close to my heart

Close to my heart – Shiv Pandit

close to my heart

Read…feel….think ……….
ye kahani rahul ke naam…..
kyuki jine ke liye shahare ki jrurt hoti hi h..ye site mera shahara h..
logo ke drd pta chlte h to jine ka hosla milta h..
ek hosle ki kahani ap bhi suno..??
hariyana se komal mehta batati h ki meri shadi love marrige thi.
himanshu bahut hi accha ldka h.
uski or meri cast bhi alg alg h,fir bhi hmare pyar ne hme milva diya..
shadi ke bad m sasural chli gyi..
Do saal sb thik tha..
do saal ke bad sbka nzriya mujhe lekr thoda rukha ho gya..
Yaha tk ki himanshu ka bhi..
mujhe lgta ki m sayad thik se sbka khyal nai rkh pati,to hoga??
M or ji lgakr ghr ka kam krti or sbko khush rkhne ki kosis krti..
mgr kismt me kya likha h ,ye meri soch se bhi pare tha..
m maa nai bn sakti…
mere andr esa koi gun nai h ki jisse m ek nai jindgi ko is duniya me la sku..
vzh m ni janti..ha jb bhi upr jaungi to khuda se ye bat puchungi
jarur,,ki mere sath usne esa kyu kiya??
jb tk mujhe apne andr ki kmi ka ehsas hua,tb tk sare ghr vale mujhse
itni nfrt krne lg gye ki m puri umr me bhi nai mita skti…
himanshu bhi salike se bat nai krta..
shrab pikar ghr ata..bat bat pe tane marta..baanjh khta..hath bhi
uthata mgr marta nai..mujhe ye dr rhta ki kisi din mar dega to..??
mahino guzar jate mgr duriya ni mit ti..
M khti ki mere jism ko jitni chot deni ho dede,mgr yu shrminda na kro mujhe..??
Mgr jin nzro se mujhe himanshu dekhta,yu lgta ki mr jau usi wqt..
mgr mere ansuo ka koi mol nai tha or dil ka to vazuud ki mitta ja rha tha..
khana pina chut gya..
mrne ka inzar krne lg gyi..
or kya krti..
mgr khuda ki bate bhi ajeeb h..kon smjh pata h..
Mere sasural ke ghr me doodh dene ke liye roz dusre ganv se virendr ata h..
m kabhi kabhi jb uski ankho me jhak leti to mhsus hota ki km se km in
ankho me mere liye izzt to h.
ek din virendr kh gya ki orat or bel ki fitrt ek jesi hoti h..
jo kisi ke shahare pe tiki hoti h.
uski ye bat mere andr ghr kr gayi..
or m virendr ko apna shahara manne lg gayi..
roz subah 5 mint ke liye milta mgr zhn me hr wqt rhne lga..
Meri itni si khushi bhi khuda ko gvara ni hui..or dukh ka pahad tod diya..
himanshu ko mujhse tlaak chahiye tha..
usne saf saf kh diya..ki bccha chahiye nai to tu nai chahiye…
m kya krti..
jindgi bhr shrminda hone se accha h ki ghut ke mr jau..
M vo kat rhi thi jo mene boya hi nai..
ek din himanshu mujhe mere ghr chor gya.
Mgr virendr mujhse milne aya..
or ehsas dila gya ki vo ab bhi mera shahara h..
usne mujhe apnane ki kahi..
kaha ki jindgi tere damn guzre,bs or kuch nai chahiye..
mere maa bap ne bhi ha kr di or m shadi ke 4 saal bad fir dulhn bn gyi..
ab virendr mujhe bahut khush rkhta h..
Uske ghr vale bhi bahut pyar krte h mujhe..
mgr kabhi kabhi yu lgta h ki jindgi akhir kyu shahare ke bina nai chlti…
Kyu ummeedo pr pani fir jata h..
kyu koi pyar ko nai smjhta..
m himanshu ko olad nai de pai..
mgr jaan mangta to hnskr de deti..
pr koi smjhe tb na…???
ye thi komal mahta…or uski kahani..
or m….hahahahahaha…
mujhe to ap jante h…….

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144 thoughts on “Close to my heart – Shiv Pandit”

  1. bhai shiv ye site ……jine ka sahara deti hai….yr lekin shaat to ladki bhi deti hai to….har koi…..hai jo is site pe kisna kise pyaar karta hai par koi bata nhi sab time paas karte hai is site se aur dil se na logao….. is site ko…..kya pata kab band ho jaye…….ab ye mat bolna jab hogi tab dekha jayega……..

