Mai or meri Nishudi – Shiv Pandit

Ek din hm dono nikle muhbbt ke chirag jlane……..
m or meri nishudi…..
vo meri jindgi ki andheri raho me…
diye hath me lekr rkh rhi h….
m roshni ka tlbkaar hokr,diye jlaye jata hu…
Meri jindgi roshn hoti ja rhi h…
or vo muskurati ja rhi h…
kon????
m or meri nishudi…..
vo mera hath pkd kr,mujhe rah ke patthro se bchati ja rhi h….
naye rng,nayi trng meri ankho me jhlkati ja rhi h…
mere kdmo ke sath chl rhe h kdm uske…
kdm dr kdm mera sath nibhati ja rhi h….
kon????
m or meri nishudi…
mene tnhahi me kabhi dekhe the kuch khwab..
jo tdp rhe the pure hone ke liye..
Mere unhi adhe,adhure khwabo ko…
Apne khwab smjhkr pure krti ja rhi h…..
pta h kon?????
are baba…m or meri nishudi…
hm aksr bat krte h muhbbt ki to,,
vo naye aayam dikhati h mujhe..
meri janudi manudi h nisha..
or januda manuda khkr bulati h mujhe…
kon???
m or meri nishudi…
uski hath ki vo ptli ptli ungliya,meri hatheli pr likhti h aksr…
Rat ke andhere me…
i love you…
jo dikhta nahi h subah hatheli pr..
pr mhk aati h uski….
Kiski..???
meri hatheli pr..meri nishudi ki….
meri bato pr yakiin krna aadt h uski..
Use jan se jyada chahna,chaht h mere dil ki…
ek dil h or jan h….dono ki muhbbt hi phchan h..
Hmari chaht hi hmara jahan h…
ek dil h or ek jan h….
kon???
kitni bar btaya yar…
m or meri nishudi baba…
Jindgi bhr stata rhunga…
kbhi tum mujhko,to kabhi m tumhe hnsata rhunga..
tumse kabhi duur nahi jaunga nisha..
ye vada h..or hr jnm ye vada nibhata rhunga…
ab lg jao mere gle se…
hr pl gle lgata rhunga…
hr din sath chlenge muhbbt ke chirag jlane…
kon???
m or meri nishudi…….mich u jan

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  1. nisha

    Wao shiv aap inna sochte ho melee bare me sachi bhut pal aa rha hai pdhker aisa lagta hai ki bhuut kuch chipa hai isme

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  2. Shubham

    Are Shiv Bhaiya Story Baad Me Padhunga Pahle Cmnt ~ Bhaiya Story J C Bhi Ho Iska Naam Bahut “Dhansu” Rakha Aapne πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :), Or Ha G Nisha Bhabhi G Kahte Hai Girls Shankar Bhagwan K 16 Somwaar Vrat Rakhti H To Acha Hamsafar Milta H, Aap Ko To Bhagwan( “shiv” ) Hi Mil Gaye πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :), Bhbhi N Bhaiya Hamesha Khush Raho Aap…

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  3. ananya

    Gud shiv bhaiya

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  4. sheenam

    Ap dono hmesha khush rhe, ese hi sath sath muhabbato k chirag jalate rhe.. or zindagi roshn krte rhe..

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  5. heena

    so nyc….
    aap dono k pyar k chirag yun hi jalte rahe…

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  6. mr. ghayal

    mr. shiv kyu is mohbbt me tym waste kr rhe ho..ye pyar vyar tab tak hi acha h agar ye hmare anjan hone ke tym pe hua ho, but ab tum pyar krke kya kroge .. aram se shadi krlo miss nisha se yhi thik h..baki jindgi me or v cheeze hogi un par dhyan do..ab koi mtlb nhi in bato ka ….mera to yhi manna h ek hi bar me kisi se tootkar mohbbt ki ho bahi akhiri mohbbt h.. baki to sab jindgi jeene ke sahare hote h jinhe mohbbt ka nam hum bhle hi kyu na de de..but phli mohbbt hi sachai h, ….baki to bas ye smj lo ki jindgi jeene ke kamjor sahare dhund rhe h….Sab bakbas h pyar mohbbt,..ye mohbbt to bs us rab ka tohfa h jo usne hme phli mohbbt ke rup me diya hota h,, baki tohfe to hm khud kharid kr late h jinhe dusri mohbbt ka nam diya jata h ….ye sab bkbaas h ..phli mohbbt hi sach h, lekin bo phli mohbbt us rab ka tohfa tha isliye usne kuc pal k liye diya tha, or ek bakt ke bad chhin liya…bahi sachai h πŸ™ ….dusri teesri mohbbt to hmare tofhe h .. inme kuc nhi h ..ye bas jine ke sahare matr h …….

    Sorry yaar kuc jyda hi bol gaya….Bo kya hna aaj din me hi pee li h πŸ™‚ bura lga to maf kr dena mr. shiv…. πŸ™‚ Don’t fall in love again hahaha

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  7. Roop

    Are Mr.Ghayal Ye Kya Negative Baate Kar Rahe Ho Bhai, Agar Esa H To Aap Mat Karna G Pyar, Apni Apni Soch Hoti H G Par aap Dusro Par Mat Thopo Yaar, Sab Aap Jese Sochne Lage To Duniya Me Udasi Chaa Jaaegi G, Or Ha Ye Piya B Mat Karo Yaar Plss Galat Shok G, Be Positive N Be Happy G…

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  8. zemal sidd

    Mr ghayal aap bilkul shi kah rhe ho

    Shiv ko ab kisi se shadi kr lena chahiye
    Ab ye pyar vyar krne ki umar ni h inki

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  9. mr. ghayal

    hahahaha miss zemal πŸ™‚ tumhe v bdi fikr h mr. shiv ki πŸ˜› …… ha yr mera v yhi manna h …kyu faltu bhatak rhe h ye mr. shiv , or ye miss nisha v or tadpa rhi h inko πŸ˜›

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  10. Rachit

    Ha Ha mr.ghayal bilkul sahi bol rahe ho….

