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13th poem – Kaali (Akash)

Isk ki kasti Ko khud hi dubo diya mene
Use paane ki chaah me khud Ko hi kho diya mene
Ab to isk ne hme nakam kr diya
Duniya bhar me badnaam kr diya
Or dekho Kya khoob isne mera anjaam kr diya
Mene to khud Ko khoya tere pyar me
Tune b kaafi vakt bitaya mere intjaar me
Hona to dono ke beach ijhaar tha
Lakin
Chand samay b na lga dono ke bech takraar me
.
Kuki
.
Kisi Ko tadpaate Ho or ehsaas tak Nhi
Ham jante h koi dusra tmhare paas Nhi
Lakin
Hm ku Nhi kar paate yakeen
Ki tu ab mere saat Nhi
Saat to tmne usi din toda tha
Jab apna dill kisi or ke saat joda tha
Mene to kasam Sachhi khaai ti
Lakin tmne kasam juthi khai ti
.
Ab to Bas Yhi kehna h ki
Ham Na mile hote to Achha Hota
Dill ki Na sune hote to Achha Hota
Tm par sab kuch Na khoy hote to Achha Hota
Or kash
Vakt rehte tmne mere pyar Ko jana Hota to Achha Hota
Par esa kuch huwa Nhi
Dill Ko mene btaya Nhi
Ki
Tod gya jo tujko usse mene milaya nhi
Or tere aakh me aasu Na aay isliy kbi khud Ko rulaya Nhi
.
Ab to Muje khud par hasna aata h
Kuki
Tut gay mere saare sapne
Chut gay mere apne
Fiki pad gai mere pyar ki aashay
Ab to Na koi h sang mere
hai jindgi or jindgi me gor andere……………………………p
#kaali

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96 thoughts on “13th poem – Kaali (Akash)”

  1. pyar to kali ji jb hona hota h ho hi jata h ye pehla dobara teesra nahi dekhta….wo kya khty h ishq esa h k ye kiya nhi jata jise ye barbaad krna chahta h use ye khudh dhoodh leta h..by the wy tack care next time.hahahahahahaha

    1. Pyar to sab kuch dekhta h
      Lakin pyar krne vale kuch Nhi dekhte
      U to bhot h ese jo pyar me apni jaan dete h
      Or Na jaane Kya kuch kr jaate h
      Lakin
      Agar jindgi Bach gai to huwe aabad
      Or agar Nhi to brbaad
      ………………………p

  2. hi dil ka kya kare SAHIB ye tumhi pe mrta h jurm srf etna h ye tumse pyar krta h…..shoked??huhhh??dont worry mera esa koi irada nhi h me to bas etna bata rahi thi k mein aapse dosti kr skti hu pr baat aapko mujhse songs me krni hogi bolo kya khty ho krni h dosti??

  3. hyyyy kali ji kya kh diya pyar krne wale kuch nhi dekhty shayad wo andhe ho jaty honge hena…pyar hoti hi esi bkwas shy h jo lgaye na lge or bujhaye na bhujhe achha h ye rog mujhe nhi lga wrna devdaso ki duniya me ek naam or badh jata..:-):-):-):-):-)

  4. nice poem…. i have no words for ur poem
    mene to khud ko khoya h tere pyr m
    tune v kafi wqt bitaya mere itnjar m
    its line is really gud

    1. Agar kisi or ke liy h to us par apni line rakho
      Dar lgta h to pyar SE dro
      Uski kushi ke liy kuch b kro
      Ha ek baat or
      Pyar h dill me to uske name SE use btane Ki Himmat bi rakho
      ………………………p

  5. Piyali sharma

    agr dil tutne ne badh koi itna acha likh sakta hai. toh mai bhi chahugi mera bhi dil tuty ek baar…

  6. vshal dadheech

    aakash humne pyaar b kiya or bahut shiddat se kiya..duniya se lade bhi…badnaam bhi huye..par unhe ruswa nahi kiya..phir wo tut gayi..me kya karta..hum b tumhari hi tarah h but shayari nahi aati..or dard dikhana b..

  7. piyali sharma

    kali mai toh kisi ka dil nhi tord sakti koi mera tord de woh alag baat. tutna or tordna ka mujhe difference pta h.

