वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.
वर्षे बीती रैना जागे.
ख्वाब जो चलते थे मेरे आगे.
सपना धूमिल मंजिल धूमिल.
फिर भी नित निशदिन वो जागे.
कब छूट गया फरियाद नहीं.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!
जीवन जीना सीखा मैंने.
इन दुस्प्रद रेत बयारो से.
जो ख्वाब हकीकत में देखा.
वो बहा प्रलय की धारों से.
अभिलाषा ने दामन छोड़ा.
फिर तिनका तिनका खुद को जोड़ा.
देखा था जो सपना मैंने.
क्या था वो इरशाद नहीं.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!
इस अधूरे मन उपवन में.
कोई आकर चला गया.
ख्वाब दिखाए सपने सजा के.
बड़ी दूर वो चला गया.
एहसास रह गया सिर्फ दामन में.
वो हवा का झोंका आया था.
ऐसा लगता ख्वाब ही था वो.
या मेरा ही साया था.
जीवन जीना सहज ना भाया.
अब ऐसी उन्माद नही.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!
पहले तोड़े ख्वाब थे मैंने.
फिर उनको सजाया था.
मुश्किल से जोड़ा खुद को मैंने .
फिर जख्मों को मिटाया था.
बस अब वो हालात नही.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!
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Very nice poem…
Nice attempt…keep it up you both….try your this talent out of here..you guys might be famous…
Good luck
Im agree widd…. Vishal….!
“gOOd luck” ????
“DhOka” koI ek dejata hai……..!!
Ol.. Nafrat sabhise hOjati hai….! !
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Ek ” pagal” tha jOh meri udasi ki bhi waja
Pucha karta tha…..!!
Par naajane kyun usey ab mere “rOne” se
Bhi fark nahi padta…..!!
u r right
Thanx to all of you..
Is poem Ko pad Ke esa lga Meko jese
Me class 7th ya 8th me Hu
N Hindi ki poem read kr rha Hu
Bcoz some words r so difficult for understanding
Me
That’s why poem is so unique
But
Poem bhot achhi h
1qus Ye poem complete hone me Kitna tym lga???
I mean likhne me??
thank’s 2 all of u
bt is poem m maine kuch ni likha h
Yeh poem me…..! Do naam kaise hain…!
Means… Angel, or raushan
Matlab donone milkar likha hai kya….!
ji ha isme kuch lines maine aur baki ra…. n likhi h
Matlab….! Tum dOnO….!
Saath me hO….! Nice….!
Dono ek hi jaga rehte hO…?
mail k through hm apni poem milkr likhte h bs
hm yahi p mile aur bht alg alg jgh se h
Haan par….! Yeh kaise hOsakta hai….!
DOno alag alag hOkar..!
Matlab kabhi milehO yah phone ke jariye hi…!
Karte hO….! Mera matlab..!
What’spp etc….! Kuch hOgana….! Yeh karneke liye…!
ap itna mt socho aisa ho skta h mail isliye hota h aur ek poem sath krni thi hme .
vo bht achha likhte h aur mujhe sikhna tha bs isliye
Arey baba….! Main khush hunn!
But kehna yahi tha….!
K site le bahar…! Kaise milte hO..??
Im sorry shayd..! ApkO gussa anelaga ….!
Ab nahin karunga msg…!
mail
nice lines dear….
Osm line angel n raushan
Rohan brother aap anish ki Story me milo kaha thana aapko
Ok….! Aata hun pari.. …!
Tq
Waooooo verry nice poem..
Nice poem… bt sorry to say mujhe
is poem me kuch words bahot difficult lage read krne me..
lekin poem bahot achi h..????
Nice……
Rohan can we talk??
Aap clarify krdo ki I’m nt ur pihu…
Main Dusri hu ????????I’m really getting irritate will you plz help me out…
Aapki sis Pari Mko kuch b bol rhi h… I’m fake blah blah…maine aapse q Baat ni ki Ye wo…
Main new hu yaha… Starting 2 months back main aati thi site pr… Phir exams the to aana band n Abhi aarhi…plzz clarify
Hahaaa ????????????????????????????????
Ab ye natak shuru ek song yaad aagaya.
Dum maro dum mijaye ghum bolo subho shaam hare rohan hare pihu hahaha
Poem????????????????
Nyc poem????????????
Hey pihu…
Pihu this wrong mne nhi kaha yahnke lpg kehte the isliye kaha. Bs tum zada kar rahi ho ab
too gd mi fndz(b_a_a_a) ✌ ????….keep it up ????
thank u my cuteepie ????
Jada ni kr rhi main…mko v Bura lg rha tbhi aesa krna pdha.. Sbko ans kr rhi Pari… Bass aapko v ans mil jyega
Ishii Ho kaha aap… Katti Jao????????
OMG…………!
“Pari” ……..You are wrong sister….!!
I already knew that she’s not my girlfriend…..!!
isliye…….! So i was silent…!
But I did not have to get into this quarrel….!????
October kOh jab maine..!
Mera birthday yaha’n pe share kiya tha…!.
