Maine usko bhula diya – Danish

Bahut accha hua tujhse kinara kar liya maine,
Tumhare bin hi ji luga irada kar liya maine..

Bada hi  khwab dikhlaya kuch hi lamho me,
Teri un jhooti baato ka bharosa kar liya maine,
Magar mai jaanta na tha wafa tu kar nahi sakti,
Meri sacchi muhabbat ka sila tu de nahi sakti,
Kaha tu hi to karti thi ki tum bin rah nahi sakti,
Magar afsos tu in bato ko  hakikat kar nahi sakti,
Magar ab faida kya ye baate yaad hi karke,
Na sochuga mai tujhko khud se waada kar liya maine…

Magar ek baat bolu yaad teri ab bhi satati h,
Teri baate teri kasme mujhe ab bhi rulati h,
Jidhar jau jaha jau wo bate yad aati h,
Wafao ka sila kuch is tarah tune diya mujhko,
Meri raate teri yaado me aksar doob jati h,
Magar  ab rouga na hi aansu bahauga,
Tumhare bin hi ji luga irada kar liya maine..

Socha tha tujhe maine ki ab apna banauga,
Tujhe hi saath lekar apni ye duniya sajauga,
Kaha karta tha mai apno se ki tu alag h sabse,
Magar tu bewafa nikli ye  kaise unko batauga,
Badi himmat se kahta hu tujhe ab bhool jauga,
Tujhe apna samajh kar khudko khasara kar liya maine…

Magar sunle tujhe mai baddua ab bhi nahi duga,
Teri jab yaad aayegi dil se dua hi duga,
Kiya barbad tune firbhi maine ab khud ko sambhala h,
Teri jhooti baato k liye ab khud ko saja nahi duga,
Teri baato ko bhula kar ab mai apno me kho jauga
Ab har hal me rahuga khush  irada kar  liya maine

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98 Comments

  1. Naina

    Osm poem yalll danish

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  2. KAJAL

    Chlo finally post to Hui..MD
    Bhut achi h..

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  3. Aashi

    Vry painfull poem and vry hurt tuching

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  4. Faiza

    Awesome 👌👌👌👌👌

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  5. angel

    heart touching
    sachhi kahani h poem m to

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  6. Bhumi

    Jholi faila ke manga tha usko khuda se , pr khuda ne meri fariyad suna hi nahi ‘ Jb bhi puchi maine wajah, to usne kaha q chaha usko jo tere liye bna hi nahi..

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    1. danish

      Yes….its true

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  7. T

    Amazing poem

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  8. Sona

    Osm poem

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  9. Sona

    Hrt touching

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  10. Crazy_ROhan💓

    I hate this poem….!

    Tumne sari jaga ladki hO…!

    Be izat ki line hI di hainnn…! Itna us ladki ne agr tumhe sataya hO toh..!

    Dil me rakhO.. Istarah publish mat karOoOO…!

    Kuch na kUch toh waja hOgi ladki ne …!

    Tumhein chda hOga…! MObbbat karlwtw hO….!

    Jis wqt uski chahat dikhay deti hai…!

    Kuch na kuch ladkI apne majburiyonse..!

    Dur hOti hai toH tum jaise lOg unkO..!

    Badnam karna shuru karte dete ho…!

    Saat me khud bOhat ache the ye ” mirch”
    Masala”

    Lagakar us bandi kO bdnam kardete hOo..!

    Jaise kw khud toh bohat bade “MAJNU”
    ho….!!!!

    Nonsense…! Ladkiyan soCh samajhkar..!

    Jiti hai tumhari thara nahi…! JO bas kampw gaye khana khayw dakar maare…!

    Har pal.. Har wqt maa baap ka khudka Mehbbob ka…!

    Khud ke ladki hOnwpar…! Savdhanika..!

    Itna samhalna padta hain…..! Tumhari thara woH…! Toh aise kaam nahi kar rahi hOgi…!

