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Aasuvo ki barish-2…….kaali – Kaali

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Kon hai Ye jo girte hi rehte hai
Yaad aai unki to behte hi rehte hai
Ye koi or Nhi hamare aasu hai
Jo Apno Ke chale jaane Ke baad Bhi saat dete hai
Jo hamare hmesa paas rehte hai
Jinke aane se man halka Hota hai
Nadan dill Ko Achha lgta
hai
..

Kabhi kabhi to Ye bahar hi nhi aate hai
Jab parivar vale saat hote hai
Tab Toda muskil Hota hai
Inko rok Pana
Kyuki koi Dekh Na le hmare aasuvo Ko
Isliy ghar Ke Kisi kone me
Khoob Rona Hota hai
…
Sabke sone Ke baad raato me to iska aana Hota hai
Sukhi huwi takiya Ko to
Bas gila krna Hota hai
Fir Bhi

Me Kyu Bhul jata Hu jo bure logo Ke baato me aata Hu
Suru me to Sab khoob hsate hai
Pyar pyar or Bas pyar hi dikhate hai
Or jab koi hamse Achha Milta hai
To hme rota chorr jaate hai
Ulta bura bhala Bol jaate hai….
Par ab Nhi Mene Khud Ko ab sudhar Liya hai
Akele jeena Sikh Liya hai
In aasuvo Ko apna sabse pyara dost maan Liya hai
Kyuki

Koi saat de ya Na de
Mere aasu bin bulay aate hai
Mere Achhe lamho ki yaad dilate hai
Or
Dill Ko Gajab Ka sukun krate hai
…

To roko mat in aasuvo Ko
Behne do Bas behne do
Duniya se alag hokar
Khud Ko Kisi kone me rehne do Bas rehne do
Koi agar tumhe pagal bole to use kehne do Bas kehne do
…

Apne in pyare aasuvo Ko
Behne do Bas behne do

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270 thoughts on “Aasuvo ki barish-2…….kaali – Kaali”

  1. Pihu

    Wow akaash kya poem hai yr

    heart ???????? touching , fantastic,emotional, superb, so beautiful,

    Nd
    Nd

    Amazing ????????

    Really me akash apne to rulaa diya…..

    Reply
  3. ????

    रात भर रोती रही वो आँखें,
    जाने किसकी याद में जागती रही वो आँखें।

    अश्को की अब क्या कीमत लगायी जाये
    की हर आंसू के गिरते,
    किसी को पुकारती रही वो आँखें।

    पलकों पे तस्वीर लिए मेहबूब का,
    तरसती रही वो आँखें।

    कहना चाहा बहुत कुछ,
    पर खामोश रही वो आँखें।

    उन आँखों को चाहिए था दीदार अपने मेहबूब का
    जो रूठ के चला गया हैं कही दूर,
    उसके लौट आने की राह तख्ती रही वो आँखें..।।

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  4. Kali (Akash

    Vo rota rha me hasta rha
    Bin baat Ke Sab sehta rha
    Ese hi vakatt nikalta rha
    Ek din esa aaya
    Vo Muje chorr gya
    Fir kya
    Me rota rha vo hasta rha
    ………p

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  6. ????

    आज है दुनिया के सबसे
    बड़े आशिक़ का जन्मदिन,
    ईस लिए सभी आशिक़ों को
    दिल से…
    Happy Janmashtami friends

    Reply
  10. Pihu

    माखन चुराकर जिसने खाया,

    बंसी बजाकर जिसने नचाया,

    खुशी मनाओ उसके जन्‍मदिन की,

    जिसने दुनिया को प्रेम का पाठ पढ़ाया!

    सभी को कृष्‍ण जन्‍माष्‍टमी की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं!!!!!

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  11. Pihu

    Wish you Happy krishan janmashtami

    My sweet frnd Tanuuuuu
    Nd my dear Dost

    I miss you so much ????????

    Na chahiye kuchh tumse jyada Tumse kam nahi..
    Jo tu na ho to hum bhi hum nahi…..
    Byee byee

    Reply
  14. Rocky

    Jo insaan apki saari khushiyaan hi chheen le
    Uske pichhe Rone se koi fayda nhi
    Bharosa kya krna gairo par
    Jab girna aur chalna hi
    apne pairo par

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  16. Kali (Akash

    I love u so much mummy
    Door hokar Bhi paas Ho Tum
    Mere Liy sabse khaas Ho Tum
    Jab Bhi Apki yaad aati hai
    Tab tab dill kehta hai
    Sabse pyara ehsaas Ho Tum

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  21. Vshal

    Happy independence day people….

