kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha – shubham

Hi! i’m shubham this is mah sad story in form of poem. . . . . . .

Vo roz roz subah unka birla mandir me aana. .
Duniya ke dukhiyaron ke bhagvan se mannat mangna. {kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha}
Vo chandni chauk ki galiyon me unka daud jana. .
India gate ke saamne khade hokar apni saheliyon ke sath ice khana. {kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha}
Vo paidal chalkal unka apne doston ke sath college jana. .
Class me sabki pyari bankar har cheez me awwar aana. {kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha}
Vo bus stop par khade hokar unka khil khilake muskurana. .
Kisi budhe laachar ko dekh kar us hasin chehre ka mayushi me badal jana. {kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha}
Vo unka mujhko pyar se kabhi kabhi gale lagana. .
Meri kisi harkat par mujhe dat-te hue mere mathe ko choom jana. {kabhi kabhi accha lagta tha}
Unka ghar wapas jaate vakt mujhko mud mud ke dekh jana. .
Mujhko mud mud ke dekhte vakt accident ke bahane mujhe is duniya md akele 6od jana. {mujhe aajtak accha nahi laga}

 

 

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  1. Shubham

    Bahna Kaha Ho ?

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  2. Aish

    hiii bhaai

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  3. Aish

    bhaai dekhona ye mayank kitni stupid si bate kr rha h hm girls k bare me…

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  4. Shubham

    Ha Kuch Nahi,aap Unka Reply Mat Karo

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  5. Shubham

    Bahna Aaisha Ko To Bulao, Wo Kaha H?

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  6. Aish

    hmmm… ayeshaaa… aap kahaa ho… Dekhi aoke shubhu n hmare pyari se bhai bula rhe h… kahaa ho…. aajao..

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  7. Sejal

    oyyyeeee hiiii all of u….bahna aur bhai…n unki gf ji ko b hiiii….i m sejal….aishu ki bst frnd

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  8. Shubham

    Bahna Wo To Mene Ladko K Bare Me Kal Bataya Tha To Aap Has Rahi Thi Khair Aaisha Ko Bulao…

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  9. Aish

    sanju I m so gilt…. ki me is site pr aai… I just hate it… n bhaai aayesha n sanju apko Baye.. ab mai yaha se hmesha k liye ja rhi hu… bye n bhaai mai apke sath to hmesha hu kk n ayesha plz mere bhai ka sath mt chodna he realty lvs u kt tc u all

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  10. Shubham

    Or Sejal G Wo Meri Gf Nahi H Ok

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  11. Aish

    ayesha plz yahaa aajao.. bhaai bula rhe h…

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  12. Shubham

    Bahna Kyo Ja Rahi Ho,tumhara Bhai Kya Karega,aaisha Ko Kon Sambhale Ga? Pls

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  13. Shubham

    Bahna Baat Kya Hai,kyo Ja Rahi Ho,or Wo Mene Kal Kaha Tumhe N Aaisha Ko Or Karo Frnshp ,

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  14. Mayank

    Shubham bhai itna smjhaya fir bhi nhi smjha dost..

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  15. Creazy Ayesha

    me bhi ja rahi tumne mujhe bahut rulaya h… meri pehli galti thi is site per aana or dusari tumse bat karna or tesari tumhari bato per trust karke tumse pyar karna…. I’m not your gf yahi keh rahe the na tum…

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  16. Shubham

    Bahna Kaha Ho Aap? Kyo Ja Rahi Ho? Pls Yaar

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  17. Mayank

    Ayesha chalo bhaago jao

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  18. Shubham

    Aaisha Gf Tym Pass Karne Ka Sadhan Hoti H, Tum Mere Liye Wo Nahi, But Aaisha Tum Froad To Nahi Ho Na Pls

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  19. Mayank

    Bf-Gf ka khel mt khelo yaha ayesha n shubham tum dono ko love ka bhoot sawar h to kahi dusri jagah jao aur kro jake kone me.

