A promise on Promise day -II -Vixxu

2 years later,
DIPA completed her GRADUATION and her family wanted her to get married but she disagree to them because she wanted to work for herself as a writer, she wanted to publish a book about her life from when she met AVIAN and how they separated.
DIPA’S MOM allowed her but in one condition if she would marry after then. DIPA agreed and next day, AN ENGINEER came from a rich family, his name was KARAN, he was good looking but as usual ENGINEERS are boring. KARAN liked DIPA, Her family also liked KARAN. So, DIPA accepted the marriage proposal of KARAN.
KARAN wanted to meet DIPA alone to know more about DIPA.
KARAN set up a date, DIPA came with wearing a beautiful dress and KARAN was completely hypnotised in DIPA’S beauty, KARAN started the conversation with a big compliment.

KARAN:WOW! you’re looking damn beautiful.

DIPA: Thank you!

KARAN: I have to say that you have to control in your diet, I want you to look slim in our marriage day.

DIPA was uncomfortable talking with KARAN and start missing AVIAN. She didn’t even reply to KARAN and then KARAN eventually asked DIPA about her love life.

KARAN:Well, I did not have any ex relationship. Did you have?

DIPA: Yes!

KARAN:Oh my GOD! Are you virgin?

DIPA: Huh? I am…

KARAN: then, its fine.

DIPA was shocked and wanted to go home immediately and without having the dinner, she went to home.
DIPA told everything to her MOM about the date and beg her MOM that not to get marry this guy.
BUT, her MOM refused her decision and fixed the date of marriage ceremony.

NEXT DAY,
DIPA went for the shopping with KARAN in the market, KARAN gifted her a luxury ring worth RS.50, 000 and some wedding particulars.
They came back to home late night and DIPA set down to the study table for the final touch of her book but in the mean time, the ink of the printer had finished and she had gone to the local store but in the same time, A full speed car came across DIPA and caught her and kept into the car.
She was screaming like hell but no one seemed to care, no one informed the police and though the boys were drunk, they raped her inside the Car and thrown her into the forest.
And, when a forester saw a lady was lying there, he checked the pockets of DIPA where he got her ID and immediately informed her parents and when they got to know about DIPA, They came and when they saw the condition of DIPA, DIPA’S MOM started crying and trying to woke DIPA up.
But, DIPA was almost died only her breathe was running, her body parts were not in sense.
They admitted DIPA into the hospital but the doctor didn’t allow DIPA for treatment because it was a police case, And on the other hand, DIPA needed a operation immediately.
Her mom was crying like hell and beg to the doctor.
And, In the mean time some boys came and pushed the DIPA’s bed and ran while DIPA was alone in the room. They kept DIPA into AN AMBULANCE and took her into underground for treatment.
And, the one whom she she played a game with and showed her fake love in her college days was back in action, AVAIN.
He was also in the AMBULANCE as a doctor. He gave a treatment to DIPA for more than 14 hours and when she opened her eyes, he informed DIPA’S parents. Her MOM came and hug DIPA and said if he was not here to saved you then what was happened, DIPA replied with tears,..
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DIPA: who saved me?

MOM: Dr. AVIAN.

DIPA : Huh! where is he?

MOM: He went to police station.

DIPA: why?

MOM: BECAUSE, he illegally did your operation.

Then after, DIPA told everything about AVIAN.
NEXT DAY,
KARAN came to see DIPA and when he got to know that DIPA was raped, he refused to marry her.
Then, DIPA was alone, her mother cried over her condition.
On the other hand, AVIAN looked after DIPA but he didn’t talk to her.
ONE NIGHT,
when AVIAN entered DIPA’S ROOM with the supper because the nurse was not available at the time.
AVIAN waked up DIPA and started chatting with her after 2 years….

AVIAN:hey! get up…

DIPA: Who? oh! AVIAN.

AVIAN: DOCTOR.

DIPA: SORRY! you got problems because of me.

AVIAN: Its my duty.

DIPA:MOM told me while not a single doctor agree to give me a treatment, you were the only doctor stood up and look after me.

AVIAN: YES!

DIPA:but, why?

AVIAN: Its my duty.

DIPA:The other doctors have also the duty, but they refused and you gave me a treatment in underground.

