Bahroopiyaaa – Shiv Pandit

Raghvan chote se ganv se jarur tha mgr spne bahut bde the.
bachpn se hi hunar ka malik tha..
jati se bahroopiya tha..
roz naye naye roop me rhta..
jb roop bnata to phchana nai jata..
Kyuki apni kalaa me hoshiyar tha..
Apni scool ke hr natk me hissa leta or hr bar phla inam jiit jata..
yahi kalakaar bnne ka shoq use ek din mumbai le aya..
Bat tb ki h jb mumbai ka nam bomby hota tha..
dhire dhire bomby ke rng me ghul gya..
ganv bahut km jata..
ganv se ek din babuji ka kht aya..
likha tha ki jldi ganv aja..
raghvn pahuch gya..
ghr me aya to kuch log jmavda lga kr bethe the..
andr dekha to babu ji bimar halat me lmbi lmbi sanse le rhe the..
khne lge ki rghu beta ..ab wqt ka koi bhrosa nai h..kuch kam h jo krna
chahta hu..
rghu baba ki hr bat manta tha..
usne hr bat ke liye ha bhr di..
baba ne kaha kuch din yahi rh ja,teri shadi krni h..
rghu ne ha bhr li..
or pas ke ganv ki ldki se rghu ki shadi kra di gyi..
shadi ke bad baba mre nai blki thik ho gye..khte ki pote ke sath
khelkr mrunga…
Ganv me kafi din ho gye to rghu shr jane ko khne lga..
amma boli ki bahu ko bhi satn leja..
pr rbhu nahi lana chahta tha..
khta ki shrmili yahi thik h..
vaha esi anpdh kya kregi??
pr amma ne zid ki to rghu sath le aya..
shrmili relgadi me bethi khidki se bahr bhagte pedo ko dekhkr  muskura
rhi thi..mano alvida kh rhi ho..
Mn ke kisi kone me geet ga rhi thi..m to chli piya ji ke desh..ab to
bhaye prdesh……
mgr pure raste rghu jra bhi shrmili se nai bola..
Bomby aa gye dono..
shrmili ne jagti ankho se phli bar shr dekha to muh khula ka khula rh gya..
bechari ne kbhi spne me bhi itni bhid or gadiya nai dekhi..
ghr pahunche to bda sa ghr dekh kr sochne lgi ki isme kitne log rhte honge..??
Drvaza ramdas kholne aya..
rghu ne sara saman unko diya or kaha ki ye ghr me kam krte h..kuch
chahiye to inse mang lena..
mujhe kam h,jana h abhi..rat ko deri se aaunga..
itna khkr rghu unhi kdmo vaps chla gya..
shrmili ko yu rghu ka jana acha nai lga mgr boli nai..
fir yahi silsila shuru ho gya..rghu bahut km ata ghr me,ata bhi to
shrmili se nai bolta..
agr shrmili kuch puch bhi leti to rta rtaya jvab milta ki ramdas se
lelo jo chahiye..??
ab kon smjhaye ki shrmili ko kya chahiye..
Shrmili adhi adhi rat tk dhleez pr bethi raghu ka intzar krti..
rghu kabhi ata,kabhi nai ata..
or ata bhi to na ke brabr..kuch galiya or kucn tane mar kr muh fer ke so jata..
shrmili ko itni bhi izazt nai thi ki vo hath lgakr puch ske ki akhir
jurm kya h mera..??
shrmili jameen pe hi let jati or sari rat roti..jese ek sukhi bhn ke
gle lgkr dukhi bhn roti h..
mgr dukh kon dur kre..???
din to rukte nai..shrmili bs akeli sara sara din bethi rhti..
pdhna likha janti nai thi..
Shoq ke nam pe sitaar bjana tha..
mgr vo bhi pura sikh na pai.