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  20. Shubham

    Aaisha Gussa Mat Howo, Pls Suno R U Trustable Na Dear??? Wese Asliyat To Me Wese Hi Janta Hu…

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  21. Creazy Ayesha

    tum ab intezar karo yaha but me nahi aaugi…

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  22. Mayank

    Beta shubham tu kitne saal ka hai re??age bata tera……..me teri aur ayesha ki shadi krwa dunga.

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  23. Aish

    hey u… idiot mayank.. how day u.. tum mere bhaai n ayesha k bare me esa q bol rhe ho… mind ur tung kkkk

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  24. Shubham

    Agar Pyar Kiya Na Mujhse To Tumhe Kasam Hai Meri Mt Jaoo? Pls

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  25. Aish

    bhaai wait…. n ayesha aap kiski bato me aa rhi ho yrrr.. u know na wo mayank pagl h … kuch b bol rha h… plzz aap esa mt bolo yrr

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  26. Mayank

    Aish ji wo sentence ”how day u”
    nhi ”how dare u” hota h….

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  27. Aish

    bhaai don’t worry.. she can’t go…. she lvs u…. n plzzzzz ayeshaaa mt jao..

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  28. Shubham

    Mayank Tumhari Koi Jarurt Nahi H Na Tumhari Raay Ki, And Bahna Kisi Baat Ka Gussa Karo Hi Na Pls “Cool Cool” Yad Rakho Bs

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  29. Aish

    oye agr apko romn English nhi aati na.. to chup kro.. n yaha scul nhi h k or ye b bta du ki romn English me sb short me spellings likhi jati h…

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  30. Aish

    n wese mai q apna time kharab kr rhi hu tum jese pagl boy se bat krke…

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  31. Aish

    bhaai aap hona yaha!!

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  32. Aish

    where r u bhaai!??

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  33. Mayank

    Aur kya kya visheshtaye hai roman english ki jara wo bhi smjha do….

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  34. Mayank

    Aish tumhare sone ka time nhi hua kya

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  35. Shubham

    Bolo Bahna, Kya Hua? Aap Rply Hi Mat Karo, Simple, 🙂

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  36. Creazy Ayesha

    tumhi btao aish me yaha kyo aao kiske liye aao…. jab mujhe vaha per wo mayank bura bhala bol raha tha tab wo kaha tha mujhe akela chod Kar kaha chala gaya tha wo… mere liye jab use bolna chahiye tha tab wo chala gaya tha….usne us time ye tak nahi bola ki mayank mujhe apni ayesha per pura trust h wo esi nahi h but use to mujh per trust hi nahi h…. balki wo to pochne lag gaya mujhse qus ki me uske Sath time pass to nahi kar rahi…

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  37. Mayank

    Ab kal se is site pe nhi aaunga yar…

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  38. pk

    hahahahahaha maths gorom hahaha

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  39. Sejal

    Mayank hmne smjha tha ki tum ek achhe ldke ho…bt i was wrong….tumhe to sachme girls ki respect to dur usne shi se baat krna b nhi aata….

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  40. pk

    pyaar me jis din se viswas me kami aani suru hui us WO pyaar khilwad bn jata h…

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  41. Mayank

    Ayesha tum itni smjhdaar ho mene socha nhi tha

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  42. Aish

    bdi meherbani hogi ji apki agr kl se kya! aap abhi se is site pr na aaye to…. kk gud by

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  43. Shubham

    Aaisha Cool Wo Tumhara Kuch V Nai Kar Sakta Ok Thode Samajhdari Dikhao,hena And I Love U A C Bahut Problems Aayegi,

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  44. Aish

    sanju chodna ise …

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  45. Shubham

    Mene Kal Jo Jo V Kaha Yaad Karo, Frnd Hr Kisi Ko Nahi Banaya Ja Sakta, Me Kuch Bola Nahi It Means Me Kamjor Nahi,ok

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  46. pk

    aaj comment padh k hasi aa rhi h…is SB comment ko 2 din bad padhna… abhi gusse me ho SB 2 din bad hasi me badal jayegi 😛

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  47. Aish

    bhaai ye to mai b soch rhi thi ki jb wo idiot ayesha ko n hm gls ko itna sb bol rha tha tb aap kahaa the??!!!!

