betiyo ko unka adhikar do – shreya patel

mujhko mera hak do papa bahut kuch kr dikhlaungi

lene do khuli hawa me sanse bete se v jyada ferz nibhaungi

udne do kisi patang k jaise asma ko chhu kr aungi

q darte ho havani duniya se akeli hi sabpe bhari pr jaungi

mujhko mera hak do papa

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75 Comments

  1. chotu

    nice poem shreya g

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    1. shreya patel

      thanks chhotu ji

      Reply
  2. Alone(M.S)

    Verry nice Lins
    Shreya ji..

    Bahut accha likha h apne
    Really girl kisi boys se kam nhi h unki udan ko dekhne ke liye unko unka haq milna hi cahiye..

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  3. shreya patel

    thanks alone ji

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    1. Alone(M.S)

      Shreya ji….

      Kesi ho ap
      Aaaj ke time m socity m ladkio ko boj samja jata h but insan ladkio ko syd samj nhi pate ya fir unki itni aukat hi nhi h jo samj sake..

      Infect m to smjta hu ki ladki aur ldke m farq hi kiya h..

      Dono ke ander ek jaan h..
      Dono ke ander blood read hi h..
      Dono ke ander body ka har organ same h sare organ wahi kaam krte h to fir socity m ye gandagi kuch gande logo ne hi fela rakhi h..

      Shreya ji aise logo ki wajha se girls apne future m kuch kr ni pati..
      And ap aise logo ko avoid kro aur age badho…

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      1. shreya patel

        mast hu alone bhaiya
        ap ne sahi kha logo k gande soch ki vajah se girls apne future me age ni badh pati hai

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  4. Rajver

    Nice

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    1. shreya patel

      thanku rajveer bhai

      Reply
  5. Vinod ald

    Hi Rajveer and sherya kaun ho aap Dono

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  6. Vinod ald

    Koi h yanha
    Rashmi ramya kanha ho

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  7. raj

    nice poem shreya ji…

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    1. shreya patel

      very thanku raj bhaiya

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  8. Vinod ald

    Kaun kaun so rha h

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  9. raj

    hm ni sorhe vinod ji ap sogye kya…

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  10. raj

    aankho ki chamak palko ki shan ho tum,chehre ki hasi labon ki muskan ho tum,dhadkta h dil bas tumhari aarjoo me phir kaise na kahun ki meri jan ho tum

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  11. cute girl

    nice raj bhai
    kaise ho

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  12. Vinod ald

    IshA abhi tak soi nhi

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  13. Vinod ald

    >> Mohabbat barsa dena tu , sawan aaya hain
    Tere aur mere milne kaa, mausam aaya hain
    Mohabbat barsaa dena tuu, saawan aaya hain
    Tere aur mere milne kaa, mausam aaya hain

    Sabse chhupaa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hain
    Pyaar main tere hadd se guzar jaana hain
    Itna pyaar

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  14. Vinod ald

    Hi sherya tum new ho kya
    Raj so gye

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  15. cute girl

    kya bat hai vinod bhai kafi romantic mood me lag rahe ho

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    1. Vinod ald

      Bhak chal jhooti

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  16. cute girl

    vinod bhai mai so k uth gayi hu

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  17. cute girl

    baki sab log so gaye hai???

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  18. Vinod ald

    Mai aur tumko chor keep sb ludak gye

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  19. cute girl

    ap abhi tak kaise jag rahe hai

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  20. Vinod ald

    Lockdown ki wajah se

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  21. cute girl

    bhabhi or bacho ka kya hal hai

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  22. Vinod ald

    Kaju àur batao Apne bare me

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  23. Vinod ald

    Abhi to soye h sb
    Ab 10 baje uthe ge sb

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  24. Vinod ald

    T Tum kite baje so jati hi Aur phir Jag jati ho

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  25. Rocky

    जब खामोश आँखों से बात होती है,
    तो ऐसे ही मोहब्बत की शुरुआत होती है,
    तेरे ही ख्यालों में खोये रहते हैं,
    न जाने कब दिन और कब रात होती है।

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  26. Rocky

    तू चाँद मैं सितारा होता,
    आसमान में एक आशिया हमारा होता।
    लोग तुझे दूर से देखा करते और
    सिर्फ पास रहने का हक हमारा होता।

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  27. ROCKY

    Very Nyc poem
    ..shreya

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    1. shreya patel

      thanx rocky bro

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  28. ROCKY

    Good night tc Tlp….