shrmili ke baba sitaar bjate the..
unhi se sikha krti thi pr shadi ke bad mayke rhne nai diya..or baba
sikhane thodi ate..
adhura rh gya..
Pura din akeli bs roti…
kisi ko kosna bhi nai janti thi..kisko dosh de..itna gyan bhi nai tha
ki kami kya h..
rghu din b din or rukha hota gya..
Ek din bola ki kuch din ke liye bahar ja rha hu..kam se ..ek mahina lg jayega..
apne kpde dale or chla gya..
shrmili rh gyi akeli..khne ko ramdas tha mgr sirf nokr..
shrmili pura din akeli rhti..
Ek din sham ke wqt khidki ke pas bethi thi..achank kahi se sitaar ki
avaz kano me pahunch gyi..
kahi sitaar bz rha tha..
ab roz shrmili us wqt khidki ko khol ke beth jati..
sitaar roz usi wqt bzta or vadk ka geet sunai deta..
piya bin chen kaha re……
ye geet shrmili ke kleje ke tar jhnjhna deta..
ek din rha na gya or drvaze se bahar nikl gyi ..
sitaar ki avaz pas ke ghr se aati thi..
ghr ke andr gyi..dekha vadk betha sitaar bza rha h..
bde bde bal,bdi si munch..kurta dhoti phnne ko ….or kd kathi ka rghu
jesa hi…
shrmili ko dekh ruk gya..or bola..
are ap kon h..??
shrmili ne nam pta sb bta diya..or apna adhura snoq bhi..
vadk bola ki ye to accha h ..ap bjaye or m gaunga..
ab roz usi wqt mhfil jmne lgi..
ek dusre ki dil ki bate hui..or ek din vadk ne shrmili ka hath pkd liya..
shrmili chahkr bhi chura na paai..
or vadk ka hosla bdhta gya..
Vadk na shrmili ko apni baho me le liya..shrmili chtpta rhi thi..pr
niklne na pai..pta nai kyu???
or har gyi..
Khud ko sonp diya usko jo sitaar ke sath sath shrmili ke dil ke tar
bhi bjata tha..
kuch der bad hosh aya to nzr na utha ski..
pr vadk muskura rha tha..
shrmili ke muh ko hath lgakr uthaya or apne chehre ki munche nikal ke
shrmili ke hath me dedi..sr ke bal bhi de diye..or muskurane lga..
khne lga ki mujhe pta tha tum ho hi esi……m to azmaa rha tha..
shrmili ke panv tle zmeen nai rhi..
Nkli much or bal nikalne ke bad jo chehra samne aaya,vo rbhu ka tha..
bahroobiya..rghu….
shrmili doud aai vaha se..or bs roti roti sidhi rasoi me chli gyi..
andr se drvaza bnd kiya..
or ji bhrke roi..kismt ko,maa baba ko..pti dev ko..
or akhirt roke thm gyi or mn hi mn khne lgi ki jese sita mata ke liye
kabhi zmeen ft gyi thi,kash ese hi aaj ft jaye to zmeen me sma jau..
pr ab kaha zmeene ft ti h..
idhr udhr dekh kr vaha rkhi machish uthai or khud ko aag lga li..
Rghu bhi bhaga bhaga aya tha piche..
pr snrmili ne khud ko bnd kr liya tha tb tk..
Drvaza thok rha tha..shrmili ..drvaza khol…drvaza khol..???
pr kon khole..
rghu ki ptni…??jise rghu ne smjha hi nai kabhi..
To kon thi shrmili fir……
m smjh pata itne me ramdas aa gya..
bola …malik ganv se amma ji ka smachar aya h..apko or bahu rani ji
ko bulaya h..amma ji ne bola h ki phla savn mayke me hota h bahu
ka..to le ana bahu ko………..
laye ab kon..???????