  2. hey shiv nice story again !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    hey admin i wann ask you something how can i talk to you ????coz i have some question ………

  3. Shiv ji your best writing style. itne dino baad apne write post kiya.
    frend u true says ,lady chahe jitna bhi kisi ke liye kuch kar de jab tak wo apno ki ummeedo ko pura nahi karti tab tak use koi nahi apnata hai lady ko apni sare sapno ko bhul kar apno ki khushi ke liye jina padta hai.
    frend ap apne past ko bhul kar apne present ko happily jiye.
    GOOD NIGHT FREND

  4. Mein thik hun
    Ujhle hue kyu
    Ek baat batau
    mei………………………..girl
    mei ab se anpe nam se he comment post karunge

    ……….ruhi

  5. Aap Ruhi ho, to fir ye ladke ke naam se comment kyu? Better hoga ki aap apne real name se hi a/c banale yaha….
    Or meri uljhano ka puchho .I’m ok

  6. oye Shiv…..wel come back yr

    aapki kahani ho..aur feelings na aaye.. ye to ho hi nahi sakta
    .
    feel b kiya ..like to bohat kiya… abhi samajh b liya
    .
    yahi sach hai..jab tak hum insaan hain humein sahare ki har waqt zarurat hai… ise hum jhuthla nahi sakte

  7. Akhiri kht h mera…….
    jispe h nam tera….
    aj ke bad koi kht na likhunga tujhko..
    Bhul jaunga tujhe,ye to nai kh skta
    dil pe chlta h kaha zor muhbbt krke
    mgr is bat ki leta hu ksm e hmdm
    m na tdpaunga tumhe kbi nfrt krke
    bevfaa tu h,m na kahunga tujhko….
    aj ke bad koi kht na likhunga tujhko..
    Yad biite hue lmho ki satayegi agr
    ap apne se kahi door nikal jaunga
    ittifakn bhi agr tujhse mulakat hui
    ajnbi bnke teri rah se tal jaunga
    dil to chahega mgr awaz na dunga tujhko…
    aj ke bad koi kht na likhunga tujhko..
    ye tera shr,galiya,ye dr o divar ye ghr
    mere tute hue khwabo ki yahi jnnt h
    kl ye sb chor ke jana h bahut door mujhe
    jis jgh tu h s,shahraa h,meri kismt h
    yad mt krna mujhe,ab na milunga tujhko…
    aj ke bad koi kht na likhunga tujhko..
    akhiri kht h mera …
    jispe h nam………..
    gd mrng dosto

  8. Chlo apne bare me jra sa batau..
    umr 30 sal,
    dt of drth-31/10/1984
    is di subah 10bze hmari p.m. Shri indira ghandhi ko goli lgi thi,jisse vo khtm ho gayi,or m sham 4 bze hua tha.
    to dadi ji ne nam shiv rkh diya.
    shiv ka dusra mtlb mot hota h.
    Dadi khti h ki kisi ko mar ke aya tha..
    or km hi jiyega kyuki 8 mhine me peda hone vale bacche km hi jite h..
    to ap sb se ji bhr ke pyar kr rha hu,taki jb jau to pyar ki kami mhsus na ho..
    ok prdeep ji…and nikki ji satsriya kal ji..ki hal h twada…or twade pind da..???

  9. Oh my god ! shiv bhai ….7 /11/84 ko mere bade bhai ka janmdin hai…or indira ji ke nidhan ke 7 din baad bo paida huye the to meri dadi ne unka naam indrajeet rakh diya tha ….to aap to bilkul mere bade bhai ki tarah hi ho…or haan aap pure 100 saal jiyoge ….or aap aise hi likhte rahe…insa allah ek din aap ki kitab padunga me….

