Kavi Wo Uski Sacrifice Samjhega – Kalpita

DOSTO ESE TO BAHAT SI STORIES PADHIHE MENE.KUCH STORIES ITNI ACHHI LAGI KI ANKHO ME AASU V AAGAYE.ME KOI FAMOUS POET YA WRITTER NEHI HU.LEKIN ME KABITA LIKHTI HU APNI MOTHER TONGUE ME.AAJ EK STORY LIKHNE KO DIL KIAA.UMEED HE YE SABKO ACHHA LAGEGA AUR SAYAD IS STORY ME KISI KISI KO APNI ZINDAGI KI THODI JHALAK DIKHAI DE. YE STORY EK ESI LADKI KE BAREME HE JISE KOI NEHI SAMAJH PAATA THA.SAYAD WO KHUD V NEHI.LEKIN HALAT NE USE KUCH ESE MAZBOOR KIA KI USKI ZINDAGI KI RUKH HI BADALGAYI. PANKHUDIO PE OS KI TARAH SWACHH OR SAFF DIL KI THI PRATIKSHYA.KHUDA NE NA JANE KIS JAHAN KI NOOR JOD KE USE BANAYA THA DEKHNE WALA THODI DER THEHER JATA.MASUM SA EK DIL V THA USKE PASS.ROZ SUBHAH UTHKE MAA PAPA KE PER CHUA KARKE WO SCHOOL KE LIYE NIKALTI THI.USKE PARENTS USE BAHAT PYAR KARTE THE.LEKIN USKE MAN ME EK HI DUKH THA

OR WO YE THA KI USNE BACHPAN SE APNE KISI V RISTEDAR SE NEHI MILI THI.PAR WO JAHAN REHTI THI WAHAN KE LOG USE BAHAT PYAR KARTE THE.ISILIYE WO IS BAREME JYADA NEHI SOCHTI THI.UMAR BADI HONE KE SAATH USKE MAN ME YE SAWAL BADHTA HI GAYA.USE AKELA REHNA BAHAT PASAND THA. USKE PAPA KA TRANSPAR HO GAYA EK DUSRE JAGAH OR USE V APNA SCHOOL CHANGE KARNA PADA.TABWO HIGH SCHOOL ME PADHTI TI THI.WO BAHAT SANT SWAVAB KI THI PAR SAB LOGO SE ACHHE SE MILTI THI.TO NAYE SCHOOL ME USE KOI PROBLEM NEHI HUI.SCHOOL JATE HI USKE BAHAT SE DOST HO GAYE.SCHOOL JANE KE DO TIN DIN BAAD EK DIN JAB USNE CLASSME ENTRY KI USKI NAZR EK NAYE LADKEPAR PADA.USNE SOCHA KI SAYAD YE NEYA LADKA HE.USNE APNE DOST SE PUCHHA TO USNE KAHA KI YE TO PEHLE SE HI PADHTA HE.USKA NAAM NIHAR HE. BAS ABSENT THA KUCH DIN.PRATIKSHYA NE ITNI ATTENTION NEHI DIA IS BAAT KO.WO LADKA BAHAT JYADA HANDSOME THA TO CLASS ME LADKIAN USE BAAT KARNE KI KOSIS KARTE THE.PAR WO SIRF APNE DOSTO SE BATE KARTATHA.

ESE HI DO CHAR DIN BIT GAYE.LEKIN AVI TAK PRATIKSHYA KI US LADKE SE BAAT NEHI HUI THI.EK DIN PRATIKSHYA KI EK SAHELI NE USE EK JARURI BAAT BATENE KE LIYE BULAYA.USNE KAHA TUMHE PATA HE NIHAR PRIYA KO CHUP CHUPKE DEKHTA HE.PRIYA USKI DOST THI JO NIHAR KO BAHAT PASAND KARTI THI.PAR PRATIKSHYA NE IS BAAT PE DHYAN NEHI DIA.KYUKI WO JANTI THI KI WO ESA NEHI HE.KUCH IN BAAD NIHAR NE PARATIKSHYA SE USKA NAAM PUCHHA.PAR PATA NEHI KYU WO BAHAT GHABRA KAR BAAT KAR RAHA THA.PRATIKHSYA NE APNA NAAM BATAYA.PAR USE LADKO SE DOSTI KARNA YADA PASAND NEHHI THA.TO WO USSE JYADA BAAT NEHI KARTI THI.KUCH DINO BAAD PRATIKSHYA KO ESA LAGA KI SAYAD NIHAR KUCH BADAL GAYA HE.MATLAB PEHLE WO CHUP CHUP REHTA THA.PAR AVI WO BAHAT FREE HONE LAGA HE.WO SABSE BAATE KARNE LAGA THA.PAR TAB V PRATIKSHYA NE USE DHYAN NEHI DIA.EK DIN CLASS ME TEACHER NEHI THI.PRATIKSHYA APNE DOSTO SE BAAT KAR RAHI THI.TAVI USKI NAZAR NIHAR PAR PADI.WO USKI TARAH CHUP CHUP KE DEKH RAHA THA.USE KUCH AJIB LAGA TO SNE APNE EK DOST KO ESE BITHA DIYA JESE NIHAR SAKAL USE NA DIKHE.

KUCH DIN BAAD NIHAR PURA BADAL GAYA.WO OR V JYADA FREE HONE LAGA.EK BAAR USNE PRATIKSHYA KO BAATO HI BAATO ME MAJAK KARNE LAGA.PAR PRATIKSHYA KO YE SAB ACHHA NEHI LAGTA THA.LEKIN USKI BAATO SE USE GUSSA TO AATA THA.PAR FIR V WO JO PUCHTA THA USKA JAWAB DETI THI.FINNAL EXAM KHATAM HONE KE BAAD.SCHOOL KICHHUTI HO GAYI.JAB TAK SCHOOL KHULA TAB TAK NIHAR KE BARE ME PRATIKSHYA BHUL HI GAYI THI.SCHOOL KHOLNE KE DIN PRATIKSHYA APNE DOSTO SE BATE KARNE LAGI.UNKI TEACHER AAYI OR KAHA KI AAJ FIRST AY HE TO AAJ PADHAI NEHI HOGI OR ATTENDANCE LEKE CHALI GAYI.SAB STUENTS APNE APNE DOSTO KE SATH BAAT KAR RAHE THE.TAVI LUNCH BELL BAJ GAYA.SAB KHANA KHANE KE LIYE JAANE LAGE.SAB EK SAATH NIKAL RAHE TH TO BAHAR JANE KE LIYE PRATIKSHYA KO RASTA NEHI MILA TO WO USKI SAHELIO KE SATH PICHE KHADI HUI THI.TAB NIHAR EK DUM SE PRATIKSHYA KE KARIB AAGAYA.TO PRATIKSHYA CHAK GAYI.

USE YE SAB AJIB LAGA OR GUSS V AAYA.PAR NIHAR NE JAB BATAYA KI BHID KI BAJAH SE YE HUA TO USNE USE MAAF KAR DIYA.APNI SAHELIO SE USNE MAZAK ME KAHA AARE YE TO PRIYA KE PASS AAYA THA GALTI SE MARE PASS AA GAYA.ISE SAB HASNE LAGE.US DIN SE PRATIKSHYA KO KUCH ALAG SA LAG RAHA TH PAR WO SAJH NEHI PAATI THI KYU.PAR TABSE JAB V NIHAR USSE BAAT KARTA THA USE ALAG LAG RAHA THA.PRIYA US DIN SE KUCH JYADA KHUS LAG RAHI THI.YE BAAT PRATIKSHYA KO USNE BATAYA TO WO USE SUPPORT KARNE LAGI.TAB NIHARSE PRATIKSHYA KI JYADA BAAT NEHI HOTI THI.AB PRATIKSHYA PURE DUM SE PRIYA KO NIHAR SE MILANE LAG GAYITHI.KAVI KABHAR NIHAR NOTES BAGERA MAANG TA THA.PARPEHLE JESI JYADA BAAT NEHI HOTI THI UNME.EK DIN DONO ME JHAGDA HUA TAB SE DONO NE BILKUL BAAT NEHI KIAA.FIR V PRIYAKOWO SUPPORT KARTITHI.PAR USE YE LAGA KI PEHLE PRIYA KO PUCHLE KI KYA WO NIHAR KO LIKE KARTI HE.KYU KI YE TO USNE KHUL KE NEHI BATAYA THA.