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144 Comments

  1. Nikki

    …… ……. ……. Aisa kyu
    .
    Kya ye sachi mein huya…?
    Mera mtlb…story real hai… ??

    Reply
  2. Aashi

    very nice yr dil ko chhu gyi shiv bhaiya aap ka to koi jawab nhi manna padega aapko bahut achha likhte ho aap……

    Reply
  3. mamta

    sach me ek ldki ki jindgi hoti hi aise h sadi se pehle maa papa ki marji se jiti h or sadi k bd sasural wale or pati ki marji se apne ap ko to bo kho hi deti h jiske bharose apna sb kuch chod k gyi ho bo agr aisa kre to ky krti bichari

    Reply
  4. Kishan Sharma

    Hello friends…
    Good morning all.

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  5. Raj

    Realy nice story, heart touching.

    Reply
  6. mamta

    hi krishna g

    Reply
  7. Kishan Sharma

    Hello ji

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  8. mamta

    kese ho or ky kr rhe the

    Reply
  9. Kishan Sharma

    Me thik hu…
    Aap kaise ho….
    Or kya kar rhe ho…
    Me kuchh bhi nhi kar rha.
    Baitha hu office pe

    Reply
  10. mamta

    me thik hu me v bore ho rhi thi

    Reply
  11. Kishan Sharma

    Aap apni id check nhi karte kya…
    Mene dekha h aapki id pe bahut si requests pending padi h..

    Reply
  12. mamta

    are mujhe to yhnkuch smjh hi nhi arha g me ky kru kvi cmmnt jati h kvi cmmnt box click hi nhi hoti mera to smjh me hi nhi arha

    Reply
  13. Kishan Sharma

    Log in karke check kro

    Reply
  14. mamta

    hmm g login kr chuki hu or apke msg v dekhi thi rply v dene ki kosis ki thi lekin nhi hua error dikhaya

    Reply
  15. Kishan Sharma

    Ok…

    Reply
  16. mamta

    login kiye the g or apke msg v dekhe or rply dene ki kosis v kithi lekin nhi gya error dikhaya

    Reply
  17. mamta

    or boliye

    Reply
  18. Kishan Sharma

    Bas thik h sab

    Reply
  19. mamta

    ap ki story h yhn?

    Reply
  20. Kishan Sharma

    Ji ha…
    Meri story h
    VIJAY KI MAHIII

    Reply
  21. vinod

    kya mai aap sb se friend ship kar sakta hu

    Reply
  22. Kishan Sharma

    Or aapki h kya

    Reply
  23. Arshisheikh2

    Really heart touching story

    Reply
  24. mamta

    ji nhi meri to nhi h or ap mujhe ek madad kro thoda ye btado inbox me msg kese send kru nhi ho rha

    Reply
  25. Kishan Sharma

    Aap apni id log in karo fir apni friend list me jisko sms bhejna h uspe click kro..
    Fir option aayenge.
    Pablic msg private msg..
    Private msg pe jakar sms bhej sakte ho….
    Ya fir coment me se jisko bhejna h uske name pe click kar aise bhej sakte ho…

    Reply
  26. mamta

    thanx g me try krti hu

    Reply
  27. Kishan Sharma

    Or ha agr kisika msg aaya ho use reply d3na ho to.
    Apne inbox me jao..
    Jisko msg bhejna ho.
    Pahle uska name aata h….
    From: xyz fir. RE: hello.. hi. Kuchh bhi.
    To aap RE: pe click kro fir.. reply box me jakar rwply de sakte ho ok…

    Reply
  28. mamta

    hmm thanx

    Reply
  29. vinod

    shiv bhai ye sb story kanha pate hai aap aap ki sb story mujhe bahut achi lagti hai shiv bhai apna pair kanha hai mujhe aap ke pair chuna hai

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  30. Kishan Sharma

    Ok.
    Welcome

    Reply
  31. Ritesh

    Shiv bro don’t .mind
    ye story to real n lagti movie story lagri
    agar h to uske husband n hi mara us ladki k
    apne maa baap k to leni gaya apne ghar kamina kabhi ladki k samjha n kamina

