वो ख्वाब -Raushan & Angel

वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.
वर्षे बीती रैना जागे.
ख्वाब जो चलते थे मेरे आगे.
सपना धूमिल मंजिल धूमिल.
फिर भी नित निशदिन वो जागे.
कब छूट गया फरियाद नहीं.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!

जीवन जीना सीखा मैंने.
इन दुस्प्रद रेत बयारो से.
जो ख्वाब हकीकत में देखा.
वो बहा प्रलय की धारों से.
अभिलाषा ने दामन छोड़ा.
फिर तिनका तिनका खुद को जोड़ा.
देखा था जो सपना मैंने.
क्या था वो इरशाद नहीं.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!

इस अधूरे मन उपवन में.
कोई आकर चला गया.
ख्वाब दिखाए सपने सजा के.
बड़ी दूर वो चला गया.
एहसास रह गया सिर्फ दामन में.
वो हवा का झोंका आया था.
ऐसा लगता ख्वाब ही था वो.
या मेरा ही साया था.
जीवन जीना सहज ना भाया.
अब ऐसी उन्माद नही.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!

पहले तोड़े ख्वाब थे मैंने.
फिर उनको सजाया था.
मुश्किल से जोड़ा खुद को मैंने .
फिर जख्मों को मिटाया था.
बस अब वो हालात नही.
वो ख्वाब जो देखे थे मैंने.
कब भूल गया मुझे याद नहीं.!!

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74 Comments

  1. Bhumi

    Very nice poem…

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  2. vshal

    Nice attempt…keep it up you both….try your this talent out of here..you guys might be famous…
    Good luck

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  3. Crazy_ROhan💓

    Im agree widd…. Vishal….!

    “gOOd luck” 👌

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  4. Crazy_ROhan💓

    “DhOka” koI ek dejata hai……..!!

    Ol.. Nafrat sabhise hOjati hai….! !
    .
    .
    .
    .
    Ek ” pagal” tha jOh meri udasi ki bhi waja
    Pucha karta tha…..!!

    Par naajane kyun usey ab mere “rOne” se
    Bhi fark nahi padta…..!!

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    1. angel

      u r right

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  5. raushan

    Thanx to all of you..

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  6. Raghu hhl

    Is poem Ko pad Ke esa lga Meko jese
    Me class 7th ya 8th me Hu
    N Hindi ki poem read kr rha Hu
    Bcoz some words r so difficult for understanding
    Me
    That’s why poem is so unique
    But
    Poem bhot achhi h
    1qus Ye poem complete hone me Kitna tym lga???
    I mean likhne me??

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    1. angel

      thank’s 2 all of u
      bt is poem m maine kuch ni likha h

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  7. Crazy_ROhan💓

    Yeh poem me…..! Do naam kaise hain…!

    Means… Angel, or raushan

    Matlab donone milkar likha hai kya….!

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    1. angel

      ji ha isme kuch lines maine aur baki ra…. n likhi h

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      1. Crazy_ROhan💓

        Matlab….! Tum dOnO….!

        Saath me hO….! Nice….!

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        1. Crazy_ROhan💓

          Dono ek hi jaga rehte hO…?

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          1. angel

            mail k through hm apni poem milkr likhte h bs
            hm yahi p mile aur bht alg alg jgh se h

          2. Crazy_ROhan💓

            Haan par….! Yeh kaise hOsakta hai….!

            DOno alag alag hOkar..!

            Matlab kabhi milehO yah phone ke jariye hi…!

            Karte hO….! Mera matlab..!

            What’spp etc….! Kuch hOgana….! Yeh karneke liye…!

          3. angel

            ap itna mt socho aisa ho skta h mail isliye hota h aur ek poem sath krni thi hme .
            vo bht achha likhte h aur mujhe sikhna tha bs isliye

          4. Crazy_ROhan💓

            Arey baba….! Main khush hunn!

            But kehna yahi tha….!

            K site le bahar…! Kaise milte hO..??

            Im sorry shayd..! ApkO gussa anelaga ….!

            Ab nahin karunga msg…!

          5. angel

            mail

  8. sidra

    nice lines dear….

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  9. Naina

    Osm line angel n raushan

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  10. Pari

    Rohan brother aap anish ki Story me milo kaha thana aapko

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    1. Crazy_ROhan💓

      Ok….! Aata hun pari.. …!