EK DIN USNE PRATIKSHYA KO SAB BATA DIAA.YE SUN KAR WOKHUS HO GAYI OR PRIYA KO HUG V KIA.PAR AB WO GHAR LAUTI USE KUCH ALAG LAGA.WO KUCH SAD FEEL KAR RAHI THI.PAR KYU YE USE NEHI PATA THA.US DIN SE WO DISTURBED REHNE LAGI.USI DARAN PRATIKSHYA KO LAGNE LAGA THA KI SAYAD NIHAR PRIYA KO LIKE KARTA HE.ISILIYE USE BAAT NEHI KAR RAHA HE.LEKIN WO YE BHUL GAYI KI USNE KHUD HI BAAT BAND KAR DI THI.USE AVI BURA LAGNE LAGA THA.PAR WO SAMAJH NEHI PATI THI KYU.JAB PRIYA NIHAR KE BARE ME KEHTI THI WO DHYAN NEHI DETI THI.PRATIKSHYA KI EK SABSE ACHHI SAHELI THI.USKA NAAM THA SRIYA.PRATIKSHYA USE APNE DIL KI HAR BAAT BATA TI THI.WO DONO SABSE ACHHE DOST THE.NIHAR KA EK DOST THA.USKA NAAM THA SUBH.WO PRATIKSHYA KA V DOST THA.WO SRIYA KO LIKE KARTATHA.OR SRIYA V USSELIKE KARTI THI.IN DINO PRATIKSHYA NIHAR KE BARE ME SOCHNE LAGITHI.EK DIN USNE SRIYA KO KAHA KI WO SUBH SE PUCHE NIHAR KIS SE LIKE KARTA HE.SUBH PRATIKSHYA KE BACHPAN KA DOST THA.OR USE ACHE SE JANTA THA.

ISILIYE USNE MAZAK ME KAHA KI NIHAR,PRIYA KO LIKE KARTA HE.KYUKI WO DEKHNA CHAHTA THA KI PRATIKSHYA KE DIL ME KYA HE.USKI BAAT SUN KAR PRTIKSHYA UPSET HO GAYI.SRIYA OR SUBH KO PATA CHAL GAYA KI WO NIHAR KELIYE KCH FEEL KARNE LAGI HE.FIR SUBH NE USHE SACH BAAT BATAYA.USNE KAHA NIHAR NE MUJHE BATAYA HE WO KISE LIKE KARTA HE.WO SIRF OR SIRF TUMHE LIKE KARTA HE.FIR USNE SARI BAATE BATAYI NIHAR KE BARE ME.PRATIKSHYA KO LAGA KI USE ABNIHAR SE JYADA NARAJ NEHI HONA CHAHIYE.USE BAAT KARNA CHAHIYE.YE BAAT USNE SUBH KO BATAYA.USNE YE BAAT NIHAR KO BATTAYA.FIR UN DONO ME DIRECT BAAT NEHI HUI.JO V HOTI THI SIRF SUBH KE JARIYE HOTI THI.SRIYA OR SUBH NE SOCH LIYA UN DONO KO MILANE KO.EK DIN JAB PRATIKSHYA NE CLASS ME ENTRY KIA TO USNE DEKHA KI CLASS KI HAR SEAT PACK THI BAS EK HI SEAT KHALI THI OR WO THI NIHAR KE PASS WALI.WO YE DEKH KAR BAHT KHUS HO GAYI.PAR USKE MAN ME GHABRAHAT V THI.JAB TEACHER AAGAYI TO USE WAHAN BETHNA PADA.PAR USE YE SAB NEYA LAG RAHA THA.SAYAD YE SAB USKE LIYE PEHLI BAAR THA.TEACHER JANE KE BAAD NIHAR NE USSE BAAT SURU KI.

FIR USNE V BAAT KIA.SCHOOL CHHUTI HONE KI BELL BAJTEHI NIHAR NE PRATIKSHYA KE BAG ME EKCHOCOLATE KE SAATH EKLETTER RAKH DIA.USNE BYE BOLA OR CHALA GAYA.PRATIKSHYA GHAR JATE HI WO LETTER PADHNE LAGI.USME NIHAR NE USE KAHA THA KI AGAR WO USE LIKE KARTI HE TO WO SCHOOL KE PRAYER HALL ME AA JAYE.PRATIKSHYA NEXT MORNING WHAHAN CHALI GAYI.PAR NIHAR WAHAN PE NEHI THA .KUCH DER BAAT WO WAHAN AAYAOR BAHAR SE HI CHALA GAYA.PRATIKSHYA V CLASS ME CHALI GAYI.NIHAR NE CLASS ME USSE KAHA KI USSE APNA JAWAB MIL GAYA.TABSE UN DONO ME BAHAT BAAT HONE LAGI.EK DIN NIHAR NE PRATIKSHYA KO PROPOSE KIA OR USNE V HAAN KAR DIYA.WO DONO HI BAHAT KHUS THE.PAR PRIYA PRATIKSHYA SE NARAJ REHNE LAGI.DUSRO KI TARAH WO LOG GHANTO GHUMNE NEHI JATE THE.NAHI FILM PARK YE SAB JATE THE.SIRF CLASS ME BAAT KARNA KAFI THA UNKE LIYE.NIHAR PRATIKSHYA SE BAHAT JYADA PYAR KARTA THA.EK DIN KISI BAAT KO LEKE DONO ME JHAGDA HO GAYA.

PRATIKSHYA NARAJ HOKE CHALI GAYI.NIHAR NE BAHAT KOSIS KI USE MANANE KI OR AKHIR ME WO MAAN GAYI.KUCH DIN ACHHE SE BITA PAR FIR NA JANE KISKI NAJAR LAG GAYI UNME FIR JHAGDA HUA.PAR IS BAAR KUCH JYADA HI NARAJTHE WO EK DUSRE SE.ITNA KI UNHONE 6 MAHINE TAK BAAT NEHI KIA.PAR NIHAR USE CHOD KAR NEHI REH SAKTA THA.TOUSNE BAAT KARNEKI KOSIS KI .EK DIN KISINE USE BATAYA KI PRATIKSHYA KISI OR LADKE KE SATH GHUM RAHI THI.WO GUSSA HOKE PRATIKSHYA KO DATNE LAGA.PAR USE IS BARE ME KUCH PATA NEHI THA.JAB CLASS KUCH DOST IS BARE ME BAAT KARNE LAGE TO PRATIKSHYA KO ITNA GUSS AAYA KI USNE UN LOGO KO BAHAT D OR NIHAR KO V KYU KI YE SAB JHUTH THA OR USNE USKA VAROSA NEHI KIA.US DIN PRATIKSHYA BAHAT ROI.ITNA UPSET THI KI USNE KISI SE BAAT NEHIKIA.NIHAR KOLAGA KI USE BAHAT BADI GALTI HO GAYI.USNE PRATIKSHYA KO EK LETTER LIKHA.PAR TAB TAK PRATIKSHYA KA DI THOA THODA TUT GAYA THA.USE LAGNE LAGA KINIHAR USE KAVI SAMAJH NEHI PAAYEGA.PAR WO USE BAHT PYAR KARTI THI TO USNE USE MAAF KARDIA. UNME FIRSE BAAT HONE LAGI.