    Sab Achhe se raho… Ek Dusre se jalo mat.. Phir b Jalne walo k liye Thanda pani h mere pass…bol dena

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  28. Vshal

    Pehli baat waha comments bahut Zyada h.. Isliye…next Jisko baat Karna hoga wo aayega… Koi paise nahi lagte bro.. Na hi kisi transport ki zarurat h… Alright

    Reply
    1. Radhika

      Vishal ji buddhe hoge aap tbhi hm log ko bachhe bol rahe aaap izzat se baat kro hm sb se warna mat kro wrna apki hi bezzti hogi ????????????????????????????????????????????????

      Reply
      1. Afreen

        Aapne sahi kaha Radhika isko baat krne ki tameez nahi kuch b bolta sach me tameez sikho mr Vishal ji yaha koi bacha ni h sab bade hai achhe se kro baat koi mar ni rha hai apse baat krne ko

        Guys is Vishal se koi baat Mt krna hm sb bache h na

        Guys gn all guyss

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      2. Radhika

        Afreen thik hai is Vishal se koi baat nahi krenge ab se
        Dekhte hai kon krta h isse baat ab isko phle tameez sikhna hoga hm sbko bacha kaha h bujurg ne ,???????????????????????????????????????????? bye sbko

        Good night sbko

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  32. Aditya

    Vishal waha koi Bachcha nahi h sb samjh dar h sbki apni apni mrzi h jise jo krna krne do uski marzi tumhe ni aana wo tumhri marzi isme koi kuch nhi kr skta ok vishal

    Reply
  33. Aditya

    Site me sb apne choice hisab se rhte h sbki apni apni marzi
    Tumhri jaisi marzi waise rho koi kuchh ni bolega tumhe un sb ko b apne marzi se rhnege unhe kon bolega vishal okkkk vishal

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  34. Vshal

    Tum hi dekh lo… Sab ne over react kiya… Sabne Apne ego pe Le li baat ko.. Jis ke liye kaha hi nahi Unko bura laga… Or radhika or afreen ya tum log jo koi b Ho.. This is prove ki tum dono to bache hi Ho.. Or tum Yaha Naye Ho..tumlog apna Dekho…meri tension mat lo.. Kon mujhse baat Kar raha h ya nahi… Or Aditya me kisi ko force nahi Kar raha baat karne ko.. Jo Achhe se baat Karega to me b Achhe se baat karunga.. Warna chatko…so girls mind your own business…i respect you..if u want me to respect u.. So behave alright..

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  38. Vshal

    Aadi… If u understands me…u r welcome.. Sami or kamlesh as well…rest of.. Suit yourself.. And aadi don’t ask me for sorry.. Hell no.. Alright.. Or Bata Kya haal h sami or kamlesh…
    Fakers stay away

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    1. Vshal

      Aaj nahi aadi phir Kabhi… Good nyt aadi and sami… Be practical sami Yaha ye Sab bahut Pehle se chalta aa raha h..6 Saal se to me dekh raha hu.. Aadi Sab Janta h.. Yaha ladke ladikya ban k ghumne h so sami dekh Le bhai.. Baki tum b samajdaar ho

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  40. Chanchal

    Maahi I’m sorry mai subah se msg nhi kr payi mera phone bilkul bigad gya hai kaam nhi kr rha hai aaj order de diya hai dekho jitni jaldi hoga mai wapas aajaugi whtaps pe pakka nd I’m sorry babu plzzz gussa mt ho na maii bta bhi nhi payi aapko kyuki ek dam se kaam krna usne band kr diya tha..I love you so much babu

    Or haa maine mummy ke phone apni sim dali hai to aap meko text msg kr dena because no nhi hai mere passs mai unke phone se baat kr lugi kl or haa koi or baat nhi hai to plzzz aap tension mt lena ok

    Or sabko bhi bol dena

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  42. Vshal

    Guys Udhar bahut sare msg Ho Gaye Idhar aa jao Ab… Warna aadi bhai copy right de Dega… Just kidding
    Come on here sami, kamlesh, aayat, RK and hamare Naye nawale shayar aadi

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  47. Vshal

    Are Tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua… Ye Sab chalta rehta h Idhar.. Tumhe Jisne fake kaha.. Don’t worry about her..she is nobody..

