ho na. Prem- ha, magar tujhe kaise pta. Akash- pari ko jante ho na Prem- ha Akash- use bhut chata hu me tumhari tarah. Prem- karta kya h? Akash- navy me captain hu. Prem- ohh, Suna h yar tere bare me, dil ka to bhut accha h tu, dekh lia. Shaadi karega usse. Akash- tumhare pyar k aange mera pyar kuch b nhi h. Prem- wo decide karna mera kaam h, shaadi karega usse? Akash- ha, bhut pyar karta hu use. Prem- janta hu, tune mujhe kuch or din jeene ka moka diya h, me tujhe bolta hu teri shaadi me karauga pari se. Prem phir se uth kar chal deta h pari k ghar akash ko sath lekar. Docter use bhut rokte h par wo nhi rukta. Docter prem k ghar call lar dete h, or uske maa , papa ji ye sab pta chal jata h. wo prem ko caal karte h, prem se puchte h is bare me, wo kahta h baad me call karta hu. Or call disconnect kar cell switch off kar deta h. Prem akash ko kuch samjhata h. akash- nhi, ye sab galat h. main nhi kar sakta ye sab, prem use pari ki kasam deta h. Or akash ko chodkar chala jata h. Prem jata h market waha drink karta h, or haath me botel lekar jata h pari k ghar, uske papa ko galat bolta h, uske bhai ko b, Prem- dekha mene kaha tha na, jitna dard mujhe diya h utna hi me b duga, hahaha. Aaj pta chalega tum sab ko prem, prem yadav h kon. Hahahaha mujhe, mujhe barwaad kar neee chale the, khud pe ban aai, kaisa lag raha ha ab. Udhar se aakash aata h or prem se bolta h- bhai kya baat h, q tamasha kar rahe ho pee kar prem- chal apna kaam kar. Akash- yar kisi ka ghar h ye, sahi baat nhi h jao yaha se. prem – bola na chal nikal, kaam kar apna. Akash prem k kandhe par hath rakhkar dekh bhai, prem akash to thapad mar kar- bola na sale apna kaam kar, samjh nhi aata na, apne piche se pistol nikalte hue, are tu to whi h na aashiq is ladki ka, (comedy karte hue) bhai bhai maaf kar de mujhe bhai, galati ho gai, tere pyar se kuch bola mene. Akash (gusse me)- dekh yaha se chala ja warna…….. Prem – warna warna kya sale… or pistol ka hawa me upar fire karta h Aakash bhagkar uski pistol chin leta h or prem ko girane k liye uske seene me hath marta h, prem k seene me bhut tez dard hota h, or wo waha se ye chilata hua jata h, sale dekh luga tujhe, dekh luga pari ko me kisi ka nhi hone duga. Thoda sa chalne k baad pren gir jata h or use bhi khoon wali ulti hoti h, june ka mahine me tapte suraj ki dhoop me prem tapti dhati par dala hua tha, use waha se uthane wala b koi nhi tha. Prem k family wale hospital aa chuke the, docter se pta chala wo pari k ghar gya h, wo sab pari k ghar k liye jane lage. Udhar pari k papa akash par naraz ho gye, tum jaise ladko ki wajah se hi hamara mahol kharab ho raha h, barwaad kar diya h is desh ko tum jaise ladko ne. Aakash waha se jane lagta h, tabi prem k ghar wale aa jate h or puchte h prem kaha h, pari k papa prem ko ulta seedha bolne lagte h magar docter unhe har baat kata h, prem ne q kiya ye sab. Pari or sabi logo ki aankho me aanshu aa jate h, pari whi gir jati h prem ka pyar dekhkar. Akash waha se bhagta h akash or dekhta h thodi dur par prem dhup me jameen par dala hua tha, tabi waha sab aa jate h or prem ko utha kar hospital le jate h preem ko hosh aata h, sab ko apne sath dekhta h, pari uska hath apne hatho me liye bethi hoti h or prem uska hath apne hatho me liye hi apni aakhri sansh leta h. Pari k papa ko apni galati ka ehasa ho jata h or wo bolte h me prem ki kurwaani bekar nhi jane duga Pari or akash ki shadi ho jati h, wo apne bacche ka naam abi se prem rakh dete h…………………… THE END

 

 

 

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22 thoughts on “love hurts – susheel”

      1. main mar jaungi aur apne sk ko kisi aur ko jo us se bahut pyar karta hain use de dungi…..par main marne se pahle uske muh se i love u sun na chahti hu

  1. such me bht rulaya hai pari ne tumhe prem. mai kya bolu samj hi nahi aa raha bht mushikl se milta hai itna pyar krne wala mai yahi chahti hu ki har kisi ko uska pyar mile vo kabhi usse juda na ho.

  2. Nice story………mai sach bataao to story padte waqt jab mujhe ye pta chala ji prem ab kuch din hi jee sakta hai to mere aakho me aansu aa gye…………………..pta nhi bhagwan do pyar karne walo ko judaa kyo kr deta hai……jb juda hi karna hota hai to milata kyo hai. Aur ye story kisne likha hai? Deepika kon hai. Kya pari hi deepika hai?

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