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  11. Pari

    Tq

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  12. Alone (M.S)

    Waooooo verry nice poem..

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  13. Niyati

    Nice poem… bt sorry to say mujhe
    is poem me kuch words bahot difficult lage read krne me..
    lekin poem bahot achi h..😍

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  14. Suhana

    Nice……

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  15. Pihu

    Rohan can we talk??
    Aap clarify krdo ki I’m nt ur pihu…
    Main Dusri hu 😑😑I’m really getting irritate will you plz help me out…
    Aapki sis Pari Mko kuch b bol rhi h… I’m fake blah blah…maine aapse q Baat ni ki Ye wo…
    Main new hu yaha… Starting 2 months back main aati thi site pr… Phir exams the to aana band n Abhi aarhi…plzz clarify

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    1. Suhana

      Hahaaa 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
      Ab ye natak shuru ek song yaad aagaya.
      Dum maro dum mijaye ghum bolo subho shaam hare rohan hare pihu hahaha

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  16. Pihu

    Poem😊👌👌👌

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  17. Isha

    Nyc poem👌👌😊

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  18. Isha

    Hey pihu…

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  19. Pari

    Pihu this wrong mne nhi kaha yahnke lpg kehte the isliye kaha. Bs tum zada kar rahi ho ab

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  20. shrasti

    too gd mi fndz(b_a_a_a) ✌ 😇….keep it up 👌

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    1. angel

      thank u my cuteepie 😇

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  21. Pihu

    Jada ni kr rhi main…mko v Bura lg rha tbhi aesa krna pdha.. Sbko ans kr rhi Pari… Bass aapko v ans mil jyega

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  22. Pihu

    Ishii Ho kaha aap… Katti Jao😒😞

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  23. Crazy_ROhan💓

    OMG…………!

    “Pari” ……..You are wrong sister….!!

    I already knew that she’s not my girlfriend…..!!

    isliye…….! So i was silent…!

    But I did not have to get into this quarrel….!😒

    October kOh jab maine..!

    Mera birthday yaha’n pe share kiya tha…!.

    Tab hi maine inke “cmts” dekhliye the….! Uff yl…!

    Im sorry miss ” pihu” g…!

    Meri wajase apkO…! Itna sunna padha….!

    😟….! Sorry !

    Pari Sister naye logonko. .! WelcOme karna chahiye…!

    Nahh kehhh….! Taaneh maare….! Plzzzzz stOp this nusence….! 😒

    Please…! Pihu g jOh hua use bhul jaOOo!

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  24. Pihu

    It’s fine…ab main Thik hu Rohan g… Missundrstanding Ho gyi thi unhe… Koi nii…
    Pari g aap v bhul Jao…
    Rohan g Pari sis ko missundrstanding Ho gyi thi.. Wo Bura ni chahti…ab sb thik h…
    Pari sis ab ab Thik hogya naa??
    Sb clear…
    Rohan g Pari sis se gussa Mt hona… Okk naaa
    Sorry mt bolo Aap… Glti kisi ki ni thi…
    Finally sb Thik hogya..
    Pari sis thank u ..😊😊😊clear ni hota ni to…

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  25. Crazy_ROhan💓

    Hmmm 👍👍…..its okay! 😇

    Reply
  26. atul singh

    Nice poem frnd

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  27. Crazy_ROhan💓

    Is Dil Ki 💘” Dastan” Bhi Badi

    Ajeeb Hoti Hai…….!!

    Badi Mushkil Se Ise Khushi Naseeb

    Hoti Hai…!!

    Kisi Ke Paas Aane Par Khushi .

    “Ho Na Ho”

    Par Dur Jaane Par Badi Takleef Hoti Hai…!!!

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    1. angel

      very nice
      shi kaha

      Reply
  28. Sona

    Pyar krna koi gunah nai hota …
    Pyar se pyara koi zazba nai hota…
    Pyar islie chhupana padta duniya se..
    Qki sachcha pyar logo se bardast nai hota……….

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    1. Crazy_ROhan💓

      Log apna banakar chhOd dete hain….!!

