ek adhuri kahani.. – raj

dear frend , jindgi me kuch pal aise hote hai jo fir kabhi wapas nahi aate..kuch lamhe aise hote hai jine ham dil se nahi jite..or khuch kahaniya aisei hoti hai..jo kabhi puri nahi hoti..ye kahani hai ek aise ladke ki jisne jina nahi har pal marna sikha..pakar bhi khona sikha..ye kahani hai meri.. mera naam raj hai. mai 24 sal ka hu. meri ek chhotisi family hai.mom,pappa..di..bhai..mai apne life me khus hu.mai ek writer hu..paper pe..book me..drama. film script..or artical likhta hu. isi karn hamesha se hi ladkiya mere karib rahti thi.itni si umar me muze itni ladkiyo ne propos kiya ki jitne naam bhi maine life me nahi sune..une mere romantic artical pasand the. or mai ye baat ko janta tha.mai ek emotionl hu.. muze o din aaj bhi yad hai..subah 10 baje uthne ki meri gandhi aadat hai.us din bhi mai soya tha.sandy (mera dog) ghar me bhok raha tha isiliye mom uske piche bhag rahi thi. hall me meri di(riya) gane dekh rahi thi..kamwali bai mere room me aai..usne subah ka papre mere bed par rakh diya..thodi der bad meri nind khuli.maine mom ko aawaj diya..”mom..i need a cooffie so give me plz..” mom ne kuch bhi jawab nahi diya mai fir se chillane laga..”mom..ye mommmi'” hat me paper leke mai bed se utha.kichan me gya or cooffie banai fir se bad par aakar so gya. kuch der bad meri nind khuli .abhi dopar ke 2 baje the. maine paper ko hat me liya..aaj bhi mera romantic artical “ye jindgi bin tere’ chhapkar aaya tha. maine mobail ki tarf dekha .mobaile band tha maine use on kiya.or nahane bathroom chala gya..thodi der me mobaile ki ring sunayi di..us wakt mai bathroom me buri candotion (aap samz sakte ho) me tha.nahane ke bad maine mobail hat me liya dekhta hu to unknow number se call aaya tha.mai samz gaya ki koi mera fan hoga artical ke liye phone kiya haoga.5 minit bad fir se usi number se muze call aaya. tabel par laptop koi battan on karte huwe maine call recive kiya.. ” hello..kya aap raj ji baat kar rahe ho..” “ha ” maine sirf ha bola ..o kuch der chup rahi fir se boli.. “maine aaj paper me artical padha ..or aapki diwani ho gai..kash koi muze bhi is tarha pyar karne wala mile..aap kya karte ho..aapki umar kya hai..aapke ghar me kon kon rahte hai..aapki koi grilfernd hai kya..kya man hai uska..mai aapse milna chahti hu..aap muze pasand to karoe na..mai tume bahot chahti hu..” use bich me rokhte huwe maine kaha . “madam staion aagya hai abto ruk jao..aapke konse sawal ka jawab pahle hu..” o hasne lagi mai bhi hasne laga.us din se o muze roj sms karti thi ..uska nam pari tha..par mai use pyar se tuktuk kahta tha.o ek doctor thi. o muzase 2 sal se badi thi. ham us din se ek dusare ke sath chating karne lage..aaisa nahi tha ki o pahli ladki hai jo muze sms karti thi..uski tarha kitni sari ladkiya thi jo muze har din sms,call karti rahti thi. par un sab me mai tuktuk ko jyada pasand karta tha.uski aawaj muze bahot pasand thi.na jane kuv uska aawaj sunane ka dil karta..har din o muze subah 7 baje uthaya karti thi..subah jaldi uthnae ke wajah se hamare bhich me zadla hota tha. mai gussa karta o ro deti thi. ek baat kahu, uska rona muze achha lagta tha.ji karta tha o uhi roti rahe or mai u hi use dhekhta rahu..dhire dhire mai uske karib jane laga ..or o bhi muze pahle se hi pasand karti thi.mai janta tha ki o muzse pyar karti hai. par usme batane ki himmat nahi thi. maine use sabhi ladkiyo ke bare me