USKE SATH CHOTE MOTE NOKJHOKV.IN SAB ME EK SAAL GUJAR GAYA.UN DONO KA PYAR OR V JYADA GEHRA HONE LAGA THA.PAR KEHTE HE NA SACHI MOHABBAT KO LAKH IMTEHAN SE GUJARNA PADTA HE.EK DIN UNKE CLASS ME EK NAYA LADKA AAYA.USKA NAM SARTHAK THA.WO THODA ACHA PADHTA THA.PRATIKSHYA USE JYADA DHYAN NEHI DIA.PRATIKSHYA CLASS ME SABSE ACHHITHIPADHAIME.TO USNE USE DOSTI KARLI.PAR PRATIKSHYA KA DIL BAHAT MASUM THA TO SARTHAK SE USNE SACHI DOSTI KIA THA.WO SIRF DOST SAMAJH KAR BAAT KARNRE LAGI.ISBEECH KUCH LADKO NE NIHAR KO KAHA KI PRATIKSHYA SARTHAK SE JYADA MIL RAHI HE.NIHAR NE UNKA BISWASS NEHI KIA.PAR EK DIN USNE DEKHA KI PRATIKSHYA SARTHAKSEBAAT KARRAHI THI.USE BAHAT GUSSA AAYA.PAR USNE KUCHH NEHI KAHA.KUCH DIN BAAD SARTHAK NE PRATIKSHYA SE KAHA KI AB ME DO IN BAAD CHALA JAUNGA.TO LAST TIME MUJHSE GARDEN ME MILNA.DUSRE DIN PRATIKSHYA APNE EK DOST KE SATH GARDEN ME GAYI.SARTHAK NE USE EK CHOCOLATE DIA OR BYE BOLKE CHALA GAYA.US IN KE BAAD WO SCHOOL NEHI AAYA

KYU KI USKE FATHER KI TRANSPER HO GAYA THA TO WO DUSRE SEHER CHALA GAYA THA.USKE JANE KE EK DIN BAAD JAB PRATIKSHYA SRIYA KE SATH SCHOOL GAYI TAB USNE CLASS ME NIHAR KO AKELA DEKHA KYU KI US DIN WO LOG THODI JALDI AA GAYE THE.PRATIKSHYA NIHAR KE LIYE USKI FAVOURITE CHOCOLATE LAYI THI.WO NIHAR KE PASS GAYI OR BAAT KIA.PAR NIHAR TO ITNA NARAJ THA KI USNE KUCH SOCHA NA SAMJHA BAS US PAR HAATH UTHA DIYA.OR USE KEHNE LAGA TUM SE MUJHE YE UMEED NEHI THI.FIR WO CHALA GAYA.PRATIKSHYA KUCH OR KEHNE KI HALAT ME NEHI THI USKI AANKHO SE AASU BEHTE JAA RAHE THE.USE IS BAAT KI GAM NEHI THI KI NIHAR NE USPAR HAAT UTHAYA DUKH IS BAAT KA THA KI USNE US PAR VAROSA NEHI KIA.WO DIN VAR RONE LAGI.NA THIK SE KHAYA NA HI KISISE BAAT KI.BAS NIHAR KE BAREME SOCHKE RONE LAGI.WO SOCHNE LAGI KYA KAMI THIMERE PYAR ME JO USNE MERA VAROSA NEHI KIA.EK DO IN WO SCHOOL NEHI GAYI.

NIHAR US DIN KE BAAD SE APNE APSE NAZAR NEHI MILA PATA THA.PRATIKSHYA KI DOSTO NE USE BAHAT DATA.APNE KIE PAR BAHAT PACHHTA RAHATHA OR HAR HAL ME PRATIKSHYA SE MILNA CHAHTA THA.KYU KI JO V HO WO USSE BAHAT PYAR KARTA THA OR USKE AASU NEHI DEKHSAKTATHA.KUCH DIN BAAD PRATIKSHYA SCHOOL AAYI.PAR USNE NIHAR SE BAAT NEHI KI.NIHAR NE BAHAT KOSIS KI PAR KUCH NEHI HUA.EK IN PRATIKSHYA NE CLASS ME ENTRY KI TO DEKHA KOI NEHI HE.WO CLASS KI WINDOW KE PASS KHAI HO GAYI.KUCH TIME BAA NIHAR AAYA.USNE JALDI SE JAA KAR PRATIKSHYA KA HAAT PAKAD LIYA OR MAFI MANGE LAGA.LEKIN JO CHOT PRATIKSHYA KE DIL KO LAGA THA KYA WO KAVI MIT PAYEGA?LEKIN ESA HUA KYU KI PRATIKSHYA USSE SACHA PYAR KARTITHI.USNE USE MAF KARDIYA.NIHAR NE USE HUG KIYA OR BOLA YE AAS MERI BAJAH SE HE NA TUMSE ME WAADA KARTA HU ZINDAGI BHAR KAVI TUMHARI ANKHOME AASU NEHI AANE DUNGA.USNE PRATIKSHYA KE AASU POCHLIYA.IS MATTER KE BAAD UN ONO KA PYAR OR V GEHRA HO GAYA.KHAS KARKE NIHAR KA.

WO AB PRATIKSHYA SE KAI JYADA PYAR KARNE LAGATHA.USKI KHUSI KE LIYE SAB KUCH KARTA THA.PRATIKSHA V KHUS REHNE LAGI THI.DONO NE EK SATH KAI SARI SAPNE DEKH LIYATHA.SAMAYA GUJAR NE KE SATH UNKI FINAL EXAM KE DIN PASS AA RAHE THE.EK DIN UNKE SCHOOL ME KOI FUNCTION HONE WALA THA.SAB KAM ME LAGE THE.US DIN PRATIKSHYA KUCH UPSET THI.PAR NIHAR KE DHYAN ME NEHI AAYA YE BAAT.BO BAHT BUSY THA.PRATIKSHYA USE BAT KARNE JAB USKE PASS GAYI USI SAMAY CLASS KI EK LADKI USKO DEKH KAR NIHAR KE PASS ANE LAGI.YE DEKH KAR PRATIKSHYA KO BAHAT BURA LAGA.KYUKIWO BECH BEECH ME USE DEKH RAHI THI OR NIHAR KE PASS KHADI HO RAHI THI.JAB ANJANE ME NIHAR NE USKI HATH PAKAD LIYATAB PRATIKSHYA KHUD KO ROK NA SAKI OR WAHAN SE CHALI GAYI.NIHAR KO YE PATA NEHI THA.USNE SRIYA KO KAHA KI WO JAKE PRATIKSHYA SE PCHE WO KAL KITNE BAJE AAYEGI.JAB SRIYA PRATIKSHYA KE PASS GAYI WO BAHAT GUSSE ME THI TO USNE KAHA ME JAB V AAU YA NA AAU USE KYA?USE TO KOI OR MIL GAYA HE.TO MUJHE KYU PUCH RAHA HE.SRIYA NE NIHAR KO YE BATAYA.USNE ITNA SERIOUSLY NEHI LIA OR USE MAJAK SAMJHA.USNE KAHA ME V NEHI AAUNGA.PRATIKSHYA NE KAHA WO AAYE YA NA AAYE MUJHE KOI PHARAK NEHI PADTA.OR WO GHAR CHALI GAYI.US DIN USE BAHAT RONA AA RAHA THA.USNE DECIDE KIA WO NIHAR SE KAVI BAAT NEHI KAREGI.

IS BAAR YE USKI SACHI WALI DECISION THI.FINAL EXAM PASS AA RAHA THA TO WO GHAR PE REHKE PADHNE LAGI.WO KISI SE NEHI MILI.KISI SE BAAT NEHI KI.SCHOOL ME NEHI GAYI.WO HAMESA PADHTI REHTI THI OR AKELE ME ROTI REHTI THI.JAB WO SCHOOL NEHI AAYI TO NIHAR NE USE CALL KIYA TO USNE KAHA TUM MUJHE CALL MAT KARO.NIHAR NE SOCHA SAYAD WO PADHAI ME BUSY HE.ISILIYE USNE V CALL KIYA.PRATIKSHYA AB BAHAT AKELI MEHSUS KAR RAHI THI.ISILIYE WO NIHAR KO BHUL NE KI KOSIS KARNE LAGI.FINAL EXAM KA TIME AAYA.PRATIKSHYA KA EXAM ACHHA HUA.PAR EXAM KE TIME PE V USNE KISI DOST SE BAAT NEHI KIA.EXAM KHATAM HO GAYA.RESULT KE BAAD WO COLLEGE JANE WALI THI.RESULT NIKAL NE ME 1 MONTH BAKI THA.USI DARAN PRATIKSHYA KE FAMILY NE GAON JANE KA FAISLA KIA.PRATIKSHYA BAHAT KHUS HO GAYI.KYU KI IS SE PEHLE WO BACHPAN ME HI GAON GAYI THI OR KAVI NEHI.WO SABSE ILNE KE LIYE BAHAT INTERESTED THI.SAB LOG GAON CHALE GAYE.WAHAN PRITIKSHYA APNE BAHAT SARE RISTEDARO SE MILI PEHLI BAAR.