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  48. Aayu

    Ok bro
    Bhai me Google se love story pad rha tha tabhi search krte krte yha aa pahucha
    Baki meri qismat ki aate hi ulta sidhe sunne ko mil gya

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      1. Ziddi

        Sach kaha tumne heer aaj mujhe bohat me dard horaha hai really
        Kisi par bhi bharosa nahi raha mujhe .sirf khud k alawa

        Reply
  81. Afzal

    Din badalte he mosam badal te he… safar badalta he manzil badalti he ..

    Zameen Nahin hai jama Nahin hai Mera to yah bhi jahan Nahin hai☺️

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      1. Aditya

        Lgta h kuch logo hey b bolna gunaah h ????????????????????????????
        Wo sirf bye ke layak h ????????????????

        Just joking????

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  88. Rocky

    Aditya jii apka kya report aaya Corona wala abhi kaise ho adi bhai

    Hi alll of u

    Aditya apna khyal rakhna bhai

    Baaki sb apna khyal rakhe stay safe all of u

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  89. Pihu

    Aa Dekh Meri Aankhon Ke Yeh Bhige Huye Mausam,

    Yeh Kisne Keh Diya Ke Tumhein Bhool Gaye Hum…..

    I misssss youuuuu all time ????????
    Take care

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  90. Pihu

    Ab Udaas Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai,
    Kisi Ka Paas Na Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai,
    Main Dur Rehkar Bhi Kisi Ki Yaadon Mein Hun,
    Yeh Ehsaas Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai…..

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  93. Afreen

    Khuda kare aadi hmesha achhe rhe hmre bich aur mahi sis pihu ji rk ji Vishal ji kya hua Aditya ko
    Kya hua

    Kha hai Aditya ap jaldi reply do

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    2. Aditya

      Haaaaaaaaaa mai hmesha achhha hi rhunga bhale hi kuchhhh logo ke lie bura rhunga????????????????????????

      Just joking ????????????????????????????

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    3. Aditya

      Afreen ap site se mat jaiye kuch din aur ruke site me sb apne hi frdzzzz h kisi ke baat ko dil me mt lo Afreennnnnnnn

      Reply
      1. Afreen

        Thik hai adi maahi ap dono itna keh rhe ho to kuch din ruk jati hu aur site me uske baad chale jaungi site se phir wahi silent reader rhungi okkk Aditya Maahi sis

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    1. Pihu

      ज़िन्दगी के कुछ उलझे सवालो से डर लगता है,
      ज़िन्दगी में दिल की तन्हाइयो से डर लगता है,
      ज़िन्दगी में एक सच्चा दोस्त तो मिल पाना मुश्किल होता है,
      पर एक सच्चे दोस्त को खोने से डर लगता है।

      Mai bilkul thik hu my sweet friend aap kaisi ho

      Kya baat hai na mai jab bhi kisi ko dil se yaad karti hu na to usse pata chal jata hai

      I miss you too

      Reply
  102. Rocky

    DEKH UMAR MERA TERE SE KOI DUSHMNI NI H PYAAR SE BOL RHA HU TU KISI KE BAAARE ME COMMENTS MAT KIA KR LAST BAAR BOL RHA HU SMJH JAA UMAR

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  104. Kali (Akash

    Agar vo ja rha h to use jaane do
    Khud Ke Liy use roko Mat
    Or
    Agar vo vapis aa rha h to aane do
    Dusre Ke kehne par use kholo to Mat
    ……….p

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  105. Kali (Akash

    Agar tmhe koi Toda bhi samjta hai
    To use khona Mat
    Kyuki vo Tmhare dill or dimag dono se juda Hota hai
    ……….p

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  106. Kali (Akash

    Undar se tuta huwa insaan
    Hmesa bahar se Kush rehta hai
    Kyuki usko pta hai
    Ki
    Uske hasne ki vajah Aaj kisi or ki vajah hai
    ………..p

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  107. Kali (Akash

    Yha puri Aashiqui Kon krna chahta hai
    Adhuri me jo mja hai vo puri me Kha
    Vrna Khud se pucho Sab
    Kya hote Tm log yha
    ……..p

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  108. Kali (Akash

    Koi apko Tabhi rula sakta hai
    Jab vo apse kabhi pyar kiya hoga
    Kyuki
    Pyar Ka dard Vhi Samj sakta hai
    Jo Khud Kisi or Ko pyar me rulaya hoga
    …….p