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  11. nisha

    Mr.ghayal Ji suniye an meri bat dekho life me
    Sirf do hi log aate hai aise ek to jisse hme dard milta hai dusra Jo hmare dard ko smjhta hai ye aur jruri nhi ki pass rhkr ya sath rhkr hi kisi she tut ker mhobbat ki jae apne sayad hmari mhobbat ko nhi smjha ek bar aap sadi kr lo ya pyar kisi se phir apko samne wala nhi smjh pata to aap btao kya kroge kya jindgi ko aasan smjh rhe hr insan ko ek share ki jrurat hoti hai aur hmm shiv ne muje jindgi Di aapne pyar kiya hi nhi itna kisi se ok tbhi aap smjh nhi pa rhe air ha shiv ki kuch jyada hi fikr ho rhi hai app logo ko to agr itni fikr thi to mai to abhi novem se hi aai hu shiv ki life me tb pucho kya halat thi shiv ki ok aur aaj pucho aur hmesha puchna shiv se ki Nisha ka pyar hai ya nhi ye hmm nhi jante ki hmm sath rhenge kbhi ya nhi lekin hmara pyar itna kmjor bhi nhi hai ki hmari sadi nhi hui kisi mjburi se to hmara pyar km ho jaega kyoki ye to ya m aur shiv jante hai ya phir hmara bhagwan janta hai ki hmari mhobbat hai ya time aur please apse ek request hai hmare pyar ko bkwas ka name dekr please much khne ko mjbur mt kriye ye bat aap shiv se puchkr btana ki Nisha unhe tdpa rhi hai ya phir really jindgi hai ye shiv ki ok sorry aur only ghayal name change krne she mhobbat nhi hoti ok bye forever Jo hme nhi smjh skta hmm unko nhi smjh skte ok

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    1. Shivam kumar

      Aap ki bat me dm he love is laif

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  12. mr. ghayal

    Sahare ki jrurt kamjor logo ko hoti h miss nisha, or hum to mohbbt me is kadr toot chuke h ki ab mohbbt ke nam se nafrt ho gyi h..Par aaj v hm mohbbt ki utni hi kadar krte h…. Ye sahare humdard..sathiya , sab bate h ..humse v koi juda hua h , hmne v dard jana h ..in sb bato ka sirf ek hi ilaz hota h bo h shadi.., khair chodo ….tumhe bura lga I’m sory, mene tumhre pyr ko bkbas nhi kaha..mera mtlb ye tha ki bdalte bakt k sath sathi v bdalte jana…….ye koi mohbbt nhi hoti miss nisha, ye bas jine ke share hote h…meri bate apko smj me nhi aane bali…so I’m.going…..
    miss nisha.. mera to ye ek msg tha jo shyd miss zemal smj gyi ho..me kya khna chahta hu, or haa sory again, me kisi ko hurt krna nhi chahta..

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  13. bindu

    poem to achhi hai.. Lakin bohat khoob kaha mr. ghayal ne bhi.. Sachi muhabbt sirf ek baar.. baki sab bekaar .. zindgi guzarne ke bahane hain sab

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  14. bindu

    kuch lines yaad aayi hain isi baat pe
    jo badal jaye wo yar kaisa
    jo chhoot jaye wo saath kaisa
    log aksar kehte hain ki “Mujhe phir se pyaar hua”
    lakin
    jo phir se ho jaye wo pyaar kaisa

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  15. zemal sidd

    I like your cment mr.ghayal
    aap haqiqt bolte ho jo ki bolna chaiye na ki makhakhn lga lga kr bola jaye

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  16. muskan sharma

    ryt Mr…ghayal toot KR to bss phli mohabbat mai he chahta h insan…aur ek br dhoka..mil jaye to uske bd na kisi pe blv hota bss WO pyar bhi insan smbhal KR soch KR krta h but dusra lv kbhi bhi toot kr nhi kia jata….aur ye pyar vyar kch nhi hota….

    ye mohabbat bhi usi ko milti h Jise iski kadar nhi hoti..
    n miss nisha apka khna h ke agar apki shaadi shiv jii se nhi ho paii kisi majboori Ke wjhse to apne bola h ap TB bhi shiv ko utna he pyar krengii…apki shaadi kisi aur se ho gai to TB bhi ap pyar shiv ko he pyar krengi ya apne husband ko ..kise dhokha hoga jisse shaadi krengi use ya apko …ye SB baatein bolne mai he acchi lgti h nisha ji…kahaniya likhna easy h unhe pura KR pana utna he difficult…sry meri Jo bhi BT galat lge nisha jii…

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  17. Shiv pandit

    Sare fsaad ki jd m hu…
    chliye aaj fesla ho jaye..
    kuch bate h jo apko jindgi me yad rhengi…
    suniye..
    ek ldki ka pyar ek din bemot mara gya..kya ab use pyar nai krna chahiye??
    ek ldke ko ek ldki kisi bhi vzh se drop kr gyi,kya us ldke ko ab muhbbt kisi se nai krni chahiye??
    Hm psnd kr ke kpde khreed kr late h,ek din vo fat jate h..kya fir nai karidne chahiye??
    divali hr saal aati h…kya sirf ek bar hi mnani chahiye??
    Ap soch ke dekhiyega…muhbbt hzar bar ho skti h..bs shiddt honi chahiye..
    or rhi bat meri dosto..to m khush hu,is bat se ki ek ldki ye khti h hr din mujhe,ki shiv tumhari vzh se jina shikh gayi hu..
    tumne tb hath pkda jd duniya ne muh mod liya tha..
    isse bdi bat or isse bda inam mere liye kuch nai..bs m use jindgi bhr khush rkhunga..
    Mr. Gayl ji,ap shrab pite h na..
    kabhi m bhi pita tha..or itni ki subah muh bhi shrab se dhota tha..
    pr nisha ne shrab,chigret sb bnd krva di..ap esi muhbbt ko bkvas khte h yar..kher koi ni..
    or zemal ji..kl tk ap meri kahaniyo me mere drd ko mhsus kiya krti thi,aaj khushi mhsus nai krti kya??
    M or nisha yaha apni feeling isliye likhte h ki ap sb hmare pyar ko jano…kyuki ap dosto ki ginti me ate ho sb..
    pr ap to kabhi kmiya nikalte ho or kabhi salah de jate ho..
    apko kya lgta h hm ek dusre ki jindbi se khilvad kr rhe h??
    apko btau nisha sb inspectr ki trening ke liye jane vali h..kya vo bholi h,jo m use bevkuf bnata rhunga??
    or m…jo ap sbko,sbke drd likhkr sunata hu,kya mujhe vo bato me uljha skti h??
    bs bat zra si h dosto..hm dono jante h,hmara bita hua kl bhi,or ane vala kl bhi…
    Yuhi kabhi kbhi apne ehsas lekr is site pr aa jaya krte h hm dono..pr ab nahi ayenge…kyuki ap log muhbbt me nuks nikalte h..
    jo sahi nahi h..kyuki nuks kahi nahi dekhne chahiye..nfrt ho jati h..
    Or apke khyal ki dad deta hu..muhbbt ko ginti ke taraazu me rkhte h..phli h to sacchi..dusri ,tisri h to jhuti ho gay..
    ap apne dil pe hath rkh kr khe apne kitni dfe muhbbt ki h??
    manta hu phli bhulai nai jati,pr nisha jesi ldki ki muhbbt koi paye to jane,ki iski muhbbt me vo shiddt h ki hr drd pr mrhm ka kam krti h..
    koi esa chahne vala apko mile kahi to mujhe yad kr lena..ki bat to sahi kh rha tha..baki to smjhadar ap bhi h…smjhdar hm dono bhi h…
    ab mulakat nai hogi ap logo se kabhi…pr sach kahu..meri kahaniyo or nisha ki poems ke bina ye site chlegi jarur pr mhkegi nahi….
    khuda hafiz rhe ap sbka…