APNE BHAI BEHNO KE SATH BAHAT GHUMI.BAHAT MAJA KIYA.SAB NE USE BAHAT PYAR KIA.USE PEHLI BAAR LAGA KI USKE APNE LOG USE KITNA PYAR KARTE HE.WO KHS THI.KUCH DIN BAAD WO SABKE SAATH GUMNE GAYI.USE PEHLI BAAR LAGA KI USNE PEHLI BAAR JINDEGI KO KHULKE JIAA.KUCH DIN BAAD NIHAR KA EK SMS AAYA.PAR PRTIKSHYA NE AVOID KAR DIYA.ESE HI SARE CALL MSG KO AVOID KARDIYA.NIHAR KO LAGA WO GALAT KAR RAHI HE.PAR PRATIKSHYA KE DIL PE JO CHOT LAGI THI USE WO SAMAJH HI NEHI PAYA.EK DIN PRATKSHYA NE APNE GHAR WALO KO KEHTE SUNA KI JAB PRATIKSHYA BADI HO JAYEGI USE ACHHE GHAR ME SHADI KARENGE.KUCH LOGONE KAHE KI PRATIKSHYA ITNI SUNDAR HE USE BAHAT ACHHE LADKE MILENGE.USKI MAMMY NE KAHA KI AGAR KOI LADKA PRATIKSHYA KI TARAF DEKHEGA TO USKE BHAI US LADKE KI HALAT KHARAB KARDENGE.YESAB SUNKAR PRATIKSHYA KO TENSON HONE LAGI.USE LAGA AGAR NIHAR KEBARE ME SABKO PATA CHALEGA TAB KYA HOGA?USNE NIHAR KO BHULNE KA FAISLA LIYA.KYU KI WO NIHAR SE BAHAT PYAR KARTI THI OR USE DARD NEHIDENA CHAHTI THI.

USNE NIHAR SE KEH DIYA MUJHE CHO MUJHE BHUL JAO.PAR NIHAR NE CALL SMS BAND NEHI KIA.EK DIN BAHAT GUSSE SE PRATIKSHYA NE USE KAHA TUM MUJHE FREE KYU NEHICHODTE?NIHAR V GUSSEME THA TO USNE KAHA JAB MATLAB PURA HO GAYA MJHE BHULGAYI.PRATIKSHYA NE PHONE CUT KIYA OR USE BAAT KARNABILKL BAND KARDIYA.FIR V NIHAR KA CALL ATA RAHA KYU KI USNE USKA SATH NA CHODNE KA WADA KIYA THA.PAR PRTIKSHYA NE USE BAAT NEHI KIA. DOSTO YAHAN PAR ME APSE YE SAWAL PUCHNA CHAHTI HU KYA PRATIKSHYA GALAT THI.KYA USNE NIHAR KE BARE ME SOCH KAR GALAT KIA.PLZ APNA VIEW MUJHE JARUR SEND KARE USKE BAAD KAHANI KO AAGE BADHAYENGE.

 

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    1. apko nehi lagta ki pratikshya ne jitna saha he nihar ko un sabka ehsas hona chahiye.agar wo sacha pyar karta he to wo baar baar use dard kyu deta he?har bar pratikshya hi kyu maaf kare use?kya use hak nehi he khus rehne ka?aap ek baar apne aapko pratikshya ki jagah pe rakhke dekho.fir samjhenge ki uski dilme kya bitti he.

  2. Bur mai yahi kahana chaunga ki sacche dilwale kabhi har nahi mante kuki ye bat ek saccha dilwala hi jante hai aur dikha do apne pyar ki takat ko so prosit now for your lavely life best of luck aur ek bat aur pyar ke mamle me dil ke sath sath dimak ka bhi kahana man liya karo

  3. dekhiye pratiksha hum apke dil ka hal samaj sakte hai apne use kyu choda bas usne majak me kisi ladki se bat ki hath pakda itni si bat pe apne use choda ap bharose ki bat karte ho tab kaha gaya tha apka bharosa apne ek ladke ke sath itni close hogai thi hamesha us ladke se bat karti park me milti close thi to kya nihar ke andar dil nahi agar waha koi aur hota to chod deta apko nafrat karta but fir bhi har bar usine apse mafi mangi kyunki saccha pyar karta h vo apse pratiksha ji hum agee ki story janna chahenge kya ap hume personally batasakte ho

    1. Dekhiye me pratikshya nehi hu.ye baas ek soch he meri.Matlab ye real love story nehi he.so itna serious mat ho.sirf me sabki soch ke bare me janna chahti hu.or me sabki sochke saath is story kon aage badhaungi.

  4. Pratiksha ji aapne jo nihar ke ache ke liye dilse faisla li he wo faisla aapka bilkul galat nhi he par ap jis dar se nihar se duri bana rahe ho or sath me apka wo sara dil me chupi huyi dard vara felings sabkuch ek bar khul ke nihar ke samne jakar kaho sabkuch kaho koi bat mat chupao or aage ki faisla dono hi milke lo or aisa faisla lo jo sabke valai ke liye ho or jo faisla ap dono loge us faisla me dono hi khush honge I think ek bar to ap dono milke apke shadi ki jo bat ghar pe chal raha he use lekar apka bhai ka dar wo sare bate kaho or ek antim faisla lo taki future me ap dono ko bite bato se pachtana na pade.

    1. Thanks to understand the feelings of pratikshya.May be she will do something which is suitable for both of them.bt i’m not pratikshya.It’s just astory yaar

    1. Dekhiye ye real love story nehi he.Bas ek soch or creation he meri.Actually me poem or stories likhti hu.Is baar socha sabki soch ko leke story likhu.so thanks for contribute ur soch

  5. Kalpita ji acha to ap bas ye janna chahati thi ki kiska soch kis hadtak real he or kesa he wao ye test to badiya laga or ha to apne avitak ka coment me kiska coment strong paya he? Kya me ye jan skta hu?

  6. rohan thiis iis not real story bhaii ap bhi na pagal ho kalpita kisi pratiksha nihar aur sabki life ke bare me itni gehrai se thodina jansakte haii this is just a story

  7. Ha hum kisika vi personal bate gehrayi se vi jan skte he sirf unse dosti or reletion me sacha biswash honi chahiye mtlb mera vi aise dost he jo chahe jitna vi gehrai ki bat ho wo hume share krte he Qki wo jante he me unka biswash jan nikal jaye pr kavi todunga nhi.
    And raha ye fake story than its ok mujhe to beleve huwa tha pr ab jan gaya its a just story.

  8. Aarya prince dost Ha hum kisika vi personal bate gehrayi se vi jan skte he sirf unse dosti or reletion me sacha biswash honi chahiye mtlb mera vi aise dost he jo chahe jitna vi gehrai ki bat ho wo hume share krte he Qki wo jante he me unka biswash jan nikal jaye pr kavi todunga nhi.
    And raha ye fake story than its ok mujhe to beleve huwa tha pr ab jan gaya its a just story.

  9. Bilkul sahi kaha kalpita ji its ur thought..
    Aarya prince ji ye sach ki dunia me ab achai se jyada gandgi bad gayi he pr isi dunia me kuch log or unka soch itni sachi or pyari he ki ap ye jisdin jan paoge usdin apko vi acha lagega.

    1. Thik kaha aapne.so i request u don’t be so angry & don’t be so sad.enjoy ur life always.ok good bless u.

  10. hey r u mad nt that bas hume apni jindagi aur kuch dhokebaaz berehem insano se nafrat apse thodina hume to bohot accha laga story padke aur sach batae to apke batane ke bad hume pata chala ki ye fake story hai but ur thinkg is very very nice ur a great girl

  11. hum is dunia ke har kism ke insan se wakhif haii jante haii hum kuch log aise bhi haii jo sabka bhala chahte hai gandagi mitana chahte haii but kuch ghatiya log unhe kamyab hone nahi dete

  12. Ha aarya prince ji bina dil me jazbat huwe jo story likhega uska story me wo pyar wali felings kavi nhi aa skta dost pyar wali word ne mujhe vi barbad kr diya he pr me uske liye pyar word ko galat nhi samajhta me to bas itna samajh gaya ki jo judai me pyar ko dil ki gehrai se jan skte he wo pyar me ek huwa insan kavi samajh nhi payega..
    Qki judai ki tadap or ek ek bund aasu humare dil me unke liye or gehrai se pyar badata he..
    So bro. Ap khud ko or apni soch ko humesa sacha hi rakho chahe dunia wale tmhe jitni vi takhlif Q na de par tum humesa sbke liye pyar or pyar hi dena dekhna ap or apka soch kitna badal jayega.