bataya.pahle to use bahot bura laga.fir usnne kaha ki ‘ tum o hi itne acche ki koi bhi ladki tumse pyar kar sakti hai..” muze sunkar achha laga .mai kisi bhi ladki ke sath flart nahi kar raha tha.nahi kisi ladki ko maine love you kaha. magr mai tuktuk ko chahne laga tha..dhire dhire din bitate gaye..ham 2 sal se sms or call nkarte the..magr ham kabhi nahi mile the..nahi maine use dekha tha. such kahu dosto .kabhi milne ki jarurat hi nahi lagi ..kabhi kabhi lagta tha use milna chahiye magar fir sochta tha ki milne ke bad usne ..ya maine use pasand nahi kiya to..or mai kisi bhi halt me use khona nahi chahta tha.. ham pyar ki baate kam ..ladte jyada the..har baat pe gussa karna..uska rona ..fir mera use manana..uska har roj subah muze nind se uthana..nahane keliye..bal ke liye..pen..bras ..se leke to har chij ke liye bar bar muze yaad dilana uska is kadr apnapan muze uske tarf khichta tha.uski bato me oi kashis thi ki mai uska diwana hone laga tha.ham dono jante the ki nahi maine use kabhi dekha hai or nahi usne muze kabhi dekha hai.par ham ek dusre ke bina nahi ji sakte the.ek bar film ke script ke liye muze haydrabad jana pada us wakt usne mere liye 4 din tak khana nahi khaya tha..o chahti thi ki ham mile..sadi kare..hamare do bache ho..ek beta or ek beti..bete ki nak uski upar jaye or oth mere jaisi ho..bete ka nam aryan or beti ka sain ho.. uski aisi bato ka muze hamesha dar lagta ha .sach to ye bhi hai ki mai use chahta tha bahot chahta tha..or sadi bhi karna chahta tha.kuch din bad mai apne naye project me lag gaya.us wajah se mai tuktuk ko kam time dene laga.har rat mai der tak kam karta or subah der tak sota rahta..dhirew dhire mai gussa karne laga..chhoti chhoti bato par chidne laga..hamare bich zagle hone lage..mai depretion me jane laga..mai har wakt sirf kam ke bare me sochta tha. o muze samzne lagi thi.par o kuch nahi kar sakti thi.or mai pura dhyan project par tha.tin 7 mahino tak ye sab chalta rha..ye din usne muze phone kiya or kaha..” raj mai tumse milna chahti hu..ghar me sadi ko lekar baat chal rahi hai..mai kisi or se sadi nahi karna chahti. i love you mad..” maine use samzaya ki ye project khatm hote hi ham milenge.. ye kitna ajib lagta hai na..ki kisi ladki ko dekhe bina..use mile bina koi itna pyar kaise kar sakta hai..magr mere sath aisa hu tha.ha i can love.har kisi ke love story me ek raja hota hai ek raja hota hai..ek rani ..magr mere love story me to kuch bhi nahi ha..mai ek aisi ladki se pyar karta tha jiska maine sirf aawaj suna hai..man hi man me use emagintion kiya hai..us din bad tuktuk ne muze call nahi kiya..2 mahino bad muze uska phone aaya usne kaha.. ” raj jindgi me pyar hi sab kuch nahi hota..meri kuch jimmedariya thi iske karn mai aaj tumse dur ja rahi hu..meri sadi ho gayi hai..ye sab batane ki himmat muzme nahi thi.isiliye aaj tak maine tume phone nahi kiya.mai tume rote huwe nahi dekh sakti..ha ye bhi sach hai ki mai hamesha tumehi chati rahungi..hamesha plz apna khaya rakhna..kam se kam mere liye ..’ us din se aaj tak mai uske call ka wait kar raha hu..aaj har subah mai mobaile ki tarf dekhta hu..kahi uska sms ya phone to nahi aaya honga..aaj mai o har pal andar hi andar marta hu jo maine uske sathe bitaye..o har pal rota hu..kash o fir se yek bar aa jaye..kash.. ishi gazal ji do pantiya yad aa jayi ” kisi nazar to tera intjar aaj bhi hai.. kaha ho tum ki ye dil bekarar aaj bhi hai..”

