Love at first sight

Adhuri kahaani – Abhi

Mera naam ABHI hai aur ye meri pahle aur aakhri pyar ki story hai mai tab 12 me padhta tha  aur vo bhi aaj mera pahla din tha mai class me pahucha aur mere ek dost ne chilla kar kaha ki mera chain khula hai mai niche dekhne laga vo bola ki bag ka aur saari class hasne lagi lekin vo muskurara rahi maine uski taraf dekha to vo chup ho gayi aur aise hi chalta raha.

Ek din wo school nahi aayi mera achool me man nahi lag raha tha doosre din vo aayi aur mujhse boli ki apni english ki copy use de doon to maine kaha ki intervel ke baad le lena fir maine copy ki index wale page par I LOVE YOU  PARI  likh diya aur de diya vo aur mai ek hi coaching centre me padhte the doosre din vo coaching me meri copy vapas kiya aur ghar jane lagi to maine dosto ke kahne par ye dekhne ke liye aawaj lagayi ki vo bhi mujhe like karti hai ki nahi aur vo jaise hi mudi.

Uski cycle ka handle ghoom gaya aur saamne se aarahe truck ne use raund diya aur hospital bhi le jane ka waqt nahi mil paya aur vo mar gayi mai kai dino tak school nahi gaya aur ek din maine vahi english ki copy kholi to uame likha tha ki I LOVE YOU TOO  lekin abhi kuch nahi ho sakta padhai poori kar le hum dono hume job mil jaye fir saadi karenge aaj mai apni padhai poori karke english ka teacher bhi ban gaya but vo nahi aa rahi please bhagwan use bhej do chahe meri life le lo I LOVE YOU PARI

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209 thoughts on “Adhuri kahaani – Abhi”

  1. Agar aaye story sach hai toh i felt really bad after reading it…. mai nai aaye sentence islaiye use kiye ” agar aaye story sach hai toh” because i felt it….. please don’t feel bad because jis mai bitai wo hi janai … hum jaisai 100 aaye gaye aur 100 ja aaye gaye…. Actually story my feel nai hi thai… as ur english teacher .. u must be dam good in expressing the feeling.. By the way.. coming back.. please use yaad karkai sad mat ho.. sirf wo achai moments yaad karo jo tumnai uskai saat dekhai hai… is duniya my kohi permanent nahi hai aaj wo toh kal hamai jana hai is dunyaa sai… but jab tak hoo wo pyar ki khushboo spread kartai rahana kyun ki pyar karnai walai maar ta hai pyar nahi…. So.. wo pal yaad karo aur muskuraoo .. it gives different feeling…

    1. Kya karu hu to mai english ka teacher but uske bad kuch nahi bacha Now i want to die………….Guys who want to join my whats app group please send me a message on my whatsapp 7703009518………..ABHI AMIT PARI

  2. Wonderful Love Story.

    Hey there! It’s me, Prince here. I feel myself so lonely because, I don’t have any friends. If Any Boy or Girl, Who needs A Good & Faithful Friend and Would like to Friendship with me? So, Please WhatsApp/Message me on 9199007192 (Add +91 if dialing from outside of India). Only Serious Persons are allowed, Arrogant People & Time-Passers Stay Away.

  3. Nav Yll Aajao plzz sab Kyu jaa rhe hai mese dur aisa kya kr diya Maine ki sab ek ek krke chle jaa rhe hai ????????????????????

  4. wah Maine apko yaad nhi kiya
    jar se puchhna ki Maine yad kiya ki nhi apko

    ap to balki hum sab ko bhul gayi ho
    busy raho clg me new frnds ke sath
    hum kaun hote h
    hai na brs ji

    Jana jaruri thi par kyu?????
    Maine kab se wait kiya h apka ki aap aaj augi site me
    par aaye nhi ap
    kyu bolo??????
    time hi nhi tha na apke humare liye

    hiiiiii simran Kaise ho ap

    sorry sis possible bhi nhi

  5. Chnchal aap sad mat ho mai door nahi ja rahi bs whatsaap chodna majburi thi. Ab kya batau…. Bata bhi nhi sakti. Ab hum yaha mila krege.. ????????. Mai msg chod ke bhi ayi thi site pr milege..

  6. Mai kisi ko nahi bhuli sss ji..
    Daily site open karti hu.. clg frnd hai eska mtlb yeh nahi aap sab ko bhul jaugi.. sry yaaro???? ..

    Good mrng frnds. ….

  7. Good morning guysss
    Good morning nav di..
    Ye aapne achha ni kiya hm sbse dur jaake ainviii whtspp chhor ke…
    Kattiee hu main aapse????????

  8. Daadi aisw krti h kya apne bacche bahu ko chhor ke jaati h kya kbi or reasons prblms ka kya h wo kbi na khatm hone wali h na hi kam hone wali h… Life h sb chalta hi rhega… Bt aapne toh????????