    Poem jab likhna hI…. TOh khud ke ache…!
    Moments likhO..!

    I hate uhhhh….

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    1. Unknown

      Kuch blne see phle sonch lo

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  11. Unknown

    Oye…..

    Vo uski apni choice kisi b topic pr like

    Tumko acha nhi lga to thk

    Cmmt krne ki Kya zarurat hai

    Zaruri nhi h k agar vo likha ho to uske sath aisa hua ho

    So plzzz
    .aise cmmt Mt krna kbhi

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  12. Unknown

    Kuch blne see phle sonch lo

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  13. Pari

    Rohan g ne kuch glth nahi kaha..
    Mr ap itna q jalrahe ho
    Pehle unke cmt read karo unhone kya bola hai samjhe….

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    1. Unknown

      Aap mat boliye…

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  14. Pari

    Tumhara mtlab kya cmt kabhi ngtive
    Nhi hone chahye.. Sab log jab ache cmt derahe hai to unko bhi rokna thana
    Phir sirf rohan k hi cmts nazar aaye aapko
    Unko pata hai ke kisko kaise cmt dene chahiye samjhe aap khud bolnese pehle apne andar jhanklo kaise ho. Naam chupakar cmt karnewale pehle khud dekho….ok

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  15. sidra

    nice poem…..

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  16. Alone (M.S)

    Verrry
    Heart touching

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  17. Suhana

    Poem se bhargayi site….. Hahahahah

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  18. Unknown

    Meri mrzi naam chupao ya kuch kro

    Khud to Rohan ki side let ho

    Maine ye nhi bla k -ve Mt blo

    Bla k sonch smjh k blo

    Agr aapko pasand nhi aayi to b aap kisi ki likhi hui poem ko aise Mt blo ok

    Bcz ye uski khud ki likhi hui h ….

    Appreciate his talent

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    1. Pari

      Oh. Shut up .Chehe kuch b likhdo or kuch na bole.
      Kal ko apke sis ya gf ke khilaf koi khud unke haat se likhdega tab tum chup rahoge.
      Glth ho ya sahi bolna pdta h bolnewale tum khud darke naam chupakar baat kar rahe ho. Tumhe shobha nhi deta. Samjhe. Go to hell

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      1. Unknown

        U just shut up ok

        Kuch nhi blre mtlb
        Blre jaare ho

        U go to hell ok

        Don’t tell to me

        I know wht to tell

        Aur ye story h ok

        Aur sharam kaisi
        Kuch b

        Mai to unknown likhi ho pehchan chupane ki baat aap kre

        Pari hahahah
        Khud chupare ho mko blne chle

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  19. Pari

    Mr hum ye nahi kehte k likhi huvi poem khrab hai ya copy paste hai ok.
    Or ab sunlo apka mtlab hai ke main rohn ki side lerahi hu jo insan sahi hai main unke sath hu smajhe agr ap b ho sahi to apke sath.
    Aur aap ne kaha k pasand nahi aay to kuch na likho. Mtlab apka k aap log sirf ache meethe cmt ki talab me ho. Poem achi ho to likhde or sahi nhi to na likhe. Glth ho ya sahi jo hai wo saaf saaf kahenge chahe isse unko bura lage ya na lage. Unko khud sharm honi chahiye thi jab aise cmts b asakte h to q likhe. Aur apne ek jaga gour nahi kiya rohn ne kaha k apne dil me rakho publich mt karo . Agr kuch likhna hai to donoke beeche ke ache moment likho kaha. Pehle khud dekhlo ankh kholkar. Rohan ko hum salose jnte hain. Unke cmt kbhi glth nhi hote. Neeche ke story me dekhlo unka cmt h. Jaha inko lgta h k unke cmts ki zarurat ho wahi karte hai wo. Tumse zada jnte h. Khud ki pehchn to barabar nhi chle aaye suggition dene.