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  32. Shiv

    Ritesh bhai…
    m mind kabni nai krta apki bat ko..
    itni si bat h ki mujhe likhne se mtlb rhta h..
    koi jhut bataye to jhut,sach bataye to sach…
    jo jesa batata h m likh deta hu…
    itna jarur kahunga ki pta nai ye kahani sch h ya nai..mgr m likhte wqt apne ansu rok nai paya…
    or sayad ap pdhte wqt nai rok paye honge….
    pdhne ke liye shukriya sb ka…

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  33. Ritesh

    Aasu aage kiske mere ha ha ha ha ha

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  34. Shiv

    To hnsi aai hogi ritesh bhai…
    hahahha…kuch to aya

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  35. Riddhi

    shiv j mujhe aapki love story bht achi
    lagti h

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  36. Riddhi

    Shiv j mene aaj FTime comment kiya ek love
    story pe.
    me 6mon s love story phad rahi hu yaha pe.

    Reply
  37. Ritesh

    Ye to h shiv bro

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  38. Shiv

    Shukriya ridhi ji…
    ap sb pdhte h or accha btate h to hi likhta hu…
    sach batau to ap sb se bat krne ka zariya h ye kahaniya..
    bs or kuch nai..
    kabhi jhuti lgti h kbhi sacchi lgti h…
    ap yakiin kre ki kuch log mujhe apni kahani batate h to mujhe lgta h mere se mjak kr rhe h..
    bt batane vale khte h ki sach h..
    to m jyada sochta nai or yaha likh deta hu,,taki ap fesla kr sko..

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  39. muskan sharma

    shiv jiiii….mai apse puchna chahti hu ye apne real story likhi h …ya sirf mann ke ek kalpana….sach ye lgta ni …aur jhooth ise kh nhi skte …so i m confuse…..

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  40. Riddhi

    ok shiv j
    thik krte ho ap

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  41. Ritesh

    Hello Ridhi ji

    Reply
  42. Riddhi

    Hello Ritesh j
    ap kha s hai

    Reply
  43. Ritesh

    Me Delhi se hu aur tum

    Reply
  44. Ritesh

    aur tum kon si class m ho

    Reply
  45. Riddhi

    m bhi Delhi se hi hu
    and m 11th m hu
    ap ki class ksi h

    Reply
  46. Ritesh

    me is shaal admission n liya 12th paas ki h bas

    Reply
  47. Riddhi

    kyu n liya admsn ritesh j

    Reply
  48. Ritesh

    bas vese h n liya

    Reply
  49. anup sahani

    Story sacchi ho ya jhuti aap feel kr ke likhate hai sive ji

    Reply
  50. Rachit

    Hiiii Ritesh

    Reply
  51. Ritesh

    Hello rachit kaha the itne dino se yar

    Reply
  52. Riddhi

    Hi.. Rachit

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  53. Rachit

    kuch nhi…yr bas toda busy tha….

    Reply
  54. anup sahani

    My story MERI NIDHI is cumingsoon

    Reply
  55. Rachit

    Hiii Riddhi

    Reply
  56. Ritesh

    ok bro
    and by me k kam h

    Reply
  57. Rachit

    ok by ritesh ….
    kya aap new ho riddhi is site pe…..

    Reply
  58. Riddhi

    Bye
    Nhi Rachit j me yaha 6 month se hu

    Reply
  59. Rachit

    Riddhi kya aap ki yaha koi Story….. hai..

    Reply
  60. Riddhi

    Nhi Rachit j meri nhi h yaha koi Love story

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  61. Rachit

    okkkkkkk riddhi

    Reply
  62. Riddhi

    ap ksi class me hai Rachit j

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  63. Rachit

    me 11th class me hu aur aap bhi shayad…… riddhi 11th me…..hi hai…

    Reply
  64. Rachit

    kya aapke….SA-1 again ho rahe hai Riddhi

    Reply
  65. Riddhi

    apka means sa-1 exams hai na Rachit
    Ha ho rahe h

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  66. Riddhi

    Rachit j apka name bht bhadiya h

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  67. Rachit

    okkmm….