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  110. Rocky

    आप सभी को गणेश चतुर्थी की हार्दिक बधाई व शुभकामनाएं।

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  113. Rocky

    वक्रतुंड महाकाय सुर्यकोटि समप्रभ ।।
    निर्विघ्नं कुरुमे देव सर्वकार्येषु सर्वदा ।।

    आप सभी को श्री_गणेश_चतुर्थी की हार्दिक बधाई एवं शुभकामनाएं

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  115. Sami

    Umar tu kisi ke bhi baare me kuvhh mt bola kr trra kon trusr krega tu khud sbko gaali deta h to kon tere uppper trust krega

    Phir se bol rh hu is topic me baat mat krna vishal afreen ke baare me

    Vishal yaha old h sbko pta hai afreen new h wo b sbko pta h tu bola mat kisi ke baare me

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  119. Afreen

    Umar ab is topic ko band kro hmesha ke liye kuchh din baad mai khud chale jaungi site se

    Umar

    Bye guyss baad me milte

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    1. Umar

      Samjhaneki zarurat hi kya hai vishal fake hai usko manna hoga
      Ladki bankar bolta hai maze lo umar k sabmilkar galiya di haina

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    1. Umar

      Haan bula vishal ko afreen bankar to kuch kar nahi sakta sla vishal bankar apni marwane aayega

      Phir afreen radhika bankar bolega galiya do

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    1. Umar

      Sla afreen bankar natak karraha hai keht hai ladki ki izzat kar pehle hahah tune ki sle kya kaha tha k umar ko galiya do bharke galiya kaunsu deraha tha tuaa behan ki wah tu khud bolta hai galiya de ab bolta hai ladki izzat wah re lovde

      Reply
  131. Maahi

    Hello guysss
    Kaise ho sb?

    Umar aapki prblm kya h yrr dekho hum decide ni kr skte kon fake h kon real so plz yrr sb yhan baatein krte h toh krne do na sb toh yhi chahte h ki site achhi rhe sb milke rhe frr beech me ye sb Kahan se aaya baat itni si h koi fight mt shuru kro then yhan fight ni hogi kisi ki bi kisi se…
    Or umar meko mt btao aap kisse baat krni h kisse ni plz yrr fake ho ya real koi ghr toh aane se rhe toh rehne do na baat krne do sb achha rhega… Faltu me behes fight..

    Meko bs sb thik chahiye or meko koi bi mt btao kisi se kyun baat krni h ys ni krni h… Plz guysss bs kro yrr dimaag kharab hogya h…m

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  132. Maahi

    Kaise ho brrooo??

    Or sb kaise ho?
    Koi ho yhan toh aa jao

    Afreen aap kuchh btayengi ni apne uss frnd ke baare me? Or afreen main apne baare me kya btaun puchho aap?

    Hey noor..kaisi ho?

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    1. Umar

      Acha iska jawab do kya koi ladki bolti hai galiya do maa behan ki jabke wo khud ladki hoti to batao aur ladki honeka mazak banati hai kya

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      1. Maahi

        Umar plz stop it… Main sorry bolti hu bss kro baat khatm kri yhin ab or ni chahiye mess yhan bhut hogya khush rho sbko khush rehne do… Unhone jo bola sorry really sorry but plz site achhi rehne do…hope u will understand yrr

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      1. Afreen

        Meri dost ki death ho gyi accident me maahi sis

        Is umar ki baat ko ignore karo ap bolne do jo bolna bole mere ko koi farq nhai padta h umar tumhri bat se bolo bolo

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          1. Afreen

            Dinner ho gya aur aapka maahi sis
            Maahi sis apka koi boy frd hai ki ni just aisi puchhi ichhha hui to
            Pyaar love kia h k ni life me maaahi sis

          3. Maahi

            Hmm mera bi hogya
            Ye faltu ques mere palle ni padta yrr…????????
            Koi place ni mere life me insbke liye… akele hi kaafi hu

  133. Noor

    Mai to achi hu dii ap bataiye
    Kuch kya chl rha hai ya nhi ????????
    Kfi din bad ayi hu yha but fir bhi fight chl rhi h sabki
    Aur vaise ye real aur fake vli pe bhot hasii ati hai mujhe bhi ek bar fake kaha gya tha ????????

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    1. Maahi

      Mera bi sb thik h noor..
      Sb ruka kuchh chl hi toh ni rha ????????