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  20. Unknown

    Oh plzz apna bhasahan apne paas rkho aap

    Aap to Rohan k cmmts gaur se pdhe
    Poem b pdhlo
    Pta chalega…

    It’s just a story

    Aur Meethe cmmts ki Jo aap baat krre ho na
    Vo expect shyd usne nhi Kiya ho

    Thnx😊

    Aap apne aap ko b dekhlo

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    1. Pari

      Bina poem padhe hi itna nahi bolti main
      Samjhe… Now don’t msg again

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  21. Pari

    Chalo mr…. Rasta naapo
    Aisa lgta hai k khud ki poem hai
    Tumhe itna q gussa araha hai
    Jinki poem hai wo khud dekhlnege
    Aap jaye mr..

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  22. Unknown

    M not Mr…

    Meri nhi h poem

    Are aapko kaun msg krega

    Jao

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  23. Crazy_ROhan💓

    OMG…………….!!!!!

    Allah never said the road would be easy….!

    but he said “I will be with those who have Patience ”

    ChoOdoO pari sister….!

    JanedO dimaag hOta tOh aise ” comment” na karte yl….! Hehe “😏

    Zaada tensions nalOOo..! BOlte rehne dO usey…!

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  24. Niyati

    Very heart touching n Nice poem..

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  25. danish

    mai hu is poem ko likhne wala,kya problm h aap sabko is poem se kya maine isme kisi ladki ka name likhha h kya jo itni takleef ho rahi h sabko ye koi real story nhi h okk isliye isko poem ki tarah samjho real story se mat jodo koi log plZzzz…

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  26. Unknown

    Ha sahi ble ho Bhai

    Aapki shayari BahuT axhi hai

    Keep posting 👍👍

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  27. mohd

    Thnx to all

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  28. Suhana

    Haha ye unknown or Danish dono sama hi hain
    😂😂😂😂😂 chalo aag lagate hainn
    Poem jab aapki nhi hai q post ki

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    1. @@

      Bewkoof Suhana Danish shyar h uski hi poem h samjhi..

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      1. Suhana

        Oye kutte apni aukat dekho.. 😂😂😂
        Naam hai hi nhi hum se muh zubani…. 😂😂😂😂😂😂
        Ol… Tum kaun hote ho jisko bolna h unko bolnedona kutte bhonkna bnd kro
        Name chupakr aate ho dum hota to ldkise baat krne naam se aate hain 😂😂😂

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        1. Suhana

          Hume kisike poem se mtlab nhi k naam se… Hum toh bass aag lagate hain 😂😂😂😂

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  29. Unknown

    Mai nhi hu Danish

    I don’t want to reveal my name that’s it

    Kisi ko kuch b Mt blo yr

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  30. Suhana

    PaRi sis… Danish ol
    Unknown dono same hain
    😂😂😂

    Hum batate hain kaise.. Kuch log ‘ main ‘
    Word ko

    M ya, main, ya me, mai, likhta hai

    Ab tum dekho danish ol
    Unknown ke writing skills 😂😂
    Jisme dono ne.

    Main word ko same type kiya h.

    Dekho aise hain…. Mai, mai,

    Donoke same.. Nd doninke time back to back bhi zaada 😂😂😂
    Bas karo tamasha danish.
    Khud ke naam se battamizi karoge
    To badnam hojayenge isliye unknown banadiya….. 😂😂😂
    Drma band kro sir ji…….

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    1. Unknown

      Kuch bologe Kya

      Aap haina apne dimagh se sochna band kro

      Faltu kuch b sonchre

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  31. Tanu

    Sorry rohan but es main sari galti hai hai apko esa comment nahi karna chahiye tha

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  32. Alone (M.S)

    Kisi ki bhi story pr esa nhi bolna chahiye…
    Ye dekho ki usne feelings shere ki h..
    Usko aise commt nhi dene chahiye kuch glt bola ho to uske liye sorry….

