Aasuvo ki barish-2…….kaali – Kaali

Kon hai Ye jo girte hi rehte hai
Yaad aai unki to behte hi rehte hai
Ye koi or Nhi hamare aasu hai
Jo Apno Ke chale jaane Ke baad Bhi saat dete hai
Jo hamare hmesa paas rehte hai
Jinke aane se man halka Hota hai
Nadan dill Ko Achha lgta
hai
..

Kabhi kabhi to Ye bahar hi nhi aate hai
Jab parivar vale saat hote hai
Tab Toda muskil Hota hai
Inko rok Pana
Kyuki koi Dekh Na le hmare aasuvo Ko
Isliy ghar Ke Kisi kone me
Khoob Rona Hota hai

Sabke sone Ke baad raato me to iska aana Hota hai
Sukhi huwi takiya Ko to
Bas gila krna Hota hai
Fir Bhi

Me Kyu Bhul jata Hu jo bure logo Ke baato me aata Hu
Suru me to Sab khoob hsate hai
Pyar pyar or Bas pyar hi dikhate hai
Or jab koi hamse Achha Milta hai
To hme rota chorr jaate hai
Ulta bura bhala Bol jaate hai….
Par ab Nhi Mene Khud Ko ab sudhar Liya hai
Akele jeena Sikh Liya hai
In aasuvo Ko apna sabse pyara dost maan Liya hai
Kyuki

Koi saat de ya Na de
Mere aasu bin bulay aate hai
Mere Achhe lamho ki yaad dilate hai
Or
Dill Ko Gajab Ka sukun krate hai

To roko mat in aasuvo Ko
Behne do Bas behne do
Duniya se alag hokar
Khud Ko Kisi kone me rehne do Bas rehne do
Koi agar tumhe pagal bole to use kehne do Bas kehne do

Apne in pyare aasuvo Ko
Behne do Bas behne do

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270 Comments

  1. Pihu

    Wow akaash kya poem hai yr

    heart 💖💖 touching , fantastic,emotional, superb, so beautiful,

    Nd
    Nd

    Amazing 👍👍

    Really me akash apne to rulaa diya…..

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  2. 💖

    Bahut Khoob Mr Kali

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  3. 💖

    रात भर रोती रही वो आँखें,
    जाने किसकी याद में जागती रही वो आँखें।

    अश्को की अब क्या कीमत लगायी जाये
    की हर आंसू के गिरते,
    किसी को पुकारती रही वो आँखें।

    पलकों पे तस्वीर लिए मेहबूब का,
    तरसती रही वो आँखें।

    कहना चाहा बहुत कुछ,
    पर खामोश रही वो आँखें।

    उन आँखों को चाहिए था दीदार अपने मेहबूब का
    जो रूठ के चला गया हैं कही दूर,
    उसके लौट आने की राह तख्ती रही वो आँखें..।।

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    1. Shiv

      Khatarnaak

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  4. Kali (Akash

    Vo rota rha me hasta rha
    Bin baat Ke Sab sehta rha
    Ese hi vakatt nikalta rha
    Ek din esa aaya
    Vo Muje chorr gya
    Fir kya
    Me rota rha vo hasta rha
    ………p

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  5. Tanu

    Uffffffffff rula deya apki shayeri ko aur apke ishq ko hum dil se salaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam karte hain

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  6. 💖

    आज है दुनिया के सबसे
    बड़े आशिक़ का जन्मदिन,
    ईस लिए सभी आशिक़ों को
    दिल से…
    Happy Janmashtami friends

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  7. 💖

    Hello site vasiyon Aaj Koi Najar Nahin a raha hai kya baat hai

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  8. 💖

    Kya sab log Makkhan churane gaye hain

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  9. Aayaat

    Nice line kaaaali

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  10. Pihu

    माखन चुराकर जिसने खाया,

    बंसी बजाकर जिसने नचाया,

    खुशी मनाओ उसके जन्‍मदिन की,

    जिसने दुनिया को प्रेम का पाठ पढ़ाया!

    सभी को कृष्‍ण जन्‍माष्‍टमी की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं!!!!!

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  11. Pihu

    Wish you Happy krishan janmashtami

    My sweet frnd Tanuuuuu
    Nd my dear Dost

    I miss you so much 😥😥

    Na chahiye kuchh tumse jyada Tumse kam nahi..
    Jo tu na ho to hum bhi hum nahi…..
    Byee byee

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    1. Tanu

      Hiiiii pihuuuuuuuuuuu how r u ?
      Do u know me?