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  18. sheenam

    sune sb ki kare apne man ki…

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  19. muskan sharma

    shiv jii…jb ap wah wah kya bt h bhaiya bhabhi kya story h n ya for NYC story dil ko chu gyii ye sb sunna psnd krte h to phli Br apki story pe qus hue h objection utha h pyar ko le KR..shiv jii ap story post krna bnd kr doge usse prob ..solve nhi hogi ..Jo qus uth the h ap dono PR unhe face kijiye…
    n shiv ap yha story hm readers Ke liye post krte h taki hm real lv jaan ske PR…shiv jii kbhi ap dono ye nhi khte Ke ap shaadi kroge apka future aisa hoga ye WO aisa kbhi nhi bolte hmesha hm saath rhe na rhe apka pyar jinda rhega hm ap Ke beech Ke understanding nhi blki apki pyar ki manjil mukam dkhna chahte h ki Ab kB shaadi krenge…ke Ab dono iss date ko iss year mai shaadi krne wle ho ye shunna chahe h…
    ap dono Ke bech itna pyar h fir bhi story pdh Ke lgta h 1 joda to h bht pyara PR manjil koi nhi inki…

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  20. Shiv pandit

    Muskan hm face jindgi ko kr rhe h..
    or shadi hi pyar ki mnzil h kya??
    Or shadi kya dukan me milne vala laddu h,jo liya or khaya..
    hm dono jante h ki hmari shadi nahi hogi aps me..to kya aj hi bhul jaye ek dusre ko???
    kya shadi hone se kreebi bdhti h ya shadi na hone se pyar km ho jata h??
    h kuch esa kya???
    hm dono ke dil milte h..hmare ghr,smaj,riti rivaz nahi milte..to kya bgavt kr de??
    dono apne apne maa bap ko chor kr bhag jaye??
    kya unki matti paleet kr ke hm apni khushiya khreed le.??
    ya esa kre ki shadi to ho nahi skti,chlo duur ho jao ek dusre se???
    bolo kya ye kre..??
    Ya mr jaye zhr khakr???
    are bina shadi ke kya muhbbt nahi hoti..??
    Ek bat btao ap..muhbbt me dil milna jaruri h ya bdn milna..??
    agr dil milna muhbbt h,,to hmme h muhbbt or kya chahiye,,
    agr bdn milna muhbbt h,to hm nahi mil skte,,to kya hmare beech muhbbt nahi h..??
    pr apki glti h nahi yar..
    dikkt ye h ki duniya me muhbbt bahut km h…
    bs setting hoti h…chle tb tk thik..nai chle to thik..
    or rhi bat shadi ki…to jindgi me iske alava bhi bahut kuch h jine ko..

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  21. Shiv pandit

    Or sbse bdi dikkt ye h muskan..
    ki apki nzro ke samne rhenge to apki zuban pr sval rhenge…
    isliye mene jane ka fesla kiya h..
    nisha apni mrzi ki malik h..vo is site pr rhe to bhi mujhe koi dikkt nahi h..
    Kyuki hm bandhte nahi h ek dusre ko..
    jate jate ek ghazal suna jata hu…

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  22. Shiv pandit

    ye tasallii hai ki hai.n naashaad sab
    mai.n akelaa hii nahii.n barabaad sab
    [tasallii= satisfaction]
    sab kii Khatir hai yahaa.N sab ajanabii
    aur kahane ko hai.n ghar aabaad sab
    bhuul ke sab ra.njishe.n sab ek hai.n
    mai.n bataauu.N sab ko hogaa yaad sab
    sab ko daavaa-e-vafaa sab ko yaqii.n
    is adakaarii me.n hai.n ustaad sab
    shahar ke haakim kaa ye faramaan hai
    qaid me.n kahalaaye.nge aazaad sab
    chaar lafzo.n me.n kaho jo bhii kaho
    us ko kab furasat sune fariyaad sab
    talKhiyaa.N kaise na ho ashaar me.n
    ham pe jo guzarii hai ham ko yaad sab
    [talKhiyaa.N=bitterness]

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  23. nisha

    Sunk shiv jb aap hi nhi yha to mera kya kam yha shiv ab mai bhi yha nhi aane wali kbhi ye mera last comment hai yha per aur bye to all of you