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    1. Unknown

      That’s what m telling

      To vo log blre k
      Aap Meethe comments ki expect kre

      Seriously…log bht jalte h

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  33. Crazy_ROhan💓

    Assalamu alai kum…..! HOOOR!

    choOdo yl..! Yeh tOpic..! Maine tumkO

    Kahatha k ” fb” me msg krO..! Tumse baat.

    Karni hai..! Abhitak kiya nahin kyunnnn…?

    .
    .
    .
    .
    Pari chup hOjaO its okay sister…!

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    1. Pari

      Main samajhti hu rohan brother
      Ke aapne kahatak sahi likha hai
      Poem me really me ladki ki ne aisa kardiya
      Weisa kardiya jhooti nikli bewafa etc bohat likha hai. Ladki ko zada se zada neecha dikhakar khud ko badhwa zada diya hai. Aur apne sahi bola brother ke jab dekho ladke ache moment hote hai tab kuch nahi bolte kuch wajase ladki dur hojati hai toh unpar shahirionse poem se kahaniyan likhkar mehfil me badnam karna shuru kardete hain.. Main bhi kehti hun i hate this poem. Haa ye bhi sach hai ke agar poem likhna ho toh apne beete huve ache moment likho. Nice cmt rohan brother jo log me samjhme nahi aaraha hai wo aise hi kisi boys ke jaisome hi shamil hain jisse ye tak samajhme nahi aaya k apne kiske liye support ki hai main janti hu ap ek boy hokar khud dunia ladki k paksh me bolrahe ho. Haan suhana sis main b Pehle hi jangayi thi k ye danish, unknown dono ek hi person hain but mujhe kya maine sirf poem aur brother ke cmt pe bola hai. Kisiike kuch bolnese kuch nahi hota. Tumhara cmt lajwab hai. Bs aise hi cmt ki talab rakho shayd danish jaise bewakufonko akkal naseeb ho.

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  34. Aashi

    Mere liye to ye poem bilkul true h aise laga jaise meri hi story h bss girl ki jgh boy so mujhe ye poem bahut achhi lgi thanks jisne bhi ye poem likhi h

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  35. Unknown

    Oye..

    aapko kitne baari blo

    M not Danish

    Kyu it a dimagh lagate isme

    Aap hi hoge bewakhoof

    Kisi ko aise blna nhi chahiye

    Nhi PTA h to khamosh rho

    Negativity kyu phelaare

    Aur ab yaha fuzool baatien na kro

    Tum log k bekaar cmmnts dekh k yaha pr cmmt kiya Maine

    Aur tumlg writter ko hi bura bhala blre

    Aap hi ho bewakhoof

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    1. Rabbu

      Adab se baat kariye bhai ladki ne glth nahi kaha writer chahe jo b ho. Kya wo glth nhi hota
      Murder film ek num xxx wo type thi. Hr kisisne
      Mahesh bhat, nd unke film writer ko boht kaha
      Tha. Itne bde writer hi glthi krte h to ye poem ke writer q nhi………………
      Kya glth kaha pari ne kuch glth nhi kaha bewakuff ko bewakuff hi bolte h………..
      Hamesha ache cmt ki talsh me nhi rehna.

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      1. Pari

        Tq rabbu ji

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        1. Unknown

          Jo Mai adab see hi baat krru
          Nd Mai ldka nhi hu

          Vo kuch b bldenge to chalega kisi ko

          Hum apna point nhi krna!!!
          Wow

          seriously!!!

