Bahroopiyaaa – Shiv Pandit

Raghvan chote se ganv se jarur tha mgr spne bahut bde the.
bachpn se hi hunar ka malik tha..
jati se bahroopiya tha..
roz naye naye roop me rhta..
jb roop bnata to phchana nai jata..
Kyuki apni kalaa me hoshiyar tha..
Apni scool ke hr natk me hissa leta or hr bar phla inam jiit jata..
yahi kalakaar bnne ka shoq use ek din mumbai le aya..
Bat tb ki h jb mumbai ka nam bomby hota tha..
dhire dhire bomby ke rng me ghul gya..
ganv bahut km jata..
ganv se ek din babuji ka kht aya..
likha tha ki jldi ganv aja..
raghvn pahuch gya..
ghr me aya to kuch log jmavda lga kr bethe the..
andr dekha to babu ji bimar halat me lmbi lmbi sanse le rhe the..
khne lge ki rghu beta ..ab wqt ka koi bhrosa nai h..kuch kam h jo krna
chahta hu..
rghu baba ki hr bat manta tha..
usne hr bat ke liye ha bhr di..
baba ne kaha kuch din yahi rh ja,teri shadi krni h..
rghu ne ha bhr li..
or pas ke ganv ki ldki se rghu ki shadi kra di gyi..
shadi ke bad baba mre nai blki thik ho gye..khte ki pote ke sath
khelkr mrunga…
Ganv me kafi din ho gye to rghu shr jane ko khne lga..
amma boli ki bahu ko bhi satn leja..
pr rbhu nahi lana chahta tha..
khta ki shrmili yahi thik h..
vaha esi anpdh kya kregi??
pr amma ne zid ki to rghu sath le aya..
shrmili relgadi me bethi khidki se bahr bhagte pedo ko dekhkr  muskura
rhi thi..mano alvida kh rhi ho..
Mn ke kisi kone me geet ga rhi thi..m to chli piya ji ke desh..ab to
bhaye prdesh……
mgr pure raste rghu jra bhi shrmili se nai bola..
Bomby aa gye dono..
shrmili ne jagti ankho se phli bar shr dekha to muh khula ka khula rh gya..
bechari ne kbhi spne me bhi itni bhid or gadiya nai dekhi..
ghr pahunche to bda sa ghr dekh kr sochne lgi ki isme kitne log rhte honge..??
Drvaza ramdas kholne aya..
rghu ne sara saman unko diya or kaha ki ye ghr me kam krte h..kuch
chahiye to inse mang lena..
mujhe kam h,jana h abhi..rat ko deri se aaunga..
itna khkr rghu unhi kdmo vaps chla gya..
shrmili ko yu rghu ka jana acha nai lga mgr boli nai..
fir yahi silsila shuru ho gya..rghu bahut km ata ghr me,ata bhi to
shrmili se nai bolta..
agr shrmili kuch puch bhi leti to rta rtaya jvab milta ki ramdas se
lelo jo chahiye..??
ab kon smjhaye ki shrmili ko kya chahiye..
Shrmili adhi adhi rat tk dhleez pr bethi raghu ka intzar krti..
rghu kabhi ata,kabhi nai ata..
or ata bhi to na ke brabr..kuch galiya or kucn tane mar kr muh fer ke so jata..
shrmili ko itni bhi izazt nai thi ki vo hath lgakr puch ske ki akhir
jurm kya h mera..??
shrmili jameen pe hi let jati or sari rat roti..jese ek sukhi bhn ke
gle lgkr dukhi bhn roti h..
mgr dukh kon dur kre..???
din to rukte nai..shrmili bs akeli sara sara din bethi rhti..
pdhna likha janti nai thi..
Shoq ke nam pe sitaar bjana tha..
mgr vo bhi pura sikh na pai.