    Reply
  68. Rachit

    ni Riddhi….apka naam bht aacha hai…..
    sach me mujhse jada

    Reply
  69. Riddhi

    nhi Rachit j

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  70. Rachit

    Me sach bol raha hu Riddhi

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  71. Riddhi

    ok…but wo kyu apko aacha laga mera name

    Reply
  72. Rachit

    bhadiya…..is liye to me bar bar likh….
    raha hu riddhi

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  73. Riddhi

    ohooo rachit j apko itna bdiya laga mera name

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  74. Rachit

    okkkkk by…riddhi mujhe kahin…
    jana hai bye…..

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  75. Riddhi

    kya ap night me hoge rachit j yha

    Reply
  76. Rachit

    Ha bhoot aacha laga….naam apka riddhi
    shayad ha raat me….

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  77. Riddhi

    ok byeeeee rachit j

    Reply
  78. Stranger

    dil deta h ro ro duhai
    kisi se koi pyar na kre
    badi mahngi pdegi judai
    kisi se koi pyar na kre

    pyar na kro yrro…..pyar na kro

    Reply
  79. Riddhi

    Rachit j where r you ap kyu nhi aaye abhi tak
    a long time. i waiting for you

    Reply
  80. nisha

    Hello

    Reply
  81. nisha

    Are shiv ji kha ho yar aaj to time nhi de pai
    Apko sorry babu

    Reply
  82. nisha

    Ok ji gud nite

    Reply
  83. Samara

    Really a heart touching story….

    Reply
  84. Raj

    Really Nice :))

    Reply
  85. anujkumar

    “Koi rasta nahi dua ke siva koi sunta nahi khuda ke siva maine bhi zindgi ko karib se dekha hai mere dost muskil me koi saath nahi deta aansu ke siva.

    Reply
  86. khushi

    Hii nisha Krishna rachit and all r my sweet friends ..kese he aap sb

    Reply
  87. nisha

    We r gud khushi ji and how r you

    Reply
  88. Rachit

    Hiiii khushi

    Reply
  89. Riddhi

    Ohoo rachit j ap yaha is love story p hai

    Reply
  90. Rachit

    Riddhi…..aapki Family me kon kon hai……

    Reply
  91. Riddhi

    mee..and my sister and my bro…. and mummy papa’
    aur apki

    Reply
  92. Rachit

    meri family me
    me aur mera brother…
    and my sister….aur Mom,n Dad
    Aap sab se badi ho kya Riddhi

    Reply
  93. Riddhi

    nhi me sabse chti hu

    Reply
  94. Rachit

    okkk…riddhi

    Reply
  95. Riddhi

    aur ap

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  96. Riddhi

    rachit j apke bro and sister kya krte hai

    Reply
  97. Rachit

    brother wo B.Tech
    aur sister wo m.com aur unki shadi ho gayi abhi sister ki Riddhi

    Reply
  98. Rachit

    Aacha aap riddhi ye ji bolna band karo okkkkk….

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  99. Riddhi

    ok Rachit n bolne ki ok.
    abhi mujhe market jna hai mummy ke shaat so byyyyy

    Reply
  100. Rachit

    okkk by Riddhi

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  101. Riddhi

    Rachit are you busy
    me apka wait rhi hu ok kbhi bi ajna

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  102. Rachit

    Hiii Riddhi…..

    Reply
  103. Riddhi

    kya kar rahe ho

    Reply
  104. Rachit

    me
    me kuch bhi ni kar raha….
    leta hua hu roof pe….

