achhe din kab ayenge

Acche din kb ayenge – Shiv Pandit

achhe din kab ayenge

@read..feel..and dont like that….@
U.p. Ke ek ganv se madhv ka fon aya ki apse kahani likhvani h..bdle me
kuch mangoge to bhi de dunga..
mene kaha bhai lena kuch ni tumse,bs kimt na lgao meri kahani ki..
to madhv bola ki ye isliye kaha ki mujhe mere dost ki kahani batani
h..ap likho shiv..
mene kaha ki kya jrurt h ..ek kam karo tum khud hi khdo..m ht jata hu
bich me se…tum apni kahani ke sath mil lo sb se…….
to madhv se suno uske dost ki kahani…….
mera nam madhv h or mera dost navin…
hm tb se sath h jb hm sidhe per ki chppl ulte per me phn lete the..
Bachpn sath bita…or javani aai..
ye kmbkht javani bhi kya chiz h..jitni smbhalo utna hi fislne ka dr rhta h..
navin ko ganv ki ek ldki se pyar ho gya..
aarti nam ki ldki…
aarti bhi nvin se pyar krti thi..
kyuki nvin hsmukh lhze ka ldka tha..koi chahkr bhi nivn se door na rh pata..
aarti mujhe bhaiya khti thi..
kitni hi bar mene un dono ke kht idhr udhr diye..
m bahut khus tha.or mujhe un dono ko sath dekhkr bdi khushi hoti..
dono sacchi muhbbt krte the ek dusre se..
mgr acche din ayenge..??
ye dhol pitne se acche din nai ate..
acche din tb ate h jb hmare khyal acche ho..
mgr muhbbt to sirf khule khyalo ke log hi smjh skte h..
m nvin se bahut khta ki abhi zmana itna age nai gya h ki vo teri
muhbbt smjh ske..
hmare ghr,smaj me itni roshni abhi nai hui…
mgr muhbbt kaha sunti h..
m jb un dono ko drata ki tum dono kbhi ek dusre ke nai ho paoge..
to dono ek dusre ki trf dekhkr muskura dete…
Yu lgta jese meri esi bato se unke kan pr juu tk nai rengti…??
Spne bahut suhane or hkikt utni hi dravni..
Nvin or aarti dono ek jaat se nai the..
uspr se dono ke maa bap ke khyal bhi purani rivaazo ke lekr chl rhe the..
Nvin ki shadi tay ho gayi..
aarti ke sath nai…kisi or ke sath..
Kyuki jindgi hmari hoti h or fesle koi or krta h..
apne feslo ko janbujh ke thopne ko pyar khkr hmse apni naak unchi
rkhvate h ye hme jindgi dene vale..
nvin bs hr wqt aarti aarti krta.
Mere pas bethkr uski bate krta or rone lg jata…
m kya krta..??kya use ye khta ki use bhga leja???ya ye ki bhulja use…
bs m khta ki koi ni yar apni wife ke sath khush rhna..
Vo meri trf dekhkr khta ki ab muhbbt nai hogi yar kisi se…
jese jese din bite nvin ka gm bdhta gya..
or ek din mujhse milne aaya..bola ki aj tere gle lgne ka dil kr rha
h..m bola aja yar..
uski ankhe nm thi..
pr m smjh na ska..
vo bola shr ja rha hu..tere liye kuch lau ..
mene kaha ki mere fon me balance krva dena..
Le 50 rupye leja..
mgr usne pese nai liye…bola ki ye recharz meri trf se..
bdle me meri shadi me khoob nachna tu…….
or nvin chla gya..
Shr se vaps aya to ultiyaan krne lga..
uske bapu use lekr vaps shr gye..
piche se m bhi gya..
Vo asptal me tha..doctr se pata chla ki zhr khaya h nvin ne..
m uske pas betha to mujhe dekh kr rone lga..
aarti aarti krne lga..
or khne lga ki tera balance aa gya na..
m bol na paya ,,bs ansu nikl aye..
mgr nvin ki sanso ka balance khtm ho chuka tha..
jo ab recharz nai ho skta tha..
uski lash ko le jane ki teyyri hone lgi..
nvin ke ma bap sb ro rhe the..
mujhe gussa aagya..
sala muhbbt ke liye dosti tod gya..
dgabaz….
sham ko ganv gya to aarti ke ghr jane ka socha..
socha ki use dilasa de aau..
mgr jb gya to dekha unke ghr ke bahar jeep khdi thi..or kuch log
iktthe ho rhe the..
mazra smjh pata usse phle hi aarti ka bap use god me uthakr jeep me
dal rha tha..
usne bhi zhr kha liya tha..
Sb ro rhe the..aarti ko asptal le jana chahte the,,mgr aarti to apne
nvin ke pas chli gayi..
or upr badlo me bethkr dono hm sbko rote huye dekhkr mano yu kh rhe ho
ki ab kya kr loge tum,???
m sochne lga ki muhbbt nai krni chahiye kisi ko..
kyuki ye jan le leti h..or jaan h to jahan h…
ye kahani mene isliye sunai h ki muhbbt log ganv me bhi krte h or jaan
shr me bhi dete h..
koi esi muhbbt na kare ki uski sza oro ko mile..
bs ab nvin ke ghr kbi nai jata m..
yehi sochte sochte apne ghr ki or chl pda..
raste me ek jeep mili,,jisme kuch log naare lga rhe the…
acche din ane wale h…
Itne me madhv ka fon kt gya…ya usne kat diya malum nai..
m apni klm lekr beth gya or kavita se bola ki ek kahani likh lu,tb tk
tum chay bna do..aj hm sath me chay piyenge?????????