shrmili ke baba sitaar bjate the..
unhi se sikha krti thi pr shadi ke bad mayke rhne nai diya..or baba
sikhane thodi ate..
adhura rh gya..
Pura din akeli bs roti…
kisi ko kosna bhi nai janti thi..kisko dosh de..itna gyan bhi nai tha
ki kami kya h..
rghu din b din or rukha hota gya..
Ek din bola ki kuch din ke liye bahar ja rha hu..kam se ..ek mahina lg jayega..
apne kpde dale or chla gya..
shrmili rh gyi akeli..khne ko ramdas tha mgr sirf nokr..
shrmili pura din akeli rhti..
Ek din sham ke wqt khidki ke pas bethi thi..achank kahi se sitaar ki
avaz kano me pahunch gyi..
kahi sitaar bz rha tha..
ab roz shrmili us wqt khidki ko khol ke beth jati..
sitaar roz usi wqt bzta or vadk ka geet sunai deta..
piya bin chen kaha re……
ye geet shrmili ke kleje ke tar jhnjhna deta..
ek din rha na gya or drvaze se bahar nikl gyi ..
sitaar ki avaz pas ke ghr se aati thi..
ghr ke andr gyi..dekha vadk betha sitaar bza rha h..
bde bde bal,bdi si munch..kurta dhoti phnne ko ….or kd kathi ka rghu
jesa hi…
shrmili ko dekh ruk gya..or bola..
are ap kon h..??
shrmili ne nam pta sb bta diya..or apna adhura snoq bhi..
vadk bola ki ye to accha h ..ap bjaye or m gaunga..
ab roz usi wqt mhfil jmne lgi..
ek dusre ki dil ki bate hui..or ek din vadk ne shrmili ka hath pkd liya..
shrmili chahkr bhi chura na paai..
or vadk ka hosla bdhta gya..
Vadk na shrmili ko apni baho me le liya..shrmili chtpta rhi thi..pr
niklne na pai..pta nai kyu???
or har gyi..
Khud ko sonp diya usko jo sitaar ke sath sath shrmili ke dil ke tar
bhi bjata tha..
kuch der bad hosh aya to nzr na utha ski..
pr vadk muskura rha tha..
shrmili ke muh ko hath lgakr uthaya or apne chehre ki munche nikal ke
shrmili ke hath me dedi..sr ke bal bhi de diye..or muskurane lga..
khne lga ki mujhe pta tha tum ho hi esi……m to azmaa rha tha..
shrmili ke panv tle zmeen nai rhi..
Nkli much or bal nikalne ke bad jo chehra samne aaya,vo rbhu ka tha..
bahroobiya..rghu….
shrmili doud aai vaha se..or bs roti roti sidhi rasoi me chli gyi..
andr se drvaza bnd kiya..
or ji bhrke roi..kismt ko,maa baba ko..pti dev ko..
or akhirt roke thm gyi or mn hi mn khne lgi ki jese sita mata ke liye
kabhi zmeen ft gyi thi,kash ese hi aaj ft jaye to zmeen me sma jau..
pr ab kaha zmeene ft ti h..
idhr udhr dekh kr vaha rkhi machish uthai or khud ko aag lga li..
Rghu bhi bhaga bhaga aya tha piche..
pr snrmili ne khud ko bnd kr liya tha tb tk..
Drvaza thok rha tha..shrmili ..drvaza khol…drvaza khol..???
pr kon khole..
rghu ki ptni…??jise rghu ne smjha hi nai kabhi..
To kon thi shrmili fir……
m smjh pata itne me ramdas aa gya..
bola …malik ganv se amma ji ka smachar aya h..apko or bahu rani ji
ko bulaya h..amma ji ne bola h ki phla savn mayke me hota h bahu
ka..to le ana bahu ko………..
laye ab kon..???????

