Long distance love story

A 28th poem – Kaali (Akash)

Ek pal bhot Hota h Kisi Ka haath tham ne Ke liy
Badaurat Ko Bhi apna bnane Ke liy
Ye pyar Esi cheej h
……
Jo Kai dillo Ko saat Krti h
Lakin
Do dillo Ko ek Krti h
Pyar hona ya Na hona
Ye hmare Bas me Nhi
Hona Hota to Ho jata
Lakin pyar u hi Kisi Ke
Paas Nhi hota
Bas
Lena Nhi ise mjak kyu ki
Ye koi tympaas Nhi
Fir Bhi hote hai Kuch log ese
Jinhe Milte h log Vese
Dillo se khel to jaate hai
Lakin
Ye bhul jaate hai
Dill tutne Ka ehsaas jab inhe Hota hai
Tab pta inhe chalta hai
Ki
Dill Ke saat khelna Kitna bura lgta hai
Jab koi apna hi dill tod ke jata hai
Vo Bas Ye bhul Nhi pata hai
Ki
Khelna Kitna muskil Ho jata hai
Jab dill ke saat jism ki
Boli Lagti hai
To na jaane inhe jism ki hi bhuk Lagti hai
Ham to khel khel kar chal dete hai
Jidgi uski barbaad kr dete hai
Or
Rote Bhi nhi Apne kiy par Kyoki
………
Ajadi Cheen kar Kush Ho jaate h
Jese Apni bhukh ham mitate h
Lakin
Na jaane Ese log Hme Milte hi Kha se h
Jo pyar pyar krke hmara Sab Kuch le jaate h
Or
Hamari izzat ki dhajiya uda dete h
Ab to Bas inse dur rehna h
Apni pyari c jindgi me vapis jana h
Faimly Ko Bhi ab tym Dena h
Lakin
Jo aaya agar vo vapis to
Pyar se use Bas ignor hi krna h
…………..p

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71 thoughts on “A 28th poem – Kaali (Akash)”

  1. After 4 years u saw ur love….
    Sorry
    Marride love
    Than u can’t say anything
    U just watched her face
    N going to sloly down…..
    That’s real meaning of ur true love
    ………p

  2. You happy in her happiness whether she is married or not… That’s call true love akash… Just move on.. Or tum manoge to ho nahi phir bhi keh raha hu
    Good luck for your further life.your sadness makes thing worse may not for her…. For you

  3. Hi nice hert toching poem dil se jajbato ki gahrai me utar kr write kiya h apne

    I wate your 29th story

    H
    I

    Ishu sis mai aksh kaise ho ap sb

  4. Kali ji apaki sari poem to nhi pdhi maine pr jitani padhi h best h

    Mera ek sujhav h apko ap ek book write kro

    Not funny ok

    Aur isha sis kaho ku6 pata na h kisi ka

  5. Akash bhai hum yahi h bs thoda life me busy the toh bs jada kisi se bt nhi hoti bs jb mn krta h aa jate h yha ap hee nhi ate pr ab yaha

  6. Skyp10febu@gmail.com

    Ha sis fris to time nhi milta aur log is site pr itne ac6e coment krte h ki dil hi na krta h ek ap ho sis aur kali g h naina h aus alone sm h aur v ku6 friends h jinko mis krke yha a jate h

    Aur kya bataye sis kaha ho ap kv bhai ko v yad kr liya kro

    Good ratri my all friends

  7. Bhai bs yahi h humne kaha Jana apko toh Pta hee h bs ghr me hee rehte h bs kisi wjaha se thoda preshan the bs or kuch nhi

    Ap btaye ap kese h

  8. Nice Poem.

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  9. Jo ruh ko 6u le aisi hava chali h kya.
    Jo dil se chahne pr na mile, aisi koi mili h kya.
    Wakt aur halat se lad kr khud ko smhal le.

    Jo tut kr v khil jaye aisi KALI h yaha.

    1. Hello kese h ap

      Kal bhai ap hume whtsp pr sms krna apka no save nhi rehta or apke no ke liye apko story pr dundna pdega kon si wali pr h yaad bhi nhi h toh Kal ap hee hume sms kr dijiyega whtsp pr

      1. ok sis kal mai khali na tha

        pure banaras me dhund liya hame ek book na mila fir rat ko dee ke yaha chale gaye thak gaye the so gye
        sorry sis

        aur bhabhi thik h apki

  10. Kabhi Kabhi Khud se
    Aisi chai Ban Jati Hai

    Jise Pee Ker Ehsaas Hota Hai

    Agr
    Shah Jahan Ne Pee hoti
    To Hath hi Katwa data

    Good morning
    Have a cute cute Monday

    Miss you all friends

    Kaha aur kaise Hain sab

  11. Bhot maheen hote h Ye rishto Ke dhage
    Or agar rishta pyar Ka Ho
    To Hota h sabse aage
    Lakin khatm kr diy jaate h
    Ese rishte jo jo
    Inke riti rivajo se h bhage
    ………….p

    1. hota h pyar aisa lagata h mahin dhago ke hi riste jaisa.
      dil se karo pyar lagata h hr riste se a6a.
      dil se hua pyar jb ruh me utar jati h.
      mahin dhago ke riste v
      qyamat se majboot njr ati h

  12. Sadko par chakar Bas tera hi
    Jikr kru Khud se
    Kehte hai log mujko Pagal
    Kyoki unhe nhi pta ki
    Kitna pyar h Muje tuj se
    …………p

    1. ha kisi ke dil me bas jana asan hota h.
      lekin dil me dhadkn bnkr dhadkna utna hi muskil hota h

      kv khvab hasin dikh jate h to
      palko ko khola nhi krte,
      aur jb pyar mil jata h to use khoya nhi krte.

      this is my theem

      jante h phul masoom kyo hote h
      kyoki wo khud tut kr do dilo jod dete h,
      bas yhi nhi hr jgah wo dusro ke hi kam ata h.

      mere khne ka mtlb kurbaniya masoom dil wale hi dete h ,
      kthor dil wale to dhokha…..

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