          Mai b ldki hu
          Nd I love this poem

          Aapko poem achi nahi lgi to bldo
          Writter ko bewakhoof blne just Kya zarurat

          Khamakha kuch b blenge to hum b bolenge

          Nd tht to ye ek story h ok

          Ldka writter h to ldke ki feeling h isme

          Nd ye kisi ko particular nhi bla jaara h

          Bas unki poem h

          Kuch glt bldiya to sry

          I just want to tell don’t elabrate this topic

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          1. Rabbu

            Kuch nahi bohat kuch glth kaha apne. Ek ladki ko choti nazr se dia hai poem me. Or khud kehte ho k ladki ho. Sharm aani cahhiye khud ko jab ek ladki ki feelings ko bina jane boy kuch boldeta hai poem me. Main b yhi kehta hu. Rohan pari glth nhi hai.

  36. Rabbu

    Aadab sasirikal namaskar aslm alaikum kairiyat dosto pyaare

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    1. Unknown

      U guys r over thinking

      Maine Rohan ko glt ni bla

      Ye bla k uski choice kisi b topic pr like

      Aap sharam ki baat krre

      Aur ye ek “story” h

      Aur BHT ldkiyu aur ldko see sath aisa ho chuka h
      Reality….

      Khud ko tameez se baat nhi krni aati

      Dusro ko blre aap

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      1. Rabbu

        Apna muh kala karke niklo yahase…….. Behuda ladki

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        1. Unknown

          Aap khamosh rho battamiz

          Tameez aati nhi h aur blne chle dusro ko

          Isko blte h uneducated 😒

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  37. Suraj

    Sahi hai bhai.. Bhul Jao usko.. Ldkiya hoti hi esi h..teri wali ne Bada preshaan kiya hoga tbhi esa likha tune.mar Jana Chaiye ese logon ko. Teri feelings Dil ko lagi danish bhai..

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    1. Unknown

      ….
      Cmmt krna hi tha to fact ya kuch aur likh dete

      Pure girls ko include mat kro aap

      Aapko dhoka Mila hoga to har kisi ko blne ki zarurt nhi

      Smjhee!!!

      Next time haina sonch smjh Kar blna

      I also lyk shayari

      Bt kisi ko baddua to nhi dete hai

      .😑

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  38. Pari

    Mind your words mr suraj.kya kaha apne ke sari ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hain. Iska Matlab aapki maa behan bhi aisi hi hongina phir unko bhi marjana chhaiye tha stupid

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  39. sakshi

    …..paata nhi kya kahu is poem ka baara ma…..achi v ha ….achi v nhi ha ……paata na read karka acha v laga bura v laga

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  40. Aisha

    Hi rohan sakshi sis kaisi ho aap
    Sab kahan hai apne friends.
    Sakku
    Pathan
    Risyanshi
    Taiseen
    Zara
    Amit
    Ali
    Shivam
    Tanu
    Alone ms

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  41. Bhumi

    Maine jab ek bar Comment… Kr diya to fir mai sabki sunti hu…but jindgi me vahi krti hu jo mera dil kahta h…

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    1. Suhana

      Hahaha 😂😂😂kya baat hai ledy salman khan
      Dialogue mast hai aapka bhumi sis

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  42. Pari

    Mr Danish itna hi shouk haina apko poem kahni likhna toh agli baar apni maa behn ki b likhna or dekhna hadse unpar jhoothi bewafaa aise hi line dijiye ga..
    Q bura lagta haina jab apki maa behan ki baat boldi toh.
    Toh socho us ladki ka kya haal hoga jab poem me unko glth sabit krke publish kardia.
    Writer ho uska matlab ye nhi k ladliyonke khilaf hi likhte jaoge…… Agli baar jab kahani likhna ho toh lovers k beech jo hua waja kya thi kisliye bijhde aise likho… Na ke sirf ladki ne aosa krdiya weisa kardiya .bewafa jhoothi.. Ye sab mat likhna samjhe. Agr likhte b ho toh uski waja kya thi jo Isa kia wo b hona chahiye.. Warna apni kitaab band krke jalado….