      Noor rehne do faltu mt bolo yrr mess ni chahiye plz chhoti

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  134. Afreen

    Maahi sis tum kuch btao kb kr rhi ho shadi hhahahahhaahha
    Next year me ho jaega

    Tumhri bhi koi best friend hai kya maahi sis

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    1. Maahi

      Hey bhagwan???????? shaadi????????
      Yrr pehli meri academic life toh complete hone do… Chhoti hu abi itti bi badi ni hui ????????
      Commerce student hu yrr????????
      Haanji meri bi h…

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        1. Maahi

          Pehle ek baat btao? Bio data ready krni h kya? Jo itte questions ek saath puchh rhi mese aap???????????????????????? main ni btane wali

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          1. Afreen

            Mai kya krungi apke bio deta ka maaahi sis????????????????????????

            Wo apki marzi btana h k ni maahi sis

    1. Afreen

      Ok sis

      Apne btaya nahi mere ko kyu rok rhi ho site se jaane ke lie
      Aditya bhi bol rh tha rukne ko
      Aisa kyu

      Kyu rok rhe ho dono
      Pta h mere ko kisi ko mana krna achha nahi lgta maahi sis

      Reply
  139. Noor

    Maahi dii ap bolti thi na mai ekdin schl ko miss karungi shi bolti thi ap phle mai kitna paresan rhti thi schl life se ab nhi h to mn karta hai unhi lamho ko firse jine ka
    Sare frnds k sth vo mstii karna vo canteen ground class vo strict tchr sab bhot yad ata hai

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    1. Maahi

      Hehehe… Bs yhi toh baat h noor ise hi kehte h life kuchh bi rukta ni kuchh bi hmare haath me ni aata bs jo Lamhe jee lo whi apne h…

      Reply
  140. Afreen

    Maahi sis aur adiya mai kisi dusre ke karan site se jaa ni rhi hu bs kuch dino mahino ke lie chahti hu Roko mat mujhe adi maahi

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  147. Tiya

    Arey afreen tumko jaana hai to tum chaap chali jaona w faltu me bolti rehti ho jarahi hu jarahi hun dimaag ka dha pada banati ho jab teh karliya h jaaneka to chalijao ek msg ka ratta lagakar rakhliya jarahi hun jarahi hun aur jaati hi nhi ho ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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    2. SAMI

      2 line us Umar ke lie bol do tum sb ek hi ho Tia umar or bhut log sbko bekwoof bnte ho tum sb

      Itna yaad rkhna upper wala dekh rh h by

      Miss tia aur Mister Tia jo b ho tum

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    3. Rocky

      Tum kon hoti bolne wali jo afreen ko aise bol rhi khud tum jaiso ki izzat nahi hai yaha aur afreen ko bol rhi wo sahi islie silent reader ban gyi
      Wo tum jaisi nahi hai Tia kuchh or is topic ko band kro

      VISHAL AFREEN SAMI SB CHALE JAA RAHE SIRF TUM JAISE LOGO KE KARAN

      AUR UMAAR AB MUH MAT KHOLNA VISHAL AFREEN CHALE GYE BS TUM B CHALE JAO HAMESHA KE LIYE AGR TUM APNE AP SAHI MANTE HO TO MAT AANA UMAR JO BHI HO OK

      Reply
  148. SAMI

    Acha hai everyone sb chale jao uuske bad yahi log rhenge umar tia or kuchhh log

    Maine b decide kr lia kya mai b abse silent Reader Reader rhunga

    Mai in logo ki bkwas sun ni skta ab

    Màahii sis take care bye everyone

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  150. Rocky

    HUM SB KE PAS SIRF DO OPTION HAI
    1 KI HAM SB LOG SITE CHHOD DE
    2 YAA TUM JAISE LOG KISI PR ULTA SIDHA COMMENTS MT KRNA OK

    KOI EK OPTION CHUN LENA UMAR TIA RASHMI
    OK

    BYE ALL OF U

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  153. Rocky

    A TALE OF MAGIC ___THREE GIRLS STORY ME AAO SAB JO MERE SATH HAI

    SAMI BRO
    VISHAL
    AFREEN
    MAAHI
    ISHA
    ADITYA
    RAZ
    NITYA
    PIHU
    SMILY
    VINOD
    RADHIKA
    KAMLESH
    TANU
    AUR JISKO BI AANA HO AA SKTE YAHI KARNGE BAAT OK

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