      Reply
  12. Adi

    Amazing line

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  13. Kali (Akash

    Mere rone se mere aasu beh jaynge
    Janta Hu me
    Mere sehne se vo Kisi or Ke saat chale jaynge..
    ………..p

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  14. Rocky

    Jo insaan apki saari khushiyaan hi chheen le
    Uske pichhe Rone se koi fayda nhi
    Bharosa kya krna gairo par
    Jab girna aur chalna hi
    apne pairo par

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  15. Rocky

    Nice Line but emotional

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  16. Kali (Akash

    I love u so much mummy
    Door hokar Bhi paas Ho Tum
    Mere Liy sabse khaas Ho Tum
    Jab Bhi Apki yaad aati hai
    Tab tab dill kehta hai
    Sabse pyara ehsaas Ho Tum

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  17. Vshal

    Kem cho people….sab thik..???

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    1. Aditya

      I m also Good n u Vshal join as our group apna group h ye

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  18. Vshal

    Konsa aadi ???

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  19. vishal dadheech

    Guys Yaha comment Karna.. Waha too much msg Ho gaye..net is lagging

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  20. Vshal

    Recent comments me mere hi msg h… Kya aadi… What is this behavior 😣

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  21. Vshal

    Happy independence day people….

    Sab Achhe se raho… Ek Dusre se jalo mat.. Phir b Jalne walo k liye Thanda pani h mere pass…bol dena

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  22. Shiv

    happy independence day 🙂

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  23. Vshal

    Good evening people…any good people here to talk ???

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  24. Vshal

    Hello admin post some new stories.. Atleast have some good stories to read

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  25. Aditya

    Vishal tumhe kya problem story me mere story m comments kro new frd bn jaaenge tumhre

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  26. Aditya

    Tum kyu kisi ke b story me comments krte ho jaha koi aata ni hai 🤣🤣🤣

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  27. Aditya

    Mere wale storyline me comments kro sb koi tumhre dost bn jaenge vishal okkkk

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  28. Vshal

    Pehli baat waha comments bahut Zyada h.. Isliye…next Jisko baat Karna hoga wo aayega… Koi paise nahi lagte bro.. Na hi kisi transport ki zarurat h… Alright

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  29. Vshal

    Or waha Sab bache h… Koi reply nahi karta or kisi ko kuch samjh me aata or kisi k g… Bahut Jalti h..

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    1. Radhika

      Vishal ji buddhe hoge aap tbhi hm log ko bachhe bol rahe aaap izzat se baat kro hm sb se warna mat kro wrna apki hi bezzti hogi 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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      1. Afreen

        Aapne sahi kaha Radhika isko baat krne ki tameez nahi kuch b bolta sach me tameez sikho mr Vishal ji yaha koi bacha ni h sab bade hai achhe se kro baat koi mar ni rha hai apse baat krne ko

        Guys is Vishal se koi baat Mt krna hm sb bache h na

        Guys gn all guyss

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      2. Radhika

        Afreen thik hai is Vishal se koi baat nahi krenge ab se
        Dekhte hai kon krta h isse baat ab isko phle tameez sikhna hoga hm sbko bacha kaha h bujurg ne ,😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 bye sbko

        Good night sbko

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  30. Vshal

    Or waha Sab bache h… Koi reply nahi karta or kisi ko kuch samjh me nahi aata or kisi k g… Bahut Jalti h..

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  31. Vshal

    And I can’t handle people who doesn’t have mind

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  32. Aditya

    Vishal waha koi Bachcha nahi h sb samjh dar h sbki apni apni mrzi h jise jo krna krne do uski marzi tumhe ni aana wo tumhri marzi isme koi kuch nhi kr skta ok vishal

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  33. Aditya

    Site me sb apne choice hisab se rhte h sbki apni apni marzi
    Tumhri jaisi marzi waise rho koi kuchh ni bolega tumhe un sb ko b apne marzi se rhnege unhe kon bolega vishal okkkk vishal

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  34. Vshal

    Tum hi dekh lo… Sab ne over react kiya… Sabne Apne ego pe Le li baat ko.. Jis ke liye kaha hi nahi Unko bura laga… Or radhika or afreen ya tum log jo koi b Ho.. This is prove ki tum dono to bache hi Ho.. Or tum Yaha Naye Ho..tumlog apna Dekho…meri tension mat lo.. Kon mujhse baat Kar raha h ya nahi… Or Aditya me kisi ko force nahi Kar raha baat karne ko.. Jo Achhe se baat Karega to me b Achhe se baat karunga.. Warna chatko…so girls mind your own business…i respect you..if u want me to respect u.. So behave alright..

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    1. Radhika

      Thik hai Vishal ji Ab hm dono apse baat krte mai aur afreen abb khush ho aaap bbbyeee all
      Good night sbko

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  35. Radhika

    Sorry ab nahi krte apse baat afreen or mai

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  36. Radhika

    Ab no comments this topic bye good night sbko

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  37. Vshal

    This is better..