      Gaironse rista jod lete hainnn….!!

      humne tOh abhitak ek phOol

      ki kali na todi …..!!

      lOg tOh “DIL” 💘 bhi tOd dete hainn….!

      Reply
  29. Pihu

    Pyar ki Hadh naa hai koi..
    Dil ki Gehrayi se juda hai har koi…
    Saasein Milti hai
    Khaab sajte hai…
    Rag ki ragni se dono Dil milte hai..❤❤❤

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  30. Alone (M.S)

    Hiiii
    Pari
    And
    Pihu
    Ap dono itni fight q kr rbi ho yaar

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  31. Pihu

    Pihu?? Bola mko aalu😑
    Mko bhul gye?
    Nii ldh rhe Hmdono ab Thik h sb..

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    1. Alone (M.S)

      Hiiii
      Bhutu apko hum bhul sakte h kbi nhi aur batao kesi ho…

      Reply
  32. Aashi

    If u don’t mind… Pari Kya main apse kuch puch skti hu?

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  33. Pari

    Bolo sis…….

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  34. Aashi

    Aap or Rohan real brother and sister h kya….

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    1. Pari

      No…. Main toh bs abhi mili hu
      Bas ek one week bas aisa q kaha apne sis.
      ????

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      1. Pari

        Issi site pe. ….

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    2. Pari

      qqq

      Reply
  35. Pari

    I think mujhe lagta hai k shayd unme. Kaafi acha insan chupa hua hai jo shayd dikhay nhi deta. Achonke liye ache h or buronke liye
    Shayd dur hehe… Main toh unko ek brother se izat deti hu bs. Qk unke cmt ache hote hain.

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  36. Aashi

    Bss aise hi…mujhe laga aisa to Maine puch liya…Haan unke cmnts or unki baate achhi lgti h Jaise ki wo apne cmnts me sahi advice dete h….

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    1. Pari

      Yes…..

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  37. Aashi

    Aap bhi mujhe bahut achhi lgi..and u r also very good person…. Apne girls Ka jis trh support Kiya mujhe bahut achha laga….

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  38. Pari

    Aap kaha se ho sis… Chalona first story pe ok… Shayd brother bi ajaynge..

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    1. Pari

      Sis apne sahi kaha tq… But ye sab jo tha ye ek inception hai rohan ka jo unhone dia tha..unke cmt dekhlo ek baar issi stOry pe khud to boy h par ek ldki ko khud me feel krke.. Jo bola h wo dekho aap

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  39. Pari

    Sry inception nahi…inspiration 😂

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  40. Pari

    Oh god sry ye story pe nahi.
    Neeche ki me hai. ( maine usko bhuladia)
    Usme tha rohan ka cmt maine dekha tab se thodi zada unpe mujhe khudko ek prerna mili

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  41. Pari

    Acha aap chup q rehti ho sis. Apka b waha pe cmt tha.. Jo ke mere or brother k khilaf tha

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  42. Aashi

    Aap logo ke khilaf bilkul nhi tha…bss aisa kuch h bss us poem me bt only for boy not girl so….Maine Kaha bhi tha ki girl ki jgh boy…

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  43. Aashi

    Main shyd explain nhi kr skti kuki main us topic pe baat nhi krna chahti Jo mere sath hua… Boys pr se to mera believe kb ka uth chuka h shyd aap meri feelings ko smjhe..

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    1. Crazy_ROhan💓

      hmmmm i understand…..!! 🤔

      Reply
  44. Aashi

    What u understand?

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    1. angel

      agr dekha jaye to glti unki ni jo khl jate h qki vo kitno se khelte h glti to hmari h jo hm pahchan ni pate bharosa krte h ye jante hue ki koi apna ni hoga..
      Dil ko sb vaise hi dikhte h jaise hm dikhte h bs d

      Reply
  45. Atul

    Hiii aashi..Angel & Rohan
    I m new here
    Can u frndship wid me…

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  46. Atul

    Hiiii

    Reply
  47. Atul

    Hiii aashi..Angel & Rohan
    I m new here
    Can u frndship wid me…..

    Reply
  48. Attu

    Hiiiiii

    Reply
  49. Aashi

    yes..u r ryt…

    Reply
  50. Atul

    Hii aashi aap kya karti Ho ??

    Reply
  51. angel

    hello

    Reply

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