  13. aree gussa kis bat ka bas dunia ki halat aas pas ki halat dekhke udas hojate haii garib ko ek roti e hisse ke liye kai dur tak bhuke pet chalna padta haii par amir bas apna khaya khana piglane dur tak chalta haii kamjor aur kamjor hota jaraha hai aur takatwar aur pese wala samajme nahi ata itna bhed bhav kyu

  14. Aarya prince ji wao sachme aapne jo amir or garib ki bate kahi wo acha laga its true par hum itna vi takatwar nhi ki ise mita ske ha hum logo ko ek sache desh ki nagarik hone ki nate sahi rah sahi bate samjha skte dikha skte.

  15. apne jesa likha haii hum vese hii haii rohan ap humse pehli bar bat karrahe ho hume jante nahi warna ap samajpate

  16. Aarya prince ji me aapko galat nhi samajh raha hu me janta hu ap avi ka jo dunia ka bura halat he unse tang hoke wo sb buraiya dekhke ye sb keh rahe ho hena bro. Apse bate krke acha laga.

  17. ap neta logope ke bharose jioge to jite hi rehjaoge apne apko badalna chahiye insan ko aur apne aspas ke insan ko acchi seekh deni chahiye ek ko acchi soch denge vo ek jake 2 ko dega vo do jake 4 ko denge aise hi samaj sawrega ap aam insan kuch bhi karsakta h

  18. Thanks Aarya ji.Thanks Rohan ji.Thanks both of you to read my story & to give me your suggestions.Thanks a lot.I will definately ask for ur suggestion when i will need to complete the story.Once again all the best both of you for the future

  19. Ha janta hu dost ek aam aadmi kuch vi kr skta he par aap,hum or 2,4 log agr milke apke kehne ke hisap se savi ko achi samaj sudhar gyan denge to kya wovi humara tarah dusro ko wo gyan bat te firenge aise insan is 2014 ki yug me syd hi mil payega.apki jo soch he ye soch ko himmat dene wala insan jis din is dunia me paida hoga syd us din ye dharti swarg ho jayega.
    Avi ka jyadatar aam insan vi yehi soch rakhte he ki apna kam banta vad me jaye desh.

  20. thanx kyu kalpiita har ek insan is dunia me ek dusre ki madad ke liye hi bana haii chahe vo kesi bhi help ho thanx fir bhi thanx agar koi insan dusre insan ki help na karsme to vo insan nahi aur thanx bolna chahiye bolne se samne wale insanke dil me hamare liye izzat badti haii aur hum apki story cplt karne me kese help kare

  21. Pratikshya ne jo kiya wo uski jagah sahi tha bhle hi nihar ko uske bare me kuch malum ho ya nahi. Agar pratikshya ki jagah koi aur hota to wo bhi yahi karta.

  22. Love story ka end happyness ke sath hi hona chahiye sorrow ke sath nahi.

    Exam ke bad pratikshya gaov aayi thi.
    Result aane ke bad pratikshya apni marksheet lane k bahane fir sahar aati hai aur apni sabhi dosto se milti hai par nihar se nahi. Shreya ne nihar ko pratikshya k bare me bataya ki yaha aayi hui h tab nihar turant pratikshya se milne chala jata hai. Pratikshya nihar se bat nahi karna chahati thi aur us se bachne ki koshis karti h lekin nihar us se milke hi rahta hai. Nihar pratikshya se puchta hai wo kyo us se bat nahi karti kyo milna nahi chahti hai. Kya uska pyar jhutha tha. Tab pratikshya nihar ko saari bat batati hai jo gaov me hui uski shadi ki aur bhaiyo dwara marne wali bat.

    Tab nihar samjh jata hai ki kyo pratikshya use avoid kar rahi thi.
    Uske bad nihar bhi pratikshaya ke sath uske gaov aa jata hai.
    Pratishya use apne ghar le jati hai sabhi se uska introductioo karwati hai. Nihar ke bare me jankar ki wo pratikshaya se pyar karta hai ghar k log use marne lag jata hai. Pratikshya use bachane ki puri koshish karti hai. Lekin asamrth rahti hai. Nihar ko itna marte hai ki pratikshya yah dekh na payi aur behosh ho jati hai. Fir sab log pratikshya ko sambhale lag jate hai aur nihar ko mar mar kar bhga dete hai. Aur use dhamki bhi dete hai ki agar wo fir pratikshya ke sath paya gaya to wo use jaan se mar denge. Pratikshya ke ghar wale pratikshya ko hosh me late hai. Aur use bhi nihar se milne ke liye mana kar dete hai. Aur pratikshya ka ghar se aana jana bhi kar dete hai. Tab se pratikshya udas rahne lagti hai thik se kisi se bat karti thi aur na thik se khana khati thi. Har samay uske chehare par udasi rahti thi.
    Kuch dino bad pratikshya ke ghar walo ko pata chalta hai ki nihar ne sui-side karne ki kosish ki thi lekin wo bach jata hai. Jab pratikshya ko is bat ka pata chalta hai to uska ro ro ke bura hal ho jata hai.
    Tab pratikshya ki halat dekh kar pratikshya ke ghar wale uske pyar ko samjh jate hai. Aur raji-khusi unki shadi ke liye taiyar ho jate

    [ kalpita ji mujhe aapki story bahut achi lagi. Story complete karne ke liye mene apni kalpana likhi hai. Agar aap ko story puri karne me kaam aaye to mujhe bahut acha lagega. Mujhe story ke next part ka intzaar hai. Jab story complete ho jaye to mujh mere e-mail address ([email protected]) par jarur bataye.

    1. Thanks pankaj ji aapki help ke liye.apne jo likha wo bahat achha tha or mujhe apni story complete karne me jarur madad karega.jab story khatm hoga to me definately apko send karungi

  23. Pankaj bro. Kya bat he…aapka story ka har line acha he par bich me kuch or imtahan hoti jo aksar pyar me hota he or last me thoda aalag hota to story ka end me maja aata. Fir vi yaha se vi thoda idea le skte he thanks bro. Kalpita ji ki help krne ke liye..

  24. ye story bahut acchi hai kalpita.
    lekin stroy main ladki ne jo end main kiya wo usko nahi karna chahiye tha.kyuki aapne hi likha hai sache pyar ko bahut pareshaniyo ka samna karna padta hai or ye unme se ek pareshaani thi.

  25. Sabse 1st question? to kalpita ji se h-ki nihar ne pratikshya se sabse pahele name kyou pucha yeh to bilkul galat h na kyouki ek class k students ko ek dusre ka naam to pata chal hi jata h .. Jese ki pratikshya ko nihar ka naam pata chal gaya…..and ………next story k bare m——–ki pratikshya un girls me se ek h jo ki apni galti nahi manti bo sirf apni galtiyo ko chupane ki kosish karti h or hamesha galti dusro par thopti h… Jo nihar ko usspar sakh huaa bo bhi pratikshya ki hi bajahe se huaa use,,,,,,,,,iss story ko mene sahi se pada h detail me kafi lamba padega me sort cut m batata hoon ki jab pratikshya sarthak ko ek acche friend ki bajahe se milne gyi to use nihar ko bata dena tha or jab sarthak ratikshya ka itna close friend bangaya tha to sarthak nihar ka friend kyou nahi bna,, iska matlab prtikshaya ne sarthak ko nihar k::::::…………..aap samagh rahe hoge sayad meri baat ko

  26. S.k.g. Dost sbse pehle to ek bat ye he ki kisika nam puchna koi galat bat nhi he..
    Ha mana ki class me pata chal hi jata he par nihar ko pratikshya se nam puchne ke bahane dosti krni thi unke close jana tha simple koi vi ladka agr kisi nayi ladki ko like krta he to wo kisi na kisi bahana se unse dosti kr lete he and pratikshy jab sarthak se as a friend ke hisap se milne ja rahi thi tb unko is bat ehsas na tha ki unke nihar unko daut karenge..
    Qki nihar unse pyar krte the so pyar me daut ye to ho hi nhi skta..
    Ha agr s.k.g dost ye sb me nihar or pratikshy ji kahi vi thodi vi galat the to normal bat he love story me to acha se jyada galat hi galat hoke hi pyar ko apni manjil milta he mtlb imtihan.
    S.k.g dost aap pratikshy ji ki next part 2 read kriye sb samajh jaoge end me to sb kuch happy ho gaya mtlb unka love story ka happy ending ho gaya.