AVIAN: YES!

DIPA:Why you did this?

AVIAN:This is my duty to save you.

DIPA: I hurted you before and you helped me out, why?

AVIAN:Because, I promised you something in the promise day, remember? I promised you to never leave you alone in any condition.

DIPA:Oh my GOD! but you left the college for me.

AVIAN: No! because of my father, he got a very loss in the business, so we had to left the place.

DIPA:God is God, he never shows how great he is…

AVIAN: NO! I’m a DOCTOR and A TRUE PROMISER.

DIPA:And, I was insane.

After having a emotional conversation, she hug him, In the same time her mom entered the room and AVIAN left the room. Her mom started a conversation with DIPA.
MOM: The boys who raped you are kept in the jail and when you recovered from this condition, you can punish them.

DIPA: Yes, MOM! Now, I am pretty relaxed.

MOM: Yes! Do you know KARAN and his parents came to our home and KARAN refused to marry you.

DIPA: I knew that, mom!

MOM: how?

DIPA: KARAN came to see me yesterday and took his ring with him by saying I am no more eligible to marry him.

MOM: Yes! NOW, who will marry you?
DIPA: Don’t worry MOM! (with tears on her eyes)
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In the same time, AVIAN entered the room and said I will marry DIPA. DIPA got shocked and said…
DIPA: But, why?

AVIAN(Replied with tears): because I never break promises and damn I LOVE YOU.

DIPA (got tears on her eyes too) :I LOVE YOU TOO AVIAN. But, I was raped and not deserving such a guy like you. And, I hurt you last time.

AVIAN: So what if you were raped? In this world, if a girl was raped then society doesn’t accept that girl and that girl is no more eligible to marry someone.I am against of this society. If today, I left you in this condition after loving you so much. I myself let me down and with my due respect I want to marry you, DIPA.

DIPA: But, I have nothing to give you, AVIAN.

AVIAN: I don’t expect anything from anyone. In my life, I never tried to love another girl after you and this shows my amour towards you and If you truely love me then we can live through this affection.

MOM: Say yes to him, DIPA. This is the Billeted of GOD.

DIPA: If your parents accept me then I will give you myself and my whole life to you and I’ll love you till the last breathe of my life.

Then after, DIPA had recovered, AVIAN’S PARENTS met DIPA and accepted her after a very emotional conversation between AVIAN and his parents where AVIAN gave his 200% to convince his parents to accept DIPA as his wife. AVIAN clearly explained that DIPA was raped and He loves DIPA since college days…
AVIAN and DIPA got married and they have started living a beautiful life after then.
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She also published her first book named ‘A PROMISE’.
🎌xxx🎌

MORAL : NEVER BREAK PROMISES BECAUSE YOUR ONE PROMISE SAVE SOMEONE’S LIFE.

WRITTEN BY- VIXXU✌,
The Author of SACRIFICE, THE STORY OF A BOHEMIAN.

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70 Comments

  1. Prem

    Awesome story bro………..
    I liked the writings mind blowing story both part l & part ll.
    This is called a story I don’t know whether it is a true story or not but I like reading the story from beginning till the end….

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  2. Geeta

    What a story… Beautiful words…. Skills…. 😊

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  3. Monisha

    Very heart touching and inspiring, what a Novel…. WOW

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  4. Rita sen

    Wooooooow amazing story,

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  5. Biraj

    I already purchased this novel through facebook and its very nice…. Author Vixxu! πŸ˜‰

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  6. Barsha

    This is called a Novel
    Awesome skills
    Awesome everything

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  7. Karan

    MORAL WAS DAMN NICE MAN.