    1. Sidhi c baat h
      Jo hamare piche Pagal h Uska dill ham todte h
      N
      Jiske piche ham Pagal h vo hmara dill todta h
      ……………………..p

  8. piyali sharma

    vshal pyar ka drd bhi humein unhe batana chahie jo samjhe..

    varna duniya ne sun ke yeh hi kehna h chl koi baat nhi.

  9. meine yaha apni story post nahi ki h kabhi or karna b nahi chahta..wo mere khaas h or hamesha rahegi..me apni story yaha post kar k apni prem kahani ko aam nahi banana chahta..or piyali…ha sabhi ne ab tk yahi kaha h ki chalo koi baat nahi..par un logo ko kya pata..

    1. It’s okay.. nai kari hai toh koi baat nai .. ye baat aram se b bol skte ho… itna hyper hone ki jarurt nai thi.

  10. piyali sharma

    apne thik kaha story yaha post krke aap apni aam story matt bnao. pehle pyr kro toh bhi logo ki suno yeh krna tha woh nhi krna tha. yaha post kr do comment py bhi logo ki suno.. apna khud ka bhi dimaag hota h kya krna kya nhi..

  11. piyali sharma

    zara ji sacha pyaar toh ek baar hota hai.. yeh mera manna hai. barbaad hone se darte log toh kabhi pyr nhi krte. jo ek baar barbaad ho sakta hai usse dubara bardaad hone ka kya darr. baat pyr py atti hai.

  12. vshal dadheech

    hell yeah…kafi time baad me kisi se agree kar raha hu..i don’t believe this..piyali yahi baat me ise kab se samjha raha tha..but she is a kid..she is engaged by the way..

  13. ok sir anything else??or piyali ji plz mere mtr me aap mt boliye ok ye mere or vishal sir k beech ki baat thi aapko le k esme kuch nhi kaha gaya so plz apni ray mujhe aage se tb dena jb mein mangu…otherwise nhi ok ji thank u.or sir aapko b ek bada wala thanks.

  14. sry zara agr gussa lga.. sab ke apne apne view hota h. mujhe kya pta aap or vishal pehle se jante ho naam toh apne likha nhi tha. yaha kuch personal nhi hai. itna hai toh aap kisi or site py baat kro.
    ek toh log itne bardke hoty hai. pehli baat mene yeh pehle hi clear kiya hai aisa mai sochti hu.. hadh hai

  15. vshal dadheech

    come on muskan…do not do this…stay happy with whatever u have…nd nothing will happen with her…okay..nd yes i m a very bad person..so tell her…stay away from me..ye uski khushi k liye hi h…mujhe pata h tum kya kahogi…koi zarurat nahi h nd all…me aazad hu muskan..or mujhe aise hi rehna h…please

  16. ????
    Ye jaruri Nhi ki Hm jisko chahe vo b hme pyar kre
    Agar dekha Jaay to insaan bgvaan ko b pa sakta h
    Lakin Marne ke baad
    …………………p

  17. nevr mind navu mujhe gussa thoda jaldi aa jata h so i m sorry for my bad words mein juldi kisi se sorry nhi khti pr mene tumhare cmnts padhe h u r a nice girl so i m sorry plz forgive me…farandz???

  18. thanks a lot.ok pakke wale frnds thik.chalo aap phle btao aap kaha se ho kya krti ho naam to aapka navpreet h ye mujhe pata h eske aage ka intro aap do.

  19. hmm pakke wale frnds. mai punjab se hu . abhi hi apni degree complt ki hai. aga study krni hai..
    ab aap batao zara

  20. me u.p se hu.es baar 12th h mera mujhe khana khana bht psnd h or padhai me b sahi hu or mujhe na dost banane psnd h khatro k khiladi dekhna bht pasand h bs baki kuch baki reh gaya to aap puch lo

  21. oohhh mai bhi khatron ke khiladi bhut dekhti hu.. chlo apka fav contestant kon hai.. aaj lardki ek bahar ho gyi..

  22. kya yaar chalo koi nhi mein sikha dungi atleast try to karo bht simpl h bt maza bada aata h..jese keh do k tum mujhse dosti karogi kehdo k tum mere dil me rahogi…ab eska next prt h dekhungi sochungi kl prso kuch kahungi ye b ans ho skta h nhi to koi or song jo aapke mood pe dpnd krta ho.

  23. khane mai apko kya pasand hai. mujhe bhut km bookh lgti h . abhi bhi only biscuit khaye h mummi se bhut dhant padi kha le subha bhi fast hai tera.