  27. Sorry r rathor ji yeh sab sirf story h, sahi kaha aapne par real m yeh story hoti to kabhi happy end eska nahi hota yeh to pakka h,…………..!

  28. Hello Kalpita g….
    maaf karna mene shayad der kardi aapki story read karne me… to m pahle hi bata du aapko kalpita g… ki agar m story padhu to m sawaal zarur karti hu….
    to is first part pe b mere zahan.me kuchh sawaal aaye h..

  29. to abhi m kuchh sawaal puchhungi … aapko sahi lage to jawaab dena plz… ok
    pahle m.ye baat clear kardu ki mene abhi tak next part read nahi kia h… so mera sawaal isi part se related hoga.. theek h g

  30. to mera pahla sawaal…
    kya pyaar me dono insanon ka chehra khoobsurat hona zaruri h… ?
    .
    dusra:- aapne story ki starting me kaha ki Pratiksha k papa ka transfer ho gya to isi wazah se school chng ho gya… to uske purane frnds b chhoot gye… or aapne khud ye baat add ki h k sare nye frnds bane uske…. to Shubh kahan se aa gya jo bachpan se jaanta tha usey…. I think dis is like a biggest mistake… u done
    .
    kher… next question h..

  31. Bindu ji aapko shayad second part jarur padhna chahiye next question se pahle aur ye story age imaginary hai

  32. ok to next question h…
    ek hi class me rahne k bawazood b Nihar ko ye baat pata hi nahi chali ki Sarthak Pratiksha k bst frnd bn chuka h… hw it can possible yr… jo log pyaar me ho… atleast dost b ho to b… wo to chhoti se chhoti baat share karte h aapas me… to ye kese chhupa rah gya… this is second mistake I can say… sorry Kalpita g

  33. n the last most important question … aapne is pure part me… sachche pyaar pe focus kiya h… or mujhe siwaye galatfemiyon k kuchh nazr hi ni aaya… sachche pyaar me vishwas or understanding hoti h… lakin yahan to na nihar samjhta huya nazr aya na hi pratiksha….
    ho sakta h mere sawaal aapko bure lage… lakin
    mene read ki h to… jo mene samjha… wo to yahi sab tha
    or pratiksha Nihaar ki fikar kr usey chhodne ka fesla le rahi h… kuchh baat bhai nahi.. coz wo to exams se pahle hi usey chhodne ka atal fesla le chuki thi

  34. o my God.. o my God… itne sare sawaal bindu… dhatt teri.. !!!
    ek part read kiya to ye haal ho gya mera… to next part tak kya hoga
    .
    pahli baar h… ki mujhe kisi story me itne sare sawaal puchhne ki zarurat padhi… really sorry Kalpita g… but kya kru…. mene read kr dali

  35. arey sry re Avi… really sorry m itna bol gyi ki… aapko sun hi na pai… ab next part padhungi to next question… pakka.. 😉

  36. Are koi bat nahi bindu ji
    Apne koi galat fault nahi nikale hai

    Abhi kalpita ji younger writer hai
    So abhi in barikiyon par focuse na kar imagination par focused ki thi

    Pk ji koi question punchna tha

  37. pk g taang to ni khichne wale aap meri… aapne sawaal.me.. 😉
    .
    vese puchhiye .. agar m layak hui to zarur jawaab dungi… puchhiye aap..

  38. or haan Avi g… sabhne itni tareef ki thi to mujhe laga ki kuchh jyada hi khaas hoga… lakin esa kuchh huya nahi… mere sath

  39. @Avi g… I think jab tak mere in sawalon.ka jawaab ni mil.jata to mera next part padhne me koi interest ni banega… agar usme ye kaniyaan puri ho jayen.. to manu m… lakin esa hoga nahi… kyunki pahli baat to ye ki wo likha ja chuka h… n dusri ye ki… wo aage ki story hogi… na ki is part ki kamion.ko darust kiya gya hoga usme
    .
    khair… tc gud night

  40. lgta h miss bindu aapne love kiya nhi h ab tak..
    so aapke 1st que ka ans ye h ki pyar hone ke liye khoobsurat chehre ki nhi balki ek wajah ki jrurt hoti h . fir bo wajah chahe khoobsurati ho ya sadgi ya kuc or. . . khoobsurti to bas dil chori hone ka jariya h ,..jis shakhs se ek bar pyar ho jaye fir usse acha duniya me koi or nhi lgta. …

  41. To Bindu ji apke sawalo ka mere kabiliyat or age ke hisab se answer dene ki kosis karti hu
    1st ans-Apne puchha pyar ke chehra jaruri he kya mere khayal se pyar ke liye agar chehere ki jarurat hoti to Raadha ji to gori thi or kanha ji sawre to kese raadhaa unki deewani thi?????to pyar dil se hota he chehre se nehi
    2nd ans-pratiksha ke papa ka transfer hua or wo high school me padh rahi thi or rahi baat shubh ki to jese pratiksha ne sheher change kia tha wese hi ho sakta he shubh ne bhi pehle se hi city change kia hoga mene kaha bachpan se jaanta tha to ho sakta he na unke ghar ke paas rehta hoga mene ye to nehi kaha ki wo bachpan me ek hi school me the
    3rd ans-pehli baat story me sarthak pratiksha ka bst frnd ban gaya ye kahin v nehi likhi he bas likha he pratiksha use dost samajh ke baat karti thi isiliye nihar ne kuch nehi kia par uski umar ko najar me rakhte hue ye likha he ki jab usne pratiksha ko sarthak ke sath dekha use gussa aaya
    last ans-jese ki hum jaante he pratiksha or nihar dono hi teenager he dono me pyar ki gehrai ka utna maturity nehi tha or age k saath wo pyar ko samajhne lage but usse pehle wo jo galat phemi or jo v jhagda tha unki umar ko dekhte hue ye to hoga hi na
    umeed he Bindu ji aapko mere jawab me se apne sawalo ka jawab mila hoga

  42. Mr. Ghayal ji bindu ji ne yahi to. Question kiya tha Jo aap kar rahe ho.

    Aur han ans kalpita ji hi deti to better tha

    Par rahi yahan question ki bat to

    Yar ye imaginary story hai so ye koi jaruri vali bat nahi ye khubsurti ki bat bad casually kahi gai hai

    Jaise movie me simply ek beautiful actress ko lead role dete hai

  43. bo nhi sa skti rachit… 🙁
    me aaj v usse utni hi mohobbt karta hu isliye nhi ki koi or nhi mili par isliye ki usse mohbbt krne se fursat hi nhi mili 😉

  44. oooh mr.ghayal tum to Aashiqui wo bhiii 2015 ke awsm…..h
    koi bhiii pata looooo esay h 😉 goriiii hii ladkiii patana mr.ghayal
    kaaliii ladkiii kooo dekh ke feeling nhiii aati 🙂 🙂

  45. rachit .. kya batau yaar
    aisa jhakm diya h
    jo na fir bharega .
    har haseen chehre se
    ab ye dil darega .
    hum to jaan dekar tumpe mar mite the
    sunlo aye haseeno
    ye humse ab na hoga 🙂
    .
    .par kya kru yaar Dil h ki manta nhi
    uske
    Raseele honth
    Chhalakte gaal
    Mastani chaal
    bura kr deti h haal 😉
    Katil adaa
    zalim haya
    mere khuda .
    oh mere khuda
    tu jo kahe to taro me tuje lekar chalu
    tu jo kahe to kadmo me unhe la daldu
    seene se chhupa ke ye badan kardu gulabi
    chehra choomke aa mita du ye betabi
    .
    .
    .
    .
    .
    .
    .
    are hum to jaan dekar
    tumpe mar mite hain
    kon pyar tumse itna krega 😉 😉 😉

  46. kyaaa baat hai mr.ghayal aswm likhaaa
    bas rassele honth galat likh diya ab itnii raat what’sapp se kese kiss kru yr… 😉
    aur phele baate yaad krke aacha lgta hai naaa mr.ghayal