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  24. Shubham

    Are Yaar Ye Sb Kya Ho Raha H ?Jo Log Kal Tk Muh Bhar Bhar K In Dono Ki Tarif Kr Te The Aj Unhe Bhala Bura Kah Rahe H, Yaar Story Pe Cmnt Karo Logo Par Nahi, Shiv Bhaiya N Nisha Bhabhi Kuch Nahi H Ye Sb, Agar Aap Sacha Pyar Karte Hoto A Se 1000 Sawal Samne Aayenge Or Aap Ko Alag Karna Chahenge, Me Jaanta Hu Aap Sacha Pyar Karete Ho To Yaha Kahne Ki Kya Jarurt Hai, Be Wajah Aap Dono K Bich Galat Fahmiya Paida Ho Jaayengi Yar In Bato Se, Kl Jo Jo Kahte The Aap Khush Raho Aap Khush Raho Wo Aj Aap Pe Sawal Khade Kar Rahe Yaar! !?? Kya Matlab Hai ?, Hum Kon Hote H Aap Ki Lyf Me Interfare Karne Wale, In Bato Pr Shiv Bhaiya Aap Dhyan Mat Do Plsss, Or Bhabhi Se Sacha Pyar Karte Raho, Agar Sub Pyar K Bare A Sa Sochne Lage To Duniya Pr Udasi Cha Jaaegi, Me Jaanta Hu Aap Dono K Pyar Ko Yaar, True Lovers Both Of U,

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  25. Shubham

    Are Bhaiya Or Bhabhi Aap Yaha Se Mat Jao Yaar Plss, Ye Dooniya U Hi Kahti Rahegi, Agar Aap Sacha Pyaar Karte Ho To Lovers Point Se Nahi Ja Sakte, It Is A Bond Warna Fir Dekhlena Aacha Nahi Hoga

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  26. nisha

    Shubham Ji thankyou so much ki apne hmare pyar ko smjha but m air shiv jante hai apna past bhi present bhi future bhi aur shiv mujse inna pyar to hai ki vo agr hme kl ko mummy papa ki vjh she due hona pda to ek dusre se Khushi Khushi honge him bandhenge nhi but hmari mhobbat hmesha kayam rhegi aur hm jante hai ki hme kya krna hai kya nhi aur hmm ye bhi jante hai ki aane wale future me hmari mhobbat bdhegi hmara mukam sirf sadi krna hi nhi aur ghayal Ji ne kha m pike hu aur in SB logo me bolne se ye to nhi yoga ki him dur ho jaenge ya phir hmara pyar km bus ab yhi khte hai ki hme koi smjh nhi skte to him bhi kisi ko nhi smjh skte ha shiv apne muje jindgi di hai mere sath aise hi rhna jaan bus kuch bhi ho jae na to hm ek dusre ko kisi bhi way she bandhege aur na hi hmara pyar km hoga an shiv hm yha nhi aaenge aur apni ek nai duniya bnaenge aur hmesha apne pyar ko uhi mhkaenge ok air an shiv Dono kbhi yha nhi aaenge ok bye to all of you apna khyal rakhna

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  27. mr. ghayal

    mr. shiv ek bat batao yr achi bat h ki miss nisha sub inspector h, kalko unki shadi kisi ache ldke se ho jati h .. tb v to unki jindgi me khusiya ayegi , bo ldka v to unse pyar krega …or kya hoga jate jate miss nisha apse khegi ki me tumhe hmesha dil me bsakar rakhungi , tumhi se pyr kiya h mene ..me tumhe nhi bhulungi ..etc..okk….fir kya kroge ap ….ha ye bhut acha kr rhe ho ap ki unhe apne firse hasna sikhaya unka dard banta or khud ke zakhmo pe v marham lgaya , Par kya ye kam dosti me nhi ho sakta ..dost v to ek dusre ke hamdard hote h ..infect ye aisa rishta h jaha , bhulne ki koi bat hi nhi hoti…yad rakhna or bhul jana to bs in kachhi mohbbto me hota h..dosti me nhi….
    or ek bat kal ko miss nisha ki shadi hui kisi or se .. us tym kya hoga miss nisha ne to ghar basa liya or apko firse bahi chhod diya jaha miss(—) apko chhodkr gyi thi….kya miss nisha apko nhi lgta ki mr. shiv ka v ghar basna chahiye. ? unhe v kisi jeevansathi ke sath umr gujarni chahiye ? jindgi yu hi tanha to nhi gujarti na miss nisha …. jab apki shadi hogi tb apko lgega ki me shiv ko akela chhodkar ja rhi hu.. tb apko v ehsas hoga ki mr. shiv ko v kisi sahare ki jrurt h or bo sahara hoga unki wife…. agar har koi dur ke logo se pyr krke jindgi jine ka shara banane lgte to fir in shadiyo ki jrurt hi kya pdti.. me aane bale kal ko sochkar hi kuc kh rha hu..isliye ap dono ko meri bate buri lag rhi h..or mr. shiv bhag jane se sachai nhi badalti mere dost , yha apke dost apka bhala hi chahte h…tbi bo aisa bol rhe h, or ap unki bato ka bura man rhe ho…….hum apki mohbbt ki bat nhi kr rhe h..apki mohbbt pavitra h or rhegi don’t worry hum to jindgi ki sachai bta rhe the apko..

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  28. irfan ali

    Ohhh nyccc. Mr shiv

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  29. zemal sidd

    To shiv aap k kahne k mtlb h nisha se dur ho hane pr bhi aapka pyar km ni hoga

    Agar aap apne dimag pr zorr dale to kavita ki story pr bhi yhi kha krte th
    Mean jb tk duari ladki ni mil jati aap nisha ko bkaul aapke shiddat se pyar krte rhege

    Ya fir aapko lyf me jitne sahare milegi sb ko aap shudddat se pyar kroge

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  30. zemal sidd

    Shadi kr lo shiv jiii

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  31. Shiv pandit

    Ab jb ap sb kamiya nikalne hi beth gye ho to hzar nikal skte ho..
    koi ni mnzur h…kyuki dad bhi to ap sb hi deya krte the..
    mujhe ek bat bta do…kavita kese gayi ap sb jante h…
    kya uske bad mujhe kisi se muhbbt nahi krni chahiye??
    Nisha ke bare me ap jante h na..kese halat me thi..ap sb ne hi to slah di thi use ki apne purane bf ko chor de..bhul gye..???
    to usne use chorkr mujhse pyar kr liya to kya bura kiya..
    or rhi bat shadi ki,
    to apko kya btaye..ap to bs filme dekhte h..bs ..
    pr hakikt hm jante h…
    nisha or m…jese bhi h khush h..
    dikkt apki nzro ke samne h to h na..
    apke sare svalo ke jvab mere in cmments me h..
    ab nzro ke samne hi nai rhenge…
    or mr. Gayl bhagna use khte h jb m nisha ka hath choru…
    Bs itne din hm muhbbt krte the,ap sb dekhte,pdhte,sunte..
    ab hm apni muhbbt pr prda dal rhe h…
    muhbbt hmesa rhegi hm dono me..jo soche koi..