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    1. Unknown

      Aapse koi opinion nhi liye k Kya krna h

      Kya PTA ye real story na ho

      Sis blne see phle soncho

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      1. Pari

        Ye reply danish se aana thana tum q derahi ho.. Mtlab tum hi danish ho haha
        Drama karna band kardo tamasha khtm hua apka

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        1. Unknown

          Are kuch b
          Danish nhi hu yr Mai

          😑

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  43. Pihu

    Guy’s aap sb ldh q rhe Ho… It’s just a poem…kisi ki feelings h isme.. Hm sb kisi ki feelings ko judge to ni kr skte naa… Maine yaha pr girls ki v poem Pdhi h…kbhi ldka or kbhi ldki ki wajah se relation kharab hoti h… Even we dnt knw what is happening…bas feelings hi to h… Itti buri v Nii poem… Acchi baattein v likhi h…
    Gender ke hisaab se Sochna Choro guy’s…kya Pta kis situation me likhi hogi yr poem… “Yaad aayi h…rulati h… Dua dena..
    Isme aap sb ko unka pyar Nii dikh rha kya??
    Unki feelings h sari…” Maine usko Bhula diya”.. Usne khud k liye likha h friends ki wo Baar Baar weak pd jata h… Mko story Nii pta bt I cn feel vo kitta hurt h…
    Guy’s Mt Ldho plz..

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    1. Unknown

      Yss sis vhi to blri hu

      Log glt smjh jaare

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  44. sakshi

    OMG …..a lovers point ha koi jhagralu point nhi ha jo jhagar ta rehta ho aap log accha sa pyaar sa rahiya jisko jo comments karna ha karna do uski life uski marzi …….

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  45. Pari

    Unki feelings agar ho toh feelings k sath ye bhi likhna chahiye tha j ladki ne jhooth jo bola kis wajase bola. Kyin bewafa huvi ye sab. Na jankar rohan ne bola jaise khud ko majnu banakar ladki ko neecha dikhadiya bina waja ke aur mr unknown apko q itni tensions horahi hai poem aapki to nahi haina muh band rakho hum sab isliye kehrahe hain k ladki ko glth sabit kiya hai. Poem me likn kis wajase kiya bai wo nahi bataya. 90% boys ki feeling pe andaz hai stupid kahinke log jo likhraha hai wo b or jo inke poem ko nice bolnewale bhi. Shayd ladki ki kya izat hoti hai ye nhi pata
    Mr surat ainda agli baar kehnese pehle aapki ma behan ke barme b sochlena.. Apne kaha k saari Ladkiya aisi hi hoti hai to aapki behn b ladki hi hai aur maa b. Phir unko bhi marjana chahiye tha.. Stupid brainless people.
    Rohan this people are not understanding the point of you saying..blady uneducated

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  46. Unknown

    Uneducated 😂

    Ya i cme to know from ur cmmt
    Who is uneducated

    Miss

    😂😂

    U the only one who is taking about sister nd mother….

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    1. Pari

      Get lost…. Agar tum really me ladki hoti na toh suraj k msg ka rep zarur deti. Qk usne sari Ladkiyonko kaha tha not only poem’s girl.
      Aur really me uneducated hi ho jo abtak ye na samajh paaye ki kiske liye hum bolrahe hai. Wese tum jaise logonke kaun muh lagta hai jisne poem banay hai. Usme to dum nahi jawab deniki. Bas likhdia kaam khtam sochliya k ache cmt aayenge hahah

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      1. Unknown

        Why u talking about….
        Which cmmt??