 

 

 

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50 thoughts on “ek adhuri kahani.. – raj”

  1. Oo God!
    Mai kya kahun kitne dino baad aj itni pyari story padhne ko mila..
    Yaar ansu nikal aagaye lekin samaj nai aata hai k humesha ladki k saat hi bura kyu hota..
    Kash ap unse millete raj toh shayd aj ye afsos apke dil me nai rahta..
    Kitna w8 kari hogi wo apka or apke naa milne se kitna roti thi hogi wo..
    Plz frndz agar kisiko pyaar karte ho toh ose tym do har khadam pe oska saat do..
    Sab kuch jhelne k liye ose akela math chhod dena..
    Nd raj apse kya kahun ab pari ka intezar karke kuch faida nai..
    Ab ap b age bado life me al d bst nd God bles u..

    1. thanks naaz sir, samz nahi aa rha aapko kya kahu..ha magr itna jarur kahunga uska sapna tha ki mai itna bada aadmi banu ki muze dekhne ke liye sabko apni nazar upar karni pade..uska ye wada mai jald hi pura karne wala hu..kuch sal bad pura india muze janega..or o jaha bhi rahegi muze tv par..paper par dekh sakegi..or masst samile degi..us wakt mai samzunga ki mera pyar safal ho gya..bas aap jaise dosto ka sath chahiye..

    2. Hello ……… Raj ji kya gajab ke love store hai aapke ksamse aakh bhar aaye aaj bhut dard huaa aapke yeh adhure store padker dost ab aapke us ladke ke bare me nhe sochna chaiye please yaar ab tum use bhul jao aur aapne life aage badao apko to us se bhe achche ladke mil jay ge please yaaaar ab use bhul jao aur me hamesha duaa karuga ke aapko har khushe mile khuda kare mere labo ke khushe bhe aapke labo per aa jay all the best dost

    3. same thing happend to me but a very precious little time …n now she is married ,, m waiting n missing each min ……..

  2. ur story is very nice mr. raj
    but mostly aisa kyu hota h hmesha boy ya girl me se ek ki marry ho jati h aur unki story hmesha adhuri hi kyu reh jati h ?????
    and anywayz all the best 4 ur bright future nd god bless you mr.raj ji.

    1. thanks radhika, such kahu pyar sirf pyar hota hai.. sahi..galt. .zuta..sachha..bahot kam..pass.. dur..aisa kuch bhi nahi hota..pyar sirf pyar hota hai..

  3. Jhuk jaye jo sar jha wahi milta h rab ka rasta…
    Teri kismat tu badal de rakh himmat bs chal de…
    tere saathi mere kadmo ke hain nishaan…
    Tu na jane aas pas hai khuda…
    Tu na jane aas pas hai khuda….
    Saddy ending 🙁
    plz gve ur time to ur love n any other luvly prsn…n all the best 🙂

    1. thanks rehan , mohobbt ko jab log khuda mante hai..pyar karnewalo ko kuv bura mante hai..jab jamana hi hai patthr dil ka ..fir log pathhro se kuv duwa mangte hai..