  24. heena or nishi jo jamai raja me aati thi na wo pta h wo hr stnt me roti rhti h bt giveup nhi krti..or aapko kon psnd h..

  25. kyo kl fast kyo h mujhe to bht bhukh lgti h meri badi sis h na wo bht acha khana banati h bchpn se uske haath ka khaya h tbhi meri bhukh kuch zada hi lgti h bt abhi wo h nhi tbhi phle se thoda km khati hu pr meggi chaumeen se kaam chal jata h

  26. acha esi diwangi dekhi nhi kabhi mene esliye janejana deewana tera naam rakh diya..good yaar ese hi to maza aata h baat to sb krty h hm to kuch naya krty h crzzy typ

  27. or kya char din ki chandni h phr kali raat h dhal jaegi ye jawani sochne ki baat h duniya me aaye ho to pet bhar lo thoda sa kha lo thoda thoda chupa k rakh lo(raat me bhukh lgi to bkup plan b to hona chahiye na) kya yaar hason mt try karo maza aaega.bt mujhse ye fast nhi hoty mujhe to bht bhukh lgti h meri sis mujhe bhukkad khti thi

  28. hehehhe… kya kru.. der na ho jaye re kahi der na ho jaye es liye song yaad nhi aa rhe re baba nhi aa rhe. hehe

  29. tujhe song yaad na aaye kisi se ab kya khna..chalo aap simple way me hi baat krlo.pta h mein or mere whould be hm dono hmesha songs me baty krty h bada maza aata h.wese zara mera fake name h real name rahemeen h or meri shadi b fix ho chuki h to kbhi pyar krne ka mouka hi nhi mila pr sbko dekh k lgta h achha hi h kyon k phle to sb bht khush rhty h phr zadatr log roty hi h dil laga k..to pta nhi pyar krna chahiye ye nhi ha etna pta h k mere mumma papa ne jo mere liye chuna h ushi k sath ab sb krna h pyar ho ya ladai

  30. acha to hm chalty h…raat bht ho gayi h kl school b jana h wapas phr yahi aana h suno ese hi to do dost milty h acha to hm chalty h

  31. ohhh wow .. rehmeen.nice name
    pyrr ka laddu dekhne mai acha lgta hai khao toh kardva …

    sachii mai maine real life mai bhut cases dekhe hai. aap hmesha khush raha kro. shadi py bulana mujhe bhi dear

  32. kya navu aap to bina bye bole hi chali gayi koi baat nhi kal milty h bye tack care sweet dreem..love u bst frnd.

  33. aap aaogi??such me??ok to abhi se sun lijiye madam frndsheep ki h to nibhana padegi smjhi aap or meli thadi me aap julul julul aana with family wo b haldi k din se ok ji address bta dena card b pohoch jaega bt abhi to thoda wat h esme pr mosam ki tarha tum bhi badal to na jaogi.

  34. chalo ji its too late kl milty h same time same plas same show on stur plus nhi pagal on tlp..chalo ji jokes apart morning me milty h ok.bye bye shonu

  35. luv you too my dear frnd..
    jrur address de dungii.. hum toh ayege. sry yrr didi ko phn chahie so bie dear.. miss you . gud nite . t.c.

  36. good morning navu..kesi ho aap??i m good bt school tym so milty h brk k baad tb tk aap songs yaad karna ok..bye tack care..mere ek bhai h unki boli me see u around..

  37. very good mrng zara..
    mai achii hu. okay mai songs yaad krti hu. miss you. see you around toh vishal bolety hai.

  38. hlo navu i m back..kaha ho aap lunch kiya aapne or kesa raha abhi tk ka day aapne kitne songs yaad kiye huhhh??or ha vishal hi mere bhai h mtlb the ab to wo mujhse gussa h bht or mein bhi.wo mujhe behn nhi manty pr wo mere bhai h akdu khadus egostick pr thode cute bhi h bs unhe bhi gussa bht aata h or mujhe b..lekin koi baat nhi bhai bahn me chalta h aap bato kya ho raha h..wese aap na ey dil zara wali story pe next cmnt krna ok yaha cmnt zada ho gaye h

  39. sab nhi atte md.. aap bhi kon sa atte ho yaha.. lekin yakub raghu vishal or maahi adhuri prem kahani py comment krte hai.

    hlo parisa kese ho?

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