  10. Chlo sb ek kam karo sare…..
    us ek lmhe ko yad krke batao ,jis lmhe me apko kisi se pyar hua ho….
    chahe kisi se bhi…ma bap bhai bhn dost lvr xyz kisi se bhi…..
    esi koi bat jo samne vale me dikhi or hm fida ho gye….smjh gye sare….
    to chlo ye rha mera…..
    kavita….jb mili thi to vo tren me kisi se ladai kr rhi thi..vo bhi buzurg lady se…
    m uski ladai pe fida ho gya tha..kyuki vo gusse me bhi bahut mithi bol rhi thi…
    bs vo ladai dil le gyi,,ab tk to vaps aya ni…
    ab ap ek ek krke batao,or fir mhsus kro us lmhe ko dubara..dekhna ek tazgi aa jayegi …ok start now……

  11. ammmmm….

    aisa pyar to kisi k liye b aa sakta hai… mera mtlb naam jyada ho saktein hain… kya jyada naam shamil karne ki parmission hai Shiv g

  12. ok
    1. meri didi.. jinse main jitna b ladu… unka mere liye jo pyaar aur bachpna hai …kabhi kam nahi hota
    .
    Dusra wo insaan jo dost ki haisiyat se kabhi aaya tha zindgi mein… aur usne ek bar mujhse kaha tha… coz main ladti bohat thi usse.. fir b usne mujhse j kaha tha ki..” Pata ni kyu changey lagde tusi mainu..” tabh aisa hi kuch feel hua tha….

  13. Chalo meri bali ka naam bhi bata deta hu….Pooja….Jab me school me tha , tab use me bahut ghoorta tha ..bas use hi dekhta rehta tha , use ye baat achi nahi lagti thi . Ek din jab class me hum dono hi the akele to bo mere pas aakar gusse me bolti hai – Pradeep aap is tarah se muje mat dekha karo verna me principal sir se bol dungi , bahut ghoorte ho aap” itna kehkar bo chali gayi….Or muje pura din yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki ye sapna hai ya haqeekat , kyuki 1st time usne mujse baat ki thi…..Yahi bo lamha tha jab bo mera dil churakar le gayi or aajtak usi ke paas hai…..

    1. hahahahahaha….
      Pradeep agar Pooja principal ko sachmuch shikayat laga deti to…. to kya hota..?
      .
      urga banna padta kya…?

  14. Oo teri ki… principal murga baad me banata , pehle jamkar dhunai karta meri ..sach me us time to bahut dar gaya tha me …or pata hai Nikki di … fir uski taraf dekha bhi nahi mene kuch din tak hahahaha

  15. Haan Nikki di…fir apan ne chupchap se piche ki bench se aage ki bench pakad li…kyuki ab agar Pooja ko dekha to bo principal se bol hi degi …or us principal ki maar to mene bachpan me khai hai…khuda kasam hone ko to principal hai par jab bat marne ki ho to police bala daroga ban jata hai…isliye piche ka sleeper chhod ke aage ke general coach me baith gaye hum chupchap se 🙂

  16. Ye Website aisi h jisme koi ak baar aata h to bhul niii pta
    yaha k story feeling wali hoti h
    aur Shiv ke story to sidhe dil ko chhu jati h
    kya likhte ho shiv

  17. All fmly memdrs gd nt..
    fmly isliye kaha ki hm ek hi fmly se h..kyuki ek hi ghr me rhte h..hmare ghr ka nam h lovers point..
    the lovers point…
    kitna shandar nam h na hmare ghr ka..
    or badhaaiyaan sariya nu..kyuki is site ki kahaniya bahut log pdhte h..
    or kismt se mujhe kafi log sunate h..
    aaj ek ne apni kahani sunai h fon pr..vahi likh rha hu..mgr abhi adhi likhi gayi h.,,fir bhi bahut exted nu..
    bdi hi sweet h..pdhne aana jarur ap sb invet h…
    @tere bina ji nai skta@

  18. Dekha pradeep bhai
    Meine apke baat manli
    Or apne nam se he comment post kerne lage
    ………………
    ……………….
    ………………..
    your old danish ^_^

  19. Teri rusvaaiyon se drta hu..
    jb tere shr se guzrta hu…
    Hal e dil bhi na kaha ska agr
    tu rhi muddto kareeb mere
    tu mujhe chor kr chli bhi gyi
    Kher kismt meri,nseeb mere
    ab m kyu tujhko yad krta hu….
    jb tere shr se…..
    koi pur san e hal ho to kahu
    kesi andhi chli h tere bad
    din guzara h kese mene
    rat kese dhli h tere bad…
    roz jita hu,roz mrta hu…
    jb tere shr se…
    wo zmana teri muhbbt ka
    ek bhuli hui kahani h
    kis tmnna tujhko chaha tha
    kis muhbbt se har mani h
    apni kismt pe naz krta hu..
    jb tere shr se…..
    aj bhi bar e gah hsti me
    tu agr ek bar mil jaye
    chen aa jaye arzuo ko
    hsrto ko karar mil jaye
    jane kya kya khyal krta hu…
    jb tere shr se……
    teri rusvaaiyon se….
    gd mrng sbko puri surat ki trf se…

  20. Are yaar
    Fir se mujhe 1 ko good morning bol diya aapne.
    Baki ke sab naraj ho jayenge yaar.
    Sab ko bolo.
    Chalo me hi bol deta hu.
    Friends aliya ki or se sab ko very very good morning.