  9. yllll simmi aisa kuch bhi nhi h
    hum apko nhi bhule h

    aisi kaun hi bat h Jo ap bta bhi nhi skte
    bas itni hi dosti thi humari
    ki ap
    kuch share na kar sako BRS ji

    bhul to gyi ho ap

  10. Esa nahi hai bacha… Reason BHutt bada tha.. future par depend tha yehi soch lo.. mai yaha daily aya krugi.. aap sab ko kaha tha yaha aya krugi lekin aap nhi aye????..
    Honey sis , jar , Alisha , akash in sab ko bhi yaha lao na

  11. Sona di

    Rohan

    Nasreen

    Videta

    Ali

    Shona

    Zoya

    Aisha

    Ayeshu

    Pathan

    Sakshi

    Riya

    Hina

    Anjum

    Naina

    Chanchal

    Surander ji

    Raghu

    Pihu

    Sabko miss you …….

  12. Nahi sis bura nahi lga.
    Bas zra taqlif huvi
    K maine kaha mujhe WhatsApp me add karoge kya toh reply nhi aara tha
    .
    Khier apni apni marzi

  13. Acha upar jo likha hai usme
    Nhi phir usme toh nhi hai
    Hehe

    Qk jis insan mujhe kaha hai yani hamare kaabil dost ne wo bhi sikh pariwar se hai…
    Or ye baat mujhe aajkal nahi 7 mahine pehle hi kaha tha .

    Ab yaad karo heh

    1. Sikh family da insaan site te menu tah koi nahi milya.. wese kadi kadi koi mere nal punjabi vich gal kar lende ne..
      Sakina sis tusi khud hi das dao kon hai ..

  14. Aap bhi jaanti ho navu sis
    Unka naam rohan singh hai.
    Aap ki kabhi unse baat hoti thi
    Yaad aaya. Tab main new thi yahape
    Phir wahase wo U.S.A
    Chalegaye the phir site pe kuch gandgi chalrhi thi. Badme aama band kardiya maine b bs WhatsApp par hum the tab usne apke bareme btya tha.

    Ab yaad aaya apko sis

    1. Ha sakina sis..
      Site mai ab kam log ate hai. Maa behn ko nhi chodte.????..
      Pta nahi mai v kab tak yaha ayugi jab fr se log bakwas karni start kr dege fr se chali jaugi..

  15. Sona di meri lubb u sis
    Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really

    Miss u

  16. Main Bangalore se hu
    Padhai karti hun
    Umr 17+
    Rang gora
    Do sis ek bhai.
    Zada ameer nhi hehe
    Software kar rahi hu
    Pink, green pasand
    Jeans Punjabi pasand.

    Varun dhavan .
    Aiza mam

  17. van
    aagye aap
    I hate you nhi krni baat aapse gande ho aap bhot gande ho

    msg send krke gyb ho gye
    miss v nhi kiya

    aabhi aya to Dekha hu u k cmt

  18. Jar.. aap bhi nahi aye…
    Mene apse kaha tha na chali jaugi lekin sachii mai nhi pta tha ki jldi chali jaugi..
    Chalo yaha aa gye..
    Jar bacha ???? mere se nafrat ki toh ???????? maar dugi

    1. Hello jaan kaisi ho…kaha ho….I knw ki kuch tho prblm hoga isliye whatsaap band kiya aapne…but jaan I miss you so so much…????????????????????

        1. Hm thik hai aap kaisI ho…koi prblm tho nahi huyi na be careful jaan…roz clg ja rahi ho na…aur ha time se khana kha rahi ho na…

          1. Ha swthrt.. mai thik hu.. aap kesi ho.. ap batao khana wana tym se le rahi ho na..
            Or ghar mai sab kese hai

  19. haa Tusi bhot fast ho naa Bachhu siii

    main aaj hi site pr aya tha navu
    haa Apne btya to tha Fr chle v gye mujhe lga aogi nhi aye aap

    Fr apne likha tha site pr aungi to ye dhyan krke Aagya main yha

    Mukka to apko padega wo v Jor se Mtlb fek dunga

  20. Kisine mujhe jawab nahi diya k mujhe b WhatsApp par add kroge ya nhi.

    Anjum sis ek dafa apko maine rohan ne kaha tha k aap WhatsApp use karti ho kya toh kaha tha haan karti hun par dusronka hai lekin yahanke kisi logono add nahi karsakti main

    Ab dekho aap sab ke sath add ho.
    Galth haina didu

    1. Sis ese mat bolo na.. jab kisi frnds se attachment zyada ho jaye woh khud b khud whatsaap par aane ke liye bolege .. abi ke liye yaha frnds ache hai na…

      1. Navu sis aap se pehle hum anjum sis k dost hain
        Bohat achese rehte the lekin hume kya pata log ke dil me kya hota hai. Hum antaryami ya ruhani taqat wale toh nahi haina sis.