    Reply
  105. Riddhi

    itni thand me roof pe aaj to bht thand hori hai….
    Bcuz January hai

    Reply
  106. Rachit

    Mujhe aaj thand hi nhi lagri Riddhi

    Reply
  107. Riddhi

    kyu kya hua breakup ho gya kya

    Reply
  108. Rachit

    Ha esha hi kuch Riddhi…..

    Reply
  109. Riddhi

    meto eshe hi bol rahi thi sach me ho gya kya

    Reply
  110. Rachit

    ni hua yr Riddhi….

    Reply
  111. Riddhi

    ohhhhhh

    Reply
  112. Riddhi

    To kya hua apko

    Reply
  113. Rachit

    kuch personal baate yaha sabke samne share….ni kar sakta me…Riddhi

    Reply
  114. Riddhi

    Ok no prblm rachit

    Reply
  115. Riddhi

    kya hua rachit kha gaye ap

    Reply
  116. aftab

    hello every body kaise ho aap sb

    Reply
  117. Rachit

    Sorry Riddhi mujhe kahin jana tha…..

    Reply
  118. Riddhi

    its ok… Rachit

    Reply
  119. Riddhi

    Rachit apko kal school jana hai

    Reply
  120. Rachit

    Ha lekin aap kyu puch rahi ho

    Reply
  121. Riddhi

    eshe hi rachit

    Reply
  122. Rachit

    Riddhi aapko kya aacha lagta hai …..
    time spend…..
    karne…..me

    Reply
  123. Riddhi

    Love Story phad na aur holywood movies dekh na

    Reply
  124. Riddhi

    aur apse baat krna

    Reply
  125. Rachit

    Riddhi kya aapne LOVE YOU YOU…. dekhi hai
    Wo meri fav movie hai……

    Reply
  126. Riddhi

    mene dekhi hai wo bht sad and romantic movie hai mujhe bhi wo bht psand hai apke aur me likes kitne milte hai

    Reply
  127. Sohail Ashraf

    hiii dosto..
    koi h kya yahan..??

    Reply
  128. khushi

    I am also very fine…yr net peck khtm ho gya tha….so Abhi WiFi se on kiya ..I so let for reply
    So sorry my Sweet friends..

    Reply
  129. Kishan Sharma

    Hello friends

    Reply
  130. khushi

    Hii Krishna kese ho

    Reply
  131. Kishan Sharma

    Ji me achha hu
    Aap kaise ho

    Reply
  132. Sohail Ashraf

    hiiii khushi ji n Krishna..

    Reply
  133. Kishan Sharma

    Hii sohail ji

    Reply
  134. Sohail Ashraf

    kaise hi bhai Krishna..??
    n kya ho rha h aajkal..??

    Reply
  135. Kishan Sharma

    Good morning friendssssssssss

    Reply
  136. khushi

    Sweet morning to all sweet friends..
    Sorry KL nind lg gi thi .me bhi bdiya hu Krishna ..bs Abhi exams finish huye he.
    Hii sohail salam valekum
    Kese he aap

    Reply
  137. Riddhi

    Good morning Fnds…

    Reply
  138. Jitu

    Bahroopiya.. achha
    kamina kahin ka. mazaak bna kr rakh diya kisi ki bhavnaon ka.
    or bechari Sharmili.. jo paati se umeeden thi usne puri na ki
    or jisne puri ki.. wo pati n hote huye b……… pati hi nikla
    Par jo b hai.. story bohat khoob thi. . I like it

    Reply
  139. Abhishek Kumar

    yar easa nhi hona cchhiya tha jo bhi houa bahout bura houa

    Reply
  140. heena

    nice story

    Reply
  141. Sameersammy912

    Hello guys!
    kese ho sb log?

    Reply
    1. T.khan

      Welcome welcome Sammy Bhai Assalamu aalaikum kaise ho bade din baad Aaye site per ap sub khairiyat hai na

      Reply
  142. Prince

    Very Nice Poem.

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  143. Raghu hhl

    Hiii

    Reply

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