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  48. Shubham

    I Have Six Pack Aaps

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  49. Sejal

    to kya yr…..bhut bura ldka h…..achha hua priyanka ne ise chod diya..use b pta chl gya hoga….tht he is sooo bad prsn…

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  50. Aish

    n pk jiiii… hr bat ko mjak me nhi udaya jata k.. n jb bat hm gls ki respect ki aati h to hm chup nhi hoti..

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  51. Mayank

    Sejal tum na aish se jyada mature aur samajhdaar ladki lagti ho mujhe isliye bol rha hu ki mere mn ldkiyo k liye izzat h bohot.

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  52. pk

    sejl oh yar tum SB ek hi bat ki rt laga rkhe ho chhor kr chali gyi priyanka…. ye v to ho skta h WO ladki hi glt ho ya ye khud mynk glt ho…

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  53. Aish

    o hello… meri dost ko tum kuch b na bolo to tumhare liye acha h kk

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  54. Mayank

    Sejal mene kaha na priyanka nam ki koi ldki h nhi h.wo to meri banawti story thi.

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  55. Shubham

    Me Yaha Tha Hi Nahi,but Jb Aaya Tb Pata Chala, And Pk Bhai Bhulo Nahi Aap B Iska Khud Sath De Rahe The Bepanah Pe Aap Se Ye Ummid Na Thi, Join Yor Group Ok

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  56. Sejal

    ha ha tumhari baato se lg rha h mayank ki tum girls ki kitni respect krte ho……juth b bhut achha bolte ho tum

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  57. Aish

    bhaai….. r u here!!?!!!?

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  58. Aish

    cjodo bhaai yesb..

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  59. Aish

    chodo bhaai yesb..
    n ayesha kaha h?!!

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  60. Mayank

    Meri body six pack nhi h shubam me har jaunga tere se.

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  61. pk

    dekho aish g yaha comment krne se ku6 nhi hota… real life me WO jajba lao… Jo comment me ki h aur rhi bat hr bat majak ki yaha aisi koi sirious bate nhi huyi h pahle apne comment padho… aur na rply aap krte na rply WO krta…. WO SB ko ek jaisa samjhta h….

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  62. Shubham

    Pk Bhai Aap V Kam Nahi Aaj Pata Chal Hi Gaya Sare Cmnt Padhe H Mene, Ab Kripa Kar K Hume Akela Chor De Bye

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  63. Aish

    mayank q faltu bkwas kr rhe ho tum??!!? ja kr apni girl frnd… sorry… wo 4-5 jo ldkiya h tumhare pas unhe smbhalo kk

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  64. Mayank

    Ab sejal tum dhire dhire mujhe smjh rhi ho isliye keh rha hu ki me na respect krta hu ldkiyo ki u know mere phone me abhi meri gf ki msgs aa rhe h aur 5-6missed call aa chuke h fir bhi is site pe ltka hua hu tumhare sath..

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  65. Sejal

    to plzzzz jao…hmara picha chodo n apni girl frnd se baat krlo plzzzzzzz mayank….

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  66. Mayank

    Aish me tumhe kaise smjhau ki tum bilkul mere ko serious nhi le rhi ho

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  67. Aish

    first of all, I m aish.. not sejal.. wo yaha nhi h n uske pas time nhi h tumhari bkwas sunne ka.. so use bichme na lao..

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  68. Mayank

    Me picha kab pada tumhare?

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  69. pk

    subham @ iske pass 5 6 ladkiyo ka nmbr h bs pahli bar aisa sune h thoda inteting h… aur ha mujhe tum SB se koi Lena dena nhi me yha frnd we gup sup krne aata hu for chal jata hu…

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  70. Mayank

    Aish tum kb tk sejal bankar msg krti rhogi asli roop me aao na.

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  71. Shubham

    Jaoo Mayank Jaoo , Bahut Ho Gaya

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  72. Sejal

    areeeeee hmari baato k beech aa rhe ho isiliye….tumhari vjh se ayesha is site se chali gai…subham se b baat nhi kr rhi wo..only bcz of u…

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  73. Aish

    sanju tu use chodna yrr… ab plz sanju tu b yaha cement nhi kregi… kbhi bhi nhi.. tuje meri ksm h..
    n bhaai sorry bt mai ab sachi ja rhi hu, bt I m always with u n pray krungi ki aap n ayesha hmesha happy rho k tc u both… n sanju olz dnt…..