  21. Ap punjabidhrti.com pr jate h kya
    Agr gae na to plz vinod bhai ko boldena k us site pr mera cmnt post ni horha h isliy wha bat ni krparhi hu plz di

  22. kya story thi mere bhai kasam se yr tum ne toh dil hi le liya..dost aurat ki takat ki prediction hum logo ko tab laga leni chahiye jab hum kisi ladki ko lene k liye 100 logo ki barat leke jate h sirf ek ladki ko or vo ladki aa v jati h hmhre sath.

  23. Hai friends main aapki new frd main 15 saal ki hu mere 3 bade bhai h Bade ka naam h aman woh ek ladki se pyar karta tha unki mulakat ek mall me hui thi woh bahut achhi smile karti thi aur mere bhai ko usse dekhte hi pyar ho gaya mera bhai bade loving type ke h usi din unhone mujhe call kiya aur sari baat batayi maine socha woh phir se majak kar rahe h main kaha bhai aap phir se majak wala pyar kar baithe aise kahkar maine phone kat diya aur phir 5 Din baad mere bhai ka phone aa gaya maine kaha kya bhai pyar ka bhoot utar gaya wohbole sakshi woh ladki ka naam reema h main tabhi samaj gayi k iss baar matter serious h aur phir kuch dino baad main khud mere bhai ke ghar rehne chali gayi summer vacation me phir mujhe pata chala ki bhai ko uss ladki k ghar ka pata chal gaya tha phir main aur mera bhai uske ghar gaya waha mujhe pata chala ki woh b mere bhai ko like karti h phir unhone bataya ki unke mom nahi h woh apne papa ke saath rahti h maine yeh sab meri taiji ko batai woh uss ladki se baat karne uske ghar gayi phir aaya love story mein twist jane kya hua ki woh ladki apni bua ke ghar chali gayi usi pal sab katam jane kya hua ki woh ladki mere bhai ko hate karne lagi phir kuch hi dino baad meri summer vacation katam ho Gayi main iss baat ko puri tarah bhul gayi sab kuch thik chal raha tha ke ek din woh mujhe mili maine unhe nahi pehchana par unhone mujhe pehchaan liya phir kuch dino baad mujhe yaad aagaya main unke ghar phir gayi par iss bar main planning k saath thi kyonki mujhe sach pata karna tha maine kaha main apni frd se milne aayi hu usse bula dijiye phir maine natak kiya ki maine nahi unhe pehchana aur mere bhai ka phone h mujhe reema bhabhi par gussa aa raha tha main jut muth me boli bhai bhabhi kaise h usse laga ki mere bhai n shaadi kar li par aisa kuch nahi tha phir maine yeh sari baat apni frd ko batai woh kahnet lagi ki reema jab yaha aai thi tab woh kai din tak royi thi phir mujhe yaad aaya ki aakhiri baar toh unki baat taiji se hui thi maine sach pata kiya toh pata chala ki yeh sab taiji nekiya tha phir maine yeh sab apne bhai ko bata diya phir woh reema bhabhi ko milne aaya unhone bataya ki woh bewafa nahi h taiji ne unke papa ki bahut insalt ki aur iss riste se inkar kar diya tha phir unhone mere mom dad se puchakar marrige kar li aaj woh bahut khush h iss baat ko 3 mahine ho gaye issliye jaroori nahi ki sachha pyar nahi milta

    1. All frd good evening main aap sabse ek help chahti hu aur krishna ji aap ne pucha tha na maine kisi se pyar kiya ya nahi Main kaha tha nahi but ka matlab tha k kiya h par one sided i love her but sayad woh nahi karta abhi thode din baad uska birthday h 29december ko isiliye mujhe aap ki help chaiye karenge

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