  4. Mr. Rehan humesha apke cmmnt’s bht acche hote hai..
    Is site par apki koe story hai kya?
    Agar hai toh plz story ka title kya hai plz bataiye na..
    Mai apki story padhna chahti hon

      1. aashi gambhir

        hi sir …
        me ye nahi kahu gi aap kase ho .. janti hu . ap unko bahut miss kar arhe ho .. apki story sach mei bhaut achi hai .. sun kar acha laga kahi na kahi aaj bhi true love jinda hai … lakin sir last mei apny kah me maar raha hu usky bina .. mei sirf etna hee kehna chati hu sir apko apny liey nahi apni family key liey jeena hoga .. unse bade kar koi nahi hai … sir ap khud dusro ko sapny dety ho … sapny deny wala hee toot jaey ga toh sapny dekhny waley ka kya hoga .. pls sir etna udas hony ki jarurat nahi apki life mei koi aise jarure aye gi jo apko payar kare gi .. jo apky liey bani hogi … pls sir payar se kabhi apna vishvas nahi khona …

  5. koi baat nhi raj jo ho gaya so hogaya aur jo bhi hota hai acche ke liye hi hota hai uski life me vo khush hogi aur hamesha khush rahe aur ap apni lfe me aage bado aur khush raho god bless you tack care

  6. kitna din baat bhut bhut pyari story padne ko mili iss pe warna kuch log to iss ko bhi cheap bana dere god bless u raj wo uski life m khush hai ap bhi apni life m khush raho

  7. Hmmmm story achi thi bt endng..nh apka pyar ek hota to mujhe jada khushi hoti…
    Kash k ap apna thora sa waqt us ladki ko de pate to aj wo apke sath hoti aur ish story ki endng sad na hoti..
    Chalo jo bi hua use badal to nh skte ap ab khush raho wo khush hogi apko khush dekh kr..ap unka sapna pura kro.. Aur apki gf ne shi kaha..
    Chod de sari duniya kisi k lye ye munasib nh aadmi k lye pyar s bi jaruri kai kam h Pyar sb kuch nh hota jindgi k lye.. God bls u.

  8. Bro jindgi me ase moke bhut km milte hai aapko milne jana chahiye tha ab uski yaden aapko din b din rulate hi rhegi.NYC LOVE STORY YHI TO LIFE HAI BRO JISKE JINDGI ME KOI LOVE STORY NHI ME USKI LIFE ak bnjar bhumi ki trh hai.

    1. log kahte hai ..muze pyar ne barbad kiya..mera pyar bewfa nikla..usne vmuze dhoka diya..magr mai kahunaga aaj jo position pe mai hu o sirf uski wajhse meri pyar ki wajah se ..o meri prerna thi…mere pyar ne muze jina sikhaya..

  9. ur right m agree wid u raj mere sath bhi kuch aisa hi hua hai sab log kehte h mostly hr safal ladke k peeche ek ladki ka hath hota h but mere sath aisa to hua h but meri safalta k peeche mere frnd ka hath h or unki safalta k peeche mera hath h
    aur isse ye bhi pata chalta h k hamara frnd ya hamare chahne wale hamare sath ho ya na ho but phir bhi vo hmesha hmare sath hote hi hai……….
    so all the best…….

  10. yahi hona chahiye yse ladke ke sath…plzzz sorry mere bat ka app ko jarur bura lage ga….jab ek ladki appni sari zindagi ,time or app na sab kuch ek ladke ko de deti hai to us ladke ko kabhi kadar nahi hoti hai..wo ladki app bache ki tarah usake har chij, har pal ,khane ka,pine ka.uthne ka nahane ka..sab kuch khayal rakhti hai….wo ladka bahut lucky hota hai par wo kabhi uski yhmiyat nahi karta kabhi usko ijat nahi deta….so main manti hu ki use ladke ko bahut tadpana chahiye or appni galti ka yhsas hona chahiye

    1. pahle to thanks nitu, hamesh log aisa kuv sochte hai ki insan ne pyar karna chahiye..log aisa kuv nahi sochte ki pyar ko nibhana chahiye..aage le jana chahiye..mai chahta to use mil sakta tha..phir aage kya..sadi koi majak nahi hoti nitu..sadi to mai kar leta fir aage kya..mai use dunuya ki har khushi dena chahta tha..or agar kam nahi karta to pause kaha se aatre hai..pyar se sari jindgi nahi katati..kabhi kabhi emotion ko baju rakhakar practicaly sochna padta hai..ye log kuv nahi samazte..har riste ka matlab pana nahi hota ..or nitu..maine usa se sirf pyar kiya tha..sirf pyar ..or mai use pana chahta tha hashil karna nahi chahta tha..ye sab jo mai aaj kar raha hu o sirf usike liye hai..