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        1. Pari

          Suraj

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          1. Unknown

            Oh😓

            I didn’t see

  47. Pihu

    You saying about stupid brainless people??
    Did you just get it what you said…did you??
    Brain se pyar hota to kya baat thi Pari…n u are talking about uneducated… Oh Sry bloody uneducated right…
    Kitti education honi chaiye Pari sis…??
    Suraj… Ek bar soch lo aap kya bol rhe… Ya yu hi likh dete ho bina Smjhe…
    Pari sis I cn understand aap kya bol rhe..kis way me bol rhe wo v… Respect gender wise ni hoti yr sis… Bs itta hi bolna tha… Sry Dil pr Nii lena..i just said What I felt😊😊

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    1. Pari

      Maine ye nahi kaha k pyar dinmag se hota samjhi pihu… Aap ko itna samajh honi chahiye k maine jo kaha k logoko samajhme nhi aata k hum kya kehrahe hai aur kise save kar rahe hain. Maine kaha likha hai ke dimaag se pyar hota hai. Bina padhe likhe ko uneducated hi kehte hai.. Jaise k tum jaise log bina kuch jane bs nice boldete hai. Poem me kya sahi hai aur kya glth ye nahi dkhai dia.
      Maine sirf ladki ke paksh me baat ki hai. Aur rahi baat suraj ki to tumne toh unki baat ko mazak me liya… Hahah
      Matlab tum khud ye nahi pata k usne kaha k sari ladki aisi hi hoti hai marjana chahye unko. Toh shayd tum b aisi hogina pihu sis. Suraj ne jo kaha wesi hi. Isliye mazak samjhliya na topic ko . Ye bat se pata chalta hai k tum fake ho ladki hoti to kabhi na aise bolti. Poem ladki ke khilaf hai.. Suraj ne sabhi ladki ko ek hi poin diya…. Aur iska tumhare pass jawab sab mazak me gaya hahha. U fake.
      Apke breme sab jante hain hun pichli baar apko kisi dot dot ne apki sachai batai thi k aap fake… Shayd kuch naam tha yaad nahi aaraha
      Haan yaad aaya aap wahi hona jis wqt laday chlrhi thi. Aap rachit hona. Haan tabhi toh main sochu k ladki aise reply kabhi nahi deti suraj ko haha. Lover boy k saath gndapn machanewale hume naseehat mat dikhao mr rachit😂

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  48. Bhumi

    Aap log choti si bat ko dil pe le rhe ho…socho mata sita ko jb ek vakt uski puri janta glt manti ti fir bi mata sita ne unki ek bat ka bura nahi mana kyunki mata sita ko pta h ki vo khud kitni sacchi h…aur vaise bi yaha to sirf poem ki bt ho rahi h..

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  49. Pari

    Mr. Pihu/ rachit.
    Apne kaha k usne kaha hai poem me k maine use bhuladiya. Ok ok kuch dr k liye maan lete hai
    But ye baat khud me dil me rakhni thina jaisE agar ladki ne kuch sataya ho ya kuch etc ho toh dil me rakhni thi Istarah use badnam karneki kya zarurat hai kya pata kaunse situation me usne unko chda hoga.
    Jab bhula hi dia hai to unki tareef me ya beethe huve meethe pal k sath likhna tha.
    Jaha dekho 90 % ladki glth hai usne ye kardita wo kardiya jhoothi etc etc etc…. Ye sab q.
    Samjhe mr. Aankh khol kar read karo. Nd feel the point of girl…

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Hiiii
      Pari ji..
      Thik kha apne…
      Koi bhi insan dhoka nhi deta h i think muje lgta h isko read krne baad ki jaroor koi ldki ki prob hogi…
      I think m ek ladka hoo m itna bol rha hoo jitna pyaar ladki kr sakti h utna pyaar hum ladke nhi kr salte ladki agar saccha pyaar krti h to wo mr jayegi pr kbi dhoka nhi de sakti kbi nhi….
      Infrct agar story m kuch likhna tha to uske acche moment uske sath bitaye har pal ki khusi likhte kitna pyaar tha ye ki kitna pyaar ab krte ho ya hamesha krte rahoge ye sb moment likhne chahiye the…
      Ye nhi ki uski feelings ko is trha sabke samne la kr uska mazak udhaya jaye…
      Agar wo ladki pyaar bhi krti hogi aur wapas ana chahti hogi aur usko is story ke bare m malum hua to wo ab kbi nhi ayegi…
      So frbdsss kisi ki bhi feelings ka mazak udane se phle spne andar dekhma jaroori hota h..
      Fgndss kuch glt bola ho to uske liye so sorry….