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78 thoughts on “Acche din kb ayenge – Shiv Pandit”

  1. yr ye mohabbat hai kya cheez….. ?
    kyu itna dukh chhupa bitha hai isme k jo b ise apnata hai wo iske ander baithe dukh ko nhi dekh pata
    So sad yr….

  2. aap sab ye to bolte ho pyaar rulata hai
    aur jo khusi deta hai jab koi wajhe na ho
    jine ki to kya kaam aata hai pyaar…..
    jab kuch intrusting na lage life me to love
    aur jab pain hota hai……jab bhi love medicine ka kaam karta hai…… aap sab pyaar ko gaali dete ho….kamino……pyaar ki ijat karna shikho……..

  3. Mohabbat chhez hi aisi h.. apne pyar k bina jindagi jina bahot muskil hota h .. n mere pyar k naam bhi arati h.. bt she is nt wid me
    Ye stry padh kr uski yaad aa gayi 🙁

  4. Dosto Ye Blog Vakai Me Kamal Hai. Yaha Sabhi Log Acche Dil Wale Lagate Hai. Me Bhi 1 Sacchi Saathi Ki Talash Me Hu. Me 12th Me Padhta Hu. Mujhe Sacchi Or Acchi Ladaki Ki Talash H. Agar Aap Jante Ho To Pls Cotact Meri Sacchi Dost… 9783407345

  5. Agar ma baap ko pyar samaj aya toh…
    Achi bat hai varna…..
    Pyar kerna hai to phele pyar ki kimat maa or baap ko samjana padega

  6. Bahut hi sad story hai..Pyar ka anjaam aisa hi kyu hota hai ??
    but unhe marna nahi chahiye tha , maut kisi bhi problem ka solution nahi hai….

  7. Pyaar to jindgi jine ka naam h….marne ka niii
    ….
    pyaar krna asaan but jinda rahkr
    pyaar krna. bahut kathin agr apka pyaar na mile aur pyar krna zindgi bhar ye aur kathin h but yahi TRUE love h….

  8. Gd mrng…
    ek mithi gzl se din ki shuruaat kare???
    koi khde zra zmane se
    isq chupta ni chupane se
    chand si sql fir dikha jao
    tumko dekha ni zmane se
    apka ghr h aaya jaya kro
    pyar bdhta h aane jane se
    h ye ‘hsrt’ ki aakhiri hsrt
    milne aao kisi bahane se………..

  9. Shiv apki story pdke akh me asu agae very sad story yar pyar k liy unlog ne apni Jan dedi bht bde dilwale the shyd wo log, maine ajtk real me esa hote hue kbhi nhi dekha

  10. Kabhi kabhi do pyar Karne walo me se ek mout se buch jata he to uski baki bachi hui zindagi kesi hoti he kabhi socha he kisine, shayad wo pal pal zindagi ko marte hue jeeta hoga

  11. sach me shiv ji apne to rula diya its verry sad kash unke parents unki feelings samjh pate to aj wo dono sath hote……….

  12. Gd mrng sariya nu….
    Ik gl dssa m tvanu sariya nu???
    ik duje de nam de piche ji likhna bnd kr do…
    oy na mitraa de nam agge ji lgda h na piche..
    baki jedi twadi mrzi….

  13. aye haye kya baat hai Shiv… badi vadhiya punjabi bolde o tusi te
    khair main tan kadi ni lagondi “g”.. respect den de hor v bohat sare tarike haige ne….