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  38. Vshal

    Aadi… If u understands me…u r welcome.. Sami or kamlesh as well…rest of.. Suit yourself.. And aadi don’t ask me for sorry.. Hell no.. Alright.. Or Bata Kya haal h sami or kamlesh…
    Fakers stay away

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    1. SAMI

      Mast h vishal bro and U

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    2. Aditya

      It’s Ok Vishal

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    3. Aditya

      Kya hal chal hai Vishal

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  39. Aditya

    Kuch copy wala hi Shyari kr do😃

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    1. Vshal

      Aaj nahi aadi phir Kabhi… Good nyt aadi and sami… Be practical sami Yaha ye Sab bahut Pehle se chalta aa raha h..6 Saal se to me dekh raha hu.. Aadi Sab Janta h.. Yaha ladke ladikya ban k ghumne h so sami dekh Le bhai.. Baki tum b samajdaar ho

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  40. Chanchal

    Maahi I’m sorry mai subah se msg nhi kr payi mera phone bilkul bigad gya hai kaam nhi kr rha hai aaj order de diya hai dekho jitni jaldi hoga mai wapas aajaugi whtaps pe pakka nd I’m sorry babu plzzz gussa mt ho na maii bta bhi nhi payi aapko kyuki ek dam se kaam krna usne band kr diya tha..I love you so much babu

    Or haa maine mummy ke phone apni sim dali hai to aap meko text msg kr dena because no nhi hai mere passs mai unke phone se baat kr lugi kl or haa koi or baat nhi hai to plzzz aap tension mt lena ok

    Or sabko bhi bol dena

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  41. Vshal

    Good afternoon people…kaise h mere frnds ???
    Fakers shut your rotten mouth.. It’s stinking…

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  42. Vshal

    Guys Udhar bahut sare msg Ho Gaye Idhar aa jao Ab… Warna aadi bhai copy right de Dega… Just kidding
    Come on here sami, kamlesh, aayat, RK and hamare Naye nawale shayar aadi

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  43. Vshal

    Ha Idhar aa jao aayu

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  44. Aayu

    Hy vishal bhai

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  45. Aayu

    Sorry bhai ap mere bajah se jagde
    Lekin sach me vishal bhai mera koi intention nhi tha esa

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  46. Vshal

    Hey bro… Do not worry about them.. Or batao tumhe is site ka Kaise Pata chala

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  47. Vshal

    Are Tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua… Ye Sab chalta rehta h Idhar.. Tumhe Jisne fake kaha.. Don’t worry about her..she is nobody..

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  48. Aayu

    Ok bro
    Bhai me Google se love story pad rha tha tabhi search krte krte yha aa pahucha
    Baki meri qismat ki aate hi ulta sidhe sunne ko mil gya

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  49. Vshal

    Alright… To kaha se Ho.. Kya karte Ho…

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    1. Aayu

      Ji bhai me noida se hu and filhal job kra hu compliance work hai mera audit deal krta hu

      Reply
  50. Aayu

    Ap kha se ho bhai and kya krte ho

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  51. Vshal

    And please Itna formal hone ki zarurat nahi h.. Ji mat lagao yaar… To aapki age Kitni h… Married Ho ???

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  52. Vshal

    Bhai me rajasthan se hu.. Construction field me..

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  53. Aayu

    Good bhai

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  54. Vshal

    So u r some kind of accountant.. Jo audit karte h… Matlab mast salary hogi aapki.. Sahi h bro…

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  55. Vshal

    Koi nahi aayu…naam bahut Achha h Aapka.. Chalo milte h baad me..
    Gnyt
    See u around..

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    1. Aayu

      Good night bro

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  56. Aayu

    No no it is not related to account
    Actually I work in JR department 😃🙂🙂

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  57. Aayu

    Actually I work in HR department

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  58. Naina

    Superb poem
    Mere pas word nhi h khne ke liye kinni achhi poem h or har ek line sahi h

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  59. Isha

    Happy birthday my jan 💝💝💝💖💖💝💝❤💜💝💝🥳🥳

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    1. Heer

      Isha tumto kehti ho k mera koi pyar nahi ab jaan wah jhuthi kahinki

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      1. Ziddi

        Sach kaha tumne heer aaj mujhe bohat me dard horaha hai really
        Kisi par bhi bharosa nahi raha mujhe .sirf khud k alawa

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        1. Heer

          Main to kabse bolrhi thi tum hi nahi sunte

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          1. Rashmi

            Tum log ki gaddi abhitak wahi ruki huvi hai 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  60. Akash

    Kali ji kaha ho app

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  61. Akash

    Koi mujhe pahachan raha h kisi nahi

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  62. Akash

    2 sal bad is site par aa raha hu

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  63. Akash

    Mujhe kuchh name yad h m name leta hu hu jo h vo yes reply karega ok

    Kali
    Alone sm
    Naina
    Akash

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  64. Akash

    Isha Sis

    Alone girl
    Nagama
    Doly
    Suraj
    Vaishanvi
    Nirama ali
    Subedar singh
    Kritika