Tab hi maine inke “cmts” dekhliye the….! Uff yl…!
Im sorry miss ” pihu” g…!
Meri wajase apkO…! Itna sunna padha….!
????….! Sorry !
Pari Sister naye logonko. .! WelcOme karna chahiye…!
Nahh kehhh….! Taaneh maare….! Plzzzzz stOp this nusence….! ????
Please…! Pihu g jOh hua use bhul jaOOo!
It’s fine…ab main Thik hu Rohan g… Missundrstanding Ho gyi thi unhe… Koi nii…
Pari g aap v bhul Jao…
Rohan g Pari sis ko missundrstanding Ho gyi thi.. Wo Bura ni chahti…ab sb thik h…
Pari sis ab ab Thik hogya naa??
Sb clear…
Rohan g Pari sis se gussa Mt hona… Okk naaa
Sorry mt bolo Aap… Glti kisi ki ni thi…
Finally sb Thik hogya..
Pari sis thank u ..????????????clear ni hota ni to…
Hmmm ????????…..its okay! ????
Nice poem frnd
Is Dil Ki ????” Dastan” Bhi Badi
Ajeeb Hoti Hai…….!!
Badi Mushkil Se Ise Khushi Naseeb
Hoti Hai…!!
Kisi Ke Paas Aane Par Khushi .
“Ho Na Ho”
Par Dur Jaane Par Badi Takleef Hoti Hai…!!!
very nice
shi kaha
Pyar krna koi gunah nai hota …
Pyar se pyara koi zazba nai hota…
Pyar islie chhupana padta duniya se..
Qki sachcha pyar logo se bardast nai hota……….
Log apna banakar chhOd dete hain….!!
Gaironse rista jod lete hainnn….!!
humne tOh abhitak ek phOol
ki kali na todi …..!!
lOg tOh “DIL” ???? bhi tOd dete hainn….!
Pyar ki Hadh naa hai koi..
Dil ki Gehrayi se juda hai har koi…
Saasein Milti hai
Khaab sajte hai…
Rag ki ragni se dono Dil milte hai..❤❤❤
Hiiii
Pari
And
Pihu
Ap dono itni fight q kr rbi ho yaar
Pihu?? Bola mko aalu????
Mko bhul gye?
Nii ldh rhe Hmdono ab Thik h sb..
Hiiii
Bhutu apko hum bhul sakte h kbi nhi aur batao kesi ho…
If u don’t mind… Pari Kya main apse kuch puch skti hu?
Bolo sis…….
Aap or Rohan real brother and sister h kya….
No…. Main toh bs abhi mili hu
Bas ek one week bas aisa q kaha apne sis.
????
Issi site pe. ….
qqq
I think mujhe lagta hai k shayd unme. Kaafi acha insan chupa hua hai jo shayd dikhay nhi deta. Achonke liye ache h or buronke liye
Shayd dur hehe… Main toh unko ek brother se izat deti hu bs. Qk unke cmt ache hote hain.
Bss aise hi…mujhe laga aisa to Maine puch liya…Haan unke cmnts or unki baate achhi lgti h Jaise ki wo apne cmnts me sahi advice dete h….
Yes…..
Aap bhi mujhe bahut achhi lgi..and u r also very good person…. Apne girls Ka jis trh support Kiya mujhe bahut achha laga….
Aap kaha se ho sis… Chalona first story pe ok… Shayd brother bi ajaynge..
Sis apne sahi kaha tq… But ye sab jo tha ye ek inception hai rohan ka jo unhone dia tha..unke cmt dekhlo ek baar issi stOry pe khud to boy h par ek ldki ko khud me feel krke.. Jo bola h wo dekho aap
Sry inception nahi…inspiration ????
Oh god sry ye story pe nahi.
Neeche ki me hai. ( maine usko bhuladia)
Usme tha rohan ka cmt maine dekha tab se thodi zada unpe mujhe khudko ek prerna mili
Acha aap chup q rehti ho sis. Apka b waha pe cmt tha.. Jo ke mere or brother k khilaf tha
Aap logo ke khilaf bilkul nhi tha…bss aisa kuch h bss us poem me bt only for boy not girl so….Maine Kaha bhi tha ki girl ki jgh boy…
Main shyd explain nhi kr skti kuki main us topic pe baat nhi krna chahti Jo mere sath hua… Boys pr se to mera believe kb ka uth chuka h shyd aap meri feelings ko smjhe..
hmmmm i understand…..!! ????
What u understand?
agr dekha jaye to glti unki ni jo khl jate h qki vo kitno se khelte h glti to hmari h jo hm pahchan ni pate bharosa krte h ye jante hue ki koi apna ni hoga..
Dil ko sb vaise hi dikhte h jaise hm dikhte h bs d
Hiii aashi..Angel & Rohan
I m new here
Can u frndship wid me…
Hiiii
Hiii aashi..Angel & Rohan
I m new here
Can u frndship wid me…..
Hiiiiii
yes..u r ryt…
Hii aashi aap kya karti Ho ??
hello