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  32. Shubham

    Are Shiv Bhaiya Aap Esa Karo Yaha Se Chale Jaao Isse Pahle Ki…, Aap Ko Chale Jaana Chahiye, Or Ha Apna Sacha Pyaar Barkarar Rakhna Bye Bye, Ab Mat Aana, Shayad Aap Samajh Gaye Honge Mere Dil Ki Baat, Gd Luck Nisha Bhabhi N Shiv Bhaiya…

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  33. mr. ghayal

    mr. shiv ….muje mera jawab nhi mila..na hi miss zemal ko, yadi apko itne hi sahare ki jarurat h to shadi kyu nhi kar lete , hum apki mohbbt me kamiya nhi nikal rhe h ..hum to apke bare me soch rhe h, kya shadi ke bad apni wife se mohbbt nhi ki ja skti kya bo sahara nhi hogi..pata nhi apne ankho pr patti bandh rakhi h ya kuc or jo hmari bate buri lg rhi h,… yr aisa to jindgi bhr chlta rhega , aaj dusri h kal teesri mil jyegi ,, fir aap usse pyar kroge,, aap sahare ki bat krte ho to wife se bdkr koi dusra sahara nhi milega apkk…me ye nhi kah rha ki miss nisha ko chhod do, unhe bakhukhi hasate rho unke hamdard bne raho , unse dosti barkarar rakho..par jara jindgi ki sachai ko v to dekho mr. shiv….yaa fir phle v kaha h mene ki miss nisha se hi shadi karlo.., bolo kar sakte ho? ye riti rivaj , samaj …ye sab bahane h mr. shiv.. .

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  34. irfan ali

    Mr shiv apki cmmnts padh ke or baki sab ki cmmnts padh ke me bht kuch kehna chahta hu bt khunga nhi meri bate ap smjh nhi paoge. Vese apne jis cmmnt me apne ap ko.fasad ki jadh kha h us cmmnts ki har bat ka ans h mere pass bt me kisi se bhs nhi krna chahta
    Lekin ha. Jo mr ghayal b, kha h ki sachcha pyr ek bar hota h kisi had tk thik bhi. H or nhi bhi.
    Mr shiv agr apki shdi ho sakti h miss nisha se to kr kyi nhi lete
    Ya sirf tum dono tym pass kr rhe ho
    I m really really sorry agr kuch glt keh diya. Ho
    Agr real. Love h to i pray to god ki aap jrur mile
    Sab kuch. Khuda pr nhi chho D’s ha jata
    Vo hmari wish tbhi puri krta h jb hm koshish krte h

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  35. irfan ali

    Ya mr ghayal u r ri8
    Agr sahara chahiye to shadi kro shadi ke bad bhi wife se love ho jaega. Ya. Wife se love. Nhi hota h
    Kbhi bhi present ko nhi future ko soch kr love kro
    N miss nisha. I know ki ap shiv se bht pyr krti ho bt agr tm mil.nhi skte to love ka yhi end kr do nhi to ek bar khusi mil gyi h tmko sayad age mile na mile
    Soorrry

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  36. Rachit

    πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  37. muskan sharma

    ha shaadi KR leni chahiye nhi to fir shiv ka dil tootega .. fir unhe koi hamdard chahiye hoga jise WO …fir se siddat se pyar krenge…

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  38. irfan ali

    Haaa akhir siddat wala love bhi zinda rkhna h
    Mr shiv itna love kroge to wife ke liye jgh nhi bachegi dil me
    -:)

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  39. Shiv pandit

    Acchi bat h ji…ab ap sare mere liye soch rhe h to acchi bat h..
    to fesla ho jaye fir aaj..
    m nisha se shadi nahi karunga..
    Ye bat m sbke samne kh rha hu..
    sayad apko lgta h ki m nisha ko mkkhn lgata rhta hu,,ya use uljhaye rkhta hu..
    aaj apke samne kh diya h..
    vo bhi pdh legi..or fir tay kr legi ki use kya krna h..ab to thik h.ab khush ho ap…

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  40. irfan ali

    Mr shiv hm ye nhi keh rhe ki ap nisha se shadi na kro
    Hm to chahte h ki jo love kre use uska love jarur mile
    Ap keh rhe ho ki apki sadi nhi ho skti nisha se bt koshish krni chahiye
    Kya. Pta us khuda ko bhi manzur ho jae
    Kya pta. Vo chahta ho ki koshidh kro to milaunga. Otherwise nhi
    Me chahta hu ki ap koshish kro

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  41. anup

    Mr.gyal ye rriti riwajya ye samaz koi bahana nhi hote
    Hume sabko saath leke chalna hota hai
    Thoda time to lagta hi hai
    Sabki kuch n kuch problem hoti hai sayad wo dono bhi sahi wqt ka intzar kr rhe ho

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  42. Shiv pandit

    Mene ek kahani likhi thi yahi pr..do khyalchee…
    ap pdhe use…
    usme mene likha tha mere chacha ne love mrige ki thi..unhe aj tk ghr me nahi ane diya dada ji ne..
    vo mere real chacha h..
    surt me hi rhte h..
    meri maa khti h ki tum surt me mil liya kro unse..kyuki dada ji or mere papa unse bat nahi krte..kyuki unhone jisse shadi ki..vo ldki hmare samaj se nahi thi…
    kya m vahi glti karu
    kya m bhi apne apno se juda ho jau..??
    esa m nahi kr skta..
    to kya kru….