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  8. Sangeeta

    Special story😍

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  9. nishi😊

    i am speechless buddy
    amazing
    excellent
    awesome
    superb
    story
    and hats off Avian
    u prove that wat is real love
    aise log hote h real me ye jaan kar bahut bahut khushi hui
    or dipa k saath galat kiya kuch boys ne but fir v wo lucky girl hai ki unko Avian ne samjha or pura support kiya or apna promise ko v complete kiya.
    story writing too good
    😊😊

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  10. nishi😊

    kash mai v blessed hoti aise real honest love se 😊😊

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  11. Akshmika

    Comment…Really very hearttouching story……rula diya yrr AVIYAN…..Dts called true n real love…

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  12. Vixxu

    Want to write more novels and I will . And,I need your support guys. .keep supporting and purchasing my Novels. .Thank you for appreciating. πŸ™‚

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  13. hem

    Wowww.. Very nice story 😊

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  14. Jammy

    Wowwww What a story !
    Superbbbb awesomeeeee
    very heart touching story really ! I m speechless Yarr I have no words to say for AVIAN Really u r great
    aaj tak sirf filmo me dekha tha par real m bhi aise log hote hai ye jaankar bahut jyada achha laga
    Avian aapne proof kar diya ki true love kya hota hai

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  15. Susmita

    Tears came, I’m your fan Vixxu….. 😊

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  16. Ajay

    Story bht achha laga padhke lekin real hai ya ese hi koi short movie jaisa hai but achha hai…kash ki sab ESE hi sochte toh kbhi kisi ldki ka rape hi nhi hota…

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  17. Prakrutik

    Story is very nice but I did not fill that,this is a real story but I want to say that, beauty,Angle or rape these r don’t mater in love bcoz love starts from heart and that love fillings never end…

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  18. Zayn

    aisa sirf filmo mein hota he, real mein nii πŸ˜›

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    1. Vixxu

      Wait for the moment…kuch filmo jaisa jarur hoga apke sath.
      Filmy or real, the story is about people not alien So moral is important. ✌😊

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  19. Jammmy

    Is this true story or not ?

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  20. Zayn

    it’s only imagination πŸ˜›

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  21. Jenny

    Comment… I guess itz jst a novel whtevr bt nyc story

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  22. Tilangana

    its a filmy story there heroin n hero both r over dramatic I did not fill that love what happens usually from heart

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  23. sandy

    This story is awesome….. I don’t know its true or not ….. But it is painful love story….

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  24. Sunita

    People only like histories so that they want real stories.
    Anyways, good writing and nice thought. Keep going! πŸ‘

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  25. Sagrika

    Hii friends…and prem u r so cute yr…

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  26. karan yadav

    Hey frnds if u need a partner contact me 8821023080. Girls only

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  27. Sagrika

    Hii karan…

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  28. Chanchal

    Awesome story…..mere pass words hi nhi hai bolne ke liye..
    I’m totally speechless…

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  29. olivia

    Awesome story..

    Very heart touching…..
    .if it real then we have to salute the humanity…….still avian like people exist ….that’s why humanity is alive….in this world……and if this is fake then we have to take a lesson from it….

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  30. Lina

    Very hurtfull and moral was also…..

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  31. Indu

    Wowwww! What a story Vixxuji superb novel and writing skills r so good this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Hats off to AVIAN such a great guy!
    RAGHUKUL REET SADA CHALI AAYI.
    PRAAN JAYE PR VACHAN NA JAYI.

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  32. Kamal

    What a moral… Very inspiring.

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  33. Sagrika

    Hii friends….story moral is very inspiring….

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  34. Hansika Verma

    Yaar real love story post kariye yaar bese ese stories kain baar pyr tune kya kiya aur yeh hai asique mein dekhen hum sabne yhn love story post karen plz tym pass post post nhi padhne ko toh achha laga but padhna hi kafi nhi story mein jo fillings hote hein mujhe is story mein wo fillings nhi aaye..

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    1. Vixxu

      Thanks for the feedback… Will take your words. ✌😊

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    2. Prem

      Miss verma if can’t motivate someone then please don’t try to demotivate.
      Whether this story was real or not I don’t know however I appreciate it.
      And how come we know that the stories which all post are real and true.
      Don’t mind but its not good to demotivate someone.

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      1. Sabyata

        Prince i m sorry to say but Hansika also correct her words and how can u say that,Hansika demotivates someone u did not get understand about Hansika words Hansika also says she likes to read like this story but we want to fill real and we also dont know theire posting stories r real n not but this story does not give that fillings this story goes to ony filmy type thats it and u cant say to someone that the guy is motivater plz dont mind and all do not think same…all say self words n u cant say them that,u r a demotivater n who says demotivater to some one he dont not get understant totally.

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      2. Sabyata

        Prem mene app ko hi kaha hai prince anjane mein likh diya sorry..