  47. @Kalpita g
    mere sawaalon ko jawaab milne ki wajaye.. aapke jawaab ne mere sawaal or b bhada diye… apne mujhe radha-krishan k prem ki example d… arey yr…. wo mujhe pata h… m to aapki story ko dekh ye baat puchh rahi thi.. b’coz aapki story me ladki-ladka dono hi khubsurat liye gye h
    n ek baat or Krishna g bhale saamwre the… lakin esa suna h mene ki.. wo sanwle hote huye b attractive bahut the
    khair…
    or dusri baat apne Shubh or Pratiksha k frndshp ko leke jo explanation d h na.. itni explanation se to dusri story bn jaye… yr… ese confusion.wale rishte ka kya fayda… jise explain karna padhe… haan
    n aapne kaha ki Sarthak or Pratiksha they r just frnds no best frnd.. what means of that… kuchh farak nikla kya… baat to wahin atak gyi ki Nihar kese ni jaan paya dono ki dosti k bare me
    n the next thing… u said… ki wo dono teenagers h thats why misunderstandings are arrising b/w them…. mujhe ye baat hi clear ni hui aapki story me… ki pahle to Pratiksha is baat ko leke dukhi hoti h ki Nihaar ne uspe shak kiya tha… means sacha pyaar karne ka dawa karne wala ladka… us par vishwas tak ni kr paya… usey samjha hi na
    n dusri or khudh party wale din kisi ladki ko nihar ki taraf dekhte huye.. use baat karte huye dekh ye kahti h apni dost ko ki usey koi or mil chuki h…. wow… kya vishwas ki explanation d gyi h
    .
    kahani me mujhe sirf sawaal hi mil rahe h… hr baat ek sawaal khada kr rahi h…

  48. or or or… mene aaj tak jitni b story read ki h… wo chahe yahan ho ya fir kitabon ya news papers me ho…usme story batlane wala h kon… ye saf saf pata chal jata h…
    lakin yahan ye baat b missing h… akhir ye story batane wala character kon h… Pratiksha… ya fir Nihar…. ya fir koi tisra… ???
    kuchh b clear nahi h… agar ladki h to use ye kese pata chala ki Nihar ko uski udasi k bare kuchh pata nahi tha.. jo ladki usey tukar tukar dekh rahi thi.. uske paas aa kr khadi ho gyi… uska hath usne jaanbujh kr nahi… galti se pakda tha…. or agar ye sabhi baten Nihar ne hi pratiksha ko batai thi to in baton ko yahan pr is tarike se vyakat karna galat h… ya to esa likhti aap ki ye baat nihaar ne pratiksha ko baad me batai… to baat b banti
    means totalky uljhi hui c story h…

  49. @Avi g
    aapne kaha ki next part jaan h is story ki… to m to yahi kahungi.. ki makaan ki unchai uski neev pr tiki hoti h… ese hi is story ka next part bhale hi kitna b imotional… ya romantic kyu na ho… uski khasiyat to is first part se hi judi honi h…

  50. n @Mr. ghayal g
    dil ko pyar karne k liye wazah chahiye…. wo pata h mere ko.. mene ye sab sawaal kyu or kis liye puchhe iski explanation dene ki mujhe ab jyada zarurat nahi h

  51. Oye Yaad hai Canteen ki mej kitna hilti thi,
    Mujhe roj lagta tha, kahi uske dupatte pe Chai na gir jaye.
    Adrak ki chai use bhi pasand thi,Mujhe bhi.
    Meri kavitaaye use bhi pasand thi,Mujhe bhi.
    Kitne ghamandi ho tum,kehti thi,phir hasti thi,
    Kohre ke din uski hasi aur bhi khoobsoorat lagti thi.
    Class me mere bagal me baiththi thi,central library mere saath jaati thi,
    aur ye ashoka the great to jaise pen friend ho uska,history vistory sab jaanti thi.

    Ladke use impress karne ke liye cigarrete ke challe banate the,
    wo kehti-ladke itni cigarrere kyu peete hai,
    mai kehta-boss, unke aur cancer ke beech aane wala mai kaun hota hu.

    Uske dil me kya hai yeh kabhi jaan nahi pata tha,
    lekin mere dil me kya hai,iski headlines roj usko milti thi.

    Main usse kehta,kabhi diwali pe hum ek saath ek hi chat pe diye jalaenge.

    Main kehta, kabhi tumhe apne saath rudr prayag le chalunga,
    waha ek chota sa mandir hai,chori se shaadi kar lenge.

    Main kehta,tumhe andaaza hai ,
    meri maa tumhe is laal bindi me dekh ke kitna khush hoki.

    Main kehta,college me koi 10 20 saal lamba course nahi hota kya?
    Saath me admission le lete……

  52. ha yar rachit , purani bate yad krke acha lgta h …
    kese bo naino se chhupkar war karti thi , uski aankho ke teer sidhe mere dil ko ghayal karte the 😉 .. Ek najar muskurakar jab bo palke jhukati thi to jese qayamat aa jati thi,.
    jate jate jab bo lautkar meri baho me aati thi to……
    are yar aise agar tu muje uski yaad dilayega to me us par kavita likh dunga 😛 bo purani yade bhut khoobsurat hain

  53. vese mere kahne ka seedha or saaf mtlb yahi tha ki.. kahani ka mtlb hota h ki bahut sari baton ko kuchh shabdon.me samet kr explane kr dena… jese abhi aapne uper jo kavita jesi story sunai h… usme ye likha h ki
    “..Uske dil me kya hai yeh kabhi jaan nahi pata tha,lekin mere dil me kya hai,iski headlines rojusko milti thi…. jese ki…….. etc etc..
    jo b likha h aage… usme headlines wali baat clear ho gyi..
    bss ese hi kuchh m kahna chah rahi thi

  54. meri maa tumhe is laal bindi me dekh ke kitna khush hogi.Main kehta,college me koi 10 20 saal lamba course nahi hota kya?Saath me admission le lete……

  55. Bindu ji aapke sawal apne jagah thik he
    par aap v to sochiye ki ye meri pehli story thi hindi me ek pehle kosis me mistakes to hongi hi na
    jab ye story mene likhi thi tab mere paas experience nehi tha or ek agar is story ko ab me suru se likhu to kahani kuch alag hi hogi galtio se hi to ham sikhte he na haan ye baat alag he ki agar tab aap hoti or sawal puchhti to sayad tab ki soch ki hisab se me jawab deti
    par ab 1 saal baad us kahani ki soch ko leke sahi sahi jawab dena mere liye to muskil he

  56. or me jo v kahani likhti hu ya poems likhti hu agli bar usko likhu to bilkul alag hoga so
    tab sayad mene nehi socha esa hoga wesa ho sakta he esa kuch v agar sochti to sayad ye story se kam sirf sawal or jawab bhara ek paragraph hota tab mene nehi socha ki ye hoga wo haga bas dil me jo aaya likh diya
    ho sakta he kisiko achha lage kisiko nehi par isi story ki wajah se mujhe or likhne ka hausla mila or dher saare dost v mile
    n sorry ki mujhse aapko satisfactory answer nehi mil paaega kyu ki sab ke dekhne ka tarika to alag hota he na
    n thank u apna view dene ke liye

  57. maafi chahungi Kalpita g… ye baat mere zahan me b h ki ye aapki pahli story h… isi liye kuchh kamiyan rah jana laazmi hota h…
    lakin mene to sabke cmmt me tareefe sun kr ise jitna samjhne ki koshish ki utna hi uljhti gyi…
    bate sab h mere zahan me… lakin m allready itna bol chuki hu ki or kya kahu… ye soch k m ye b na kah pai k aap fresher thi shayad tab… lakin kasam se ye baat mere zahan me thi….
    lakin agar kla ho to kadar mil hi jati h…
    or vese b sachcha mittar wahi hota h aapka jo muh pe burai or peeth k pichhe badhai kre
    .
    kehte h agar aapko apne ander ki kamiyan dur karne ki chaahat ho to apne dushmanon or alochkon ki baton ko kabhi nazar andaz na kro… kyunki unhi se hume khud ki kamiyon ka pata chalta h… jinhe hum sudhaar sake.. so gud luck dear for ur next creation
    .
    plz Plz plz…. meri baton ko leke naraaz mt hona… hum to bss apna kaam karte h… commentry karna aadat h… The lovers Point k readers ki

