Read 3rd part here, Hi frnds how r main ap sub ko Srry kehti hun k main ap Subko k main ap logonko itna wait kara rahi hun kya karun mujhe apni story itne part me likna pad raha hai Jo logon ko meri story ka climax ka intezar hai jab mujhe waqt milta hai main likti hun age chalte hai story pe toa usdin meri causin ne mera mbl leke mere naam se meri best frnd ko msg pe sub kuch kehdiya k mera pehla pyr I mean school life ka pyr koi aur nahi oh tumhara hi bhai tha n next day jab main normaly chart kiya frnd se toa oh indirect ka k ruksana main tumhe apni bhabhi banana chahati hun toa I m shock yaar main soch me padgayi mere pass koi jawab nahi tha kya kahun samaj me nahi aya n frnd jawab puchti rahi main kahun toa kya kahun n usne Yeh b kaha k even hr neo pubs me frm lng back itne sunke main soch rahi thi k Kash Yeh pyr mujhe jab mila hota jab main Itna tarsa n apni dosti ki khatir chip rahi toa aj Yeh din mujhe dekhne ko nahi milta armaan k liye itna tadapna hota lekin mujhe armaan k pyr me mujhe pyr kya hai pyr kaisa hota hai pyr ka matlab maloom pada us waqt shayad mera crush tha frnd k proposal sunte hi khamosh rehgayi n oh jawab puchti rahi main finally kaha k main tumhare bhai se sunna chahati hun k he luvs me krke n baat ko taldiya itna keh kar bye kehdiya nxt day afternoon me frnd ka cl aya Maine socha b nahi tha k Yeh matter age jayega n main intrested b nahi thi pehle hi mera dil tothgaya tha n tab b armaan mere dil me bass huwa tha toa frnd cl pe baat ki k ruksana tum bhai se sunna chahati hona toa Yeh lo bhai se baat karo. Kehke mbl dediya n mera dil zor zor se dhadkane laga pehli baar main arey maine toa frnd k bhai ka name hi bataya srry frnds unka naam hai rahil(name change)
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Ek kam kro apni bakvas story apne paas rakho tum timpaas karti ho sacci story he to puri post kro OK
jasmin ji, mai aapse ek baat kehna chahti hu ki aap ruksana ji ko samajhne ki koshish kijiye. Aisa hota hai ki kuch-kuch jano ko itna time nahi mil pata hai ki vo sari story ek baar me likh sake aur phir aisa bhi nahi hai ki jitna likha hai usko save karke rakh sake. Aasha karti hu, aap meri baat samajhne ki koshish karengi.
ruksana ji, mujhe aapki story bohot pasand aayi aur mujhe aage ke part ka besabri se intezar rahega.
Hi jasmin Jo agar apko meri kahani bakwas lag rahi hai toa aise comment b mat dijiye Yeh story in logon keliye hai Jo mujhe n meri story ko samjha hai jaise k pihu hi ne samjha n thanx pihu for undrstnding me ap bilkul sahi baat kaha k mujhe utna time nahi milta k main ek hi part me apni story khatam karun aur haan ek baat aur meri story jitni b hai ek ek word sab mujhe real me guzara hai jo ap logon ko meri kahani bahot lag rahi hai interest hai toa padiyega nahi toa mera page open mat krna frnds n once again thanx for pihu
koi baat nahi ruksana ji. Mai aapki bhawnao ko samajh sakti hu. Ruksana ji aapse ye bhi kehna chahungi ki jasmin ji ko maaf kar dijiye. Unhone aisa jaan-bujhkar nahi kaha hoga.
Is me meri koi galti nhi he OK phuji usne itne part post kiye he ki aap khud hi dekhalo kisi ne bhi unki story nhi pdhi to itne chote part he ki kya khu
Ruksana jeee me bhi aapki story padhti thi par aapne itne chote part kiye he ki padhne valo ko bhi gussa aayega sac me aaj tum khud dekhalo tumhara ye part kisine bhi nhi pdha aap 30 minit ka time nikal ke part ko toda jyada post kro to koi pdhe
Dear jasmin main apki baat ko b manti hun jab koi story interest se padta ho n bina climax k adhuri ho toa har kisi ko gussa ata hai aur tumhare is baat ka jawab main tumhe meri story k end me zaroor bataongi meri kya majboori hai n tum khud janjaoge k main Kis modpar hun n Kyon main itni short story likti hun n thanx for comments n even thanx for lovely pihu
koi baat nahi ruksana ji. Aap thanks mat boliye.
Jasmin ji, mujhe lagta hai, aapko ruksana ji ki baat par bharosa kar lena chahiye. Vo aakhir me bata dengi ki unki kya majburi rahi. Chaliye ab gussa thook dijiye.
Acha chalo hum Aap se thanx nahi kehte uska matlab Aap hamare frnd huwe pihu frndship me no thanx no Srry hai na
hi ruksana apki jo love story he waisi meri bi me bi kisi se bhut pyr krti hu….but me hindu n wo muslim to use lgta he ki ye glt he kyuki hum ek nhi ho sakte isliye wo hume ab ignor kara he samj nhi ata kya kre hum…:'(
ji bilkul ruksana ji.
Slm every one ! M frm ! Well leave it where m frm ! Jst I have to say dats a nyc story bt thr iz a one prblm in diz story I read diz story last 3 dayz n she didn’t finished diz story until nw ? I don’t understand ! Rukshana whts wrong wid u ?
Why u don’t post ur story in one page ?
N I wnt to whts goin on in ur life so plz tell us rukshana ! N I don’t care abt those ur frndz who wnt to abt ur life! bt me! Heyy I wnt to knw everything abt ur love n ur life n whatever u had to tell me okk so plz u have to finished ur story in part 5 plzz I’ll request u rukshana