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  74. Mayank

    Shubham dost me bola kal se nhi aaunga abhi to aaj hai….

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  75. Shubham

    Bahna Yaar Aapko Kal Samajhya Na, Frndshp Har Kisi Se Mat Karo, Sire Tym Paas Karte H ,or Kuch Nahi, And Ye Pk Inse B Mujhe Ye Ummid Na Thi Khai Apne Kaha The, Aaisha N Bahna

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  76. Mayank

    Dekho sejal.. ayesha bura maan kr chali gyi to meri kya galti hai…

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  77. Mayank

    Aish tum nhi smjhogi.thik h me kl se nhi aaunga ok

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  78. Aish

    bhaai really hmne glti ki ki hm is site pr aaye….

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  79. Aish

    plzzz mt aana… kl se q, ab peheli bar kuch sahi socha h to ye shubh kam aaj n abhi hi krdona mayank…

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  80. Sejal

    aishu chod yr jane de use…
    faltu me usse baat kregi to tera b mud kharab hoga…aur kuch nhi…gud byy Mayank

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  81. Shubham

    Yaar Tum Inke Muh Hi Kyo Lag Rahe Ho Samajh Nahi Aa Raha, Tum Sb Ko Meri Kasam H Bhana Yaha Se Gai To, Ye Koi Baat H, Ye Lovers Point Apna H,inka Nahi, Tym Paas H Wo Sb, Aaisha Pls Kaha Ho

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  82. Aish

    by bhaai n ayesha…. tc n plz keep loving…
    bhaai agr fir milna hua to hme bohot acha lgega k den bby.. n I’ll miss u bhaai n ayesha.. c ya… tc

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  83. Mayank

    Subh kaam ka ek time hota h…qki aish tumhari mere prati itna apnapan dekhkar mera dil khush ho gya h.

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  84. Mayank

    Sejal dekho mujhe tum aish se jyada better lgi aur tum nhi smjhogi to kon smjhega aise bye mt bola kro

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  85. pk

    myank sach me AGR tu samne hota to tumhara kya hota????? 😛

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  86. pk

    ummid mt rakhna dost log ummid PR pani fer dete [email protected]

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  87. pk

    maynk tum krte kya ho…???

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  88. Mayank

    Mai samne hota to shayad …aisha meri pair chhukar ashirvaad le rhi hoti pk.

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  89. Aish

    bhaai aap kisi ki bato me mt aana k n I m.always with u…

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  90. Aish

    n bhaai plz apni ksm mt dalo…. mai sachi nhi ja oaungi… olzz

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  91. pk

    sochoge hr jagah sarif bnde milenge to ye tumhari bhul h site a6i h aur yaha k member v @ aish

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  92. Aish

    haanjjiiii… wo to aaj pta chl gaya h.. n. fir b b btane k liye thank u “PK”….

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  93. pk

    welcome…aish

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  94. Mayank

    ayesha really me sad ho gyi h kya? sorry ayesha ji…

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  95. Mayank

    Good night

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    1. Sejal

      gud nyt….swtttt drms n tc
      …every one byyyy

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  96. Shubham

    Pk Bhai 1 Baat Kahu, Tum Itne Ache Nahi Nikle Jitna Mene Socha Tha, Yaar Tum Ese Ladko Ka Sath Dete Ho Jinhe Kuch Tamiz Hi Na Ho, Meri Aaisha K Liye Tumne Or Tumhare Dosto Ne Bahut Bura-2 Bola, Me Bhulunga Nahi, But Tum Se Ab Kuch Matlav Nahi Ab Mujhe, Bye, Hasi Mazak Ki Had Hoti H, Bhaddi Mazak Na Kara Karo, Bye

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  97. Aish

    bhaai plz chodo na…..

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  98. pk

    “बात” अच्छी है तो उसकी हर जगह चर्चा करो,है बुरी तो “दिल” में रखो,फिर “उसे” अच्छा करो..!!!

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