  58. sach kahun Kalpita g… mene soch rakkha h ki m abhi aapki koi story na padhu… atleast next part b padhne ko man ni huya…. shayad m andaza b na laga paun… aap meri baton se hurt hui ho… lakin plz dear… jo mene kahna chaha usey agar aap writter hone k nate samjhoge to shayad aap mujhe galat na samjho
    .
    n agar aapki agli stories pe b mene esa koi react kr diya to aap sochoge ki ya to tareef karne wale pagal h.. ya fir ye ladki … mgr itne sare tareef karne wale h… wo to ho ni sakte… beshak yahi Bindi pagal h…
    hahaha…

    1. me samajh sakti hu or achha v laga
      kyu ki taarif to mil hi jaaengi per saayd par kamiya samjhane wale aasani se nehi milte so
      me naraj nehi hui aapki baato se
      aap badi he mujhse or mujhe samjhana aapki achhai ka proof he
      or ye apne sahi kaha ki real friend aage burai karke pichhe taarif kare
      or ye baat me khud v maanti hu ki avi mujhe bahat aage jaana he ye to bas suruwat he bas aap jese dost milte rahe to apne goal tak pahunchne me help milegi

  59. Ranjan kumar singh

    Iss site pe pehli Dafa mujhe critical views dekhne ko mil raha hai Jo ki ek writer ke liye bahut hi aham hot a hai…

    Varna to log bash todi so jhoothi each I tareef karke chchod dete hai…

  60. Ranjan kumar singh

    Ek request hai aap dono se yadi aapke paas thodi samay hai to meri poems pe bhi apni tippni kare …

    I will be grateful to both of u for this …
    Ranjan kumar singh

  61. Bindu ji mai aap ko tone nhi mar rha hu
    Aap mere ko galat samajh rhi ho
    Aap well educatied ho mai aur mah kewal ?
    Sorry bindu ji agar aap ko bura lga ho

  62. इश्क़ में कोई खोज नहीं होती,यह हर किसी से हर रोज नहीं होती,अपनी जिंदगी में हमारी मौजूदगी को बेवजह मत समझना,क्योंकि पलके कभी आँखों पर बोझ नहीं होती..!!

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    BINDU AISA DARA MAT KARO YAR HAE SHAKS EK JAISA NAHI HOTA SHYAD KALPITA B AISI LADKI NA HO JO AAPKR BATO KA BURA MANE

  63. Pyar ka mansoon
    Badi Shikayat thi,Maine to bhaiya usse keh diya,
    Tumhari aankhein baatein bahut karti hai,Bak Bak Bak Bak Bak Bak.
    Wo kehti-Jyada Mat bolo,Jis aankhein rooth gayi,tumse katti kar li,us din pata chalega.

    Pyar ke din the,Pyar ki dophare,Pyar ka Monsoon
    Pyar ka january,Pyar ki Sardiyaan.

    Yaar,Kabhi Kabhi lagta hai jaise yeh sardiyaan bas aashiqon ke liye bani hai,.
    Wo shaul me lipti,kajal se saji aankhon se mujhe ek-tak dekhti.
    Thand me kap-kapati ungliyon se garam chai ka pyala aur zor se pakadti.
    Hawa ke har jhonke par thithurti,
    Sard kaapte hothon se garam dhuan nikalti.
    Purani khidki pe khade hoke der tak meri raah dekhti.

    Monalisa se kam kaha thi wo,
    Hasi majak,chedd ke din,Ab guzar gaye the.
    Ab hum hanger se ladayi nai karte the,
    Ab hum dosto ke sath baith ke,
    Mej ke neeche chori se paer ke anghuthe chuaane ki koshish nai karte the.
    Ek dusre ko ULLU keh ke dhakka nahi dete the.

    Lagta tha jaise ki achanak hum bade ho gaye the.
    Main achanak uske sharmeele haathon ki chuan padhne laga tha.
    Mai achanak yeh jaanne laga tha ki,
    Bata ke canvas shoes pehan ke mere darwaaje par sehmi sehmi dastake kiska pata poochti hai.
    Main achanak uski baatuni aankho ki khoobsoorat khamoshiyan padhne laga tha.

    Jaruri bhi tha,aakhir wo khud kuch kehti hi kaha thi.

    Din guzarte gaye,Dil ka rasta lamba tha,to padav bhi badhte gaye.
    2 musafir milte the,
    Kabhi greeting card ki dukan pe,
    Kabhi lote wale ke yaha dahi-jalebi khaate huye,
    Kabhi post-office me stamps lene ke bahane,
    Kabhi raashan ki dukan pe,cheeni lene ke bahane,
    Kabhi black me ticket leke vishal theatre me,balcony ki seat pe.

    Film ke beech me,ek din mere kandhe pe sir rakh ke wo rone lagi,
    Boli phir se ek rishta aaya hai.
    Main sunta raha.
    Interval me maine kaha-Yaar ek bewkoofi bhara idea hai,
    Usne sir utha ke aansuo me nam aankhon se mujhe dekhte huye kaha-
    Tumhre saare ideas bewkoofi ke hi hote hai.

    Maine kaha-Bhaag ke Shaadi kar le,
    Wo kuch second mujhe dekhti rahi.
    Peeche campa-cola wala order ka intezaar kar raha tha.
    Boli-Tumhara yeh aaj tak ka sabse bewkoofi bhara idea hai.

    Boli-Kaathgodaam ki bus 5 baje jaati hai,
    Aur waha se Delhi ki train saade nau(9 30) baje.

    PURI FILM BHI NAHI DEKHNE DI USNE

  64. @Vijay g
    Kalpita g ka to pata nahi… lakin aap ho aise… agar ye cmmt mene aapki story k niche diye hote… to rab hi jabe .. ki kya hashar karte aap mera
    .
    .
    yaad h aapki ek story k niche kisi ne ese hi cmmt kiya tha… or aapne pura ka pura Warni.g Note post kr dala tha isi site pe… yaad h ya nahi
    😉

  65. or Vinod g… ye study ki baat kaha se aa gyi beech me… mujhe bura ni laga kuchh b… lakin aapko laga bura meri baat ka.. to Sorry

  66. No problem Bindu ji
    without criticism none can reach a definite goal
    so its ur wish u will read more or not
    Btw aap mujhse dosti karengi kya

  67. heheheheheh bundu yes ha mai pahele tha aisa par ab nahi kyoki mai janta hu ye sb karke hasil kuch nahi hoga na hame aor na aap sbko achha yahe hoga ki ham yaha mel milap se jude rahe sbse
    mai janta tha mere andar bahut kami thi so bindu maine story likhna hi band kar diya hai khash karke yehi wajh se
    ji aaj 6 year se es site pe story post karta chala aa raha tha par ek din aaisa aaya ki sb kuch band karna pada so aap befhikar ho kar cmt do bindu

  68. Joh hashr hua hai lakhon ka, apna bhi woh anjaam sahi … hum pe toh kahi ilzaam lage, tujhpar bhi koi ilzaam sahi

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    Apka hasr ham kya karenge ji bindu

  69. or vijay g.. baat cheet kisi or story pe karni chahiye… ye bahut sare readers ki favorite story h… so kisi or jagah m cmmt karti hu… or aap recents cmmt dekh kr wahi reply dena ok..

  70. tum aage aage chalo mai piche piche aata hu dont worry ham mard hi aise hai jo age chalna hi nahi jante hehehehhee

  71. OK so this one was my first story that I have posted here.so socha yahin commemt kar deti hu.Taaki kabhi koi dost mere mujhe dhunde to yahan pata chalega.Aap sabse bahat appriciation mila.meri kahaniyon ko bahat saraha aap sabne.bahat dost bane.bahat achha laga jitni din yahan pe aayi.I will never forget this site.Par ab mujhe esa lagta ki ab meri likhi chizo me utni baat nehi rahi.suruwat me Jo dost the WO Sab v ab nehi he.I think ab yahan bahat si achhi kahani aa rahi he so me sayad ab or kahani ya poem post nehi karungi.OK all the best dosto.sath me yaade le kar jaa rahi hu.Duaao me yaad rakhna.

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