  14. Bs juban mithi honi chahhiye..or zra thzeeb o adb se guftgu ki jaye to duniya ki hr juban mithi ho jati h..
    kahi likha tha esa to hmne pdh liya..
    or aj tk aml krne ki kosis kr rhe h..
    mgr bat zhn me ati ni…ap krke dekhe……

  15. Muskan se bat hoti rhti h..
    bahut khush h..
    bahut jyada…
    muskan ki bhabhi se meri kl bat hui thi..khti h ki kya jadu kr diya shiv apne ispr…ye pura din khush rhti h..
    itna khush mene phle dekha hi ni ise…
    m kya khta…
    bs m to use yad dilane ki kosis krta hu ki vo dunia ki sbse jyada khush rhne vali ldki h..
    or muskan ko ye yad aa gya…
    bs itti si bat h..
    mene shi kiya na dosto

  16. sahi nhi bht sahi kiya apne….humare help se agar kisi ko khushi milti he to isse achhi bat or kuchh ho hi nahi sakti……….

  17. Ap bhi yad rkhe ki shayar ek sher khta h…
    tvzzoo dijiye…
    dhundh uzde huye logo me vfaa ke moti……
    ye khzane tujhe mumkin h, khraabo me mile…….
    bs …chlo kavita ki yad aa gai..ab thoda ro lu…

  18. bohat achha kiya apne Shiv.
    jaan kr khushi hui k kisi ne dubara hasna sheekh liy hai
    Lakin ek bt zarur btiyega k kya muskaan ki bhabhi ko muskan k gam ka raaz pata hai

  19. Ha nikki…
    pata h use….
    mgr muskan ne tb bataya tha jb pani sr ke upr bhne lga tha..
    wo bhi kya krti..
    or sbse badi bat ki muskan ka rhne or pdhne ka khrcha vo admi hi utha rha tha..muskan bojh ke tle db gai bichari..
    Or vo admi muskan ka fayda uthata rha..
    muskan din bhr mujhse bat krti h..
    hnste 2 ro pdti h..
    aj usne kaha ki ek rupya bhi ni h mere pas…
    mgr vo kisi ki mohtaz ni hogi ab..
    Mehnt karegi..
    bccho ko pdhane ka kam shuru kiya h usne..
    mujhe bda dukh hua ki bacchi ke pas ke pas pese ni h..
    mene kaha mujhe ac.no. Bta de m kuch pese bhej dunga..
    to vo rone lgi..
    khti h ki shiv ap mere bare me kya sochoge??
    mgr use ni pta ki m uske bare me accha hi sochta hu..
    usne mujhse pese ni liye..
    kya kre….

    1. j bohat achhi bat hai Shiv… Muskan ki bhabhi sabh kuchh jaante hue use support kr rahi hain… j to badhapan hua unka…
      khair Muskan muskurati rahe… j to humari b dua hai

  20. Aur Sheenam A/c zaruri to nahi hai maine to bas iss liye kaha tha kyunki mera b hai… or mujhe laga k wahan hum personally b baat kr sakte hain… lakin aapko jaise comfortable lage aap waise hi kijiye… ok g

  21. mohhabbat kiya nahi jata mohabbat ho jata hai jisme khiche chle jate hai ak anjane riste bwn jate . pyar ki paribhasa dene wale parents hi apne baccho ko pyar me bandhne hi nahi dete hai
    but why friend

  22. Are yar rahul…
    mujhe lga ki tum dantoge mujhe..m kai bar dekh chuka tha ki rahul ne kya kaha..
    bt ab khush hu ki rahul ne koi tikhi bat ni ki..thanks
    rhi bat title ki..to rahul ye ek tees h jo andr se niklti h..hr trf acche din ke nare lg rhe h mgr aj bhi ganvo me purane rivazo ki vzh se log apni jan de rhe h..
    isliye mene ye nam likha ki kb ayenge…
    mene shi kiya na rahul????

  23. mujhe ni pata yr…sahi kiya ya nhi ..
    lekin yr ishe kon samjhe ga mene socha..
    iska matlab ……wo kab milegi…….
    aur bhai tu Elections me khada hoja….
    tu leke aana acche din aur teri GF bhi miljaye gi tujhe thik kaha na mene bata jaldi mujhe…..

  24. hme hi kuch krna hoga ghar walo ne agar uke ghar walo ne use dat diya to muje lgta h ki usko es wqt ese sathi ki jrurt h jo use smje kya tum boys me se koi usse sadi nhi kr skta uski jindgi swar jayegi ache din aa jayege

  25. Vo to teri bato se pta chlta h mujhe..
    m itna bevkuf ni hu..ki bato se admi na phchan sku..
    rhi bat teri to rahul tere jesa bnne me mujhe ds mint lgte h..mere jesa tu bnega to tujhe ds sal lgenge..
    Dimag rkhta h to kuch der soch lena…
    Agr nai h to cmment kr dena.
    M smjh jaunga ki nai h..