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  29. shreya patel

    thanx rocky bro

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  30. raj

    thank u cute girl ji..hm ache h ap kaise ho?good morning friends

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  31. nitya

    gd mrng frnds hv a nice day…

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  32. nitya

    bhot achhe ajib singh hehehe…

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  33. cute girl

    hello nitya sis kaisi ho
    bahut dino bad ayi ho
    a ajib singh kon hai

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  34. cute girl

    gm friends

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  35. nitya

    hi cute girl mai achhi hu ap kaise ho…hmm thode din bad to ayi hu mann ni kr rha tha yr yha ane ka…ajib singh raj ko bol rhi hu haha

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    1. raj

      nitya yha to km se km ye nam chod do…

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  36. Sona

    Good morning….
    Nice

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    1. shreya patel

      thanx sona didi

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  37. shreya patel

    thanx sona didi

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  38. ROCKY

    Good evening Tlp

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  39. raj

    good evening rocky bro and all friends

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  40. cute girl

    wah raj bhaiya name to kafi acha hai

    aise hi bna rahe aplogo ka relation

    apke k pyar ko kisi ki nazar na lage

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  41. Alone(M.S)

    Hello kese ho see all frnds

    Shreya ji ap kesi ho..
    And kha se ho ap ..

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  42. cute girl

    hi vinod bhaiya mai hv bt012 pe aungi abhi gehu ko dourai kar rahi hu
    tab tak k liye bye
    sab log ana

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  43. Vinod ald

    Ishu tum so gai hogi ab 12 baje utho gi

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  44. cute girl

    are ni vinod ji abhi dourai karke ghar ayi hu

    bahut thak gayi hu sone ja rahi hu
    ab subah aungi
    good night friends

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  45. cute girl

    good morning friends
    itna mehnat karne k bad v hum uth gaye hai
    or ap log abhi tak so rahe hai kitne alsi ho yr

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  46. raj

    ajib singh acha nam h cute girl ji kitna weird to hai…waise v nitya jo v cartoon dekhti h usme jo sbse weird nam hota h mera rkh deti h haha,,,good morning friends

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  47. Pihu

    Nice poem shreya ji

    Sachhi baat hai dear agar mom dad saath de to betiya unki har sapna pura kr sakti hai

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    1. Alone(M.S)

      Right
      Pihu..
      M agree with u..

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      1. Pihu

        Thank you alone ji

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    2. shreya patel

      thank u pihu sis

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      1. Pihu

        Wel come shreya ji

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  48. Pihu

    Thank you so much “I…..”
    for help me take care

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  49. cute girl

    vinod bhai
    samir bhai
    rocky
    raj
    nitya
    naina di
    aj sab log gayab ho
    kahi party chal rahi hai kya hehehehe

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  50. Vinod ald

    Nhi sb so rhe h mujhe Chor ke

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  51. cute girl

    wah
    vinod bhai ab tak ap v so rahe the

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  52. Vinod ald

    Isha ja rha Hu chay banne bina Chini aur bina milk ke Pina ho To batao

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  53. cute girl

    good morning friends

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  54. Pihu

    Good morning cute girl

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  55. cute girl

    hi pihu apne bare me kuch batao

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  56. Pihu

    Cute girl apse jyada mere ko kon janta hai…..hehehehe
    .
    Cute girl mai study karti hu ap kya karti ho.

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  57. cute girl

    mai v study kr rahi hu pihu
    kon sa class hai apka

    baki sablng kha ho
    vinod bhai
    samir bhai
    rocky
    raj
    nitya
    naina didi
    mai to sarso kat rahi thi ap log v gayab
    wah bhai wah
    vinod bhai mai suger free chay lungi 0

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    1. Alone(M.S)

      Cutee girl..
      Ji ap kha se..

      Reply
  58. Rk

    Hiiii
    cute girl
    Pihu
    All

    H r u

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  59. Rk

    Good evening all….

    Reply
  60. Naina

    Osm poem ylll
    Dil ko chhu gyi apki poem humari…

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    1. shreya patel

      thanx naina

      Reply

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