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  43. muskan sharma

    toh shiv nisha jii bhi to apki h toh apko unhe bhi nhi chodna chahiye …ap apni baaton mai khud he ulajh rhe ho…

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  44. irfan ali

    Yaa. Thjk kha bt koshis krke dekho me yhi. Khunga
    U willll tryyy

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  45. Shiv pandit

    Chlo ab btata hu kuch din phle ki bat…
    nisha ne mujhe is site se no. Lekr call kiya…meri dost bni..mujhe apni jindgi ki tklif batai..
    mene ap sb ko btai..yad h na vo story…jiska title tha dilli…
    fir hm dost bn gye..
    m bs uska dimag bdlna chahta tha..
    Kyuki hr wqt roti rhti thi vo..
    nisha ki bhabhi mujhse khti ki shiv apse bat krke ye khush rhti h..
    mene kaha acchi bat h ye to..
    fir jb vo hnsne lgi to mene jane ki izazt mangi..
    to nisha ne khud ko nuksan pahuchane ki kosis ki..mujhe pta chla,mene danta use,to rone lgi..khne lgi ki kue se nikal kr khdde me dalke ja rhe ho…
    m kya krta…jise hnsna sikhaya use rula rha tha..to mene kaha thik h m nahi jata..
    fir dosti itni ghri ho gayi ki pyar ho gya..
    m nisha se bina bat ke ldne lga,hzar bahane bnane lga,bat nai krta..
    Pr m jitna dur jata utna vo mere se pyar jyada krti..
    akhir m bhi insan hu,koi itna pyar kre to kese dur rh skta hu..
    pr mere halat m janta tha..mene nisha ko sari bat bta di..ki m shadi nahi kr skta..
    to vo khti ki iski jrurt bhi nahi h..
    kyuki hmare milne ko shadi nahi khte,shadi ka mtlb h ki hmare ghr parivar mile..
    pr esa ho nahi skta..to hm dono ne fesla kiya ki hm bina shadi ke khush rhenge..
    to kya glt kiya yar..
    nisha ki shadi jb hogi tb mujhe sbse jyada khushi hogi..hm bat bhi krte h is bare me..
    kyuki hm rone vali muhbbt nai krte..
    hm ek dusre ko khush krna jante h..
    ap log films dekhkr ye sb kh rhe ki pyar kr liya ab shadi kr lo..
    apki glti nahi h..hero ese hi krte h..
    pr m hero nahi hu yar..
    or kya kahu..

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  46. ananya

    Wah. ……kya baat h shiv g…..!!

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  47. Shiv pandit

    Muskan kin bato me uljh rha hu m??btana to..

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  48. nisha

    Ek bat khu shiv hmari jindgi hm jante hai hm kya kr rhe hai aur kya krenge ye log nhi smjhte ye to be sadi sadi ga rhe hai says inko malum nhi ki hm ek shi wkt ka intjar kr rhe hai air dekhna ek din vo bhi wkt aaega inko hmare pyar per naaj hoga bhut

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  49. muskan sharma

    to fir to ye pyar nhi pagalpan h…ap to galat msg convey KR rhe ho pyar bhale he kisi se bhi siddat se KR lo …agar shaadi nhi hui to kya hua dil to ek he rhega…mana ap dono mature ho ..capable ho n bht jyada understanding ho but ye to mohabbat nhi hui …koshish kre bhi nhi ki shaadi ho..bss ek soch bna le ki aisa hoga …dhoondhne se toh bhagwan bhi mil jate h ye toh pyar he h…n ye apki lyf h apka decision h Jo krna chaho WO kro…but aise wrong msg Mt do …aree Jo saccha pyar krte h WO ek din ek ho he jate h…

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  50. nisha

    Him na to ek dusre ko uljha rhe hai blki aap log khud hmare pyar ko dekhkr uljh rhe ho aur shiv ab ye mera last cmmment hai an m nhi a rhi hai apki marji hai aap ko MNA nhi krti kyoki yha surf log bndhn dekhker pyar smjhte hai ye sadi ko target bna rhe hai to ye home nhi smjh skte aur hm inka ye target ok

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  51. muskan sharma

    shiv jii na shaadi kroge bht pyar bhi na dono ka koi future h saath mai uljhe hua rishta h pura

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  52. ananya

    Hlo…..muskan an nisha babhi

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  53. Shiv pandit

    Or aj ap bdi izzat de rhe h mujhe… H na…
    Khte ho ki nisha chli jayegi to m kisi or ko shara bnaunga..fir koi or..fir koi or….
    kitne shahare bnaye mene..btayega koi..???
    mene kavita se muhbbt ki…vo chli gayi..use mene khud bheja,,jo nahi janta vo shukrana pdh kr aaye..
    fir fiza krke koi ldki isi site se mujhse judi..vo mujhse pyar krne lgi..m kya krta..ldai jhgda kiya uske sath..or vo bura bta kr chlti bni..mene kabhi kisi se uski shikayt nahi ki..ap kya jane is bat ko ki vo mere kitne pese lekr gayi thi..kher koi nai..or apko btau mene fiza ki kabhi avaz tk nahi suni..kyuki vo sms se hi bat krti thi..mene yakin kiya..kyuki mujhe kuch lena thodi tha usse..
    Kher koi nai..fir isi site se nisha judi mujhse..mujhse kai ldkiya bat krti h..
    kuch ke nam likhu m??
    chlo aj bat izzt ki aai h to likh deta hu..
    nikki,shenm,khushi,sneha,ena,mmta,spna,shahnaz,rahat,or ke mujhe yad nahi..ldke bhi bahut h bat krte h…
    pr mene sbko kaha ki ap meri bhn bn jao..or m bacche lbz ke bina unse bat bhi nahi krta..kyu??
    kyuki janta hu hr koi tuta h,jra sa smbhala to tutkr bikhr na jaye..
    Pr mene nisha ko chuna..jante h kyu..??
    kyuki usse sbse jyada jrurt thi..
    nisha se puchna ki uski life me kya kya nahi hua..vo btayegi..
    mene use chuna kyuki m janta tha ki m kisi ek ko jina sikha dunga to lire kamyab ho jayegi..
    Or aj nisha khush h..

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  54. Shiv pandit

    Maf krna apke or mere khyal ab km milne lge h..kyuki ap khte kuch or h or krte kuch or..
    kese???
    m btau..
    yaha sbne kisi se pyar kiya h..pr shadi kis kis ne ki h apne lover ke sath..??btana to..
    dekhte h kitne log h..