  26. kya bol ra tu shiv….
    naam tera jo hena shiv….wo mere favorite bhagwan ka hai….tere bhare me sab pata hai mujhe iitna sacha tu……
    aur kitna jhuta ……
    tere jesha me kabhi na banu aur teri kismat hogi ki mere jesha banja…..samjha

  27. aur tere naam ki wajhe se kuch jada ni bolne ka shiv ….
    respect karta bhoot jada ……shivji ki…..
    aur tu kamina ….hai sab se fake baate karta hai tu….mene kisi ko kyu nhi batayi teri Asliyat….wo maane ge nhi kyu ki bhoot der ho gayi ab wo mujhe hi kuch kuch bolege…..tu mujhe bachpan me jese fasha leta tha apni mitthi baato….se…jo tujhe respect dete hai is site pe jab unka dil tutte ga….to god madat karna unki…..

  28. Shiv kbhi jhuth nhi bol.sakte samjhe aap kon h but m nhi janti aur tumhare jaise gande insano ne inko dukhi kiya h ye to kisi ko new life dete h ok mushkan ko inhone itna bna diya ki aa mushkN.achi h B to

  29. mujhe pata kon ho tum…..aur shiv ko bachpan se jaanta hu cheater hai ye….
    kuch din baad pata laga tum sabko is ke bare by…….. ……
    mene kisi life kharab karta jo ganda hai pata lag jaye ga………. ….aur msg ni karne ka ab………..me…..chaiye kuch bolo tum….

    1. Yar .aap.sab ek bat btao yha per.kisi k bare me galt.kyo bola jata agr kkoi insan kisi ko sammj nhi pata to.yha aae hi nhi ya phir chup rhe ab ye bar bar shiv k bare me bole ja rha h jbki ye kuch janta tk nhi h pta nhi apne aap ko kya samjhta h to galt h ye sb aur ab shiv k bare me kuch mat bolna ok

  30. To rahul khta h ki vo mujhe bchpn se janta h or 2010 se is site pe h..
    to aj tk isne mujhe is site ke bare me btaya kyu ni???
    Mera bchpn ka dost hota to janta ki likhna meri mjburi h.likhta hu to sans ati h..
    kher mujhe shikayt ni h isse..
    Bs ab m is site pr kabhi nai aaunga..
    mene har man li..m chote bap ka..
    khush hu ki yaha se muskan jesi dost mili..isi site se to mili h muskan mujhe..
    Ab m sirf muskan ke liye likhunga…
    Or sayad muskan bhi ab yaha nai ayegi..ap sb ka shukriya dosto..
    mere jine ka shahara meri kahaniya h..
    jo m likhta rhunga..ek din rahul tum meri kahaniyo ki kitab pese dekr khreed ke pdhoge…kosis krunga ki vo din jldi aye…100 saal jina rahul..
    khuda hafiz..

  31. shiv ji ap aise logo ki baato par dhyan ns do jo log khud hi kuch nahi kar sakte hai ve sab apko aisa karne ke liye mana karenge. ap apni story post kiya karo.bye

  32. Shiv agar aap yahan aakar j cmmt padh rahe hain to plz… aisa mat kijiye aapko kisi ki koi bat ko dil se lagane ki koi zarurat nahi hai.. j blob sabke liye hai…
    waise b aapko yaad diladu k aapne mujhse Rahul k bare mein ek baat kahi thi k Rahul mizaj ka Namkin zarur hai lakin dil ka bura nahi hai.. khair is baat ko to main abhi tak b nahi manti.. lakin abhi aap kyu is Rahul k pichhe l;ag yahan aana chhod rahe ho
    dekhiye j bohat buri baat hai.. aisa karnne ki koi zarurat nahi hai
    or muskan ko b yahan aana nahi chhodna chahiye

  33. Nikki me kosis karunga ki me shiv ko wapish lekar aau.
    Meri shiv se bat hue thi mene shiv ko kaha tha ki.
    Jab hathi gali se jata h na to gali ke kutte bhokte rahte h.
    Par hathi ko koi fark nhi padta..
    Shiv yaar 1 kamine ki vajah se aap ham sab ka dill mat todo.
    .
    Shiv ne mujhe kaha h ki me dekhta hu.
    Kosis karunga ki me shiv ko lekar aaunga.
    .
    Waise bhi me or shiv 1 alag page bna
    Rhe h jald hi me aap sab ko us page ka link share kar dunga.
    Us page pe aap sab ki storys bhi post hogi or aap shiv ki wo storys bhi padh sako ge jo aaj tak es site pe nhi aayi h.
    To shiv ko chahne walo ab khush ho jao
    Hum sab ye site chhod denge.
    Rahne do rahul ko yaha .
    .
    Kisiko kisise etna jalna nhi chahiye.
    .
    Jalne wale aise hi jalenge hame fark nhi padta.
    Ok.
    Buy.

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