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      1. Pari

        Nice. Alone g sahi kaha apne yahi baat main or rohan brother kehna chahrehe the warna kya hune nahi mlum k ladki kahatak sahi hosakti hai ya nahi. Bina poem ko jane log kuch b bolderahe hain

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  50. Bhumi

    Pyar me maut bi h aur jindgi bi h..inke dono pahli ko smjhna bahut jaruri h ..kyuki dhoka jaise chij ko koi masoom nahi samjega to ho skta h ki bd me problm ho…aur pyar to jindgi h ye sbi jante h isko smjne ki jarurt ni h

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  51. Suhana

    Hahah pari sis aap jitna bolege utna ye aapka maza lenge. Haha
    Qk kuttonke muh lagnese kya milta hai jawab nahi sirf bhow bhow.. Hahahahahaaaha 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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  52. Bhumi

    Gore log, MHATMA GANDHI ko KALA Q kahte H ???Suhana ji

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    1. Suhana

      Qk kaala rang….! Aksar har kisipe bhari padta hai hahahhah.

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  53. Rabbu

    Mera Bharat mahan ki

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  54. Rabbu

    Un log indian koh nafrat karte hai isliye kale kahkar bulate hai

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  55. Pari

    Nice. Alone g sahi kaha apne yahi baat main or rohan brother kehna chahrehe the warna kya hune nahi mlum k ladki kahatak sahi hosakti hai ya nahi. Bina poem ko jane log kuch b bolderahe hain.

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Thanx
      pari ji…
      M itna bol rha hoo ki koi bhi insan agar saccha pyaar krta h to usko agar dhoda bhi mila hoga to usne usko kuch nhi bola hoga kuch nhi bus uski khusi ke liye dua jaroor ki hogi aur uske wApas ane ka itnzaar hoga…
      I think ye nhi ki usko bewafa bola jaye ya fir uski feeling ka mazak udaya jaye ya usko kisi ke samne badnam kiya jaye…
      Agar pyaar h to usko samjo pyaar ke bare m jano…
      Enfect aaj ke time m pyaar ka mtlb hi badal diya kuch insano ne….

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      1. Pari

        Really apne jo kaha rohan ne jo kaha kaafi milta h alone g… Sach kaha apne ap jnte hai apke liye ek msg chda tha rohan ne neeche dekho… Anish

        Name se jo h usme rohan ki list h usme apke liye do words h .

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        1. Alone (M.S)

          Hiiii
          Pari ji.
          Mere liye rohan ne jo msg chhoda h wo muje nhi mila ap hi muje bta do usne kiya msg chhoda tha….
          I think pari ap kha se ho…
          And kiya krti ho stdy and job…

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  56. Bhumi

    Poem ,poem hota h..bs fark itna h ki koi milk aur pani me se kise chun rha h..pta h n ek hans ki story…agr kisi ko bura lge to sorry

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  57. Aashi

    This is lovers point but yaha girls ke liye kitne gande words bolte bolne se pehle ek baar bhi nhi sochte apki bhi mother sister h girls ki koi respect hi nhi h jo girls ko glt bolte wo apni sarafat khud jnte h ki wo kitne sareef h

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    1. Pari

      Nice… Aashi yahi to hum kehna chhate hai

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      1. Pari

        Aap ek bt batao maine rohan kuch glth bola h kya.. Ladki ki paksh me hi to bola h hum ne

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  58. Aashi

    Aapne bilkul sahi bola I agree with u Pari…

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  59. Pari

    Tq….. Aashi sis

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  60. Satyam

    Nice story

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