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  55. mr. ghayal

    mr. shiv or miss nisha… ap dono ka pyar suban allah..miss zemal ne sirf ek hi line me bat khtm krdi ki ap shadi krlo …or pta h apki shadi se sbse jyada khusi miss kavita ko hogi,, kyuki unka shiv bhatak rha h , or miss nisha ki shadi se apko khusi hogi….
    or ek bat batau miss nisha aap khudgarz ban rhi ho kyuki mr. shiv bhut ache insan h ,, mana ap par bhut kuc buri biti h par is tym par mr. shiv ko sahi advise de ki bo kisi se shadi krle ..umr badti ja rhi h unki…apko nhi lgta miss nisha ki unko kisi jeevansathi ki jrurt h…or reality to yhi h na ki ek tym ke bad aapki shadi to kisi or se ho jyegi ..fir mr. shiv akele rh jayenge . or mr. shiv mene apki stries padi h .ap bhut acha likhte ho or nek dil insan ho…par jindgi ki sachai par ap parda dal rhe ho isliye apse kha humne ki ap shadi krlo

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  56. Ritesh

    kaafi stry h shiv j yha p love n phir marriage

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  57. muskan sharma

    hlo ananya

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  58. Shiv pandit

    Mene story ki bat nahi ki h ritesh bhai…ye to m bhi janta hu..ki h..
    mene bhi likhi h..smart ldki or bevkuf ldke vali…
    pr m in slaah karo se puch rha hu,apne muhbbt to ki hogi,tbhi yaha is site pe h..to shadi kyu nahi ki fir lvr ke sath??
    ye pucha h..
    or ab koi frk nahi pdta yar ritesh…
    Ki koi kya khta h..bs m sbke svalo ke jvab de rha hu..varna khenge ki shiv bina jvab diye chla gya…
    koi or sval h to kahe..

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  59. muskan sharma

    izzat Ke toh BT he nhi h shiv …mana mohabbat kbhi bhi ,khi bhi..aur bht baar ho skti h iska mtlab ye to nhi Ke bss mohabbat he krte rh jao aage koi future he na ho……
    ap bol rhe ho ap koi hero nhi ho …to fir itni filmy stories likhi he kyu h apne.. apke zor zor se kch kh dene se ap shi nhi ho jayenge n siddat se mohabbat ek ya 2 br hoti …h br br nhi shiv …ap koi hero nhi ho ye apne he bola h to aisi filmy baatein Mt kro ap…

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  60. anup

    sive aur nisha mai ye kahunga
    Ki ap ek baar apne ghar jarur is riste k liye baat kre puri siddat se puri lagan se
    Agar sacche lovers ho to daro mat
    Age jakar kahi ye n lage ki humne kosis nhi ki

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  61. muskan sharma

    aur kapde aur insano mai fark hota h shiv ji

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  62. sheenam

    khatavar smjhegi dunya tjhe, itni bhi sfai na de…
    y mjhe apne hi sunaya tha bhai, ap ek dusre ko smjhte h, ek dusre ke halat smjhte h, bs itna hi kafi h…mere hisab se bhai.. baki kisi se kch na kahe, koi kch ni smjhega.

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  63. Shiv pandit

    Sbke apne apne khyal h muskan…kl tk mujhe puchte the sb ki muhbbt kese krni chahiye,aj mujhe slaah de rhe h sb..koi ni..
    chlo apne apne khyal rkh le..
    khush rhiye hmesha…khuda hafiz

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  64. Shiv pandit

    Muskan m jor se nahi bol rha …or na mujhe ap logo se kuch mnvana h..ap sahi kuch or dekhte ho,m sahi kuch or dekhta hu..bs..
    chlo m khta hu..m nisha se shadi nahi karunga…
    ab btao mujhe usse pyar krna chiye ya nahi…
    uske sath rista rkhu ya nahi..
    or is bat ko nisha tum bhi pdhlo…
    jo khna h yahi sbke samne kaho..
    or ap sb mujhe btao m kya kru??

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  65. nisha

    Dekho shiv m kh chuki thi ki m is site per nhi aaungi but apne kha to aa gai bat ye hai ki ye log hme aur hmare halat ko nhi smjhenge pyar krne ka mtlb ye nhi hota ki sadi hi kro ek bat btao kya krishn aur Radha ki sadi hui kya nhi hui na to phir ye btao ki unka pyar km ho gya kya nhi na mera to yhi jwab h ki muje target pura nhi krna yha we ok aur shiv agr ek bar bhi aagr apko ye lagta hai ki ye log apko shi rasta dikha rhe hai to koi nhi bus m much nhi khungi apki life hai apni ok agr meri mhobbat schi lge to please in logo ki bato me na aakr hm Jo halat h ek dusre ko smjhenge air hmesha pyar krenge krte hai aur krte rhenge

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  66. nisha

    Aur shiv I love you so much aur ab m nhi aaungi yha ye last comment h mera

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  67. Shiv pandit

    Chlo chlte h nisha yaha se…..hm jese bevkufo ki yaha koi jarurt nahi h….
    nisha m tumhare sath hu..hmesa..
    m hu to muskan rhegi hmesa tere hoto pr nisha…
    ab se tum mujhe poem sunana or m tumhe kahaniya sunaunga…
    sacchi muhbbt ki..true love story…
    chlo dhundhte h apne jese log…
    good by sbko…or aaj bolta hu ..
    phle kabhi nahi bola na apko…
    thanks sunil gupta ji…

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  68. ena

    O ohhΒ‘ Kya kr rhe ho sab yarΒ‘ ? aap sabhi love ko limits or condistion me kyu bound kr rhe h? ye to hmesha se hi uncondisationly raha h na…fir ? fir aap sabhi kyu ise shaadi me bound kr rhe h? jruri to nhi na ki sabhi ek hi trike se pyar kre…or sbhi ka njariya ek hi ho ki apne pyar ko shaadi k mukam tk pahuchana..Β‘ hr koi apne pyar ko apne mukam tk pahuchana chahta h..koi shaadi krke to koi zindgi bhr dil me apne pyar krne wale ko rkhkr…h na? to fir pyar ko limits me kyu bound krna..pyar h ye ..koi agreement thodi h. isliye pyar me koi mukam ho ya na ho pr pyar hona hi Mayne rkhta h…soo plzz kisi k pyar ko aese bound mt kro …

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  69. sheenam

    mai apse bat nhi kr rhi hu to iska mtlb y nhi h k mai apke sath ni hu… ap mere bhai h, mai bi apke sath hu bhai..

