sad love story – Ravi Bhatiya

Meri yad ayegi tumhe jb door chla
jaunga
Door bhi itna ki kabhi lout ke na
aaunga ..!!
Ab tak tumhare dil mein rehta
tha,
Fir tumhari yaadon me bas
jaunga.!!
Yaad ayegi baate aur mulakate
magar
kabhi tum se mil na paunga …!!
Tadpoge tum b mere bare me
soch kar
Magar tab mein nazar na
aaunga ..!!
Tumhe jaan se jyada chahta hu
Par shayad sabit na kar
paunga .!!
Log kahte hai pyaar amar hota
hain,
Fir to mein khud ko hi amar kar
jaunga ..!!
Mere pyaar ko sahara dena tab
jab
Aakhri dum par tumhey
bulaunga ..!!
Meri yad aaye to rat ko
bahar aakar
dekhna Main ek chamkta hua tara
ban aaunga
Aansu mat bahana mujhe yaad
karke
Warna main naraz ho jaunga ..!!

Suna h sath janam milte h
insaan ko, wada rha
Baaki 6 janam tumhare
saath bitaunga…!!
I miss u babu love u so much

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32 Comments

  1. Naina singh

    Superbbbb poem ravi ji

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    1. Aahil khan

      Haa yaar sach me dil ko chu gayi

      Reply
  2. Nitya

    very nice and emotional poem….ravi ji ….keep on writing….you may be a good “shayar”…

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Hyyyy
      Nitya ji
      Ap apni story ka name btao muje apki story ko read karni h
      So
      Ap kaisi ho

      Reply
  3. Engle Alisha

    Very nice poem awesome

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  4. Alisha

    Hii

    Reply
  5. Parul

    Wahhhh kya dard hai teri awaz me chore kasam se maja ha gaya tu post kr mai sabkuch chodkr teri post padungi soryyyyyy gys over ho gaya ho toh

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    1. Robins

      Akshar khayalo main aaya karte hain
      Hotho se chhoo kar jagaya karte hain
      Bada sukun milta hai jab hote hai pas wo
      Sun kar mera hal-E-Dil muskuraya karte hain
      Game-hayat se wo bhi sitam sahi hai magar
      Dard apne dil ka chhupaya karte hain
      Aarzue bahut hain iss tute dil main
      Hanskar har aarzuo ko bhulaya karte hain
      Khushi ki talash main khud se dur hue iss tarah
      Pochh kar har aks ko mitaya karte hain
      Mohababat pe meri yakin tum sada rakhna
      Khud se hokar khafa β€˜anu’ wafa tumse nivaya karte hain.

      I miss youπŸ’•anuπŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

      Reply
  6. Parul

    Hiii fds hello kaho ho aap sb ravi g soryyu agar apko kuch bura laga ho toh but i am funy girl todi c but mentel mat samj lena

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  7. Samar

    Superb yar…..

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  8. Maahi

    Awesome…very nyc poem Ravi

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  9. Mahira siddiqui

    Nice poem….

    Reply
  10. Maahi

    Hello samar bhai…Samar bhai mujhe grp ni mil rha h..can u help me plz..?

    Reply
  11. Alisha

    Hii mahi apka name bahut acha kya ap mujhse dosti karogi

    Reply
  12. saurabh jaykar

    Such me apne dil se bola hain hain ye

    Reply
  13. Rupali

    Nice poem next time jab mujhe apne b.f. ko emotional blackmail karna hoga to usko apna version sunaungi
    “Meri kadra kar warna chhod kar chali jaungi,
    aur fir tujhe bada yaad aungi,
    par fir bhi laut ke nahi aungi,
    aasman ka tara ban jaungi,
    tera naam lagaungi,
    tujhe jail pahuchaungi”… πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Reply
  14. kajal

    Mast h …πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Rupali g..

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  15. kunal

    Funny roop

    Reply
  16. HAYA KHANM

    Nice line

    Hy all

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  17. Alone (M.S)

    Hyyyy
    Frnd ap sb kaise ho

    Reply
  18. Nitya

    agar story Ka name abhi btadungi…toh mja nhi ayega read krne mein kyunki ho sakta hai aap kuch or expect Karo aur story kuch aur hogi….
    iss liye sorry…alone Ji….
    and thank u …
    bcoz is site pr u r my first frnd..

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Hyyyyy
      Nitya ji
      Ap hame frnd bhi bol rhi ho
      And thanx bhi bol rhi ho
      Agar hame frnd manti ho to plzzz
      Sorry & thax mt bola kro
      So nitya ji ap kaisi ho
      Ap bahut km online ati ho

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      1. Nitya

        alone ji mai thik hun….
        and ok aapko thanx ya srry nhi bolungi…
        aur aap kaise ho..

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        1. Alone (M.S)

          Hyyyyy
          Nitya ji
          Bus apki dua se m bhi thik hoo
          Nitya ji
          Agar apko koi prob nhi ho to
          M apse watsp ya fb pr ek baar baat kar sakta hoo
          Plzzzz

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          1. Nitya

            alone ji mai fb watsp use hi nhi krti..
            agar hoti toh aapko pakka btati..aur mujhe v ek bat btao aap…
            aap av study kar rhe ho ya fir aap job krte ho…

          2. Alone (M.S)

            Hyyyyy
            Nitya ji
            M stdy kr rha hoo
            Ok koi nhi agar kuch use nhi karti ho to koi baat nhi
            Plzzzz
            Add me my no only sirf ek baar m apse baat karna chahta hoo
            My watso no 8449936265 and my fb no 9719506219

  19. Chandni186

    Nice poem dear ravi

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  20. shifa

    awesome yaarr me bohot achha likhte ho

    Reply
  21. shifa

    sorry aap o aap jagah me likhdi

    Reply
  22. Nitya

    alone ji means na mera fb accnt hai….na hi watsup….to mai apko aad kese karu….koi nhi mai apni frnd ke fb pr checkout kr lungi….

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Ok
      Nitya ji
      Thax agar ap muje add krogi to
      Muje bahut khusi milegi
      Ap muje apna no do m apko add kr lunga
      Sorry wo watsp no glt tha my watsp no ye h 8077189745 ok add me

      Reply
  23. arohi

    Haaapppy new year to all of u and ur family and frends☺☺☺☺☺

    Reply

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