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        1. Prem

          Its all upto people who think what I never mind your words why should I mind anyway you have suggested and Hansikha had also had suggested so why I suggested….
          And I think its better to write a mail to Admin instead of requesting someone who post if you think that such story should not be posted to the site.
          This is what my suggestion rest all upto you I hope u understand

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          1. Sabyata

            Yaa I understand prem we can suggests someone but we can’t say that, why that guy suggest and u also know that, we have to understand that, what he want to say an we r commenter a so it does not mean that, all we say same nobody is 100% correct in his/her words that’s why we say different n that’s why we get a new thing so u r also correct in your words but u can’t say that guy is incorrect first we have to understand someone prem g I know u r a very good person I read your cmnts u say something new so I respect of u that for…If u like this story so u said good about the story but we have to authorize to say something about the story that’s it OK let it go prem g byee

  35. Sagrika

    Dekhi to maine bhi h hansika but jo bhi ho…..story bahut acchi h.

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  36. Anuradha

    U r correct Hunsika I also did not get that fillings vixxu I m sorry to say but plz do not tym pass here bcoz we aspect real stories here.

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    1. Vixxu

      Thanks for the feedaback… Will take your words. ✌😊

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    2. Vixxu

      Thanks for the feedback… Will take your words. ✌😊

      Reply
  37. Rashi

    Hey frnds i m new here aur yeah mera pehla story hai yeh jo maine yahn padhi hai but jyada filmy jaisa laga kya yhn ese hi filmy story hi post hote hein kya ok no problem dekhti hun koi aur story padhke kaisa lagta hai byeee

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    1. Vixxu

      Thanks for the feedaback… Will take your words. ✌😊

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      1. Vixxu

        Thanks for the feedback… Will take your words. ✌😊

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  38. Anamika

    hii Rashi I m also new hre maine v apni pehli story read ki hai yeh but mujhe v yeh story thoda bht fimmy laga i ll also read next story let’s see what happens.

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  39. Amit Rana

    Great story and the moral is damn good..and those who disrespect ur writting ,they dnt evn knw how to read and think…anyways,keep writting vixxu…

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  40. pri

    I loved it…wow damn good
    Keep writings vixxu.✌

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  41. khushi

    fabulous story I have no words……………….

    n vixxu your writing skill is awesome bro.

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  42. Romeo

    One of the best stories I have read so far..
    Vixxu ✌

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  43. jiya khan

    Hey guys anyone is here

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  44. STELA

    Such a great and heart touching story and the girl is so lucky that she got married with the boy who loves her so much and he protect her and never leave alone her at any situation and didnt forget any promise.
    I read the story and am still thinking about it…
    Thnks to lord that he send AVIAN for DIPA

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  45. Surya kiran katharaju

    Sad story but hapy ending

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  46. garistha

    heart touching story m nt believe in luv but after read this story i feel may be love is exists

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  47. Savisagar

    Super story yar… I m too happy … Iike your story very much……..

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  48. Savisagar

    Really super story all the best for your happiest like.. I ll pray to god you ll get everything in your life both of us…….

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  49. jeejo verma

    relly ossmm….. storyy…….vixxu:-):-)

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  50. jeejo verma

    hellow vixxu i havng also diffrnt lovestry…… …how to writedwn my story……pls giv me some ideas……..its real

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    1. Vixxu

      Thanks bro for appreciating.

      And, wanna write your story. First of all, write the best topics about your story… Words are important too… Suspense in the story makes your story more interesting. Just work in these basic things, you will have a great story ahead. 😊

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  51. jeejo verma

    ooooooo woww……thnkxx …..:-))for urr answr……..i ll tryy my story…….thnkyuuu:-)

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  52. Alex

    Awesome story

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  53. Karan

    Any girl frndhip with me 9752898993

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  54. Prince

    Nice Love Story.

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  55. Tilok

    I want real trust girl my life support learning English 8148431413 don’t joke Life partner

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  56. Happy rout

    Very heart touching story…

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  57. Nasrin

    I’m feeling crying after reading dis story…..happy for u guys….. I’m really happy for u…….god bless u both….

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  58. Mithun

    Also you can write more about love story in their collage type….. But otherwise I loved it…..

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