        Khier chhodo

  21. Sona

    Shona

    Sakshi

    Ayeshu

    Aisha

    Rita

    Riya

    Pathan

    Naina

    Chanchal

    Maahi

    Noor

    Vedita

    Nasreen

    Suhana

    Jiya

    Nisha

    Kavita

    Rohan

    Ali

    Amit

    Sumit

    Gaurav

    Alone

    Raghu

    Surander ji

    Sabhko miss you…..

      1. Prince charming ????

        Mr bheek maangnese num

        milajata hai kya ??

        Agar milta hoga toh tum dete

        honge haina apni families ka

        number….????????????

        Mind words agar dobara yahape .!

        Kisiko b pagal wagal kaha toh..!????????????????????

  22. Prince charming ????

    Sakku please anjum naam mat lo yl….!

    Unki marzi hai agar wOh terese

    Nahi baat klna chahti tOh q

    Force karti hai tu……???????

    Dikhta nahi kya tujhe…..!????

    Itne saare msgs me usne tujhe ek v reply diya hai kya ??

    Dekh dear hum kisi galepe chaku rakkar…!

    Usse pyar jata nahi sakte oteh!

    Unke haal pe unkO choro…!

    DOst ki kya kami hai is dunia me…!

    Asmaan me itne SITARE hain…!

    Ek dO kam hOgaye toh kya….!

    Asmaan apni chamak dena ya…!

    Usko kisi cheez ki kami parti hau.!!

    Nahi naah……!!!

    TOh chOr yaaal

    Tujhe itna girne ki koi zarurat nahi hai…!

    Hum haina sab…!

    Choro unko jeenedo azaad hain wo yl

    Ek din khuda ki rehmat barsakegi tab khud ko malaal hoga…!

    Bye ……

  23. Hmmmmm chhoti …. Chhor na kyu ese logo ko bolti h whtssp pe add karne ke liye jo tujhe ignor kar rahe h

    Gar tune aaj ke baad kisi ko bhi ese bola na thappad lgega 1tujhe …

    Tere paas dosto ki kami hai kya ..kyu jabardasti dusro ke gale padri…… idiot

    Sun tere paas na teri didu or tera dost hmesha rahenge
    So baby ese logo ko fr kbhi bt karne liye nai bolna

    Smjh me aaya tumhre

  24. Or mere prince charming ki baato ko achhe se gaanth bandh lena ..samjhi

    Wese b mera baby jo v bolta haina ek damm correct bolta h

  25. Im sorry rohan zoya
    Ok main nahi kahungi
    Maine socha k ye sab log apas baat karte hain jaise hum log
    Bhi fb WhatsApp pe toh kyun na
    M bhi add hojaun
    Lekin mujhe nhi pta shayad meri hi
    Glthi hai

  26. Sona

    Shona

    Sakshi

    Ayeshu

    Aisha

    Rita

    Riya

    Pathan

    Naina

    Chanchal

    Maahi

    Noor

    Vedita

    Nasreen

    Suhana

    Jiya

    Nisha

    Kavita

    Rohan

    Ali

    Amit

    Sumit

    Gaurav

    Alone

    Raghu

    Navpreet

    Surander ji

    Sabhko miss you…

  27. navu…. me apko nae bhula me yaha kabhi kabhi aata tha but yaha pe aap log nahi dikhae dete the.. to chala jata tha…. me bahot achha hu…. aur me bus life me thoda bahot busy ho gaya hu.. aap batao

  28. Me v yahi hu simmmi

    Hi chhoti

    Im so sory sona di mene aaj apko msgs ni kiye kal pakka krungi…

    Kaan pakad ke really really sorry

  29. Sona

    Shona

    Sakshi

    Ayeshu

    Aisha

    Rita

    Riya

    Pathan

    Naina

    Chanchal

    Maahi

    Noor

    Vedita

    Nasreen

    Suhana

    Jiya

    Nisha

    Kavita

    Rohan

    Ali

    Amit

    Sumit

    Gaurav

    Alone

    Raghu

    Surander ji

    Sabhko miss you…..

    1. Hi skina hum apko jante toh nhi or nhi is sit ke bare me kuch jante he but stories pdte h 1 2 din pehle hee comment kiya h kuch stories pr humne ap logo ki Chet pdi toh bs Mn kiya bt kre but vese ye sit 100% safe toh h n or ap Humse bt krengi kya agr ap comment Pde toh reply jrur kijiyega

  30. jao yalll aap jao Mumbai HI jao
    (¬_¬)

    Punjabi hoke v canda nhi jana Huhhhhh
    Mukka hi khao aap bas or kuch nhi ╭∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╮

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