  11. rula diya yaar me kya bolu pata hai ye story jab padhraha tha mujhe dar lagraha tha k kahin wo aapko chhod na de wesa hi hua,aur aap jitgeye sach me mujhe rulahi diya…sayad ek absoos rehgeya aapke life me k jise aap itna pyar kartethe usko aap dekhna sake aur wo kisi aur ka hogeyi,
    najane kyun khuda ne kyun khuda ne pyar karne ko majboori kardeta hai fir pyar hone k baad juda kardet h

    1. thanks rajan sir..mai hamesha sirf pyar karta gya..sahi ..galt..achha ..bura..pass..najdik..aisa kuch bhi nahi socha ..maine sirf pyar kiya..sirf pyar..

      1. Nic story but bahot sad h kya beeti hogi ap pr or apke pyar pr apki story padh kr mujhe rona agya apki love story n to bahot he sad krdiya such m mujhe padh kr bahot afsos hua lakin ap zaror kamyab hoge apni manzil ko pane m or apka pyar bhi apko kamyab hote huy dekh kr bahot khush hogi

  12. rula diya yaar me kya bolu pata hai ye story jab padhraha tha mujhe dar lagraha tha k kahin wo aapko chhod na de wesa hi hua,aur aap jitgeye sach me mujhe rulahi diya…sayad ek absoos rehgeya aapke life me k jise aap itna pyar kartethe usko aap dekhna sake aur wo kisi aur ka hogeyi,
    najane kyun khuda ne pyar karne ko majboori kardeta hai fir pyar hone k baad juda kardet h

  13. konse film ka theme tha aaj ldke 5 min jis ladki se baat karta hai kahta hai ki apna pic mail ker dena

    1. thanks ravi sir..yahi soch to pyar ko badnam kar rahi hai sir..ham sirf hamesha ek ladki se pyar karte hai..ek aisi ladki jo hamare life me aaye..ya pyar kare.ladko ka dil hamesha pyar ko sochta hai…magar ham ye kuv nahi sochte ki pyar sirf pyar hota hai.agar ham pyar se pyar kare to aap jo atracxtion wali jo baat kar rahe ho o risto me kabhi nahi aayegi..kuch riste naam ke mohtaj nahi hote..jindgi hamesha dhup ke saye nahi..to kabhi badloke garjna bhi dikhati hai..or ham insan to hamesha baris ka hi wait karte hai..

  14. Achhi story hai..bt bro tmhe us se ek baar to milna hi chahiye tha…isme tmhri glti jyada hai…usne intazaar kiya lekin tm mil nhi paaye..

  15. Tumhari Duniya Se Chale Jane Ke Baad Hum Tumhe Har Ek Tare Me Nazar Aaya Karenge Tum Har Pal Koi Dua Mang Lena Aur Hum Har Baar Toot Jaya Karenge…

  16. mustafa kanchwala

    very nice love story mere sath bhi kuch aisa hi howa humne bhi sirf phone pe hi bat ki aur 3 day pehle uski engmnt hogai maine bhi use kabhi nahi dekha

  17. Hi raj..ap ko akhrta hoga na ki apne unki bat kyo na mani.unki yad v ati hongi unki awaj unki hrkte unki msti sb yad ati hongi.or yad ani v chahiy apne pyar kiya h koi mjak n pr raj pls pls pls ap apna khyal rkhe unke liy..plss wese sube utna acha hota he.ok gn

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