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  70. Angel Simmy Chopra

    Wooowww awesome thoughts

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  71. simmi thakur

    Vaise aap aap itne sad Kyu hi nisha ji or shiv jii

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  72. simmi thakur

    Per main nahi maanti aisa yaar jab aap Kisi se pyar karte ho toh use ek naam do ek rishta do pyar toh har rishte Mein hota hai or un rishto ke naam bhi hote hai Jo is samaj Mein sab jaante hai or sab maante hai.. Agar ye ek lovers point hai yaha indian love stories Ki baar Ki jaaye toh yaha ek samaj bhi hai log hai is desh Ki ek sabhyata hai Jo yeh nahi kehti Ki pyar karo toh bass use dil Mein rakhne ke liye oro ka toh nahi pata per apna pata hai Ki pyar karna hai toh use aise karo Ki samne wala ungali uthana toh bahot door Ki baar hai najar utha ke bhi na dekhe yeh sochke Ki galat kaam kiya hai main is baat se aitraaz nahi karti Ki pyar Mein sharte ho ya na ho in sab ka koi matlab nahi hai per pyar Mein rishta hona or uska ek naam hona Jo hamara samaj bhi saweekar kare vo hona bahot zaruri hai..

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  73. nikki jssl

    o ho…! j sab kya ho gya.. yr ab j to kisi ki khud ki marzi hai ki wo apni lyf kaise jeena chahta hai.. waise b shiv bhai nd nisha g bacche to hai ni ki unhe samjhaya jaye.. Wo apni marzi se aise jee rahe hain..

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  74. nikki jssl

    wo shadi kare ya na je unka nijji faisla hai.. Waise b har kisi ka apna hi tarika hai pyar karne ka n use define karne ka.. Hum kisi ko galat nai kah sakte yr

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  75. Sohail Ashraf

    shame on u guys..
    kisi ki mohabbat ko mjak bna rhe ho yaar.. don’t do this..
    mai manta hu k ye jeene k sahare hi h bt jis sahare ki wjah se do zindagiyaa khush ho wo koi galat nhi h.. khush rahne ka haq sabhi ko h,, or uske liye wajah koi matter nhi krta.. so pls don’t do this..

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  76. simmi thakur

    Jab do log pyar Mein ho or vo khush rehne Ki wajah dhundne lage toh vo pyar nahi hota vo samjhota hai.. And Nisha or shiv ise Abhi nahi sMjhenge vo tab samjhenge jab unhe is baat ka ehsaa hoga Ki kash humne ek baar koshish Ki hoti apne rishte ko ek naam dene Ki ek respect dene Ki society ke samne is rishte ko accept karne Ki yess we are true lovers and now hum shadi shuda hai

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  77. Sohail Ashraf

    Usne Mujhse Poocha…..??
    Kya Hadd Hai Teri Mohabbat Ki….?
    ……..Main Kaha…….Suno Aey Jaana…
    Mohabbat Ki Koi Hadd Nahi Hoti…Jo Haddon Me Reh Kar Ki Jaaye…
    Wo Mohbbat Nahi Hoti…

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  78. Shiwani

    Very nice Sohail ji…

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  79. anup

    Ishq Mein Dil Ne Bahut Kaam Nikala Apna;
    Sach Hai, Milta Hai Kahaan, Chahne Wala Apna;
    Main Uthta Hun Sahare Ke Liye Uske;
    Reh Na Geya Ho Raah Mein, Kahin Dard Apna!

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  80. khushi

    Bhai aapko or bhabhi ko pta he aapko kya krna he….or aaj ye sb Jo kh rhe he…vo unki apni soch he…jo kbhi aapki kahaniyo ki tarif krte nhi thkte the ..unme se kuch long ye sb kh rhe he Jo aapk dost hone ka dava krte the…..or un sbse ye khna chahungi .. ..ki pyar ka mzak n bnaye..agr phli mohhbt nhi he. .to kya kisiko pyar nhi ho skta or vo bahut khush nasib hote he jinhe dubara koi Etna pyar krne wala mile
    Or Mr ghayl aap apna elaz krvao…..or dil me Jo ye sb bate betha rkhi he unhe dur kro…jb aapki life me koi asa aayega Jo aapki tklifo ko smzega…tb aapko sayd ye smz aaye ..or I wish jldi asa ho
    Qki jb tk hm apne aap me shi soch bhi bnate..tb tk koi hme nhi smz pata.
    Qki jb tk hm apne aapse pyar krna nhi sikhte ..hme kisi se or kisiko hmse pyar nhi hota… Me manti hu pyar he to sadi bhi krna chahiye. ..pr jese pyar jindgi ka hissa he vese hi sadi bhi ek hissa hi he
    Pr he to ek hissa hi n
    Or plzz aap sb apni soch ko thoda bdlo
    Qki hiski tariff krte nhi thkte the …aaj unk liye hi ye sb kh rhe ho…shiv Bhaiya aap sbk dost he or unka acha chate ho
    Pr agr dost smze hi n..to vo dosti nhi
    Or Jo pyar ko smzte he vo sayd muze smzenge
    Or Bhai or bhabhi I wish sb acha hoga
    Or aapk dost aapk sath he..or aapki sisters bhi .

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  81. mr. ghayal

    Ok miss khushi…mene apne galti man li h pyar kisi se v kitni hi bar ho sakta h, me galat tha …mr. shiv or miss nisha ka pyar sahi h,.. I’m sorry …. jo kuc glt kaha tha uske liye, mr.shiv & nisha….or baki sab v plzz unhe galat mat kaho, unhe jo karna h krne do unki life h ,.

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  82. ALONE (S.M)

    Waoooo..
    Verry nice poem…

    Ap dono hamesa aise hi chirag jalate raho…

    Aur zindagi ko rosan krte raho….
    Ap hamesa sath raho….

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  83. chandni

    nyc story

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  84. Naina

    New story nhi aa rhi kya????
    admin ji
    Jo purane story or poem ko upload kar rhe ho

    humari poem ko upload hote hote
    sadiya bit jati thi

    hahahaha

    by the way

    osmmmmmm lineeeee
    apki har poem kamal ki hoti h
    shiv pandit

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  85. Vinod ald

    Naina shiv pandit ki har story bahut hi achi hoti h

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  86. Naina

    hajiii
    Maine inke bhut sare story n poem read kiye h
    bhut hi vadhiya h

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