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144 thoughts on “Bahroopiyaaa – Shiv Pandit”

  1. sach me ek ldki ki jindgi hoti hi aise h sadi se pehle maa papa ki marji se jiti h or sadi k bd sasural wale or pati ki marji se apne ap ko to bo kho hi deti h jiske bharose apna sb kuch chod k gyi ho bo agr aisa kre to ky krti bichari

  2. are mujhe to yhnkuch smjh hi nhi arha g me ky kru kvi cmmnt jati h kvi cmmnt box click hi nhi hoti mera to smjh me hi nhi arha

  3. Aap apni id log in karo fir apni friend list me jisko sms bhejna h uspe click kro..
    Fir option aayenge.
    Pablic msg private msg..
    Private msg pe jakar sms bhej sakte ho….
    Ya fir coment me se jisko bhejna h uske name pe click kar aise bhej sakte ho…

  4. Or ha agr kisika msg aaya ho use reply d3na ho to.
    Apne inbox me jao..
    Jisko msg bhejna ho.
    Pahle uska name aata h….
    From: xyz fir. RE: hello.. hi. Kuchh bhi.
    To aap RE: pe click kro fir.. reply box me jakar rwply de sakte ho ok…

  5. shiv bhai ye sb story kanha pate hai aap aap ki sb story mujhe bahut achi lagti hai shiv bhai apna pair kanha hai mujhe aap ke pair chuna hai

  6. Shiv bro don’t .mind
    ye story to real n lagti movie story lagri
    agar h to uske husband n hi mara us ladki k
    apne maa baap k to leni gaya apne ghar kamina kabhi ladki k samjha n kamina

  7. Ritesh bhai…
    m mind kabni nai krta apki bat ko..
    itni si bat h ki mujhe likhne se mtlb rhta h..
    koi jhut bataye to jhut,sach bataye to sach…
    jo jesa batata h m likh deta hu…
    itna jarur kahunga ki pta nai ye kahani sch h ya nai..mgr m likhte wqt apne ansu rok nai paya…
    or sayad ap pdhte wqt nai rok paye honge….
    pdhne ke liye shukriya sb ka…

  8. Shukriya ridhi ji…
    ap sb pdhte h or accha btate h to hi likhta hu…
    sach batau to ap sb se bat krne ka zariya h ye kahaniya..
    bs or kuch nai..
    kabhi jhuti lgti h kbhi sacchi lgti h…
    ap yakiin kre ki kuch log mujhe apni kahani batate h to mujhe lgta h mere se mjak kr rhe h..
    bt batane vale khte h ki sach h..
    to m jyada sochta nai or yaha likh deta hu,,taki ap fesla kr sko..

  9. shiv jiiii….mai apse puchna chahti hu ye apne real story likhi h …ya sirf mann ke ek kalpana….sach ye lgta ni …aur jhooth ise kh nhi skte …so i m confuse…..

  10. dil deta h ro ro duhai
    kisi se koi pyar na kre
    badi mahngi pdegi judai
    kisi se koi pyar na kre

    pyar na kro yrro…..pyar na kro

  11. “Koi rasta nahi dua ke siva koi sunta nahi khuda ke siva maine bhi zindgi ko karib se dekha hai mere dost muskil me koi saath nahi deta aansu ke siva.

  12. I am also very fine…yr net peck khtm ho gya tha….so Abhi WiFi se on kiya ..I so let for reply
    So sorry my Sweet friends..

  13. Sweet morning to all sweet friends..
    Sorry KL nind lg gi thi .me bhi bdiya hu Krishna ..bs Abhi exams finish huye he.
    Hii sohail salam valekum
    Kese he aap

  14. Bahroopiya.. achha
    kamina kahin ka. mazaak bna kr rakh diya kisi ki bhavnaon ka.
    or bechari Sharmili.. jo paati se umeeden thi usne puri na ki
    or jisne puri ki.. wo pati n hote huye b……… pati hi nikla
    Par jo b hai.. story bohat khoob thi. . I like it

  15. Very Nice Poem.

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