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  65. Akash

    Pihu

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  66. Akash

    Agar kisi ko yad na aye to
    Meri poem h mere name se search kar lo
    Akash maurya
    Mil jayega sab

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  67. Akash

    Dekhate h kisaki yaddast achchhi h

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    1. Naina

      Yaadash hi to kamjor h
      Kaun ho tum 😝

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      1. Naina

        Waise tumhari jan tumhare sath h ya nii
        I hope sath hi rho ap dono

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        1. SAMI

          Yahi Naina hai na jo aditya bro naam le rha tha us din

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        2. Akash

          Nahi

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      2. SAMI

        Naina ji apko koi bahut miss kr rha tha ap wahi ho na

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  68. SAMI

    Ab ye Aakash kon h everyone

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    1. Akash

      M hu be

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  69. Naina

    Na na hum wo Naina nii h😝😝

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    1. SAMI

      To kon si wali naina ho aap

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      1. Naina

        Hum Naina wali Naina h
        😝😝😝
        Hahaha

        Reply
  70. SAMI

    Adi to bade pyaar se bol rha tha ap aditya ko janti hai kya

    Reply
  71. SAMI

    Aditya bro kaha ho yr kaisa hai tabiyat bhai

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  72. SAMI

    Kaaha ho aditya Rk bhai isha tanu pihu vishal maaahi sis yakuv

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    1. Pihu

      Hi sami

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  73. SAMI

    Maahi Sis kaaha ho y

    Koi to aaao yr

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  74. SAMI

    Good Evening everyone all

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  75. Pihu

    Wishing you a very happy birthday kabir 🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂
    May your all dreams come true…..

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  76. Akash

    Wate everyone

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  77. Maahi

    Hello guysss
    Good afternoon
    Kaise ho aap sb?

    Hey brrooo..kaise ho?

    Nainuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤨🤨

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  78. SAMI

    Hi maahi sis kaisi h ap

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    1. Maahi

      Hello brrooo..
      Main badhiya
      Or aap btao?
      Kya ho rha h abi?

      Reply
  79. Sami

    Good evening everyone all

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  80. SAMI

    Hello Everyone
    Rocky bro
    Mahi sis
    Adi bro
    Naina
    Isha
    Pihu
    Rashmi

    To Kaise ho sabhi

    Kya hal chal h everyone

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    1. Rashmi

      Izzat se bulaoge janab to hum bohat ache hai….😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

      Reply
  81. Afzal

    Din badalte he mosam badal te he… safar badalta he manzil badalti he ..

    Zameen Nahin hai jama Nahin hai Mera to yah bhi jahan Nahin hai☺️

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  82. Maahi

    Hello Afzal after a long tym
    Kaise h aap?

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    1. Aditya

      Hey maahi

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      1. Aditya

        Lgta h kuch logo hey b bolna gunaah h 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
        Wo sirf bye ke layak h 😂😂😂😂

        Just joking😂

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  83. Aditya

    Hi frdzzz
    Kaise ho sb

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  84. Aditya

    Hi
    Pihu
    Tanu
    Afreen
    Isha
    Sami
    Mahi
    Rk
    Kamles
    Alisha
    Vishal
    Radhika
    Naina

    How are u all

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  85. SAMI

    Hi aditya bro

    Kaise ho

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    1. Aditya

      M also good sami bro

      Reply
  86. Pihu

    I’m ok Aditya nd u

    Aditya apka report kya aaya sab thik hai na…..

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    1. Aditya

      Pihu mera Result Negative aaya hai aur ap kaisi h kya chal rha h lyf me pihu

      Reply
  87. SAMI

    Tabiyat kaisa h bro apka

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  88. Rocky

    Aditya jii apka kya report aaya Corona wala abhi kaise ho adi bhai

    Hi alll of u

    Aditya apna khyal rakhna bhai

    Baaki sb apna khyal rakhe stay safe all of u

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    1. Aditya

      I m also good Rk bro
      Negative aaya bro rk ap kaise ho

      Reply
  89. Pihu

    Aa Dekh Meri Aankhon Ke Yeh Bhige Huye Mausam,

    Yeh Kisne Keh Diya Ke Tumhein Bhool Gaye Hum…..

    I misssss youuuuu all time 😞😞
    Take care

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    1. Aditya

      Heart touching line pihu

      Reply
  90. Pihu

    Ab Udaas Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai,
    Kisi Ka Paas Na Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai,
    Main Dur Rehkar Bhi Kisi Ki Yaadon Mein Hun,
    Yeh Ehsaas Hona Bhi Achha Lagta Hai…..

    Reply